Unit 1 People of Achievement人物介绍（单元同步写作讲义）英语人教版2019选择性必修第一册

选择性必修第一册 Unit 1单元写作指导与演练 A description of someone you admire 单元写作早知道 写作任务 本单元写作任务可以是撰写一位杰出人物的传记（如科学家、思想家、文化名人等），需涵盖人物的生平经历、主要成就、品质特点及对社会的影响，也可以延伸为子话题：各行各业拼搏奉献的平凡人士、爱岗敬业，乐于助人的专栏人物等. 人物简介的一般步骤可以概括为5个字: 概、貌、育、平、评 1. 概指概况: age, family background, identity(身份） 2. 貌指外貌: appearance, character, hobby 3. 育指教育: education background 4. 平指生平: big events, achievements & influence (in time order) 正文一般可以分为三部分： 第一部分：点明叙述人物 第二部分：叙述人物的具体情况 第三部分：对人物做出评价 常用表达 1. The person I admire most is…., 2. Of all the outstanding people, I admire…. the most. 3. There are many respectable people around us. The one who I admire most is.... 4. After graduating from…., he/she spend most of his /her time in doing/on… 5. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in.. 6. Despite many difficulties, he/she managed to overcome them. 7. He/She put his/her heart into …and made great contributions to… 8. One of the most remarkable traits of ...is his/her .... 9. No matter what difficulties he/she encounters, he/she always remains steadfast and never gives up easily. 10. Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect. 单元话题 真题展示 高考链接 人物介绍 （2023全国甲卷） 介绍一位中国历史人物，包含人物事迹、意义及对我们的启示。 撰写一位杰出人物的传记（如科学家、思想家、文化名人等），需涵盖人物的生平经历、主要成就、品质特点及对社会的影响。 你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动，请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.人物事迹；2.意义；3.启示。 主题写作—————我钦佩的人物介绍 写作思路 （1）一审：体裁、结构和主题 体裁：应用文（介绍类） 主题：人物介绍（尊敬的，伟大的） （2）二定：时态和人称 时态：一般过去时和一般现在时 人称：第一和三人称为主 （3）三明确：明确写作要点 人物，贡献或令人尊敬的地方，影响（有启发有教育意义，正能量） 段落 内容 句子设计 第一段 引出人物---简要介绍基本信息如生平，教育，职业等 Among all the people I admire, 姓名 stands out as the one who has influenced me most deeply. When it comes to the person I respect the most, 姓名 is always the first that comes to my mind. 第二段 介绍人物主要经历---挑比较重要的事迹进行描写，贡献或成就等 With a heart full of compassion and a mind full of wisdom, he/she is always ready to lend a helping hand. His/Her optimism, like a beam of sunlight, brightens even the darkest moments. I still remember how he/she stayed up late to help me with my project, despite being busy himself/herself. 第三段 人物评价及对作者的影响---人格，贡献，闪光点 姓名 not only shaped my academic growth but also taught me the value of integrity and kindness. The world needs more people like 姓名, whose actions remind us of the power of selflessness. 参考答案 The person I admire most is Yuan Longping. Born in Beijing in 1930 , Yuan Longping , who is one of the greatest scientist, showed a passion for researching rice. After graduating from Southwest Agricultural College, he spent most of his time on agricultural teaching and research. Despite many difficulties, he managed to overcome them. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in breeding hybrid rice, which improved the rice production and helped rid the world of hunger. So he is known as the father of hybrid rice.His optimism, like a beam of sunlight, brightens even the darkest moments. Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect. 【必备句式】 描写人物的句式 1.______ is considered to be one of the most influential figures in history due to his/her accomplishment. ______被认为是历史上最具影响力的人物之一，因为他/她的成就。 2. Throughout his/her life, ________demonstrated incredible courage, which allowed him/her to achieve great things. 在他/她的一生中，________表现出了令人难以置信的勇气，使他/她能够取得伟大的成就。 3._________'s impact on history cannot be overstated, as his/her ideas changed the course of human history. ________对历史的影响不容小觑，因为他/她的想法改变了人类历史的进程。 4.______ is remembered as a hero who fought for cause, inspiring countless others to follow in his/her footsteps. _________被铭记为一位英雄，他/她为事业而战斗，激励无数人跟随他/她的脚步。 5.Despite facing numerous obstacles and challenges, he persevere and left a lasting impact on history through his/her achievements. 尽管面临许多障碍和挑战,他坚持不懈，通过他/她的成就在历史上留下了深刻的影响。 描写人物的成就 1.______ is known for having achieved major breakthroughs in the field of expertise. ______以在专业领域取得的重大突破而闻名。 2._________ played a major role in event by leading, which ultimately led to _______. _________通过领导在事件中发挥了重要作用，最终导致了_________。 