Unit 1 Teenage Life 建议信（单元同步写作讲义）英语人教版2019必修第一册

必修第一册 Unit 1 Teenage life 建议信 Write a Letter for Advice 单元写作早知道 写作任务 本单元的写作任务是写一封建议信。建议信是应用文的常用体裁。建议信是写信者向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告。建议信可以写给个人，也可以写给某个组织或者机构，就某个问题提出自己的看法或建议。 建议信的正文一般可以分为三部分： 第一部分：表明目的+建立同理心 第二部分：问题分析+具体建议+理由支撑 第三部分：总结+期待 常用表达 1. You said in your last letter that ... 2. Knowing from your letter that... 3. You have asked for my advice with regard to... 4. I am writing to try to make some suggestions on... 5. I am writing to express my views concerning... 7. I would like to suggest that... 8. There are several things we could do. 9. Maybe it would be better to... 10. Why don’t you ...? 11. Have you considered doing...? 12. I hope you will find these suggestions practical/useful/helpful. 话题 真题展示 高考链接 建议信 2025·全国一卷·高考真题 通常以书信或邮件的形式出现，要求考生给特定的对象，如朋友、同学、老师、相关机构等提供建议。设置贴近学生学习、校园活动、成长发展等方面的情境，也会涉及到社会热点话题，考查在实际情境中运用语言的能力。 Use what you have learnt to write a letter of suggestion. 假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教 Jenny 提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给Jenny写一封邮件，内容包括： (1)你的选择； (2)说明理由。 注意： (1)写作词数应为80个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 考情分析 年份 卷别 考查形式 考查话题 考查语境 2025 新课标I卷 邮件 校园生活 班级英文报栏目选择（二选一） 2025 浙江卷 演讲稿 校园生活 校园内使用手机拍短视频的看法和建议 2025 北京卷 书信 社会热点 朋友询问联合国倡议征集的建议 2023 新课标II卷 邮件 校园生活 外教口语分组机制改进 2023 北京卷 书信 环境保护 “绿色北京”主题活动建议 一、紧扣题目核心，明确写作方向 仔细阅读题目要求，明确建议的对象和主题，确定写作的基本方向，如是针对个人学习生活提建议，还是对校园建设、社会现象发表看法等，避免跑题。关捕捉关键词，划出“建议”“改进”“优化”等核心动词，本单元要求针对三名学生的问题，提出建议，避免偏离主题。 二、解析内容要求，确定写作重点 根据题目给出的要点提示，分析需要涵盖的具体内容，如建议的背景、存在的问题、具体的建议措施等，确保写作时重点突出，内容完整、有条理。 · 避坑点： 1. 避免脱离情境（如向他们建议“打太极拳减压”未关联教学场景）。  2. 杜绝空洞表述（如仅写“join a club”而未说明具体社团及益处）。 Name Suggestions Reasons Eric Try listening to your parents. Invite them out for something to eat. That they aren’t listening to you is perhaps because you don’t listen to them. This will give you a chance to speak to them without distractions. Xu Ting Join a volunteer group. Connect with your parents online. This will give you a chance to be around other people, and help you realize that other people have problems, too. Just because they are far away, it doesn’t mean that you can’t talk to them. Min Ho Ask a mutual friend (一个共同的朋友) to introduce you to her. Find chances to get together in groups where she is a group member. Your friend will be able to help you break the ice (破冰, 打破沉默, 打破僵局) with her and provide encouragement to you. If you are in a group，it takes all the pressure off (消除所有压力), and you can interact with her in a relaxing setting. 段落 内容 句子设计 第一段 表明目的+建立同理心 问题回应型：Learning that you are struggling with ______, I'd like to offer practical suggestions.  主动建议型：As a regular user of ______, I'm writing to propose feasible improvements to ______. 第二段 问题分析 具体建议 理由支撑 客观描述现状：Random grouping leads to unbalanced language abilities, causing advanced students to dominate conversations. 分点列出措施：First, group students based on their language proficiency; second, allow self-selection to boost motivation. 说明建议的合理性：This approach ensures everyone can practice effectively while fostering collaboration. 第三段 总结+期待 弱命令语气：Hopefully, these measures could ______, though adjustments based on ______ are welcome. 开放结尾：Should you require further details about ______, I am readily available. 【小试牛刀】 【单元必备词块】 教材基础词块 4 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 make friends with sb. 与某人交朋友 in my opinion 依我看 have a talk with sb. 与某人谈心 join in 参加 share happiness 分享快乐 go out for a walk 出去散步 get along with 与……相处； 进展 get tired of 厌烦 高分词块 提出建议 make suggestions 提出建议 give advice 给出建议 recommend 推荐 propose 提议 put forward ideas 提出想法 表达重要性 of great importance 非常重要的 play a vital role in 在……中起关键作用 be crucial for 对……至关重要的 be essential to 对……是必不可少的 指出问题 there exists a problem that 存在这样一个问题…… a issue that needs to be addressed is 一个需要被解决的问题是…… it is worth noting that 值得注意的是…… 解决措施 take effective measures to 采取有效措施…… deal with 处理 solve 解决 improve the situation 改善这种状况 make improvements in 在……方面做出改进 表达希望 hope that 希望…… wish that 但愿…… it is expected that 预期…… I sincerely hope that 我真诚地希望…… 表示原因 due to 由于 because of 因为 owing to 归因于 thanks to 多亏了 as a result of 由于……的结果 【必备句式】 第一部分：说明写信的目的 1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful. 