期末冲刺（书面表达30道）-【刷好题】2024-2025学年八年级英语下册热点题型专练（人教版）

期末冲刺（书面表达30道） 1.假如你是A1an,你检到一块手表，你的联系电话是319-4236，现在你想寻找失主，请写一 份招领启事。Cidy丢了她的绿色尺子，她的联系电话是312-9120，请你帮她写一份寻物启事。 2.假如你是刘琪，现在正在参加学校组织的夏令营(summner camp)活动。你的英国笔友S1san 得知此消息后，非常关心你的住宿情况，请你根据以下图片提示，给她写一封电子邮件，介绍一下 你住的房间。 pictures of animals wall toy bear 要求：1，写电子邮件时须结合图 片，内容可适当发挥：2.不少于5句话。电子邮件的格式和开头已给出，不计入总句数。 Dear Susan, I'm in our school's summer camp now.I have a nice room. Yours, Liu Qi 3.同学们，你们的教室一定很漂亮吧。请以“My Class”为题描述一下你班级。 要求： 1.不能出现真实的姓名。 2.字数不少于50词。 My Class 4.假如你是李林，你邀请了来自美国的新同学Toy到你家做客。现在请你根据下面的图片提 示，向Toy简单介绍一下你的房间。 提示词：soccer ball足球，flower花；window(窗户) 要求：(1)语句通顺，语义连贯： (2)完整地介绍图片中的内容： (3)不少于60词： (4)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校信息。 5.假如你是李雪，美国的朋友玛丽非常想了解你在学校的事情。请根据下面的提示写一封信， 介绍一下你今天在学校做的事情。 写作要点： 1.表达自己在收到来信后的心情。 2.告诉她今天你所做的事情。 (1)把飞机模型放在了书橱里，把教室打扫干净了。 (2)找到了汤姆丢失的一串钥匙，并拨打了他的电话(6543-6521) 3.通过今天所做的事情，告诉玛丽你的收获。 写作要求： 1.不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 2.可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3.字迹工整，语言精炼，表达准确，条理清晰。 4.至少60词。开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mary, How are you? Looking forward to your reply! Best wishes! Yours, Li Xue 6.英国女孩安(An)想在中国找一个笔友，假如你是李可可，请你根据以下的提示和要求用 英文给Am写一封信。向她介绍自己的姓名、年龄、电话号码和房间。 提示： 1.你叫李可可，12岁。电话：13977809366 2.你的房间里有一张蓝色的床，床下有收音机和一些电脑游戏： 3.你的房间里还有书桌、椅子和书柜： 4.书和磁带在书柜里，铅笔盒和书包在书桌上，椅子下面有一个棒球。 要求： 1.句子通顺、语意连贯、字迹工整： 2.包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 3.60词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Ann, How are you?I know you want to find a Chinese friend. Yours, Keke 7.假如你是袁建，因你父母参与鄂州花湖机场建设，本学期你跟随其搬迁来鄂州。请你根据 以下提示给你的英国笔友Tom写一封邮件，告诉他你的近况。 提示： L.天气和穿着：hot,Wet,T-shirt,shorts 2.上学的路线：walk along,turn left,crossing 3.新交的朋友：tall,short hair,friendly 要求： 1.包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 2.内容连贯，逻辑通顺，表达清晰： 3.60词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Tom, How are you?Now let me tell you about my life in Ezhou. Please write back soon. Yuanjian 8.请根据下列提示，介绍你朋友王峰的家乡，70词左右。 1.他的家乡是无锡，是一座美丽的城市，那儿的空气清新。 2.他住在一个现代化的(modern)城镇，镇上有家剧场，还有一个美丽的公园。 3.早晨人们喜欢在公园慢跑(j0g),公园是他最喜欢的地方，因为在那里可以和很多朋友聊天。 4.他非常喜欢他的家乡，我们盼望着(1 ook fo1 ward to)游览他的家乡。 9.假如你是王林，在无锡游览度假。请你写一封信给家乡的好朋友罗宾介绍无锡。请根据所 给要点完成这封90词左右的信。开头、结尾均已给出，不计入总词数。 1.无锡在过去的二十年中变化很大。过去，道路狭窄。如今，马路宽阔，两边绿树成荫。以前，人 们主要靠公共汽车出行。现在，地铁使得人们往来于市中心变得更方便快捷。 2.无锡有许多美景。来这里的最佳时间是春秋两季。 3.你希望…（此处用2-3句话作适当发挥） Hi,Luo Bin, How are you?I miss you so much!I've been in Wuxi for three days. Yours, Wang Lin l0.假如你是李华，上周六参加了学校“环保俱乐部(Saving the Environment Club)”组织 的志愿者活动。请根据以下提示，请给你的笔友Peter写一封电子邮件，向他介绍这次活动，并谈 谈你对志愿者工作的看法。 要求： 1.包括所有提示内容，行文通顺连贯，可适当发挥： 2.词数：80词左右（邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 时间 活动 张贴标语 分发广告(advertisements) 上周六 帮忙打扫卫生 打扫公园… 你的看法 Dear Peter, Last Saturday,I took part in the volunteer activities organized by Saving the Environment Club. Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua Il.动物是人类的朋友。学校英语俱乐部将组织题为“My favourite animal”的征文比赛， 请结合上文内容和下列提示，写一篇短文参赛。 1.What does it look like? 2.What's its lifestyle? 3.Why do you love it? 注意事项： (1)词数：80词左右： (2)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息： (3)文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。 My favourite animal 12.你孩童时代特别喜欢并保留至今的东西是什么呢？请根据以下要点写一篇短文，介绍一下 吧。 1.How long have you had it?2.How did you get it? 3.Why do you like it so much?4.Can you say anything more about it? 提示：1.短文应包括以上所有要点信息，要求条理清楚，行文连贯：2.词数不少于80，开头已给出， 不计入总词数。 My favorite thing from childhood is I3.三年的初中生活马上就要结束了。这三年中你一定学到了很多东西。请你以“Thanks for Our School”为题，写一篇短文，内容包括三年里你有什么收获，你对学校的看法，以及你 即将毕业要为学校做些什么。80词左右 提示词：1 earn a lot:1 eave school 期末冲刺（书面表达30道） 1．假如你是Alan，你捡到一块手表，你的联系电话是319-4236，现在你想寻找失主，请写一份招领启事。Cindy丢了她的绿色尺子，她的联系电话是312-9120，请你帮她写一份寻物启事。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文： Found I’m Alan. I found a watch this morning. Is it your watch? Please call me at 319-4236. Lost Cindy lost her ruler. It’s green. Her telephone number is 312-9120. Please call her. 【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，写出招领启事及寻物启事的具体内容，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。 2. 写作指导：写作时要使用简练的语言来介绍内容；人称以第一人称及第三人称为主；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，叙述有条理，要做到言简意赅。 2．假如你是刘琪，现在正在参加学校组织的夏令营(summer camp)活动。你的英国笔友Susan得知此消息后，非常关心你的住宿情况，请你根据以下图片提示，给她写一封电子邮件，介绍一下你住的房间。 要求：1. 写电子邮件时须结合图片，内容可适当发挥；2. 不少于5句话。电子邮件的格式和开头已给出，不计入总句数。 Dear Susan, I’m in our school’s summer camp now. I have a nice room. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Liu Qi 【答案】例文： Dear Susan, I’m in our school’s summer camp now. I have a nice room. A bed, a sofa, a bookcase, a desk and a chair are in it. There is a computer on the desk. Some pictures of animals and a clock are on the wall. I like the toy bear on the sofa. It’s brown. A phone is on the sofa, too. You can call me at 638-7599. Yours, Liu Qi 【详解】1.