第03讲 征文投稿（专项训练）（天津专用）2026年高考英语一轮复习讲练测

第03讲 征文投稿 目录 01 征文投稿常用词汇 02 征文投稿常用句型 03 征文投稿常用模板 04 真题模拟融合练 征文投稿常用词汇 汉译 英文表达 1. 旨在；以......为目的 2. 出版 3. 文章的要求 4. 如果 5. 限制在......词 6. 是很受......欢迎的 7. 任何有关的事情 8. 大约120字就可以了 9. 在......之前提交你的文章 10. 体育专栏 11. 娱乐专栏 12. 栏目特点 13. 语言风格 14. 改编自 15. 延长截止日期 征文投稿常用句型 1.我想邀请某人写一篇......文章 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 2.我想请你为我们学校的英文报纸写一篇文章。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 3.你能写点关于你的学校生活吗？ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 4.有兴趣的学生欢迎参加。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 5.这里有一些关于我们渴望文章的相关细节。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 6.它携带外国学生写的关于他们家文化的文章。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 7.这篇文章应该在400字以内。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 8.我们想知道在下周之前你是否完稿。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 9.你最好下星期日把你的文章发送给我，词数约120个词就好。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 10.期待您方便时尽快答复。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 11.期待您尽快确定。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________ 征文投稿常用模板 1. 模版 As is often the case/Nowadays, ______ (陈述现象) This is really a common phenomenon in our life. The reason is that ______(现象的原因). However,______(现象所带来的问题一). Moreover, ______(现象所带来的问题二). As far as I am concerned, ______(我的观点，并提出建议). And meanwhile/moreover, ______(建议二). In a word, ______(总结自己的观点). 2. 写作实操技巧 最新调查指出,人际关系正越来越被"人机关系"所取代,甚至有网友调侃:世界上最远的距离,是我在你面前,而你在低头看手机.根据以下要点用英语写一篇短文给《21世纪英文报》投稿. 1.描述这一现象 2.分析其原因及弊端  3.你认为该如何改变现状 注意:1.词数80左右 2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 仿写演练 某英文报社正在开展 “环保”大讨论，向你约稿。请以垃圾分类为主题，按照以下要点发表你的观点： 1. 意义； 2. 现状； 3. 建议 注意：1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 文章标题已拟好，不计入总次数。 3. 参考词汇：垃圾分类 garbage classification ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ 真题模拟融合练 1．（2025·天津武清·模拟预测）假设你是李津，你校英文报社正在举办以“压力管理与心理健康”为主题的征文活动。请你以“How to Deal with Academic Pressure”为题，写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1. 学业压力的常见来源（如考试、作业、升学竞争等）； 2. 应对学业压力的有效方法（如时间管理、运动、倾诉等）； 3. 保持心理健康的重要性及你的建议。 注意： （1）字数不少于100词； （2）题目已给出，不计入总词数； （3）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 How to Deal with Academic Pressure ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2025·天津河西·一模）2024年12月23日是天津620岁的生日，津云新媒体向全市市民征稿，献礼天津。假设你是晨光中学李津，积极参与此项活动。请按以下提示向津云投稿： 1. 表达你对天津的祝福； 2. 介绍天津的特色(如文化、美食、景点等)； 3. 你对天津的印象及展望。 注意： 1. 词数不少于100； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2025·天津·模拟预测）假设你是李华，为弘扬传统文化，你校英语杂志社正在举行主题为“我最喜欢的传统节日”的征文活动，请你写一篇英语文章，内容包括： 1.介绍节日的基本情况（如名称、时间、特殊饮食、节日活动等）； 2.阐述庆祝该节日的意义； 3.从个人角度出发，谈谈如何在现代生活中更好地传承和创新传统文化。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 My Favorite Traditional Festival ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2024·天津河北·二模）假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你校英文报正面向全体高三毕业生征集毕业感言。 请你按照以下提示写一篇英语短文投稿。 内容包括： (1)表达你对学校的感激； (2)回顾你在校的生活(如：难忘的时刻，获得的知识，个人的成长等)； (3)展望学校的未来，表达你的美好祝愿。 注意： (1)词数不少于100； (2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯； (3)题目已给出，不计入总词数。 To My Dear School ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2024·天津·二模）假设你是晨光国际中学的学生李津。在不久前举行的海棠花节活动中，你带领外国同学游览了五大道，和大家在五大道文创市集将亲手制作的手工艺品进行义卖并将所得捐给学校。请你根据以下内容提示向英文校报投稿： (1)简要介绍海棠花节活动； (2)描述义卖情况； (3)表达对此次游览和义卖活动的感受。 注意： (1)字数不少于 100； (2)题目已给出，不计入总词数； (3)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：海棠花节 Crabapple Flower Festival  五大道 the Five Great Avenues  文创市集 cultural and creative market A Memorable Experience at the Crabapple Flower Festival ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2024·天津·模拟预测）假设你是明启中学高三学生李华，目前担任学校社团负责人。近期，你校被评为社团明星学校，为了在报纸上分享你校社团情况，请你以“Clubs in My School”为题，写一篇文章，内容须包含： 1. 对你校社团进行分类； 2. 具体描述每一类社团的特色。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2020·天津北辰·三模）假如你是晨光中学的李津，为配合学校的科技月活动，你校英语社团的微信公众号开展征文活动。