Unit 6 When disaster strikes写作指导2025-2026学年外研版（2024）英语八年级上册

八年级英语上册 Unit 6 写作指导 本单元围绕自然灾害与勇气展开，主要涉及自然灾害及其影响，人物面对灾难的反应与心理变化，人物走出灾难阴影、勇敢面对生活的过程。在具体的写作中，主要涉及以下几个方面： ①自然灾害的类型及应对措施； ②灾难发生的过程及自己的感受 ③灾后的恢复过程或相关暖心故事。 在写作时,可首先介绍自然灾害发生的时间和危害;其次,详细描述自然灾害发生过程中人的活动和感受;最后,向人们发出倡议,共同保护环境预防和减少自然灾害的发生。 写作时可用第一人称和第三人称,在描述自然灾害发生的时间和危害及过程时,常用一般过去时和过去进行时。发出倡议时,可用祈使句或一般将来时。常用句型有: I was doing when... people were hurt and...homes were broken Many trees were blown down ...made...people homeless. I realise the importance of protecting the environment. We should face them with courage 写作典例 假如你是李华，你的城市曾经历了一场大型自然灾害（如地震、洪水或台风等）。今年是该自然灾害发生三周年，学校想做一个专题活动，提醒人们积极应对自然灾害。请根据以下提示写一篇短文，讲述灾难发生的情况、人们的反应以及你从中学到的经验。 提示：1.灾难的类型、发生时间及地点； 2.你和家人/朋友的感受及反应； 3.克服困难及灾后恢复生活的过程； 4.从中学到的经验或感悟。 注意：1.短文须包含上述提示信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 2.文中不能出现真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数不少于80（首句已为你写好，不计入总词数）。 Hello, I'm Li Hua. 思路导引 开头：引出灾难的类型、发生时间及地点 Three years ago, a terrible earthquake struck our city. 中间：描述灾难发生的过程、人们的反应及灾后恢复过程 1.灾难发生的过程：When/While I was..., the ground shook very hard and... began to move from side to side. 2.人们的反应：... had to rush out of the house/classroom quickly. I was so scared that... We stayed together and helped each other. 3.灾后恢复过程：Thanks to the doctors' treatment in time, I recovered at last. 结尾：从灾难中学到的经验或感悟 This disaster has taught me that we should always stay calm, face it with courage, and never give up. 词句积累 灾难类型 earthquake地震 flood洪水 storm暴风雨 tsunami海啸 tornado龙卷风 drought干旱 volcano eruption火山爆发 影响 move from side to side左右摇晃 be thick with smoke弥漫着烟雾 damage损害destroy摧毁 homeless无家可归的 break弄坏，损坏bleed流血 uncomfortable不舒服的 应对措施 rush out冲出去 stay calm保持冷静 help each other互相帮助 shelter避难所 support支持 volunteer志愿者/自愿做 感悟 courage勇气 never give up永不放弃 encouragement鼓励 come out from the shadows走出阴影 find oneself重新找回自我 开头句 Three years ago, a terrible earthquake struck our city.三年前，一场可怕的地震袭击了我们的城市。 Our city experienced a flood/ an earthquake three years ago.三年前，我们的城市经历过一次洪灾/地震。 中间句 1.灾难发生 When/ While I was..., the ground shook very hard and things around me began to move from side to side.当我在……时，地面剧烈晃动，我周围的东西开始左右摇晃。 The ground started shaking hard as the earthquake struck.地震发生时，大地开始剧烈摇晃。 Heavy rain made the river overflow, and the water rushed into houses and streets.大雨使河水泛滥，洪水涌进了房屋和街道。 2.人们的反应 Many people ran out of their houses quickly.许多人迅速跑出家门。 My classmates and I had to rush out of the classroom quickly.我和我的同班同学不得不迅速冲出教室。 I was so scared that I searched for my teachers and friends everywhere.我害怕极了，到处找我的老师和朋友。 We stayed together and helped each other.我们待在一起，互相帮助。 3.灾后恢复 Thanks to the doctors' treatment in time, I recovered at last.多亏医生及时治疗，我最终康复了。 With the support of my family and friends, I slowly came out from the shadows.在家人和朋友的支持下，我慢慢从阴影中走了出来。 We rebuilt our home with the help of volunteers.在志愿者的帮助下，我们重建了家园。 Life slowly went back to normal.生活慢慢恢复正常。 结尾句 This disaster has taught me to be strong and never give up.这次灾难让我学会坚强，永不放弃。 I have realised that helping others can bring warmth and hope.我意识到帮助他人能够带来温暖和希望。 写作实例2 上周六,一场暴风雨袭击了我们城镇。雨大风强,街道上灌满了水,许多树木被吹倒。这场暴风雨使数人受伤,100多人无家可归。暴风雨过后，人们互帮互助。许多人自愿为无家可归者做饭。同时,我们应认识到保护环境的重要性,尽量减少自然灾害的发生。 某英文网站就此开展征文活动。请你根据以上内容,写一篇关于自然灾害的短文。号召更多的人行动起来保护自然,保护环境。词数不少于 70。 思路分析 A Heavy Storm 点明这场暴风雨的时间 Last Saturday , a heavy storm hit... 详细描述暴风雨的经过和人们互帮互助 rained,blew, the streets, many trees , helped each other,cook food for 感受和启发 the importance of, make natural disasters happen less and less , face...with courage [经典范文 ] Last Saturday , a heavy storm hit our town.I was sleeping when it rained very hard. The wind blew hard as well. The streets were full of water. Many trees were blown down.Several people were influenced and their homes were broken. @ And the storm made more than one hundred people homeless. After the storm,people helped each other to build their houses。Some people volunteered to cook food for the homeless. I realise the importance of protecting the environment. We should try our best to make natural disasters happen less and less. And we should always face them with courage. @ 教材典句 ...l was sleeping when the ground shook very hard. ....people were influenced and...homes were broken. But we should always face them with courage. I)用过去进行时和 when引导的时间状语从句描绘出暴风雨发生时的场景，并通过 very hard 说明当时恶劣的天气状况。 2)该句用 be influenced和...homes were broken说明了暴风雨造成的后果。 3)用 face them with courage强调了面对自然灾害应有的态度。 3 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$