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专题19 写作专题技巧讲练二（开头、结尾仿写） 内容导航 重点速记：知识点和关键点梳理，查漏补缺 难点强化：难点内容标注与讲解，能力提升 复习提升：真题感知+提升专练，全面突破 核心考点聚焦 1 考点一：开头仿写 1 考点二：结尾仿写 5 难点强化 8 复习提升 18 核心考点聚焦 考点一：开头仿写 一、专题知识梳理 无论是中考，还是一二模，阅卷老师给到考生作文阅卷时间不出60秒，少则30秒，15秒。 开头是作文的脸，要让阅卷老师有兴趣评下你的足与身体，首先要脸上有光。 很多学生平时接触的句型也不少，但实际运用率却很低。句型一定要求适不求炫，求精不求多，量力而行，逐步递进。 炫到超出老师的认知也不一定高分；文章追求均衡，别鲜花配牛粪鲜花，不搭。好词好句也别一口气背诵好几十个上百个，撑坏脑，七八个的先使用熟练，再增加。 背诵句型只是丰富开头的方法之一，也可以有很多其他的方式，如设问自答式，引用名言式等。 2、 专题精讲 (1） As we all know款(应用议论文居多/记叙文亦可） 1. There is no doubt that ...(句子） 2. There is no denying that... 3. No one can deny the fact that...（句子） 4. It is undeniable that.. 5. Needless to say, （句子）(注意此句后面是逗号） 6. It goes without saying that...（句子） 7. It is common knowledge that...(句子） 8. It is widely accepted that.....(句子） 9. It is obvious that....(句子） 10. It is generally/commonly/believed that....(句子） 11. As is well-known to the public that... 题1. 毫无疑问水在日常生活不可或缺，但鲜少人意识到淡水正日益减少. 译文a. There is no denying that the role of water in is irreplaceable in our daily life , but few people are aware of the sharp reduce of fresh water. 译文b. It goes without saying that the role of water cannot be replaced by any other thing in our daily life, but few people are aware that the fresh water is reducing sharply. 译文c. Needless to say, water plays an important role in our daily life. However, few people realize that the fresh water is reducing at an amazing speed. 译文d. It is undeniable that water isindispensable in our routine life. However, few people come to realize that fresh water are declining dramatically. 批注：译文d, 出现很多超纲词indispensable, routine, decline, dramatically. 部分一二模，中考阅卷老师不一定都能读懂，像dramatically “急剧地”, 有的老师只知drama，理解为“戏剧地”，极有可能反被批个“用词不当” 题2： 人们普遍认为，各种各样的电子产品给生活带来了乐趣，但是我不禁怀疑它们是利还是弊呢。 译文a. It is widely accepted that different kinds of electronic products bring a lot of fun to life, but I doubt whether they do good or harm. 译文b. It is generally believed that a wide variety of electronic products bring a great deal of fun to life, but I doubt whether they are beneficial to us or harmful. （2） 据....(往往是一件具体的事件 议论文） 1. It is said that... 据说... 2. It is reported that...据报道... 题. 据报道，从2015年中考将取消英语。（就我来看，这是不可能。） 译文. It is reported that English test will be canceled /won’t be included in senior high school entrance examination from 2015. ( From my point of view, it is far from true) (3) with...随着 （常用议论文） 1. With the rapid/fast increase/growth of (population) .. 随着(人口）的快速增长 2. With the rapid advance/development of (science and technology), ......随着(科技）的飞速发展/进步，... 3. With the great progress of ( science of technology), ... 随着（科技) 的巨大进步， 4. With the approaching/coming of ( senior high school entrance exam) 题： 随着电子书的盛行， 青少年的书写能力日益减弱。 、 译文a. With the wide spread of electronic books, teenagers’ writing ability is becoming weaker and weaker. 译文b. With the popularity of electronic books, teenagers’ writing ability is being weakened day by day/gradually. (四) 具体话题/问题/（多见议论文） 1. Recently there is a heated discussion/topic about .... 2. According to a recent survey, .... 3. Currently, the issue/phenomenon/problem of (food health).has been brought to public attention. 4. The issue/problem/phenomenon of (food health) has arisen public attention/ comes to public attention. 题 1. 最近大家都在讨论学生有无必要上课外辅导班（tutorial class) 译文: Recently there is a heated discussion whether it is necessary for students to attend tutorial classes (or not) 题2. 随着校车事故的频繁，校车的安全性问题引起了公众的关注。 译文：With the increase of accidents of school buses ( related to school buses), the problem of their safety comes to public attention. （5） 图表作文开头 1. As can be seen clearly from the graph/table/chart, ....(趋势描写/概括性描写） 2. As is shown in the graph/table/chart, ....（趋势描写/概括性描写） 3. It is clear/obvious/apparent from the table/chart that.... 4. The figures/statistics in the chart/table shows/indicates that... 批注：图表类作文一般第一句为趋势描写，或概括性描写。后面再具体描述图表，用必要数据作支撑。提醒 学生把握细节描述的量。还要留空间给why与how) 题: 以上图表显示，学生的睡眠时间严重不足。 译文a: As is shown in the chart above, students are seriously short of sleeping time. 译文b: It is clear/obvious from the table above that students seriously lack sleeping time. （6） 记人/写物/记事开头 1. The man, who is of few words/of average height, is my idol. （中间插入一定语从句） 2. Rita, mother of five kids, bears the heavy burden of life with her thin shoulders.(使用同位语） 3. Of all the people I know, perhaps none deserves my respect more than( Miss Wang). 4. Of all( the teachers) I have ever known/met, (Miss Wang) is the one I respect/love most. 5. Among various kinds of (sports), (football) is my fondest. 6. Throughout my life, the most unforgettable thing I’ve ever experienced is (a trip to Poland) 题1. Elena, 一个漂亮长发的年轻女孩，一下子引起我的注意。 译文a: Elena, (who was) a young lady with beautiful long hair, attracted me when I saw her. 译文b: Elena, a young lady with beautiful long hair, drew my attention the instant I saw her. 题2. 在我所看过的电影当中，Buried是最难忘的。 译文a: Of all the films I have ever seen, Buried is most unforgettable one. 题3. 在我一生中，最有意义的一次经历是暑期兼职。 译文：Throughout my life, the most meaningful thing I have ever done is to have a part-time job last summer. 批注：记叙文开头套用句型很少，一般开篇点人，点事. 如： 1. 题目 My favorite teacher（记人） Echo,my favourite teacher,is a pretty and slim lady.One of the most important reason that I like her is that she is very sincere 2. 题目 Honesty (记事） When I was a little child, I was very naughty and eager to know how the things around me worked. I would do something “bad” or surprising and often made others angry. But I will never forget what I did once and what had been told then. One day ... （7） 观点 In my opinion... As far as I am concerned ... To my mind... My opinion about ...is that...    I am of the opinion that...    例题：就我的看法打电动玩具既花费时间也有害健康。 译文：In my opinion, playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health. 考点二：结尾仿写 一、专题知识梳理 阅卷老师，阅读完开头后，第二眼扫的往往是尾段。当开头无限灿烂的时候，尾巴也要收得漂亮；若是开头无光，尾巴更是要收得漂亮些。 文章的结尾可以有多重模式，如结论型，后果型，建议型，号召型，方向型，意义型，反问型，自然过渡型等。也有一些句型可用于结尾。 二、专题精讲 1. From what has been discussed above， we may safely draw/reach/arrive at the conclusion that …（议论文较多） Accordingly/Consequently/As a result, it is not difficult to draw/reach/arrive at the conclusion that... 题： 综上所述，我们可以得出结论电脑的利大于弊 译文1：From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that computers do more good than harm 译文2：From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that the advantages of computers outweigh the disadvantages. 2. In a word/To sum up/ On the whole, we should pay close attention to sth …（议论文） 题：总而言之，我们应该密切关注日常用水问题。 