3._______left a lasting impact on society by introducing idea, which continues to influence society today. _________通过引入思想,在社会留下了深远的影响，直到今天仍在影响着社会。 描写人物的意义 1._______ serves as a source of inspiration for future generations, reminding us of what is possible and motivating us to achieve greatness. 历史人物是未来一代的灵感来源，他们提醒我们什么是可能的，并激励我们取得伟大的成就。 2.Studying the lives and accomplishments of ________ provides valuable insights into the past, increasing our understanding of how events unfolded and how people lived and thought in earlier times. 研究______的生平和成就可以为我们提供宝贵的历史洞见，增加我们对过去的理解，了解先人们如何生活和思考。 3._______ can serve as role models, illustrating the importance of hard work, perseverance, and dedication in achieving success. ______可以作为榜样，阐明努力工作、坚韧不拔和奉献的重要性，以实现成功。 【常用句型】 1．开头句 1. 成就引入：A renowned scientist has made remarkable achievements in... His/Her story is not only inspiring but also worth exploring. 一位著名的科学家在...取得了卓越成就。他 / 她的故事不仅鼓舞人心，还值得深入探究。 2. 关系引入：Among all the people I know, ...is the one who has had the most profound influence on me. As my teacher, he/she has taught me many valuable lessons. 在我认识的所有人中，... 是对我影响最深远的人。作为我的如老师，他 / 她教会了我许多宝贵的道理。 3. 独特之处引入：There is no one quite like... I have ever met. What makes him/her stand out is his/her extraordinary kindness. 我从未见过像 ...这样独特的人。他 / 她的 非凡的善良 使他 / 她脱颖而出。 4. 背景引入：In the colorful world of literature,... shines brightly as a prominent figure. Born into ...,he/she has been on an extraordinary journey. 在 文学丰富多彩的世界里，...作为杰出人物熠熠生辉。他 / 她出生于...，踏上了一段非凡的旅程。 2． 中间句 1. 外貌描写：His/Her smile, which is always warm and sincere, can easily light up the whole room. 他 / 她的笑容总是温暖而真诚，轻易就能点亮整个房间。 2. 性格特点：No matter what difficulties he/she encounters, he/she always remains steadfast and never gives up easily. 无论遇到什么困难，他 / 她始终坚定不移，从不轻易放弃。 3. 人物成就：Thanks to his/her unwavering efforts and outstanding talent,... achieved great success in .... He/She published several influential books and won numerous awards. 由于他 / 她坚定不移的努力和杰出的才华，... 在 ...取得了巨大成功。他 / 她出版了几本有影响力的书籍，赢得了无数奖项。 3．结尾句 1. 总结人物品质： His/Her remarkable qualities have not only shaped his/her own life but also left a deep impression on everyone around him/her. 他 / 她非凡的品质不仅塑造了自己的人生，也给周围的人留下了深刻的印象。 2强调影响力：Undoubtedly, ... has had a profound impact on .... His/Her achievements and spirit will continue to inspire generations to come. 毫无疑问，... 对... 产生了深远的影响。他 / 她的成就和精神将继续激励着后人。 3． 展望人物未来或其影响延续：As... continues his/her journey, we have no doubt that he/she will achieve even greater heights. His/Her story will always be a source of motivation for those who strive for success. 随着 ... 继续前行，我们坚信他 / 她会取得更高的成就。他 / 她的故事将永远是那些追求成功之人的动力源泉。 【必背模板】 模板1 The person I admire most is _______(人）. Born in _______(地点/时间）, _______（人），who is one of the greatest _______(职业）, showed a passion for___________(方面） After graduating from __________(学校）, he/she spent most of his /her time in doing/on___________. Despite many difficulties, he/she managed to overcome them. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in_________, which made him _____________(成就）. Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect. 模板2 [人物姓名]'s personality is as remarkable as his/her appearance. He/She is extremely [性格特点 1，如 kind - hearted]. Whenever someone is in trouble, [人物姓名] is always the first one to offer help without hesitation. Moreover, [人物姓名] is also highly [性格特点 2，如 determined]. Once he/she sets a goal, nothing can stop him/her from achieving it. One of the most memorable things about [人物姓名] happened in [具体时间]. [简述事迹，如 He/She organized a volunteer activity to help the poor in the community]. Despite facing many difficulties, [人物姓名] remained undaunted and successfully made the activity a great success. This not only brought real benefits to those in need but also inspired many people to join the volunteer team. 写作任务 假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文学很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的一位作家，请你给Jim回信，内容包括： (1)该人物是谁； (2)该人物的主要贡献； (3)该人物对你的影响。