内容正文:
Healthy diet,healthy life!
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Step 1 审
1.审主题 2.审体裁 3.审人称 4.审时态 5.审要点 6.审开头结尾
审主题: How to keep healthy
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体裁
记叙文:
以叙述事件,经历为主,需要有时间,地点,人物。
eg.一次难忘的经历(An unforgettable experience.)
说明文:
解释事物,说明道理,传递有用知识,强调客观性,逻辑性和条理性。
eg.如何保护地球?(How to save Earth?)
议论文:
针对某个观点发表看法,需要有立场并给出理由支持。
eg. U4 作文:你对娱乐的看法。
应用文:
书信,电子邮件,日记,通知等。
演讲稿:
围绕主题发表演讲(speech),需要有号召力和感染力。
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Step 1 审
1.审主题 2.审体裁 3.审人称 4.审时态 5.审要点 6.审开头结尾
审主题: How to keep healthy
审体裁:说明文
审人称:第一人称
审时态:一般现在时为主
审要点:饮食,运动,睡眠,爱好
审开头结尾:未给开头结尾
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Part 1 Beginning
Importance;Background
Part 2 Body
Part 3 Ending
Step 2.1 列(框架)
Healthy life
文章开头的作用:
1.引出主题,明确说明对象。
2.提供背景信息,表达写作目的。
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Part 1 Beginning
Importance;Background
1.0: Health is very important. Let me tell you how to be healthy.
2.0:Health plays a key part in our daily life,but how can we keep healthy?
Here are some ways to keep healthy.
3.0:As is known to all, health plays an essential role in our daily life,but how can we keep healthy?The following are some suggestions.
使用高级词汇和短语,
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Part 1 Beginning
Importance
Part 2 Body
Part 3 Ending
Step 2.2 列(要点)
Healthy life
Suggestions
have a balanced diet
take exercise/do sports
enough sleep
reduce stress through hobbies
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Part 2 Body
Step 3 扩
Suggestions
2.0: We should have a balanced diet. Breakfast is important. It gives us enough energy for the whole morning. We must also have the right kinds of food instead of junk food. Don’t forget to eat more fresh fruit and vegetables.
扩展:
have a balanced diet
1.均衡饮食:
1.0 We should have a balanced diet. Eat more vegetables and fruit.
3.0: We ought to have a balanced diet. Having breakfast is a must. It gives us enough energy for the whole morning. We must also have the right kinds of food instead of junk food. Fresh fruit and vegetables are necessary for our growth.Eat regularly and you’ll be in excellent condition/in good health.
使用高级词汇和短语;
影响和结果;
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Part 2 Body
Step 3 扩
2.锻炼身体:
Suggestions
1.0: We can do exercise like playing ball games and running.
2.0: We’d better often take exercise such as ball games or running because it can bring us a strong body.
do exercise/sports
使用高级词汇和短语;
影响和结果;
原因;
使用不同句型和高级句型;
举例子;
扩展:
3.0: It’s necessary for us to take exercise, for taking exercise regularly or even every day helps you build a strong body which is the base of health. In our free/spare time, playing ball games or running is a good choice.
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Part 2 Body
Step 3 扩
3.合理作息
Suggestions
1.0: We need enough sleep so we should go to bed early and get up early every day.
3.0: We are supposed to form a good healthy living habit. Staying up late is harmful to our health. As teenagers, we need to sleep for at least nine hours a day.If we can’t get enough sleep, we may have a headache.I strongly believe that early to bed and early to rise can make you healthy, wealthy and wise.
2.0: We should have a good healthy living habit. Staying up late is bad for our health. As teenagers, we need to sleep for at least nine hours a day.If we can’t get enough sleep, we may have a headache.
使用高级词汇和短语;
影响和结果;
原因;
使用不同句型和高级句型;
举例子;
添加细节;
扩展:
enough sleep
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Part 2 Body
Step 3 扩
4. 通过爱好缓解压力
Suggestions
1.0: We can reduce stress through hobbies.For example,
we can draw some pictures to relax.
2.0: Hobbies are helpful when we feel stressed. Listening to some music may help us reduce stress.
扩展:
使用高级词汇和短语;
影响和结果;
原因;
使用不同句型和高级句型;
举例子;
添加细节;
3.0: Because of the pressure of school work, we often feel stressed. We can turn to some hobbies to relax ourselves. For instance, singing along with music is a wonderful way to help us reduce stress.
reduce stress through hobbies
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1.0版:We should have a balanced diet. Eat more vegetables and fruit.We can do exercise beacuse it can make us strong and healthy.We need enough sleep so we should go to bed early and get up early every day.We can reduce stress through hobbies.For example, we can draw some pictures to relax.
