Unit 1 People of Achievement 介绍著名人物（单元应用文写作精练）英语人教版2019选择性必修第一册

Unit 1 People of Achievement介绍著名人物 应用文写作精练（解析版） 写作主题 识 主题：介绍著名人物 写作框架： 第一段 引出你最崇拜的人。 第二段 介绍他/她的主要事迹。 第三段 阐明你崇拜他/她的原因。 写作词汇短语： Qualities： 1.hardworking 工作努力的 2.determined adj.坚定的； 3.strong--minded意志坚定的 4.Unselfish 无私的 5.creative有创造力的 6.devoted投入的 7.committed 尽职尽责的 8.warm—hearted 热心的 Achievements： 1. make a difference to 对…有影响 2. make great contributions to 为..做出巨大贡献 3. have a great effect//influence//impact on ….对..有巨大影响 4. make important discoveries 有重大发现 5. realize one’s dream// make one’s dream come true实现某人的梦想 6. improve the quality of life提高生活质量 7. win the admiration of…赢得…的钦佩 8. gain a bachelor’s degree// master’s degree//doctor’s degree获得学士//硕士//博士学位 写作句型： 1．介绍人物的出生日期、出生地、出身及外貌特征： ①He had fair hair and blue eyes. ②Abraham Lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born in Kentucky on February 12, 1809. ③She is tall and slim with big eyes and curly hair. ④Sue was a young woman who was studying art. ⑤He is a good-looking and kind-hearted man. 2．介绍人物的事迹、成就或取得的成绩： ①During her career life, she obtained many championships, including four Olympic championships. ②When he was still a boy, he showed great interest in literature. ③His stories, most of which are short ones, give people surprising endings. ④He/She is good at spoken English and even better at using computers. 3．介绍人物的影响及人们对此人的评价： ①He became famous for his new theory. ②The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader. ③We regard him as our model. ④Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit. ⑤Her story tells us that we should value what we have, and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life. 写作模板： The person I admire most is _______(人）. Born in _______(地点/时间）, _______（人），who is one of the greatest _______(职业）, showed a passion for___________(方面） After graduating from __________(学校）, he/she spent most of his /her time in doing/on___________. Despite many difficulties, he/she managed to overcome them. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in_________, which made him _____________(成就）. Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect. 真题示例： （2020·全国·高考真题）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括: 1. 人物简介； 2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。 注意: 1. 词数100左右； 2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 举一反三： （23-24高二上·广东揭阳·阶段练习）假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Jack得知屠呦呦获得诺贝尔生理学或医学奖的消息，因此对其产生了浓厚的兴趣，想了解屠呦呦的生平及成就。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括： 1. 1930年出身于浙江省宁波市；1951年考入北京大学医学部并于1955年毕业； 2. 2015年10月，因发现青蒿素这一治疗疟疾的新药物而获诺贝尔生理学或医学奖。 3. 屠呦呦是第一位获得诺贝尔科学奖项的中国科学家。 参考词汇：青蒿素：artemisinin; 疟疾：malaria; 诺贝尔生理学或医学奖：Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine 注意： 1．词数80左右，开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数内; 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 1．（24-25高二下·湖北武汉·期中）假定你班英语课开展“我所崇拜的科学家（The Scientist I Admire）”为主题的项目学习活动。请你写一篇发言稿，代表你们小组介绍你们所崇拜的科学家，内容包括： 1.主要成就； 2.崇拜原因。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。 The Scientist I Admire ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（24-25高二上·浙江杭州·期末）假设你是李华，你校英文报“名人风采”栏目征稿，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍一位你最敬佩的科学家，要点包括： 1.人物简介 2.敬佩理由 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右： 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The Scientist I Admire Most ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（24-25高二上·内蒙古兴安盟·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你校正在举办英语主题征文活动，请你写一篇英语短文，介绍你最敬佩的人——袁隆平。 1. 人物简介：1930年生于北京；毕业于西南农业大学（Southwest Agricultural College）; 1974他研制成功的杂交水稻（hybrid rice） 用于农业。 2. 令人敬佩的原因。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（24-25高二上·江西赣州·阶段练习）假如你是李华。最近你市电子科技博物馆正在征集我国古代科学家的英文简介，请你写一篇英语短文介绍我国古代科学家郭守敬，内容包括： 1.基本信息：我国古代著名天文学家、数学家和工程师；出生于现在的河北邢台；生于1231年，卒于1316年。 2.主要成就及发明：负责修建大都至通州运河；制订《授时历》，通行360多年，是当时世界上最先进的一种历法；著有十四种天文历法著作。 注意： 1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯。 参考词汇：运河canal;《授时历》Shoushi Calendar；天文历法astronomical calendar ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（24-25高二上·全国·课后作业）请根据以下内容写一篇文章介绍中国科学家钱学森。 1．1911年生于上海，1936年赴美留学，成绩优异，受到当时的著名科学家冯·卡门（Von Karman）的赞誉； 2．1938 年在美国获航空、数学博士学位； 3．1950年获悉新中国成立的消息，克服了美国政府的百般阻挠，于1955年回到祖国； 4．1958年起长期担任航空航天研究工作，为新中国的航天事业做出了巨大的贡献，被誉为“新中国航天之父”； 5．