Unit 3 Family Matters 投稿征文（单元同步写作讲义）英语外研版2019必修第一册

外研版必修一 Unit 3 Family Matters 投稿征文直击高考 年份 卷别 话题 2024年 浙江卷 投稿推荐一项课间活动 2023年 全国甲卷 “用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动 2022年 全国甲卷 世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛 2021年 新高考全国I卷 庆祝Youth创刊十周年投稿 近几年考查频率还是较高的，所以需要我们做好充分准备。 ( 写作框架 ) 投稿征文类文章一般都是就某个特定主题进行描写和论述，以记叙文和议论文为多。 ( 素材宝库 ) 表目的的表达： aimed at doing sth with the aim of doing sth aiming to do sth targeted at doing sth enrich our school life broaden our horizons arouse interest in.... cultivate enthusiasm for traditional Chinese Art fuel students' passion for... spark our enthusiasm for sth 【篇首句】 ①At present our city is carrying out a campaign, the content of which is that anyone who is riding an electric bike must wear a helmet. 目前我市正在开展一项活动，活动内容是骑电动自行车的人必须戴安全帽。 ② In order to raise the students' cultural awareness and enrich the school life, our school held /organized a singing/recitation/Speaking competition/contest(歌唱/ 背诵/演讲比赛)/concert/exhibition/ lecture whose theme was...... 为了提高学生的文化意识，丰富校园生活，我们学校组织了一个主题为....的活动 【篇中句】 ①Moreover, as is known to all, setting too much time aside just for watching TV is a waste of time. 而且，众所周知，为看电视而留出太多时间是浪费时间。 ②The purpose of the campaign is to reduce the death rate in an accident. 这项活动的目的是降低事故中的死亡率。 ③To solve the problem, I asked my parents for help, and they offered some practical advice. 为了解决这个问题，我向父母寻求帮助，他们提出了一些切实可行的建议。 ④Then I held an online discussion with my classmates on how to deal with the problem. 然后我和同学们在网上讨论了如何处理这件事情。 ⑤Various activities are tailored for the enthusiast，ranging from Chinese poems to Chinese calligraphy competition. 有专门为热衷者量身定制的各种活动，从中国诗歌到书法比赛。 【篇尾句】 ①To change the habit, I am supposed to put more emphasis on something more meaningful such as reading and taking exercise, which are not only beneficial to my mental and physical health but also can help me get rid of my bad habit. 为了改变这个习惯，我应该把更多的精力放在一些更有意义的事情上，比如读书和锻炼，这些不仅有利于我的身心健康，而且可以帮助我改掉坏习惯。 ②My appeal is that all our students riding electric bikes should wear helmets for the safety of themselves and other people. 我的呼吁是，为了自己和他人的安全，我们所有骑电动自行车的学生都应该戴头盔。 ( 典例引领 ) 2021年高考英语作文真题  学校英文报YOUTH成功举办10周年，请你写一篇文章投稿，庆祝它创办10周年： 1. 读报经历； 2. 喜爱的栏目；  3. 期待与祝福。 注意：  1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 【文本解读】 1. 本文值得思考的一个要点是写作背景和写作目的—— 学校英文报YOUTH成功举办10周年，请你写一篇文章投稿，庆祝它创办10周年； 2.概述喜爱的栏目，逻辑思维为喜欢+原因； 3.期待与祝福——有所期待，有所祝福。 【思路点拨】 此篇文章是属于投稿类文体。其可以分为三段来写。 第一段:英文报 Youth 创办十周年，表示祝贺或表达其喜悦之情: 第二段:详细介绍读报经历和说明喜爱的栏目; 第三段:提出期待和祝福。 【五要素审题法】袭顶英语应用文“五要素审题法”(以下简称“五审法”): ◆要素1---审体裁;确保不会用错体裁; ◆要素 2---审对象:审人称;确保不会随意使用人称; ◆要素 3---审时态:确保不会用错时态; ◆要素 4---审要点:确保不会因为漏点而失分; ◆要素 5---审回复:确定是否需要写“期待回复” 【美文在线】 Youth and Me Ten years passing by, the time has witnessed the growth and boom of YOUTH and many students. To observe the tenth anniversary of YOUTH, I’m going to share stories between us. It has been two years since I started reading the newspaper, during which I encountered a great many ups and downs, enjoying some interesting and joyful moments and struggling to fight back tears while meeting difficulties and frustrations. No matter how hard it had been, I stick to my favorite column-Cultural Corner to always get myself refreshed and sensitive to some cultural anecdotes. What grabs me most is that I can from time to time broaden my horizons by referring to YOUTH. Through it all, I benefited a lot from YOUTH. May it be more popular with students here. Look forward to its flourishing future. ( 实战演练 ) 假定你是李华，受校英文报约稿，请你写一篇介绍你的某一位家人的英语短文，刊登在校英文报People专栏，内容包括: (1)他/她的主要事迹；(2)你的评价。 