要求同学们写一篇英语短文，介绍我国科学家设计的一款生活型智能机器人。现请你投稿，文章内容包括： 1. 简要介绍这款生活型智能机器人。 2. 谈谈这款生活智能机器人的功能（至少写2点） 3. 说明生活型机器人的意义。 注意：1. 词数不要少于100。 2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：智能机器人intelligent robot June 10, 2020 Here I would like to introduce a new type of intelligent household robot to you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 20 / 20 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 第03讲 征文投稿 目录 01 征文投稿常用词汇 02 征文投稿常用句型 03 征文投稿常用模板 04 真题模拟融合练 征文投稿常用词汇 汉译 英文表达 1. 旨在；以......为目的 be aimed at 2. 出版 publish 3. 文章的要求 requirements of the article 4. 如果 on condition that 5. 限制在......词 be limited to about ... words 6. 是很受......欢迎的 be very popular with... 7. 任何有关的事情 anything relevant to 8. 大约120字就可以了 about 120 words would be fine 9. 在......之前提交你的文章 submit your article before 10. 体育专栏 sports column 11. 娱乐专栏 entertainment column 12. 栏目特点 characteristics of the column 13. 语言风格 language style 14. 改编自 be adapted from 15. 延长截止日期 extend the deadline 征文投稿常用句型 1.我想邀请某人写一篇......文章 I would like to invite sb to write an article for... 2.我想请你为我们学校的英文报纸写一篇文章。 I’d like to ask you to writer an article for our school’s English newspaper. 3.你能写点关于你的学校生活吗？ Could you/Would you please write something concerning your school life? 4.有兴趣的学生欢迎参加。 Any student who is interested is welcome to participate 5.这里有一些关于我们渴望文章的相关细节。 And here are some relevant detail about the articles we are eager for. 6.它携带外国学生写的关于他们家文化的文章。 It carries articles written by foreign students concerning the culture of their country. 7.这篇文章应该在400字以内。 The article is supposed to be within 400 words. 8.我们想知道在下周之前你是否完稿。 We wonder if it is practicable to have it before next week. 9.你最好下星期日把你的文章发送给我，词数约120个词就好。 You’d better send your article to me next Sunday and about 120 words would be fine. 10.期待您方便时尽快答复。 Looking forward to your reply at your convenience. 11.期待您尽快确定。 Looking forward to your confirmation soon. 征文投稿常用模板 1. 模版 As is often the case/Nowadays, ______ (陈述现象) This is really a common phenomenon in our life. The reason is that ______(现象的原因). However,______(现象所带来的问题一). Moreover, ______(现象所带来的问题二). As far as I am concerned, ______(我的观点，并提出建议). And meanwhile/moreover, ______(建议二). In a word, ______(总结自己的观点). 2. 写作实操技巧 最新调查指出,人际关系正越来越被"人机关系"所取代,甚至有网友调侃:世界上最远的距离,是我在你面前,而你在低头看手机.根据以下要点用英语写一篇短文给《21世纪英文报》投稿. 1.描述这一现象 2.分析其原因及弊端  3.你认为该如何改变现状 注意:1.词数80左右 2.可适当增加细节,使行文连贯. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ 【模板套用】 As is often the case, when people are attending meetings, having meals or waiting for buses, you can always find them addicted to their phones, completely ignoring others(陈述现象). This is really a common phenomenon in our life. The reason is that smart phones nowadays can be used for people to play mobile games and keep in touch with friends through QQ and WeChat (现象的原因) . However, too much exposure to phones is bad for people in terms of health (现象所带来的问题一). Moreover, people engaged in phones fail to communicate well with those around them (现象所带来的问题二). As far as I am concerned, people should wisely make use of their phones to help with their work and study (我的观点，并提出建议). And meanwhile care more about their family and friends rather than mobile phones (建议二). 3. 仿写演练 某英文报社正在开展 “环保”大讨论，向你约稿。请以垃圾分类为主题，按照以下要点发表你的观点： 1. 意义； 2. 现状； 3. 建议 注意：1. 词数 80 左右； 2. 文章标题已拟好，不计入总次数。 3. 