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, How is everything going? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 审题 (1)一审:体裁、结构和主题 体裁:应用文——书信介绍类 (2)二定:时态与人称 人称:第一人称与第三人称 时态:一般过去时与一般现在时 谋篇 (3)三明确 结构:四段 第一段:交际用语+导入+写信目的 第二段:人物与成就——人物(要点1)+成就(概括句)+细节(2点)影响—概括句+细节(2点) 第三段:总结+交际 主题:人物介绍 明确写作要点:人物(鲁迅) 贡献(杰出作品、反对旧势力) 影响(了解过去+中国梦靠每个人的努力) 遣词造句 (1)【核心词汇】 be committed to 致力于，以……为己任 be acknowledged as 被认为是…… obtain/gain a better knowledge of 获得对……的了解 to sum up 总之 arouse the passion of 唤起……的激情 fight against 与……做斗争 (2)【连词成句】 1. 我想介绍的主人公是一位不同寻常的作家——鲁迅 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 他创作了许多杰出的散文和小说。 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 他致力于通过其文章与敌人做斗争，唤起民众建立一个新中国的热情。 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 4. 正是因为这一点，他被认为是他那个时代的一位英雄。 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 5. 他不仅帮我更好地了解了那个时代的旧中国，也让我学到了坚持的重要性。 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 6. 总之，他是中国历史上的一位伟大的英雄。 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 【句式升级】 1. 将1、2句合成一个句子(定语从句) _____________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 将3改成非谓语形式 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 将4改成强调句 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 4. 将5改成Not only... but also 倒装句 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 1.The hero I want to introduce is an extraordinary writer—Lu Xu. 2. He wrote many remarkable prose and novels. 3.He was committed to fighting against the enemy with his articles and arouse the passion of the Chinese for building a new China. 4. Because of this ,he was acknowledged as a hero of his time. 5. He helps me obtain a better knowledge of the old China of that time and I have learnt the importance of insistence. 句式升级 1.The hero I want to introduce is an extraordinary writer—Lu Xun, who wrote many remarkable prose and novels. 2. He was committed to fighting against the enemy with his articles, arousing the passion of the Chinese for building a new China. 3. It was because of this that he was acknowledged as a hero of his time. 4. Not only does he help me obtain a better knowledge of the old China of that time but I have learnt the importance of insistence. 组句成篇 Dear Jim, How is everything going? Glad to know you are interested in Chinese history. I'd like to introduce a remarkable Chinese to you. The hero I want to introduce is an extraordinary writer—Lu Xun, who wrote many remarkable prose and novels. He was committed to fighting against the enemy with his articles, arousing the passion of the Chinese for building a new China. It was because of this that he was acknowledged as a hero of his time.Lu Xun has influenced me a lot. Not only does he help me obtain a better knowledge of the old China of that time but I have learnt the importance of insistence. To sum up, he is a great hero in the history of China. Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【第一部分 基础题】 一、重点短语 1. ____________________ 擅长唱歌 2. ____________________ 喜欢音乐 3. ____________________ 被北京大学录取   4. ____________________ 获得硕士学位 5. ____________________ 献身于他的事业 6. ____________________ 鼓励某人做某事 7. ____________________ 克服很多困难 8. ____________________ 作为…出名 9. ____________________ 对他高度评价 10 ____________________ 对国家做出巨大贡献 二、句子改写​​ (1) Born in ________on__________,___________is a ___________ 出生于1918年7月18日的曼德拉是南非的总统。 ________________________________________________________________________________________ (2)她长得很漂亮，拥有一把漂亮的长发。 ________________________________________________________________________________________ (3)他毕业于北方一所著名大学科学专业，四年后便出国深造了。 ________________________________________________________________________________________ (4)他努力工作，为人类事业奉献终身。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ (5)a.雷锋给我们树立了一个好榜样，所以大家都对他赞不绝口，都尊敬他。 ________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 1. be good at singing 2. be fond of music 3. be admitted to Beijing University 4. get a master's degree 5. devote oneself to one's business 6. encourage sb. to do sth. 7.overcome many difficulties 8.be famous/known as 9.speak/think highly/much/well of him 10.make great contributions to our country 二、句子仿写改写​​ (1) Born in the South Africa on July 18th,1918,Nelson Mandela was the President of South Africa. (2)She is good-looking /ordinary-looking/funny-looking with long beautiful hair. (3)Majoring in Science, he graduated from a famous University in the north and after 4 years. He went abroad for further studies. (4)So hard does he work that he devotes almost all his lifetime to our human cause. (5) Leifeng set us a good example ,so all the people spoke highly of him and all respected him. 【第二部分 提升题】 1. (2023·江苏省·期中考试)上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“致敬屠呦呦”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括： 1.活动的过程； 2.收获与感想。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Students Show Respect for Tu Youyou ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 Students Show Respect for Tu Youyou Last weekend, I participated in the activity of “Salute Tu Youyou” organized by the student union of our school. On the morning of Saturday, students listened to a lecture introducing the achievements of Tu Youyou. We were impressed by the great contributions Tu Youyou made to the medical field. In the afternoon, the students watched a photo show which showcased how Tu Youyou found Artemisinin, which was effective to treat malaria. From the activity, the students realized that Rome is not built in a day, and we should stick to our dreams until they can be realized. 2. (2023·江苏省·期末考试)你的英语老师要求同学们以“The Scientist I Admire Most”为题写一篇英文短文，内容包括： 1. 人物简介；2. 陈述你的理由。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The Scientist I Admire Most ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 The Scientist I admire most Of all the scientists, I admire QianXuesen most. When Qian was young, he realized China needed its own powerful air force to defend the country, so he made the decision to major in aviation. He went to America in 1935 to pursue his graduate studies and returned to China in 1955. Under Qian’s leadership, China developed the Dongfeng missiles, followed by the first generation of Long March rockets. Qian devoted himself to the country and helped make China stronger. He is an example to me and his spirit will inspire me to keep moving forward. 3. (2023·临沂月考试卷)你校正在组织英语作文比赛，题目为“The Role Model around Me”(我身边的榜样），请选取你生活中的一个人物，写一篇短文参赛，内容应包括： （1）人物简介（至少包括生平、事迹、成就或品质中的两个方面）； （2）对你的影响。 注意：词数100左右，文中不允许出现真实的人名。 The Role Model around Me ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 The Role Model around Me      When it comes to the role model around me, it's nobody but Liu Wei. Liu Wei is my classmate, who is strong and independent. He comes from a poor family. What makes matter worse is that he suffered from a disease in Senior Two. Because of the  illness, even asked a three-months leave from school. During that time, he not only fought against the disease, but kept on studying. Whenever facing the difficulty, he never gives up. Life is not easy for Liu Wei，but he still loves life.    It is his courage and determination that impress and inspire me a lot. I believe everybody can learn from him and lead a more positive and productive life on campus. 【链接高考—经典诵读】 1. 你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1.人物简介及事迹； 2. 意义或启示。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 题目已为你写好。 The Historical Figure in China ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 Confucius, born in 551 BC, is acknowledged as one of the greatest philosophers in Chinese history. His teachings on ethics, morality, and education have profoundly influenced Chinese culture.  Committed to promoting harmony and respect, he traveled extensively to share his ideas. Despite facing various challenges, he insisted on the importance of virtue and self-cultivation. His work, the Analects, remains a vital source of wisdom. It is clear that Confucius’s philosophy encourages us to strive for personal growth and social responsibility.  