译文1: In a word/To sum up, we should pay close attention to daily water. 3. Only in this way can we (have a bright future). (倒装句型， 可接承句型2） 题1：只有这样，缺水问题才能得到改善 译文：Only in this way, can water shortage be improved. 题2： 只有这样，我们才能提高我们的学习能力。 译文：Only in this way, can we promote our learning ability. 批注：此句型，提醒下学生的语序问题，一般疑问句; 同样如果学生程度还不错，可以导入Only的其他倒装。 4. As long as ...只要 (连词 后接句子 多种文体） 题1：只要我们每天坚持阅读一点点，阅读习惯一定能养成。 译文：As long as we insist on reading a little every day, we are bound to/are sure to get into a good habit of reading. 题2：只要压岁钱使用得当，这个传统可以一直传承下去。 译文：As long as lucky money is used in a proper and wise way, this tradition can continue everlastingly/forever. 5. So excited and crazy were the fans that Swift hid back the gate. ( so..that 的变形倒装句型 适用多种文体） 题1： 空气污染如此严重，以致于有的学校甚至停课（suspend classes) 译文：So serious was the air pollution that some schools even suspended classes. 题 2：这本书如此有趣，我对它爱不释手。 译文：So interesting/amusing is the book that I just can hardly put it down. 题 3. 这段回忆是如此珍贵，我会将它永藏心中。 译文：So precious is the memory that I will cherish it in my heart for good. 批注：此句型适合程度较好的学生，以免语序错误，犯语法错误。 6. The 比较级， the 比较级 （多种文体） 题1：英语学得越久，我发现它越有意思。 译文：The longer I study English, the more interesting I find it. 题2：你付出的越多，收获的就是越多 译文：The more you pay, the more you harvest. 7. From this blind date (相亲）, I realize how weak I am/what a weak man I am. ( 此句型有些类似感叹句, 多种文体） 题1：从这次经历中，我明白团队精神是多重要。 译文：From this experience, I realize/have learned how important team spirit is. 题 2. 直至那是，我才明白我母亲是个多么伟大的女人。 译文：I didn’t realize what a great woman my mother was/how great my mother was until then. 8. I firmly/strongly believe that...(多种文体） I have a strong/firm belief that... I am deeply convinced that... 题1：我坚信我有天会成为苹果的CEO。 译文1：I firmly believed/I have a firm belief that I will be the CEO of Apple. 题2：我坚信你定能克服障碍，取得好成绩。 译文：I have a strong belief that you will get over the difficulty/obstacles and get good/pleasant/satisfying scores. 9. It is ...that...(强调句型，多种文体） 题1：是第一夫人彭丽媛将中国女性美带入国际舞台。 译文： It is the fist-lady Peng brings the beautify of Chinese woman into the international stage. 题 2. 是在一个漆黑的晚上我遭遇了一场严重的事故。 译文：It was on a dark night that I suffered a severe accident. 题3：是她无私的帮助让我重新振作起来。 译文：It was her selfless help that made me cheer up again/gain courage again. 批注：强调句型多数学生之前未接触过，老师可以讲得稍微细致一些。 难点强化 1．（2025·上海静安·二模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation （根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 你的学校计划举办名为“用英语讲中国故事”的校园文化节活动，现就活动方案征求意见。假设你是初三学生李华，请阅读以下活动方案，写一封邮件给大队部汪老师。邮件须包含以下内容： (1)你是否会参加此活动，并简述理由； (2)针对方案中的一项内容，提出修改建议。 校园文化节活动方案 The Plan of Campus Culture Festival 主题Theme “用英语讲中国故事”Telling Chinese stories in English 时间Time 4月21日—4月25日下午4:00—6:00 地点Place 学校图书馆前的草坪 (lawn) 对象Participant 6—9年级学生 形式Ways 线上故事分享、线下知识讲座、英语故事戏剧表演 (Online story sharing, Offline knowledge lecture, English story drama performance) 注意： (1)文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分； (2)照抄阅读语篇不得分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Mr. Wang,    I’m Li Hua from Grade 9. I am thrilled about the upcoming Campus Culture Festival themed “Telling Chinese Stories in English.” I definitely plan to participate as it’s a fantastic opportunity to showcase my English skills while sharing the rich culture of our country.    I have a suggestion for your plan. I think there should be another activity to help students improve their interest in Chinese stories. You can add a guessing activity. You can choose some of the less well-known stories for the students to guess. For the winning student, you can give him a set of Chinese story books.    Thank you for considering my feedback. Best regards, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封邮件； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：根据提示内容进行写作，注意不要有遗漏，适当添加细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明活动方案的主题； 第二步；对其中一项内容提出修改建议； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①plan to do sth计划做某事 ②well-known知名的 ③a set of一套 [高分句型] I definitely plan to participate as it’s a fantastic opportunity to showcase my English skills while sharing the rich culture of our country.（as引导原因状语从句） 2．（2025·上海嘉定·二模）Write at least 60 words according to the situation given.（请根据所给情境，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。） 为丰富学生的校园生活，学校拟成立校外实践基地（off-campus practical base），现有四个候选基地供选择： ·生态花卉园（Ecological Flower Garden） ·科创实验基地（Science and Innovation Experiment Base） ·传统文化体验馆（Traditional Culture Experience Center） ·历史博物馆（History Museum） 现面向全体学生征集意见，并邀请同学们设计相关实践活动。假设你是学生李华，请写一封邮件给负责此项目的张老师。内容包括： 1．推荐一个实践基地，并简要说明理由。 2．设计本学期校外实践活动，说明活动形式及意义。 （注意：1．短文中不得出现考生真实姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2．照抄阅读语篇不得分。） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Teacher Zhang, I’m Li Hua, writing to recommend the Traditional Culture Experience Center as our off-campus practical base. It offers students a chance to learn about Chinese traditions, such as calligraphy and tea ceremonies, which helps us understand our cultural roots and develop pride in our heritage. For this semester’s activity, we could organize a “Traditional Craft Day.” Students can try making paper-cutting, clay art, or folk paintings under expert guidance. This hands-on experience will not only deepen our appreciation for traditional skills but also encourage creativity and teamwork. Thank you for considering my suggestions! Best regards, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：文章要点已经给出，按照话题展开阐述，可以适当增加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，自我介绍并表明写作目的； 第二步，介绍推荐基地、理由； 第三步，谈谈设计的活动和意义。 [亮点词汇] ①hands-on experience实践经历 ②learn about了解 ③not only…but also不仅……而且 [高分句型] ①It offers students a chance to learn about Chinese traditions, such as calligraphy and tea ceremonies, which helps us understand our cultural roots and develop pride in our heritage.（which引导的非限制性定语从句） ②This hands-on experience will not only deepen our appreciation for traditional skills but also encourage creativity and teamwork.（not only…but also并列结构） 3．（2025·上海奉贤·二模）Write a passage in at least 60 words according to the following situation.（以“Golden Ideas for the School Science Fair”为题，根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 科技点燃梦想，创新引领未来！你们学校第10届科技节即将开幕，现向全体同学征集活动“金点子”——无论是邀请大咖作科技讲座、举行趣味实验比拼、还是……只要你的活动创意新颖、可行性强，就有机会被采纳并亮相科技节！快来用你的智慧，为校园科技盛宴添彩！ （注意：1.