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Unit 1 Teenage Life青少年生活
应用文写作精练(原卷版)
写作主题
识
主题:给高中生活中的问题提建议
写作框架:
第一段
问题陈述:根据信息点确定举行表达。
第二段
提出建议:使用多种句型,避免单一句型表达。
第三段
愿望或期望:写信的结尾套句。
写作词汇短语:
1. advice/tip/suggestion n.建议
2. advise/suggest vt.建议
3. beneficial adj.有益的
4. benefit n.益处v.受益于;使受益
5. following adj.以下的
6. practical adj.实用的
7. as far as sb.be concerned依某人看
8. ask for sb's advice 征求某人的建议
9. give/offer sb. advice/tips/suggestions on sth.在某方面给某人提建议
10. have trouble/difficulty with sth.在某方面有困难
11. have trouble/ difficulty (in) doing sth.做某事有困难
12. have problems with sth.在某方面有问题
13. in one's view/opinion某人认为
14. make some suggestions/advice提出一些建议
15. accept/take/follow one's advice接受某人的建议
写作句型:
【开头句】
1. When it comes to/As for..., the following are my suggestions./My suggestions are as follows.
当涉及/关于……,我的建议如下。
2. I'm writing to give you some suggestions/give you a hand.
我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/帮助。
3.I'm extremely delighted to receive your letter, in which you asked me how to fit in the new school life.
很高兴收到你的来信,信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。
【中间句】
1.I recommend it mainly for the following two reasons.
我推荐它主要有以下两个原因。
2.As far as I'm concerned/Personally, it would be wise to take the following action.
在我看来,采取如下行动是明智的。
3.I think it would be of benefit/beneficial if you...
我认为如果……,将会受益。
4.Doing...is a good/great/better choice.
做……是一个好的/棒的/更好的选择。
5. As far as I am concerned/In my opinion/ In my view, there's no need for you to be shy and all of us are willing to be friends with you.
依我看/我认为,您没有必要害羞,我们都愿意成为您的朋友。
6. As to how to get along well with your classmates, you should remember that kindness is very important,
至于如何与同学和睦相处,记住,友善很重要。
【结尾句】
1. If you need further information, don't hesitate to contact me.
如果你需要更多信息,请联系我。
2. I'll be more than happy if you can take my recommendation/ideas into consideration.
如果你能考虑我的建议/想法,我会非常高兴。
3.I hope that my suggestions/advice will be beneficial/of benefit to you.
我希望我的建议对你有益。
4. I hope you will find these ideas useful/practical/helpful.
我希望您会发现这些办法有用/实用/有帮助。
写作模板:
Dear _______,
I'm delighted to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to ________(引出对方需要建议的主题). I'd like to make some suggestions./ I'm writing to.../Here are a few suggestions (引出作者的建议).
To begin with, you'd better/it is a good idea to _______. Then, it also helps to ______. Besides, doing _________is also a good choice, as _________.
