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高频话题08:动物与自然
七年级上学期同步写作课讲义(通用版)
⭐话题解读⭐
本专题主要围绕“人与自然:生命关怀与生态责任”,每一种生物都是生态链条的关键一环,保护生物多样性,是对生命的深切关怀,更是人类不可推卸的生态责任,倡导保护生物多样性。 文体以倡议书/说明文为主。学生在写作中具体做到以下几点:
写作能力目标:
1. 能用动物行为动词(migrate/hibernate)和栖息地名词(rainforest/wetland)
2. 能分析生态问题(Their homes disappear because of deforestation)
3. 能设计保护方案(Set up “animal crossing” signs on roads)
⭐写作任务⭐
任务1-倡议书
假设你是学校环保社团成员,请撰写一封英文倡议书,呼吁同学们从日常生活小事做起,如节约水电、减少使用塑料袋、参与植树活动等,共同保护自然环境和关爱动物,字数约100词左右。
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【审题指导】
1.主题核心:围绕“保护自然与关爱动物”发出行动号召,强调人类生态责任。
2.受众对象:明确面向同学,语言需亲切、有感染力,符合同龄人交流语气。
3.任务要求:需提出具体可行的环保行动建议,体现“生命关怀与生态责任” 。
4.时态:使用一般现在时,保持时态一致;合理分段,逻辑清晰;
5.人称:第一人称为主。
【写作框架】
1.开头:点明动物与自然的重要性,指出当前面临的问题(如动物濒危),引发共鸣。
2.主体:分点列出具体行动(如节约水电、减少塑料袋使用、植树),每个建议简短清晰。
3.结尾:呼吁大家共同行动,说明保护成果对人类和动物的积极意义。
【参考范文】
Protect the Environment and Love Animals
Dear classmates,
We all know that animals are our friends and play an important part in nature. But now, many animals are in danger because of environmental problems and human activities. So we should take action to protect them.
First, save water and electricity. Turn off the taps and lights when we don't use them. Second, reduce the use of plastic bags. We can take our own bags when shopping. Third, plant more trees. Trees can provide a good living environment for animals.
Let's work together to protect the environment and love animals. Then we can make the earth a better place for both us and animals.
任务2-说明文
以 “How to Protect Wild Animals” 为题,写一篇说明文,介绍三种保护野生动物的具体方法,并解释为什么这些方法对保护生态环境至关重要,字数要求80-100词左右。
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【审题指导】
1.主题聚焦:围绕“如何保护野生动物”展开,需提供具体方法和科学解释。
2.文体特征:以说明为主,逻辑清晰,避免主观情感过多,突出客观性。
3.知识要求:需结合生态知识,解释方法与生态保护的关联。
4.以第一人称叙述,使用一般现在时。
【写作框架】
1.开头:阐述野生动物对生态的重要性,引出保护方法的话题。
2.主体:分条列举保护方法(如保护栖息地、禁止捕猎、宣传教育),每条方法后简要说明原因。
3.结尾:总结保护野生动物的意义,强调对人类未来的重要性。
【参考范文】
How to Protect Wild Animals
Wild animals are important to our nature. Here are some ways to protect them.
First, we should protect their habitats. Don't cut down trees or pollute rivers, because these are the homes of wild animals. Second, don't hunt or kill wild animals. We should let them live in peace. Third, tell more people about the importance of protecting wild animals. The more people know, the better it will be for wild animals.
Protecting wild animals is protecting our future. Let's do our best to keep them safe.
任务3-书信
给笔友写一封英文信,分享你在动物园或自然保护区的参观经历,描述你看到的动物及其生存环境,同时谈谈你对人类保护自然和动物重要性的理解,词数80 - 100。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【审题指导】
1.文体特点:以书信形式分享经历,需符合书信格式(称呼、正文、结尾问候语)。
2.内容要求:包含参观经历描述、对动物生存环境的观察,以及个人对保护自然的感悟。
3.语言风格:口语化、亲切自然,适当使用情感表达。
4.以第一人称叙述,使用一般现在时。
【写作框架】
1.开头:问候笔友,引出参观动物园或保护区的经历。
2.主体:描述看到的动物及环境,结合观察提出对动物保护的思考。
3.结尾:表达希望,邀请笔友交流看法,附上结束语和署名。
【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
I went to the zoo last weekend. I saw many kinds of animals there, such as monkeys, elephants and tigers. They looked so lovely. But I also noticed that some of their living environments were not very good. Some cages were too small.
We should realize that animals are an important part of nature. We need to protect their living environments so that they can live happily. I hope we can all do something to make the world more friendly to animals.
What do you think? Write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Ming
任务4-议论文
以 “Should People Keep Wild Animals as Pets?” 为话题,写一篇英文议论文,阐述你的观点,给出至少两个支持观点的理由,字数控制在100词以内。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【审题指导】
1.论题明确:针对“是否应将野生动物当宠物”表明立场,需有清晰的论点和论据。
2.逻辑要求:通过至少两个理由支撑观点,理由需合理且符合七年级认知水平。
3.语言规范:使用连接词(First, Second)增强逻辑性,避免口语化表达。
4.是用第一人称叙述,运用一般现在时。
【写作框架】
1.开头:直接表明观点(如不应该),简要说明理由方向。
2.主体:分点阐述理由(如野生动物需要自由、存在健康风险),每条理由独立成段。
3.结尾:总结观点,强调正确做法(如保护自然栖息地)。
【参考范文】
Should People Keep Wild Animals as Pets?
I don't think people should keep wild animals as pets. First, wild animals need to live in their natural habitats. Keeping them at home will make them lose their freedom and ability to live in the wild. Second, wild animals may carry some diseases. It's dangerous for people to keep them. We should let wild animals stay in nature and protect their living environments instead of keeping them as pets.
