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初高英语衔接课程-NCE3L2-课文改编练习
1. 短文填空。从下面方框中选择恰当的单词并用其正确的形式填入短文空格内,使短文意思正确、通顺(每词限用一次)。共10小题,每小题1分,记10分。
stuck strike vicar figure start something
equal cause grocery damage raise probable
Our vicar is always 1 money for one 2 or another, but he has never managed to get enough money to have the church clock repaired. The big clock which used to strike the hours day and night 3 many years ago and has been silent ever since.
One night, however, our vicar woke up with a(n) 4 : the clock was striking the hours! Looking at his watch, he saw that it was one o'clock, but the bell 5 thirteen times before it stopped. Armed with a torch, the vicar went up into the clock tower to see what was going on. In the torchlight, he caught sight of a 6 whom he immediately recognized as Bill Wilkins, our local 7 .
“Whatever are you doing up here Bill?” asked the vicar in surprise.
“I'm trying to repair the bell,” answered Bill. “I've been coming up here night after night for weeks now. You see, I was hoping to give you a surprise.”
“You certainly did give me a surprise!” said the vicar. “You've 8 woken up everyone in the village as well. Still, I'm glad the bell is working again.”
“That's the trouble, vicar,” answered Bill. “It's working all right, but I'm afraid that at one o'clock it will strike thirteen times and there's 9 I can do about it.”
“We'll get used to that, Bill,” said the 10 . “Thirteen is not as good as one, but it's better than nothing. Now let's go downstairs and have a cup of tea.”
2. 语法填空。用单词的适当形式完成短文。阅读下面短文,在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。(共10小题,每小题1.5分,记15分)
Our vicar is always raising money for one cause or 1 , but he has never managed to get enough money to have the church clock 2 (repair). The big clock which used to strike the hours day and night was damaged many years ago and 3 (be) silent ever since.
One night, however, our vicar woke up with a start: the clock was striking the hours! Looking at his watch, he saw that it was one o'clock, but the bell struck thirteen times 4 it stopped. 5 (arm) with a torch, the vicar went up into the clock tower to see what was going on. In the torchlight, he caught sight of a figure 6 he immediately recognized as Bill Wilkins, our local grocer.
“Whatever are you doing up here Bill?” asked the vicar 7 surprise.
“I'm trying to repair the bell,” answered Bill. “I've been coming up here night after night for weeks now. You see, I was hoping to give you a surprise.”
“You certainly did give me a surprise!” said the vicar. “You've probably woken up everyone in the village as well. Still, I'm glad the bell is working again.”
“That's the 8 (trouble), vicar,” answered Bill. “It's working all right, but I'm afraid 9 at one o'clock it will strike thirteen times and there's nothing I can do about it.”
“We'll get used to that, Bill,” said the vicar. “Thirteen is not as good as one, but it's 10 (good) than nothing. Now let's go downstairs and have a cup of tea.”
3. 阅读理解。主旨大意。(共1小题,每小题2.5分,记2.5分)
Which can be a suitable title for the text?
A.Save the Best for Last B.Thirteen Equals One
C.Strike while the Iron is Hot D.The clock is Ticking
【配套练习】
B2-荣耀黄金-完形填空
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Tick, tock, tick, tock. I’m sitting here, watching the movements of my existence pass slowly away. My house has been 41 for such a long time, and I’m lonely and forgotten. Sitting here, by myself, all that I can do is 42 and think about my past. I could tell you stories that only 43 would know. But walls can’t speak.
I came to this place many years ago, along with an old man. 44 , he was with me for only three short years before he passed on.
For a time, I was left alone, while people came and 45 the house. Then, one day a nice couple moved in with a young son. 46 , their son Danny liked to stay with me, and I was completely taken with him. He always looked as if he loved the stories I told, most of which began with, “Back in my day…” I sometimes had the kind of idea that he didn’t really understand what I was saying, but it felt good to be 47 . When Danny went off to college, my heart broke. Soon afterward, his parents sold the house.