第一步 字斟句酌 1我的父亲是一名职业律师，你几乎看不到他脸上的笑容。 (professional,lawyer,倒装) ____________________________________________________________________________________ 2.有一段时间，我被取消了比赛资格。 (定语从句，disqualify) ____________________________________________________________________________________ 3.我在我的父亲面前发脾气，这让他老是叹气。(sigh) ____________________________________________________________________________________ 4.尽管我有不当的行为，他还是让我冷静下来，鼓励我把它抛在脑后。 (despite, calm, leave...behind) _____________________________________________________________________________________ 5.后来我意识到我应该向父亲道歉。(apologize) _____________________________________________________________________________________ 6令人惊讶的是，我注意到他脸上出现了罕见的(observe) 微笑。 ______________________________________________________________________________________ 7.我的父亲，就像一颗闪亮的星，永远是我最尊敬和敬佩的人。 (respect, admire) _______________________________________________________________________________________ 第二步:连句成篇 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 举一反三 ) 1.假设你是晨光中学的李津，你校英文报最近开设了“Family Ties”栏目(column)，该栏目关注家庭故事、亲情纽带等。请你写一篇短文向该栏目投稿，讲述一件令你难忘的家庭亲情往事，内容包括： (1) 描述事情经过； (2) 表达感受和希望。 注意： (1) 词数不少于100； (2) 可以适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯； (3) 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Editor, I’m Li Jin from Chenguang Middle School, and _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Jin 2．假设你是明启中学高三学生李华，你所在的学校即将举行主题为“亲情”的摄影展， 邀请同学们提交一张自己拍摄的照片参展。请你写一封投稿信件给组委会，内容须包括：(1)描述该照片背后的亲情故事;(2)你选择该照片参展的理由。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.你接受了一项写作任务, 要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。请根据以下信息, 介绍一位热门人物。 姓名：莫言 出生日期：1955年2月17日 出生地：山东省高密一个穷苦人家 兴趣爱好：自幼喜欢阅读、书法 (calligraphy) 性格特征：开朗、幽默 教育经历：1986年毕业于解放军艺术学院 (PLA Academy of Arts); 1991年毕业于北京大学并获文学硕士学位 (Masters Degree of Arts). 主要成就：2012年凭借《蛙》获中国最高文学奖茅盾文学奖 2012年获诺贝尔文学奖 (Nobel Prize in Literature). 评价：第一位获得诺贝尔文学奖的中国作家, 被誉为是对中国文学做出巨大贡献的作家之一 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4.假定你是李华，你校英语杂志《人物》专栏正在举行主题为“The Hero in My Eyes”的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1.人物介绍（谁、事迹）； 2.成为你眼中英雄的理由； 3.该英雄人物对你的影响。 注意：1.写作词数应为 80； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5.请结合以下表格，以A Role Model为题，写一篇短文向校英文报投稿。内容包括： 1.人物介绍； 2.对你的启发。 姓名 桂海潮 出生年月 1986年11月 职业 北航教授 主要经历 2014年7月在北航获博士学位； 2017年9月担任博导； 2023年5月执行神舟十六号载人飞行任务，成为首位戴眼镜飞天的航天员。 信条 知识改变命运。 参考词汇：博导：a doctoral supervisor 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 A Role Model _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12 / 17 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 外研版必修一 Unit 3 Family Matters 投稿征文直击高考 年份 卷别 话题 2024年 浙江卷 投稿推荐一项课间活动 2023年 全国甲卷 “用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动 2022年 全国甲卷 世界海洋日为主题，举办英语征文比赛 2021年 新高考全国I卷 庆祝Youth创刊十周年投稿 近几年考查频率还是较高的，所以需要我们做好充分准备。 ( 写作框架 ) 投稿征文类文章一般都是就某个特定主题进行描写和论述，以记叙文和议论文为多。 ( 素材宝库 ) 表目的的表达： aimed at doing sth with the aim of doing sth aiming to do sth targeted at doing sth enrich our school life broaden our horizons arouse interest in.... cultivate enthusiasm for traditional Chinese Art fuel students' passion for... spark our enthusiasm for sth 【篇首句】 ①At present our city is carrying out a campaign, the content of which is that anyone who is riding an electric bike must wear a helmet. 目前我市正在开展一项活动，活动内容是骑电动自行车的人必须戴安全帽。 ② In order to raise the students' cultural awareness and enrich the school life, our school held /organized a singing/recitation/Speaking competition/contest(歌唱/ 背诵/演讲比赛)/concert/exhibition/ lecture whose theme was...... 