参考词汇：垃圾分类 garbage classification ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________ 【模板范文】 Nowadays, garbage classification is receiving mixed opinions with some people applauding it while others dismissing it as inconvenient. Nevertheless, however unaccustomed people may feel, they must observe the new regulation (陈述现象). As far as I am concerned, the value of garbage classification can’t be over-emphasized, and its advantages are as follows. To begin with, it is environmentally-friendly in that it will reduce the land occupation used to bury garbage (我的观点一). And moreover, it is economically-beneficial, for it will not only save the cost of processing garbage, it will also enable the reuse of the recyclable (进一步说明观点二). Significant as garbage classification is, people’s confusion about the categories of trash sometimes discourages their willingness to do it(现象的问题) . Accordingly, a series of campaigns should be in place to help people build up a strong awareness of the necessity and understand how to categorize trash(解决方法). In a word, garbage classification is a worthwhile course which will benefit future generations(总结自己的观点). 真题模拟融合练 1．（2025·天津武清·模拟预测）假设你是李津，你校英文报社正在举办以“压力管理与心理健康”为主题的征文活动。请你以“How to Deal with Academic Pressure”为题，写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1. 学业压力的常见来源（如考试、作业、升学竞争等）； 2. 应对学业压力的有效方法（如时间管理、运动、倾诉等）； 3. 保持心理健康的重要性及你的建议。 注意： （1）字数不少于100词； （2）题目已给出，不计入总词数； （3）可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 How to Deal with Academic Pressure ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version: How to Deal with Academic Pressure As we know, academic pressure has become a common challenge for students, especially in senior high school. It mainly comes from exams, heavy homework, and fierce competition for college admission. To cope with this pressure, effective strategies are essential. First, time management can help us prioritize tasks and avoid procrastination. For example, making a daily study plan ensures efficiency. Second, physical activities like jogging or playing basketball can relieve stress by releasing endorphins. Additionally, talking to friends, teachers, or family members about our worries provides emotional support. In my opinion, mental health is as important as academic success. Schools should offer counseling services, and students need to learn self-care techniques, such as mindfulness or journaling. Remember, a healthy mind is the foundation of achieving long-term goals. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生撰写短文投稿，分析压力来源、提出应对方法并强调心理健康重要性。 【详解】1.词汇积累 压力：pressure → stress 关键的：essential → crucial 基础：foundation → basis 目标：goal → target 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：To cope with this pressure, effective strategies are essential. 拓展句：Effective strategies are essential so that we can cope with this pressure. 【点睛】【高分句型1】As we know, academic pressure has become a common challenge for students, especially in senior high school. (运用了as引导的非限制性定语从句) 【高分句型2】For example, making a daily study plan ensures efficiency. (运用了动名词短语作主语) 2．（2025·天津河西·一模）2024年12月23日是天津620岁的生日，津云新媒体向全市市民征稿，献礼天津。假设你是晨光中学李津，积极参与此项活动。请按以下提示向津云投稿： 1. 表达你对天津的祝福； 2. 介绍天津的特色(如文化、美食、景点等)； 3. 你对天津的印象及展望。 注意： 1. 词数不少于100； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】Dear Editors, As a student from Chenguang High School, I am overjoyed to celebrate Tianjin’s 620th birthday on December 23, 2024. It is with great enthusiasm that I extend my heartfelt blessings to Tianjin, wishing it continued prosperity and happiness for all its citizens. Tianjin is a city rich in history and culture. Firstly, it offers a variety of delicious food like Goubuli Baozi, whose flavor tells stories of generations. Secondly, Tianjin’s cultural landmarks are indeed treasures. For example, the Ancient Culture Street, with its traditional architecture and vibrant folk art performances, is a living museum that transports visitors back in time. What’s more, what impresses me most is Tianjin’s ability to harmoniously blend its historical roots with modern advancements. I am confident that Tianjin will continue to thrive as a hub of culture and economy. I am looking forward to witnessing its continued growth and success in the future. Yours, Li Jin 【导语】本篇书面表达是一篇应用文。