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Unit 2 Home Sweet Home. (写作提升)
如何写有关假日故事的文章
【典例导引】
本单元的话题是“甜蜜的家”。针对这一话题,可以描述你的一次家庭活动,如做家务、看望老人、观看电影等;可以描述家中充满温暖和爱的情景,如家人团聚、互相鼓励等;也可以表达对家庭意义的理解以及在家的感受等。此类写作文体通常为记叙文或应用文,人称多用第一人称,时态主要为一般现在时或一般过去时。本单元相关话题写作素材有:
(1)I can't wait to... 我迫不及待......
(2)It's almost... 很快就要.......
(3)Soon the day of. ..came. 很快.......的日子到了。
(4)We got up very early in the morning to... 我们一大早起床去......
(5)I shared... with... and told ... about...我和......分享了.......,还和......谈论了......
(6)Several days later when.... 过了几天,当......
(7)Home is a place of love. 家是一个充满爱的地方。
(8)Wherever I go... 无论我去哪里......
【典例】
(温州中考)在中国传统文化中, “家”是一个永恒的话题。家人相聚一堂,才是完整的家,温暖而有力量。请你结合下图,以 “Home”为题,写一篇约110词的英语短文。让外国朋友了解中国文化中的 “家”。
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【思维导图】
【范文介绍】
【专项训练】
1.(23-24八年级下·山东济南·期末)家是温馨的港湾,家是幸福的源泉,家是永远的依恋,每年5月15日是世界家庭日(International Day of Families)。学校英语校刊举办征文活动,请结合自身的成长经历,破解家庭幸福的“密码”,写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括:
1. 你对家庭幸福的理解;
2. 你家发生的一件有意义的事;
3. 促进家庭和谐幸福的几点建议(请列举两到三条具体做法)。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
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【答案】
Family is the source of happiness and the harbor of warmth. To me, a happy family means mutual respect, understanding, and support among all members. One meaningful event in my family was when we all worked together to prepare a surprise birthday party for my grandmother. Everyone had a role to play, and the joy on her face was priceless.
To promote family harmony and happiness, I have a few suggestions. First, spend quality time together, such as having meals or playing games. Second, communicate openly and honestly to understand each other’s feelings and needs. Lastly, show appreciation and gratitude for each other’s efforts and contributions. By following these steps, we can create a loving and supportive family environment.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:文章应该包括三个方面的内容要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第一和第三人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,整体介绍对家庭幸福的理解;
第二步,具体描述家庭中发生的一件有意义的事;
第三步,最后提出促进家庭和谐幸福的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①the source of……的来源
②prepare for准备
③show appreciation for对……表示感谢
[高分句型]
①One meaningful event in my family was when we all worked together to prepare a surprise birthday party for my grandmother.(表语从句)
②To promote family harmony and happiness, I have a few suggestions.(动词不定式作目的状语)
2.(24-25八年级下·湖北武汉·期中)某英文报就中学生是否应该做家务进行征文,请根据以下内容提示问题用英文从你做家务的内容、原因及收获等方面来写一篇短文。
内容提示问题:
1. Do you think middle school student should help with housework?
2. What housework do you usually do at home?
3. Why do you think children should do housework?
4. Something more about doing housework.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数60—80;标题已给出,不计入总词数。
Should We Help with Housework?
As a middle school student, I think___________________________________________________________
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【答案】
Should We Help with Housework?
As a middle school student, I think we should definitely help with housework. It’s not only a way to share the burden with our parents but also a chance to learn life skills.
I usually do chores like sweeping the floor, doing the dishes, and folding clothes. Sometimes I cook simple meals on weekends, such as making noodles or fried eggs. These tasks make me feel independent.
Children should do housework because it teaches responsibility. When I clean my room, I learn to keep things organized. Cooking also helps me understand the effort behind each meal, making me more thankful. Moreover, doing housework together can strengthen family bonds. Last week, my mom and I baked cookies while chatting—it was fun and meaningful.