为了提高学生的文化意识，丰富校园生活，我们学校组织了一个主题为....的活动 【篇中句】 ①Moreover, as is known to all, setting too much time aside just for watching TV is a waste of time. 而且，众所周知，为看电视而留出太多时间是浪费时间。 ②The purpose of the campaign is to reduce the death rate in an accident. 这项活动的目的是降低事故中的死亡率。 ③To solve the problem, I asked my parents for help, and they offered some practical advice. 为了解决这个问题，我向父母寻求帮助，他们提出了一些切实可行的建议。 ④Then I held an online discussion with my classmates on how to deal with the problem. 然后我和同学们在网上讨论了如何处理这件事情。 ⑤Various activities are tailored for the enthusiast，ranging from Chinese poems to Chinese calligraphy competition. 有专门为热衷者量身定制的各种活动，从中国诗歌到书法比赛。 【篇尾句】 ①To change the habit, I am supposed to put more emphasis on something more meaningful such as reading and taking exercise, which are not only beneficial to my mental and physical health but also can help me get rid of my bad habit. 为了改变这个习惯，我应该把更多的精力放在一些更有意义的事情上，比如读书和锻炼，这些不仅有利于我的身心健康，而且可以帮助我改掉坏习惯。 ②My appeal is that all our students riding electric bikes should wear helmets for the safety of themselves and other people. 我的呼吁是，为了自己和他人的安全，我们所有骑电动自行车的学生都应该戴头盔。 ( 典例引领 ) 2021年高考英语作文真题  学校英文报YOUTH成功举办10周年，请你写一篇文章投稿，庆祝它创办10周年： 1. 读报经历； 2. 喜爱的栏目；  3. 期待与祝福。 注意：  1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 【文本解读】 1. 本文值得思考的一个要点是写作背景和写作目的—— 学校英文报YOUTH成功举办10周年，请你写一篇文章投稿，庆祝它创办10周年； 2.概述喜爱的栏目，逻辑思维为喜欢+原因； 3.期待与祝福——有所期待，有所祝福。 【思路点拨】 此篇文章是属于投稿类文体。其可以分为三段来写。 第一段:英文报 Youth 创办十周年，表示祝贺或表达其喜悦之情: 第二段:详细介绍读报经历和说明喜爱的栏目; 第三段:提出期待和祝福。 【五要素审题法】袭顶英语应用文“五要素审题法”(以下简称“五审法”): ◆要素1---审体裁;确保不会用错体裁; ◆要素 2---审对象:审人称;确保不会随意使用人称; ◆要素 3---审时态:确保不会用错时态; ◆要素 4---审要点:确保不会因为漏点而失分; ◆要素 5---审回复:确定是否需要写“期待回复” 【美文在线】 Youth and Me Ten years passing by, the time has witnessed the growth and boom of YOUTH and many students. To observe the tenth anniversary of YOUTH, I’m going to share stories between us. It has been two years since I started reading the newspaper, during which I encountered a great many ups and downs, enjoying some interesting and joyful moments and struggling to fight back tears while meeting difficulties and frustrations. No matter how hard it had been, I stick to my favorite column-Cultural Corner to always get myself refreshed and sensitive to some cultural anecdotes. What grabs me most is that I can from time to time broaden my horizons by referring to YOUTH. Through it all, I benefited a lot from YOUTH. May it be more popular with students here. Look forward to its flourishing future. ( 实战演练 ) 假定你是李华，受校英文报约稿，请你写一篇介绍你的某一位家人的英语短文，刊登在校英文报People专栏，内容包括: (1)他/她的主要事迹；(2)你的评价。 第一步 字斟句酌 1我的父亲是一名职业律师，你几乎看不到他脸上的笑容。 (professional,lawyer,倒装) ____________________________________________________________________________________ 2.有一段时间，我被取消了比赛资格。 (定语从句，disqualify) ____________________________________________________________________________________ 3.我在我的父亲面前发脾气，这让他老是叹气。(sigh) ____________________________________________________________________________________ 4.尽管我有不当的行为，他还是让我冷静下来，鼓励我把它抛在脑后。 (despite, calm, leave...behind) _____________________________________________________________________________________ 5.后来我意识到我应该向父亲道歉。(apologize) _____________________________________________________________________________________ 6令人惊讶的是，我注意到他脸上出现了罕见的(observe) 微笑。 ______________________________________________________________________________________ 7.我的父亲，就像一颗闪亮的星，永远是我最尊敬和敬佩的人。 (respect, admire) _______________________________________________________________________________________ 答案：1.My father is a professional lawyer, and rarely can you see a smile on his face. 2.There was a time when I was disqualified from a competition. 