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Will you please give me your address so I can send a copy to
As scheduled,the workshops are to take place every Thursday
you as a gift afterwards?
this semester,from 6 p.m.to 8 p.m..During this period,you will
Looking forward to your early reply.
be exposed to a selection of Chinese traditional cultures in daily life.
Yours sincerely.
gaining a better insight into Four Treasures of Study,Four Great
Li Hua
Inventions.ancient musie and lion dance.all these profound
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Chinese cultures.A certain amount of time will be set aside in each
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workshop for interaction,in which session a teacher will be
Dear Kate,
available to clarify your doubts or offer some suggestions if
I hope this email finds you well.I am writing to discuss a new
necessary.
section in our school's English newspaper.titled"Telling Chinese
The workshops are supposed to expand your perspective of
Stories."We aim to showease the rich culture and history of China
Chinese culture and meanwhile,make your campus life here easier
through compelling narratives and personal experiences.
and more fruitful.We sincerely hope to see you there!
As the head of this section.I would greatly appreciate your
The Students'Union
insights and suggestions.Your extensive knowledge of both Chinese
十二、实战演练
and Western cultures would be invaluable in guiding us in creating
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engaging content.Specifically.I would like to know your thoughts
Should kids get allowances for doing housework?
on potential topics.as well as any recommendations for effective
Last week.our school held a wonderful debate competition
storytelling techniques that could resonate with our readership.
over whether kids should get allowances for doing housework.
Thank you for considering our request.I am looking forward to
There was a fierce debate between the two sides.One side
your valuable input.
states that getting paid motivates kids to do chores and also teaches
Yours sincerely,
them the fact that living is earned by working.However,the other
Li Hua
side argues that by rewarding kids using money.parents are
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sending a message that work isn't worth doing unless they get
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something in return.Both sides showed great debating skills,
Dear George.
leaving a deep impression on the teachers and students present.
In order to foster critical thinking and imagination among
Personally speaking,I don't think kids should get rewards for
students,our school has decided to hold Innovation and Creativity
doing housework.After all,they're part of the family and have
Festival.I'm writing to invite you to take part in it.
responsibilities in the house.
The festival,seheduled to be held from July Ist to July 15th.
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will inelude various activities.Professors from famous universities
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will give us lectures.followed by question and answer sections.A
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highlight of the festival will undoubtedly be the exhibition of
English Literature Reading Class Opens a New World
students'projects.We would be delighted if you could join us and
I'm excited to share my experience with the weekly English
share your insights.
Literature Reading class.
I'm eagerly looking forward to your participation!
Starting this semester.the elass is designed specifically for us
Yours.
to enhance our English proficiency.Each week this class unfolds
Li Hua
with a new literary masterpiece ranging from classic novels to
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contemporary poetry.Through interactive discussions,group
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readings,and insightful analysis,we are able to explore the depths
Dear teachers and students.
of literary.Not only does literature reading give me great
My topic today is "Intelligent Technology Enters Our Life".
enjoyment,but I've honed critical thinking skills.
Intelligent technology has been widely applied in our daily life.For
Moreover,the class has sparked a newfound passion for
example,smart home systems can control lighting,temperature.
literature within me.igniting my desire to explore further in the
and security with just a few taps on your phone.Smart wearable
vast world of English letters.It has undoubtedly been a highlight of
devices can monitor our health conditions and provide timely
this academic semester.
reminders for exercise and rest.In addition,intelligent
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transportation systems make our commuting more convenient and
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efficient.
Dear fellow students.
In conclusion.intelligent technology has become an integral
Noticing a serious phenomenon that some high school seniors
part of our life and learning science is essential for our personal
burdened with school work spare little time for regular physical
growth and social development.Let's learn science and technology
exercise.I'd like to appeal to you to take proper exercise.
actively and create a better future together.
Doing sports is of great significance,which enables us to keep
Thank you!
in shape and get refreshed after a long time of work.Therefore.I
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suggest we fit exercise into our busy schedule,making it part of our
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daily routine.Put down our books to stretch our arms from time to
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time and do some jogging and jumping every day.
To help international students adapt to the life here,our
It is high time that we should arouse our awareness of proper
school is organizing a series of workshops on Chinese traditional
exercise.
culture.
Student Union
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A Cross-Country Running Race
1.文章开篇引出活动举行的时间;
Last Sunday,our school held a five-kilometer cross-country
主体部分介绍了活动的具体内容
running race.All students in Senior 3 took part in it.The purpose
即时间、地点、参加人员及活动的
of this race was to inspire us students to pay more attention to
过程;结语部分介绍了活动的
physical exercise.
意义。
At 7 a.m.we started at the school gate.And then we ran all
2.范文中使用了高级词汇:purpose,
the way to the foot of South Hill.On the way,although some
inspire,pay attention to,fall behind,
students fell behind,they kept running until the finishing line.
realize,be of great importance
From this activity,we have realized that building up our body
亮点句型:although引导的让步
is of great importance,and we have also learned more about
状语从句,that引导的宾语从句,
'persistence leads to success".
还有谚语persistence leads to
success.
实战演练》
(2025·广东一模)假定你是学生会主席李华,上周你校组织了一场辩论赛针对通过做家务活来赚取
零花钱这一现象展开了激烈的辩论。请你给英文校报写一篇报道,内容包括:
1.说明问题:
2.提出建议。
注意:
1.写作词数80左右(题目已为你写好,不计人总词数):
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
Should kids get allowances for doing housework?