All in all, housework is more than just labor; it’s a lesson in growing up. Every chore we do brings us closer to being responsible and caring individuals.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态主要为“一般现在时”;
③提示:文章应该包括4个问题要点,要适当补充,使文章内容充实;行文时多用第一人称,尽量多使用短语和句型;写作中适当使用连接词,使行文连贯、顺畅。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开门见山,直接回应题目问题,为全文奠定基调;
第二步,列举自己常做的家务,体现“怎么做”;
第三步,从责任、感恩、家庭关系三方面论证做家务的意义;
第四步,总结全文,升华做家务的价值。
[亮点词汇]
①not only … but also … 不但……而且……
②all in all 总之
[高分句型]
①Children should do housework because it teaches responsibility. (because引导的原因状语从句)
②When I clean my room, I learn to keep things organized. (when引导的时间状语从句)
3.(24-25八年级下·湖北黄石·期中)你学校正积极开展劳动的主题活动,假如你是大明,请给你的笔友Tom写一封邮件,聊聊你本学期的家庭劳动计划。
内容要点:
注意:
1. 内容必须包含以上所有信息;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 邮件中不得透露个人信息;
4. 80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
How is it going? _________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Daming
【答案】
Dear Tom,
How is it going? My school is promoting labor education, so I’ve made a family labor plan for this term. First, I’ll help with daily chores like sweeping floors and washing dishes every day. Second, I plan to grow vegetables in our garden every weekend to learn gardening skills. Finally, I’ll cook simple meals twice a week to share the burden. Through these activities, I hope to become more responsible and independent. What’s your plan? I’m looking forward to your reply.
Yours,
Daming
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:一般现在时和一般将来时;
③提示:需包含所有图片要点(日常家务种类/做家务的频率/将要学的家庭劳动),不得透露个人信息。
[写作步骤]
第一步:明确邮件目的(响应劳动主题活动,分享计划);
第二步:分点展开(家务→种植→烹饪)+ 补充细节(频率/目的);
第三步:结尾(询问对方计划,保持互动性)。
[亮点词汇]
① promote labor education 推广劳动教育
② share the burden 分担责任
③ independent 独立
[高分句型]
① I plan to grow vegetables in our garden every weekend to learn gardening skills.(不定式作目的状语)
② My school is promoting labor education, so I’ve made a family labor plan for this term. (含有so的并列句)
4.(24-25八年级下·山西晋中·期中)为了配合学校“劳动教育月”的主题活动,学校英文报正在开展以“Doing chores makes me _____”为主题的征文活动。请你根据下面的要点提示,补全题目后用英语写一篇短文并投稿。
要点提示:
1. What kind of housework do you often do at home?
2. Why do you do it?
3. What can you learn from doing it?
注意事项:
1. 要求语句通顺、意思连贯、包含提示所给的全部内容;
2. 词数不少于 70 个;
3. 文中不得透露考生本人的姓名或学校名称;
Housework makes me ____________
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【答案】
Housework makes me independent
Housework is important for our family life. I think everyone in the family should do their part in keeping the house clean and tidy.
I help by cleaning my room and doing the dishes. Sometimes, when Mom and Dad are busy, I even help cook our meals!
I learn a lot from doing chores. It teaches me many important life skills such as cooking and repairing things. Now I become more and more independent. Doing chores also makes me understand my parents better.
All in all, chores are not just work for me, they are a way to enjoy time with family. I love being a helper at home!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是材料作文;
②时态:主要时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生应注意不要遗漏提示内容中“提示信息”的要求均要一一阐述,适当发挥。
[写作步骤]
第一步:表明写作意图。借用“家务对我们的家庭生活很重要”来引出重点介绍的内容。
第二步:具体阐述写作内容。依照提示信息的要点——你经常做的家务是哪些、做家务的原因及感悟等均要一一阐述。
第三步:书写结语。
[亮点词汇]
①learn...from...从……学到……
②more and more independent越来越独立
[高分句型]
①I think everyone in the family should do their part in keeping the house clean and tidy. (宾语从句)
②Doing chores also makes me understand my parents better. (动名词作主语)
5.(24-25八年级下·北京·期中)根据所给提示,完成一篇不少于60词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名。
家务不仅是“任务”,更是成长的机会。通过承担家务,我们能提升责任心,学会平衡生活和尊重他人,并为未来的独立打下坚实基础。为了让更多青少年了解家务的益处,请你根据提示及要求,以“Let’s help our parents do chores”为题,写一篇英文倡议书。
提示词语:care about, busy, relax, improve, ability, responsible
提示问题:
1. What chores can we do to help parents?
2. Why should we learn to help do chores?
Dear students.