All in all, he is a respected figure whose legacy continues to inspire people around the world. 2. （2020·全国·高考真题）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括: 1. 人物简介； 2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。 注意: 1. 词数100左右； 2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 参考答案 The Person I Respect  The person I deeply admire is Mr. Li, a janitor in our school. Though his job seems humble, his dedication touches everyone.  What makes him extraordinary is his attention to detail. Every morning at 6 a.m., he cleans the campus spotlessly, even scrubbing graffiti off desks. During exams, he quietly places “Good Luck” notes on each classroom door — a small gesture that lifts our spirits.   More importantly, he uses his limited salary to buy books for the library. “Education changes fate,” he often says. His words and actions remind us that true greatness requires no fame, only a kind heart.  7 / 12 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 选择性必修第一册 Unit 1单元写作指导与演练 A description of someone you admire 单元写作早知道 写作任务 本单元写作任务可以是撰写一位杰出人物的传记（如科学家、思想家、文化名人等），需涵盖人物的生平经历、主要成就、品质特点及对社会的影响，也可以延伸为子话题：各行各业拼搏奉献的平凡人士、爱岗敬业，乐于助人的专栏人物等. 人物简介的一般步骤可以概括为5个字: 概、貌、育、平、评 1. 概指概况: age, family background, identity(身份） 2. 貌指外貌: appearance, character, hobby 3. 育指教育: education background 4. 平指生平: big events, achievements & influence (in time order) 正文一般可以分为三部分： 第一部分：点明叙述人物 第二部分：叙述人物的具体情况 第三部分：对人物做出评价 常用表达 1. The person I admire most is…., 2. Of all the outstanding people, I admire…. the most. 3. There are many respectable people around us. The one who I admire most is.... 4. After graduating from…., he/she spend most of his /her time in doing/on… 5. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in.. 6. Despite many difficulties, he/she managed to overcome them. 7. He/She put his/her heart into …and made great contributions to… 8. One of the most remarkable traits of ...is his/her .... 9. No matter what difficulties he/she encounters, he/she always remains steadfast and never gives up easily. 10. Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect. 单元话题 真题展示 高考链接 人物介绍 （2023全国甲卷） 介绍一位中国历史人物，包含人物事迹、意义及对我们的启示。 撰写一位杰出人物的传记（如科学家、思想家、文化名人等），需涵盖人物的生平经历、主要成就、品质特点及对社会的影响。 你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动，请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括：1.人物事迹；2.意义；3.启示。 主题写作—————我钦佩的人物介绍 写作思路 （1）一审：体裁、结构和主题 体裁：应用文（介绍类） 主题：人物介绍（尊敬的，伟大的） （2）二定：时态和人称 时态：一般过去时和一般现在时 人称：第一和三人称为主 （3）三明确：明确写作要点 人物，贡献或令人尊敬的地方，影响（有启发有教育意义，正能量） 段落 内容 句子设计 第一段 引出人物---简要介绍基本信息如生平，教育，职业等 Among all the people I admire, 姓名 stands out as the one who has influenced me most deeply. When it comes to the person I respect the most, 姓名 is always the first that comes to my mind. 第二段 介绍人物主要经历---挑比较重要的事迹进行描写，贡献或成就等 With a heart full of compassion and a mind full of wisdom, he/she is always ready to lend a helping hand. His/Her optimism, like a beam of sunlight, brightens even the darkest moments. I still remember how he/she stayed up late to help me with my project, despite being busy himself/herself. 第三段 人物评价及对作者的影响---人格，贡献，闪光点 姓名 not only shaped my academic growth but also taught me the value of integrity and kindness. The world needs more people like 姓名, whose actions remind us of the power of selflessness. 【必备句式】 描写人物的句式 1.______ is considered to be one of the most influential figures in history due to his/her accomplishment. ______被认为是历史上最具影响力的人物之一，因为他/她的成就。 2. Throughout his/her life, ________demonstrated incredible courage, which allowed him/her to achieve great things. 在他/她的一生中，________表现出了令人难以置信的勇气，使他/她能够取得伟大的成就。 3._________'s impact on history cannot be overstated, as his/her ideas changed the course of human history. ________对历史的影响不容小觑，因为他/她的想法改变了人类历史的进程。 4.______ is remembered as a hero who fought for cause, inspiring countless others to follow in his/her footsteps. _________被铭记为一位英雄，他/她为事业而战斗，激励无数人跟随他/她的脚步。 