Students'Union
十三、征文投稿
技法指导》
常用表达》
征文投稿类文章一般是就某个特定主题进行
1.开头句
论述和描写,以议论文和记叙文居多,具体写作结
(1)Recently we did a survey about whether...
构如下:
or not..最近我们做了一个关于是否…的调查。
总体阐述问题或现象
(2)An article in the newspaper caught my
attention..报纸上的一篇文章引起了我的注意。
文投稿
具体论述或描写相关情况
(3)I want to talk about..in your column.我想
得出结论、体会或呼吁
在你的专栏里谈谈有关…
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2.中间句
(3)In my spare time,I often..,在业余时间,我
(1)Nowadays,with the improvement of the
经常…
standard of living,an increasing number of...l
3.结尾句
(1)I do expect...can have a promising future.
今,随着生活水平的提高,越来越多的…
我真的希望…能有一个光明的未来。
(2)It has been...years since...was founded
(2)As far as I am concerned,students should do
and it has been accompanying me all through my
more...so that they can develop their...skills.
childhood..自从…成立以来已经…年了,它
在我看来,学生们应该多…来发展他们的…
一直陪伴着我度过了我的整个童年。
技能。
典例展示》
(2023·全国乙卷)学校英文报组织同学们分享自己在假期中学到的新技能,请你以此为主题写一篇
短文投稿。内容包括:
1.简要描述:
2.体验和感受。
注意:
1.写作词数100左右(题目已为你写好):
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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Learning a New Skill
1.文章开篇引出自己学习的一项新
The new skill I acquired was skating.The process is challenging
技能。中间介绍学习新技能的经
but productive.
历。最后写了自己的体验感悟。
Initially,on watching the Winter Olympics Games in Beijing,
2.文章使用了一些高级词汇,如
I
became enthusiastic about skating.From then on,I was
become
enthusiastic
about,
determined to master this fascinating sport.However,at the very
fascinating,
stumble
over,
beginning,when I stepped on the ice,I stumbled over myself.Hard
persistence,painstaking,pay off,
as I strove,I still fell over again and again.The moment I thought
have a good command of等。还
of the athletes on the field,I was inspired by their powerful spirit.
使用了一些高级句式,如Hard as
Eventually,my persistence and painstaking efforts paid off.I can
I strove,I still fell over again and
skate freely all by myself.
again.倒装表达。
From the learning experience,I fully understand that only by3.文章最后介绍掌握这一技能的意
diligently practicing can we overcome many kinds of difficulties.
义,使用了部分倒装结构:only by
And eventually,we can have a good command of what we desire to
diligently practicing can we....
learn.
实战演练》
(2025·杭州二模)本学期你校开设了每周一节的英语文学阅读课,请你就此写一篇短文向学校英文
报“Student Voice”栏目投稿,内容包括:
1.课程介绍(目的、内容、上课方式等):
2.你的收获。
注意:
1.写作词数80左右:
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
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十四、倡议书
技法指导》
2.中间句
倡议书属于应用文的一种,是为倡议或是发起
(1)As we know,...is of great importance for
某项活动而写的号召性的、公开提议性的专用文
us.正如我们所知,…对我们来说非常重要。
体。倡议书一般由标题、称呼、正文、结尾、落款五
(2)Besides,doing...is also beneficial/harmful
部分组成。具体写作结构如下:
t0..此外,做…对…来说也是有益/害的
点明发出倡议的背景和目的
(3)To meet the challenge of...,it's high time
that we should take action to..为迎接…的
议
列举倡议的具体内容
挑战,是我们采取行动…的时候了。
表明倡议者的决心和希望
(4)As a citizen,we are supposed to..作为一个
常用表达》
公民,我们应该…
1.开头句
(5)It's everyone's responsibility to...If we
(1)I am writing to call on everyone to...and
can...,we can make a big difference to...
take an active part in..我写信是为了呼吁大
…是每个人的责任。如果我们能…,我们可
家…并积极参加…
以对…产生很大的影响。
(2)On behalf of the Students'Council,I am
3.结尾句
writing to call on everyone to take part in...
(l)Only if we do..·,can we.,.只有我们做
代表学生会写信呼吁大家参加…。
(3)In order to...,we arrange to organize a
…,我们才能…
(n)..activity with the theme of“..”,which is
(2)It is high time that we did/should do...Let's
designed to..为了…,我们安排组织一个主
take action right now!是时候该我们做…了。
题为“…”的活动,其目的是…
让我们立即采取行动吧!
(4)With the approach of...,our school is planning
(3)Let's join our hands and take action immediately.
to organize a(n)...activity whose theme is...
让我们携起手来,立即采取行动。
随着…的临近,我们学校正计划组织一次主题
(4)I am convinced that,with our joint efforts,
为…的活动。
the phenomenon of..will disappear.我相信,在
(5)With the development/wide spread of...,
我们的共同努力下,…的现象将会消失。
more and more people...随着…的发展/广泛
传播,越来越多的人…
(5)Let's take action right now!I'm convinced
(6)Currently,there is an unpleasant phenomenon
our efforts will eventually pay off.让我们现在就
of..in society..目前,社会上有一种令人不愉快
行动起来吧!我相信我们的努力最终会有回
的…现象。
报的。
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