I hope you will find these suggestions practical/useful/helpful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
真题示例:
(2025·全国一卷·高考真题)假定你是李华,你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教 Jenny 提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给Jenny写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
举一反三:
(23-24高一上·江苏无锡·阶段练习)假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Tom 刚上高中,感觉学习生活遇到了很多挑战。他写信向你寻求建议,请你根据以下要点给他写一封回信:
1.表示理解;
2.给出建议;
3.表达祝愿。
要求:字数80字左右,可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
1.(24-25高一上·广东佛山·阶段练习)假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Chris刚刚上高中,感到一切都很陌生。他在邮件中向你询问如何尽快融入新环境,请你给他写一封建议信。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
2.(24-25高一上·重庆九龙坡·阶段练习)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike来信表示自从他进入高中以来一直感到学习压力非常大,向你求助。请你给他写一封回信,要点如下:
1.表示理解和安慰;
2.提出建议;
3.表达希望。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li hua
3.(24-25高一上·吉林长春·阶段练习)假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Ted最近刚转学,发现难以适应新环境,对新学校的交友问题感到烦恼。请给他写一封信,内容主要包括:
1.表示理解;
2.就交朋友的方法给他一些建议。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当加入细节,使行文连贯。
Dear Ted,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
4.(24-25高一上·黑龙江哈尔滨·阶段练习)假设你是李华,你的英国笔友杰克刚刚升入高中,但他一时无法适应新的校园生活,写信向你求助征求你的建议。请你就此问题给他回一封信。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
Dear Jack,
I am sorry to hear that you’re having trouble adjusting to your high school life.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
5.(24-25高一上·广东河源·阶段练习)假如你是李华,你的英国网友Jack最近在中国学习。他写信向你诉说他的困扰:不适应新的学习环境,想家,感到焦虑。请你根据以下要点用英语给他写一封回信。要点如下:
1. 表示理解并给予安慰;2. 提出建议并给出理由;3. 表达你的愿望。
2. 注意:词数80左右(开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Jack,
I am sorry to learn that you are having such a bad time.
___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
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Unit 1 Teenage Life青少年生活
应用文写作精练(解析版)
写作主题
识
主题:给高中生活中的问题提建议
写作框架:
第一段
问题陈述:根据信息点确定举行表达。
第二段
提出建议:使用多种句型,避免单一句型表达。
第三段
愿望或期望:写信的结尾套句。
写作词汇短语:
1. advice/tip/suggestion n.建议
2. advise/suggest vt.建议
3. beneficial adj.有益的
4. benefit n.益处v.受益于;使受益
5. following adj.以下的
6. practical adj.实用的
7. as far as sb.be concerned依某人看
8. ask for sb's advice 征求某人的建议
9. give/offer sb. advice/tips/suggestions on sth.在某方面给某人提建议
10. have trouble/difficulty with sth.在某方面有困难
11. have trouble/ difficulty (in) doing sth.做某事有困难
12. have problems with sth.在某方面有问题
13. in one's view/opinion某人认为
14. make some suggestions/advice提出一些建议
15. accept/take/follow one's advice接受某人的建议
写作句型:
【开头句】
1. When it comes to/As for..., the following are my suggestions./My suggestions are as follows.
当涉及/关于……,我的建议如下。
2. I'm writing to give you some suggestions/give you a hand.
我写这封信的目的是给你一些建议/帮助。
3.I'm extremely delighted to receive your letter, in which you asked me how to fit in the new school life.
很高兴收到你的来信,信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。
【中间句】
1.I recommend it mainly for the following two reasons.
我推荐它主要有以下两个原因。
2.As far as I'm concerned/Personally, it would be wise to take the following action.
在我看来,采取如下行动是明智的。
3.I think it would be of benefit/beneficial if you...
我认为如果……,将会受益。
4.Doing...is a good/great/better choice.
做……是一个好的/棒的/更好的选择。
5. As far as I am concerned/In my opinion/ In my view, there's no need for you to be shy and all of us are willing to be friends with you.
依我看/我认为,您没有必要害羞,我们都愿意成为您的朋友。
6. As to how to get along well with your classmates, you should remember that kindness is very important,
至于如何与同学和睦相处,记住,友善很重要。
【结尾句】
1. If you need further information, don't hesitate to contact me.
如果你需要更多信息,请联系我。
2. I'll be more than happy if you can take my recommendation/ideas into consideration.
如果你能考虑我的建议/想法,我会非常高兴。
3.I hope that my suggestions/advice will be beneficial/of benefit to you.
我希望我的建议对你有益。
4. I hope you will find these ideas useful/practical/helpful.
我希望您会发现这些办法有用/实用/有帮助。
写作模板:
Dear _______,
I'm delighted to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to ________(引出对方需要建议的主题). I'd like to make some suggestions./ I'm writing to.../Here are a few suggestions (引出作者的建议).