要求考生写一篇投稿，表达对天津的祝福，介绍天津的特色并说明对天津的印象及展望。 【详解】1.词汇积累 庆祝：celebrate→observe 各种各样的：a variety of→all kinds of 首先：firstly→to begin with 继续做某事：continue to do→keep on doing 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Tianjin is a city rich in history and culture. 拓展句：Tianjin is a city, which is rich in history and culture. 【点睛】[高分句型1] It is with great enthusiasm that I extend my heartfelt blessings to Tianjin, wishing it continued prosperity and happiness for all its citizens.（运用了强调句，现在分词wishing作状语，省略了引导词that的宾语从句作wishing的宾语） [高分句型2] Firstly, it offers a variety of delicious food like Goubuli Baozi, whose flavor tells stories of generations.（运用了whose引导非限制性定语从句） 3．（2025·天津·模拟预测）假设你是李华，为弘扬传统文化，你校英语杂志社正在举行主题为“我最喜欢的传统节日”的征文活动，请你写一篇英语文章，内容包括： 1.介绍节日的基本情况（如名称、时间、特殊饮食、节日活动等）； 2.阐述庆祝该节日的意义； 3.从个人角度出发，谈谈如何在现代生活中更好地传承和创新传统文化。 注意： 1.词数100左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 My Favorite Traditional Festival ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 My Favorite Traditional Festival Of all the traditional Chinese festivals, the Mid-Autumn Festival is the one I cherish the most. Celebrated on the 15th day of the 8th lunar month, it is a time for family reunions and expressing gratitude. During this festival, we enjoy mooncakes, a special pastry with various fillings, and admire the full moon, which symbolizes completeness and unity. Families often gather for a hearty dinner, share stories, and light colorful lanterns, creating a warm and festive atmosphere. The Mid-Autumn Festival carries profound cultural significance. It not only strengthens family bonds but also serves as a reminder of our rich heritage. It encourages us to appreciate the beauty of nature and the value of togetherness. For me, it is a precious opportunity to reconnect with my loved ones and reflect on the timeless traditions passed down through generations. To ensure the preservation and evolution of this tradition, I believe we should blend modern elements with traditional customs. For instance, we can use social media platforms to share festival-related stories or introduce innovative mooncake flavors to appeal to younger generations. Schools and communities could also organize engaging activities, such as lantern-making workshops or mooncake-baking classes, to involve people of all ages. By doing so, we can keep our cultural traditions alive and relevant in today’s rapidly changing world. The Mid-Autumn Festival is more than just a celebration; it is a bridge connecting the past and the future. Let us cherish this beautiful tradition while embracing creativity and innovation to ensure its enduring legacy. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就学校英语杂志社正在举行主题为“我最喜欢的传统节日”的征文活动写一篇英语文章。 【详解】1.词汇积累 表达：express→convey 增强：strengthen →build up 机会：opportunity →chance 吸引：appeal to→attract 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：To ensure the preservation and evolution of this tradition, I believe we should blend modern elements with traditional customs. 拓展句：I believe we should blend modern elements with traditional customs so that we can ensure the preservation and evolution of this tradition. 【点睛】【高分句型1】During this festival, we enjoy mooncakes, a special pastry with various fillings, and admire the full moon, which symbolizes completeness and unity.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Families often gather for a hearty dinner, share stories, and light colorful lanterns, creating a warm and festive atmosphere.（运用了现在分词作状语） 4．（2024·天津河北·二模）假设你是晨光中学的学生李津。你校英文报正面向全体高三毕业生征集毕业感言。 请你按照以下提示写一篇英语短文投稿。 内容包括： (1)表达你对学校的感激； (2)回顾你在校的生活(如：难忘的时刻，获得的知识，个人的成长等)； (3)展望学校的未来，表达你的美好祝愿。 注意： (1)词数不少于100； (2)可适当加入细节，使内容充实、行文连贯； (3)题目已给出，不计入总词数。 