很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。 2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you. 我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。 3. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients（顾客）. 我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。 4. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions here. 你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。 5. I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few suggestions. 很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。 6. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school. 很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。 第二部分：介绍详情、说明原因 1.It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches. 它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。 2. We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00. 我们将会在上午八点出发，九点到达那里。 3. During the afternoon, we’ll...together. 下午，我们会一起…… 4. Remember to take water and lunch with you. 记得带上水和午餐。 5. By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 and it will take you directly to the club. 顺便说一下，你可以乘坐322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。 6.I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite you to be part of the contest. 我知道你的母语是英语，还是一名英语老师。我代表我们学校真诚地邀请你来比赛现场。 7.Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance. 既然你如此渴望提高英语，这会是一个很好的机会。 8.I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there. 我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。 第三部分：提出建议 1.I think the most suitable...for you is... 我认为对你来说最适合的……是…… 2.I would like to suggest that...我想建议…… 3.You’d better.../It’s best to... 你最好……/最好是…… 4.As far as I am concerned/In my opinion/As for me/From my point of view, it would be wise to take the following action. 在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。 5.For one thing...; for another... 一方面……，另一方面…… 6.If I were you，I would...如果我是你，我会…… 7.I think it would be more beneficial if you could...我认为如果你能……将会更有益。 第四部分：希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复 1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成). 我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。 2. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”). 我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。 3. Best wishes! （给你）最美好的祝愿！ 4. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement. 无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。 5. I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work！ 我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运。 6. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know. 我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。 【必背模板】Dear________, You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here. In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ________________(建议的内容). I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with your________________(祝愿). Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 模板① 模板② Dear_______, I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _________________(引出对方需要建议的主题). Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议). First , It is important to ______________. Then, it also helps to ___________. Besides, it should be a good idea to __________. You can also ___________. (可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下) As to __________, I suggest _____________(需要具体到某一方面). In addition, _________(其他的建议). I’m sure ______________(预测可能的结果， 给对方以行为的信心和决心). I hope ____________(表达愿望)。 Yours Sincerely, Li Hua （2025·全国一卷·高考真题）假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教 Jenny 提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给Jenny写一封邮件，内容包括： (1)你的选择； (2)说明理由。 注意： (1)写作词数应为80个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Jenny, I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper. Yours, Li Hua 【第一部分 基础题】 一、单元话题词汇翻译​ 1.__________adv.事实上 2.