2009年于北京去世。 注意：词数80左右。 参考词汇：航天航空科学技术（aerospace science and technology） __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（23-24高二上·全国·课后作业）结合课文主题，使用本单元词汇与句型写一篇80词左右的短文。 1. 钱学森被公认为中国最伟大的科学家之一。(acknowledge) 2. 他致力于中国的发展，参与和领导了中国火箭的研制，这对我们国家来说至关重要。(be committed to; be of vital importance) 3. 使我们感动的是他怀揣着服务祖国和人民的目标坚持回到祖国。(insist on; with the objective of) 4. 他为我们国家科技的发展做出了巨大贡献。(scientific; contribution) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 3 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ Unit 1 People of Achievement介绍著名人物 应用文写作精练（解析版） 写作主题 识 主题：介绍著名人物 写作框架： 第一段 引出你最崇拜的人。 第二段 介绍他/她的主要事迹。 第三段 阐明你崇拜他/她的原因。 写作词汇短语： Qualities： 1.hardworking 工作努力的 2.determined adj.坚定的； 3.strong--minded意志坚定的 4.Unselfish 无私的 5.creative有创造力的 6.devoted投入的 7.committed 尽职尽责的 8.warm—hearted 热心的 Achievements： 1. make a difference to 对…有影响 2. make great contributions to 为..做出巨大贡献 3. have a great effect//influence//impact on ….对..有巨大影响 4. make important discoveries 有重大发现 5. realize one’s dream// make one’s dream come true实现某人的梦想 6. improve the quality of life提高生活质量 7. win the admiration of…赢得…的钦佩 8. gain a bachelor’s degree// master’s degree//doctor’s degree获得学士//硕士//博士学位 写作句型： 1．介绍人物的出生日期、出生地、出身及外貌特征： ①He had fair hair and blue eyes. ②Abraham Lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born in Kentucky on February 12, 1809. ③She is tall and slim with big eyes and curly hair. ④Sue was a young woman who was studying art. ⑤He is a good-looking and kind-hearted man. 2．介绍人物的事迹、成就或取得的成绩： ①During her career life, she obtained many championships, including four Olympic championships. ②When he was still a boy, he showed great interest in literature. ③His stories, most of which are short ones, give people surprising endings. ④He/She is good at spoken English and even better at using computers. 3．介绍人物的影响及人们对此人的评价： ①He became famous for his new theory. ②The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader. ③We regard him as our model. ④Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit. ⑤Her story tells us that we should value what we have, and try our best to overcome any difficulty in life. 写作模板： The person I admire most is _______(人）. Born in _______(地点/时间）, _______（人），who is one of the greatest _______(职业）, showed a passion for___________(方面） After graduating from __________(学校）, he/she spent most of his /her time in doing/on___________. Despite many difficulties, he/she managed to overcome them. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in_________, which made him _____________(成就）. Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect. 真题示例： （2020·全国·高考真题）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括: 1. 人物简介； 2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。 注意: 1. 词数100左右； 2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】The person I respect We have a lot of respectable people around us. They may be our teachers, parents or one of our elders. As for me, my father is the person I respect most. My father is a teacher, who loves his work and his students very much. He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work. When I come across the problems of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely. He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students. So, in my mind my father is the person I respect most and I love him deeply. 【分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求学生以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛。 【详解】第一步：审题 体裁：应用文。 时态：根据提示，时态应为一般现在时。 结构：总分法。 要求： 1.人物简介： 2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。 第二步：列提纲（重点短语） As for me；spare some time；listen to me patiently; 第三步：连词成句 1.As for me, my father is the person I respect mostly. 2.He works very hard every day but he will also spare some time to accompany me and share many funny things with me about his work. 3.My father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely. 根据提示及关键词（组）进行遣词造句，注意主谓一致和时态问题。 第四步：连句成篇 1.表示文章结构顺序：介绍人物；阐述原因 2.表示并列补充关系：As for; and; but; So 第五步：润色修改 【点睛】范文内容完整，要点全面，语言规范，语篇连贯，词数适当，上下文意思连贯。复合逻辑关系。作者在范文中使用了较多的高端句式，如定语从句：My father is a teacher who loves his work and his students very much；非谓语动词：He achieved a lot in his work, respected by his students；时间状语从句：When I come across the problem of learning in my study, my father will listen to me patiently and encourage me to overcome the difficulties bravely…等。