任务5-海报文案
为学校即将举办的 “人与自然” 主题宣传活动设计英文海报文案,介绍活动目的(提高生态保护意识、倡导关爱动物)、时间、地点和主要活动内容,要求语言简洁,不超过70词。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【审题指导】
1.功能导向:需突出活动核心信息(目的、时间、地点、内容),吸引读者参与。
2.语言风格:简洁有力,使用短句和关键词,避免冗长句子。
3.格式要求:可分点罗列信息,适当使用加粗、感叹号等增强视觉效果。
【写作框架】
1.标题:突出活动主题(如 “Man and Nature” Activity)。
2.核心信息:分项列出活动目的、时间、地点、主要活动内容。
3.号召语:以简洁有力的句子呼吁读者参与,强化行动感。
【参考范文】
Man and Nature" Activity
Purpose: To raise awareness of ecological protection and advocate caring for animals.
Time: 9:00 - 11:00 am, June 25th
Place: School playground
Activities: Lectures on animal protection, picture exhibitions, and a speech contest about loving nature.
Come and join us to make the earth a better home for all!
⭐素材宝库⭐
词汇积累
※自然环境类
forest(森林) river(河流) mountain(山脉) lake(湖泊) ocean(海洋) sky(天空) cloud(云)
sun(太阳) moon(月亮) star(星星)
※动物类
dog(狗) cat(猫) bird(鸟) fish(鱼) rabbit(兔子) tiger(老虎) lion(狮子) elephant(大象)
monkey(猴子) panda(熊猫)
※与生命关怀相关的动词类
protect(保护) care(关心) love(爱) save(拯救) help(帮助) feed(喂养) rescue(营救)
cherish(珍惜) respect(尊重) nurture(培育)
※生态责任相关名词类
responsibility(责任) environment(环境) pollution(污染) waste(废物) recycle(回收利用)
conservation(保护) habitat(栖息地) balance(平衡) ecosystem(生态系统)resource(资源)
句型积累
※描述自然环境
The mountains are covered with green trees.(山脉被绿树覆盖。)
The river flows gently through the forest.(河流缓缓流过森林。)
The blue sky is dotted with white clouds.(蓝天点缀着白云。)
The grassland stretches as far as the eye can see.(草原一望无际。)
A beautiful rainbow appeared in the sky after the rain.(雨后天空出现了一道美丽的彩虹。)
The forest is full of the sounds of birds and insects.(森林里充满了鸟鸣和虫叫声。)
The ocean waves roll onto the beach.(海浪涌向海滩。)
The sunset painted the sky orange and red.(日落将天空染成橙红色。)
The snow - capped mountains look majestic.(雪山看起来雄伟壮观。)
The clear lake reflects the surrounding scenery.(清澈的湖水倒映着周围的景色。)
※表达对动物的关爱
We should protect the endangered animals.(我们应该保护濒危动物。)
We need to take care of the little animals.(我们需要照顾小动物。)
Don't hurt the birds in the tree.(不要伤害树上的鸟。)
Give food to the homeless dogs.(给无家可归的狗喂食。)
Let's help the injured squirrel.(让我们帮助受伤的松鼠。)
We should respect the lives of all animals.(我们应该尊重所有动物的生命。)
Protecting animals is our responsibility.(保护动物是我们的责任。)
Love animals and make the world a better place.(关爱动物,让世界更美好。)
Don't catch wild animals for fun.(不要为了好玩而捕捉野生动物。)
We should build more habitats for animals.(我们应该为动物建造更多的栖息地。)
※强调生态责任
We must reduce pollution to protect the environment.(我们必须减少污染以保护环境。)
Everyone should plant more trees to make the earth greener.(每个人都应该多植树,让地球更绿。)
We should save water to protect the ecological balance.(我们应该节约用水以保护生态平衡。)
Don't litter everywhere to keep the environment clean.(不要到处乱扔垃圾,保持环境清洁。)
We need to use fewer plastic bags to protect the ecosystem.(我们需要少用塑料袋以保护生态系统。)
Protecting the environment is to protect our own future.(保护环境就是保护我们自己的未来。)
We should advocate green travel to reduce carbon emissions.(我们应该倡导绿色出行以减少碳排放。)
Let's work together to protect the ecological environment.(让我们共同努力保护生态环境。)
We must raise awareness of environmental protection.(我们必须提高环保意识。)
We should support the development of renewable energy.(我们应该支持可再生能源的发展。)
※开头类句型
As we all know, nature is the home of all living things.(众所周知,自然是所有生物的家园。)
Have you ever thought about the close relationship between humans, animals, and nature?(你是否想过人类、动物与自然之间的紧密关系?)
When we look around, we can see the beauty of nature everywhere.(当我们环顾四周,处处都能看到自然之美。)
The world we live in is a wonderful combination of humans, animals, and nature.(我们生活的世界是人类、动物与自然的奇妙融合。)
Nature provides us with everything we need to survive and thrive.(自然为我们提供生存和繁荣所需的一切。)
From the moment we are born, we are connected to nature and the animals that share our planet.(从我们出生的那一刻起,我们就与自然以及共同生活在地球上的动物紧密相连。)
The topic of humans, animals, and nature is not only important but also closely related to our daily lives.(人类、动物与自然这个话题不仅重要,还与我们的日常生活息息相关。)
We often enjoy the beauty of nature, but do we truly understand our responsibilities towards it?(我们常常欣赏自然之美,但我们真的明白自己对它的责任吗?)
