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专题09 书面表达
(一)
(2025年杭州拱墅区二模)
初中毕业后的暑假,很多学生会计划选择外出旅行,也有不少学生选择尝试暑期志愿者活动。请你结合下表内容,选择其中一种方式说明,并阐述你的理由。
Travel
Do volunteer work
Plans
·where to go ·who to go with ·what to do
·…
Reasons
·relax oneself
·get a lot of knowledge
·meet different kinds of people
·…
·put what you’ve learnt into practice
·learn new skills
·get a different experience of life
·…
注意:
1. 文中必须包含你所选方式中的所有要点,并适当补充;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、地名和校名;
3. 词数:90~110;
4. 短文首句仅供参考,不计入总词数。
I’m going to finish my junior high school this summer.
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(二)
(2025年杭州临平区二模)
2025年被国家定为“体重管理年”,倡导全民关注健康生活。你所在的学校计划开展主题为“How to Be Healthy”的健康宣讲活动,分享如何有效控制体重,保持健康的方法。假如你是李华,请根据下图写一篇英语发言稿,内容需包含图片的所有内容,同时补充一条具体做法。
要求:词数80左右;短文首尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Teachers and Friends,
I’m Li Hua. I am honored to share some ways to manage weight and keep healthy.
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That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
(三)
(2025年杭州上城区二模)
来自新加坡的Jenny在某英语论坛发布了一个帖子,假定你是李华,请你根据Jenny的帖子进行跟帖,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
注意:
1. 短文必须包含以上问题的信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3. 词数80左右:帖子第一句已给出,不计入总词数。
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(四)
(2025年杭州西湖区二模)
假如你是李华,请你对你校英国交换生Darrell的邮件进行回复。词数80词左右,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
From Darrell
Subject Race next Friday
Hey Li Hua.
Remember the charity race I told you about? I can’t take part in it because I’ve hurt my leg! I fell off my bike yesterday. I don’t think it’s broken, but it’s really hard to walk. It really hurts, and I feel quite upset about missing the race.
Could you run in the race for me, please? I know you’re a great runner and it’s only 200 meters. It starts next Friday at 3 p.m.
I hope you can help. It would mean a lot to me.
Thanks so much!
Darrell
Dear Darrell,
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Yours,
Li Hua
(五)
(2025年杭州萧山区二模)
假设你是张华,你的英国笔友Alice即将作为交换生来你们学校学习。请根据以下相关信息,写一封邮件,向她推荐你校开设的一门选修课程(Elective Course)。
Courses
Activities
Chinese Calligraphy (书法)
Write characters,
Explore their cultural meanings
Traditional Music &Instruments
Play instruments: guzheng & erhu,
Perform a short piece in groups
Chinese Taichi
Practice basic movements,
Visit a Taichi school
注意:(1)词数80左右;(2)可适当添加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Alice,
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Best wishes,
Zhang Hua
(六)
(2025年宁波宁海二模)
电影《哪吒之魔童闹海》上映以后,一举打破多项影史记录,在国外也非常火爆。假如你是李华,你的外国朋友Cindy想了解中国动漫,请你根据以下信息给她写一封邮件,介绍哪吒、木兰或其他一个卡通形象及理由。
Name: Ne Zha
Appearance: big eyes, round face, magical wheels (风火轮)
Reasons: naughty (淘气的), fight against bad people, protect...
Name: Mulan
Appearance: tall, long face, dress up...
Reasons: smart, fight in the army, protect...
注意:(1)邮件必须包括表格中的所有要点,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
(3)词数100词左右,邮件中已给的句子不计入总词数。
Dear Cindy,
I’m happy that you like Chinese cartoons. Now let me tell you something about ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
(七)
(2025年宁波余姚二模)
宁波博物馆正面向全市中学生招募“用英语讲好中国故事”活动的宣讲人。假如你是李华,你想报名参加,请根据下面的提示信息写一封自荐信。
内容提示:
Purpose
To spread Chinese culture
Self-introduction
Age: …
Personality: outgoing,…
Advantages (优势):
1. know a lot about Chinese history and culture
2. …
Promise
…
要求:
(1)80—100词左右,开头、结尾和署名已给,不计入总词数;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等信息;
(3)可适当增添细节使行文更流畅,省略号处需补充完整。
Dear Mr. Wang,
I’m excited to hear that our city will hold the activity “Telling Chinese Stories in English”. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
(八)
(2025年金华二模)
最近,某英文报正在开展以“I want to say thanks to _________”为主题的征文活动,旨在鼓励大家回顾美好时光、表达感恩之情。假如你是李华,请根据以下问题提示,写一篇英语短文投稿。
问题提示:
♥Whom do you want to say thanks to?
♥Why do you want to say thanks to him/ her?
♥What will you do to show your thanks?
注意:
(1) 短文需包含问题提示的所有信息,可适当发挥;
(2) 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3) 词数:80左右。
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(九)
(2025年金华六校二模)
宇树科技创始人王兴兴带领团队不断攻克技术难关,研发了世界领先的人形机器人。假如在英语课上,老师在讲述了王兴兴的故事后,让大家讨论成功的秘诀。下面给出的两条成功经验中,你倾向于哪一条呢?请你结合个人经历,分享你的看法。
The secret to success
Long-termism (长期主义)
Teamwork (团队精神)
1. ★set a clear goal
2. ★focus on the goal
3. ★stick to the goal
1. ★share ideas
2. ★communicate
3. ★work hard together
写作要求:
①文章必须包含成功经验的几个要素,可适当发挥;
②文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校等信息;
③词数:80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
After listening to the story of Wang Xingxing, I believe ______ is the secret to success.
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(十)
(2025年金华义乌二模)
假设你是李华,你的加拿大好友Robert计划暑假来中国体验city-walk (城市漫步) 。请根据以下信息,写一封邮件,向他推荐一处适合city-walk的地点。
注意:
1. 邮件需包含所选地点的至少两点相关信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3. 词数80左右,邮件的首尾和第一句已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Robert,
I’m glad to know that you are planning a visit to China this summer holiday. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
(十一)
(2025年温州龙湾二模)
在旅行中,有人热衷逛博物馆、有人乐于品尝美食、有人喜欢与当地人交流……著名旅行博主John发起了关于个人旅行偏好的帖子。请你结合自身经历谈谈你的旅行偏好,以及它所带来的收获。
1.What do you enjoy doing during your travels?
2.What can it bring you?
Share with us...
During my travels, I enjoy ______________
_______________________________________________________________
注意:
(1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(2)词数:80词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
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(十二)
(2025年温州鹿城二模)
为保障青少年睡眠时间,教育部门明确重申,初中上课时间--般不早于八点。对此,校英语报组织了“When the Bell Rings after Eight”的征文活动。请你根据以下表格,结合自身实际情况,写一篇英语短文投稿,谈谈该政策(policy)对你生活和学习两方面的影响。
When the Bell Rings after Eight
My life
●Sleeping
●Having breakfast
●…
My study
●Listening in class
●…
注意:
1.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
2.词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
I’m glad to share my life and study when the bell rings after eight.