写作中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version Golden Ideas for the School Science Fair The 10th School Science Fair is around the corner, and I’d like to share my creative ideas to make it unforgettable! Firstly, I suggest inviting scientists who can share their latest research in AI or space exploration, which will inspire students to dream big. Secondly, setting up a “DIY Science Carnival” with hands-on experiments like creating mini volcanoes or building simple robots would make learning fun for everyone. What excites me most is the idea of a “Future City Model Contest,” where students can design smart cities powered by sustainable technology. If these activities are chosen, they will not only spark curiosity but also teach teamwork and problem-solving skills. Let’s work together to turn science into magic! 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文；   ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”；   ③提示：考生应注意不要遗漏中文提示的信息和要求，并适当添加细节，突出写作重点。      [写作步骤]      第一步：表明目的，突出写作主题；      第二步：具体介绍自己的为科技节提出的活动，包括内容和意义； 第三步：书写结语。      [亮点词汇]   ①be around the corner即将到来 ②not only...but also不仅……而且 ③turn...into...把……变成…… [高分句型]      ①Firstly, I suggest inviting scientists who can share their latest research in AI or space exploration, which will inspire students to dream big.（定语从句）   ②If these activities are chosen, they will not only spark curiosity but also teach teamwork and problem-solving skills.（条件状语从句） 4．（2025·上海·模拟预测）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Less pressure, better life” (以“更少压力，更好生活”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 现代社会随着生活节奏的加快，来自生活、学习等各方面的压力越来越大，所以只有学会舒缓压力，才能更好地生活。The following is for reference only. (以下表达/内容仅供参考) ●What’s the pressure in your daily life? ●How do you reduce the pressure? (Give at least 2 ways) __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Less pressure, better life Pressure is one of the most serious problems in today’s world. Students are also under much pressure. As a result, some students can’t get on well with their classmates, while others may worry about their exams too much. As a middle school student, I’m under pressure as well. My parents want me to be the top student in class. So they send me to all kinds of after-classes at weekends. I’m so busy that I have little time to relax or go over lessons myself. Last Monday evening, I had a long talk with my parents. I told them that I needed freedom to plan my time. After hearing all my reasons, they finally agreed. So I think good communication sometimes is the key to solving the problem. What’s more, finding a hobby is helpful in reducing pressure. I’m keen on sports. Playing basketball with my classmates after school for a while always makes me relaxed so that I can focus better on my study later. So there is no need to be afraid of pressure. Find some ways to deal with it, and we will be fine. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ② 时态：为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍压力是现代社会的严重问题，列举学生的压力； 第二步，介绍自己的压力以及减轻压力的方法； 第三步，呼吁积极应对压力。 [亮点词汇] ① under pressure 承受压力 ② go over lessons 复习功课 ③ be keen on 热衷于 [高分句型] ①I’m so busy that I have little time to relax or go over lessons myself.（结果状语从句） ②I told them that I needed freedom to plan my time.（宾语从句） ③Playing basketball with my classmates after school for a while always makes me relaxed so that I can focus better on my study later.（目的状语从句） 5．（2025·上海·模拟预测）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)。 学校打算开展以“建设绿色校园”(“Building a Green Campus”)为主题的环保周系列活动，目前正在向全校师生征集活动计划。假设你是李华，请你从以下两种系列活动中挑选一种，并为其写一份详细的活动计划，包含活动目的、具体安排(时间、地点、人员及活动准备等)。 植树护绿(Planting Trees) 垃圾分类(Trash sorting) 注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I choose “Trash sorting” for the Green Campus Week. The purpose is to help students master recycling skills. Activities will be held from March 12th to 16th. On Monday, teachers will give lectures in the auditorium to explain sorting methods. From Tuesday to Thursday, volunteers will guide classmates to sort lunch boxes in the cafeteria. On Friday, we’ll hold a sorting game on the playground with prizes. All students and teachers should prepare reusable gloves and read the sorting guidebook in advance. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”为主； ③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己选择垃圾分类活动； 第二步，根据题干的要点，给出详细的活动计划，包含活动目的、具体安排等； 第三步，补充其他信息，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①from…to从……到 ②in advance提前 [高分句型] ①Activities will be held from March 12th to 16th. （被动语态） 6．（2025·上海·模拟预测）Write at least 60 words about the topic “I want to say sorry to ________”（以“我想向……道歉”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） 请结合自己的亲身经历，简要阐述一下道歉的理由，并且谈谈感想。 （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I want to say sorry to my friend I want to say sorry to my friend, Lily. Last Wednesday after lunch, I showed Lily my new phone. She wanted to play some games on it, but I refused. She angrily put the phone back on my desk. Unfortunately, the screen was scratched. She apologized to me immediately. She even offered to mend it for me. However, I was so angry that I kept shouting at her. The other students gathered around us, and Lily was really ashamed. Now I feel deep regrets. Lily didn’t do that on purpose and she apologized. Our friendship should be worth much more than a phone. I hope my sincere apology can help me win back my friend. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般过去时”； ③提示：文章应该包括所有提示要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一、三人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直接点明文章核心意图——向朋友莉莉道歉； 第二步，详细描述冲突事件的起因、经过和结果； 第三步，表达内心的后悔，强调友谊的重要性并传递道歉的真诚。 [亮点词汇] ①on purpose 故意地 ②offer to do sth. 主动提出做某事 [高分句型] ①I hope my sincere apology can help me win back my friend. (宾语从句) ②However, I was so angry that I kept shouting at her. (so...that引导结果状语从句) 7．（2025·上海·模拟预测）Write at least 60 words according to the given information (根据以下材料。写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 请从中选择你比较有感触的一条，可结合自己的经历，谈谈你的体会。 Friendship doesn’t just happen. It takes time and patience. As long as you keep smiling, life will smile to you. I can accept failure, but I cannot accept not trying (注意：短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文一 Friendship doesn’t just happen. It takes time and patience Friendship is a precious bond that doesn’t just happen overnight. It takes time and patience to build a strong and meaningful relationship with someone. Just like planting a seed and waiting for it to grow into a beautiful tree, friendships need nurturing and care. We have to invest our time, show patience, and understand that every friendship grows at its own pace. Through shared experiences, mutual understanding, and continuous effort, we can create friendships that stand the test of time. Remember, true friendships are worth waiting for and working on. 