New owners came and 48 . Then, one day it so happened that I was in when a new family was moving into the house. You can’t even imagine my 49 when, unexpectedly, Danny walked through the front door. He had a wife and kids now. I was so overjoyed when I saw him that I put all my 50 into my daily activities. I spent the next twenty years watching his kids grow up, with a mixture of pride and 51 about what would happen next.
The kids finally became 52 and Danny sold the house. That was about five years ago. Some of the local kids have started the rumor that the house is haunted (闹鬼的) — and, in a way, it is. It is haunted by 53 of all the people who have lived in it. Every second has 54 me so much. I hope that someday somebody will 55 me and drop in on me again. Maybe then I’ll get a new home and an opportunity for a whole new set of memories.
41.A.crowded B.painted C.empty D.sold
42.A.chat with friends B.enjoy food C.have a dream D.look back
43.A.walls B.learners C.neighbors D.friends
44.A.Luckily B.Happily C.Surprisingly D.Sadly
45.A.settled in B.looked at C.bought in D.sold out
46.A.At last B.At one time C.From the beginning D.In the end
47.A.loved B.told C.disliked D.believed
48.A.settled B.lived C.left D.greeted
49.A.pity B.pride C.sadness D.surprise
50.A.abilities B.energy C.life D.ideas
51.A.anxiety B.dream C.disappointment D.happiness
52.A.old B.impatient C.tired D.adults
53.A.families B.furniture C.memories D.houses
54.A.surprised B.impressed C.encouraged D.inspired
55.A.call B.visit C.remember D.attend
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参考答案:
一、十二选十填空
raising cause was damaged start struck
figure grocer probably nothing vicar
二、语法填空
1.another 2. repaired 3. has been4. before 5. Armed 6.whom/who/that 7. In
8.trouble 9. that 10. better
三、阅读理解
B
四、完形填空
CDADB CACDB ADCBC
一、十二选十填空解析
1. raising
考点本质:现在进行时表经常性动作
结构:is always raising(always+进行时表重复动作带感情色彩)
破题线索:
① 空格前is always → 需动词-ing形式构成进行时
② 语义:牧师"总是在筹钱" → raising money(固定搭配)
高考预警:高频短语raise money for...(为...筹钱)
2. cause
考点本质:固定搭配
结构:one ______ or another → one cause or another(固定短语="这样那样的理由")
对比:for one thing or another(语义相近但非原句结构)
3. was damaged
三重考点:
被动语态:钟"被"损坏 → be damaged
一般过去时:many years ago 明确过去时间
主谓一致:主语the big clock(单数)→ was
4. start
考点本质:固定短语
woke up with a start(猛然惊醒)→ start 作名词="惊吓"
对比:with a shock/surprise(近义但非原词)
5. struck
考点本质:动词时态+词义精准
原句:the bell ______ thirteen times
① 钟"敲响"需用 strike(过去式 struck)
② 时间状语before it stopped → 过去动作 → 过去时
6. figure
考点本质:名词词义与语境匹配
原文:he caught sight of a ______(看见一个身影)
语义:模糊人影 → figure(轮廓,人影)
对比:shape(形状)/shadow(阴影)→ 不符语境
7. grocer
考点本质:上下文逻辑复现
后文recognized as Bill Wilkins → 身份提示
前文local限定 → 当地杂货商 → grocer
8. probably
考点本质:副词修饰动词
结构:You've ______ woken up...
动词woken需副词修饰 → probably(很可能)
语义:对"吵醒村民"的推测
9. nothing
考点本质:固定句型
there's ______ I can do → there's nothing I can do(无能为力)
对比:something(语义矛盾)/anything(需否定词)
10. vicar
考点本质:对话者身份还原
前文牧师(vicar)对Bill说话 → 最后一句说话者还原 → vicar
二、语法填空解析
1. another
考点本质:固定搭配复现
one cause or another → 同选词填空第2题
2. repaired
考点本质:have sth done结构
have the church clock ______ → have sth repaired(让某物被修理)
3. has been
考点本质:现在完成时延续性
标志词:ever since(自从那时起→持续至今)
结构:主语the big clock(单数)→ has been silent
4. before
考点本质:时间连词逻辑
原文:struck thirteen times ______ it stopped
动作顺序:敲13下 → 停止 → before(在...之前)
5. Armed
考点本质:过去分词作状语
结构:______ with a torch, the vicar went...