3.I lost temper in front of my father, which made him sigh a lot. 4.Despite my improper behaviour,he still calmed me down and encouraged me to leave it behind. 5.Later I realized I should apologize/apologise to my father. 6 Surprisingly,I observed a rare smile appearing on his face. 7.My father, like a shining star, is always the man I respect and admire most forever. 第二步:连句成篇 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 答案： My father is a professional lawyer, and rarely can you see a smile on his face. There was a time when I was disqualified from a competition. What's worse, I lost temper in front of my father, which made him sigh a lot. Despite my improper behaviour, he still calmed me down and encouraged me to leave it behind. Later I realized I should apologize/apologise to my father.Surprisingly, I observed a rare smile appearing on his face. All in all, my father, like a shining star, is always the man I respect and admire most forever. ( 举一反三 ) 1.假设你是晨光中学的李津，你校英文报最近开设了“Family Ties”栏目(column)，该栏目关注家庭故事、亲情纽带等。请你写一篇短文向该栏目投稿，讲述一件令你难忘的家庭亲情往事，内容包括： (1) 描述事情经过； (2) 表达感受和希望。 注意： (1) 词数不少于100； (2) 可以适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯； (3) 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Editor, I’m Li Jin from Chenguang Middle School, and _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Jin 【美文在线】 Dear Editor, I’m Li Jin from Chenguang Middle School, and I’d like to share a special family memory with our “Family Ties” column. One unforgettable moment was when I was sick in hospital with a very high fever. My parents stayed by my side throughout the night, looking very worried and tired. Despite their tiredness, they never left my side, comforting and encouraging me, which showed how much they loved and supported me. I felt so thankful and realized the depth of my parents’ devotion. It’s a memory that has shaped my understanding of family bonds. I am to be by their side whenever they need me. Thank you for allowing me to share this heartfelt story. Yours, Li Jin 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生向学校英文报的“Family Ties”栏目投稿，讲述一件令人难忘的家庭亲情往事。 【详解】1.词汇积累 尽管：despite→in spite of 鼓励：encourage→motivate 表达：express→convey 感谢：thankful→grateful 2.句式拓展 同义句 原句：One unforgettable moment was when I was sick in hospital with a very high fever. 拓展句：One unforgettable moment was the time when I was sick in hospital with a very high fever, suffering from severe pain and discomfort. 【点睛】【高分句型1】 One unforgettable moment was when I was sick in hospital with a very high fever. (运用了when引导的表语从句) 【高分句型2】Despite their tiredness, they never left my side, comforting and encouraging me, which showed how much they loved and supported me. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 2．假设你是明启中学高三学生李华，你所在的学校即将举行主题为“亲情”的摄影展， 邀请同学们提交一张自己拍摄的照片参展。请你写一封投稿信件给组委会，内容须包括：(1)描述该照片背后的亲情故事;(2)你选择该照片参展的理由。