范文二 As long as you keep smiling, life will smile to you As long as you keep smiling, life will smile to you. Smiling is not just a facial expression; it’s a powerful tool that can change your mood, attract people, and even improve your health. It’s a universal language that connects us all, transcending language barriers and cultural differences.When someone smiles, it lightens up the room, changes the mood of others, and makes things happier. A smiling person brings positivity and joy to those around them. Smiling also makes us more attractive to others. People are naturally drawn to those who smile, as it exudes a sense of warmth and friendliness. A smile can open doors and make people more approachable. So let’s smile more often and embrace the positive changes it brings. 范文三 I can accept failure, but I cannot accept not trying Life is a journey full of up and down, but by trying over and over again we can improve our abilities continuously. When I was a little girl, I began learning to play the piano. I practised hard every day to pass the test. Unfortunately, I was too nervous to remember the tune. I felt as if darkness was around me when I knew I didn’t pass. My mother asked me to decide whether I would give up. I said “No” without any hesitation. Playing the piano had given me countless happiness and I improved a lot during the preparation. Failure is the mother of success. If I can face failure bravely and keep on working hard, success must be waiting for me around the corner. 【详解】[总体分析]   ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文；   ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”；   ③ 提示：选择有感触的一条，结合自己的经历完成写作，注意语法准确，语意连贯。 [写作步骤]   第一步，开门见山，表明自己对友谊的观点；   第二步，结合自己的经历，谈谈体会； 第三步，总结全文，重申自己的观点。   [亮点词汇]   ①precious bond 珍贵的纽带 ②overnight 一整夜 ③build a strong and meaningful relationship with sb 与某人建立牢固且有意义的关系 ④grow into 成长为 ⑤mutual understanding 相互理解 [高分句型]   ①We have to invest our time, show patience, and understand that every friendship grows at its own pace. (that引导宾语从句) ②Through shared experiences, mutual understanding, and continuous effort, we can create friendships that stand the test of time. (that引导定语从句) 8．（2025·上海闵行·三模）我校拟于近期举办微电影大赛(microfilm festival)，要求各班级创作并提交一部微电影参赛作品。现班主任王老师面向全班同学征集微电影剧本(script)选题方案。假设你是李华，请写一封不少于60词的建议信，要求从以下三个类别中选择其一，并阐述选择理由： 1. 展望未来的原创科幻作品(science fiction)； 2. 基于经典名著(classic)的改编作品； 3. 聚焦校园或学生日常生活的纪录片(documentary)。 (注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。标点符号不占格) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Mr. Wang, I suggest creating a documentary about campus life and the daily life of students. First, it can truly reflect our daily activities like sports festivals and study groups. Second, all classmates can easily take part in by sharing their stories and experiences. Finally, showing our real school spirit will make the film special and real. I believe this choice can best present our class characteristics. Yours sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容进行写作，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明自己的建议； 第二步，给出具体的原因； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①reflect our daily activities 反映我们的日常活动 ②take part in 参加 ③make the film special and real 让电影变得特别和真实 [高分句型] ①First, it can truly reflect our daily activities like sports festivals and study groups.（并列结构） ②I believe this choice can best present our class characteristics.（省略that的宾语从句） 复习提升 9．（2025·上海金山·三模）Write at least 60 words to the situation given. 请根据所给情境，以 “The world bestows me ________ (世界赠与我……)” 为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格 2025年春晚，王菲的歌曲《世界赠与我的》引起了广泛关注。歌中唱到：“世界赠与我虫鸣，也赠与我雷霆。”世界赠与了我们许多东西，他们可以是有形的，也可以是无形的。它可以是快乐、成功。也可以是痛苦、失败。这些体验，无论好坏，都是生命中不可或缺的一部分。请你结合自己的亲身经历，谈谈世界赠与你的“礼物”以及你的感悟。 参考信息： tangible 有形的     intangible 无形的    bestow 赠予    foster 促进 resilient 有韧性的    setback 挫折    appreciate 感恩    determined 坚定的 sufferings 痛苦 (注意：1. 文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他信息，否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读内容不得分。) The world bestows me ________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The world bestows me gifts The world has bestowed upon me both tangible and intangible gifts. One of the most precious gifts I have received is friendship. During a difficult time in my life, when I faced setbacks and felt lost, my friends stood by me, offering support and encouragement. Their presence reminded me of the importance of resilience and the power of human connection. Another gift I cherish is the beauty of nature. The warmth of sunshine and the sound of birdsong have often brought me peace and clarity. These moments have taught me to appreciate the simple joys in life and to find strength in the natural world. Through both joyful and challenging experiences, I have learned to be more determined and grateful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。开头直接指出世界给予自己各类礼物，引出下文对具体礼物的描述。 第二步，具体阐述。详细讲述在困难时期友谊的珍贵，描绘自然之美给自己带来的内心感受，从不同角度深入阐述所获礼物的价值。 第三步，书写结语。总结从经历中获得的成长。 [亮点词汇] ①bestow 给予 ②tangible 有形的 ③intangible 无形的 ④precious 珍贵的 ⑤setback 挫折 ⑥lost 迷茫的 ⑦stand by 支持；陪伴 ⑧encouragement 鼓励 ⑨resilience 韧性 [高分句型] ①One of the most precious gifts I have received is friendship.（定语从句） ②During a difficult time in my life, when I faced setbacks and felt lost, my friends stood by me, offering support and encouragement.（when引导的时间状语从句） 10．（24-25九年级下·上海·阶段练习）Please write at least 60 words according to the given situation. （请你根据所给情境，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） 你们的口语外教Emily结束了这个学期的教学，即将离开中国回国。她很热爱中国文化，所以班里的同学决定一起送她一份特别的礼物作为纪念。假设你是口语课代表，请你书写一张礼物卡，随礼物一起交给她。卡片内容包括： （1）礼物的介绍和描述。 （2）选择这份礼物的理由。 （3）对外教的感谢和祝福。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Dear Emily, This semester, you’ve not only taught us English but also ignited our passion for Chinese culture. To bid you farewell, we’ve prepared a hand-painted silk fan—a classic Chinese art form. The fan features delicate bamboo patterns, symbolizing resilience and friendship, paired with a poem by Li Bai to reflect your love for poetry. We chose this gift because it’s portable, elegant, and deeply rooted in tradition. The bamboo also mirrors your kindness and strength, inspiring us daily. The fan will remind you of the laughter and knowledge we’ve shared in class. Thank you for bridging cultures and nurturing our growth. May this fan accompany you home, like our gratitude, forever. Wish you a brilliant future! Keep shining, Emily! With love, Class 3, Grade 9 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一张礼物卡，使用书信格式，属于应用文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，需向即将回国的外教Emily介绍礼物并说明选择理由，表达感谢和祝福，字数不少于60词。   [写作步骤] 第一步，在书信开头表达外教这学期教学的意义，自然引出准备的礼物——手绘丝绸扇，并对礼物进行简单描述； 第二步，阐述选择这份礼物的原因，包括礼物的特性以及其蕴含的与外教相关的品质象征等； 第三步，对外教表达感谢，祝福她未来美好，结束书信内容。    [亮点词汇] ①bid farewell 告别 ②be rooted in 源于；扎根于 ③keep doing 继续做   [高分句型] ①This semester, you’ve not only taught us English but also ignited our passion for Chinese culture.（not only...but also...连接并列谓语）   ②The fan features delicate bamboo patterns, symbolizing resilience and friendship, paired with a poem by Li Bai to reflect your love for poetry.（现在分词短语symbolizing...和过去分词短语paired with...作状语） 11．（2025·上海杨浦·三模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 假设你是初三学生李枫，你校初三年级即将举办一个主题为 “校园记忆” 的展览活动。学校邀请每位初三学生提供一张与校园生活相关的照片，并为该照片撰写一段介绍文字供参观者阅读。 介绍文字内容须包括： √照片的题目 √照片的简要描述 √照片对你个人和校园生活的意义 (注意：1. 短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。) ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version The title of this photo is “The Moment of School”. It was taken during last year’s autumn sports day, and captured our class relay team crossing the finish line. In the image, four students are passing the baton with determined expressions, while classmates cheer wildly in the background. The golden sunlight highlights our unity and energy. This moment symbolizes not only our teamwork but also the spirit of overcoming challenges together. Whenever I look at it, I’m reminded of how we practiced tirelessly, supporting one another despite setbacks. It represents growth, friendship, and the joy of collective effort.   For me, this photo is a treasure of my junior high life. It reflects the warmth of our campus community and the unforgettable memories we’ve created. It teaches me that success lies not just in winning but in the journey we share. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，不要忽略要点提示，可适当发挥，注意行文连贯，表述清晰，语句通顺。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍照片的标题，并简要描述； 第二步，介绍这张照片体现的精神和意义； 第三步，总结这张照片对自己的意义和校园生活的意义。 [亮点词汇] ①unity and energy团结与能量 ②determined expressions坚定的表情 ③not only...but also不仅……而且 ④the spirit of……的精神 [高分句型] ①Whenever I look at it, I’m reminded of how we practiced tirelessly, supporting one another despite setbacks.（whenever引导时间状语从句） ②It teaches me that success lies not just in winning but in the journey we share.（that引导宾语从句） 12．（2025·上海虹口·三模）你所在的学校正在举办“AI与青少年成长”主题英语演讲比赛，请你以“AI助力我的生活 (AI powers my life)”为题撰写一篇英文演讲稿。选择一个方面。如学习效率、健康管理、时间规划、创意思维等，说明你使用AI助益自己的方法，分析其带来的好处并谈谈感想。 (注意：1. 文章中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分；2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 AI powers my life Good morning, everyone! Today, I want to talk about how AI helps me with time management. With AI tools like smart planners and reminder apps, I can organize my study schedule better. For example, I use an AI app to set daily goals and track my progress. It reminds me when to study, take breaks, and even when to sleep! This helps me finish homework faster and have more free time. AI makes my life easier and more efficient. I believe that with AI, we can all become better at managing our time. Thank you! 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇演讲稿； ② 时态：主要使用一般现在时； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开场问候并明确演讲主题； 第二步，选择一个方面 说明你使用AI助益自己的方法； 第三步，分析其带来的好处并谈谈感想； 第四步，表示感谢。 [亮点词汇] ① organize my study schedule 组织学习计划 ② set daily goals 设定每日目标 ③ track my progress 追踪进度 ④ take breaks 休息 ⑤ more efficient 更高效 [高分句型] I believe that with AI, we can all become better at managing our time.（宾语从句） 13．（24-25九年级下·上海普陀·阶段练习）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 近日，你校正在开展主题为“我为母校建言献策 (Offering Suggestions for My School)”的征集活动，邀请初三年级学生为学校未来发展提出建议。假如你是李华，请参加此活动，并给校长写一封电子邮件，提出一项针对学校课程设计(course design)、校园环境（school environment）、午餐质量 (quality of lunch)或校园活动 (school activities)的改进建议，并说明理由。 （注意：文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。照抄阅读语篇不得分。） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】One possible version Dear Principal,   As a Grade 9 student, I’d like to suggest enhancing our school environment by creating more green spaces. Currently, our playground is mostly concrete, which looks dull and offers little shade.   I propose planting trees and flowers around the field and building wooden benches under them. This would not only beautify our campus but also provide students with relaxing spots to read or chat during breaks. After long classes, when students feel tired, fresh air and natural scenery can reduce stress and boost concentration. A greener school would make us prouder of our campus and promote environmental awareness. Thank you for considering this idea!   Sincerely, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给的内容任选一个方面，提出自己的合理建议并阐述理由。注意不要遗漏材料中给出的要点，可适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明学校现在的不足之处； 第二步，针对不足之处，提出自己的建议，并阐明好处； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①enhance提高 ②not only...but also不但……而且…… ③promote environmental awareness提高环保意识 [高分句型] ①Currently, our playground is mostly concrete, which looks dull and offers little shade.（定语从句） ②After long classes, when students feel tired, fresh air and natural scenery can reduce stress and boost concentration.（时间状语从句） 14．（2025·上海黄浦·二模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） 假设你是李华，收到英国笔友Tom的求助邮件。他因借助AI完成作业与爸爸产生矛盾。Tom想缓和关系却不知如何表达。请以李华的身份给Tom回复邮件，提出建议，助其改善与爸爸的关系。邮件需包含对使用AI完成作业的看法及解决矛盾的建议。 注意： 1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Dear Tom,      I’m sorry to hear that you had a conflict with your dad because of using AI to do homework. I understand your situation, but relying on AI for homework isn’t a good idea. Homework helps us learn and practice, and AI can’t replace our efforts. It deprives us of the chance to think independently and solve problems on our own, which are essential skills for learning.      To improve your relationship with your dad, first, have an honest talk with him. Apologize for using AI and explain you now understand why it’s wrong. Promise him you won’t do it again and will work hard on your own. Besides, you can make a study plan together to show your determination. I believe if you take these steps, the relationship between you and your dad will surely take a turn for the better.      