5.Despite facing numerous obstacles and challenges, he persevere and left a lasting impact on history through his/her achievements. 尽管面临许多障碍和挑战,他坚持不懈，通过他/她的成就在历史上留下了深刻的影响。 描写人物的成就 1.______ is known for having achieved major breakthroughs in the field of expertise. ______以在专业领域取得的重大突破而闻名。 2._________ played a major role in event by leading, which ultimately led to _______. _________通过领导在事件中发挥了重要作用，最终导致了_________。 3._______left a lasting impact on society by introducing idea, which continues to influence society today. _________通过引入思想,在社会留下了深远的影响，直到今天仍在影响着社会。 描写人物的意义 1._______ serves as a source of inspiration for future generations, reminding us of what is possible and motivating us to achieve greatness. 历史人物是未来一代的灵感来源，他们提醒我们什么是可能的，并激励我们取得伟大的成就。 2.Studying the lives and accomplishments of ________ provides valuable insights into the past, increasing our understanding of how events unfolded and how people lived and thought in earlier times. 研究______的生平和成就可以为我们提供宝贵的历史洞见，增加我们对过去的理解，了解先人们如何生活和思考。 3._______ can serve as role models, illustrating the importance of hard work, perseverance, and dedication in achieving success. ______可以作为榜样，阐明努力工作、坚韧不拔和奉献的重要性，以实现成功。 【常用句型】 1．开头句 1. 成就引入：A renowned scientist has made remarkable achievements in... His/Her story is not only inspiring but also worth exploring. 一位著名的科学家在...取得了卓越成就。他 / 她的故事不仅鼓舞人心，还值得深入探究。 2. 关系引入：Among all the people I know, ...is the one who has had the most profound influence on me. As my teacher, he/she has taught me many valuable lessons. 在我认识的所有人中，... 是对我影响最深远的人。作为我的如老师，他 / 她教会了我许多宝贵的道理。 3. 独特之处引入：There is no one quite like... I have ever met. What makes him/her stand out is his/her extraordinary kindness. 我从未见过像 ...这样独特的人。他 / 她的 非凡的善良 使他 / 她脱颖而出。 4. 背景引入：In the colorful world of literature,... shines brightly as a prominent figure. Born into ...,he/she has been on an extraordinary journey. 在 文学丰富多彩的世界里，...作为杰出人物熠熠生辉。他 / 她出生于...，踏上了一段非凡的旅程。 2． 中间句 1. 外貌描写：His/Her smile, which is always warm and sincere, can easily light up the whole room. 他 / 她的笑容总是温暖而真诚，轻易就能点亮整个房间。 2. 性格特点：No matter what difficulties he/she encounters, he/she always remains steadfast and never gives up easily. 无论遇到什么困难，他 / 她始终坚定不移，从不轻易放弃。 3. 人物成就：Thanks to his/her unwavering efforts and outstanding talent,... achieved great success in .... He/She published several influential books and won numerous awards. 由于他 / 她坚定不移的努力和杰出的才华，... 在 ...取得了巨大成功。他 / 她出版了几本有影响力的书籍，赢得了无数奖项。 3．结尾句 1. 总结人物品质： His/Her remarkable qualities have not only shaped his/her own life but also left a deep impression on everyone around him/her. 他 / 她非凡的品质不仅塑造了自己的人生，也给周围的人留下了深刻的印象。 2强调影响力：Undoubtedly, ... has had a profound impact on .... His/Her achievements and spirit will continue to inspire generations to come. 毫无疑问，... 对... 产生了深远的影响。他 / 她的成就和精神将继续激励着后人。 3． 展望人物未来或其影响延续：As... continues his/her journey, we have no doubt that he/she will achieve even greater heights. His/Her story will always be a source of motivation for those who strive for success. 随着 ... 继续前行，我们坚信他 / 她会取得更高的成就。他 / 她的故事将永远是那些追求成功之人的动力源泉。 【必背模板】 模板1 The person I admire most is _______(人）. Born in _______(地点/时间）, _______（人），who is one of the greatest _______(职业）, showed a passion for___________(方面） After graduating from __________(学校）, he/she spent most of his /her time in doing/on___________. Despite many difficulties, he/she managed to overcome them. With strong will and great determination, he achieved the great success in_________, which made him _____________(成就）. Having set a great example for us, he is an excellent person who fully deserves our admiration and respect. 模板2 [人物姓名]'s personality is as remarkable as his/her appearance. He/She is extremely [性格特点 1，如 kind - hearted]. Whenever someone is in trouble, [人物姓名] is always the first one to offer help without hesitation. Moreover, [人物姓名] is also highly [性格特点 2，如 determined]. Once he/she sets a goal, nothing can stop him/her from achieving it. One of the most memorable things about [人物姓名] happened in [具体时间]. [简述事迹，如 He/She organized a volunteer activity to help the poor in the community]. Despite facing many difficulties, [人物姓名] remained undaunted and successfully made the activity a great success. This not only brought real benefits to those in need but also inspired many people to join the volunteer team. 