In recent years, more and more people have begun to pay attention to the relationship between humans and nature.(近年来,越来越多的人开始关注人与自然的关系。)
Our planet is a unique place where humans, animals, and nature coexist.(我们的星球是一个人类、动物和自然共存的独特之地。)
※中间类句型
However, due to human activities, many animals are losing their habitats.(然而,由于人类活动,许多动物正在失去它们的栖息地。)
We should take action to reduce waste and protect the environment for animals and nature.(我们应该采取行动减少浪费,为动物和自然保护环境。)
For example, cutting down too many trees destroys the homes of countless birds and small animals.(例如,过度砍伐树木破坏了无数鸟类和小动物的家园。)
Humans and animals depend on nature, so we must do our best to keep it healthy.(人类和动物都依赖自然,所以我们必须尽全力保持它的健康。)
By using less plastic, we can help protect the oceans and the marine animals living there.(通过减少塑料使用,我们可以帮助保护海洋以及生活在那里的海洋动物。)
Each of us has the power to make a difference in protecting nature and caring for animals.(我们每个人都有能力在保护自然和关爱动物方面发挥作用。)
If we don't take steps to protect endangered animals, they may disappear forever.(如果我们不采取措施保护濒危动物,它们可能会永远消失。)
We need to respect the rights of all living things and live in harmony with nature.(我们需要尊重所有生物的权利,与自然和谐共处。)
Recycling waste is a simple but effective way to reduce the pressure on the environment.(回收垃圾是一种简单而有效的减轻环境压力的方法。)
Planting more trees can not only provide habitats for animals but also improve the air quality.(种植更多的树木不仅可以为动物提供栖息地,还能改善空气质量。)
※结尾类句型
In conclusion, protecting nature and caring for animals is the responsibility of each one of us.(总之,保护自然、关爱动物是我们每个人的责任。)
Let's work together to create a harmonious world where humans, animals, and nature coexist peacefully.(让我们携手共创一个人类、动物与自然和谐共处的美好世界。)
Only by taking good care of nature and animals can we ensure a better future for ourselves and generations to come.(只有照顾好自然和动物,我们才能为自己和子孙后代确保一个更美好的未来。)
Remember, every small action counts when it comes to protecting our planet and the lives on it.(记住,在保护我们的星球和其上的生命时,每一个小小的行动都意义重大。)
In a word, we should always keep in mind the importance of life care and ecological responsibility.(总之,我们应时刻牢记生命关怀和生态责任的重要性。)
Let's start from now, from small things, and make a contribution to the protection of nature and animals.(让我们从现在做起,从小事做起,为保护自然和动物贡献力量。)
Therefore, it's time for us to take immediate action to protect the precious relationship between humans, animals, and nature.(因此,是时候我们立即采取行动,守护人类、动物与自然之间珍贵的关系了。)
To sum up, nature and animals are our friends, and we should treat them with love and respect.(总而言之,自然和动物是我们的朋友,我们应该用爱和尊重对待它们。)
In the end, we must realize that our future is closely tied to the well - being of nature and animals.(最后,我们必须认识到我们的未来与自然和动物的福祉紧密相连。)
All in all, let's shoulder our ecological responsibilities and make the world a more beautiful place for all living things.(总之,让我们肩负起生态责任,让世界成为所有生物更美好的家园。)
谚语积累
We are the guardians of nature.(我们是自然的守护者。)
Protecting the environment is everyone's responsibility.(保护环境是每个人的责任。)
Think globally, act locally.(着眼全球,立足本地。)(强调在生态保护中要有全局意识,从身边小事做起。)
The earth is our only home. We should take good care of it.(地球是我们唯一的家园,我们应该好好照顾它。)
Waste not, want not.(不浪费,不匮乏。)(倡导节约资源,保护生态。)
Save water, save life.(节约用水,拯救生命。)
Green mountains and clear waters are as valuable as gold and silver.(绿水青山就是金山银山。)
Every little bit helps in protecting the environment.(保护环境,点滴皆有帮助。)
Actions speak louder than words.(行动胜于言语。)(强调在生态保护中要切实行动。)
Leave the world a better place than you found it.(让世界比你发现它时更美好。)
写作模板一;记叙文
Last weekend, I _______(参与的活动,如 went to the zoo / joined an animal protection activity). There, I saw _______(具体动物,如 a lovely panda / many homeless dogs). However, I noticed that _______(存在的问题,如 their living space was too small / some animals looked sick).
I learned that _______(问题原因,如 people cut down trees / throw away too much plastic). This makes it hard for _______(动物或自然,如 animals to find food / the river to stay clean). So I decided to _______(具体行动,如 help clean the animal cages / plant trees with friends).
From this experience, I understand that _______(感悟,如 every small action helps / we must protect nature). Let’s work together to _______(呼吁,如 save animals / keep the earth clean)!
写作模板二:议论文
Nature is the home of all living things. Humans, animals, and nature _______(关系,如 depend on each other / live together). But now, _______(问题,如 pollution is serious / many animals are in danger).
There are two main reasons for this problem. First, _______(原因1,如 people cut down too many trees). Second, _______(原因2,如 we use too much plastic). These actions _______(后果,如 destroy animals’ homes / make the air dirty).
We should take action right now. For example, we can _______(措施1,如 plant more trees / recycle waste). Also, we need to _______(措施2,如 tell others to protect nature / use less water). If everyone _______(行动,如 does something small / cares about nature), our world will become _______(结果,如 greener and cleaner / a better place for all).
写作模板三:描写文
Protecting nature is very important for humans and animals. Here are some easy ways to _______(保护自然,如 help the earth / save animals).
First, we should _______(方法1,如 save water). For example, we can _______(具体做法,如 turn off the tap when brushing teeth / reuse water to water plants). Second, _______(方法2,如 reduce waste). We can _______(具体做法,如 use cloth bags instead of plastic ones / recycle old books). Third, _______(方法3,如 protect animals). Don’t _______(禁止行为,如 hurt wild animals / buy things made from endangered animals).
In a word, _______(总结,如 small steps can make a big difference / everyone can help nature). Let’s start today and _______(呼吁,如 make our planet more beautiful / keep nature healthy)!
⭐写作拓展⭐
考情分析
近三年考情分析
年份
卷区
话题
命题形式
2024年
长春
关于资源分配用于野生动物保护的争议
提纲类
天津
“低碳校园从我做起”英语主题演讲活动
演讲类
2023年
河北省保定市
拯救濒危野生动植物
发言稿
四川
美国灰熊生存环境和生存状况探讨的材料
提纲类
2022年
广西
探讨世界海洋保护日
倡议书
变式提升训练
(1)
【2024年·七年级期中考试·北京市】介绍你最喜欢的动物,描述它的外貌、习性,说明你喜欢它的原因。
要求:
1. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯,词数80左右。
3. 可适当发挥,以使行文连贯。
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【2024年·七年级下学期期末考试·湖北市】谈谈环境污染问题,列举至少三种保护环境的方法,呼吁大家行动起来。
要点:
1. 词数80词左右;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
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【2025年·中考模拟·长沙】阐述野生动物的重要性,分析它们濒危的原因,提出至少两条保护措施。
要求:
1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
2. 卷面整齐、干净、规范;
3. 字数100词左右;
4. 且文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
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【2023年·七年级英语下学期期末·西藏】描述大自然的美丽,列举人们破坏自然的行为,表达你对保护自然的看法,字数80词左右。
要求:
1. 字数80词左右;
2. 可适当发挥,以使行文连贯。
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
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(5)
介绍四季的天气特点,描述你最喜欢的季节及原因,结合当下极端天气,谈谈对生活的影响和我们的应对,字数90词左右。
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描述四季变化对日常生活的影响,提及全球气候变暖导致季节异常,说说你的感受和想法,字数80词左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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考拉是澳大利亚的标志性动物,深受人们喜爱。请你根据表格中的信息写一篇英语短文,把这只名叫“乐乐”的考拉介绍给你的好朋友。
Name
Lele
Age
4
Color
Soft grey
Features
Big round eyes; round ears; looks sleepy and cute
Favorite food
Eucalyptus leaves (桉树叶)
Special habit
Sleeps up to 20 hours a day; hugs tree trunks
Why special?