Helping our parents do chores is one of the best ways to care about them.____________________________
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【答案】
Let’s help our parents do chores
Dear students,
Helping our parents do chores is one of the best ways to care about them. We can clean rooms, wash dishes, take out the trash and make beds. These small actions show our love. Why should we learn to do chores? First, parents are busy every day. Helping them relax makes the family happier. Second, doing chores improves our ability to be responsible. For example, managing time between study and chores teaches us balance. Finally, it prepares us for future independence.
Let’s start today! Even simple chores can make a big difference.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:本文应使用“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充,使文章内容充实。
[写作步骤]
第一步,借用文章已给开头,引出主题;
第二步,根据题干的要点,介绍自己可以在家做的家务,并解释为什么要学会帮忙做家务;
第三步,号召大家都参与,并收尾。
[亮点词汇]
①take out带出去
②for example例如
[高分句型]
①Helping them relax makes the family happier.(动名词作主语)
②Let’s start today!(祈使句)
6.(24-25八年级下·北京·期中)“人生在勤,不劳何获”。果戈里说过,“如果儿童不去劳动,他们就既学不会文学,也学不会音乐,也学不会体育,也学不会那些保证道德达到最高峰的礼仪。”
某英文报纸就家务劳动(Housework)话题进行征文,请你试着投稿。请先谈一谈你对于孩子做家务的看法。再说一说你在家里经常帮父母做哪些家务以及你的收获。
提示词语:learn to do, help, parents, independent...
提示问题:
1.What do you think of doing housework?
2.What housework do you usually do at home?
3.What do you learn from doing housework?
I think doing housework is _________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
I think doing housework is important and necessary for children. It’s not just about helping parents but also a valuable way to learn and grow.
At home, I usually do several kinds of housework. I often sweep the floor to keep our home clean. Also, I like to help with cooking. Sometimes I wash vegetables and learn to make simple dishes. Additionally, I take care of watering the plants.
From doing these housework tasks, I’ve learned a lot. I’ve learned how to be more independent. It also makes me understand my parents’ hard work.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,考生注意不要遗漏提示中的要点,可适当添加细节,并突出写作要点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,先表达对于孩子做家务的看法;
第二步,介绍自己在家里经常帮父母做哪些家务,例如扫地、做饭、洗菜、给植物浇水等;
第三步,表达做家务的收获,比如学会独立、理解父母的辛苦等。
[亮点词汇]
①a way to do sth. 做某事的方法
②valuable 宝贵的
③sweep the floor 扫地
④help with cooking 帮忙做饭
⑤additionally 另外
⑥take care of 照顾
⑦water the plants 给植物浇水
[高分句型]
①I think doing housework is important and necessary for children. (省略that的宾语从句)
②I often sweep the floor to keep our home clean. (动词不定式表目的)
7.(24-25八年级下·湖南张家界·期中)假如你是李明,你想参加某英文报社举办的以“We Should Do Chores at Home”为题的征文活动。请根据以下内容提示撰写一篇短文,参加征文活动。
内容提示:
注意:
①文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息;
②写作词数不少于70,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
We Should Do Chores at Home
Nowadays, many students think that doing chores is a waste of time. They believe chores are their parents’ responsibilities._______________________________________________________________________________
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【答案】
We Should Do Chores at Home
Nowadays, many students think that doing chores is a waste of time. They believe chores are their parents’ responsibilities. However, I disagree with this view.
I often do chores like making the bed, cleaning the room, and taking out the rubbish. These tasks might seem small, but they help me learn important life skills.
In my opinion, chores are the responsibility of every family member. Doing chores helps us learn responsibility and time management. It’s a great way to contribute to our family and home. We should all take part in household chores.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:以“一般现在时”为主;
③提示:内容要点已给出,考生应按要求完成写作,不可遗漏信息提示,适当添加细节,使行文连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头讲述了许多学生对于做家务的看法,并给出自己的判断;
第二步,介绍自己做的家务有哪些;
第三步,阐述自己对于做家务的具体看法,呼吁大家做家务。
[亮点词汇]
①in my opinion 在我看来
②take part in 参加
[高分句型]
①Doing chores helps us learn responsibility and time management. (动名词作主语)
② It’s a great way to contribute to our family and home. (it的固定句型)
8.(24-25八年级下·重庆·期中)家是我们心灵的港湾,成长的摇篮,为家庭做力所能及的贡献是我们每个家庭成员应尽的义务。“书香重庆,红岩少年”阅读和写作大赛的新栏目“Sharing Corner”开启了英文征稿活动,希望同学们分享一次你为家庭做贡献的经历或故事(如分担家务,陪伴家人等)并谈谈你的感受。请你根据要点的提示,写文章参与此征文活动。
要求:1.80—120词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。2.书写规范,内容连贯,文中不能出现地名、学校、姓名等真实信息。
参考要点:
Opinions: our duty, do chores, care, help…with, work hard, tired…
Experience: time; what to do: sweep the floor, clean the house, cook dinner, look after, learn skills…
Feelings: be proud, a feeling of satisfaction, helpful, happy…
Love Family, Be Helpful
Family should be the palace of love, joy and laughter. And it’s everyone’s duty to do something for his or her family. _____________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
【答案】
Love Family, Be Helpful
Family should be the palace of love, joy and laughter. And it’s everyone’s duty to do something for his or her family.