(十三)
(2025年温州瑞安二模)
学校英语俱乐部正在筹备一期主题为“My Delicious Memory”的英文小报,现向全校同学征稿。请你参考海报内容,选择一种食物,写一篇英语短文,讲述你与它之间的故事,并分享它对你的特殊意义。
注意:(1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;(2)词数80词左右;开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
The food that brings back a special memory for me is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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(十四)
(2025年杭州钱塘二模)
假如你是李华,计划在“五一”期间进行一次以“体验中国文化”为主题的旅行。请根据下图提示,用英语写一份文化游计划,并在英语课上与同学们分享。
注意:1.计划需包含至少三个活动,以上活动仅供参考;2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息;3.词数80—100左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hi, class. I’m glad to share my plan about May Day cultural tour with you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
(十五)
(2025年名校发展共同体二模)
假如你是李华,并即将就读某高级中学。该校英语社团正开展新生线上交流活动。其公众号将推送系列关于健康生活的内容。请你阅读以下倡议通知,并向公众号投稿。
注意:
1.短文需包含通知中提到的要点,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3.词数80左右,稿件首位已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear freshman,
Our English club is now asking for suggestions on the theme of healthy living. You are warmly welcome to share your ideas.
Have you had a healthy life in junior high school? You can just talk about the problems you have faced, such as being stressed out or lacking enough sleep. Besides, do you have any resolutions to spend a healthier vacation or to be healthier in senior high school?
Looking forward to your suggestions and hope all of you enjoy your senior high school life.
Yours,
Ms. Miller
Dear schoolmates,
I am glad to show you my life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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Best wishes,
Li Hua
(十六)
(2025年绍兴上虞二模)
假如你是李华,你的家乡“美丽乡村 (beautiful countryside)”项目吸引了不少外宾,暑假期间需要招募若干擅长英语的小导游,请你结合下列问题,给该项目负责人写一封英语自荐邮件。
1. What kind of person are you?
2. What are you good at?
3. What can you do there?
注意:
1. 邮件须围绕上面三个问题展开,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 词数:80—100。邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I would be thankful if I could be given the chance. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
(十七)
(2025年台州椒江二模)
假如你是李华,你的英国好友Mike向父母征询送什么生日礼物给同学Jack,他们意见不统一,给他造成困惑。请你根据以下图文中的相关信息,写一封邮件,向他推荐其中一个生日礼物并阐述理由。
注意:(1)邮件需包含所选礼物至少两点相关信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3)词数:80左右;邮件的首尾和第一句已给出,不计入总词数。
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(十八)
(2025年台州路桥二模)
假设你是李明,想邀请Peter去科技馆参加以“AI changes the future”为主题的展览(exhibition),请根据以下提示写一封电子邮件,介绍本次展览的基本信息以及2-3项活动内容,并谈谈本次展览的意义。
When
10:00 a.m.—3:00 p.m. May 27th
Where
at the Science Museum
What
□learn the AI history
□ask experts questions about AI
□enjoy robot performances
□try creative coding (编程)
□play AI games
□…
Why
become interested in AI technology
…
注意:
(1)邮件中必须包括所给的内容要点,可适当发挥;
(2)邮件中不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息;
(3)词数80~100。邮件的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
To: Peter
From: Li Ming
Hi, Peter,
How’s it going? I’m writing to invite ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
(十九)
(2025年台州温岭二模)
随着中国过境免签政策的放宽,许多外国游客涌入中国,掀起一股“China Travel”的热潮。假如你是张华,你的英国朋友Alice即将来浙江杭州旅游,请根据以下相关信息,写一封邮件,可适当发挥。
Alice
I really want to experience traditional Chinese culture. Could you introduce a fun place worth visiting in Hangzhou? What do you suggest I do? What food can I try?
Places: Hangzhou National Tea Museum/...
Activities: watch tea art performances/make tea by yourself/...
Food: Dongpo Pork/Longjing Tea Shrimp/Dingsheng Cake/...
Zhang Hua
注意:
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息:
2. 词数80左右;邮件的首句和尾句已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Alice,
I’m excited to know that you are coming to Hangzhou soon._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope you’ll have an unforgettable trip!
Yours,
Zhang Hua
(二十)
(2025年台州仙居二模)
你校正在评选英语小达人 (Little English talent),下面是你班两位候选人的基本情况。请从中挑选一位并写出你的推荐理由。
Mary
quiet, patient
like reading English books;
get good grades in English exams;
sing English songs well
Henry
outgoing, friendly
act well in English plays;
be good at telling English stories;
be ready to help others
注意:
(1) 文中必须包含表格中的内容要点,可适当发挥;
(2) 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3) 词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入总字数。
In my opinion, Little English Talent should have some skills or great talents in English, so I recommend___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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(二十一)
(2025年台州玉环二模)
假如你应邀参加一个英语读书分享会,并将分享你自己读过的一本好书。请根据下列表格中的要点,用英语写一篇短文,介绍你要分享的书。
内容要点
参考词汇
Book title
Journey to the West
The writer
Wu Cheng’en
The main story
● go on a journey to the west
● fight against the bad
● overcome the difficulties
Reasons why I like it
● meaningful,
● keep fighting.
● never give up.
注意:1. 文中必须包括所给的内容要点,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
3. 词数 80-100。
Journey to the West
I’d like to share the book Journey to the West with you. __________________________________________________________________________________________
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(二十二)
(2025年湖州吴兴二模)
假如你是某校学生会(Student Union)成员张华,负责下个月英国友人来你校一日研学活动。学校已安排了上午的日程,请根据以下信息,写一封邮件,向他们介绍学校的安排以及学生会为他们设计的下午的活动。
Time
Activity
Meaning
in the morning
visit the school
enjoy the beautiful environment of the school...
join school clubs (experience paper cutting,...)
learn Chinese culture ...
in the afternoon
…
…
注意:
1.邮件需包含上面表格中的全部信息,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3.词数80词左右;邮件的首尾和第一句已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear friends,
Welcome to our school for a one-day visit next month!
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Yours,
Zhang Hua
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专题09 书面表达
(一)
(2025年杭州拱墅区二模)
初中毕业后的暑假,很多学生会计划选择外出旅行,也有不少学生选择尝试暑期志愿者活动。请你结合下表内容,选择其中一种方式说明,并阐述你的理由。
Travel
Do volunteer work
Plans
·where to go ·who to go with ·what to do
·…
Reasons
·relax oneself
·get a lot of knowledge
·meet different kinds of people
·…
·put what you’ve learnt into practice
·learn new skills
·get a different experience of life
·…
注意:
1. 文中必须包含你所选方式中的所有要点,并适当补充;
2. 文中不得出现真实的人名、地名和校名;
3. 词数:90~110;
4. 短文首句仅供参考,不计入总词数。
I’m going to finish my junior high school this summer.
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【答案】例文
I’m going to finish my junior high school this summer. In my class, some students plan to travel in the summer vacation, others prefer to have part-time jobs.