逻辑主语the vicar被"武装" → Armed(被动意义)
6. whom/who/that
考点本质:定语从句关系词(限制性)
先行词:a figure(人)
从句缺宾语:recognized ______ as Bill → 填 whom/who/that(可省略)
7. in
考点本质:固定介词搭配
asked... ______ surprise → in surprise(惊讶地)
8. trouble
考点本质:上下文指代复现
后文Bill解释钟的问题 → 呼应"That's the ______" → trouble
9. that
考点本质:宾语从句引导词
结构:I'm afraid ______ at one o'clock it will...
从句完整(主谓齐全)→ 填that(可省略)
10. better
考点本质:形容词比较级
结构:not as good as... but ______ than nothing
比较级标志than → better
三、阅读理解解析
正确答案:B. Thirteen Equals One
选项深度对比
选项
解析
匹配度
A. Save the Best for Last
强调"保留最佳" → 文中无此逻辑
❌ 0%
B. Thirteen Equals One ✅
双关语:
① 字面:13次钟声=1点
② 隐喻:修钟的惊喜=一次帮助
100%
C. Strike while the Iron is Hot
谚语"趁热打铁" → 与修钟无关
❌ 10%
D. The clock is Ticking
"时间流逝" → 未突出核心事件
❌ 20%
主旨结构拆解
牧师筹款修钟未果
深夜钟声惊醒
发现Bill秘密修钟
13声钟响的幽默
'十三等于一'的豁达
标题点睛:
"Thirteen Equals One" 既概括核心矛盾(13声报1点),又暗含人情温暖(善意=帮助),体现英文标题双关修辞特色。
41. C. empty
后文线索:lonely and forgotten → 房屋空置
42. D. look back
后文动作:think about my past → 需回顾(look back)
43. A. walls
视角统一:全文以"墙壁"口吻叙述 → walls 自知秘密
44. D. Sadly
情感转折:老人仅相伴三年 → 悲伤逻辑
45. B. looked at
动作顺序:人们先"看房"后搬入 → looked at(考察短暂动作)
46. C. From the beginning
时间逻辑:Danny从一开始就喜欢墙壁 → 呼应liked to stay
47. A. loved
情感需求:前文felt good揭示墙壁渴望被爱
48. C. left
动作对比:前句New owners came → 后句Danny returned → 中间需离开
49. D. surprise
情感逻辑:Danny意外归来 → 呼应unexpectedly
50. B. energy
拟人修辞:put energy into activities = 墙壁焕发生机
51. A. anxiety
情感矛盾:pride(自豪)与对未来担忧并存
52. D. adults
成长逻辑:孩子最终长成大人 → 房屋再次出售
53. C. memories
核心主题:房屋被回忆萦绕 → 呼应全文"记忆"主线
54. B. impressed
情感递进:每段时光都铭刻(impressed) 在墙壁上
55. C. remember
主旨升华:墙壁渴望被铭记 → 点题"记忆永恒"
B2-荣耀黄金-(21年高考真题适应性改编)资阳市乐至县乐至中学2024-2025学年高一下学期4月月考
一、阅读理解 任务型阅读
A Mother’s Day surprise
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
1.从方框中选择意义与文本相符的词或短语并用其正确形式填空。
Bread boil over calm clean fail Jenna Jeff hand love stove surprise is burned
2.Why did the twins have difficulty making breakfast?
3.What would the twins do next? Why?
4.Father saw what had happened. Would he offer help ? Why or why not?
参考答案
1. urprise love bread Jenna boiled over calm stove clean hand failed
2.Because they met with some unexpected problems in the cooking process, such as the bread getting burned and the porridge boiling over.
3.They would continue to try to make breakfast. Because they wanted to make their mother happy and proud on Mother's Day. 4.Yes, he would. Because he would want the children to succeed in giving their mother a surprise and would feel sorry for the children in trouble.