Last month, I decided to help my parents more. I started by sweeping the floor and cleaning the house. At first, it was tiring, but I soon got used to it. Later, I also tried cooking dinner. Although I was nervous, my mother taught me some cooking skills. When I served the meal, I felt really proud and satisfied.
I realized that helping my family is not only our duty but also a great way to show love. It brings us closer and makes everyone happy.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态以“一般过去时”为主;
③提示:根据提示内容进行写作,可适当发挥,注意行文连贯,表述清晰合理。
[写作步骤]
第一步,引出主题;
第二步,介绍自己为家庭做贡献的一次经历;
第三步,表达自己的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①get used to习惯于
②decide to do sth决定做某事
③at first起初
[高分句型]
①Although I was nervous, my mother taught me some cooking skills. (although引导让步状语从句)
②When I served the meal, I felt really proud and satisfied. (when引导时间状语从句)
9.(24-25八年级下·北京·期中)参与家务劳动是每个家庭成员应尽的责任。假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom想了解你承担家务的情况。请结合自身经历,谈谈你平时承担的家务劳动,以及这些劳动经历为你和家庭带来的积极影响。
提示词语:make the bed, clean the room, organized, life skills, happy
提示问题:
● What chores do you usually do at home?
● How does doing chores benefit you and your family?
Dear Tom,
It’s great to hear from you! You asked about how I share housework in my family. As a Chinese teenager, I believe doing chores is an important part of growing up. ______________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
【答案】
Dear Tom,
It’s great to hear from you! You asked about how I share housework in my family. As a Chinese teenager, I believe doing chores is an important part of growing up.
I usually help with simple tasks like making the bed, cleaning my room, and sometimes washing dishes. Keeping my room organized makes me feel proud. Doing chores teaches me life skills, such as time management and responsibility. It also makes my parents happy because they see my efforts. Sharing housework brings our family closer. I feel more independent, and my parents get more time to relax. It’s a win-win!
Yours,
Li Hua
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是电子邮件。
②时态:本文采用一般现在时。
③提示:作答时根据提示问题进行作答,可以适当发挥,注意语意连贯。
[写作步骤]
第一步,结合自身经历,描述自己承担何种家务劳动。
第二步,描述这些家务劳动给自己和家庭带来哪些积极影响。
[亮点词汇]
①wash dishes洗碗
②make sb do sth让某人做某事
③such as例如
[高分句型]
①Keeping my room organized makes me feel proud.(动名词作主语)
②It also makes my parents happy because they see my efforts. Sharing housework brings our family closer.(because引导的原因状语从句)
10.(24-25八年级下·北京·期中)根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数,所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的学校和姓名。
许多父母要求孩子在家分担家务。你认为孩子们在家应该做家务吗?你为什么这样认为?请陈述你的观点及理由。
提示词:do chores, it’s one’s duty to do, in my opinion, on the one hand, on the other hand
提示问题:
1. What chores do you often do?
2. What’s your opinion on children/teenagers doing chores at home?
3. Why do you think so?
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【答案】
It’s said life is education. We should help our parents do chores in our daily life. I often help my mother do the dishes and sweep the floor at home.