__________n.(大学或高中)一年级新生 3._________________v.建议 4._______________n.日程安排 5.__________________对……感到困惑 6._____________课外活动 7.____________关注 8.____________对……是适合的 9._____________报名(参加课程) 10._______________跟上;赶上 11.______________提前 二、补全句子​ 4 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.完成句子 第一段:表示理解,表明写信目的 (1) ___________(事实上)，__________ __________ __________ __________ __________ (很多一年级新生都对……感到困惑) high school life. 第二段:根据提示给出建议 (2) I___________(建议)that you__________ __________ __________ __________ ___________(报名参加课外活动) and they can help you make more new friends. (3) You should __________ __________ __________ __________ (做一个合理的日程安排) and __________ __________(关注) your studies. (4)You can __________ __________ __________(跟上) other classmates in the class. (5)You'd better prepare for the new lessons __________ __________(提前). 第三段:表达希望 (6) I hope my suggestions will __________ __________ __________ __________ (适合你). 2.句式升级 (7)将句(2)升级为含有定语从句的句子 (8) 用so that合并句(3)和句(4) 二、连句成篇​ 4 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 请使用恰当的过渡词将以上句子组成一篇建议信。 Dear Jack, 【第二部分 提升题】 1.（2023·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)活动形式； (2)活动内容。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim， Yours, Li Hua 2.（2023·新课标Ⅱ卷·高考真题） 假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议。 注意：   1. 写作词数应为80个左右；   2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Ryan, I’m Li Hua from Class 3. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 3．（2022·上海·高考真题）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-50 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，入冬以来，你校组织全校师生每周一至周五晨跑时间为7:30—7:50，休息5分钟后上第一节课。但有同学反映，晨跑后身体不适，因此学校委托学生会征询大家对晨跑的意见。请你给学生会写一封邮件，内容必须包括： (1) 你认为该晨跑安排中存在的问题； (2) 你的改进建议及理由。 4．（2025·浙江·高考真题）你将参加英语课上的“一分钟演讲”活动。请你针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： (1) 陈述看法； (2) 提出建议。 注意： (1) 写作词数应为80左右； (2) 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus 【链接高考—经典诵读】 （2021·全国·高考真题）你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括： 1. 分析优势与不足； 2. 提出学习建议。 注意： 1. 词数100左右; 2. 题目和首句已为你写好。 Be smart online learners $$必修第一册 Unit 1 Teenage life 建议信 Write a Letter for Advice 单元写作早知道 写作任务 本单元的写作任务是写一封建议信。建议信是应用文的常用体裁。建议信是写信者向收信人就某事提出自己的建议或忠告。建议信可以写给个人，也可以写给某个组织或者机构，就某个问题提出自己的看法或建议。 建议信的正文一般可以分为三部分： 第一部分：表明目的+建立同理心 第二部分：问题分析+具体建议+理由支撑 第三部分：总结+期待 常用表达 1. You said in your last letter that ... 2. Knowing from your letter that... 3. You have asked for my advice with regard to... 4. I am writing to try to make some suggestions on... 5. I am writing to express my views concerning... 7. I would like to suggest that... 8. There are several things we could do. 9. Maybe it would be better to... 10. Why don’t you ...? 11. Have you considered doing...? 12. I hope you will find these suggestions practical/useful/helpful. 话题 真题展示 高考链接 建议信 2025·全国一卷·高考真题 通常以书信或邮件的形式出现，要求考生给特定的对象，如朋友、同学、老师、相关机构等提供建议。设置贴近学生学习、校园活动、成长发展等方面的情境，也会涉及到社会热点话题，考查在实际情境中运用语言的能力。 Use what you have learnt to write a letter of suggestion. 假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教 Jenny 提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给Jenny写一封邮件，内容包括： (1)你的选择； (2)说明理由。 注意： (1)写作词数应为80个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 考情分析 年份 卷别 考查形式 考查话题 考查语境 2025 新课标I卷 邮件 校园生活 班级英文报栏目选择（二选一） 2025 浙江卷 演讲稿 校园生活 校园内使用手机拍短视频的看法和建议 2025 北京卷 书信 社会热点 朋友询问联合国倡议征集的建议 2023 新课标II卷 邮件 校园生活 外教口语分组机制改进 2023 北京卷 书信 环境保护 “绿色北京”主题活动建议 一、紧扣题目核心，明确写作方向 仔细阅读题目要求，明确建议的对象和主题，确定写作的基本方向，如是针对个人学习生活提建议，还是对校园建设、社会现象发表看法等，避免跑题。关捕捉关键词，划出“建议”“改进”“优化”等核心动词，本单元要求针对三名学生的问题，提出建议，避免偏离主题。 二、解析内容要求，确定写作重点 根据题目给出的要点提示，分析需要涵盖的具体内容，如建议的背景、存在的问题、具体的建议措施等，确保写作时重点突出，内容完整、有条理。 · 避坑点： 1. 避免脱离情境（如向他们建议“打太极拳减压”未关联教学场景）。  2. 杜绝空洞表述（如仅写“join a club”而未说明具体社团及益处）。 