【难度】0.65
【来源】四川省资阳市乐至县乐至中学2024-2025学年高一下学期4月月考英语试题
【导语】本文是一篇记叙文。这篇文章讲述了双胞胎姐弟为母亲准备惊喜的故事。他们计划在母亲节给母亲带早餐,但是他们在做法式吐司和鸡肉粥的过程中出了一些问题。
1.1.考查名词。句意:这对双胞胎想为母亲节策划一个惊喜。根据第一段中的“The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day.(想到为母亲节准备的惊喜,这对双胞胎充满了兴奋)”可知,这对双胞胎想为母亲节策划一个惊喜。此处应用名词surprise“令某人意外惊喜的事物”,由空前a可知,应用名词单数形式。故填surprise。
2.考查名词。句意:他们对母亲的爱。根据第一段中的“The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.(想到为母亲节准备的惊喜,这对双胞胎充满了兴奋。当他们把早餐端到妈妈床上时,她会多么高兴和自豪啊!)”及常识可知,双胞胎想为母亲节策划一个惊喜,他们想要表达对母亲的爱。此处应用名词love“爱”。故填love。
3.考查名词。句意:锅太热了,面包变黑了。根据第二段中的“The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds.(锅太热了,面包几秒钟就变黑了)”可知,面包变黑了,应用名词bread。故填bread。
4.考查名词。句意:Jenna把火关小,把面包扔进水槽,然后把另一片面包放进去。根据第二段中的“Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.(Jenna把烧焦的那块扔进水槽,把另一片面包放进去。这一次,她把火关小了,所以烤得很好)”可知,Jenna又重新烤制了面包。故填Jenna。
5.考查动词短语。句意:粥沸腾了,把火熄灭了。根据第三段中的“The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire.(下一分钟,粥沸腾了,把火熄灭了)”可知,粥沸腾了,应用动词短语boil over,由语境可知,陈述过去发生的事情,应用一般过去时。故填boiled over。
6.考查形容词。句意:Jeff保持冷静,关掉了煤气。根据第三段中的“Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly.(谢天谢地,Jeff保持冷静,迅速关掉了煤气)”可知,Jeff保持冷静,关掉了煤气,应用形容词calm“冷静了”。故填calm。
7.考查名词。句意:炉子一团糟。根据第三段中的“But the stove was a mess now.(但是炉子现在一团糟)”可知,炉子现在一团糟,应用名词stove。故填stove。
8.考查动词。句意:根据第三段中的“Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge.(Jenna让Jeff把它清理干净,这样他们就可以继续煮剩下的粥了)”可知,Jenna让Jeff把它清理干净,应用动词clean。故填clean。
9.考查名词。句意:Jenna让Jeff把手放在冷水里。根据第三段中的“Jenna made him put his hand in cold water.(Jenna让他把手放在冷水里)”可知,Jenna让Jeff把手放在冷水里,应用名词hand。故填hand。
10.考查查动词。句意:Jenna和Jeff想给妈妈做早餐,但失败了。根据第三段中的“Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.(然后她闻到了烧焦的味道。哦,天哪!锅里的那块面包也变黑了)”可推知,Jenna和Jeff想给妈妈做早餐,但最后失败了,应用动词fail,由语境可知,陈述过去发生的事情,应用一般过去时。故填failed。
2.细节理解题。根据第二段“Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds.(一切都进行得很顺利,直到 Jeff 开始煎面包。锅太热了,面包几秒钟内就变黑了)”以及第三段“Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire.(然后 Jeff 注意到蒸汽从锅里冒出来,锅盖开始晃动。接下来,粥煮溢出来扑灭了火)”可知,双胞胎做早餐遇到困难是因为他们在烹饪过程中遇到了各种意外情况,比如面包煎糊了,粥煮溢出来了。故答案为:Because they met with some unexpected problems in the cooking process, such as the bread getting burned and the porridge boiling over.