As for me, I prefer to travel with my classmates. I plan to go to Beijing and visit some places of interest. First, we can relax ourselves completely. I can see the beautiful scenery and love everything that the nature brings. Second, as a saying goes, travel is a great source of real knowledge. During the journey, I can get a lot of knowledge about history, culture and so on. What’s more, I will meet many different kinds of people. It can help improve my communicative ability. Last but not least, traveling is a good way to make the friendship strong. I will have more sweet memories with my friends.
All in all, I will choose a meaningful trip during this summer vacation.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,承接开头,引出下文;
第二步,详细介绍自己的暑假计划及其理由;
第三步,总结全文。
[亮点词汇]
①plan to do sth.计划做某事
②prefer to较喜欢,宁愿
③different kinds of不同种类的
④all in all总而言之
[高分句型]
I can see the beautiful scenery and love everything that the nature brings.(that引导的定语从句)
(二)
(2025年杭州临平区二模)
2025年被国家定为“体重管理年”,倡导全民关注健康生活。你所在的学校计划开展主题为“How to Be Healthy”的健康宣讲活动,分享如何有效控制体重,保持健康的方法。假如你是李华,请根据下图写一篇英语发言稿,内容需包含图片的所有内容,同时补充一条具体做法。
要求:词数80左右;短文首尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Teachers and Friends,
I’m Li Hua. I am honored to share some ways to manage weight and keep healthy.
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That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
【答案】例文
Dear Teachers and Friends,
I’m Li Hua. I am honored to share some ways to manage weight and keep healthy.
First, good living habits are essential. Going to bed early and waking up early helps our body recover and maintains energy levels. Second, healthy eating habits matter greatly. We should eat more vegetables, fruits and whole grains, while reducing sugary drinks and junk food. Third, regular exercise is vital. Doing sports like running, swimming or playing basketball for at least 30 minutes daily helps burn calories. Additionally, I suggest drinking enough water every day. A simple tip is to carry a water bottle and drink small amounts frequently.
Remember, consistency is key! Small healthy choices every day lead to big changes over time.
That’s all. Thanks for your listening!
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇发言稿;
②时态:主要使用一般现在时;
③提示:必须包含图片中所有要点(生活习惯、饮食习惯、运动),并补充一条具体做法;
[写作步骤]
第一步:简要自我介绍并说明演讲主题;
第二步:分三点阐述图片内容;
第三步:补充一条具体建议;
第四步:总结强调坚持的重要性。
[亮点词汇]
①help sb do sth 帮助某人做某事
②at least 至少
③Additionally此外
[高分句型]
Going to bed early and waking up early helps our body recover and maintains energy levels.(动名词短语作主语)
(三)
(2025年杭州上城区二模)
来自新加坡的Jenny在某英语论坛发布了一个帖子,假定你是李华,请你根据Jenny的帖子进行跟帖,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
注意:
1. 短文必须包含以上问题的信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3. 词数80左右:帖子第一句已给出,不计入总词数。
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【答案】例文
Hi, I am Li Hua. There are a lot of public places to visit in my neighborhood, for example, a big shopping mall and a cinema. And my favourite place is a library which is next to my home.
On weekends or during the holiday, I always go there with some of my friends. The library is bright and quiet, just right for doing homework. Another reason I like going there is that I can borrow books or read the latest magazines.
I feel happy living in such a wonderful neighborhood.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:围绕社区环境展开,介绍了社区内的公共场所、最喜欢的图书馆及其特点,以及在图书馆的活动和居住感受等要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,自我介绍并总述社区有很多公共场所,引出最喜欢的图书馆及其位置;
第二步,描述周末/假期常去图书馆,说明图书馆的环境特点和功能;
第三步,总结居住在该社区的幸福感。
[亮点词汇]
①public places公共场所
②neighborhood社区
③latest magazines最新杂志
[高分句型]
①And my favourite place is a library which is next to my home. (which引导的定语从句)
(四)
(2025年杭州西湖区二模)
假如你是李华,请你对你校英国交换生Darrell的邮件进行回复。词数80词左右,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
From Darrell
Subject Race next Friday
Hey Li Hua.
Remember the charity race I told you about? I can’t take part in it because I’ve hurt my leg! I fell off my bike yesterday. I don’t think it’s broken, but it’s really hard to walk. It really hurts, and I feel quite upset about missing the race.
Could you run in the race for me, please? I know you’re a great runner and it’s only 200 meters. It starts next Friday at 3 p.m.
I hope you can help. It would mean a lot to me.
Thanks so much!
Darrell
Dear Darrell,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Darrell,
I’m so sorry to hear about your bike accident! I hope your leg heals soon. Don’t worry about the charity race—I’d be happy to run for you.
The 200-meter race next Friday at 3 p.m. sounds easy for me. I’ll make sure to wear your race number and bring some extra water. Would you like me to share any specific message about the charity while running? I’ll take photos during the race so that you can see how it goes.
Just focus on resting now. Let me know if you need anything else, like notes from class or someone to carry your books. I’m sure you’ll recover in no time!
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:文章应该包括邮件提到的要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第一、二人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,建立共情基调,让Darrell感受到支持,为后续内容作铺垫;
第二步,通过具体行动规划,让Darrell相信事情会被妥善处理,同时体现对慈善赛事的认真态度;
第三步,从“解决具体问题”延伸到“日常关怀”,全面体现对Darrell的支持,收束邮件时传递积极预期。
[亮点词汇]
①focus on doing sth. 专注于做某事
②make sure to do sth. 务必做某事
[高分句型]
①I’ll take photos during the race so that you can see how it goes. (so that引导目的状语从句)
②I’m sure you’ll recover in no time! (宾语从句)
(五)
(2025年杭州萧山区二模)
假设你是张华,你的英国笔友Alice即将作为交换生来你们学校学习。请根据以下相关信息,写一封邮件,向她推荐你校开设的一门选修课程(Elective Course)。
Courses
Activities
Chinese Calligraphy (书法)
Write characters,
Explore their cultural meanings
Traditional Music &Instruments
Play instruments: guzheng & erhu,
Perform a short piece in groups
Chinese Taichi
Practice basic movements,
Visit a Taichi school
注意:(1)词数80左右;(2)可适当添加细节,以使行文连贯。
Dear Alice,
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Zhang Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Alice,
I’m thrilled to hear that you’ll be coming to our school as an exchange student! I’d like to recommend an elective course that I think you’d really enjoy: Chinese Calligraphy.
In this course, we learn how to write beautiful Chinese characters with brushes. It’s not just about the writing; we also explore the cultural meanings behind each character, which I find really fascinating. You’ll get to practice writing different styles and even create your own calligraphy works. I think it’s a great way to immerse yourself in Chinese culture and improve your handwriting too!
I hope you’ll consider taking this course. It’s a lot of fun, and I’m sure you’ll learn a lot from it.
Looking forward to seeing you soon!