Name Suggestions Reasons Eric Try listening to your parents. Invite them out for something to eat. That they aren’t listening to you is perhaps because you don’t listen to them. This will give you a chance to speak to them without distractions. Xu Ting Join a volunteer group. Connect with your parents online. This will give you a chance to be around other people, and help you realize that other people have problems, too. Just because they are far away, it doesn’t mean that you can’t talk to them. Min Ho Ask a mutual friend (一个共同的朋友) to introduce you to her. Find chances to get together in groups where she is a group member. Your friend will be able to help you break the ice (破冰, 打破沉默, 打破僵局) with her and provide encouragement to you. If you are in a group，it takes all the pressure off (消除所有压力), and you can interact with her in a relaxing setting. 段落 内容 句子设计 第一段 表明目的+建立同理心 问题回应型：Learning that you are struggling with ______, I'd like to offer practical suggestions.  主动建议型：As a regular user of ______, I'm writing to propose feasible improvements to ______. 第二段 问题分析 具体建议 理由支撑 客观描述现状：Random grouping leads to unbalanced language abilities, causing advanced students to dominate conversations. 分点列出措施：First, group students based on their language proficiency; second, allow self-selection to boost motivation. 说明建议的合理性：This approach ensures everyone can practice effectively while fostering collaboration. 第三段 总结+期待 弱命令语气：Hopefully, these measures could ______, though adjustments based on ______ are welcome. 开放结尾：Should you require further details about ______, I am readily available. 【小试牛刀】 Dear Xu Ting, You wrote that you always feel lonely after school because your parents work in another city. I understand how you feel quite well. I am sorry to hear that and I hope the following suggestions will be of help to you. First of all, I recommend you make some good friends in your class and have fun with them after school. In this way, you will feel less lonely because you can talk to each other about the unhappy things to reduce your bad feelings and have fun together. What’s more, it also might be a good idea for you to take an active part in more activities. By doing this, you can not only know new friends but also develop friendly relationships. Finally, if it doesn’t work, why not turn to our teachers for help. I believe they can usually offer you some practical suggestions. I do hope these suggestions will help drive away your loneliness. Best Wishes！ Yours sincerely Susan 【单元必备词块】 教材基础词块 4 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 make friends with sb. 与某人交朋友 in my opinion 依我看 have a talk with sb. 与某人谈心 join in 参加 share happiness 分享快乐 go out for a walk 出去散步 get along with 与……相处； 进展 get tired of 厌烦 高分词块 提出建议 make suggestions 提出建议 give advice 给出建议 recommend 推荐 propose 提议 put forward ideas 提出想法 表达重要性 of great importance 非常重要的 play a vital role in 在……中起关键作用 be crucial for 对……至关重要的 be essential to 对……是必不可少的 指出问题 there exists a problem that 存在这样一个问题…… a issue that needs to be addressed is 一个需要被解决的问题是…… it is worth noting that 值得注意的是…… 解决措施 take effective measures to 采取有效措施…… deal with 处理 solve 解决 improve the situation 改善这种状况 make improvements in 在……方面做出改进 表达希望 hope that 希望…… wish that 但愿…… it is expected that 预期…… I sincerely hope that 我真诚地希望…… 表示原因 due to 由于 because of 因为 owing to 归因于 thanks to 多亏了 as a result of 由于……的结果 【必备句式】 第一部分：说明写信的目的 1. I'm sorry to hear that you are having trouble fitting in your new school. Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful. 很遗憾听说你在适应新学校方面有困难。这样的问题是很正常的。可能下面的建议会有一些帮助。 2. I have received your letter saying you plan to play a visit to China for ten days next month. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful to you. 我已经收到了你的来信。信上说你打算下个月来参观中国十天。可能下面的建议对你是有帮助的。 3. I'm writing to you to present what I think on the further improvement of our hotel so as to attract more clients（顾客）. 我给你写信是想说明一下我对于进一步改善我们旅馆的一些想法，以吸引更多顾客。 4. You have asked me for my advice with regard to how to learn Chinese , and I will try to make some suggestions here. 你关于如何学习汉语询问我的建议，那么我就在这里给出一些建议。 5. I'm very glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to fit in the new school life. Here are a few suggestions. 很高兴收到你的来信，信上询问我关于如何适应新的学校生活。下面是我的一些建议。 6. I'm very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I'm writing to give you some advice on how to learn English well in high school. 很高兴收到你的电子邮件。