Only eats eucalyptus leaves; lives in Australia
写作要求:
1. 文中须包含表格中所提示的全部要点,可适当发挥。
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名或校名。
3. 词数 70 个左右。
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你校开展"动物保护月"征稿活动,请以"My Favourite Animal"为题写一篇短文。
内容要求:
1. 外貌特点(体形/皮毛/眼睛等)
2. 喜爱原因(能力/性格/陪伴等)
3. 对人与动物关系的看法
参考词汇:
pointed (尖的)
care for (照顾)
loyal (忠诚的)
要求:
1. 词数70左右
2. 开头已给出(不计词数)
3. 文中不出现真实姓名/校名
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高频话题08:动物与自然
七年级上学期同步写作课讲义(通用版)
⭐话题解读⭐
本专题主要围绕“人与自然:生命关怀与生态责任”,每一种生物都是生态链条的关键一环,保护生物多样性,是对生命的深切关怀,更是人类不可推卸的生态责任,倡导保护生物多样性。 文体以倡议书/说明文为主。学生在写作中具体做到以下几点:
写作能力目标:
1. 能用动物行为动词(migrate/hibernate)和栖息地名词(rainforest/wetland)
2. 能分析生态问题(Their homes disappear because of deforestation)
3. 能设计保护方案(Set up “animal crossing” signs on roads)
⭐写作任务⭐
任务1-倡议书
假设你是学校环保社团成员,请撰写一封英文倡议书,呼吁同学们从日常生活小事做起,如节约水电、减少使用塑料袋、参与植树活动等,共同保护自然环境和关爱动物,字数约100词左右。
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【审题指导】
1.主题核心:围绕“保护自然与关爱动物”发出行动号召,强调人类生态责任。
2.受众对象:明确面向同学,语言需亲切、有感染力,符合同龄人交流语气。
3.任务要求:需提出具体可行的环保行动建议,体现“生命关怀与生态责任” 。
4.时态:使用一般现在时,保持时态一致;合理分段,逻辑清晰;
5.人称:第一人称为主。
【写作框架】
1.开头:点明动物与自然的重要性,指出当前面临的问题(如动物濒危),引发共鸣。
2.主体:分点列出具体行动(如节约水电、减少塑料袋使用、植树),每个建议简短清晰。
3.结尾:呼吁大家共同行动,说明保护成果对人类和动物的积极意义。
【参考范文】
Protect the Environment and Love Animals
Dear classmates,
We all know that animals are our friends and play an important part in nature. But now, many animals are in danger because of environmental problems and human activities. So we should take action to protect them.
First, save water and electricity. Turn off the taps and lights when we don't use them. Second, reduce the use of plastic bags. We can take our own bags when shopping. Third, plant more trees. Trees can provide a good living environment for animals.
Let's work together to protect the environment and love animals. Then we can make the earth a better place for both us and animals.
任务2-说明文
以 “How to Protect Wild Animals” 为题,写一篇说明文,介绍三种保护野生动物的具体方法,并解释为什么这些方法对保护生态环境至关重要,字数要求80-100词左右。
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【审题指导】
1.主题聚焦:围绕“如何保护野生动物”展开,需提供具体方法和科学解释。
2.文体特征:以说明为主,逻辑清晰,避免主观情感过多,突出客观性。
3.知识要求:需结合生态知识,解释方法与生态保护的关联。
4.以第一人称叙述,使用一般现在时。
【写作框架】
1.开头:阐述野生动物对生态的重要性,引出保护方法的话题。
2.主体:分条列举保护方法(如保护栖息地、禁止捕猎、宣传教育),每条方法后简要说明原因。
3.结尾:总结保护野生动物的意义,强调对人类未来的重要性。
【参考范文】
How to Protect Wild Animals
Wild animals are important to our nature. Here are some ways to protect them.
First, we should protect their habitats. Don't cut down trees or pollute rivers, because these are the homes of wild animals. Second, don't hunt or kill wild animals. We should let them live in peace. Third, tell more people about the importance of protecting wild animals. The more people know, the better it will be for wild animals.
Protecting wild animals is protecting our future. Let's do our best to keep them safe.
任务3-书信
给笔友写一封英文信,分享你在动物园或自然保护区的参观经历,描述你看到的动物及其生存环境,同时谈谈你对人类保护自然和动物重要性的理解,词数80 - 100。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【审题指导】
1.文体特点:以书信形式分享经历,需符合书信格式(称呼、正文、结尾问候语)。
2.内容要求:包含参观经历描述、对动物生存环境的观察,以及个人对保护自然的感悟。
3.语言风格:口语化、亲切自然,适当使用情感表达。
4.以第一人称叙述,使用一般现在时。
【写作框架】
1.开头:问候笔友,引出参观动物园或保护区的经历。
2.主体:描述看到的动物及环境,结合观察提出对动物保护的思考。
3.结尾:表达希望,邀请笔友交流看法,附上结束语和署名。
【参考范文】
Dear Tom,
I went to the zoo last weekend. I saw many kinds of animals there, such as monkeys, elephants and tigers. They looked so lovely. But I also noticed that some of their living environments were not very good. Some cages were too small.