Best wishes,
Zhang Hua
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,要求根据提示内容进行写作,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表达开心之情,并推荐一门选修课程;
第二步,具体介绍这门选修课程;
第三步,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①a lot of许多,很多
②learn a lot from从……学到很多
③look forward to期待
[高分句型]
①In this course, we learn how to write beautiful Chinese characters with brushes.(“特殊疑问词+动词不定式”结构)
②I think it’s a great way to immerse yourself in Chinese culture and improve your handwriting too!(宾语从句)
(六)
(2025年宁波宁海二模)
电影《哪吒之魔童闹海》上映以后,一举打破多项影史记录,在国外也非常火爆。假如你是李华,你的外国朋友Cindy想了解中国动漫,请你根据以下信息给她写一封邮件,介绍哪吒、木兰或其他一个卡通形象及理由。
Name: Ne Zha
Appearance: big eyes, round face, magical wheels (风火轮)
Reasons: naughty (淘气的), fight against bad people, protect...
Name: Mulan
Appearance: tall, long face, dress up...
Reasons: smart, fight in the army, protect...
注意:(1)邮件必须包括表格中的所有要点,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实的人名和校名;
(3)词数100词左右,邮件中已给的句子不计入总词数。
Dear Cindy,
I’m happy that you like Chinese cartoons. Now let me tell you something about ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】范文:
Dear Cindy,
I’m happy that you like Chinese cartoons. Now let me tell you something about Ne Zha.
Ne Zha is a cute boy with a round face and two big eyes. The coolest thing about Ne Zha is that he has a pair of magical wheels, so he can move very fast.
Ne Zha is sometimes naughty and makes his parents angry. I still like him because I think he is just like us. Another reason I like him is that he is really brave. He is always ready to fight against bad people and tries his best to protect his family and friends. I am often deeply moved by his spirits.
What about your favorite cartoon characters? Please write soon.
Yours,
Li Hua (105 words)
Dear Cindy,
I’m happy that you like Chinese cartoons. Now let me tell you something about Mulan.
Mulan is a beautiful girl who is tall and has a long face. Mulan takes her father’s place to fight in the army. The coolest thing is that she dresses up as a boy in the army for over ten years and nobody knows that Mulan is actually a girl.
The main reason I like Mulan is that she is really smart and brave. She is never afraid when she fights against the bad people. She just tries her best to protect her country and her people. Mulan is really a hero in my heart.
What about your favorite cartoon characters? Please write soon.
Yours,
Li Hua (104 words)
【解析】
【详解】例文1为例作解析:
《关于哪吒的信件范文解析》
[总体分析]
① 题材:本文一篇电子邮件。
② 时态:全文采用 “一般现在时”。
③ 提示:文章紧扣交流需求,先回应朋友对中国卡通的喜爱,接着按顺序介绍哪吒外貌、性格特点和优秀品质,逻辑连贯,语言自然流畅,无语法错误,且通过提问引导朋友回信,增强互动性。
[写作步骤落实]
第一步:引入主题。 以回应朋友对中国卡通的喜爱为切入点,自然引出要介绍的卡通人物哪吒,明确写作主题。
第二步:介绍人物。
第三步:总结感受。
[亮点词汇]
①a pair of一双
②be always ready to时刻准备着
③try one’s best to尽某人最大的努力去
[高分句型]
①The coolest thing about Ne Zha is that he has a pair of magical wheels, so he can move very fast.” (表语从句)
②I still like him because I think he is just like us.(because引导的原因状语从句)
(七)
(2025年宁波余姚二模)
宁波博物馆正面向全市中学生招募“用英语讲好中国故事”活动的宣讲人。假如你是李华,你想报名参加,请根据下面的提示信息写一封自荐信。
内容提示:
Purpose
To spread Chinese culture
Self-introduction
Age: …
Personality: outgoing,…
Advantages (优势):
1. know a lot about Chinese history and culture
2. …
Promise
…
要求:
(1)80—100词左右,开头、结尾和署名已给,不计入总词数;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名和学校等信息;
(3)可适当增添细节使行文更流畅,省略号处需补充完整。
Dear Mr. Wang,
I’m excited to hear that our city will hold the activity “Telling Chinese Stories in English”. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】One possible version:
Dear Mr. Wang,
I’m excited to hear that our city will hold the activity “Telling Chinese Stories in English”.
I really want to take part in it because I’d like to spread Chinese culture to the world. Now let me introduce myself.
I’m 14 years old. I’m outgoing and good with people of different ages. I’m also brave enough to speak in front of crowds. I have many hobbies, especially reading. I’ve spent plenty of time reading lots of classics. For this reason, I know a lot about Chinese history and culture. What’s more, I’m good at telling Chinese stories in English.
I promise I will try my best to be an excellent story teller and make Chinese culture known to the world.
I’m looking forward to your reply
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】【总体分析】
①题材:属于书信体裁中的自荐信,用于向活动主办方推荐自己担任宣讲人;
②时态:以一般现在时为主,介绍个人情况、优势及承诺;涉及过去经历时用一般过去时;
③提示:内容涵盖报名目的、个人介绍、优势及承诺,符合题目要求,且适当增添细节,使行文更充实。
【写作步骤】
第一步,开头呼应活动招募信息,直接说明写信目的是推荐自己,强调传播中国文化的热情;
第二步,介绍年龄与外向性格,突出沟通能力,阐述对中国历史文化的了解,强调英语优势,说明能用英语生动讲述故事;
第三步,承诺认真准备活动,深入研究故事、练习表达,致力于传播中国文化,展现责任感。
【亮点词汇】
①take part in参加
②in front of在……面前
③be good at擅长
【高分句型】
①I really want to take part in it because I’d like to spread Chinese culture to the world.(原因状语从句)
②I promise I will try my best to be an excellent story teller and make Chinese culture known to the world.(宾语从句)
(八)
(2025年金华二模)
最近,某英文报正在开展以“I want to say thanks to _________”为主题的征文活动,旨在鼓励大家回顾美好时光、表达感恩之情。假如你是李华,请根据以下问题提示,写一篇英语短文投稿。
问题提示:
♥Whom do you want to say thanks to?
♥Why do you want to say thanks to him/ her?
♥What will you do to show your thanks?
注意:
(1) 短文需包含问题提示的所有信息,可适当发挥;
(2) 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3) 词数:80左右。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
I want to say thanks to my English teacher
I want to say thanks to my English teacher, Miss Liu. She has made a great difference in my English-learning journey.
Miss Liu always uses interesting methods to teach us, which makes her classes lively and engaging. When I was too shy to answer questions in class, she encouraged me with a warm smile and kind words. She also gave me extra help after class whenever I had problems with my English.