文章思路清晰，层次分明，上下句转换自然。为文章增色添彩。 举一反三： （23-24高二上·广东揭阳·阶段练习）假如你是李华，你的外国朋友Jack得知屠呦呦获得诺贝尔生理学或医学奖的消息，因此对其产生了浓厚的兴趣，想了解屠呦呦的生平及成就。请你给他写一封回信，内容包括： 1. 1930年出身于浙江省宁波市；1951年考入北京大学医学部并于1955年毕业； 2. 2015年10月，因发现青蒿素这一治疗疟疾的新药物而获诺贝尔生理学或医学奖。 3. 屠呦呦是第一位获得诺贝尔科学奖项的中国科学家。 参考词汇：青蒿素：artemisinin; 疟疾：malaria; 诺贝尔生理学或医学奖：Nobel Prize in Physiology or Medicine 注意： 1．词数80左右，开头与结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数内; 2．可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】Dear Jack, How is everything going? Knowning that you are interested in To Youyou, I am writing to give you a brief introduction about her. Born in Ningbo, Zhejiang Province, Tu Youyou was admitted to Peking University Medical School in 1951 and graduated in 1955. After graduation, she committed herself to medical research, with the objective of finding an effective treatment for malaria, which was a deadly disease at that time. After failing more than 190 times, the team finally succeeded in 1971. Because of the discovery of artemisinin, Tu was awarded the 2015 Nobel Prize for Medicine, becoming the first Chinese scientist to get the prize. Interested in knowing more? Just let me know. Yours, Li Hua 【导语】本文是一篇应用文。要求考生给朋友Jack写信介绍屠呦呦的生平与成就。 【详解】1.词汇积累 简短的：brief→short 致力于：commit oneself to→be devoted to 发现：find→ discover 因为：because of→thanks to 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Knowning that you are interested in To Youyou, I am writing to give you a brief introduction about her. 拓展句：Because I know that you are interested in To Youyou, I am writing to give you a brief introduction about her. 【点睛】【高分句型1】After graduation, she committed herself to medical research, with the objective of finding an effective treatment for malaria, which was a deadly disease at that time.（运用了which非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】Because of the discovery of artemisinin, Tu was awarded the 2015 Nobel Prize for Medicine, becoming the first Chinese scientist to get the prize.（运用了现在分词作结果状语，不定式作定语） 1．（24-25高二下·湖北武汉·期中）假定你班英语课开展“我所崇拜的科学家（The Scientist I Admire）”为主题的项目学习活动。请你写一篇发言稿，代表你们小组介绍你们所崇拜的科学家，内容包括： 1.主要成就； 2.崇拜原因。 注意： 1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题卡相应位置作答。 The Scientist I Admire ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】： The Scientist I Admire Today, I am honored to present the scientist I admire the most-Yuan Longping. Yuan Longping, renowned as the “Father of Hybrid Rice,” revolutionized agriculture by developing the world’s first hybrid rice. His pioneering work has transformed the livelihoods of millions, particularly in regions grappling with hunger. What I deeply admire about Yuan Longping is not just his groundbreaking achievements, but his unwavering commitment to improving humanity’s well-being. Despite numerous setbacks, he remained relentlessly devoted to his research. His resilience and visionary approach serve as an enduring source of inspiration for me to pursue innovation and contribute meaningfully to society. Thank you! 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生代表小组介绍所崇拜的科学家，内容包括其主要成就和崇拜原因。 【详解】1.词汇积累 荣幸的：honored→ privileged 介绍：present→ introduce 著名的：renowned→ famous 开创性的：groundbreaking→ pioneering 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Yuan Longping, renowned as the “Father of Hybrid Rice,” revolutionized agriculture by developing the world’s first hybrid rice. 拓展句：Yuan Longping, who is renowned as the “Father of Hybrid Rice,” revolutionized agriculture by developing the world’s first hybrid rice. 【点睛】【高分句型1】His pioneering work has transformed the livelihoods of millions, particularly in regions grappling with hunger.（运用了现在分词grappling作定语） 【高分句型2】What I deeply admire about Yuan Longping is not just his groundbreaking achievements, but his unwavering commitment to improving humanity’s well-being.（运用了What引导的主语从句） 2．（24-25高二上·浙江杭州·期末）假设你是李华，你校英文报“名人风采”栏目征稿，请你用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍一位你最敬佩的科学家，要点包括： 1.人物简介 2.敬佩理由 注意： 1.