To My Dear School ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 To My Dear School As I bid farewell to my alma mater, my heart is filled with gratitude and nostalgia. This school has been a second home to me, nurturing me with knowledge and wisdom, and shaping me into the person I am today. Looking back at my school life, there are countless moments that I cherish dearly. I have gained valuable knowledge from the diligent teachers and learned life skills that will guide me through my future journey. Moreover, this school has fostered my growth as an individual, encouraging me to explore my interests, develop my talents, and overcome my weaknesses. As I look ahead to the future of my school, I am filled with hope and optimism. I envision a vibrant community of learners, where students are inspired to pursue their passions and achieve their dreams. In conclusion, I would like to express my heartfelt gratitude to my school for the opportunities it has provided me and the memories it has created. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生一篇关于毕业感言的英语短文投稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 无数的：countless→numerous 表达：express→extend 此外：moreover→besides 总之：in conclusion→in short 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Looking back at my school life, there are countless moments that I cherish dearly. 拓展句：When I look back at my school life, there are countless moments that I cherish dearly. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Looking back at my school life, there are countless moments that I cherish dearly. (运用了现在分词作状语) [高分句型2] As I look ahead to the future of my school, I am filled with hope and optimism. (运用了as引导时间状语从句) 5．（2024·天津·二模）假设你是晨光国际中学的学生李津。在不久前举行的海棠花节活动中，你带领外国同学游览了五大道，和大家在五大道文创市集将亲手制作的手工艺品进行义卖并将所得捐给学校。请你根据以下内容提示向英文校报投稿： (1)简要介绍海棠花节活动； (2)描述义卖情况； (3)表达对此次游览和义卖活动的感受。 注意： (1)字数不少于 100； (2)题目已给出，不计入总词数； (3)可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：海棠花节 Crabapple Flower Festival  五大道 the Five Great Avenues  文创市集 cultural and creative market A Memorable Experience at the Crabapple Flower Festival ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 A Memorable Experience at the Crabapple Flower Festival Amidst the Crabapple Festival’s vibrant blooms, I guided international students along the storied Five Great Avenues, leading to a bustling creative market. Our stall brimmed with artisanal crafts, each unique and culturally infused, attracting enthusiasts to our charity sale. Hand-painted fans and woven bracelets were among the favorites. Funds raised, an uplifting result, supported our school, enriching education and promoting altruism. This event fused culture, artistry, and giving, transcending boundaries, sharing narratives, and illustrating kindness’s profound impact. The festival highlighted unity and creativity’s transformative power, uniting us through the global tongue of beauty and generosity, leaving a lasting, inspiring impression. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。在不久前举行的海棠花节活动中，考生带领外国同学游览了五大道，和大家在五大道文创市集将亲手制作的手工艺品进行义卖并将所得捐给学校。要求考生按照要求向英文校报投稿。 【详解】1.词汇积累 熙熙攘攘的：bustling→ busy 独特的：unique→ distinctive 吸引：attract→ draw 融合：fuse→ mix 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Amidst the Crabapple Festival’s vibrant blooms, I guided international students along the storied Five Great Avenues, leading to a bustling creative market. 拓展句：Amidst the Crabapple Festival’s vibrant blooms, I guided international students along the storied Five Great Avenues, which leads to a bustling creative market. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Amidst the Crabapple Festival’s vibrant blooms, I guided international students along the storied Five Great Avenues, leading to a bustling creative market.