写作任务 假设你是李华，你的英国朋友Jim在给你的邮件中提到他对中国文学很感兴趣，并请你介绍一位你喜欢的一位作家，请你给Jim回信，内容包括： (1)该人物是谁； (2)该人物的主要贡献； (3)该人物对你的影响。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim, How is everything going? ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 审题 (1)一审:体裁、结构和主题 体裁:应用文——书信介绍类 (2)二定:时态与人称 人称:第一人称与第三人称 时态:一般过去时与一般现在时 谋篇 (3)三明确 结构:四段 第一段:交际用语+导入+写信目的 第二段:人物与成就——人物(要点1)+成就(概括句)+细节(2点)影响—概括句+细节(2点) 第三段:总结+交际 主题:人物介绍 明确写作要点:人物(鲁迅) 贡献(杰出作品、反对旧势力) 影响(了解过去+中国梦靠每个人的努力) 遣词造句 (1)【核心词汇】 be committed to 致力于，以……为己任 be acknowledged as 被认为是…… obtain/gain a better knowledge of 获得对……的了解 to sum up 总之 arouse the passion of 唤起……的激情 fight against 与……做斗争 (2)【连词成句】 1. 我想介绍的主人公是一位不同寻常的作家——鲁迅 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 他创作了许多杰出的散文和小说。 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 他致力于通过其文章与敌人做斗争，唤起民众建立一个新中国的热情。 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 4. 正是因为这一点，他被认为是他那个时代的一位英雄。 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 5. 他不仅帮我更好地了解了那个时代的旧中国，也让我学到了坚持的重要性。 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 6. 总之，他是中国历史上的一位伟大的英雄。 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 【句式升级】 1. 将1、2句合成一个句子(定语从句) _____________________________________________________________________________________ 2. 将3改成非谓语形式 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 将4改成强调句 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 4. 将5改成Not only... but also 倒装句 _____________________________________________________________________________________ 【第一部分 基础题】 一、重点短语 1. ____________________ 擅长唱歌 2. ____________________ 喜欢音乐 3. ____________________ 被北京大学录取   4. ____________________ 获得硕士学位 5. ____________________ 献身于他的事业 6. ____________________ 鼓励某人做某事 7. ____________________ 克服很多困难 8. ____________________ 作为…出名 9. ____________________ 对他高度评价 10 ____________________ 对国家做出巨大贡献 二、句子改写​​ (1) Born in ________on__________,___________is a ___________ 出生于1918年7月18日的曼德拉是南非的总统。 ________________________________________________________________________________________ (2)她长得很漂亮，拥有一把漂亮的长发。 ________________________________________________________________________________________ (3)他毕业于北方一所著名大学科学专业，四年后便出国深造了。 ________________________________________________________________________________________ (4)他努力工作，为人类事业奉献终身。 _______________________________________________________________________________________ (5)a.雷锋给我们树立了一个好榜样，所以大家都对他赞不绝口，都尊敬他。 ________________________________________________________________________________________ 【第二部分 提升题】 1. (2023·江苏省·期中考试)上周末你参加了校学生会组织的“致敬屠呦呦”活动。请为校英文报写篇报道，内容包括： 1.活动的过程； 2.收获与感想。 注意：1.写作词数应为80左右； 2.请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 Students Show Respect for Tu Youyou ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. (2023·江苏省·期末考试)你的英语老师要求同学们以“The Scientist I Admire Most”为题写一篇英文短文，内容包括： 1. 人物简介；2. 陈述你的理由。 注意：1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 The Scientist I Admire Most ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. (2023·临沂月考试卷)你校正在组织英语作文比赛，题目为“The Role Model around Me”(我身边的榜样），请选取你生活中的一个人物，写一篇短文参赛，内容应包括： （1）人物简介（至少包括生平、事迹、成就或品质中的两个方面）； （2）对你的影响。 注意：词数100左右，文中不允许出现真实的人名。 The Role Model around Me ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【链接高考—经典诵读】 1. （2023·全国·高考真题）你们学校正举办主题为“用英文讲中国故事”的征文活动。请你以一位中国历史人物为题写一篇短文投稿，内容包括： 1.人物简介及事迹； 2. 意义或启示。 注意： 1. 词数100左右； 2. 题目已为你写好。 The Historical Figure in China ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2. （2020·全国·高考真题）你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题，写一篇短文参赛，内容包括: 1. 人物简介； 2. 尊敬和爱戴的原因。 注意: 1. 词数100左右； 2. 短文题目和首句已为你写好。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7 / 12 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$