2025年中考陕西省中考英语作文真题写作指导及范文

2025年中考|陕西省中考英语作文真题写作指导及范文 写 作 任 务 What problem(s) did you face while doing sports? (couldn't, be weak in, ......) How did you solve it/ them?(ask... for help, learn some skills, practice hard, never give up, ......) What changes have you got or how did you feel? (......) 要求: 1.短文内容应包含题目要求所给的全部信息，选择使用参考词汇，可适当发挥: 2.语句正确，意思通顺、连贯，书写规范; 3.短文中不得出现你的任何真实信息(姓名、校名和地名)。 若文中出现人名，请选择使用: Mr.Liu/ Ms. Wang/ Ma Li / Wang Gang; 4.词数:不少于100。(开头已给出，但不计入总词数） These days, we have more time to do sports. We experienced more and surely made progress. As for me, 思 路 点 拨 第一步：审题 1. 主题：聚焦于个人做运动的经历涵盖运动中遇到的困难、应对策略以及最终结果。 2. 内容要点： 问题：明确指出在做某项运动时遇到的阻碍，如技能不足、体能不够等。 解决方法：详细说明针对问题采取的具体行动，如向他人请教、学习技巧、加强练习等。 • 变化或感受：描述解决问题后在运动能力、心态等方面产生的积极转变或内心感受。 第二步：写作提纲 1. 开头：直接承接给定的开头，引出自己在运动方面的具体情况。 2. 中间：• 描述问题：具体阐述在游泳方面存在的薄弱环节。 • 阐述解决方法，说明向教练求助以及自身的努力练习。 3. 结尾：说明变化或感受 第三步：选词组句 可能用到的词语及中文解释： 1. be weak in：在……方面薄弱。2. float：漂浮。 3. sink：下沉。与 “float” 相对，4. ask... for help：向……求助。 5. professional：专业的。6. breathing：呼吸。7. posture：姿势；姿态。 8. practice hard：刻苦练习。9. without getting tired：不感到疲倦。 10. enjoy the fun of：享受……的乐趣。 高 分 作 文 高分作文一： These days, we have more time to do sports. We experienced more and surely made progress. As for me, I couldn't jump high in the high - jump event. Every time I tried, I would fail to clear the bar, which made me really disappointed. To solve this problem, I first watched some videos about high - jump skills online. Then, I asked Wang Gang, who is good at high - jump, to teach me in person. He showed me how to take off and land properly. I also practiced jumping every evening after dinner. I never gave up even when I felt my legs were sore. Now, I can jump over a higher bar easily. I feel so excited and confident. Doing sports has not only improved my physical ability but also taught me the importance of perseverance. I will keep trying to do better in sports. 这些天，我们有更多时间做运动。我们有了更多经历，肯定也取得了进步。就我而言，我在跳高项目中跳不高。每次我尝试，都无法越过横杆，这让我非常失望。 为了解决这个问题，我首先在网上看了一些关于跳高技巧的视频。然后，我向擅长跳高的王刚请教，让他亲自教我。他给我展示了如何正确起跳和落地。每天晚饭后我还练习跳跃。即使我感觉腿很酸痛，我也从未放弃。 现在，我能轻松跳过更高的横杆。我感到非常兴奋和自信。做运动不仅提高了我的身体素质，还让我明白了坚持的重要性。我会继续努力在运动中做得更好。 高分作文二： These days, we have more time to do sports. We experienced more and surely made progress. As for me, I was weak in playing volleyball. I couldn't serve the ball accurately and often made mistakes during the game, which made my teammates unhappy. I decided to solve this problem. I learned some serving skills from sports books. Ms. Wang, our volleyball coach, also noticed my problem and gave me some special training. She taught me how to control the strength and direction of the serve. I practiced serving for two hours every Saturday. After a period of hard work, I've improved a lot. Now, I can serve the ball accurately and contribute more to the team. I feel happier and more responsible when playing volleyball. I really appreciate the help from Ms. Wang and my own efforts. 这些天，我们有更多时间做运动。我们有了更多经历，肯定也取得了进步。就我而言，我排球打得不好。我发球不准确，在比赛中还经常犯错，这让我的队友们很不开心。 我决定解决这个问题。我从体育书籍中学习了一些发球技巧。我们的排球教练王老师也注意到了我的问题，并给我进行了一些特殊训练。她教我如何控制发球的力量和方向。我每周六练习发球两个小时。 经过一段时间的努力，我进步很大。现在，我能准确发球，为球队做出更多贡献。打排球时，我感到更快乐，也更有责任感。我真的很感激王老师的帮助和自己的努力。 好 句 背 诵 以下是上面高分作文摘取的优秀的表达： 1. 英文表达：Every time I tried, I would fail to clear the bar, which made me really disappointed.• 中文翻译：每次我尝试，都无法越过横杆，这让我非常失望。 • 理由：“Every time... would...” 结构清晰地表达了每次尝试都会出现的结果，即无法越过横杆，“which made me really disappointed” 使用定语从句进一步说明这种结果带来的感受，逻辑连贯，生动地描述了当时的心情。 2. 英文表达：I never gave up even when I felt my legs were sore. • 中文翻译：即使我感觉腿很酸痛，我也从未放弃。 • 理由：“even when” 引导让步状语从句，强调了即便在身体不适（腿酸痛）的艰难情况下，依然保持不放弃的精神，突出了坚持的决心。 3. 英文表达：Doing sports has not only improved my physical ability but also taught me the importance of perseverance. • 中文翻译：做运动不仅提高了我的身体素质，还让我明白了坚持的重要性。 • 理由：“not only... but also...” 是常用的并列结构，简洁明了地阐述了运动带来的两方面积极影响，即身体素质提升和意志品质培养。 1. 英文表达：I was weak in playing volleyball. I couldn't serve the ball accurately and often made mistakes during the game, which made my teammates unhappy. • 中文翻译：我排球打得不好。我发球不准确，在比赛中还经常犯错，这让我的队友们很不开心。 • 理由：先总体说明自己在排球运动方面的薄弱（was weak in），接着具体描述发球不准确和比赛中犯错的问题，最后用定语从句表明这些问题对队友的影响，层次清晰，全面地呈现了问题所在。 2. 英文表达：Ms. Wang, our volleyball coach, also noticed my problem and gave me some special training. • 中文翻译：我们的排球教练王老师也注意到了我的问题，并给我进行了一些特殊训练。 • 理由：句子结构简单直接，“also” 起到衔接作用，表明在自我尝试解决问题后，教练也给予了帮助，“gave me some special training” 明确说明了帮助的具体形式。 3. 英文表达：After a period of hard work, I've improved a lot. • 中文翻译：经过一段时间的努力，我进步很大。 • 理由：简洁地概括了努力后的结果，“after a period of...” 体现了时间上的积累，“improved a lot” 直观地表达出进步的程度。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$