（运用了现在分词leading作状语） 【高分句型2】Funds raised, an uplifting result, supported our school, enriching education and promoting altruism.（运用了过去分词raised作定语、现在分词uplifting作定语、现在分词enriching和promoting作状语） 6．（2024·天津·模拟预测）假设你是明启中学高三学生李华，目前担任学校社团负责人。近期，你校被评为社团明星学校，为了在报纸上分享你校社团情况，请你以“Clubs in My School”为题，写一篇文章，内容须包含： 1. 对你校社团进行分类； 2. 具体描述每一类社团的特色。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 Clubs in My School To enrich students’ life, our school organizes a variety of clubs in my school. Almost every student in our school participates in a club, which makes their school life colorful. Generally speaking, the clubs in my school can be classified into two types: sports club and art club. Sports club are popular among students. There are basketball club, football club, swimming club and so on, which are organized by students with the same interest. So students there can make friends. Besides, they can not only play sports in free time, but also they can learn some sports skills. Art club including music club, painting club and so on, gives students a chance to admire the art. Also, it provides students some knowledge about art. Meanwhile, students there can have the access to the instrument, such as piano, Erhu and so on. All the students in my school like the clubs. So I think the clubs are very significant. 【详解】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生以“Clubs in My School”为题，写一篇文章，分享学校社团情况。 1.词汇积累 等等：and so on→and the like 此外：Besides→In addition 机会：chance→opportunity 同时：Meanwhile→At the same time 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Art club including music club, painting club and so on, gives students a chance to admire the art. 拓展句：Art club which includes music club, painting club and so on, gives students a chance to admire the art. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Almost every student in our school participates in a club, which makes their school life colorful. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] There are basketball club, football club, swimming club and so on, which are organized by students with the same interest. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句) 7．（2020·天津北辰·三模）假如你是晨光中学的李津，为配合学校的科技月活动，你校英语社团的微信公众号开展征文活动。要求同学们写一篇英语短文，介绍我国科学家设计的一款生活型智能机器人。现请你投稿，文章内容包括： 1. 简要介绍这款生活型智能机器人。 2. 谈谈这款生活智能机器人的功能（至少写2点） 3. 说明生活型机器人的意义。 注意：1. 词数不要少于100。 2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：智能机器人intelligent robot June 10, 2020 Here I would like to introduce a new type of intelligent household robot to you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】June 10, 2020 Here I would like to introduce a new type of intelligent household robot to you. In recent years, an intelligent robot, powered by solar energy which is environmentally-friendly, has been designed to provide everyday assistance in our life by scientists in our country. So many powerful functions does this intelligent robot have that it can help us in various ways. Firstly, it can do all the housework, such as cooking, washing and cleaning windows, as a result of which, people can be freed from heavy labour. What’s more, if used appropriately, the robot is capable of taking good care of the elderly and the sick, lightening the burden of their family members’ care for them. Of course, you’ll also take advantage of this robot by not only communicating with it but surfing the Internet through it to collect amounts of information. Not to mention it can even entertain you if it accepts voice commands, playing songs, to mention just one example. There’s no doubt that the creation of this intelligent robot shows the rapid development of science and technology of our country. I’m firmly convinced it will be a big helper in a family, making life more convenient and I’m looking forward to the life with this robot. 