To show my thanks, I’ll make a beautiful handmade card for her, on which I’ll write down all my gratitude. And I’ll work harder and try to get better grades in English to make her proud.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本题是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文用一般现在时和一般过去时;
③提示:介绍自己最想感谢的人,需要遵照所给要求,信息覆盖全面,适当补充细节。
[写作步骤]
第一步,说明自己最想感谢的人是英语老师刘老师,引出下文;
第二步,阐述自己想要感谢刘老师的原因,注意细节充分,三观正确;
第三步,描述自己将做些什么来表达谢意,注意用词准确,行文流畅。
[亮点词汇]
①make a great difference 产生很多影响
②too…to… 太……而不能……
③try to do 努力做某事
[高分句型]
①Miss Liu always uses interesting methods to teach us, which makes her classes lively and engaging.(定语从句)
②When I was too shy to answer questions in class, she encouraged me with a warm smile and kind words.(时间状语从句)
(九)
(2025年金华六校二模)
宇树科技创始人王兴兴带领团队不断攻克技术难关,研发了世界领先的人形机器人。假如在英语课上,老师在讲述了王兴兴的故事后,让大家讨论成功的秘诀。下面给出的两条成功经验中,你倾向于哪一条呢?请你结合个人经历,分享你的看法。
The secret to success
Long-termism (长期主义)
Teamwork (团队精神)
1. ★set a clear goal
2. ★focus on the goal
3. ★stick to the goal
1. ★share ideas
2. ★communicate
3. ★work hard together
写作要求:
①文章必须包含成功经验的几个要素,可适当发挥;
②文中不得出现真实的姓名和学校等信息;
③词数:80左右(开头已给出,不计入总词数)。
After listening to the story of Wang Xingxing, I believe ______ is the secret to success.
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Long-termism (长期主义)
After listening to the story of Wang Xingxing, I believe long-termism is the secret to success.
The key to success is to set a clear goal and focus on it patiently. What makes long-termism special is that it requires us to stick to the goal no matter how difficult it is. Last year, I decided to improve my math scores. The truth is that I spent two hours practicing math every day. Though progress was slow at first, I never gave up and finally got 95 scores, which encouraged me a lot.
To be honest, only after six months of hard work could I achieve this. Like Wang Xingxing, I learned that keeping a goal in mind leads to success.
例文
Teamwork (团队精神)
After listening to the story of Wang Xingxing, I believe teamwork is the secret to success.
Good teamwork means we share ideas openly and communicate effectively. What a successful team needs is members who are willing to work hard together. Last month, our class prepared for an English drama competition. The most important thing was that we listened to each other’s suggestions. Not only did we practice for three hours daily, but we also helped weaker classmates. Our teacher, who encouraged us constantly, said our unity was the key. Finally, we won first prize! This proves that teamwork can make dreams come true.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,先表明自己的观点,例如长期主义是成功的秘诀,并说明原因;
第二步,列举自己的一次经历来证明观点;
第三步,总结收获,再次表明长期坚持目标引领成功的观点。
[亮点词汇]
①require sb. to do sth. 要求某人做某事
②no matter 无论
③decide to do sth. 决定做某事
④improve 提升,改善
⑤give up放弃
⑥to be honest 说实话
⑦keep sth. in mind 记住某事
[高分句型]
①What makes long-termism special is that it requires us to stick to the goal no matter how difficult it is. (what引导的主语从句和that引导的表语从句)
②Though progress was slow at first, I never gave up and finally got 95 scores, which encouraged me a lot. (though引导的让步状语从句和which引导的定语从句)
(十)
(2025年金华义乌二模)
假设你是李华,你的加拿大好友Robert计划暑假来中国体验city-walk (城市漫步) 。请根据以下信息,写一封邮件,向他推荐一处适合city-walk的地点。
注意:
1. 邮件需包含所选地点的至少两点相关信息,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3. 词数80左右,邮件的首尾和第一句已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Robert,
I’m glad to know that you are planning a visit to China this summer holiday. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】参考范文一:
Dear Robert,
I’m glad to know that you are planning a visit to China this summer holiday.
I think you will love the old street here! It has ancient buildings with a long history. It’s a good place to try different kinds of tasty local food like rice cakes and dumplings. You can also enjoy traditional arts like paper cutting here. People sell colorful hand-made things too. The street is not wide but quite busy. Walking along the street makes you know more about Chinese culture. Don’t forget to take photos to record them!
I’m sure you’ll enjoy it.
Best wishes,
Li Hua
参考范文二:
Dear Robert,
I’m glad to know that you are planning a visit to China this summer holiday.
If you love nature, the city park is a great choice! It is so peaceful that you can even hear birds singing. The tower in the centre of the park is the best place to enjoy the beautiful views. Every morning, people play Tai Chi there. They might invite you to join them. In the afternoon, you can drink tea or play chess under the old tall trees. It’s a perfect place to relax and experience local life.
Hope you like it!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】【范文一总体分析】
①题材:本文是一封电子邮件,属于书信体裁,是向朋友推荐游玩地点;
②时态:全文以一般现在时为主;
③提示:文章围绕老街展开,涵盖老街的建筑、美食、传统艺术、手工艺品等内容,以及游玩建议,满足书信推荐的需求。
【写作步骤】
第一步,开头表达得知Robert暑期计划来中国的喜悦,引出下文推荐内容;
第二步,中间详细介绍老街。先说明老街有历史悠久的古建筑;接着推荐可以品尝当地美食,如年糕和饺子;然后提到能欣赏剪纸等传统艺术,还能购买彩色手工制品;最后强调老街虽不宽但热闹,漫步其中可了解中国文化,并建议拍照记录;
第三步,结尾表达对Robert游玩体验的肯定与期待。
【亮点词汇】
①ancient buildings古建筑
②local food当地美食
③traditional arts传统艺术
【高分句型】
①I think you will love the old street here!(宾语从句)
②Walking along the street makes you know more about Chinese culture.(动名词短语作主语)
(十一)
(2025年温州龙湾二模)
在旅行中,有人热衷逛博物馆、有人乐于品尝美食、有人喜欢与当地人交流……著名旅行博主John发起了关于个人旅行偏好的帖子。请你结合自身经历谈谈你的旅行偏好,以及它所带来的收获。
1.What do you enjoy doing during your travels?
2.What can it bring you?
Share with us...
During my travels, I enjoy ______________
_______________________________________________________________
注意:
(1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(2)词数:80词左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
During my travels, I enjoy eating local food.
As a food lover, I always try local dishes during my travels. Most traditional foods are quite different from what I eat in my hometown. Last summer, I visited Wuhan and tasted its famous hot dry noodles. While the flavor seemed average to me, local friends told me these noodles are special to them. They represent Wuhan people’s hard work and unity during difficult times in history.
This experience taught me that food isn’t just about taste—it carries cultural stories and local spirit. Though hot dry noodles weren’t my favorite, I respect their meaning to Wuhan residents. As an adventurous eater, I’ll keep trying traditional foods wherever I go. Through these local dishes, I hope to better understand different cultures and the values people cherish.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示问题的信息,并适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步:点明自己在旅途中的偏好;
第二步:介绍自己的武汉之行品尝的美食;
第三步:总结旅行中的美食带给自己的收获。
[亮点词汇]
①be different from和……不同
②keep doing sth坚持做某事
③hope to do sth希望做某事
[高分句型]
①This experience taught me that food isn’t just about taste—it carries cultural stories and local spirit.(宾语从句)
②Though hot dry noodles weren’t my favorite, I respect their meaning to Wuhan residents.(让步状语从句)
(十二)
(2025年温州鹿城二模)
为保障青少年睡眠时间,教育部门明确重申,初中上课时间--般不早于八点。对此,校英语报组织了“When the Bell Rings after Eight”的征文活动。请你根据以下表格,结合自身实际情况,写一篇英语短文投稿,谈谈该政策(policy)对你生活和学习两方面的影响。
When the Bell Rings after Eight
My life
●Sleeping
●Having breakfast
●…
My study
●Listening in class
●…
注意:
1.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
2.词数80左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
I’m glad to share my life and study when the bell rings after eight.