现在，关于如何在高中学好英语，我写信给你一些建议。 第二部分：介绍详情、说明原因 1.It will begin at 2:00 pm and last two hours, during which time 15 well-prepared contestants will deliver their speeches. 它将于下午两点钟开始，四点钟结束，在此期间将会有十五位准备充分的参赛者发表演讲。 2. We will start at 8:00 am and arrive there at 9:00. 我们将会在上午八点出发，九点到达那里。 3. During the afternoon, we’ll...together. 下午，我们会一起…… 4. Remember to take water and lunch with you. 记得带上水和午餐。 5. By the way, you may take Bus No. 322 and it will take you directly to the club. 顺便说一下，你可以乘坐322路公交车，它会直接把你带到俱乐部。 6.I know you are a native speaker of English and an English teacher, and I, on behalf of our school, sincerely invite you to be part of the contest. 我知道你的母语是英语，还是一名英语老师。我代表我们学校真诚地邀请你来比赛现场。 7.Since you are so eager to improve your English, it will prove to be a great chance. 既然你如此渴望提高英语，这会是一个很好的机会。 8.I’m sure that you will enjoy yourself there. 我保证你在那里会过得很愉快。 第三部分：提出建议 1.I think the most suitable...for you is... 我认为对你来说最适合的……是…… 2.I would like to suggest that...我想建议…… 3.You’d better.../It’s best to... 你最好……/最好是…… 4.As far as I am concerned/In my opinion/As for me/From my point of view, it would be wise to take the following action. 在我看来，采取如下行动是明智的。 5.For one thing...; for another... 一方面……，另一方面…… 6.If I were you，I would...如果我是你，我会…… 7.I think it would be more beneficial if you could...我认为如果你能……将会更有益。 第四部分：希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复 1. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: where there is a will, there is a way(有志者事竟成). 我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：有志者事竟成。 2. I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. Remember: The man who has made up his mind to win will never say “impossible”(一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”). 我希望这些建议会对你有用。记住：一个决心要成功的人从来不说“不可能”。 3. Best wishes! （给你）最美好的祝愿！ 4. I hope that my suggestions are helpful for you anyway. I would be more than happy to see improvement. 无论如何，我希望这些建议对你有所帮助。我会非常高兴看到情况改善。 5. I believe that you will take my suggestions into serious account. Whatever you decide to do, good luck with your studies/work！ 我相信你会认真考虑我的建议。无论你决定做什么，祝你学习/工作好运。 6. I sincerely hope my advice will be some help for you. If there is more I can do to help, please let me know. 我真诚的希望我的建议对你有一些帮助。如果有更多我可以帮忙的，请告诉我。 【必背模板】Dear________, You have asked me for my advice with regard to________________, and I will try to make some conducive suggestions here. In my opinion, you would be wise to take the following actions: ________________(建议的内容). I hope you will find these proposals useful, and I would be ready to discuss this matter with you to further details. Good luck with your________________(祝愿). Yours Sincerely, Li Hua 模板① 模板② Dear_______, I’m glad to receive your letter asking for my advice on how to _________________(引出对方需要建议的主题). Here are a few suggestion(引出作者的建议). First , It is important to ______________. Then, it also helps to ___________. Besides, it should be a good idea to __________. You can also ___________. (可以根据要求用不同的句式提出建议，如下) As to __________, I suggest _____________(需要具体到某一方面). In addition, _________(其他的建议). I’m sure ______________(预测可能的结果， 给对方以行为的信心和决心). I hope ____________(表达愿望)。 Yours Sincerely, Li Hua （2025·全国一卷·高考真题）假定你是李华，你班的英语报要增设一个栏目。外教 Jenny 提出“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项供大家选择。请给Jenny写一封邮件，内容包括： (1)你的选择； (2)说明理由。 注意： (1)写作词数应为80个左右； (2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Jenny, I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper. Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】学校活动、申请/请求/建议 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生就外教Jenny提出的校英文报增设一个栏目，在“Fun at my school”和“Guess who I am”两个选项中给出自己的推荐，并说明理由。 【详解】1.词汇积累 表达：express → convey 利用：capitalize on → use 担当：serve as → act as 注意：pay heed to → take notice of 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：Such an inviting column, adopting a “description and guess” approach, must expose everyone to others’ characteristics, thus strengthening mutual understanding. 拓展句：Such an inviting column, which adopts a “description and guess” approach, must expose everyone to others’ characteristics, thus strengthening mutual understanding. 