To begin with, you'd better/it is a good idea to _______. Then, it also helps to ______. Besides, doing _________is also a good choice, as _________.
I hope you will find these suggestions practical/useful/helpful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
真题示例:
(2025·全国一卷·高考真题)假定你是李华,你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教 Jenny 提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给Jenny写一封邮件,内容包括:
(1)你的选择;
(2)说明理由。
注意:
(1)写作词数应为80个左右;
(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Jenny,
I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper. I’m writing to express that my predilection goes to “Guess who I am”, which capitalizes on an object clause to signal its potential contents.
The column will serve as a catalyst for closer bonds between students. Redoubling efforts to boost academic performance, we pay little heed to other classmates’ personalities, hobbies, strengths, and even aspirations. Such an inviting column, adopting a “description and guess” approach, must expose everyone to others’ characteristics, thus strengthening mutual understanding. More importantly, more friendships will be forged, since the column enables us to befriend someone on the same wavelength.
This eye-catching column, I’m firmly convinced, won’t fail to grant the whole class a harmonious atmosphere.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就外教Jenny提出的校英文报增设一个栏目,在“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项中给出自己的推荐,并说明理由。
【详解】1.词汇积累
表达:express → convey
利用:capitalize on → use
担当:serve as → act as
注意:pay heed to → take notice of
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Such an inviting column, adopting a “description and guess” approach, must expose everyone to others’ characteristics, thus strengthening mutual understanding.
拓展句:Such an inviting column, which adopts a “description and guess” approach, must expose everyone to others’ characteristics, thus strengthening mutual understanding.
【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to express that my predilection goes to “Guess who I am”, which capitalizes on an object clause to signal its potential contents.(运用了that引导的宾语从句,which引导的定语从句)
【高分句型2】More importantly, more friendships will be forged, since the column enables us to befriend someone on the same wavelength.(运用了since引导的状语从句)
举一反三:
(23-24高一上·江苏无锡·阶段练习)假定你是李华,你的美国笔友Tom 刚上高中,感觉学习生活遇到了很多挑战。他写信向你寻求建议,请你根据以下要点给他写一封回信:
1.表示理解;
2.给出建议;
3.表达祝愿。
要求:字数80字左右,可以适当增加细节,使行文连贯。
Dear Tom,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】Dear Tom,
I’m sorry to hear that you’re worried about the challenges in your high school life, and you don't know how to deal with them. However, I want you to know that it’s completely normal to feel this way. Here are some suggestions for you.
Firstly, I suggest that you try to get involved in school activities. This will help you make new friends and have fun experiences. Secondly, you should create a schedule to balance your study and relaxation time. Make sure you’re giving yourself enough time to rest and recharge. I know it might be difficult right now, but I believe you have the strength to overcome this.
Keep your head up and remember that things can always get better.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。你的美国笔友Tom 刚上高中,感觉学习生活遇到了很多挑战并向你寻求建议,写一封回信表示理解,提出你的建议并表达祝愿。
【详解】1.词汇积累
焦虑的:worried → anxious
然而:however → nevertheless
建议:suggest → advise/propose
困难的:difficult → tough
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Secondly, you should create a schedule to balance your study and relaxation time. Make sure you’re giving yourself enough time to rest and recharge.
拓展句:Secondly, you should create a schedule to balance your study and relaxation time so that you can give yourself enough time to rest and recharge.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to hear that you’re worried about the challenges in your high school life. (运用了连词that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] Firstly, I suggest that you try to get involved in school activities. (运用了连词that引导宾语从句和虚拟语气)
1.(24-25高一上·广东佛山·阶段练习)假设你是李华,你的英国笔友Chris刚刚上高中,感到一切都很陌生。他在邮件中向你询问如何尽快融入新环境,请你给他写一封建议信。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
Dear Chris,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Chris,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in at your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions may be helpful.