We should realize that animals are an important part of nature. We need to protect their living environments so that they can live happily. I hope we can all do something to make the world more friendly to animals.
What do you think? Write to me soon.
Yours,
Li Ming
任务4-议论文
以 “Should People Keep Wild Animals as Pets?” 为话题,写一篇英文议论文,阐述你的观点,给出至少两个支持观点的理由,字数控制在100词以内。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【审题指导】
1.论题明确:针对“是否应将野生动物当宠物”表明立场,需有清晰的论点和论据。
2.逻辑要求:通过至少两个理由支撑观点,理由需合理且符合七年级认知水平。
3.语言规范:使用连接词(First, Second)增强逻辑性,避免口语化表达。
4.是用第一人称叙述,运用一般现在时。
【写作框架】
1.开头:直接表明观点(如不应该),简要说明理由方向。
2.主体:分点阐述理由(如野生动物需要自由、存在健康风险),每条理由独立成段。
3.结尾:总结观点,强调正确做法(如保护自然栖息地)。
【参考范文】
Should People Keep Wild Animals as Pets?
I don't think people should keep wild animals as pets. First, wild animals need to live in their natural habitats. Keeping them at home will make them lose their freedom and ability to live in the wild. Second, wild animals may carry some diseases. It's dangerous for people to keep them. We should let wild animals stay in nature and protect their living environments instead of keeping them as pets.
任务5-海报文案
为学校即将举办的 “人与自然” 主题宣传活动设计英文海报文案,介绍活动目的(提高生态保护意识、倡导关爱动物)、时间、地点和主要活动内容,要求语言简洁,不超过70词。_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【审题指导】
1.功能导向:需突出活动核心信息(目的、时间、地点、内容),吸引读者参与。
2.语言风格:简洁有力,使用短句和关键词,避免冗长句子。
3.格式要求:可分点罗列信息,适当使用加粗、感叹号等增强视觉效果。
【写作框架】
1.标题:突出活动主题(如 “Man and Nature” Activity)。
2.核心信息:分项列出活动目的、时间、地点、主要活动内容。
3.号召语:以简洁有力的句子呼吁读者参与,强化行动感。
【参考范文】
Man and Nature" Activity
Purpose: To raise awareness of ecological protection and advocate caring for animals.
Time: 9:00 - 11:00 am, June 25th
Place: School playground
Activities: Lectures on animal protection, picture exhibitions, and a speech contest about loving nature.
Come and join us to make the earth a better home for all!
⭐素材宝库⭐
词汇积累
※自然环境类
forest(森林) river(河流) mountain(山脉) lake(湖泊) ocean(海洋) sky(天空) cloud(云)
sun(太阳) moon(月亮) star(星星)
※动物类
dog(狗) cat(猫) bird(鸟) fish(鱼) rabbit(兔子) tiger(老虎) lion(狮子) elephant(大象)
monkey(猴子) panda(熊猫)
※与生命关怀相关的动词类
protect(保护) care(关心) love(爱) save(拯救) help(帮助) feed(喂养) rescue(营救)
cherish(珍惜) respect(尊重) nurture(培育)
※生态责任相关名词类
responsibility(责任) environment(环境) pollution(污染) waste(废物) recycle(回收利用)
conservation(保护) habitat(栖息地) balance(平衡) ecosystem(生态系统)resource(资源)
句型积累
※描述自然环境
The mountains are covered with green trees.(山脉被绿树覆盖。)
The river flows gently through the forest.(河流缓缓流过森林。)
The blue sky is dotted with white clouds.(蓝天点缀着白云。)
The grassland stretches as far as the eye can see.(草原一望无际。)
A beautiful rainbow appeared in the sky after the rain.(雨后天空出现了一道美丽的彩虹。)
The forest is full of the sounds of birds and insects.(森林里充满了鸟鸣和虫叫声。)
The ocean waves roll onto the beach.(海浪涌向海滩。)
The sunset painted the sky orange and red.(日落将天空染成橙红色。)
The snow - capped mountains look majestic.(雪山看起来雄伟壮观。)
The clear lake reflects the surrounding scenery.(清澈的湖水倒映着周围的景色。)
※表达对动物的关爱
We should protect the endangered animals.(我们应该保护濒危动物。)
We need to take care of the little animals.(我们需要照顾小动物。)
Don't hurt the birds in the tree.(不要伤害树上的鸟。)
Give food to the homeless dogs.(给无家可归的狗喂食。)
Let's help the injured squirrel.(让我们帮助受伤的松鼠。)
We should respect the lives of all animals.(我们应该尊重所有动物的生命。)
Protecting animals is our responsibility.(保护动物是我们的责任。)
Love animals and make the world a better place.(关爱动物,让世界更美好。)
Don't catch wild animals for fun.(不要为了好玩而捕捉野生动物。)
We should build more habitats for animals.(我们应该为动物建造更多的栖息地。)
※强调生态责任
We must reduce pollution to protect the environment.(我们必须减少污染以保护环境。)
Everyone should plant more trees to make the earth greener.(每个人都应该多植树,让地球更绿。)
We should save water to protect the ecological balance.(我们应该节约用水以保护生态平衡。)
Don't litter everywhere to keep the environment clean.(不要到处乱扔垃圾,保持环境清洁。)
We need to use fewer plastic bags to protect the ecosystem.(我们需要少用塑料袋以保护生态系统。)
Protecting the environment is to protect our own future.(保护环境就是保护我们自己的未来。)
We should advocate green travel to reduce carbon emissions.(我们应该倡导绿色出行以减少碳排放。)
Let's work together to protect the ecological environment.(让我们共同努力保护生态环境。)
We must raise awareness of environmental protection.(我们必须提高环保意识。)
We should support the development of renewable energy.(我们应该支持可再生能源的发展。)
※开头类句型
As we all know, nature is the home of all living things.(众所周知,自然是所有生物的家园。)
Have you ever thought about the close relationship between humans, animals, and nature?(你是否想过人类、动物与自然之间的紧密关系?)
