内容正文:
十五,实战演练
8.I thanked him,saying that not only did he mend my shirt with his
【参考范文】
crafismanship but he also repaired my dream with
The Person I Admire Most
sportsmanship.
When it comes to the person I admire most.I can't help
9.It was at that moment that I was overwhelmed with gratitude to
thinking of Fan Jinshi who is an archacologist and a guard of
my teacher.
Dunhuang.
10.A cold feeling erept over his heart and made him shiver.
After graduating from Peking University,Fan Jinshi chose to
11.Drowned in happiness.Jimmy dashed out of the school gate like
work in Mogao Caves.Dunhuang.Although the living environment
a free bird.
was terrible,she was deeply attracted by the works of art and
12.Sceing such extraordinary beauty,I think every cell in my body
desired to protect them for the future generations.She and her team
woke up.
overcame difficulties.explored scientifie concepts and built a"digital
Ⅱ.短文续写
Dunhuang",which has balanced the relationship between cultural
【参考范文】
relies protection and tourism.
Paragraph 1:
Fan Jinshi is called the daughter of Dunhuang.She deserves the
But Molly insisted that they should wait and keep the book.
respect of all at home and abroad.
She didn't place the illustrated book on the bookshelf,hoping Rick
第二章读后续写
would show up soon.A kid might make all kinds of promises and
fail to keep them.But Rick was so sincere and eager that Molly
believed he wouldn't break his promise.A kid's promise is more
第2节技法指导
valuable than the cost of the book.The book would rest in the
技法三
drawer still until Rick showed up.Then on one sunny morning.
【参考范文】
Molly found a little boy running all the way towards her bookstore
Paragraph1:
holding something.The little boy was exactly Rick.
A few weeks later,when I almost forgot the contest,there
Paragraph 2:
came the news.To everyone's surprise,I.an immigrant,won first
Rick pushed the door open and rushed to the counter holding
place in the writing contest.Hearing the good news,I felt a sense of
his money box.Molly excitedly pulled the drawer open.took out the
joy surging through me.I leapt into the air and shouted out loud."I
illustrated book and walked out from the counter immediately.She
made it!"During the award presentation ceremony,I was invited to
knelt with one leg and smiled at Rick.handing the book to Rick.
deliver a speech.Patiently and confidently,I told the audience how I
Rick's eyes were shining looking at the hook,and he put the box on
once didn't love writing and now enjoyed writing and how I realized
the floor and held the book."I think you guys had better make your
the value of perseveranee with the help of my teacher.
deal here at the coffee table,"said Rex.Molly winked at him
Paragraph 2:
delightedly.The sunlight came through the glass window and cast
I went to my teacher's office after the award presentation.With
on the little customer and the nice lady.
the trophy in hand.I entered the office.My teacher rose from the
seat and came up to me."Congratulations!"he said.slapping me on
第3节语料素材
the back.He grinned from ear to ear as I showed him the trophy."I
一、(五)实战演练
owe my success to you."I said sincerely."Without your
1.Her face lit up with happiness as she received the presents
encouragement and belief,I wouldn't have succeeded."He laughed,
prepared by the children.
his eyes shining with excitement."I knew you had it in you.I'm
2.They jumped to their feet at the news,with their eyes filled with
proud of you for not giving up."Whenever looking back on this
joy.
incident.I feel extremely grateful to him.It was my social studies
Hearing the news,they jumped to their feet with joy in their
teacher who encouraged me to realize my potential and thus changed
eyes.
the course of my life.
3.Overwhelmed with gratitude,I couldn't say a word.
技法四实战演练
4.I was so deeply moved that tears welled up in my eyes.
【,翻译句子
5.Hearing the news that his father passed away.his eyes welled up
1.Relieved.Jenny told the truth to everyone.
with tears.
2.Feeling scared and helpless.Jane sat beside a tree and held her
6.She got lost and it began to rain,a deep sense of despair
shoulders in her arms to make herself warm.
overwhelming her.
3.They hugged and kissed with tears rolling/pouring/streaming
7.Her face turning pale,she stood there,tongue-tied.
down their cheeks.
8.My heart was in my mouth when I walked into her office.
4."1...I don't know,"he stammered.his voice trembling with
9.At the thought of the frightening bear,a sense of fear welled up
fear.
in him.