【分析】本篇书面表达属于说明文，要求考生写一篇英语短文，介绍我国科学家设计的一款生活型智能机器人的相关信息。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：说明文 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时和一般将来时。 结构：三段式结构。第一段提出话题“一款生活型智能机器人”；第二段讲述其功能特点；第三段说明其意义。 要求：1.提出话题（an intelligent robot）       2.介绍相关情况：功能强大（so many powerful functions）       1）做家务（do all the housework）       2）照顾幼小（take good care of the elderly and the sick）       3) 网络娱乐（surf the Internet;entertain）       3. 意义阐述 1）体现科技发展（show the rapid development of science and technology of our country）       2）生活助手（will be a big helper） 第二步:列提纲 （重点词组） environmentally-friendly; everyday assistance; in various ways; do the housework; such as; be capable of; take good care of; take advantage of; communicate with; not only…but (also); surf the Internet; not to mention; there’s no doubt that; be convinced; look forward to 第三步：连词成句 1. In recent years, an intelligent robot, powered by solar energy which is environmentally-friendly, has been designed to provide everyday assistance in our life by scientists in our country. 2. So many powerful functions does this intelligent robot have that it can help us in various ways. 3. Firstly, it can do all the housework, such as cooking, washing and cleaning windows, as a result of which, people can be freed from heavy labour. 4. What’s more, if used appropriately, the robot is capable of taking good care of the elderly and the sick, lightening the burden of their family members’ care for them. 5. Of course, you’ll also take advantage of this robot by not only communicating with it but surfing the Internet through it to collect amounts of information. 6. Not to mention it can even entertain you if it accepts voice commands, playing songs, to mention just one example. 7. There’s no doubt that the creation of this intelligent robot shows the rapid development of science and technology of our country. 8. I’m firmly convinced it will be a big helper in a family, making life more convenient and I’m looking forward to the life with this robot. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇（衔接词） 1.表文章结构顺序：first of all; firstly/first; secondly/second…; and then; finally; in the end; at last 2.表并列补充关系：what is more; besides; moreover; furthermore; in addition; as well as; not only…but (also); including 3.表因果关系：because; as; so; thus; therefore; as a result 连句成文，注意使用恰当的连词进行句子之间的衔接与过渡，书写一定要规范清晰， 第五步：润色修改 【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯，符合逻辑关系。 1.作者在范文中使用了较多主从复合句，如： In recent years, an intelligent robot, powered by solar energy which is environmentally-friendly, has been designed to provide everyday assistance in our life by scientists in our country.( 近年来，一个智能机器人，由太阳能驱动，这是环保的，已经被设计在我们的生活中提供日常援助的科学家在我们的国家。)这句话运用了which引导定语从句。 So many powerful functions does this intelligent robot have that it can help us in various ways.( 这个智能机器人有这么多强大的功能，它可以在各个方面帮助我们。)该句中使用了so that结果状语从句，且将“So+adj.”结构置于句首，使该句使用了部分倒装句式。 Of course, you’ll also take advantage of this robot by not only communicating with it but surfing the Internet through it to collect amounts of information.( 当然，您还可以利用这个机器人，不仅可以与它通信，还可以通过它浏览网络以收集大量信息。)该句使用了not only…but(also)并列句结构。 There’s no doubt that the creation of this intelligent robot shows the rapid development of science and technology of our country.( 毫无疑问，这种智能机器人的创造表明了我国科学技术的迅速发展。)该句使用了固定句式“there’s no doubt that…”，其中that引导同位语从句。 2.使用了一些固定词组，如environmentally-friendly; everyday assistance; in various ways; do the housework; such as; be capable of; take good care of; take advantage of; communicate with; not only…but (also); surf the Internet; not to mention; there’s no doubt that; be convinced; look forward to等。 全文中没有中国式英语的句式，显示了很高的驾驭英语的能力。另外，文章思路清晰、层次分明，上下句转换自然，为文章增色添彩。 20 / 20 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$