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25 届广东一模续写高分语料。
回到题目本身,我们再来强调一下标题的作用。当续写题目有标题时,标题往往隐藏着重要信息,很多时候直接指向主旨所在。比如 21 年新高考的 “A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE” ;23 年 1 月名校协作体的题目“LESSONS LEARNED OUTSIDE THE CLASSROOM”,两个标题都指向了核心事件,并且有些词汇我们可以直接拿来作为基点来升华主旨。这篇也是一样的呀, “The Right Thing to Do”, 那 “right thing” 到底是什么呢? 对 Fauna 来说, 是将狗狗还给主人; 对她的 parents 来说, 那就是给她买一只心爱的 pet puppy 咯。情节线就这么梳理出来了, 那主旨呢? 我们是不是可以说 “When you choose to do the right thing, the right path will always find its way to you, whether it’s the right thing or, in this case, the right puppy."
【试题速览】
The Right Thing to Do
Fauna had always dreamed of keeping a pet. Time and again, she asked her parents, promising to walk, feed, and look after it. Each time, though, they gave the same gentle response: We’ll see.
One afternoon, on her way home from school, Fauna saw a little dog wandering near the park. Its fur was messy, and it looked lost, sniffing the ground as if searching for something. Feeling curious and hopeful, Fauna bent down and called to it. The dog quickly ran over, wagging ( #s tail and gently pressing its nose into her hand, like they had known each other forever.
She looked around, but no one seemed to be searching for the dog. Feeling pity for the lost dog, Fauna decided to take it home. As they walked side by side, her heart swelled with joy. It felt as though this was the pet she had always dreamed of - a friend she had been waiting for.
At the front door, Fauna’s mother greeted her with a warm smile. Although she found the dog adorable, she gently reminded Fauna that they needed to try and find its owner. If the dog was lost, someone must be missing it. Fauna reluctantly (不情愿地) agreed, though part of her wished no one would come forward to claim the little dog.
Over the next few days, Fauna and the dog - whom she named Buddy - grew inseparable. She fed him, played with him, and let him sleep curled up at the foot of her bed. Every day, it became harder to imagine life without him. Buddy seemed happy too, wagging his tail whenever she came home from school. But Fauna knew deep down that she had to do the right thing. She and her parents posted flyers around town, hoping to find Buddy’s owner.
Just a few days later, the phone rang. Fauna’s heart sank as her father answered. From the conversation, it was clear that the caller was Buddy’s owner. He described Buddy perfectly — the friendly eyes and playful personality.
Fauna knew Buddy would soon be leaving her. Her father arranged for the owner to come by and pick Buddy up.
Paragraph 1: When the man arrived, the little dog ran straight into his arms, barking with joy.
A. Fauna 看到狗狗回到主人怀抱后的反应
1. A ripple of bitterness coursed through her veins, intertwined with a sense of relief that Buddy had eventually found his owner. Fauna failed to disguise her complicated feelings.
2. She approached Buddy and stroked his fur gently. As if knowing the coming separation, Buddy pressed his nose into her hand, wagging his tail to bid farewell.
3. A surge of speechless sorrow engulfed Fauna. Although Buddy didn’t accompany her for long, they had forged a deep bond. Fauna strove to curve her mouth into a crescent and inched forward to Buddy. With tears in her moistened eyes, she raised her quivering arms for an affectionate embrace. After Buddy left, Fauna burst into tears.
4. The initial light of hope seemed to fade in Fauna’s eyes. She stared at the dog, now known as Terry, and cared little about the man’s words. She couldn’t imagine life without him. With red-rimmed eyes, she bid farewell as the man drove away.
5. Fauna felt she was on the edge of tears. At the sight of the relieved man, she knew she had done the right thing. With a smiling face and moist eyes, she uttered "Goodbye" to the dog.
6. Fauna was thrown into a dilemma. Reflecting on the days with Buddy, she could hardly accept the separation. Noticing her unusual expression, the man approached. Though in great sorrow, Fauna bent down and hugged Buddy. Then she waved goodbye as the dog left with its owner.
7. A mix of envy, grief, and sadness surged through Fauna, rooting her to the spot. She walked to the door and shook hands with the man. Seeing the reunion, she felt fulfilled, but after they left, a sense of loss and regret engulfed her.