3.推理判断题。根据第一段“The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed.(双胞胎一想到他们为母亲节计划的惊喜,就充满了兴奋。当他们把早餐端到妈妈床上时,妈妈会多么高兴和骄傲啊)”可知,双胞胎非常期待给妈妈一个惊喜,让妈妈开心和骄傲,这是他们的初衷和动力。尽管在做早餐的过程中状况不断,但他们对妈妈的这份爱和想要达成目标的决心不会轻易改变,所以可推测他们会继续尝试做早餐。故答案为:They would continue to try to make breakfast. Because they wanted to make their mother happy and proud on Mother's Day.
4.开放式题。父亲看到孩子们为了给妈妈准备母亲节惊喜而手忙脚乱,很可能会去帮忙。因为父亲也希望孩子们能成功给妈妈一个惊喜,同时也会心疼孩子们遇到困难。故答案为:Yes, he would. Because he would want the children to succeed in giving their mother a surprise and would feel sorry for the children in trouble.
高考英语读后续写真题训练及二次开发课程
2021新高考I&II卷——用早餐做母亲节礼物
1. 语法填空。用单词的适当形式完成短文。阅读下面短文,在空白处填入1个适当的单词或括号内单词的正确形式。(共10小题,每小题1.5分,记30分)(难度:白银-题源: 真题)
A Mother’s Day Surprise
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it 1 (boil) while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg 2 (mix). Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the 3 (fry) pan. Everything was going smoothly 4 Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the 5 (burn) piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam 6 (shoot) out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. 7 next minute, the porridge boiled over and put 8 the fire. Jenna panicked. 9 (thankful), Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan 10 (turn) black as well.
1、答案 to boil mixture frying until burnt
shooting The out Thankfully had turned
【原题】
A MOTHER’S DAY SURPRISE
The twins were filled with excitement as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day came at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair went down the stairs quietly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to clean it up so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
注意:
1. 续写词数应为150左右。
2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.
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The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up.
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【分析与构思】
读文章勾画重点3-5分钟,利用思维导图构思情节2-3分钟
Who(情感/特点/现状)Main (主角)/Others (配角)/Pets/items (宠物/物品)
What(冲突/挑战)
P1P2 key words (线索)
When (时间是否转移)/Where (场景是否转移)/Why (为什么做?合情合理)/How (如何做?合情合理)
P1 写什么?/ P2写什么?
【范文盲填】
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Father’s appearing was like 1 to the two children. Under 2 their father, they took positive actions and started 3 . They made the bread and then went on cooking porridge. Father helped them 4 the fire, which was 5 . It was all right this time. Delicious breakfast was ready. How happy they were!
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. When their mother saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in front of her, she was 6 . It was not only 7 , but 8 that moved her very much. The two children could finish cooking a breakfast, 9 she didn’t expect. The children said loudly, “Happy Mother’s Day!” Mother hugged them 10 and kissed them again and again.
【导语】本文以母亲节为线索展开,讲述了双胞胎Jenna和Jeff为了献给母亲一份美味的早餐,自己动手,做起饭餐来,但是不幸的是,他们连连失败的故事。
【详解】1.段落续写:
①由第一段首句内容“当双胞胎失望地环顾四周时,他们的父亲出现了。”可知,第一段可描写他们的父亲指导帮助他们准备早餐。
②由第二段首句内容“这对双胞胎把早餐端到楼上,叫醒了他们的母亲。”可知,第二段可描写母亲收到孩子们的礼物早餐,非常感动。
2.续写线索:指导——积极——献礼——感动
3.词汇激活
行为类
①帮助:help/assist ②完成:finish/complete ③拥抱:hug/embrace
情绪类
①高兴:happy/delighted ②感动:moved/touched
【点睛】
[高分句型1]. Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success. (which引导的非限制性定语从句)
[高分句型2]. It was not only the breakfast, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much. (固定短语not only…but (also)和强调句型)
答案 a savior the guidance of all over again adjust the key to success
very surprised the gift the love of the children for her which tightly
【真题出处】
2021新高考全国I/II卷读后续写原文来自于Assignment point。这是全国首次采用新高考I/II卷,“读后续写”题型面向考生面比以往任何一年都要广,因此不像往年浙江卷,难度有所降低。
Mother’s Day Celebration with Twin Child – an Open Speech
The twins rubbed their hands with glee as they thought of the surprise they were planning for Mother’s Day. How pleased and proud Mother would be when they brought her breakfast in bed. They planned to make French toast and chicken porridge. They had watched their mother in the kitchen. There was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly what to do.