First, I think you should communicate with your classmates as much as possible. In this way, you will get to know each other better. Second, it might be a good idea for you to take an active part in more activities; knowing new friends and communicating with other students are good for developing friendly relationships. I recommend you consider asking our teachers when faced with some tough problems. I believe they can usually offer you some useful suggestions.
I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help to you. If there is anything more I can do to help, please let me know.
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给刚上高中的英国笔友Chris写一封建议信,就如何尽快融入新环境提出自己的建议。
1. 词汇积累
做某事有困难:have trouble (in) doing sth. →have difficulty (in) doing sth.
沟通,交流:communicate with →change ideas with
向某人求助:ask ab. for help →turn to sb. for help.
给某人提供某物:offer sb. sth. →provide sth. for sb. 或provide sb. with sth.
2. 句式拓展
简单句变复合句
简单句:Such problems are quite normal.
复合句:Such problems are so normal that you don’t have to worry about it.
【点睛】【高分句型1】 Second, it might be a good idea for you to take an active part in more activities; knowing new friends and communicating with other students are good for developing friendly relationships.(运用了动词不定式和动名词短语作主语)
【高分句型2】If there is anything more I can do to help, please let me know.(运用了if引导条件状语从句)
2.(24-25高一上·重庆九龙坡·阶段练习)假定你是李华,你的英国笔友Mike来信表示自从他进入高中以来一直感到学习压力非常大,向你求助。请你给他写一封回信,要点如下:
1.表示理解和安慰;
2.提出建议;
3.表达希望。
注意:
1.词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Mike,
______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li hua
【范文】
Dear Mike,
I understand completely how you feel about the study pressure. It’s a common challenge many students face. Here are some suggestions for you.
Firstly, make a reasonable study plan. Break down your tasks into smaller parts and set achievable goals. This way, you won’t feel overwhelmed. Secondly, take regular breaks during study. A short break every hour or so can refresh your mind and improve your efficiency. Thirdly, engage in some physical activities like jogging or playing ball games, which helps to relieve stress and keep you energetic. Lastly, don’t be too hard on yourself. Mistakes and setbacks are parts of the learning process. Believe in your abilities and stay positive.
I hope these suggestions will be useful to you. Remember, you’re not alone in this journey.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国笔友Mike写一封回信,对他进入高中以来一直感到学习压力非常大表示理解和安慰,提出建议,表达希望。
【详解】1.词汇积累
压力:pressure→stress
首先:firstly→first and foremost
减轻:relieve→ease
精力充沛的:energetic→vigorous
2.句式拓展
简单句变复合句
原句:Here are some suggestions for you.
拓展句:Here are some suggestions which can help you deal with your pressure.
【点睛】[高分句型1] It’s a common challenge many students face. (运用了that/which引导的限制性定语从句,省略了that/which)
[高分句型2] Thirdly, engage in some physical activities like jogging or playing ball games, which helps to relieve stress and keep you energetic. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句)
3.(24-25高一上·吉林长春·阶段练习)假定你是李华,你的美国朋友Ted最近刚转学,发现难以适应新环境,对新学校的交友问题感到烦恼。请给他写一封信,内容主要包括:
1.表示理解;
2.就交朋友的方法给他一些建议。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可适当加入细节,使行文连贯。
Dear Ted,
_______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Ted,
I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to the new environment and making friends. I can understand what a hard time you have. I am writing to give some advice.
Making friends is not difficult. First, make an impressive self-introduction in front of the class, so your classmates can get to know you better. Then, find a classmate with the same interest and get close to him. Last, try to be willing to help. Giving is great between friends and you will receive the respect from the others.
If you follow all these tips, you will definitely make new friends soon.
Yours,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给Ted写一封信,因为他最近刚转学,发现难以适应新环境,对新学校的交友问题感到烦恼,为此提出一些建议。
【详解】1.词汇积累
适应:adapt to→adjust to
建议:advice/tip→suggestion
有困难:have trouble doing sth.→have difficulty doing sth.