【答案】例文
I’m glad to share my life and study when the bell rings after eight. The policy has brought good changes to me.
First, I have more time for sleep. It makes me more energetic. Now, I can enjoy a healthy meal at home and don’t need to hurry to school. Thanks to enough rest, I can listen more carefully in class. It improves my study. If I go to school early, I also get more time to prepare for lessons.
In a word, starting school later benefits me a lot. It’s a policy that truly understands our needs!
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示信息,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,表明“八点后上课铃响”这一政策给自己带来了好处;
第二步,具体阐述这一政策给自己生活和学习带来的变化;
第三步,强调观点,书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①energetic精力充沛的
②thanks to多亏……
③benefit得益于
[高分句型]
①It’s a policy that truly understands our needs! (that引导的定语从句)
(十三)
(2025年温州瑞安二模)
学校英语俱乐部正在筹备一期主题为“My Delicious Memory”的英文小报,现向全校同学征稿。请你参考海报内容,选择一种食物,写一篇英语短文,讲述你与它之间的故事,并分享它对你的特殊意义。
注意:(1)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;(2)词数80词左右;开头已经给出,不计入总词数。
The food that brings back a special memory for me is ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
The food that brings back a special memory for me is dumplings.
Every New Year’s Eve, my family would gather around the table to make dumplings. The kitchen was filled with laughter and chatter. We’d shape the dough, stuff the fillings, and chat about our hopes for the new year.
One year, I hid a coin in one of the dumplings as a little game. My father happened to bite into it, and his eyes sparkled with joy. That moment of surprise and shared happiness has been etched in my memory. Dumplings, for me, are more than just food. They represent family togetherness, warmth, and the joy of celebrating traditions.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:围绕特定食物展开,讲述与之相关的特殊记忆及意义,适当添加细节,突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明能唤起特殊记忆的食物是饺子;
第二步,具体描述在新年夜全家一起包饺子的场景,以及藏硬币游戏的有趣经历;
第三步,阐述饺子对自己而言超越食物本身的意义。
[亮点词汇]
①bring back使回忆起;使想起
②be filled with充满
③happened to碰巧
④more than不只是
[高分句型]
①The food that brings back a special memory for me is dumplings.(that 引导的定语从句)
②That moment of surprise and shared happiness has been etched in my memory.(现在完成时的被动语态)
(十四)
(2025年杭州钱塘二模)
假如你是李华,计划在“五一”期间进行一次以“体验中国文化”为主题的旅行。请根据下图提示,用英语写一份文化游计划,并在英语课上与同学们分享。
注意:1.计划需包含至少三个活动,以上活动仅供参考;2.文中不得出现真实姓名、校名等信息;3.词数80—100左右;开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Hi, class. I’m glad to share my plan about May Day cultural tour with you. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Hi, class. I’m glad to share my plan about May Day cultural tour with you.
I’m going to Xi’an by train during the May Day holiday. Xi’an is a city full of historical and cultural heritages.
First, I’ll visit the Terracotta Army. It’s a world-famous wonder. I can learn a great deal about the history and art of the Qin Dynasty there. Second, I’m looking forward to trying local food like roujiamo and yangrou paomo. By tasting these special foods, I can experience the local food culture. Also, I plan to visit the ancient City Wall. Walking on it, I can enjoy the scenery and imagine what life was like in the past.
I believe this trip will be a great chance for me to experience Chinese culture deeply.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:一般现在时与一般将来时;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏要点,并适当添加细节,突出重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍去西安的旅游以及旅行活动;
第二步,介绍活动原因,以及感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①full of充满
②looking forward to期待
[高分句型]
I believe this trip will be a great chance for me to experience Chinese culture deeply.(宾语从句)
(十五)
(2025年名校发展共同体二模)
假如你是李华,并即将就读某高级中学。该校英语社团正开展新生线上交流活动。其公众号将推送系列关于健康生活的内容。请你阅读以下倡议通知,并向公众号投稿。
注意:
1.短文需包含通知中提到的要点,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3.词数80左右,稿件首位已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear freshman,
Our English club is now asking for suggestions on the theme of healthy living. You are warmly welcome to share your ideas.
Have you had a healthy life in junior high school? You can just talk about the problems you have faced, such as being stressed out or lacking enough sleep. Besides, do you have any resolutions to spend a healthier vacation or to be healthier in senior high school?
Looking forward to your suggestions and hope all of you enjoy your senior high school life.
Yours,
Ms. Miller
Dear schoolmates,
I am glad to show you my life. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear schoolmates,
I’m glad to show you something about my life.
In middle school, I didn’t get enough sleep. I often stayed up late to finish my homework. As a result, I was always stressed out and felt tired during the day.
For the coming new term, I’ll better plan my time. I’m going to make a daily schedule so that I can go to bed before 10:00. Also, I’ll ride a bike to school everyday to build up my body. It’s a kind of relax for me, too. What’s more, I intend to join the swimming club in senior high.
I’m really eager to start this healthy journey in high school!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般将来时”;
③提示:根据提示问题进行写作,可适当增添细节,注意行文连贯,表述完整。
[写作步骤]
第一步,回顾你的初中生活存在的问题;
第二步,为升入高中后的健康生活作计划;
第三步,书写结语,表达期望。
[亮点词汇]
①stay up late熬夜
②daily schedule日程安排
③build up增强
[高分句型]
I’m going to make a daily schedule so that I can go to bed before 10:00. (so that引导目的状语从句)
(十六)
(2025年绍兴上虞二模)
假如你是李华,你的家乡“美丽乡村 (beautiful countryside)”项目吸引了不少外宾,暑假期间需要招募若干擅长英语的小导游,请你结合下列问题,给该项目负责人写一封英语自荐邮件。
1. What kind of person are you?
2. What are you good at?
3. What can you do there?
注意:
1. 邮件须围绕上面三个问题展开,可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
2. 词数:80—100。邮件的开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Sir/Madam,
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
I would be thankful if I could be given the chance. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】例文
Dear Sir/Madam,
I’m Li Hua. I’m glad to know that you are in need of some tour guides. I think I would be suitable for the job.
First of all, I’m friendly and patient. I’m active in many activities. Besides, I speak English well and have won several prizes in English speaking competitions at our school. I also do well in telling stories. So I can introduce local culture to foreigners in English.
Most importantly, I have visited the beautiful village many times and I can help foreigners better understand the life of the village.