【点睛】【高分句型1】I’m writing to express that my predilection goes to “Guess who I am”, which capitalizes on an object clause to signal its potential contents.（运用了that引导的宾语从句，which引导的定语从句） 【高分句型2】More importantly, more friendships will be forged, since the column enables us to befriend someone on the same wavelength.（运用了since引导的状语从句） 【组句成篇】 Dear Jenny, I really like the idea of adding a new column to our English newspaper. I’m writing to express that my predilection goes to “Guess who I am”, which capitalizes on an object clause to signal its potential contents. The column will serve as a catalyst for closer bonds between students. Redoubling efforts to boost academic performance, we pay little heed to other classmates’ personalities, hobbies, strengths, and even aspirations. Such an inviting column, adopting a “description and guess” approach, must expose everyone to others’ characteristics, thus strengthening mutual understanding. More importantly, more friendships will be forged, since the column enables us to befriend someone on the same wavelength. This eye-catching column, I’m firmly convinced, won’t fail to grant the whole class a harmonious atmosphere. Yours, Li Hua 【第一部分 基础题】 一、单元话题词汇翻译​ 1.__________adv.事实上 2.__________n.(大学或高中)一年级新生 3._________________v.建议 4._______________n.日程安排 5.__________________对……感到困惑 6._____________课外活动 7.____________关注 8.____________对……是适合的 9._____________报名(参加课程) 10._______________跟上;赶上 11.______________提前 答案 1.actually 2.freshman 3.recommend 4.schedule 5.be confused about...6. extra- curricular activities7.focus on 8.be suitable for 9.sign up(for sth. ) 10.keep up with 11.in advance 二、补全句子​ 4 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1.完成句子 第一段:表示理解,表明写信目的 (1) ___________(事实上)，__________ __________ __________ __________ __________ (很多一年级新生都对……感到困惑) high school life. 第二段:根据提示给出建议 (2) I___________(建议)that you__________ __________ __________ __________ ___________(报名参加课外活动) and they can help you make more new friends. (3) You should __________ __________ __________ __________ (做一个合理的日程安排) and __________ __________(关注) your studies. (4)You can __________ __________ __________(跟上) other classmates in the class. (5)You'd better prepare for the new lessons __________ __________(提前). 第三段:表达希望 (6) I hope my suggestions will __________ __________ __________ __________ (适合你). 答案(1)Actually;many freshmen are confused about(2)recommend;sign up for extra-curricular activities (3) make a reasonable schedule; focus on (4)keep up with(5)in advance(6) be suitable for you 2.句式升级 (7)将句(2)升级为含有定语从句的句子 (8) 用so that合并句(3)和句(4) 答案 (7) I recommend that you sign up for extra- curricular activities that/which can help you make more new friends. (8)You should make a reasonable schedule and focus on your studies so that you can keep up with other classmates in the class. 二、连句成篇​ 4 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 请使用恰当的过渡词将以上句子组成一篇建议信。 Dear Jack, Yours, Li Hua 答案： Dear Jack, I am sorry to hear that you're having trouble adjusting to your high school life. Actually, many freshmen are confused about high school life, so don't worry about it too much. I'm writing to offer you some useful advice. To begin with, I recommend that you sign up for extra-curricular activities that/which can help you make more new friends. What's more, you should make a reasonable schedule and focus on your studies so that you can keep up with other classmates in the class. Last but not least, you'd better prepare for the new lessons in advance. I hope my suggestions will be suitable for you and that you will enjoy your high school life. Yours, Li Hua 【第二部分 提升题】 1.（2023·北京·高考真题）假设你是红星中学高三学生李华。你的英国好友Jim正在策划一次以“绿色北京”为主题的社团活动，他发来邮件询问你的建议。请你用英文给他回复，内容包括： (1)活动形式； (2)活动内容。 