1.0版:First, we should have a balanced diet. Eat more vegetables and fruit.Second,we can do exercise beacuse it can make us strong and healthy.Third,we need enough sleep so we should go to bed early and get up early every day.Fourth/Last,we can reduce stress through hobbies.For example, we can draw some pictures to relax.
建议类作文用顺序词、连接词连接
Step 4 连
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2.0:
First of all, To begin with...
Besides, Next, Then...
What’s more...
Last but not least...
3.0:
First and foremost, Primarily...
Besides, Next, Then...
What’s more,Apart from that,In addition,Additionally,Moreover,More importantly,What matters most is that...
Last but not least...
Step 4 连
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Part 1 Beginning
Importance
Part 2 Body
Part 3 Ending
列(框架)
Healthy life
Conclusion
Suggestions
have a balanced diet
take exercise/do sports
enough sleep
reduce stress through hobbies
文章开头的作用:
1.引出主题,明确说明对象。
2.提供背景信息,表达写作目的。
文章结尾的作用:
1.总结建议核心,强调建议的重要性;
2.表达希望,呼吁行动。
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Part 3 Ending
Hope/conclusion
1.0.In a word, health is important. We must keep healthy.
3.0: As the proverb goes, the first wealth is health. We must take our health much more seriously. Only in this way can we live a positive life.
总结: all in all, in short, in conclusion, in a word
in general, to conclude, in summary,in brief
表达观点:I think,in my opinion, in my view, as far as I’m concerned,from my perspective,
as we all know, as the saying/proverb goes, as is known to all,
2.0.In my opinion, health comes first. We must take care of ourselves and pay attention to our health.
根要点扩展:
使用高级词汇和短语;
影响和结果;
原因;
使用不同句型和高级句型;
举例子;
添加细节;
用顺序词、连接词连接
引用名言格言。
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Step 5 查
检查标点符号,大小写以及拼写是否有误
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Step 6 抄
注意书写!
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1.0
Health is very important. Let me tell you how to be healthy.
First, we should have a balanced diet. Eat more vegetables and fruit.Second,we can do exercise beacuse it can make us strong and healthy.Third,we need enough sleep so we should go to bed early and get up early every day.Fourth/Last,we can reduce stress through hobbies.For example, we can draw some pictures to relax.
In a word, health is important. We must keep healthy.
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2.0
Health plays a key part in our daily life,but how can we keep healthy?Here are some ways to keep healthy.
First of all, we should have a balanced diet. Breakfast is important. It gives us enough energy for the whole morning. We must also have the right kinds of food instead of junk food. Don’t forget to eat more fresh fruit and vegetables.Besides, we’d better often take exercise such as ball games or running because it can bring us a strong body. What’s more,we should have a good healthy living habit. Staying up late is bad for our health. As teenagers, we need to sleep for at least nine hours a day.If we can’t get enough sleep, we may have a headache.Last but not least, hobbies are helpful when we feel stressed. Listening to some music may help us reduce stress.
In my opinion, health comes first. We must take care of ourselves and pay attention to our health.
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3.0
As is known to all, health plays an essential role in our daily life,but how can we keep healthy?The following are some suggestions.
Primarily, We ought to have a balanced diet. Having breakfast is a must. It gives us enough energy for the whole morning. We must also have the right kinds of food instead of junk food. Fresh fruit and vegetables are necessary for our growth.Eat regularly and you’ll be in excellent condition/in good health.Besides,It’s necessary for us to take exercise, for taking exercise regularly or even every day helps you build a strong body which is the base of health. In our free/spare time, playing ball games or running is a good choice.In addition, we are supposed to form a good healthy living habit. Staying up late is harmful to our health. As teenagers, we need to sleep for at least nine hours a day.If we can’t get enough sleep, we may have a headache.I strongly believe that early to bed and early to rise can make you healthy, wealthy and wise. Last but not least,we can turn to some hobbies to relax ourselves for we often feel stressed because of the pressure of school work. For instance, singing along with music is a wonderful way to help us reduce stress.
As the proverb goes, the first wealth is health. We must take our health much more seriously. Only in this way can we live a positive life.
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保护动物是我们的职责,为了让更多学生加入到保护动物的行列,学校正在开展以“Save Animals!” 为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你根据以下要点,用英语写一篇演讲稿。
要点:1. 保护动物的重要性;
2. 保护动物的措施:
①告诉人们保护动物的重要性;
②留给动物们生存空间;
③学习了解动物的生活习性(习惯)
练一练
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