I would be thankful if I could be given the chance. Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件,旨在向招聘方毛遂自荐成为导游。
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”,用于陈述自身的性格、能力和经历等情况。
③提示:应聘导游岗位,需阐述自身适合该工作的理由。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头表明自己的身份是李华,说明得知招聘导游的消息,并提出自己适合这份工作,引起招聘方的注意。
第二步,中间分点阐述自身优势。先说明自己友好、有耐心且积极参与活动的性格特点;接着强调英语能力强,在英语演讲比赛获奖,且擅长讲故事,能够用英语向外国游客介绍当地文化;最后突出自己多次游览过相关村庄,能帮助外国游客更好地了解村庄生活。
第三步,结尾表达如果能获得机会会心怀感激,并期待招聘方的回复。
[亮点词汇]
①suitable合适的
②besides此外
③most importantly最重要的是
[高分句型]
①I think I would be suitable for the job.(运用“think+宾语从句” 结构)
②I would be thankful if I could be given the chance.(运用“if”引导的条件状语从句)
(十七)
(2025年台州椒江二模)
假如你是李华,你的英国好友Mike向父母征询送什么生日礼物给同学Jack,他们意见不统一,给他造成困惑。请你根据以下图文中的相关信息,写一封邮件,向他推荐其中一个生日礼物并阐述理由。
注意:(1)邮件需包含所选礼物至少两点相关信息,可适当发挥;
(2)文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3)词数:80左右;邮件的首尾和第一句已给出,不计入总词数。
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】Possible version 1:
Dear Mike,
How is everything going? I’ve got a very good idea about birthday gifts that you must hear.
I strongly recommend flowers as birthday gifts rather than books for three reasons. First, flowers show love. Choosing someone's favourite flowers proves you truly care. Secondly, flowers bring nature’s beauty. Blooms immediately cheer up rooms like sunshine. Finally, they leave you sweet memories. Their lovely smell reminds people of the birthday happy moments. Unlike ordinary gifts, flowers speak the language of the heart.
I’m sure your friend will love your gift.
Warm regards.
Yours,
Li Hua
Possible version 2:
Dear Mike,
How is everything going? I’ve got a MUST-SHARE idea about birthday gifts!
Forget books—go with flowers! Here are the reasons. First, flowers show love. Picking people’s favorite flowers shouts “I care!” louder than any text message. Second, flowers bring nature’s beauty. Blooms brighten rooms faster than lightning flashes! Finally, they create lasting sweet memories, bottling birthday happiness. I’m sure whenever Jack catches the smell of the flowers, it will immediately remind him of the special thoughtful gift you chose. Books gather dust, but flowers make hearts dance!
Warm regards.
Yours,
Li Hua
Possible version 3:
Dear Mike,
How is everything going? Don’t hesitate about the birthday gift. Choose a book instead of flowers. Here are the reasons.
First, books bring happiness. They can take him to adventures, make him laugh, or teach him cool facts, lighting up his day. Second, books can improve his language skills. Reading secretly builds up vocabulary and grammar skills without any boring experience. Finally, books can lead him to explore the world. From space science to ancient history, books open doors to new knowledge and cultures!
Flowers fade in a week, but a great book can become a lifelong friend. Go and buy a book as the gift.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
Possible version 4:
Dear Mike,
How is everything going? I’m glad to share my thoughts on birthday gifts.
Honestly, I prefer books rather than flowers. There are many reasons for it. First of all, books can make him relaxed and bring him happiness, which is beneficial to his emotional well-being. Secondly, reading books is a great way to improve his language skills, as it exposes him to different vocabulary, and writing styles. Most importantly, books expand his world knowledge, enriching his daily life with new ideas.
Hope my advice can help you.
Best wishes.
Yours,
Li Hua
【解析】
【详解】以例文1为例作如下解析:
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一封邮件。
②时态:时态以 “一般现在时” 为主,
③提示:文章围绕 “推荐生日礼物” 这一要点展开,从三个方面详细阐述推荐鲜花而非书籍作为生日礼物的理由,内容完整,条理清晰,语言表达自然流畅,合理运用语法、词汇和句型,较好地完成了写作任务。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图,引出话题:
第二步,具体阐述写作内容:从三个维度详细说明推荐鲜花作为生日礼物的原因。
第三步,书写结语,表达对推荐的自信和对 Mike 朋友收到礼物的美好期待。
[亮点词汇]
①strongly recommend强烈推荐
②rather than而不是
③cheer up使高兴,使振奋
④speak the language of the heart诉说心声
[高分句型]
①I’ve got a very good idea about birthday gifts that you must hear. (定语从句)
②Choosing someone’s favourite flowers proves you truly care. (动名词短语作主语)
(十八)
(2025年台州路桥二模)
假设你是李明,想邀请Peter去科技馆参加以“AI changes the future”为主题的展览(exhibition),请根据以下提示写一封电子邮件,介绍本次展览的基本信息以及2-3项活动内容,并谈谈本次展览的意义。
When
10:00 a.m.—3:00 p.m. May 27th
Where
at the Science Museum
What
□learn the AI history
□ask experts questions about AI
□enjoy robot performances
□try creative coding (编程)
□play AI games
□…
Why
become interested in AI technology
…
注意:
(1)邮件中必须包括所给的内容要点,可适当发挥;
(2)邮件中不得出现真实的姓名、学校等信息;
(3)词数80~100。邮件的开头与结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
To: Peter
From: Li Ming
Hi, Peter,
How’s it going? I’m writing to invite ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【答案】例文
Hi, Peter,
How’s it going? I’m writing to invite you to an exhibition themed “I changes the future”. It will be held at the Science Museum from 10:00 a.m. to 3:00 p.m., on May 27th.
During the exhibition, we can not only get to know the history of AI, but also enjoy the exciting robot performances. What’s more, we will even try different kinds of AI games. Just imagine how cool that will be!
I think this exhibition is meaningful. We will learn how AI works in a fun and easy way in different areas, so that many of us will become interested in AI technology. It will encourage us to study harder.
Would you like to join us to get into the world of Al? Please let me know by this Friday.
Looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Li Ming
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般将来时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,根据提示,不要遗漏要点,适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明写作意图。直接邀请并介绍艺术节的时间和地点;
第二步,具体阐述艺术节活动的内容;
第三步,谈谈艺术节的意义;
第四步,再次发出邀请。书写书面结语。
[亮点词汇]
①not only...but also不但……而且
②What’s more而且
③become interested in对……感兴趣
[高分句型]
①It will be held at the Science Museum from 10:00 a.m. to 3:00 p.m., on May 27th.(被动语态)
②Just imagine how cool that will be!(感叹句)
③We will learn how AI works in a fun and easy way in different areas, so that many of us will become interested in AI technology. (so that引导的结果状语从句)
(十九)
(2025年台州温岭二模)
随着中国过境免签政策的放宽,许多外国游客涌入中国,掀起一股“China Travel”的热潮。假如你是张华,你的英国朋友Alice即将来浙江杭州旅游,请根据以下相关信息,写一封邮件,可适当发挥。
Alice
I really want to experience traditional Chinese culture. Could you introduce a fun place worth visiting in Hangzhou? What do you suggest I do? What food can I try?
Places: Hangzhou National Tea Museum/...
Activities: watch tea art performances/make tea by yourself/...
Food: Dongpo Pork/Longjing Tea Shrimp/Dingsheng Cake/...
Zhang Hua
注意:
1. 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息:
2. 词数80左右;邮件的首句和尾句已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear Alice,
I’m excited to know that you are coming to Hangzhou soon._______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Hope you’ll have an unforgettable trip!
