高中英语读后续写专题——对话描写 课件-2025届高考英语二轮复习专项

对 话 描 写 dialogue 读后续写微技能 mini-skills in continuation writing 1 目 录 CONTENTS 对话描写的作用和原则 对话描写存在的问题 规范对话描写的格式 丰富对话描写的内容 Part.01 对话描写的作用和原则 对话（dialogue）是故事角色在整个故事中对彼此或对自己说的话。它可以用来揭示人物的性格和个性，它也可以用来推动情节的发展，展示情节发展的过程。 1 2 3 4 对话描写要为推动故事情节服务，每段出现一两句即可。 对话要反映人物的心理与情感，刻画人物的性格。 不宜过长，侧重口语化词汇，避开生僻词汇。 尽可能结合动作描写，明确对谁说。 原 则 Part.02 对话描写存在的问题 对话描写存在的问题 “........”sb. said “................................................” 标点符号 使用不规范 对话标签 用词单一 复杂冗长 堆砌成段 “......... Part.03 对话描写的正确格式 对话描写的正确格式 说话人在前 Sb said, “Xxxxxx.” Sb said位于句首时，后面一般用逗号，引号内第一个字母大写，句尾标点符号放在句号内。 eg. Mary said, “Thanks for bringing the taste of the hometown back to me.” 对话描写的正确格式 说话人在后 “Xxxxxx， ？ ！”sb. said. 当sb. said 位于句末时，引号内第一个字母大写，陈述句句末用逗号，疑问句用问号，感叹句用感叹号。引号外第一个字母小写。 eg. “Don’t worry about it,” he said. “What if the guests don’t like it? ” he asked. “I don’t care!” he said. 对话描写的正确格式 说话人在中间 “Xxxxxx,”sb said, “xxxxx.” 当sb said位于句中时，前边引号内句末用逗号，引号外第一个字母小写；sb. said后面一般用逗号，后面引号内第一个字母小写。 eg. “You can’t see it now,” Jacob said, “but next spring you’ll see the colors I picked out for you.” she , 改错 找出错误 并改正 He said that, “I will come tomorrow.” “where are you going？” she asked. Sarah said, “I don’t know what to say. He asked: “do you need any help?” “The movie was amazing,”Lily said. “I want to watch it again.” “I love reading,”She said. Where , “Do ” Part.04 丰富对话描写的内容 1. 丰富用词，使用除say以外的其它动词 回答道 大笑着说 道歉 大声地吼道 尖叫到 叹气地说 建议 耳语； 低声说 承诺 抱怨道 请求 说服 解释道 安慰 同意地说 reply comfort beg whisper scream agree persuade promise sigh apologize laugh shout suggest complain explain 用所给词的正确形式填空。 whisper complain scream promise “Shall we leave now?” he to us and we left the room quietly. “Help! help! I can’t swim,” the frightened boy. Tommy to me, “I will never give up.” “I don’t like the meal at all,” the consumer. whispered comforted promised complained 加语气 基本结构为：in a/an adj. tone(语气) In a live streaming, Li shouted in a surprising tone, “Oh, my god! Promise me to buy it.” 2. 丰富用语 in a tone（坚定的） in a tone（不耐烦的） in a tone（好奇地） in a tone（温柔的） in a tone（愉悦的） in a tone（粗鲁的） in a tone（伤心的） in a tone（惊讶的） determined impatient curious gentle/soft pleasant rude sad surprised 加嗓音 基本结构为：in a/an adj. voice “I don’t meant to,” Rebecca murmured in a low voice. 2. 丰富用语 In a voice（高的） In a voice（低的） In a voice（颤抖的） In a voice（恼火的） In a voice（响亮的） In a voice（坚定的） In a voice（局促不安的） In a voice（惊恐的） high low trembled annoyed loud determined awkward frightened Trump was so annoyed that he roared loudly in the office, “It’s over.” 加副词 基本结构为：adv. 2. 丰富用语 大声地 温柔地 紧张地 兴奋地 焦虑地 喜悦地 冷静地 生气地 loudly gently nervously excitedly anxiously happily calmly angrily 完成句子。 “Get out of my room!” she （生气地喊道）. 2. He smiled and said （用温柔的语气） , “Don’t worry, I am here.” 3. “We won the competition!” he （用愉快的语气宣布）. 4. “What if I fail?” he (紧张地问道). 5. She （兴奋地说道）, ”Look at the fireworks!” 6. “Who broke the window?” the boy （用颤抖的声音问道）. shouted angrily/in an angry voice in a gentle tone announced in a pleasant tone asked nervously asked in a trembling voice said excitedly 总结 丰富对话用词 规范标点符号 丰富语篇内容 短文填空。 “Turn that music off!” Mom （生气的喊道）, slamming the kitchen door. I （大声地叹气）, pausing the song. “But it’s my favorite band!“ “Favorite band or not,” she （用严厉地语气说道）, pointing to the clock, “it’s midnight. Your sister needs to study for her exam.” I （小声说道）, ”Fine, but you never let me have fun.” Mom’s expression softened. She sat beside me and （轻柔地解释道）: “I know you’re upset.” Her voice was calm now, almost apologetic. “But think about Lisa—she’s been stressed all week.“ I sighed heavily, （feel）guilty. ”Okay, I get it.” She （温暖地微笑）and patted my hand. "Thanks for understanding." As she left, the house grew quiet, but the tension had faded. Maybe compromise wasn’t so hard after all. shouted angrily/in an angry voice sighed loudly said in a strict voice whispered/said in a low voice explained gently/softly feeling smiled warmly Thank you for watching $$