题干解读：题干要求根据图片内容介绍自己的房间，写作时应承接开头，将图片中的物品介绍齐全，可适当添加细节。 2.写作指导：本文应以第三人称描述房间里的物品，时态采用一般现在时，先介绍大件家具，再描述具体装饰物以及它们的位置。写作时注意主谓一致，适当变化句型，避免单一重复。 3．同学们，你们的教室一定很漂亮吧。请以“My Class”为题描述一下你班级。 要求： 1.不能出现真实的姓名。 2.字数不少于50词。 My Class _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考例文： My Class This is my classroom. It’s big and bright. There is a teacher’s desk, a shelf, a computer and two boards. There are many desks and chairs, too. The curtains are green. The fans are white. The books are on the shelf. The computer is on the teacher’s desk. I like my classroom. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求根据“My Class”为题，写一篇关于自己班级的作文。 2.写作指导：本文时态采用一般现在时；人称以第三人称为主。写作时语句要通顺，无单词语法错误。 4．假如你是李林，你邀请了来自美国的新同学Tony到你家做客。现在请你根据下面的图片提示，向Tony 简单介绍一下你的房间。 提示词：soccer ball足球，flower 花；window（窗户） 要求：(1)语句通顺，语义连贯； (2)完整地介绍图片中的内容； (3)不少于60词； (4)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校信息。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： This is my bedroom. It’s nice and big. There is a bed and a desk in it. The bed is yellow. My schoolbag is on the bed. I like soccer. Look! My soccer ball is under the desk. And some books are on the desk. Some flowers are on it, too. I like my bedroom very much. 【详解】1.题目解读：本文是一篇看图作文，根据图片介绍自己的房间。 2.写作指导：本文采用第三人称书写，时态是一般现在时。图片中涉及比较多的方位，注意正确使用方位介词。 5．假如你是李雪，美国的朋友玛丽非常想了解你在学校的事情。请根据下面的提示写一封信，介绍一下你今天在学校做的事情。 写作要点： 1.表达自己在收到来信后的心情。 2.告诉她今天你所做的事情。 （1）把飞机模型放在了书橱里，把教室打扫干净了。 （2）找到了汤姆丢失的一串钥匙，并拨打了他的电话（6543-6521） 3.通过今天所做的事情，告诉玛丽你的收获。 写作要求： 1. 不得使用真实的姓名和学校名。 2. 可适当加入细节，使内容充实，行文连贯。 3. 字迹工整，语言精炼，表达准确，条理清晰。       4. 至少60词。开头结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear Mary, How are you? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply! Best wishes! Yours, Li Xue 【答案】例文 Dear Mary, How are you? I’m glad to hear from you. I did a lot of things today. I want to share with you. First, I put the model planes in the bookcase. Then I cleaned up the classroom and kept all things in order. In the classroom I found a set of keys which belonged to Tom. I called him at 6543-6521. I was tired but happy. Looking forward to your reply! Best wishes! Yours, Li Xue 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。向朋友玛丽介绍自己所做的事情以及自己的收获。 2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般过去时。先表达自己收到来信的心情，再描述自己今天都做了哪些事情，最后阐述自己的收获。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 6．英国女孩安（Ann）想在中国找一个笔友，假如你是李可可，请你根据以下的提示和要求用英文给Ann写一封信。向她介绍自己的姓名、年龄、电话号码和房间。 提示： 1. 你叫李可可，12岁。电话：13977809366 2. 你的房间里有一张蓝色的床，床下有收音机和一些电脑游戏； 3. 你的房间里还有书桌、椅子和书柜； 4. 书和磁带在书柜里，铅笔盒和书包在书桌上，椅子下面有一个棒球。 要求： 1. 句子通顺、语意连贯、字迹工整； 2. 包含所有提示内容，可适当发挥； 3. 60词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Ann, How are you? I know you want to find a Chinese friend. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Keke 【答案】例文 Dear Ann, How are you? I know you want to find a Chinese friend. My name is Li Keke. I'm 12 years old. My telephone number is 13977809366. This is my room. A bed, a desk, a chair and a bookcase are in it. My bed is blue. A radio and some computer games are under it. My books and tapes are in the bookcase. My pencil box and schoolbag are on the desk. My baseball is under the chair. I like my room. Yours, Keke 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文写作，要求按照所给的要点提示写一封信给安，介绍自己。注意写作时要点要齐全，同时也可进行合理而又紧扣主题的发挥。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第一、三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时；文章开头已给出，写作时，注意承接上文，根据要点提示具体介绍自己的姓名、年龄、电话号码和房间；文中一定要包含题干中列出的所有要点；可以运用一些短语和常用句型为文章增添色彩；注意单词书写的准确度，语法运用的准确度，上下文注意连接的流畅度，以及逻辑合理。 7．假如你是袁建，因你父母参与鄂州花湖机场建设，本学期你跟随其搬迁来鄂州。请你根据以下提示给你的英国笔友Tom 写一封邮件，告诉他你的近况。 提示： 1.天气和穿着: hot ，wet，T-shirt ，shorts 2.上学的路线： walk along，turn left ，crossing 3.新交的朋友： tall，short hair，friendly 要求： 1.包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥； 2.内容连贯，逻辑通顺，表达清晰； 3.60词左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 Dear Tom, How are you? Now let me tell you about my life in Ezhou. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Please write back soon. Yuanjian 【答案】One possible version: Dear Tom, How are you? Now let me tell you about my life in EZhou. The weather is hot and wet here at this time. I usually wear a T-shirt and shorts. I live near my school. To get there, I just walk along the road in front of my home and turn left on the second crossing. I have a new friend here, His name is Li Ping. He is a tall boy with short hair. He is friendly to me. Please write back soon. Yuanjian 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇电子邮件。向笔友Tom介绍自己的近况。 2.写作指导：本文主要采用一般现在时。从天气，穿着，上学路线以及朋友等方面来介绍自己的近况。写作时保持主谓一致性，做到无语法和标点错误。 8．请根据下列提示，介绍你朋友王峰的家乡，70词左右。 1.他的家乡是无锡，是一座美丽的城市，那儿的空气清新。 2.他住在一个现代化的（modern）城镇，镇上有家剧场，还有一个美丽的公园。 3.早晨人们喜欢在公园慢跑（jog），公园是他最喜欢的地方，因为在那里可以和很多朋友聊天。 4.他非常喜欢他的家乡，我们盼望着（look forward to）游览他的家乡。