Best wishes! Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，表达对朋友的关心； 第二步，具体阐述使用AI完成作业的看法及解决矛盾的建议； 第三步，最后书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①have a conflict with与……产生矛盾 ②rely on依赖 ③apologize for为……道歉 [高分句型] ①It deprives us of the chance to think independently and solve problems on our own, which are essential skills for learning. (定语从句) ②I believe if you take these steps, the relationship between you and your dad will surely take a turn for the better. (宾语从句) 15．（2025·上海闵行·模拟预测）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 假设你是李华，你们班想在毕业之前为学校做一件有意义的事。先想一想打算做什么？并邀请交换生Tommy参加这次活动。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，告诉他活动内容、意义及安排。 Dear Tommy, I’m Li Hua. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【答案】例文： Dear Tommy, I’m Li Hua. Our class intends to hold a book-sharing event for the school library before graduation, which is a meaningful way to pass on knowledge. We’ll collect various books from classmates and then neatly place them in the library. This Saturday afternoon at 2 p.m., we’ll meet in the library to start the activity. You’re really welcome to join us. It’ll be a great chance for you to know more about our school life. Yours, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意要点齐全，可适当补充。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。用“我们班级计划在毕业前为学校图书馆举办一场图书分享活动”引出下文； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。说明活动内容、意义及安排； 第三步，书写结语。表达“真的欢迎您加入我们”，进行情感升华。 [亮点词汇] ①intend打算 ②graduation毕业 ③chance机会 [高分句型] Our class intends to hold a book-sharing event for the school library before graduation, which is a meaningful way to pass on knowledge. (which引导的定语从句) 16．（2025·上海徐汇·模拟预测）你的学校最近开展了一次学生午餐情况调研，从午餐种类(variety)、品质(quality)、用餐体验(dining experience) 等方面进行了满意度调研 (satisfaction survey)，相关调查结果见以下饼状图(pie chart)。 请你根据本次调查结果，写一份调查报告。 内容包括： 1、调查情况介绍 2、相关数据分析 3、改进建议 You may begin like this: Our school recently conducted a satisfaction survey on students’ lunches… ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 Our school recently conducted a satisfaction survey on students’ lunches. The survey focused on three main areas: variety, quality, and dining experience. The results of the survey showed that the majority of students were satisfied with the variety of lunch options available. However, there was still a significant portion of students who felt that there was not enough choice. In terms of quality, the survey revealed that many students believed the food was tasty and fresh, but some complained about the portion sizes being too small. Regarding the dining experience, the survey found that most students were happy with the cleanliness and organization of the lunchroom. However, some students expressed concerns about the noise levels and the lack of seating during peak times. Based on these findings, we recommend that the school increase the variety of lunch options to better cater to students’ preferences. Additionally, the school should consider increasing portion sizes to ensure that all students are satisfied with their meals. Finally, we suggest that the school take measures to reduce noise levels and provide more seating during lunchtimes to improve the overall dining experience. 【详解】[总体介绍] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，属于材料作文； ②时态：采用“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：要求包含所有要点提示，内容完整，句子衔接自然，注意标点符号的使用。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍具体的调查结果； 第二步，具体分析相关数据； 第三步，提出合适的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①the majority of大多数 ②in terms of就……而言 ③the lack of缺少 [高分句型] ①Based on these findings, we recommend that the school increase the variety of lunch options to better cater to students’ preferences.（宾语从句） ②Finally, we suggest that the school take measures to reduce noise levels and provide more seating during lunchtimes to improve the overall dining experience.（宾语从句） 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 专题19 写作专题技巧讲练二（开头、结尾仿写） 内容导航 重点速记：知识点和关键点梳理，查漏补缺 难点强化：难点内容标注与讲解，能力提升 复习提升：真题感知+提升专练，全面突破 核心考点聚焦 1 考点一：开头仿写 1 考点二：结尾仿写 5 难点强化 8 复习提升 18 核心考点聚焦 考点一：开头仿写 一、专题知识梳理 无论是中考，还是一二模，阅卷老师给到考生作文阅卷时间不出60秒，少则30秒，15秒。 开头是作文的脸，要让阅卷老师有兴趣评下你的足与身体，首先要脸上有光。 很多学生平时接触的句型也不少，但实际运用率却很低。句型一定要求适不求炫，求精不求多，量力而行，逐步递进。 炫到超出老师的认知也不一定高分；文章追求均衡，别鲜花配牛粪鲜花，不搭。好词好句也别一口气背诵好几十个上百个，撑坏脑，七八个的先使用熟练，再增加。 背诵句型只是丰富开头的方法之一，也可以有很多其他的方式，如设问自答式，引用名言式等。 2、 专题精讲 (1） As we all know款(应用议论文居多/记叙文亦可） 1. There is no doubt that ...(句子） 2. There is no denying that... 3. No one can deny the fact that...（句子） 4. It is undeniable that.. 5. Needless to say, （句子）(注意此句后面是逗号） 6. It goes without saying that...（句子） 7. It is common knowledge that...(句子） 8. It is widely accepted that.....(句子） 9. It is obvious that....(句子） 10. It is generally/commonly/believed that....(句子） 11. As is well-known to the public that... 题1. 毫无疑问水在日常生活不可或缺，但鲜少人意识到淡水正日益减少. 译文a. There is no denying that the role of water in is irreplaceable in our daily life , but few people are aware of the sharp reduce of fresh water. 译文b. It goes without saying that the role of water cannot be replaced by any other thing in our daily life, but few people are aware that the fresh water is reducing sharply. 译文c. Needless to say, water plays an important role in our daily life. However, few people realize that the fresh water is reducing at an amazing speed. 译文d. It is undeniable that water isindispensable in our routine life. However, few people come to realize that fresh water are declining dramatically. 批注：译文d, 出现很多超纲词indispensable, routine, decline, dramatically. 部分一二模，中考阅卷老师不一定都能读懂，像dramatically “急剧地”, 有的老师只知drama，理解为“戏剧地”，极有可能反被批个“用词不当” 题2： 人们普遍认为，各种各样的电子产品给生活带来了乐趣，但是我不禁怀疑它们是利还是弊呢。 译文a. It is widely accepted that different kinds of electronic products bring a lot of fun to life, but I doubt whether they do good or harm. 译文b. It is generally believed that a wide variety of electronic products bring a great deal of fun to life, but I doubt whether they are beneficial to us or harmful. （2） 据....(往往是一件具体的事件 议论文） 1. It is said that... 据说... 2. It is reported that...据报道... 题. 据报道，从2015年中考将取消英语。（就我来看，这是不可能。） 译文. It is reported that English test will be canceled /won’t be included in senior high school entrance examination from 2015. ( From my point of view, it is far from true) (3) with...随着 （常用议论文） 1. With the rapid/fast increase/growth of (population) .. 随着(人口）的快速增长 2. With the rapid advance/development of (science and technology), ......随着(科技）的飞速发展/进步，... 3. With the great progress of ( science of technology), ... 