8. Fauna’s heart sank when she realized the man was Buddy’s owner. A surge of sadness flashed across her face, and she buried her face in her hands. Buddy ran over to comfort her. Fauna swallowed her tears and waved goodbye, feeling a bit better.
9. Her mind uncontrollably wandered back to the moments she used to share with Buddy-from feeding him, playing with him, to sleeping with him.
10. Fauna couldn’t say a word, weeping with her face hidden. Her father pulled her into his arms. Buddy ran over to comfort her. An idea crossed her mind that she had to do the right thing. With sadness, she saw Buddy off.
11. Fauna felt a mix of happiness and sadness. Looking at Buddy’s wagging tail and friendly eyes, memories of playing together filled her mind. She couldn’t help crying and hugging Buddy tightly. Finally, she watched as Buddy left with his owner.
12. The sense of loss hit Fauna like a tidal wave. That evening, she sat quietly in her room, the emptiness left by Buddy’s departure palpable. Memories of their time together made her unable to hold back tears. The empty spot at the foot of the bed was a constant reminder of her loss.
13. A complex mix of emotions welled up within Fauna-jealousy, sadness, and pride. She bit her lip, trying to hold back tears, and forced a smile as she said goodbye to Buddy.
14. A wave of bitterness coursed through her veins, intertwined with a sense of relief that Buddy had eventually found his owner. Fauna failed to disguise her complicated feelings.
B. 狗主人与狗狗互动的温馨场景
1. When the man arrived, the little dog ran straight into his arms, barking with joy. The man bent down, patted Buddy’s furry head, and hugged him in his arms. A huge delight for finding his beloved dog was on his face.
2. The man scooped up the dog, caressed its head affectionately. What a cozy scene of reunion! After expressing heartfelt gratitude, he offered to pay for the expense of caring for it.
3. The man knelt down, stroked Buddy’s head gently, and murmured, "Thank God. I found you, dear." He kissed the dog and held it tightly with overwhelming ecstasy.
4. The man bent down to pet the dog, grinning from ear to ear. Buddy wagged its tail ferociously, and its eyes sparkled with excitement. It pressed its nose into the man’s hand.
5. The man held Buddy in his arms, gently stroking its back. Buddy nestled in his embrace, looking content and at ease, as if all its worries had melted away.
6. He reached out his hands, and Buddy leaped into them, wagging its tail vigorously, creating a heartwarming moment.
7. The man squatted down, his eyes full of tenderness. He called Buddy’s name softly, and the dog rushed towards him, jumping up and down in excitement.
8. With a big smile, the man ruffled Buddy’s fur. Buddy responded by licking his hand, their interaction exuding warmth and familiarity.
9. The man picked Buddy up, twirling him around gently. Buddy barked happily, his barks echoing with joy in the air, making it a truly endearing scene.
10. The man stroked the dog’s head gently and said in a tender tone of solicitude, "Hey, Andy." The little dog responded like an exhilarated elf.
11. The man held Buddy tightly in his arms while Buddy licked his face excitedly. His eyes were moistened with tears of happiness and gratefulness.
C. 狗主人感谢 Fauna 一家
1. The owner knelt down to Fauna’s level, gently patting her head, and thanked her and her family with a warm tone for being so kind to his furry friend.
2. He gave Fauna’s family a warm hug, sincerely thanking them for bringing back his precious dog and ensuring its well-being during its absence.
3. The man’s eyes sparkled with gratitude as he expressed his indebtedness to Fauna’s family, saying that he couldn’t have found his dog without their help.
4. The dog owner grasped Fauna’s hand firmly, his eyes brimming with sincere gratitude. "Your kindness and honesty are truly commendable. You’ve not only taken good care of my dear Buddy but also brought him back to me. I’m deeply indebted to you and your family."
5. With a voice full of emotion, the owner said, "Words fail me when I try to express my gratitude to you all. Your act of looking after Buddy so lovingly is a beacon of kindness in this world. Thank you from the bottom of my heart."
6. The dog owner’s face was suffused with gratitude as he said, "You have no idea how much it means to me that you took such good care of Buddy. I will always be grateful."