注意：(1)词数100左右； (2)开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Jim， ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【范文】Dear Jim, Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. You can showcase garbage classification on site, plant trees and publicize sharing economy, which will all fit into the theme of “Green Beijing”. Hopefully, you will get some inspiration from my suggestions. Wish you success. Yours, Li Hua 【知识点】申请/请求/建议 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给好友Jim策划的“绿色北京”社团活动给出一些建议。 【详解】1.词汇积累 建议：suggestion→tip 提供：offer→provide 开展：carry out→conduct 主题：theme→topic 2.句式拓展 同义句转换 原句：Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my d help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. 拓展句：Since you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. 【点睛】[高分句型1] Hearing that you are planning a club activity with the theme of “Green Beijing” and need my help, I am writing to offer you my suggestions. (运用了that引导宾语从句) [高分句型2] I think you can carry out this activity in an interactive and experiential manner, which means students can participate and have a better understanding of “Green Beijing” through getting involved in different activities by themselves. (运用了which引导非限制性定语从句) 2.（2023·新课标Ⅱ卷·高考真题） 假定你是李华，外教Ryan准备将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 说明问题； 2. 提出建议。 注意：   1. 写作词数应为80个左右；   2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Ryan, I’m Li Hua from Class 3. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【范文】Dear Ryan, I’m Li Hua from Class 3. I think it’s not a good idea to randomly pair up students for the spoken English training after class. The reasons are as follows. To begin with, randomly pairing up students may lead to unbalanced language abilities within the groups. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with. My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. This way, everyone can feel more comfortable practicing and improving their spoken English together. Thank you for considering my suggestion. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【知识点】语言学习策略、申请/请求/建议 【导语】本篇是应用文写作，要求考生给外教写一封邮件，告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组，让大家课后练习口语，你认为这样分组存在问题。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 首先：to begin with → first of all 提高：improve → progress 建议：suggestion → advice 选择：choose → select 2. 句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：My suggestion is to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. 拓展句：My suggestion is that we are supposed to group students based on their language abilities or to let students choose their own partners. 【点睛】[高分句型1] This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may dominate the conversation, leaving little room for the other students to improve.（运用了现在分词作状语） [高分句型2] Besides, Students may feel uncomfortable or less motivated if paired with someone who they don’t get along with or have difficulty communicating with.（运用了省略句和who引导定语从句） 3．（2022·上海·高考真题）Directions: Write an English composition in 120-50 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 假设你是明启中学高三学生李明，入冬以来，你校组织全校师生每周一至周五晨跑时间为7:30—7:50，休息5分钟后上第一节课。但有同学反映，晨跑后身体不适，因此学校委托学生会征询大家对晨跑的意见。请你给学生会写一封邮件，内容必须包括： (1) 你认为该晨跑安排中存在的问题； (2) 你的改进建议及理由。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 Dear Student Union, I am Li Ming, a Senior 3 student from Mingqi Middle School. I am writing to share my thoughts on the morning running arrangement. The current morning running from 7:30-7:50 followed by the first class after a 5-minute break has some problems. Firstly, running right before class doesn’t give students enough time to calm down. Secondly, running in the cold winter morning without proper warm - up can be harmful to our health, causing discomfort like muscle strains. I suggest starting the running 15 minutes earlier. This allows 20 minutes for running, 10 minutes for students to relax and adjust before class. Moreover, we should have a 5-minute guided warm-up activity before running. This way, we can better prepare our bodies for exercise and reduce the risk of injury. Thank you for considering my suggestions. Yours sincerely, Li Ming 【知识点】学校活动、体育健身 【导语】本篇书面表达属于应用文。要求考生给学生会写一封邮件，反映晨跑的意见。 【详解】1.