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Wang Feng is a friend of mine. His hometown is in Wuxi. It is a beautiful city. The air is fresh there. He lives in a modern town. There is a theater in town. There is also a beautiful park. People like jogging in the park in the morning. The park is his favorite place because he can chat with many friends there. He likes his hometown very much. We are looking forward to visiting his hometown. 【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据提示内容介绍一下朋友王峰的家乡，要包含所有要点，70词左右。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第三人称为主，时态采用一般现在时。文章可采用一段式写作，介绍王峰的家乡时要包含文中提示的四条信息，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。 9．假如你是王林，在无锡游览度假。请你写一封信给家乡的好朋友罗宾介绍无锡。请根据所给要点完成这封90词左右的信。开头、结尾均已给出，不计入总词数。 1.无锡在过去的二十年中变化很大。过去，道路狭窄。如今，马路宽阔，两边绿树成荫。以前，人们主要靠公共汽车出行。现在，地铁使得人们往来于市中心变得更方便快捷。 2.无锡有许多美景。来这里的最佳时间是春秋两季。 3.你希望……(此处用2-3句话作适当发挥) Hi, Luo Bin, How are you? I miss you so much! I’ve been in Wuxi for three days. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Wang Lin 【答案】Hi, Luo Bin, How are you? I miss you so much! I’ve been in Wuxi for three days. I’d like to introduce this place to you. Wuxi has changed a lot over the past twenty years. In the past, most of the roads were narrow. But now there are broads with green trees on both sides. People used to travel by bus, but now the underground has made it easier and faster for people to travel to and from the city center. There are many beautiful places of interest in Wuxi. Spring and autumn are the best time to visit it. I hope Wuxi will become much more beautiful in the future and you can come and visit it some day! Yours, Wang Lin 【详解】1.题干解读：这篇作文要求学生们以王林的身份给好友罗宾写信，给他介绍无锡这个地方。题目中列出了文章中应包括的要点，如无锡二十年来发生的变化、无锡的美景等，学生可以此为基础，适当增加细节，并用正确的英语表达出来。 2.写作指导：审题可知，这篇作文采用一般现在时态和一般过去时态，注意谓语动词的正确形式。写作时应注意将题目中规定的要点都包括在内，并分清层次。注意英语句式结构的特点和与汉语表达习惯的不同，不要逐词翻译。以简单句结构为基础，穿插并列句和复合句以及其他句式的使用，提升作文档次。同时注意上下文意的衔接，使文意连贯、表达流畅。 10．假如你是李华，上周六参加了学校“环保俱乐部 (Saving the Environment Club)”组织的志愿者活动。请根据以下提示，请给你的笔友Peter写一封电子邮件，向他介绍这次活动，并谈谈你对志愿者工作的看法。 要求： 1.包括所有提示内容，行文通顺连贯，可适当发挥； 2.词数：80词左右（邮件开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 时  间 活  动 上周六 张贴标语 分发广告(advertisements) 帮忙打扫卫生 打扫公园…… 你的看法 …… Dear Peter, Last Saturday, I took part in the volunteer activities organized by Saving the Environment Club.___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Peter, Last Saturday, I took part in the volunteer activities organized by Saving the Environment Club. Some of us put up posters. Some gave out advertisements. Others swept the streets. We also helped clean up the city parks. When we finished all the work, we were tired but very happy. I think it’s fantastic and meaningful to be a volunteer. What do you think of doing volunteer work? Please write back soon! Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】1.题干解读：本文要求根据内容提示，给笔友Peter写一封电子邮件，向他介绍学校“环保俱乐部”组织的志愿者活动，并谈谈对志愿者工作的看法。要包含所有要点，并适当发挥。 2.写作指导：本文时态主要为一般过去时，采用第一人称来书写。写作时可分为两段式：第一段介绍此次活动以及谈谈对志愿者活动的看法；第二段询问Peter的看法，并期待收到回信。在写作时应该注意符合题意，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。 11．动物是人类的朋友。学校英语俱乐部将组织题为“My favourite animal”的征文比赛，请结合上文内容和下列提示，写一篇短文参赛。 1. What does it look like? 2. What’s its lifestyle? 3. Why do you love it? 注意事项： (1) 词数：80词左右； (2)文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息； (3)文章必须包含所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺。 My favourite animal ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文： My favourite animal I have a lovely dog, and it’s my favorite animal. It’s a young dog. It’s black and white. I call it Nancy. It’s only one year old. When I do my homework in my bedroom, it usually plays on my bed. It likes playing with me. We go to the park every evening. When I am lying on the grass, it will sit near me. It can help me do many things and make me smile. All my friends love my dog very much! What a lovely dog it is! I love my dog and it loves me too! 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以“My favourite animal”为题，结合提示问题进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为三段，第一段主要介绍动物的长相；第二段介绍它的生活方式；第三段介绍对它的喜欢它。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 12．你孩童时代特别喜欢并保留至今的东西是什么呢？请根据以下要点写一篇短文，介绍一下吧。 1. How long have you had it?    2. How did you get it? 3. Why do you like it so much?    4. Can you say anything more about it? 提示：1.短文应包括以上所有要点信息，要求条理清楚，行文连贯；2.词数不少于80，开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My favorite thing from childhood is_____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My favorite thing from childhood is my teddy bear. I have had it since I was five years old. My grandmother gave it to me on my birthday. I like the teddy bear so much because it’s dressed in my favorite color. It’s special to me because my grandmother made it for me. The teddy bear has given me many good memories. I remember when I was young and I was scared at night because I didn’t like the dark. I held my teddy bear to feel safe. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求介绍自己孩童时代特别喜欢并保留至今的东西，要点包括：拥有了多长时间、如何得到的、为什么如此喜欢以及更多关于此物的信息。 2.写作指导：本文以第一人称和第三人称为主，多种时态综合运用来行文。针对细节部分可适当发挥，注意保证主谓一致性；写作时注意按照要点分段叙述，保证文章条理清晰，语句通顺。 13．三年的初中生活马上就要结束了。这三年中你一定学到了很多东西。请你以“Thanks for Our School”为题， 写一篇短文，内容包括三年里你有什么收获，你对学校的看法，以及你即将毕业要为学校做些什么。80词左右 提示词：learn a lot; leave school ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考例文： Thanks for Our School Our junior high school life will come to an end. Before leaving, I’d like to say thanks to my dear school. Our school provides us with a good study place. We have had a wonderful time here. In our school, we have so many excellent teachers who we have learnt a lot from in the past three years. Our school never gives up every single student which is one of the most important traditions in our school. I’ll keep these good traditions wherever I go. I’ll try my best to be the pride of our school. I do hope that our school will be better and better. 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于话题作文写作。要求以“Thanks for Our School”为题，来表达你对你们学校的感激之情，内容上要包含：你在学校的收获、对学校的看法以及毕业后要为学校做些什么。注意要点齐全。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称和第三人称相结合来行文，时态以一般现在时为主。写作时注意保持主谓一致性，在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。做到无语法和标点错误。 14．假期中你一定有很多有意义的经历吧，也许你和朋友、家人去旅行过，又或者参加过某个有意义的活动。请简述一下假期中你认为有意义的一段经历。词数：70词左右。开头已给出，不计入总词数。 I went to the Fuyun Hill near my city in summer holiday. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： I went to the Fuyun Hill near my city in summer holiday. But I had never been there before. I went there with my friends by bike. First we climbed the hill. At about 11 o'clock we got to the top. I could see the whole city from the top of the hill. It was so beautiful. At noon we had a picnic on the grass. In the afternoon we met some students from other schools. We played games together and they also told interesting stories to us. We chatted and laughed happily. We had a great day. That day is interesting and meaningful for me. I'll never forget it. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，要求介绍自己假期中有意义的一段经历，可以是旅行，也可以是参加的活动等；写作时注意叙述经历的内容及个人感悟。 2.写作指导：文章以第一人称、一般过去时为主，注意主谓一致问题；写作时可按照时间发展顺序记叙经历内容；注意文章条理清晰，语句通顺。 15．假如你是李华，你远在北京的朋友刘涛听说滨海第三次成功的创建了“江苏省文明城市”非常开心，他想了解滨海的城市魅力。请你根据提示写一封信告诉他你的家乡滨海的情况。词数80词左右，记得秀出你漂亮的英文书写哦。 Dear Liu Tao, I'm writing to tell you about my hometown—Binhai.______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you can come and visit Binhai someday. Best wishes Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Liu Tao, I’m writing to tell you about my hometown—Binhai. Binhai is in the north of Jiangsu. It is near the sea. It is a beautiful city. The people in Binhai are kind and helpful. They are always ready to help others. People usually go to Yinsha Square for shopping. There are all kinds of shops and the things are not expensive. During the holiday, people can go to the Moon Bay to enjoy the beautiful sea and beaches there. Local people like the South Lake Park very much. They often go jogging there. I hope you can come and visit Binhai someday. Best wishes Li Hua 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于说明文写作，但写作时要按邮件格式写。在写作时应承接短文开头。材料内容即正文，要全部囊括其中。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第三人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时为主；需要叙述完整，保证条理清晰。 16．Write a passage of at least 60 words about the topic “… brings me happiness” (以“… brings me happiness”为题写一篇不少于60词的短文，标点符号不占格) __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Reading brings me happiness My life is full of happiness because of reading. It brings me a lot of knowledge as well as plenty of improvement. Besides, reading can reduce my time on watching TV and playing computer games. I can spend more time on my subjects. What’s more, reading is also extremely necessary in my study life, with which I can make great progress. All in all, reading has brought me so much happiness that I can hardly stop reading. I strongly recommend you to read more books and get more useful information. 【详解】1.题干解读：这是一篇话题写作，这个题目要求我们将标题补充完整，并围绕“……带给我快乐”这个主题结合自身经历写一篇不少于60字的短文。 2.写作指导：写作时应注意以下几点：第一点：写作时应用一般现在时、第一人称来叙述。注意格式规范，符合语境表达。第二点：内容上写作者需要结合自身经历来谈谈给自己带来快乐的是什么、如何带给自己快乐以及自己的想法。第三点：文章要选用合适的连词、短语和句型来进行串联和拓展，如besides；as well as；what’s more；all in all等。第四点：文章做到思路清晰，层次分明，要点齐全；行文要语句通顺，符合逻辑关系；无语法、单词拼写和标点错误。 17．美丽中国，美丽太湖。苏州是太湖边上一座美丽的花园城市。假如你是苏州某中学的一名中学生李明，请你根据以下表格内的提示要点，以“美丽的苏州”为话题，用英语写一篇90字左右的短文，向你的英国笔友Tom介绍一下美丽城市——苏州。 地理位置 江苏的南面 历史文化 历史悠久 自20世纪早期以来以现代工厂而闻名 自然环境 旅游最佳是春季  推荐一处旅游地并说明推荐理由 苏州人正努力地保护环境，..... (请举出2个具体事例) Dear Tom, Thanks for your last letter. Now I’m writing to introduce my hometown. Suzhou is a beautiful garden city by Taihu Lake. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’d like to invite you to my hometown. I believe you will have a good time here. Looking forward to your visit! Best wishes, Li Ming 【答案】例文 Dear Tom, Thanks for your last letter. Now I’m writing to introduce my hometown. Suzhou is a beautiful garden city by Taihu Lake. It’s in the south of Jiangsu. Suzhou has a long history and many famous people come from our city. It has been famous for its modern factories since the early twentieth century. The best time to visit Suzhou is spring. You can visit the Suzhou museum. You can learn a lot about historical things. Now the people in Suzhou are trying to protect the natural environment. For example, we plant trees as many as possible every year. We stop factories from throwing rubbish into the rivers. I’d like to invite you to my hometown. I believe you will have a good time here. Looking forward to your visit! Best wishes, Li Ming 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文。根据文中所给的提示材料，向对方介绍自己的家乡——苏州。 2.写作指导：本文采用一般现在时。从地理位置，历史文化，自然环境等方面介绍苏州的情况，最后表达期盼着对方来苏州旅游。写作时保持主谓一致性，逻辑性要强，无语法和标点错误。 18．根据中文和英文提示，写出意思连贯、符合逻辑、不少于60词的短文，所给提示词语仅供选用，请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 “读万卷书，行万里路”。旅行让人开阔眼界，增长知识。在你的旅行经历中，有哪一段经 历是最令你难忘的呢？你去了什么地方？经历了些什么？你的感受如何？请以“An unforgettable travel experience”为题，分享你最难忘的旅行经历。 提示词语：beach, visit, take photos, enjoy, wonderful 提示问题： Where did you go and who did you go with? What did you do there? How do you feel? ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I won’t forget the first time I traveled alone forever. Last summer vacation, I went to the summer camp in Yunnan. At first, I was kind of afraid because it was the first time I traveled alone. But my parents encouraged me a lot. Then I met many kids and we became good friends. We went to climb the mountain together happily and helped each other on the way. At last, we got to the top of the mountain. We had a picnic there. We were all very excited. I learned a lot from this experience. I know how to deal with problems when I face them. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。以“An unforgettable travel experience”为题，分享你最难忘的旅行经历。 2.写作指导：本文时态以一般过去时为主。人称采用第一人称行文。写作时按照提示问题进行写作，可围绕话题适当发挥使行文连贯，确保语句通顺，无单词语法错误。 19．同学们，你们一定听过《守株待兔》的故事吧。请根据下面的提示，写一篇80词左右的英语短文。 提示： 1. 一位农夫在田里干活的时候看到一只野兔撞在了树桩上； 2. 农夫把野兔拿回家，做了一顿美餐； 3. 之后，农夫每天都守在树桩旁，希望能再次碰到撞死的野兔。 提示词：hare野兔；run into撞到；tree stump树桩；by accident偶然 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Once upon a time, there was a farmer. One day, while he was working in the field, he saw a hare run into a tree stump by accident and die. The farmer took the hare home and cooked a delicious meal for himself. That night, he thought, “I don't have to work so hard. All I have to do is to wait for a hare every day by the tree stump.” So from then on, he gave up farming, and waited by the tree stump. But just from then on, he never saw another hare run into the tree stump. This story tells us we will get nothing unless we work hard. Remember: no pain, no gain. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明故事发生的时间； 第二步，陈述故事的具体内容，讲述《守株待兔》的故事； 第三步，抒发故事引发的感悟并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①once upon a time从前 ②by accident意外地，偶然地 ③from then on从那时起 ④give up doing sth放弃做某事 [高分句型] ①One day, while he was working in the field, he saw a hare run into a tree stump by accident and die.（while引导的时间状语从句） ②All I have to do is to wait for a hare every day by the tree stump.（省略引导词that的定语从句，动词不定式作表语） ③Remember: no pain, no gain.（谚语） 20．近日，面对生态环境不断恶化，很多野生动物生存越来越难的问题。我校英语俱乐部正在开展以Wildlife Protection为主题的征文活动，希望同学们能够献计献策。 内容：1. Why are many wild animals in danger? 2. What should we do to protect them? 要求：（1）将题目补全； （2）中心突出，语义连贯，层次清晰，书写规范； （3）词数不少于70。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Let's protect the wild animals together Facing the deteriorating ecological environment, many wild animals are finding it more and more difficult to survive. Do you know why they are in danger? There are many reasons. Because human beings cut down a lot of trees and turn farmland into building land, wild animals don’t have a safe place to live. And there isn’t enough clean water for them. We should take action to protect them. We can give money to some organizations to help protect them. We mustn’t hunt for or kill them. What’s more, we should make rational use of forests and grasslands. Let's act together to create a harmonious nature. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文。要求以Wildlife Protection为主题，根据提示内容为活动献计献策，注意要点要齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第一和第三人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文可分为两段，第一段介绍为什么许多野生动物处于危险之中；第二段介绍我们应该做些什么来保护它们；第三段用呼吁进行收尾。