7. Gratefully, the owner exclaimed, "I’m overwhelmed with thankfulness for your family’s efforts. You’ve shown such selfless care for Buddy, and I’m truly touched. I’ll forever remember your kindness."
8. "I can’t thank you enough," the owner stated earnestly. "Your family’s love and care for Buddy during his absence from me are immeasurable. Thank you sincerely."
9. With a gesture of profound appreciation, the owner stepped forward and said, "Your acts of kindness towards Buddy have not only brought joy to my life but have also reaffirmed my belief in the inherent goodness of people. I’m truly beholden to you and your family."
10. In a voice choked with emotion, the owner expressed, "Your kindness in sheltering and nurturing Buddy is beyond measure. It has filled my heart with an overwhelming sense of gratitude, and I’ll be forever in your debt."
11. The man held Fauna’s hand sincerely, his eyes filled with gratitude, and expressed his heartfelt thanks for their kind care of his beloved dog.
12. The dog owner’s voice was full of emotion as he thanked Fauna’s family from the bottom of his heart, emphasizing how much their help meant to him.
13. Gratitude was written all over the man’s face as he shook hands with Fauna’s parents, expressing his deep appreciation for their efforts in looking after his dog.
14. The owner took out a small gift and handed it to Fauna, as a token of his gratitude for her and her family’s kindness to his dog.
D. 第一段最后一句衔接:与狗狗道别,以及 Fauna 心理变化
1. Fauna crouched down, her eyes glistening with unshed tears as she tenderly stroked the dog’s fur, her heart wrung with the agony of impending separation.
2. With a lump in her throat, Fauna forced a smile, attempting to mask the overwhelming sorrow welling up within her as she whispered her farewells to the beloved canine.
3. As the dog bounded towards its owner, Fauna felt a sharp pang of loss, her emotions a tempestuous sea of sadness and resignation churning within her chest.
4. Standing there, rooted to the spot, Fauna watched the dog depart with a heavy heart, a profound sense of emptiness gradually engulfing her, like a shadow in the twilight.
5. Fauna’s hands trembled as she extended them for one last affectionate pat, her mind a jumbled mess of conflicting emotions-joy for the dog’s reunion yet despair at her own loss.
6. As the distance between her and the dog grew, Fauna’s thoughts swirled in a maelstrom, slowly coming to terms with the bittersweet truth of this separation.
7. With a final, lingering look, Fauna bid adieu to her furry friend, a complex blend of melancholy and acceptance washing over her like a gentle, yet sorrowful, tide.
8. With a heavy heart, Fauna watched as the man took Buddy away. A sense of loss overwhelmed her, but deep down, she knew she had done the right thing.
9. As Buddy disappeared from her sight, Fauna couldn’t help but feel a void in her heart. However, she soon realized that true love means letting go, and this thought brought her a bit of comfort.
10. When saying goodbye to Buddy, Fauna’s eyes were filled with tears. But she managed a weak smile, knowing that she had given the dog a chance to return to its rightful home.
11. Fauna hugged Buddy tightly one last time before they parted. Sorrow filled her, but she also felt a sense of relief that the dog was finally back with its owner.
12. As the dog and its owner walked away, Fauna’s heart ached. Yet, she knew that she had made the right decision, and this knowledge helped her bear the pain.
13. Fauna shed tears as she watched Buddy go. However, she quickly composed herself, feeling a sense of dignity in her act of returning the dog.
14. After the final goodbye, Fauna felt a pang of loneliness. But she reminded herself of the joy she brought to the dog’s owner, and this made her feel better.
15. Fauna just hugged her friend tightly, tears rolling down her cheeks. "Goodbye, my friend," Fauna murmured. Staring at Buddy walking further and further, Fauna felt depressed with her heart sinking.
Paragraph 2: That evening, Fauna sat quietly in her room,
feeling the emptiness that Buddy’s absence had left behind.
A. 第二段衔接: 回忆与 Buddy 过往的场景
1. She remembered the time when they first met, a sunny afternoon at the park. Buddy bounded towards her, his tail wagging like a propeller, and his bright eyes filled with an eagerness that instantly melted her heart, marking the beginning of their beautiful journey together.
2. The image of Buddy joyously chasing a frisbee across the grassy field came vividly to mind. His body was a blur of motion, leaping and twisting in mid-air with an athleticism that was both impressive and endearing, and his excited barks echoed in the open space.