随着（科技) 的巨大进步， 4. With the approaching/coming of ( senior high school entrance exam) 题： 随着电子书的盛行， 青少年的书写能力日益减弱。 、 译文a. With the wide spread of electronic books, teenagers’ writing ability is becoming weaker and weaker. 译文b. With the popularity of electronic books, teenagers’ writing ability is being weakened day by day/gradually. (四) 具体话题/问题/（多见议论文） 1. Recently there is a heated discussion/topic about .... 2. According to a recent survey, .... 3. Currently, the issue/phenomenon/problem of (food health).has been brought to public attention. 4. The issue/problem/phenomenon of (food health) has arisen public attention/ comes to public attention. 题 1. 最近大家都在讨论学生有无必要上课外辅导班（tutorial class) 译文: Recently there is a heated discussion whether it is necessary for students to attend tutorial classes (or not) 题2. 随着校车事故的频繁，校车的安全性问题引起了公众的关注。 译文：With the increase of accidents of school buses ( related to school buses), the problem of their safety comes to public attention. （5） 图表作文开头 1. As can be seen clearly from the graph/table/chart, ....(趋势描写/概括性描写） 2. As is shown in the graph/table/chart, ....（趋势描写/概括性描写） 3. It is clear/obvious/apparent from the table/chart that.... 4. The figures/statistics in the chart/table shows/indicates that... 批注：图表类作文一般第一句为趋势描写，或概括性描写。后面再具体描述图表，用必要数据作支撑。提醒 学生把握细节描述的量。还要留空间给why与how) 题: 以上图表显示，学生的睡眠时间严重不足。 译文a: As is shown in the chart above, students are seriously short of sleeping time. 译文b: It is clear/obvious from the table above that students seriously lack sleeping time. （6） 记人/写物/记事开头 1. The man, who is of few words/of average height, is my idol. （中间插入一定语从句） 2. Rita, mother of five kids, bears the heavy burden of life with her thin shoulders.(使用同位语） 3. Of all the people I know, perhaps none deserves my respect more than( Miss Wang). 4. Of all( the teachers) I have ever known/met, (Miss Wang) is the one I respect/love most. 5. Among various kinds of (sports), (football) is my fondest. 6. Throughout my life, the most unforgettable thing I’ve ever experienced is (a trip to Poland) 题1. Elena, 一个漂亮长发的年轻女孩，一下子引起我的注意。 译文a: Elena, (who was) a young lady with beautiful long hair, attracted me when I saw her. 译文b: Elena, a young lady with beautiful long hair, drew my attention the instant I saw her. 题2. 在我所看过的电影当中，Buried是最难忘的。 译文a: Of all the films I have ever seen, Buried is most unforgettable one. 题3. 在我一生中，最有意义的一次经历是暑期兼职。 译文：Throughout my life, the most meaningful thing I have ever done is to have a part-time job last summer. 批注：记叙文开头套用句型很少，一般开篇点人，点事. 如： 1. 题目 My favorite teacher（记人） Echo,my favourite teacher,is a pretty and slim lady.One of the most important reason that I like her is that she is very sincere 2. 题目 Honesty (记事） When I was a little child, I was very naughty and eager to know how the things around me worked. I would do something “bad” or surprising and often made others angry. But I will never forget what I did once and what had been told then. One day ... （7） 观点 In my opinion... As far as I am concerned ... To my mind... My opinion about ...is that...    I am of the opinion that...    例题：就我的看法打电动玩具既花费时间也有害健康。 译文：In my opinion, playing video games not only takes much time but is also harmful to health. 考点二：结尾仿写 一、专题知识梳理 阅卷老师，阅读完开头后，第二眼扫的往往是尾段。当开头无限灿烂的时候，尾巴也要收得漂亮；若是开头无光，尾巴更是要收得漂亮些。 文章的结尾可以有多重模式，如结论型，后果型，建议型，号召型，方向型，意义型，反问型，自然过渡型等。也有一些句型可用于结尾。 二、专题精讲 1. From what has been discussed above， we may safely draw/reach/arrive at the conclusion that …（议论文较多） Accordingly/Consequently/As a result, it is not difficult to draw/reach/arrive at the conclusion that... 题： 综上所述，我们可以得出结论电脑的利大于弊 译文1：From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that computers do more good than harm 译文2：From what has been discussed above, we may safely draw the conclusion that the advantages of computers outweigh the disadvantages. 2. In a word/To sum up/ On the whole, we should pay close attention to sth …（议论文） 题：总而言之，我们应该密切关注日常用水问题。 译文1: In a word/To sum up, we should pay close attention to daily water. 3. Only in this way can we (have a bright future). (倒装句型， 可接承句型2） 题1：只有这样，缺水问题才能得到改善 译文：Only in this way, can water shortage be improved. 题2： 只有这样，我们才能提高我们的学习能力。 译文：Only in this way, can we promote our learning ability. 批注：此句型，提醒下学生的语序问题，一般疑问句; 同样如果学生程度还不错，可以导入Only的其他倒装。 4. As long as ...只要 (连词 后接句子 多种文体） 题1：只要我们每天坚持阅读一点点，阅读习惯一定能养成。 译文：As long as we insist on reading a little every day, we are bound to/are sure to get into a good habit of reading. 题2：只要压岁钱使用得当，这个传统可以一直传承下去。 译文：As long as lucky money is used in a proper and wise way, this tradition can continue everlastingly/forever. 5. So excited and crazy were the fans that Swift hid back the gate. ( so..that 的变形倒装句型 适用多种文体） 题1： 空气污染如此严重，以致于有的学校甚至停课（suspend classes) 译文：So serious was the air pollution that some schools even suspended classes. 题 2：这本书如此有趣，我对它爱不释手。 译文：So interesting/amusing is the book that I just can hardly put it down. 题 3. 这段回忆是如此珍贵，我会将它永藏心中。 译文：So precious is the memory that I will cherish it in my heart for good. 批注：此句型适合程度较好的学生，以免语序错误，犯语法错误。 6. The 比较级， the 比较级 （多种文体） 题1：英语学得越久，我发现它越有意思。 译文：The longer I study English, the more interesting I find it. 题2：你付出的越多，收获的就是越多 译文：The more you pay, the more you harvest. 7. From this blind date (相亲）, I realize how weak I am/what a weak man I am. ( 此句型有些类似感叹句, 多种文体） 题1：从这次经历中，我明白团队精神是多重要。 译文：From this experience, I realize/have learned how important team spirit is. 题 2. 直至那是，我才明白我母亲是个多么伟大的女人。 译文：I didn’t realize what a great woman my mother was/how great my mother was until then. 8. I firmly/strongly believe that...(多种文体） I have a strong/firm belief that... I am deeply convinced that... 题1：我坚信我有天会成为苹果的CEO。 译文1：I firmly believed/I have a firm belief that I will be the CEO of Apple. 题2：我坚信你定能克服障碍，取得好成绩。 译文：I have a strong belief that you will get over the difficulty/obstacles and get good/pleasant/satisfying scores. 9. It is ...that...(强调句型，多种文体） 题1：是第一夫人彭丽媛将中国女性美带入国际舞台。 译文： It is the fist-lady Peng brings the beautify of Chinese woman into the international stage. 题 2. 是在一个漆黑的晚上我遭遇了一场严重的事故。 译文：It was on a dark night that I suffered a severe accident. 题3：是她无私的帮助让我重新振作起来。 译文：It was her selfless help that made me cheer up again/gain courage again. 批注：强调句型多数学生之前未接触过，老师可以讲得稍微细致一些。 难点强化 1．（2025·上海静安·二模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation （根据以下情景写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 你的学校计划举办名为“用英语讲中国故事”的校园文化节活动，现就活动方案征求意见。假设你是初三学生李华，请阅读以下活动方案，写一封邮件给大队部汪老师。邮件须包含以下内容： (1)你是否会参加此活动，并简述理由； (2)针对方案中的一项内容，提出修改建议。 