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 21．Write at least 60 words on the topic: ________ changed me! 以“ _______ 改变了我”为题, 写一篇不少于60个单词的短文， 要求内容适切，意思连贯，标点符号不占格。 （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名，学校及其相关信息，否则不予评分） Suggested topic： Reading/Doing sports/ Helping fight against pollution/Doing housework/My teacher/My mother… changed me! _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Music changed me! Everyone has his own hobby, and it may give him lots of happiness. My hobby is listening to music. When I was a child, I enjoyed listening to music, especially the cartoon music, though I wasn’t good at it. I often lost myself in it. When I am in trouble, music can make me calm down. When I am very tired, it can make me comfortable. When I am angry with something, it also can make me happy again. Listening to music keeps me in a good mood and it’s good for my health. Do you like listening to music? If not, hope you can have a try, you will find it beneficial. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇命题作文，介绍什么改变了我，可以从文中提示的话题中选择一个，要求要点覆盖全面，可适当扩充；注意写作时要点齐全，同时也要紧扣主题。 2. 写作指导：本文使用一般现在时态和，人称用第一人称，写作时，注意表达观点时的常用句式和when引导的时间状语从句，内容上应注意描述的全面性；语言的表述应该符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯。 22．你校的朋辈社团旨在为学生的健康、快乐成长提供帮助。最近朋辈社团开展了一个Tell Us活动，倾听同学们学习与生活中的烦恼并给予帮助。假定你是社团成员Jerry，你收到了Emily的一封倾诉信，请根据来信要点写一封回信并给出建议。 问题 建议 家庭方面 父母经常出差，感到孤独 和父母多分享你的感受 学习方面 英语学习困难，不敢在同学们面前发言 1.多向老师求助 2……. 人际方面 与好朋友吵架了 ……. 参考词汇:quarrel 争吵 要求: (1)词数 80 左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。(2)涵盖所有要点，并适当发挥，语意连贯，书写规范。(3)文中请勿出现真实的校名、班级和姓名等个人信息。 Dear Emily, I feel sorry to hear of your problems. In your letter, you said that __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours,   Jerry 【答案】例文： Dear Emily, I feel sorry to hear about your problems. In your letter, you said you were lonely and your parents were always on business. I suggest that you find some time to sit down and have a heart-to-heart talk with them, and tell them your feelings and thoughts, which will help you to study in peace of mind. To solve the problems of your English learning, you should ask your teachers for help if you can’t understand in class, and practice your oral English with your classmates if you can’t speak in front of your classmates. You can also take part in some English corner activities after class. I’m sorry to hear that you quarreled with your friend. But don’t worry, please remember communication is the most important. Find out the key to the problem and apologize to him. I’m sure he’ll forgive you soon. Hope the above suggestions can help you, waiting for your good news.                                                              Yours, Jerry 【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求根据提示要点，写出朋友遇到的问题以及对应给出自己的一些意见和具体的做法，可以适当的发挥，写作时要运用正确的英语表达，要选用恰当的词汇和短语。 2. 写作指导：写作时要与已给出的开头融合起来，本文应该用第一人称、第二人称来介绍内容；时态采用一般现在时和一般过去时相结合，提出建议可以多用情态动词；在介绍内容时，力求语言准确，内容完整，保证行文连贯，条理清晰。 23．在世界历史文化长河中流传着许多家喻户晓的故事，有奇妙的中国传说，有美好的西方童话，从愚公移山到白雪公主，从美猴王到灰姑娘，从后羿射日到皇帝的新装……。人们每每诵读讲述都会倍感鼓舞，深受启迪。作为本届英语故事大赛的参赛选手，你想和大家分享谁的故事呢？现在就动动小手写下来吧！ 要求：1.可以从以上提示中选取故事，也可以选自己喜欢的其他故事。 2.内容包括：故事及故事给我们的启迪。 3.不能出现真实的学校名称、人名及其他真实信息。 4.100词左右。开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Hello, everyone! I feel honored to share the story of… with you._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s the story of … Hope you enjoy it! 【答案】参考例文： Hello, everyone! I feel honored to share the story of Yu Gong with you. Once upon a time, there lived an old man called Yu Gong. There were two mountains near his house. They were so big that it took a long time to walk to the other side. To solve this problem, Yu Gong told his family that he wanted to move the mountains and he needed their help. All his family members agreed so they started digging the next day. They worked day after day, night after night. One day, when a man saw Yu Gong and his family working, he said it was impossible for Yu Gong to move the mountains because he was old and weak. But Yu Gong said his family could continue doing it after he died. Yu Gong’s spirit moved the God so he sent two gods to take the mountains away. Seeing this, all the family members jumped with joy. This story tells us we never know what is possible unless we try to make it happen. Besides, if we have a big dream, we should try our best to make it come true. That’s the story of Yu Gong. Hope you enjoy it! 【详解】1. 题干解读：题目要求和大家分享故事；要求包含所有提示内容。 2. 写作指导：此作文时态主要以一般过去时为主；可采用三段落格式，第一段：引出主题；第二段：详细阐述故事内容；第三段：阐述故事给我们的启迪。可以围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等；语言的表述要符合语法的结构，造句应该符合英语的表达习惯；层次要分明、条理要清晰。 24．假设你叫Frank,你英国的笔友Simon 想了解你的生活，下面是他给你第一次写来的交友电邮，向你询问了各方面的信息和情况，请根据电邮要点，给他写一封回信。回信开头已给出，不计入总字数。 