写作词数应为80个左右： 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The Scientist I Admire Most ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】范文 The Scientist I Admire Most Yuan Longping, the revered “Father of Hybrid Rice”, is the scientist I admire most. I am deeply impressed by his groundbreaking contributions to agriculture. Born in Beijing in 1930, he dedicated his life to agricultural research, specifically focusing on developing high-yielding rice varieties to combat global hunger. Through tireless effort and innovative thinking, he pioneered hybrid rice strains that significantly boosted rice production, feeding millions of people worldwide. His unwavering dedication to alleviating global food shortages is truly admirable. Yuan Longping’s commitment to making a positive impact on the world is a source of inspiration for me. He lets me know that even a single individual can make a profound difference in the lives of countless others. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生用英语写一篇短文投稿，介绍一位你最敬佩的科学家。 【详解】1.词汇积累 促进：boost→promote 深远的：profound→far-reaching 投入：dedication→devotion 集中：focus on→concentrate on 2.句式拓展 句型转换 原句：Yuan Longping, the revered “Father of Hybrid Rice”, is the scientist I admire most. 拓展句：Yuan Longping, who is known as “Father of Hybrid Rice”, is the scientist I admire most. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Through tireless effort and innovative thinking, he pioneered hybrid rice strains that significantly boosted rice production, feeding millions of people worldwide. (运用了that引导定语从句) [高分句型2] He lets me know that even a single individual can make a profound difference in the lives of countless others. (运用了that引导宾语从句) 3．（24-25高二上·内蒙古兴安盟·阶段练习）假定你是李华，你校正在举办英语主题征文活动，请你写一篇英语短文，介绍你最敬佩的人——袁隆平。 1. 人物简介：1930年生于北京；毕业于西南农业大学（Southwest Agricultural College）; 1974他研制成功的杂交水稻（hybrid rice） 用于农业。 2. 令人敬佩的原因。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Yuan Longping was born in Beijing in 1930. He graduated from Southwest Agricultural College. In1974, he successfully developed hybrid rice for agricultural use. He is an outstanding scientist. His research greatly increased rice production, which has helped feed countless people around the world. His dedication to agriculture and the pursuit of scientific truth is truly admirable. His work has made a huge contribution to global food security and agricultural development. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生对于你校正在举办英语主题征文活动这一情况，写一篇英语短文，介绍你最敬佩的人——袁隆平。 【详解】1.词汇积累 杰出的：outstanding→ excellent 提高：increased →enhanced 巨大的：huge→ enormous 极大地：greatly→ vastly 2.句式拓展 合并句子 原句：Yuan Longping was born in Beijing in 1930. He graduated from Southwest Agricultural College. 拓展句：Yuan Longping was born in Beijing in 1930, who graduated from Southwest Agricultural College. 【点睛】【高分句型1】His research greatly increased rice production, which has helped feed countless people around the world.（运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句） 【高分句型2】His work has made a huge contribution to global food security and agricultural development.（运用了make a contribution to sth的固定短语。） 4．（24-25高二上·江西赣州·阶段练习）假如你是李华。最近你市电子科技博物馆正在征集我国古代科学家的英文简介，请你写一篇英语短文介绍我国古代科学家郭守敬，内容包括： 1.基本信息：我国古代著名天文学家、数学家和工程师；出生于现在的河北邢台；生于1231年，卒于1316年。 2.主要成就及发明：负责修建大都至通州运河；制订《授时历》，通行360多年，是当时世界上最先进的一种历法；著有十四种天文历法著作。 注意： 1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节，以使内容充实、行文连贯。 参考词汇：运河canal;《授时历》Shoushi Calendar；天文历法astronomical calendar ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】范文 Guo Shoujing, one of the top ancient Chinese scientists, was born in Xingtai, Hebei Province in 1231 and passed away in 1316, who lived in the best years of the Yuan Dynasty. As an outstanding astronomer, engineer and mathematician, he greatly influenced the development of science in China. He was in charge of building the Dadu-Tongzhou canal of the Yuan Dynasty, which improved the north-south traffic. At the same time, he invented Shoushi Calendar, which was applied to calculating the accurate length of the year. The calendar, used for more than 360 years, was considered the most advanced calendar in the world at that time. What’s more, he created 14 kinds of masterpieces on the astronomical calendar. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生写一篇英语短文介绍古代科学家郭守敬。 【详解】1.词汇积累 出色的：outstanding→brilliant 负责：be in charge of→be responsible for 此外：what’s more→besides 影响：influence→affect 2.句式拓展 句型转换 原句：As an outstanding astronomer, engineer and mathematician, he greatly influenced the development of science in China. 