The big day dawned at last. The alarm rang at 6 a.m. The pair crept down the stairs to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of water and left it to boil while they made the French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate and added in some milk. Jenna found the bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner to heat up the frying pan. Everything was going smoothly until Jeff started frying the bread. The pan was too hot and the bread turned black within minutes. Jenna threw the burnt piece into the sink and put in the other slice of bread. This time, she turned down the fire so it cooked nicely.
Then Jeff noticed the pot cover starting to move. The next minute, the porridge boiled over and put out the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff stayed calm and turned off the gas. But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff to wipe up the sticky stuff so they could continue to cook the rest of the porridge. But Jeff’s hand touched the hot burner and he gave a yelp of pain. Jenna made him put his hand under the tap. Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh dear! The piece of bread in the pan had turned black as well.
As the twins looked around them in dismay, their father appeared in the doorway. One look and he knew what they were up to. Seeing their crestfallen (垂头丧气的) faces, he told them to clean up the kitchen while he helped them make breakfast for Mother. The twins cheered up and did as told. Within an hour, the kitchen was cleaned, and Father had made some egg sandwiches and cooked some oat porridge. Then he sneaked (偷溜) back to bed. The twins prepared the breakfast tray, adding a card they had made, and then carried the tray upstairs to their parents’ bedroom.
The twins woke their mother up by hugging her and yelling ‘Happy Mother’s Day, darling Mummy!’ Mother hugged the twins. Her eyes widened at the sight of the breakfast tray. She shook Father who was pretending to snore. He feigned (假装) astonishment when he saw the breakfast. Mother bit into a sandwich and said it was the best she had ever tasted. Jeff immediately wanted to have a bite. Jenna caught her father’s eye and they winked (眨眼) at each other secretly.
【范文汇编】
范文1:
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared.A surprised smile on his face,he took in the chaotic scene— the burnt French toast, the spilled porridge, and the mess on the stove. Instead of scolding them, he laughed heartily and said, "Looks like you two have been busy chefs this morning!" The little two immediately displayed a cry for help in their eyes. Father decided to help them. They quickly cleaned up the kitchen and started fresh. With his guidance, the second batch of French toast turned golden brown and the porridge cooked perfectly. The twins were grateful for their father's calm presence and expertise in the kitchen.
took in the chaotic scene 看清了混乱的场面
scold v.责备
laughed heartily哈哈大笑起来
displayed a cry for help in their eyes流露出求助的眼神
the second batch of French toast 第二批法式吐司
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. She was over the moon to see her children standing there with a beautifully prepared meal. Tears of joy welled up in her eyes as she hugged them tightly, feeling loved and appreciated.As they enjoyed their Mother's Day breakfast together, the twins realized that even though their surprise didn't go as planned, the love and effort they put into it meant more to their mother than any perfectly executed meal ever could. It was a Mother's Day they would always remember, filled with laughter, love, and the warmth of family.
over the moon非常高兴
范文2
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. With a knowing smile, he surveyed(查看) the scene, understanding the mishaps(小事故) that often accompany such well-intentioned surprises. Without a word, he rolled up his sleeves (卷起袖子)and joined his children, offering guidance and assistance to rectify(修正)the chaos.With their father's calm presence calming their nerves, the twins regained their composure(镇定). Together, they swiftly cleaned the stove and resumed their cooking endeavors(尝试), this time with a newfound sense of determination and caution. Under their father's watchful eye, the French toast sizzled(发出(油煎食物的)咝咝声)to golden perfection, while the pot of porridge simmered(文火炖) gently on the stove.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. As their mother's eyes fluttered open(睁开), she was greeted by the sight of her children's beaming faces(笑脸), their love and devotion shining through. With a grateful smile, she accepted the tray, savoring(享受) the aroma (香味)of their efforts and the warmth of their love. And as they shared their humble feast together, the true spirit of Mother's Day blossomed - not in perfection, but in the heartfelt gestures of love and appreciation exchanged between a mother and her cherished children.