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【答案】One possible version:
I’m excited to know that you are coming to Hangzhou soon. Hangzhou is a city you must visit. Hangzhou National Tea Museum is really cool. You can watch wonderful tea art performances which show how to make a perfect cup of tea with beautiful tea sets. And you can also try to make tea by yourself. It’s a great way to learn about Chinese tea culture.
When it comes to food, Dongpo Pork is a good choice. It’s soft and tastes really delicious. Longjing Tea Shrimp is also amazing. It mixes the freshness of shrimp and the nice smell of Longjing tea.
Hope you’ll have an unforgettable trip!
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:电子邮件;
②时态:一般现在时、一般将来时;
③提示:根据题干中的信息,写一封邮件,介绍杭州的旅游景点、活动和美食。
[写作步骤]
第一步:开头问候,表达对Alice即将来杭州的期待。
第二步:介绍杭州的景点、活动和美食,重点推荐杭州国家茶博物馆,并描述可以体验的茶艺表演和亲手制茶的活动。
第三步:推荐杭州的特色美食,如东坡肉和龙井虾仁,并表达对Alice旅行的美好祝愿。
[亮点词汇]
①by yourself你自己,独自
②tea art performances茶艺表演
③When it comes to...当提到……
[高分句型]
①Hangzhou is a city you must visit. (省略that的定语从句)
②You can watch wonderful tea art performances which show how to make a perfect cup of tea with beautiful tea sets.(which引导的定语从句)
③It’s a great way to learn about Chinese tea culture.(it作形式主语)
(二十)
(2025年台州仙居二模)
你校正在评选英语小达人 (Little English talent),下面是你班两位候选人的基本情况。请从中挑选一位并写出你的推荐理由。
Mary
quiet, patient
like reading English books;
get good grades in English exams;
sing English songs well
Henry
outgoing, friendly
act well in English plays;
be good at telling English stories;
be ready to help others
注意:
(1) 文中必须包含表格中的内容要点,可适当发挥;
(2) 文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
(3) 词数100左右,开头已给出,不计入总字数。
In my opinion, Little English Talent should have some skills or great talents in English, so I recommend___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】例文1
In my opinion, Little English Talent should have some skills or great talents in English, so I recommend Mary. Mary is quiet. She always listens to the teachers carefully and likes reading books, especially English novels. That’s why she can get good grades in English exams. Mary is also patient. When I have problems in my English, I often go and ask her for help. She always helps me patiently. Because of Mary, I have made great progress in English. What’s more, she has the talent for singing English songs. She sang the best in our school talent show last year. So, I think she should be the Little English Talent of our class.
例文2
In my opinion, Little English Talent should have some skills or great talents in English, so I recommend Henry. Henry is outgoing. He has a talent for performing in English plays and he always acts well during the English Festival. Also, he is good at telling English stories. He always uses simple words and different voices to help me understand the stories. If there are some difficult words or phrases in the story, he will explain them clearly and carefully until I understand. Thanks to Henry, I’ve become more and more interested in English. Henry is also friendly. He’s always ready to help others. He often helps Lucy with her English. He should be the Little English Talent.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:围绕推荐Mary成为“小英语达人”展开,从学习态度、乐于助人、英语才艺等方面阐述推荐理由。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点明推荐对象及推荐理由;
第二步,分点说明 Mary 的优点:学习认真、耐心助人、擅长唱英文歌;
第三步,总结观点,重申Mary适合当选“小英语达人”。
[亮点词汇]
①recommend推荐
②carefully认真地
③patient有耐心的
④make great progress取得巨大进步
[高分句型]
①That’s why she can get good grades in English exams. (why引导的表语从句)
(二十一)
(2025年台州玉环二模)
假如你应邀参加一个英语读书分享会,并将分享你自己读过的一本好书。请根据下列表格中的要点,用英语写一篇短文,介绍你要分享的书。
内容要点
参考词汇
Book title
Journey to the West
The writer
Wu Cheng’en
The main story
● go on a journey to the west
● fight against the bad
● overcome the difficulties
Reasons why I like it
● meaningful,
● keep fighting.
● never give up.
注意:1. 文中必须包括所给的内容要点,可适当发挥;
2. 文中不能出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息;
3. 词数 80-100。
Journey to the West
I’d like to share the book Journey to the West with you. __________________________________________________________________________________________
________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】例文
Journey to the West
I’d like to share the book Journey to the West with you. It was written by Wu Cheng’en. The story is about a monk and his three disciples traveling west to get Buddhist scriptures. On the way, they fight against the bad and overcome many difficulties. The characters, such as the Monkey King, are brave and clever. They never give up, no matter how hard the journey is. I like this book because it is meaningful and teaches us to keep fighting. I believe you will learn a lot from reading it.
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示,并适当添加细节,注意字母大小写以及标点符号。
[写作步骤]
第一步、介绍书名、作者;
第二步、介绍主要故事情节;
第三步、介绍自己喜欢的理由并书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①on the way在路上
②fight against与……作斗争
③give up放弃
[高分句型]
I like this book because it is meaningful and teaches us to keep fighting.(because引导原因状语从句)
(二十二)
(2025年湖州吴兴二模)
假如你是某校学生会(Student Union)成员张华,负责下个月英国友人来你校一日研学活动。学校已安排了上午的日程,请根据以下信息,写一封邮件,向他们介绍学校的安排以及学生会为他们设计的下午的活动。
Time
Activity
Meaning
in the morning
visit the school
enjoy the beautiful environment of the school...
join school clubs (experience paper cutting,...)
learn Chinese culture ...
in the afternoon
…
…
注意:
1.邮件需包含上面表格中的全部信息,可适当发挥;
2.文中不得出现真实姓名、学校等信息;
3.词数80词左右;邮件的首尾和第一句已给出,不计入总词数。
Dear friends,
Welcome to our school for a one-day visit next month!
____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【答案】例文
Dear friends,
Welcome to our school for a one-day visit next month! In the morning, you’ll first visit our school to enjoy its beautiful environment. Then, you can join our school clubs. There, you’ll have a chance to experience paper cutting and learn about Chinese culture.
In the afternoon, the Student Union has planned some fun activities for you to enjoy. We’ll have a traditional Chinese tea party, where you can taste different kinds of tea. After that, we’ll play some traditional Chinese games together. I’m sure you’ll have a great time.
Looking forward to seeing you!
Yours,
Zhang Hua
【解析】
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般将来时”(在描述即将发生的活动时使用);
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏表格中关于上午和下午活动安排的信息,适当添加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写作意图。用欢迎语引出下文要介绍的内容。
第二步,具体阐述写作内容。按照表格,从“time”和“activity”以及“meaning”几个方面重点介绍上午参观学校、加入学校社团的活动安排和下午学生会设计的活动安排;
第三步,书写结语。可表达“期待与他们相见”的愿望。
[亮点词汇]
①visit参观
②beautiful environment美丽的环境
③have a chance to有机会
[高分句型]
In the afternoon, the Student Union has planned some fun activities for you to enjoy.(动词不定式作目的状语)
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