When we look around, we can see the beauty of nature everywhere.(当我们环顾四周,处处都能看到自然之美。)
The world we live in is a wonderful combination of humans, animals, and nature.(我们生活的世界是人类、动物与自然的奇妙融合。)
Nature provides us with everything we need to survive and thrive.(自然为我们提供生存和繁荣所需的一切。)
From the moment we are born, we are connected to nature and the animals that share our planet.(从我们出生的那一刻起,我们就与自然以及共同生活在地球上的动物紧密相连。)
The topic of humans, animals, and nature is not only important but also closely related to our daily lives.(人类、动物与自然这个话题不仅重要,还与我们的日常生活息息相关。)
We often enjoy the beauty of nature, but do we truly understand our responsibilities towards it?(我们常常欣赏自然之美,但我们真的明白自己对它的责任吗?)
In recent years, more and more people have begun to pay attention to the relationship between humans and nature.(近年来,越来越多的人开始关注人与自然的关系。)
Our planet is a unique place where humans, animals, and nature coexist.(我们的星球是一个人类、动物和自然共存的独特之地。)
※中间类句型
However, due to human activities, many animals are losing their habitats.(然而,由于人类活动,许多动物正在失去它们的栖息地。)
We should take action to reduce waste and protect the environment for animals and nature.(我们应该采取行动减少浪费,为动物和自然保护环境。)
For example, cutting down too many trees destroys the homes of countless birds and small animals.(例如,过度砍伐树木破坏了无数鸟类和小动物的家园。)
Humans and animals depend on nature, so we must do our best to keep it healthy.(人类和动物都依赖自然,所以我们必须尽全力保持它的健康。)
By using less plastic, we can help protect the oceans and the marine animals living there.(通过减少塑料使用,我们可以帮助保护海洋以及生活在那里的海洋动物。)
Each of us has the power to make a difference in protecting nature and caring for animals.(我们每个人都有能力在保护自然和关爱动物方面发挥作用。)
If we don't take steps to protect endangered animals, they may disappear forever.(如果我们不采取措施保护濒危动物,它们可能会永远消失。)
We need to respect the rights of all living things and live in harmony with nature.(我们需要尊重所有生物的权利,与自然和谐共处。)
Recycling waste is a simple but effective way to reduce the pressure on the environment.(回收垃圾是一种简单而有效的减轻环境压力的方法。)
Planting more trees can not only provide habitats for animals but also improve the air quality.(种植更多的树木不仅可以为动物提供栖息地,还能改善空气质量。)
※结尾类句型
In conclusion, protecting nature and caring for animals is the responsibility of each one of us.(总之,保护自然、关爱动物是我们每个人的责任。)
Let's work together to create a harmonious world where humans, animals, and nature coexist peacefully.(让我们携手共创一个人类、动物与自然和谐共处的美好世界。)
Only by taking good care of nature and animals can we ensure a better future for ourselves and generations to come.(只有照顾好自然和动物,我们才能为自己和子孙后代确保一个更美好的未来。)
Remember, every small action counts when it comes to protecting our planet and the lives on it.(记住,在保护我们的星球和其上的生命时,每一个小小的行动都意义重大。)
In a word, we should always keep in mind the importance of life care and ecological responsibility.(总之,我们应时刻牢记生命关怀和生态责任的重要性。)
Let's start from now, from small things, and make a contribution to the protection of nature and animals.(让我们从现在做起,从小事做起,为保护自然和动物贡献力量。)
Therefore, it's time for us to take immediate action to protect the precious relationship between humans, animals, and nature.(因此,是时候我们立即采取行动,守护人类、动物与自然之间珍贵的关系了。)
To sum up, nature and animals are our friends, and we should treat them with love and respect.(总而言之,自然和动物是我们的朋友,我们应该用爱和尊重对待它们。)
In the end, we must realize that our future is closely tied to the well - being of nature and animals.(最后,我们必须认识到我们的未来与自然和动物的福祉紧密相连。)
All in all, let's shoulder our ecological responsibilities and make the world a more beautiful place for all living things.(总之,让我们肩负起生态责任,让世界成为所有生物更美好的家园。)
谚语积累
We are the guardians of nature.(我们是自然的守护者。)
Protecting the environment is everyone's responsibility.(保护环境是每个人的责任。)
Think globally, act locally.(着眼全球,立足本地。)(强调在生态保护中要有全局意识,从身边小事做起。)
The earth is our only home. We should take good care of it.(地球是我们唯一的家园,我们应该好好照顾它。)
Waste not, want not.(不浪费,不匮乏。)(倡导节约资源,保护生态。)
Save water, save life.(节约用水,拯救生命。)
Green mountains and clear waters are as valuable as gold and silver.(绿水青山就是金山银山。)
Every little bit helps in protecting the environment.(保护环境,点滴皆有帮助。)
Actions speak louder than words.(行动胜于言语。)(强调在生态保护中要切实行动。)
Leave the world a better place than you found it.(让世界比你发现它时更美好。)
写作模板一;记叙文
Last weekend, I _______(参与的活动,如 went to the zoo / joined an animal protection activity). There, I saw _______(具体动物,如 a lovely panda / many homeless dogs). However, I noticed that _______(存在的问题,如 their living space was too small / some animals looked sick).
I learned that _______(问题原因,如 people cut down trees / throw away too much plastic). This makes it hard for _______(动物或自然,如 animals to find food / the river to stay clean). So I decided to _______(具体行动,如 help clean the animal cages / plant trees with friends).
From this experience, I understand that _______(感悟,如 every small action helps / we must protect nature). Let’s work together to _______(呼吁,如 save animals / keep the earth clean)!
写作模板二:议论文
Nature is the home of all living things. Humans, animals, and nature _______(关系,如 depend on each other / live together). But now, _______(问题,如 pollution is serious / many animals are in danger).
There are two main reasons for this problem. First, _______(原因1,如 people cut down too many trees). Second, _______(原因2,如 we use too much plastic). These actions _______(后果,如 destroy animals’ homes / make the air dirty).
We should take action right now. For example, we can _______(措施1,如 plant more trees / recycle waste). Also, we need to _______(措施2,如 tell others to protect nature / use less water). If everyone _______(行动,如 does something small / cares about nature), our world will become _______(结果,如 greener and cleaner / a better place for all).
写作模板三:描写文
Protecting nature is very important for humans and animals. Here are some easy ways to _______(保护自然,如 help the earth / save animals).