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【美文在线】 Dear Sir or Madam, I am Wu Lei, a photography enthusiast. When I heard the theme of this exhibition, this photo instantly crossed my mind, which was taken in June 2023 at Pudong International Airport when my older brother was back from the US for his last summer vacation. This summer was special for us, as the pandemic had separated our family for three years. I still remember the moment I saw my brother coming out from the arrival gate. I waved both of my arms at him, screaming out of pleasure. He hopped ecstatically and galloped like a pony toward us and tried his best to bring my parents and grandparents into his arms. My camera captured the bear hug that everyone had longed for fervently for three years. I’ve taken many photos of my family, but this one is the best in my heart, not for its artistic quality but for the overwhelming emotions and the love between family members. I appreciate your time reading my story and considering my picture. Sincerely, Li Hua 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给所在的学校即将举行主题为“亲情”的摄影展提交一张照片并写一封投稿信件给组委会，介绍照片背后的故事和参展的理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 立刻：instantly → immediately 回来：be back → return 尽某人最大的努力：try one’s best → do one’s best 渴望：long for → be thirsty for 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I am Wu Lei, a photography enthusiast. 拓展句：I am Wu Lei, who is a photography enthusiast. 【点睛】【高分句型1】When I heard the theme of this exhibition, this photo instantly crossed my mind, which was taken in June 2023 at Pudong International Airport when my older brother was back from the US for his last summer vacation.（运用了when引导的时间状语从句和which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】I waved both of my arms at him, screaming out of pleasure.（运用了现在分词作状语） 3.你接受了一项写作任务, 要为英语校报写一篇人物介绍。请根据以下信息, 介绍一位热门人物。 姓名：莫言 出生日期：1955年2月17日 出生地：山东省高密一个穷苦人家 兴趣爱好：自幼喜欢阅读、书法 (calligraphy) 性格特征：开朗、幽默 教育经历：1986年毕业于解放军艺术学院 (PLA Academy of Arts); 1991年毕业于北京大学并获文学硕士学位 (Masters Degree of Arts). 主要成就：2012年凭借《蛙》获中国最高文学奖茅盾文学奖 2012年获诺贝尔文学奖 (Nobel Prize in Literature). 评价：第一位获得诺贝尔文学奖的中国作家, 被誉为是对中国文学做出巨大贡献的作家之一 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【美文在线】 Mo Yan, born in a poor family in Gaomi, Shandong Province on February 17, 1955, was an open-minded and humorous person since his childhood. He was especially fond of reading and calligraphy. He graduated from PLA Academy of Arts in 1986 and received his Master Degree of Arts from Peking University in 1991. Mo Yan achieved tremendous success in 2012, when he won the Mao Dun Literature Prize, the highest literature prize in China, with his novel Frog. He also made his historic impact on Chinese literature by winning the Nobel Prize in Literature in the same year, becoming the first Chinese author to do so. With his great contributions to Chinese literature, Mo Yan shall always be remembered. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生为英语校报写一篇人物介绍，介绍一位热门人物莫言。 【详解】1.词汇积累 尤其：especially → particularly 极大的：tremendous → enormous 影响：impact → influence 奉献：contribution → dedication/commitment 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Mo Yan, born in a poor family in Gaomi, Shandong Province on February 17, 1955, was an open-minded and humorous person since his childhood. 拓展句：Mo Yan, who was born in a poor family in Gaomi, Shandong Province on February 17, 1955, was an open-minded and humorous person since his childhood. 【点睛】[高分句型1]Mo Yan achieved tremendous success in 2012, when he won the Mao Dun Literature Prize, the highest literature prize in China, with his novel Frog. (运用了关系副词when引导非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] He also made his historic impact on Chinese literature by winning the Nobel Prize in Literature in the same year, becoming the first Chinese author to do so. (运用了现在分词作伴随状语) 4.假定你是李华，你校英语杂志《人物》专栏正在举行主题为“The Hero in My Eyes”的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1.人物介绍（谁、事迹）； 2.成为你眼中英雄的理由； 3.该英雄人物对你的影响。 