拓展句：Not only was he an outstanding astronomer, engineer and mathematician, but also he greatly influenced the development of science in China. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Guo Shoujing, one of the top ancient Chinese scientists, was born in Xingtai, Hebei Province in 1231 and passed away in 1316, who lived in the best years of the Yuan Dynasty. (运用了who引导非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] At the same time, he invented Shoushi Calendar, which was applied to calculating the accurate length of the year. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) 5．（24-25高二上·全国·课后作业）请根据以下内容写一篇文章介绍中国科学家钱学森。 1．1911年生于上海，1936年赴美留学，成绩优异，受到当时的著名科学家冯·卡门（Von Karman）的赞誉； 2．1938 年在美国获航空、数学博士学位； 3．1950年获悉新中国成立的消息，克服了美国政府的百般阻挠，于1955年回到祖国； 4．1958年起长期担任航空航天研究工作，为新中国的航天事业做出了巨大的贡献，被誉为“新中国航天之父”； 5．2009年于北京去世。 注意：词数80左右。 参考词汇：航天航空科学技术（aerospace science and technology） __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Qian Xuesen, regarded as the father of China’s space program, was born in 1911 in Shanghai. In 1935, Qian went to America for further study and was highly thought of by Von Karman because of his great achievements. In1938, he obtained his doctor’s degree in aerospace science and mathematics in the US. In 1950, he heard New China had been founded and succeeded in coming back to his homeland in 1955 though the American government tried to stop him. Since 1958 he had been devoted to aerospace science and contributed a lot to the cause of China’s aerospace and in 2009, he passed away in Beijing. Because of the love for his country and the great achievements, he has received the respect and admiration from his people. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生根据提示写一篇文章介绍中国科学家钱学森。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 被认作：regarded as → considered as 成就：achievements → accomplishment 获得：obtain → acquire/gain 献身于：be devoted to → be committed to 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：In 1935, Qian went to America for further study and was highly thought of by Von Karman because of his great achievements. 拓展句：In 1935, Qian, who went to America for further study, was highly thought of by Von Karman because of his great achievements. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Qian Xuesen, regarded as the father of China’s space program, was born in 1911 in Shanghai.(运用了过去分词短语regarded as作后置定语) 【高分句型2】In 1950, he heard New China had been founded and succeeded in coming back to his homeland in 1955 though the American government tried to stop him.(运用了省略了引导词that的宾语从句作heard 的宾语和though引导的让步状语从句) 6．（23-24高二上·全国·课后作业）结合课文主题，使用本单元词汇与句型写一篇80词左右的短文。 1. 钱学森被公认为中国最伟大的科学家之一。(acknowledge) 2. 他致力于中国的发展，参与和领导了中国火箭的研制，这对我们国家来说至关重要。(be committed to; be of vital importance) 3. 使我们感动的是他怀揣着服务祖国和人民的目标坚持回到祖国。(insist on; with the objective of) 4. 他为我们国家科技的发展做出了巨大贡献。(scientific; contribution) ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】One possible version: It is widely acknowledged that Qian Xuesen was one of the greatest scientists in China. He was committed to the development of China, and participated in and led the development of Chinese rockets, which was of vital importance for our country. What has always made us moved is that he insisted on returning to our motherland with the objective of serving our country and people. He made a great contribution to our country’s scientific development. 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生按照所给的提示内容，写一篇介绍钱学森的短文。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 认可：acknowledge→recognize, admit 参与：participate in→take part in 感动的：moved→touched 目标：objective→aim, goal 2. 句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：It is widely acknowledged that Qian Xuesen was one of the greatest scientists in China. 拓展句：There is widespread agreement that Qian Xuesen was one of the greatest scientists in China. 【点睛】[高分句型1] He was committed to the development of China, and participated in and led the development of Chinese rockets, which was of vital importance for our country. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2] What has always made us moved is that he insisted on returning to our motherland with the objective of serving our country and people. (运用了what引导主语从句、that引导表语从句) 2 原创精品资源学科网独家享有版权，侵权必究！ 3 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$