范文3:
As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. He saw the disaster in the kitchen and immediately took control. He quickly tended to Jeff's burn, soothing it with some ointment and a bandage. Then, he took over the cooking duties, expertly finishing the porridge and perfectly cooking the French toast. The twins watched in awe as their father worked his magic in the kitchen, grateful for his help.
The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. They presented her with a tray filled with delicious food and a bouquet of flowers. Their mother was overjoyed by the thoughtful gesture and the delicious breakfast. She hugged and kissed the twins, thanking them for their hard work. The twins beamed with pride, grateful that their surprise had turned out to be a success thanks to their father's help. Mother's Day was off to a great start and the rest of the day was filled with love and appreciation for their dear mother.
范文4:
Paragraph 1: As the twins looked around them in disappointment, their father appeared. Seeing the mess and noticing Jeff’s red, sore hand, he immediately fetched a cold cloth and wrapped it around Jeff’s fingers. “A little setback won’t ruin your surprise,” he said kindly, giving them an encouraging smile. Rolling up his sleeves, he guided them through each step, showing them how to keep the porridge simmering gently and fry the toast to a perfect golden brown. With their father’s support, the twins regained their confidence, carefully following his advice as they prepared a tray. They added a small vase of flowers and a hand-drawn card, filling the kitchen with the comforting aroma of breakfast and their shared excitement.
Paragraph 2: The twins carried the breakfast upstairs and woke their mother up. She opened her eyes to see their glowing faces and the lovingly arranged tray. Noticing Jeff’s bandaged hand, she held it gently and asked with concern, “Are you okay, sweetheart?” Jeff nodded proudly, saying, “We made it all for you, Mom.” Touched, she embraced them both, tears shining in her eyes as she took in the sight of the carefully prepared porridge and toast. “This is the most wonderful gift,” she whispered. As she tasted the food, savoring each bite, Jenna and Jeff beamed, their hearts swelling with pride. In that moment, they truly understood the joy of giving and the warmth of family love.
原文情节变化和情感变化
一、情节变化
情节阶段
情节描述
功能
计划阶段
文章开头描述了双胞胎期待母亲节的到来,并计划为妈妈准备早餐作为惊喜。
交代故事背景和双胞胎的动机,表达了对妈妈的爱与感激。
准备工作
双胞胎设定好闹钟,一大早就悄悄起床来到厨房,决定先煮粥,再煎面包。
展现了双胞胎的积极主动和对任务的认真态度。
煎面包出现失误
Jeff 加热锅子时火候过大,导致面包迅速变黑。
突显双胞胎的经验不足,为后续情节铺垫。
处理意外情况
Jenna 处理好火候后,Jeff 发现粥沸腾导致火熄灭。随后,Jeff 不小心烫伤了手。
加强故事的紧张气氛,并反映出双胞胎的应变能力。
失望和反思
双胞胎看着厨房的混乱情景,充满失落和懊恼。
突显失败带来的情感波动,为父亲的出现创造契机。
二、情感变化
情感变化
情感表现
作用
期待与兴奋
双胞胎计划早餐并想象妈妈的反应,感到非常兴奋与自豪。