First, we should _______(方法1,如 save water). For example, we can _______(具体做法,如 turn off the tap when brushing teeth / reuse water to water plants). Second, _______(方法2,如 reduce waste). We can _______(具体做法,如 use cloth bags instead of plastic ones / recycle old books). Third, _______(方法3,如 protect animals). Don’t _______(禁止行为,如 hurt wild animals / buy things made from endangered animals).
In a word, _______(总结,如 small steps can make a big difference / everyone can help nature). Let’s start today and _______(呼吁,如 make our planet more beautiful / keep nature healthy)!
⭐写作拓展⭐
考情分析
近三年考情分析
年份
卷区
话题
命题形式
2024年
长春
关于资源分配用于野生动物保护的争议
提纲类
天津
“低碳校园从我做起”英语主题演讲活动
演讲类
2023年
河北省保定市
拯救濒危野生动植物
发言稿
四川
美国灰熊生存环境和生存状况探讨的材料
提纲类
2022年
广西
探讨世界海洋保护日
倡议书
变式提升训练
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【2024年·七年级期中考试·北京市】介绍你最喜欢的动物,描述它的外貌、习性,说明你喜欢它的原因。
要求:
1. 不得在作文中出现学校的真实名称和学生的真实姓名。
2. 语句连贯,词数80左右。
3. 可适当发挥,以使行文连贯。
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【例文】
My favorite animal is the panda. Pandas are really cute. They have black and white fur, round faces and short tails.
Pandas live in bamboo forests. They love eating bamboo and spend most of their time eating and sleeping.
I love pandas because they are so lovely. They are also national treasures of China. Protecting pandas is important for us to keep nature balanced. I want to go and see pandas if I have the chance.
[总体分析]
①题材:介绍最喜欢的动物,属于说明文。
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”,用于描述动物的外貌、习性等特征。
③提示:依据题目要求,从外貌、习性和喜欢原因方面介绍动物 。
[写作步骤]
第一步,整体描述:开篇点明最喜欢的动物是熊猫。
第二步,详细介绍:分别描述熊猫的外貌、生活环境和习性。
第三步,书写结语:说明喜欢熊猫的原因并强调保护它们对维持自然平衡的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①national treasures(国宝)
②keep nature balanced(保持生态平衡)
[高分句型]
①Protecting pandas is important for us to keep nature balanced. 动名词短语作主语,使句子表达更丰富
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【2024年·七年级下学期期末考试·湖北市】谈谈环境污染问题,列举至少三种保护环境的方法,呼吁大家行动起来。
要点:
1. 词数80词左右;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
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【例文】
Nowadays, our environment is in great danger. There is air pollution from cars and factories, and lots of litter makes our streets dirty.
We can do many things to protect it. First, we should use less plastic. For example, bring our own bags when shopping. Second, plant more trees. They can make the air clean. Third, go to school by bike or on foot instead of by car to cut down air pollution.
Let's take action now! We can make our world a better place.
[总体分析]
①题材:关于如何保护环境的议论文。
②时态:一般现在时,用于描述现状和提出建议。
③提示:依据题目,先谈环境污染问题,再列举保护环境的方法并呼吁行动。
[写作步骤]
第一步,整体描述:指出环境面临危险,提及空气污染和垃圾问题。
第二步,详细介绍:具体列举三种保护环境的方法。
第三步,书写结语:呼吁大家行动起来让世界更美好。
[亮点词汇]
①cut down(减少)
②For example(例如)
[高分句型]
①First, we should use less plastic. For example, bring our own bags when shopping. 通过“For example”举例说明,使观点更具说服力
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【2025年·中考模拟·长沙】阐述野生动物的重要性,分析它们濒危的原因,提出至少两条保护措施。
要求:
1. 语句通顺,意思连贯,书写工整;
2. 卷面整齐、干净、规范;
3. 字数100词左右;
4. 且文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
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【例文】
The Importance of Protecting Wild Animals
Wild animals play a key role in nature. They help keep the balance of the ecosystem. For example, bees help plants grow by pollinating them.
However, many wild animals are in danger. People cut down forests, so animals lose their homes. Also, some people hunt them for money. This not only damages animals but also leads to ecological imbalance.
To save them, we should build more nature reserves to protect their homes. Reduce the damage to their homes and plant trees. And we must stop illegal hunting. Let's work together to protect these lovely animals.
【范文分析】
①题材:关于保护野生动物的议论文。
②时态:一般现在时,阐述野生动物的现状、重要性及保护措施。
③提示::依据题目要求,从重要性、濒危原因和保护措施方面展开论述。
[写作步骤]
第一步,整体描述:说明野生动物在自然界的重要作用。
第二步,详细介绍:分析野生动物濒危的原因,并提出保护措施。
第三步,书写结语:呼吁大家共同保护野生动物。
[亮点词汇]
①play a key role in(在……中起关键作用)
[高分句型]
①Wild animals play a key role in nature. They help keep the balance of the ecosystem. For example, bees help plants grow by pollinating them. 使论述更具体。
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【2023年·七年级英语下学期期末·西藏】描述大自然的美丽,列举人们破坏自然的行为,表达你对保护自然的看法,字数80词左右。
要求:
1. 字数80词左右;
2. 可适当发挥,以使行文连贯。
3.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名和地名。
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【例文】
Our Beautiful Nature
Nature is really beautiful. We can see green trees, colorful flowers and clear rivers. It gives us fresh air to breathe and wonderful views to enjoy. But now, some people are hurting nature. They cut down trees, litter everywhere and pollute the rivers.Causing damage to the Earth and insulting the environment.
We should love and protect nature. We can start by doing small things, like picking up litter and saving water. If we all do these, our nature will stay beautiful.
[总体分析]
①题材:描述大自然并呼吁保护自然的议论文。
②时态:一般现在时,描述大自然的现状和表达看法。
③提示:依据题目,先描述大自然的美丽,再列举破坏行为并表达保护看法。
[写作步骤]
第一步,整体描述:描绘大自然的美丽景色。
第二步,详细介绍:指出人们破坏自然的行为。
第三步,书写结语:表达保护自然的观点并说明从小事做起。
[亮点词汇]
①hurt(伤害)
② pollute the rivers (污染河水)
[高分句型]
①We should love and protect nature. We can start by doing small things, like picking up litter and saving water.