3. Fauna recalled the cozy evenings when they would lie side by side on the soft blanket in the backyard, looking up at the star-filled sky. Buddy would rest his head on her lap, and she would gently run her fingers through his fur, sharing a peaceful silence that was punctuated only by the occasional chirping of crickets.
4. She reminisced about the time when Buddy was sick. She had stayed by his side day and night, nursing him with tender care. His weak but trusting eyes looking up at her as she fed him, and the way he would nuzzle her hand for comfort, had deepened their bond in a way she never thought possible.
5. Fauna thought of the countless times she had come home from school, and Buddy would be waiting for her at
the door, his whole body trembling with excitement. He would jump up, his front paws landing on her chest as he showered her face with affectionate licks, making all her school-day worries disappear in an instant.
6. She remembered teaching Buddy new tricks. His focused expression as he tried his best to understand her commands, and the way his eyes would light up with pride when he finally got it right. The reward of a small treat would make him wag his tail so hard that his whole body shook with joy.
7. The empty position at the foot of the bed reminded her of Buddy’s warm temperature and furry touch, and she could almost feel his gentle nuzzle against her hand.
8. She recalled how Buddy would wag his tail ferociously when she came home, his eyes sparkling with excitement as if she was the most important person in the world.
9. The memory of feeding Buddy his favorite treats, watching him gobble them up with such enthusiasm, played vividly in her mind.
10. She thought about the cozy evenings when Buddy would curl up at her feet while she read a book, the soft sound of his breathing a soothing melody.
11. She remembered the way Buddy would nudge her hand with his nose when he wanted attention, his soft fur brushing against her skin.
12. The sound of Buddy’s barks, which used to fill the house with life, now echoed in her head, making the silence in the room seem even more profound.
13. A ray of moonlight tiptoed across the windows, casting a light on her pale face, which made her look more restrained and weary. She watched the photos of Buddy with moistened eyes, memorizing their rejoicing junctures. 14. As she looked around her room, those inviting memories came in waves.
15. Reflecting on the blissful times she fed him and played with him, she couldn’t help but cry. The empty room witnessed her desperation.
B. 家人安慰 Fauna 及相关互动
1. Fauna’s mother entered the room softly, her eyes filled with understanding and compassion. She sat beside Fauna, gently placing an arm around her shoulders, and said, "Darling, I know it hurts, but the love you shared with Buddy will always remain, like a beautiful melody that lingers in your heart."
2. Her father, with a solemn yet kind expression, came over and crouched in front of Fauna. Taking her hands in his, he spoke in a deep, soothing voice, "Life is full of these bittersweet moments, my dear. The memories you’ve created with Buddy are treasures that no one can ever take away from you."
3. As Fauna fought back tears, her little brother climbed onto the bed next to her. Hugging her tightly, he said with a childlike innocence, "Don’t be sad, sissy. Buddy is happy with his owner now, but he will always remember how much fun we had together."
4. Her mother returned with a cup of warm tea, placing it on the bedside table. Sitting down again, she looked at Fauna earnestly and said, "Grief is a part of loving deeply. Let yourself feel it, but also know that time will heal this wound, and you’ll look back on these days with a sense of gratitude for the love you shared."
5. Fauna’s father brought in a photo album filled with pictures of Buddy and Fauna together. Sitting beside her, he opened it slowly and pointed to each photo, saying, "Look at all these wonderful times. They are like stars in the sky of your life, always shining bright and reminding you of the happiness you once had."
6. Her father, with a determined look, said, "We can’t bring Buddy back, but we can create new memories together, as a family."
7. Fauna’s little brother, with a sparkle in his eyes, said, "Sissy, maybe someday we can get a new pet, and you can teach it all the things you taught Buddy. Then we’ll have even more fun memories to make!"
8. Noticing Fauna’s mood, her mother came to her, patted her shoulder, and said gently, "We know you’re sad, but you did the right thing."
9. Her parents spotted Fauna’s unhappiness and decided to comfort her. Her father said, "We’re proud of your kindness in returning the dog."
10. Seeing their absent-minded daughter, her parents tried to figure out a way to make up for her loss. Her mother said, "Life has its ups and downs, dear. This is just a small setback."