注意：1.写作词数应为 80； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【美文在线】 The Hero in My Eyes During the pandemic that struck Chongqing this winter, a large quantity of heroic figures emerge among people from all walks of life. Among them, my head master is the one that I admire most. My head teacher is a middle-aged man. He is not strong, but he showed enormous strength during the pandemic. Since strict rules were issued during that period, my head teacher voluntarily stayed on campus to take care of those students who cannot go back home. Besides, he committed large amounts of time and energy every day to guarantee the efficiency of our online learning. His courage and diligence motivate me to face all kinds of obstacles bravely in the future. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于说明文。假定你是李华，你校英语杂志《人物》专栏正在举行主题为 “The Hero in My Eyes” 的征文活动。请你写一篇短文投稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 出现：emerge→appear 激励：motivate→stimulate 此外：besides→in addition 障碍：obstacle→barrier 2.句式拓展 合并简单句 原句：During the pandemic that struck Chongqing this winter, a large quantity of heroic figures emerge among people from all walks of life. Among them, my head master is the one that I admire most. 拓展句：During the pandemic that struck Chongqing this winter, a large quantity of heroic figures emerge among people from all walks of life, among whom, my head master is the one that I admire most. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Since strict rules were issued during that period, my head teacher voluntarily stayed on campus to take care of those students who cannot go back home. (运用了who引导定语从句) [高分句型2] Besides, he committed large amounts of time and energy every day to guarantee the efficiency of our online learning. (运用了不定式作目的状语) 5.请结合以下表格，以A Role Model为题，写一篇短文向校英文报投稿。内容包括： 1.人物介绍； 2.对你的启发。 姓名 桂海潮 出生年月 1986年11月 职业 北航教授 主要经历 2014年7月在北航获博士学位； 2017年9月担任博导； 2023年5月执行神舟十六号载人飞行任务，成为首位戴眼镜飞天的航天员。 信条 知识改变命运。 参考词汇：博导：a doctoral supervisor 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 A Role Model _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【美文在线】 A Role Model Gui Haichao, a professor at Beihang University, is a role model for many young students. Born in November 1986, Gui Haichao received his doctor’s degree from Beihang University in July 2014.  He became a doctoral supervisor in September 2017 and executed the Shenzhou XVI manned flight mission in May 2023, becoming the first astronaut with glasses to fly in space. His motto is “Knowledge changes destiny.” Gui Haichao’s story inspires me to work harder and pursue my dreams. He is truly a role model for me and many others. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文写作中的投稿。要求考生向校英文报投稿，介绍首位戴眼镜飞天的航天员——桂海潮。 【详解】1.词汇积累 获得：receive→ obtain 执行：execute → carry out 激励：inspire → encourage 追求：pursue→ go after/seek 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Gui Haichao, a professor at Beihang University, is a role model for many young students. 拓展句：Gui Haichao, who is a professor at Beihang University, is a role model for many young students. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Born in November 1986, Gui Haibao received his doctor’s degree from Beihang University in July 2014.（运用了过去分词作状语） 【高分句型2】He became a doctoral supervisor in September 2017 and executed the Shenzhou XVI manned flight mission in May 2023, becoming the first astronaut with glasses to fly in space.（运用了现在分词担当状语） 12 / 17 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$