In my opinion, teenagers should help parents do chores at home, because doing chores is good for us. On the one hand, it helps to develop our independence and teaches us how to look after ourselves. On the other hand, we can be healthier by doing chores.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:根据所给提示问题完成写作,不能遗漏信息;注意条理清晰和语法正确。
[写作步骤]
第一步,介绍你在家里通常会做什么家务;
第二步,介绍你对于青少年做家务的看法;
第三步,介绍有此观点的原因。
[亮点词汇]
①develop our independence培养我们的独立性
②how to look after ourselves如何照顾自己
③by doing sth通过做某事
[高分句型]
In my opinion, teenagers should help parents do chores at home, because doing chores is good for us. (because引导原因状语从句)
11.(24-25八年级下·浙江·期中)假设你是Tom,最近收到笔友Mike的电子邮件,请你根据邮件给他写一封回信。
要求:
1.回复邮件中提及的问题,适当拓展。词数80~100;
2.不能出现真实的学校、班级名称和自己的真实姓名。
Dear Tom,
How is it going with you? I have a cold these days. I feel really terrible. What should I do? Besides, I have a quarrel (争吵) with my parents. They think I should do chores at home, but I don’t think so. Do you do chores at home? Do you think we should help out with chores? Why or why not?
Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours,
Mike
Dear Mike,
I am glad to receive your email. ____________________________________________________________
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Tom
【答案】
Dear Mike,
I am glad to receive your email. I’m fine these days, I’m sorry to hear that you have a cold. I think you should drink more water and have a good rest. If you feel more terrible, you are supposed to see a doctor.
For chores, I think it’s essential for us to do them. First of all, our parents are busy with their work. Therefore, we ought to share housework to live in a clean and comfortable environment. Besides it’s a good way to develop a sense of responsibility and independence. Last but not least, I think helping parents is a part of the traditional virtue of our country. It’s our duty to show our care and love to them by doing chores.
Hope you will get better soon and understand your parents.
Best wishes!
Yours,
Tom
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇应用文,为电子邮件;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般过去时”;
③提示:根据来信需回复Mike的两个问题(感冒建议、家务争议),考生应注意不要遗漏题干信息,适当增加细节,并突出写作重点。
[写作步骤]
第一步,回应健康问题,表达关心,给出具体建议;
第二步,具体讨论家务争议;
第三步,总结与祝福。
[亮点词汇]
①be supposed to do sth应该做某事
②be busy with sth忙于某事
③a sense of responsibility and independence责任感和独立性
[高分句型]
①I think you should drink more water and have a good rest.(宾语从句)
②For chores, I think it’s essential for us to do them.(It固定句型)
③Last but not least, I think helping parents is a part of the traditional virtue of our country. (宾语从句)
12.(24-25八年级下·四川·期中)假设你是李华,早上出门前和妈妈吵了一架,放学回家后你发现家里没人,而餐桌上留着你最爱吃的菜。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,描述你的所做所想。
要求:
1. 包含所有提示要点,可适当发挥;
2. 不少于80词。
参考词汇: 给某人拥抱 give sb. a hug
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【答案】
I argued with my mom this morning. When I came back this evening, there was no one at home. Dinner was ready on the table. It was my favorite dish. Mom loves me so much but I shouted at her this morning. I decided to do something to make her feel better. I did the dishes after dinner. I swept the floor and cleaned the tables. Mom didn’t come back until 9 o’clock. She looked at the clean house in surprise, and later she gave me a hug. My parents are always busy and tired. I will offer to help at home every day.
【详解】[总体分析]
① 题材:本文是一篇看图作文;
② 时态:时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”;
③ 提示:根据所给图片提示完成写作,可适当发挥,确保语句通顺。
[写作步骤]
第一步,描述早上与妈妈吵架的情景;
第二步,描述放学回家后发现家里没人,但餐桌上留有自己最爱吃的菜;
第三步,描述自己为弥补错误所做的家务;
第四步,描述妈妈回家后的反应,并表达自己的感受。
[亮点词汇]
① give sb. a hug 给某人拥抱
② do the dishes 洗碗
③ sweep the floor 扫地
④ clean the tables 擦桌子
[高分句型]
① When I came back this evening, there was no one at home.(when引导的时间状语从句)
② Mom loves me so much but I shouted at her this morning.(but连接的并列句)
③ She looked at the clean house in surprise, and later she gave me a hug.(and连接的并列句)
13.(24-25八年级下·山西运城·期中)假如你是光明中学的李华,准备参加学校举办的以“感恩”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你以“A Special Birthday Gift”为题,用英语写一篇演讲稿,讲述你在父(母)亲或其他长辈生日那天,送上的一份特殊生日礼物:家务劳动。
内容包括:
1. 做家务的理由;
2. 做家务的过程(扫地、收拾房间等);
3. 你的感受。
要求:词数不少于80,开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
A Special Birthday Gift
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Today, I’m very glad to have the chance to take part in this English speech contest. ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for listening!