表现孩子们对母亲的爱和想要表达感激之情。
紧张与焦虑
当他们遇到煎面包和煮粥的意外情况时,心情逐渐紧张,开始感到焦虑。
强调他们在任务中面对的挑战,展现他们的成长。
失望与沮丧
看到厨房的混乱情景时,感到深深的失望。
突出孩子们的挫败感,展示他们对母亲的期待和自己任务的重视。
希望与感激(后续可能)
父亲的出现可能带来帮助,让他们重新感受到希望。
暗示父亲的支持,预示着最终可能带来的成功和满足。
三、主题分析
三步主题推导法
步骤
分析内容
说明
矛盾识别
双胞胎渴望为妈妈准备一个完美的母亲节惊喜早餐,但由于经验不足,他们在烹饪过程中遇到了多次失误,包括煎糊面包、粥溢出以及烫伤手。
这种冲突来源于双胞胎对母亲的爱和他们缺乏厨房经验之间的矛盾。这种对比表现了他们的用心与实际技能间的落差。
情感转折
双胞胎一开始充满期待和兴奋,渴望通过准备早餐表达对妈妈的爱。随后,面对接连不断的意外和失败,他们感到紧张、焦虑,最终陷入失望和沮丧。
这种情感变化表现了孩子们在面对失败时的挫败感,但也暗示出他们的成长和对亲情的珍视。同时,父亲的出现可能带来新的希望。
主题分析
主题可以聚焦于亲情的表达和包容,以及在困难面前勇于尝试、体会家庭温情的成长。
故事展示了孩子们通过实际行动表达对母亲的爱,尽管遇到挫折,但这种心意并未因此减弱。家庭成员的支持与包容使他们感到温暖和鼓励,传达了亲情的力量与包容。
321原则设计思路
321原则
上下文推理
内容预测
衔接句1
原文描述了孩子们尝试给母亲带来惊喜,但因经验不足,厨房出现了混乱,Jeff的手还被烫伤了。父亲的出现提供了帮助的契机。
父亲看到混乱的厨房和Jeff烫伤的手,先关心Jeff的手,再鼓励孩子们继续完成惊喜,体现父亲的支持和温暖。
过渡1
父亲帮忙收拾厨房,带领他们重新做早餐,孩子们在父亲的帮助下重拾信心并顺利完成准备。
父亲帮助清理厨房,教导他们正确烹饪,孩子们在指导下恢复信心并完成早餐,氛围温馨和鼓励。
衔接句2
第二段段首句表明孩子们端着早餐去叫醒母亲,此处需与第一段结束时的成功准备场景紧密连接。
孩子们将准备好的早餐端上楼,表现出自信和成就感。此时场景已经转换到母亲的房间,孩子们带着期盼唤醒母亲。
衔接句3
第二段开头提到母亲醒来,顺理成章地唤起她对孩子们烫伤手的关切,使情感逐步递进,表达母亲的温情。
母亲先关心Jeff的烫伤,接着感受到孩子们用心准备的早餐,情绪感动。家庭温情升华。
过渡2
母亲的感动与孩子们的自豪交织在一起,进一步衬托出浓浓的家庭温馨氛围,反映出母亲的欣慰和孩子们的满足。
母亲品尝早餐,对孩子们的用心表达感激之情,孩子们体验到爱的回馈。
主题句
孩子们通过自己的努力给母亲带来了快乐,尽管经历了困难,他们学会了付出和亲情的价值。
通过母亲对孩子们的肯定,主题得到升华,突显家庭爱与奉献的重要性。
Lesson 2 Thirteen equals one
摘要:
At one o'clock in the morning, the church clock striking the hours woke the vicar up as it struck thirteen times. The vicar went into the clock tower, taking a torch with him. He saw Bill Wilkins, the local grocer there and Bill explained he was trying to repair the clock but hadn't succeeded because at one o'clock it struck thirteen times. However, the vicar was pleased the bell was working and offered the grocer a cap of tea. (79 words)
作文:
A sticky business
We were used to hearing our church bell striking the hours in our small village. For as long as anyone could remember, the bell had struck the hours day and night. However, one night the church bell remained silent and the next morning we saw that the clock had stopped at exactly one a.m. Our clock was clearly damaged, but no one could explain how this had happened.
Armed with a torch, our vicar climbed into the church tower to see what was going on. He heard a loud buzz as he went towards the clock and in the torchlight he found it had been invaded by bees. He was lucky they didn't sting him! He shone his torch into the great bell and saw that it was full of wax and honey. No wonder it wasn't working!
A bee keeper was called in to deal with the situation. He immediately removed the queen bee to one of his bee hives and the other bees followed. The clock was cleaned and was soon working again. We not only enjoyed hearing it strike the hours day and night, but we enjoyed eating the honey as well. (195 words)
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