5.If she had not quarreled with Tom.they would have enjoyed a
10.He was half dead with fear when he found he was surrounded by
great time near the lake.
wolves.
6.Mother hugged the twins tightly,whose faces were glowing with
(九)实战演练
excitement.
1.Having known others'attitude,he shook/trembled with anger.
7.Since he continued speaking about wanting to share his paintings
holding his elothes firmly.
with the world.I knew what had to be done.
2.Filled with anger.Mike was unable to speak a word.
640Dear fellow students,
Student Union
十五、人物介绍
技法指导》
(4)With strong will and great determination,he
人物介绍的文章一般都是对所写之人的基本
achieved the great success in.,.凭借坚强的意志
概况(如年龄、出生地、家庭背景、受教育情况等)作
和决心,他在…方面取得了巨大的成功。
简单的概述,继而再叙述其事迹或在某个领域中做
(5)Despite many difficulties,he/she managed to
出的贡献,最后对其进行评价。具体写作结构
overcome them.尽管有许多困难,他/她还是设
如下:
法克服了。
(6)He/She put his/her heart into...and made
开篇
点出记叙之人
great contributions to..他/她全身心投入…
介
正文
介绍记叙之人的具体情况
中去,为…做出了巨大贡献。
绍
结尾
对人物作出评价
3.结尾句
(1)As a great...,he/she will be remembered by
常用表达》
us forever..作为一个伟大的…,他/她将永远
1.开头句
被我们铭记。
(l)The person I admire most is.,.我最敬佩的
(2)It is his determination that inspires me to go
人是…
on when I have difficulty in learning.是他的决
(2)Of all the outstanding people,I admire...
心激励我在学习上有困难时继续前进
most.在所有杰出的人当中,我最钦佩…
(3)Having set a great example for us,he is an
(3)There are many respectable people around
excellent person who fully deserves our
us.The one who1 admire most is..我们周围有
admiration and respect..他为我们树立了一个很
许多可敬的人。我最崇拜的人是…
好的榜样,是一个非常优秀的人,完全值得我们
(4)When it comes to the person who I think
钦佩和尊重。
highly of,I would say...without hesitation.
(4)It's her/his encouragement that contributes
到我高度评价的人,我会毫不犹豫地说…
to shaping my personalities and inspires me to
2.中间句
accomplish my goals persistently..正是她/他的
(1)Born in....on...,...is one of...
鼓励,有助于塑造我的个性,激励我坚持不懈地
出生在…,在…,…是…之一。
完成目标。
(2)Graduating from...,he worked as...
(5)...is such an respectable and admirable
毕业于…,他担任…
person that I will model myself after...and be a
(3)In order to...,he made up his mind to do...
person like..…是一个令人尊敬和钦佩的人,
为了…,他决定做…
我将以……为榜样,做一个像…的人。
462
典例展示》
假定你是李华,你班本周Class Report的主题是A Man of Perseverance.请你写一篇发言稿,内容
包括:
1.人物事迹简介:
2.给你的启示。
注意:
1.写作词数80左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使是行文连贯。
满分佳作
名师点评
Good morning,dear classmates.
1.这是一篇人物介绍的发言
Today,I'd like to share a story about a man of perseverance.
稿。手段引入话题,中间段
This man is Stephen Hawking,a world-famous physicist who was
介绍人物的优秀品行及贡
diagnosed with motor neuron disease at the age of 21.Despite being
献,最后介绍给人们的启示。
confined to a wheelchair and losing the ability to speak,he continued
2.文中用了很多高级词汇,如:
to pursue his passion for science and became one of the most influential
perseverance:diagnosed with;
scientists of our time.
pursue his passion;influential;
Facing adversities and challenges in our lives,we should not give
make a difference.
up but strive for excellence and push ourselves beyond our comfort
3.还使用了一些高级句式表
zones.We can make a difference in the world with our perseverance,
达,如:定语从句和非谓语
just like Stephen Hawking did.
动词。
Thanks for your listening.
实战演练》
你校正在组织英语作文比赛,请你以The Person I Admire Most为题写一篇短文参赛,内容包括:
1.人物简介:
2.他/她值得钦佩的原因。
注意:
1.写作词数80左右:
2.题目已给出,不计入总词数:
3.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
The Person I Admire Most
463