校园文化节活动方案 The Plan of Campus Culture Festival 主题Theme “用英语讲中国故事”Telling Chinese stories in English 时间Time 4月21日—4月25日下午4:00—6:00 地点Place 学校图书馆前的草坪 (lawn) 对象Participant 6—9年级学生 形式Ways 线上故事分享、线下知识讲座、英语故事戏剧表演 (Online story sharing, Offline knowledge lecture, English story drama performance) 注意： (1)文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分； (2)照抄阅读语篇不得分。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．（2025·上海嘉定·二模）Write at least 60 words according to the situation given.（请根据所给情境，写一篇不少于60个词的短文。标点符号不占格。） 为丰富学生的校园生活，学校拟成立校外实践基地（off-campus practical base），现有四个候选基地供选择： ·生态花卉园（Ecological Flower Garden） ·科创实验基地（Science and Innovation Experiment Base） ·传统文化体验馆（Traditional Culture Experience Center） ·历史博物馆（History Museum） 现面向全体学生征集意见，并邀请同学们设计相关实践活动。假设你是学生李华，请写一封邮件给负责此项目的张老师。内容包括： 1．推荐一个实践基地，并简要说明理由。 2．设计本学期校外实践活动，说明活动形式及意义。 （注意：1．短文中不得出现考生真实姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2．照抄阅读语篇不得分。） ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．（2025·上海奉贤·二模）Write a passage in at least 60 words according to the following situation.（以“Golden Ideas for the School Science Fair”为题，根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 科技点燃梦想，创新引领未来！你们学校第10届科技节即将开幕，现向全体同学征集活动“金点子”——无论是邀请大咖作科技讲座、举行趣味实验比拼、还是……只要你的活动创意新颖、可行性强，就有机会被采纳并亮相科技节！快来用你的智慧，为校园科技盛宴添彩！ （注意：1.写作中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2.照抄阅读语篇不得分。） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．（2025·上海·模拟预测）Write at least 60 words on the topic “Less pressure, better life” (以“更少压力，更好生活”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 现代社会随着生活节奏的加快，来自生活、学习等各方面的压力越来越大，所以只有学会舒缓压力，才能更好地生活。The following is for reference only. (以下表达/内容仅供参考) ●What’s the pressure in your daily life? ●How do you reduce the pressure? (Give at least 2 ways) __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 5．（2025·上海·模拟预测）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation(根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格)。 学校打算开展以“建设绿色校园”(“Building a Green Campus”)为主题的环保周系列活动，目前正在向全校师生征集活动计划。假设你是李华，请你从以下两种系列活动中挑选一种，并为其写一份详细的活动计划，包含活动目的、具体安排(时间、地点、人员及活动准备等)。 植树护绿(Planting Trees) 垃圾分类(Trash sorting) 注意：1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 6．（2025·上海·模拟预测）Write at least 60 words about the topic “I want to say sorry to ________”（以“我想向……道歉”为题写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） 请结合自己的亲身经历，简要阐述一下道歉的理由，并且谈谈感想。 （注意：短文中不得出现任何人名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。） ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7．（2025·上海·模拟预测）Write at least 60 words according to the given information (根据以下材料。写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 请从中选择你比较有感触的一条，可结合自己的经历，谈谈你的体会。 Friendship doesn’t just happen. It takes time and patience. As long as you keep smiling, life will smile to you. I can accept failure, but I cannot accept not trying (注意：短文中不得出现考生姓名、校名及其它相关信息，否则不予评分。) ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 8．（2025·上海闵行·三模）我校拟于近期举办微电影大赛(microfilm festival)，要求各班级创作并提交一部微电影参赛作品。现班主任王老师面向全班同学征集微电影剧本(script)选题方案。假设你是李华，请写一封不少于60词的建议信，要求从以下三个类别中选择其一，并阐述选择理由： 1. 展望未来的原创科幻作品(science fiction)； 2. 基于经典名著(classic)的改编作品； 3. 聚焦校园或学生日常生活的纪录片(documentary)。 (注意：短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名及其他相关信息，否则不予评分。标点符号不占格) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 复习提升 9．（2025·上海金山·三模）Write at least 60 words to the situation given. 请根据所给情境，以 “The world bestows me ________ (世界赠与我……)” 为题，写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格 2025年春晚，王菲的歌曲《世界赠与我的》引起了广泛关注。歌中唱到：“世界赠与我虫鸣，也赠与我雷霆。”世界赠与了我们许多东西，他们可以是有形的，也可以是无形的。它可以是快乐、成功。也可以是痛苦、失败。这些体验，无论好坏，都是生命中不可或缺的一部分。请你结合自己的亲身经历，谈谈世界赠与你的“礼物”以及你的感悟。 参考信息： tangible 有形的     intangible 无形的    bestow 赠予    foster 促进 resilient 有韧性的    setback 挫折    appreciate 感恩    determined 坚定的 sufferings 痛苦 (注意：1. 文中不得出现任何真实人名、校名及其他信息，否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读内容不得分。) The world bestows me ________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 10．（24-25九年级下·上海·阶段练习）Please write at least 60 words according to the given situation. （请你根据所给情境，写一篇不少于 60 个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） 你们的口语外教Emily结束了这个学期的教学，即将离开中国回国。她很热爱中国文化，所以班里的同学决定一起送她一份特别的礼物作为纪念。假设你是口语课代表，请你书写一张礼物卡，随礼物一起交给她。卡片内容包括： （1）礼物的介绍和描述。 （2）选择这份礼物的理由。 （3）对外教的感谢和祝福。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 11．（2025·上海杨浦·三模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation. (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 假设你是初三学生李枫，你校初三年级即将举办一个主题为 “校园记忆” 的展览活动。学校邀请每位初三学生提供一张与校园生活相关的照片，并为该照片撰写一段介绍文字供参观者阅读。 介绍文字内容须包括： √照片的题目 √照片的简要描述 √照片对你个人和校园生活的意义 (注意：1. 短文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。) ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 12．（2025·上海虹口·三模）你所在的学校正在举办“AI与青少年成长”主题英语演讲比赛，请你以“AI助力我的生活 (AI powers my life)”为题撰写一篇英文演讲稿。选择一个方面。如学习效率、健康管理、时间规划、创意思维等，说明你使用AI助益自己的方法，分析其带来的好处并谈谈感想。 (注意：1. 文章中不得出现考生姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分；2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分) ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 13．（24-25九年级下·上海普陀·阶段练习）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation (根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格) 近日，你校正在开展主题为“我为母校建言献策 (Offering Suggestions for My School)”的征集活动，邀请初三年级学生为学校未来发展提出建议。假如你是李华，请参加此活动，并给校长写一封电子邮件，提出一项针对学校课程设计(course design)、校园环境（school environment）、午餐质量 (quality of lunch)或校园活动 (school activities)的改进建议，并说明理由。 （注意：文中不得出现姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。照抄阅读语篇不得分。） ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 14．（2025·上海黄浦·二模）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation.（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格。） 假设你是李华，收到英国笔友Tom的求助邮件。他因借助AI完成作业与爸爸产生矛盾。Tom想缓和关系却不知如何表达。请以李华的身份给Tom回复邮件，提出建议，助其改善与爸爸的关系。邮件需包含对使用AI完成作业的看法及解决矛盾的建议。 注意： 1. 短文中不得出现考生的姓名、校名等个人信息，否则不予评分。 2. 照抄阅读语篇不得分。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 15．（2025·上海闵行·模拟预测）Write at least 60 words according to the given situation（根据以下情境写一篇不少于60个词的短文，标点符号不占格） 假设你是李华，你们班想在毕业之前为学校做一件有意义的事。先想一想打算做什么？并邀请交换生Tommy参加这次活动。请你用英文给他写一封电子邮件，告诉他活动内容、意义及安排。 Dear Tommy, I’m Li Hua. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 16．（2025·上海徐汇·模拟预测）你的学校最近开展了一次学生午餐情况调研，从午餐种类(variety)、品质(quality)、用餐体验(dining experience) 等方面进行了满意度调研 (satisfaction survey)，相关调查结果见以下饼状图(pie chart)。 请你根据本次调查结果，写一份调查报告。 内容包括： 1、调查情况介绍 2、相关数据分析 3、改进建议 You may begin like this: Our school recently conducted a satisfaction survey on students’ lunches… ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$