肯定:definitely→certainly
2.句式拓展
句型转换
原句:First, make an impressive self-introduction in front of the class, so your classmates can get to know you better.
拓展句:First, make an impressive self-introduction in front of the class, which can make your classmates get to know you better.
【点睛】[高分句型1] I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble adapting to the new environment and making friends. (运用了that引导宾语从句)
[高分句型2] If you follow all these tips, you will definitely make new friends soon. (运用了if引导条件状语从句)
4.(24-25高一上·黑龙江哈尔滨·阶段练习)假设你是李华,你的英国笔友杰克刚刚升入高中,但他一时无法适应新的校园生活,写信向你求助征求你的建议。请你就此问题给他回一封信。
注意:1. 词数80左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
Dear Jack,
I am sorry to hear that you’re having trouble adjusting to your high school life.
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【范文】
Dear Jack,
I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble adjusting to your high school life. Actually, many freshmen are confused about high school life so don’t worry about it too much. I’m writing to offer you some useful advice.
First, I recommend that you sign up for extra–curricular activities, which can help you make more new friends. In this way you won’t feel lonely and your school life will become colourful and interesting. Second, you should make a good schedule and focus on improving your study. As a teenager, it is our responsibility to study well.
I hope my suggestions will be suitable for you.
【导语】本篇是应用文写作。你的英国笔友杰克刚刚升入高中,但他一时无法适应新的校园生活,写信向你求助征求你的建议,要求考生就此问题给他回一封信。
【详解】1. 词汇积累
提供:offer→provide
建议:advice→suggestion
活动:activity→event
专注于:focus on→concentrate on
2. 句首拓展
同义句转换
原句:Actually, many freshmen are confused about high school life so don’t worry about it too much.
拓展句:Actually, many freshmen are so confused about high school life that you don’t need to worry about it too much.
【点睛】[高分句型1]I am sorry to hear that you are having trouble adjusting to your high school life.(that引导的宾语从句)
[高分句型2]First, I recommend that you sign up for extra – curricular activities, which can help you make more new friends.(which引导的非限制性定语从句)
5.(24-25高一上·广东河源·阶段练习)假如你是李华,你的英国网友Jack最近在中国学习。他写信向你诉说他的困扰:不适应新的学习环境,想家,感到焦虑。请你根据以下要点用英语给他写一封回信。要点如下:
1. 表示理解并给予安慰;2. 提出建议并给出理由;3. 表达你的愿望。
2. 注意:词数80左右(开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Jack,
I am sorry to learn that you are having such a bad time.
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Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【范文】
Dear Jack,
I’m sorry to learn that you are having such a bad time. Actually, most people will feel homesick and anxious when they leave home and come to a new place, especially a foreign country. So don’t worry too much.
Here are some tips for you. First, you’d better try to change some of your habits so that you can get used to the new environment as soon as possible. Second, make more new friends, who can share their hobbies and ideas with you. You will feel less homesick with many friends around you.
Third, you should take part in some social activities. It will help you learn more about the local customs and cultures.
I hope my advice will be useful.
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文,要求考生给英国网友Jack写封回信,对他不适应新的学习环境,想家,感到焦虑表示理解并给予安慰,提出建议并给出理由,表达你的愿望。
【详解】1.词汇积累
事实上:actually→as a matter of fact
首先:first→first and foremost
有用的:useful→helpful
参加:take part in→participate in
2.句式拓展
合并简单句
原句:Third, you should take part in some social activities. It will help you learn more about the local customs and cultures.
拓展句:Third, you should take part in some social activities, which will help you learn more about the local customs and cultures.
【点睛】[高分句型1] Actually, most people will feel homesick and anxious when they leave home and come to a new place, especially a foreign country. (运用了when引导的时间状语从句)
[高分句型2] Second, make more new friends, who can share their hobbies and ideas with you. (运用了who引导的非限制性定语从句)
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