词汇积累 导致：causing→ leading to 建议：suggest → advise 此外：moreover→ what’s more 减少，降低：reduce→ decrease 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：I am Li Ming, a Senior 3 student from Mingqi Middle School. 拓展句：I am Li Ming, who is a Senior 3 student from Mingqi Middle School. 【点睛】【高分句型1】Secondly, running in the cold winter morning without proper warm - up can be harmful to our health, causing discomfort like muscle strains.（运用了非谓语动词中的现在分词作状语。） 【高分句型2】The current morning running from 7:30 - 7:50 followed by the first class after a 5 - minute break has some problems.（运用了非谓语动词中的过去分词作后置定语修饰morning running。） 4．（2025·浙江·高考真题）你将参加英语课上的“一分钟演讲”活动。请你针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象写一篇演讲稿，内容包括： (1) 陈述看法； (2) 提出建议。 注意： (1) 写作词数应为80左右； (2) 请按如下格式在答题纸的相应位置作答。 My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【范文】 My Views on Filming Short Videos on Campus Dear classmates, Recently, some of us have been filming short videos on campus. In my opinion, it can be a fun way to record campus life, but it also has its drawbacks. Not only may it distract us from our studies and even disrupt the school order, but it might also cause unnecessary comparisons and affect our self-esteem when the videos don’t get the expected response. I suggest we should limit the time for filming and choose proper places. Let’s focus more on our academic tasks and make good use of our time on campus. Thank you! 【知识点】学校生活、微信/微博/短视频 【导语】本篇书面表达属于演讲稿。要求考生针对部分同学在校园内用手机拍摄短视频的现象陈述看法并提出建议。 【详解】1. 词汇积累 记录：record → document 缺点：drawback → disadvantage 分散注意力：distract → divert 建议：suggest → propose 2. 句式拓展 并列句变复合句 原句：In my opinion, it can be a fun way to record campus life, but it also has its drawbacks. 拓展句：In my opinion, it can be a fun way that we can use to record campus life, but it also has its drawbacks. 【点睛】[高分句型 1] Not only may it distract us from our studies and even disrupt the school order, but it might also cause unnecessary comparisons and affect our self esteem when the videos don’t get the expected response. (运用了not only...but also...并列结构和从属连词when 引导的时间状语从句) [高分句型 2] I suggest we should limit the time for filming and choose proper places. (运用了省略连词that的宾语从句和虚拟语气) 【链接高考—经典诵读】 （2021·全国·高考真题）你校将举办英语演讲比赛。请你以Be smart online learners为题写一篇发言稿参赛，内容包括： 1. 分析优势与不足； 2. 提出学习建议。 注意： 1. 词数100左右; 2. 题目和首句已为你写好。 Be smart online learners ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作欣赏1】 Be smart online learners Online learning is an important way to study recently. And being smart online learners plays a significant role here. Therefore, I’d like to share my opinions regarding of its advantages and disadvantages. Undoubtedly, the Internet is like an endless ocean of knowledge, which could broaden our horizon. Besides, we can study online anytime and anywhere. However, its disadvantages cannot be ignored, one of which is easy to distract those who lacks self-control to things like computer games, TV shows and so on. To be smart online learners, studying online must be a great choice for us. It’s a great choice for us to study online if we are smart online learners. And the key is to make strict plans and reasonable schedules. Most importantly, balance the time of studying and entertaining. 【佳作欣赏2】 Be smart online learners Network learning has increasingly become an important means for people to acquire knowledge and solve problems. But being smart online learners has its advantages and disadvantages. First of all, as smart online learners, we can make full use of the most extensive educational resources to broaden the horizon. Besides, we can take the initiative in our study by ourselves without time and space limit. Of course, these disadvantages are as follows. Faced with all kinds of information on the internet, we can’t tell the difference between the true and the false, which may be harmful to our study and life. On the other hand, online learning itself has some imperfections, making it difficult for us not to be affected. In conclusion, we should have a good understanding of its advantages and disadvantages and find a proper way to make our study more efficient. $$