Dear Frank, I’m glad to write to you. I’m Simon from the UK. I’m in Year 8 at a mixed school near London. I like meeting different people, and I want to travel around the world when I grow up. I am interested in DIY. Can you tell me about your looks, personality(性格) or hobbies? Do you like DIY? Why or why not? I heard you went on a school trip last month. Could you tell me something about the trip? What’s your future plan? I really look forward to hearing from you soon. Best wishes, Simon 注意：1. 文章须包括所有要点，并有简要但适当的发挥； 2. 词数100 词左右，文章开头已给出，不计入总字数； 3. 请注意恰当分段，关注书写整洁。 Dear Simon, I am glad to write back to you to introduce myself and something about my life. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best wishes, Frank 【答案】例文： Dear Simon, I am glad to write back to you to introduce myself and something about my life. My name is Frank. I’m 15 years old. I am of medium height. I wear a pair of glasses. I have short black hair. I’m an outgoing boy. I like making friends with others. I have many hobbies. I love playing basketball and football, listening to music and playing the guitar. As for DIY, I don't like it at all, because I think it’s boring. And I like fruit very much. I think it’s healthy. My favorite subject is English. I think it's interesting and useful. Last Sunday, all the students and teachers of Class 2 , Grade 8 had an exciting school trip to the West Hill Park.We met at the school gate at 7: 30 a.m. Then we took the bus there. It was sunny when we got there. Then we climbed the mountain. At the top of the mountain we sang, played games and flew a kite. We were excited. In the afternoon we went home. We felt tired but happy. I plan to play football in the future. I want to be an athlete. Best wishes, Frank 【详解】1.题干解读：该题目属于材料作文，写作时要根据提纲提示进行书面表达，要围绕主题准确使用一定的语法、词汇、短语和句型等，清楚连贯地表达自己的思想，进而完成写作任务。 2.写作指导：本文应该用第一人称来叙述；时态采用一般现在时，注意题干中的所有要点都要包括在内，并运用适当的关联词进行衔接，使得文章过渡自然，具有条理性。 25．时光荏苒，转眼大家已经步入九年级。回想过去两年的初中生活，你是否觉得自己改变了许多？请你根据以下提示，以“Some Changes in My Life”为题写一篇英语短文，谈一谈自从上初中后，你在哪些方面发生了变化。 提示：1. 介绍你生活中的变化； 2. 你对这些变化的看法。 要求：1. 包括以上内容要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； 2.80词左右，标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 Some Changes in My Life How time flies! It has been two years since I went to the middle school._____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Some Changes in My Life How time flies! It has been two years since I went to the middle school. My life has changed a lot. I used to have a lot of time to play, but now I have to study all day. I used to spend a lot of time playing sports, but now I stay at home and do homework. I used to listen to BBC and some music programs, but now I am often busy preparing for tests. I used to read a lot of cartoon books, but now I have to read textbooks. I really miss the old days. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文。要求以“Some Changes in My Life”为题，结合提示问题进行写作，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态以一般过去时为主。作文要分别介绍生活中的变化以及对这些变化的看法。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 26．坚持是一种可贵的品格，某英文网站正在开展以坚持为主题的征文活动。假如你是李华，请用英语写一篇短文投稿，谈谈你在生活中坚持做的一件事情（如爱好、习惯等），你是怎样做的，以及你有什么感受。 要求： 1. 不少于50词，文中已给出内容不计入总词数。 2. 所给提示词语仅供选用。 3. 请不要写出你的校名和姓名。 提示词语: catch up with, practice, try my best, proud 提示问题： ● What do you keep doing in your life? ● How do you develop it? ● What do you think of it? It’s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals.__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： It’s important for us to keep trying to achieve our goals. I love running and I have kept running for three years. When I was in Grade 7, I was not good at sports and running was always my headache. I often failed in my running test. In order to catch up with my classmates, I began to practice running every day after school. Sometimes, I was so tired that I really wanted to give up. But I kept telling myself that I could make it. No matter what kind of difficulties I faced, I tried my best to keep running. Now I do much better in running and I’m very proud of myself. I feel more confident and I’m ready for any challenges in the future. 【详解】1.题干解读：题目要求根据提示内容写短文谈谈自己生活中坚持做的一件事情，要讲述是如何做的并谈谈自己的感受。 2.写作指导：写作时要第一人称为主，结合具体语境采取合适的时态。可分为两段式写作：第一段谈自己坚持了什么；第二段讲如何坚持的及自己的感受。要做到无单词拼写和语法错误。 27．假如你们学校要开展以“家乡的过去与现在”为主题的英语有奖征文活动。请你从以下几个方面写一篇英语短文，介绍你家乡的变化。 提示∶ （1）房屋； （2）交通； （3）人们的工作情况。 要求∶ （1）文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校名称。 （2）100词左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： The Past and Present of My Hometown Since the 1980s, my hometown has changed a lot. In the past, people lived in old and broken houses. There were few buses or cars. People had to walk or ride bikes to go out. Many people had no jobs and they lived a hard life. But situations in my hometown are quite different now. With the help of the government, people now live in new houses. Many people have their own cars. Factories have appeared one after another in my hometown. It’s easy for people to find jobs and make money. Now my hometown has become a popular tourist attraction. Welcome to my hometown and you will have a good time. 