11. Fauna’s mother noticed her distress and sat beside her, stroking her head. "Don’t dwell on the absence of Buddy. Look forward to new things," she advised.
12. Her parents saw Fauna’s tears and hugged her tightly. Her mother whispered, "Your kindness will be rewarded. You did what was right."
13. Noticing Fauna’s loneliness, her mother sat near her and said, "It’s okay to be sad, but remember the good times and be strong."
14. Her parents, aware of Fauna’s pain, tried to cheer her up. Her mother said, "You brought joy to the dog’s owner. That’s a wonderful thing."
15. Fauna’s mother noticed her sadness and said, "Doing the right thing is never easy, but it’s always worth it. You should be proud."
16. Her mother softly gathered her in her arms, comforting her with inspiring words. "We had witnessed your responsibility, which confirmed our decision to get you a dog."
17. Only after this experience did she understand that we must choose with integrity, and virtue has its reward.
18. At this moment, her mother walked into her room. She noticed Fauna’s frustration and put her warm hand gently on her shoulder, speaking softly, "We all take pride in that you beat your eagerness and did the right thing. I’m sure that Buddy will remember you forever."
C. 结尾+升华主旨
1. When Fauna said goodbye to Buddy, she was filled with mixed emotions. But in the end, she knew she had done the right thing. She learned that doing what’s right may not always be easy, but it is the only way to live with a clear conscience.
2. Happiness flooded Fauna, and she realized that while facing such a dilemma, it was vital to remember that there was a right thing to do.
3. It was the moment when Fauna realized that by doing the right thing, one would gain recognition and grow up.
4. Years might roll by, but this episode would permanently serve as a reminder that animals possess spirituality and we should choose to do the right thing, even when it contradicts our own willingness.
5. As the stars twinkled outside her window that night, Fauna found solace in the memories of Buddy. She understood that every connection, even those that must end, was a part of a greater design, a chance to learn, to love, and to grow, and this experience with Buddy had irrevocably changed her for the better.
6. Long after Buddy had left, Fauna carried the lessons from their time together in her heart. She knew that doing the right thing, though often difficult, was always rewarding in ways that transcended immediate emotions.
7. In the aftermath of Buddy’s departure, Fauna discovered a new strength within herself. The pain of separation had not broken her but had instead forged her into a more resilient individual, one who understood that love, in all its forms, was a powerful force that could weather any storm, and she was grateful for the opportunity to have loved and been loved by Buddy.
8. In the end, Fauna understood that Buddy’s departure was not an ending but a new beginning. The love she’d had for Buddy was a foundation upon which she could build a life filled with kindness, understanding, and a deep appreciation for the world around her.
9. Long after the last paw-print of Buddy had faded from her sight, Fauna knew that the lessons she’d learned were engraved in her heart. The love, the loss, and the growth were all part of a beautiful tapestry that was her life, and she was grateful for every thread, every stitch, and every moment that had led her to this new understanding of love, life, and the power of doing the right thing.
10. Fauna hugged her parents tightly when they brought her a new dog. She learned that even though letting go of Buddy was hard, there was always something new and wonderful waiting for her. This experience taught her that life is full of changes, and we should embrace them with an open heart.
11. Fauna’s parents told her they were proud of her for doing the right thing. She felt a warm glow inside, knowing that her actions were appreciated. This made her believe that no matter how tough a decision might be, following one’s conscience is always the right path.
12. Fauna couldn’t help but feel a sense of loss when Buddy left. However, her mother’s words of comfort soothed her. She understood that letting go was a part of life, and it allowed room for new opportunities and experiences.
13. The man with Buddy promised to bring the dog to play with Fauna sometimes. This made Fauna feel happy and showed her that doing a good deed could bring unexpected rewards. It taught her that kindness begets kindness, and we should always be ready to help others.
14. Fauna’s parents bought her a new dog as a reward for doing the right thing. She was overjoyed and grateful. This experience made her realize that when we make sacrifices for the greater good, we are often rewarded in ways we don’t expect.
15. Fauna’s mother told her that she should not dwell on the past but look to the future. Fauna took this advice to heart and decided to move forward with a positive attitude. She understood that every ending is a new beginning.
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