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介绍四季的天气特点,描述你最喜欢的季节及原因,结合当下极端天气,谈谈对生活的影响和我们的应对,字数90词左右。
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【例文】
Weather and Seasons
There are four seasons in a year. Spring is warm and full of life, with flowers blooming everywhere. Summer is hot and often rainy, perfect for swimming. Autumn is cool, and the leaves turn golden. Winter is cold, sometimes with snow.
My favorite season is spring. The warm sunshine and fresh air make me feel great.
These years, extreme weather like strong storms and heatwaves happens often. In summer, the heatwave can make people sick. In winter, heavy snow may block roads. We should plant more trees and save energy to help the earth, so that the weather can be more stable.
[总体分析]
①题材:介绍四季天气与生活,以及应对极端天气的议论文。
②时态:一般现在时,描述四季特点和极端天气影响。
③提示:依据题目,介绍四季、喜欢的季节原因,结合极端天气谈影响和应对 。
[写作步骤]
第一步,整体描述:介绍四季的天气特点。
第二步,详细介绍:说明最喜欢春天的原因,以及极端天气对生活的影响。
第三步,书写结语:提出应对措施,呼吁保护地球。
[亮点词汇]
①extreme weather 极端天气
②strong storms 极强的暴风雨
[高分句型]
①We should plant more trees and save energy to help the earth, so that the weather can be more stable. “so that”引导目的状语从句,说明采取措施的目的
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描述四季变化对日常生活的影响,提及全球气候变暖导致季节异常,说说你的感受和想法,字数80词左右。____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【例文】
Seasons and Our Life
Seasons bring big changes to our life. In spring, we can fly kites outside. Summer is for beach trips. Autumn is the time to harvest fruits. In winter, we wear thick clothes to keep warm.
But because of global warming, the seasons are not as regular as before. Winters are not as cold, and summers are getting hotter. This is bad for plants, animals and us.
We need to protect the earth. We can ride bikes or take buses more often. Let's do something to make the seasons normal again.
[总体分析]
①题材:关于四季变化对生活影响及全球变暖的议论文。
②时态:一般现在时,描述四季变化和全球变暖的影响。
③提示:依据题目,描述四季对生活的影响,提及全球变暖导致的异常及想法。
[写作步骤]
第一步,整体描述:阐述四季变化对日常生活的影响。
第二步,详细介绍:说明全球变暖导致季节异常的情况及自己的感受。
第三步,书写结语:提出保护地球的具体做法,呼吁让季节恢复正常。
[亮点词汇]
①not as...as(不如……那样)
[高分句型]
①We need to protect the earth. We can ride bikes or take buses more often. Let's do something to make the seasons normal again.
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考拉是澳大利亚的标志性动物,深受人们喜爱。请你根据表格中的信息写一篇英语短文,把这只名叫“乐乐”的考拉介绍给你的好朋友。
Name
Lele
Age
4
Color
Soft grey
Features
Big round eyes; round ears; looks sleepy and cute
Favorite food
Eucalyptus leaves (桉树叶)
Special habit
Sleeps up to 20 hours a day; hugs tree trunks
Why special?
Only eats eucalyptus leaves; lives in Australia
写作要求:
1. 文中须包含表格中所提示的全部要点,可适当发挥。
2. 文中不得出现考生的真实姓名或校名。
3. 词数 70 个左右。
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【例文】
Lele is a four-year-old koala. She has soft grey fur, big round eyes, and round ears. She looks very sleepy and cute. Her favorite food is eucalyptus leaves. Lele sleeps a lot, up to 20 hours every day! When she is awake, she likes to hug tree trunks. Koalas are special because they only eat eucalyptus leaves and live in Australia. They are full of charm and warmly welcomed by people. We should protect these lovely animals.
[总体分析]
①题材:动物介绍类说明文。
②时态:全文使用一般现在时,描述客观事实与常态。
③提示:覆盖表格所有要点;结尾发挥保护倡议;无真实姓名/校名。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍考拉乐乐的基本信息。
第二步,描述它的外表(颜色、眼睛、耳朵、给人的感觉),说明它最喜欢的食物 ,介绍它的特殊习惯(睡觉时间长、抱树干), 说说它为什么特别(只吃桉树叶、生活在澳大利亚)。
第三步,可以简单表达对考拉的喜爱或保护之意。
[亮点词汇]
①full of(充满...的)
②warmly welcomed (深受欢迎)
③take pictures (拍照)
[高分句型]
①When they are awake, they like to hug tree trunks. (when 引导的时间状语从句 )
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你校开展"动物保护月"征稿活动,请以"My Favourite Animal"为题写一篇短文。
内容要求:
1. 外貌特点(体形/皮毛/眼睛等)
2. 喜爱原因(能力/性格/陪伴等)
3. 对人与动物关系的看法
参考词汇:
pointed (尖的)
care for (照顾)
loyal (忠诚的)
要求:
1. 词数70左右
2. 开头已给出(不计词数)
3. 文中不出现真实姓名/校名
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【例文】
My Favourite Animal
My favourite animal is cats. I have a cat named Snow. She is small with white fur, pointed ears and bright blue eyes.
I love cats because they are clever and loyal. Snow often plays with me after school. She can find hidden toys quickly. When I feel sad, she stays beside me to cheer me up.
I believe animals are our family. We should care for them just like they care for us.
[总体分析]
①题材:说明文(动物介绍+观点阐述)。
②时态:一般现在时(描述常态特征与普遍观点)。
③提示: 覆盖所有要求要点, 使用参考词汇, 无真实信息,词数合规。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山点明主题动物。
第二步,描述它的外表,并讲述喜欢的原因。
第三步,人宠关系观点+保护呼吁。
[亮点词汇]
①pointed → 描述特征(pointed ears)
②care for → 表达保护观(We should care for them)
③loyal→ 性格描写(they are clever and loyal)
[高分句型]
①When I feel sad, she stays beside me to cheer me up. (When引导时间状语从句 + 动词短语表目的)
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