【详解】1.题干解读：本文是一篇材料作文，要求以“家乡的过去与现在”为主题写一篇短文，介绍自己家乡的变化。 2.写作指导：本文时态以一般过去时和一般现在时为主；人称主要以第三人称为主；文章可分为三段式：第一段从三方面（房屋、交通和人们的工作情况）介绍家乡过去的情况；第二段从三方面介绍现在的家乡情况；最后一段呼吁大家来自己的家乡游玩。在写作时要做到无标点和语法错误，正确运用好几种时态。 28．假如你是李华，上周你和父母一起去西安旅行。请你根据下面的表格提示写一篇英语短文，向大家介绍一下西安这座城市。要求不少于80词，可适当发挥。 Location In the center of Shaanxi Province Area 10,108 km History More than 3,000 years Places of interest The Terracotta Army, Bell Tower… Climate Four different seasons Things to eat Noodles, dumplings… _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考范文 Have you ever been to Xi’an? It’s a beautiful city. It lies in the center of Shaanxi Province and covers an area of 10,108 square kilometers. With a history of more than 3,000 years, there are many places of interest in Xi’an, such as the famous Terracotta Army and the amazing Bell Tower. Xi’an has four different seasons. Each season has its own features. Besides, the food in Xi’an is great. If you go to Xi’an, you will have a chance to try the delicious noodles and dumplings there. One great thing about Xi’an is that it has convenient transportation. You can go to different places easily by subway or by bus. It’s really a great city. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇说明文，属于材料作文写作； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章的要点已经给出，按照提示的要点逐点阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，介绍西安的地理位置和占地面积； 第二步，按照表格中提示的要点介绍西安的历史、著名景点、气候、美食等，还可以补充交通出行方面的便利等，可列举具体的事例； 第三步，发表对这座城市的评价并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①with a history of有着……的历史 ②places of interest名胜古迹 ③convenient transportation便利的交通 [高分句型] ①With a history of more than 3,000 years, there are many places of interest in Xi’an, such as the famous Terracotta Army and the amazing Bell Tower.（介词短语作伴随状语） ②If you go to Xi’an, you will have a chance to try the delicious noodles and dumplings there.（if引导条件状语从句） ③One great thing about Xi’an is that it has convenient transportation.（that引导表语从句） 29．上善若水，厚德载物。优秀的品德（morality）是成功的助力，不良的品德是成功的阻力。“关怀”就是关心他人，“负责”就是说到做到，“尊重”就是将心比心，“合作”就是共同努力，“诚实”就是诚恳实在……请你选择其中的一项，结合自身经历谈谈你的感悟和收获。词数不少于80词。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 There is no doubt that we students must have some necessary virtues. I think caring for others is one of the basic and lifelong virtues that we must have. A few days ago, I was taking a walk in the nearby park when I noticed a little boy standing on the road side alone, crying sadly. I went up to him and found that he got lost from his mother. Luckily, he remembered his mother’s phone number. I called her immediately and stayed with the boy until his mother came hurriedly. Seeing them hugging with each other excitedly, I left quietly. I don’t expect reward for what I have done because I do it for enjoyment and duty, and I think people should care for and help each other. 【详解】1. 题干解读：本文是一篇话题作文，要求你围绕“优秀的品德”这一话题，选择具体的一项美德结合自身经历进行阐述。 2. 写作指导：本文应该先确定以哪一个优秀品德为话题展开叙述；注意在发表感悟时时态可以一般现在时为主，描述亲身经历时要以一般过去时为主；文章层次要分明，首末段可以点明主旨、升华主题，中间段落进行辅助阐述，注意叙事条理要清晰、语言要准确。 30．假如你是王明，你收到了来自英国笔友John的一封信，请根据信的内容给John回信。 Dear Wang Ming, How are you? I am going to visit Sichuan next month, and I am really excited. In England, it is always rainy. What’s the weather like in Guangyuan? I’m interested in Chinese food. What kind of food can I have in Sichuan? I really can’t wait to try some right now. I also hear Sichuan is famous for Tangjiahe(唐家河). What can I do there? What other interesting things can I do? I’m looking forward to your reply. Best wishes, John注意事项： 1.回信须包括信中所有提示内容，要求语句通顺、意思连贯、符合情景； 2.词数在80个左右，信的首尾已给出，不计入总词数。 参考词汇：火锅hot pot    麻辣食物 spicy food Dear John, I am happy to know that you will visit Sichuan next month.____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope I can see you soon. All the best, Wang Ming 【答案】例文 Dear John, I am happy to know that you will visit Sichuan next month. The weather in Guangyuan is warm and rainy. But the weather here is very suitable for travel. If you come to Sichuan, you can eat hot pot and spicy food. If you come to Tangjiahe, you can see many precious plants and animals, such as Chinese dove trees and pandas and so on. You can also visit Yinping ancient road and taste local food. It’s very beautiful here. Welcome to Guangyuan. I hope I can see you soon. All the best, Wang Ming 【详解】题干解读：本文是一篇书信作文，John的信件中提到几个问题，广元的天气、四川食物、能在唐家河做什么事，和让人感兴趣的东西。注意要点齐全，条理清晰。 写作指导：本文以第二人称和第三人称书写，时态是一般现在时。开头结尾已给出，表达如果来四川或者唐家河时，用if引导条件状语从句。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$