【答案】
A Special Birthday Gift
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Today, I’m very glad to have the chance to take part in this English speech contest. My special birthday gift for my parents is doing housework.
I have been busy with my study and seldom helped my parents with the housework. Feeling sorry for them, I began to think about what to do to help.
Last Saturday was my mother’ s birthday and my parents went out to see a film. I decided to give the rooms a thorough cleaning. Firstly, I collected all the books, newspapers and other things scattered in the rooms and put them in place. Then, I wiped the furniture. After that, I swept the floor.
At that moment, my parents came back and were quite surprised to see all the rooms tidy. My mother gave me a hug and I could see tears in her eyes. Tired as I was, I felt so happy!
Thank you for listening!
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇记叙文,为演讲稿;
②时态:主要采用一般过去时叙述事件经过;
③提示:需围绕“特殊生日礼物(家务劳动)”展开,包含三个要点(理由、过程、感受),注意动作描写的连贯性。
[写作步骤]
第一步:点明特殊礼物的选择原因;
第二步:详细描述完成家务的过程;
第三步:表达劳动后的感悟。
[亮点词汇]
①think about考虑
②sweep the floor 扫地
③give a hug给一个拥抱
[高分句型]
①Feeling sorry for them, I began to think about what to do to help. (现在分词短语作状语)
②Tired as I was, I felt so happy! (倒装句)
14.(24-25八年级下·河南驻马店·阶段练习)父母是我们一生的朋友和老师。我们青少年日常和父母相处的过程中有很多快乐,也难免会有一些烦恼。请你根据下面的写作要点和写作要求,用英语写一篇短文,介绍一下你平时和父母是怎样相处的。
写作要点:1)What do you usually do with your parents?
2)How do you get along with them?
3)What is your advice?
写作要求:1)文中须包含以上所有写作要点,可适当发挥;
2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名或地名等信息;
3)词数80左右。
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【答案】
Parents are the people closest to us. We may get happiness or problems when we stay with our parents.
I usually talk to my parents in my spare time. We often talk something about my life and study. On weekends, we often do housework together. It’s common that we have different opinions. So we usually listen to each other carefully and share our feelings.
I think we should have a good communication with our parents. We shouldn’t talk back to them, because they may feel sad. We should spend more time with them and share our happiness and sadness.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇材料作文;
②时态:时态为“一般现在时”;
③提示:写作要点已给出,注意不要遗漏,适当增加细节完整表述内容。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点题,父母是我们最亲密的人;
第二步,介绍自己如何与父母相处;
第三步,提出合理的建议。
[亮点词汇]
①in my spare time在我闲暇时间
②each other彼此
③have a good communication with和……有一个良好的沟通
[高分句型]
①We may get happiness or problems when we stay with our parents.(when引导时间状语从句)
②I think we should have a good communication with our parents.(省略that的宾语从句)
15.(23-24八年级下·山西大同·期中)很多父母希望孩子将时间都花在学习上,以便有个美好的未来。假如你是图中的学生,你对父母的这种做法是怎么认识的?请用英语写一篇作文。
提示:
1.对图画进行简单描述;
2.对父母的这一做法,给出合理评判;
3.给出自己的想法。
词数:100左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
Yesterday afternoon, I went home after school._________________________________________________
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【答案】
Yesterday afternoon, I went home after school. When I entered my room, my mother stopped me from watching TV and ordered me to read books and study. Sometimes, when I want to do some housework, my father always asks me to study instead of doing chores.
I understand my parents’ good intentions. They hope I can have a bright future by spending more time on study. However, I don’t think it’s a proper way. All work and no play will make me lose interest in learning and feel stressed.
I hope my parents can give me some free time. I can do things I like, such as watching TV or playing sports. This can help me relax and study more effectively.
【详解】[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇看图作文,记录个人经历与想法;
②时态:时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”;
③提示:描述妈妈阻止看电视要求学习的事件,表达自己对此事的看法及期望。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开头描述事件,即放学回家妈妈阻止看电视并要求学习;
第二步,中间阐述理解父母的意图,但认为这种方式不妥及原因;
第三步,结尾表达希望父母给自己自由时间,说明自由时间的好处。
[亮点词汇]
①stop sb. from doing sth.阻止某人做某事
②good intentions好意;良好的意图
③lose interest in对……失去兴趣
④effectively有效地
[高分句型]
①However, I don’t think it’s a proper way.(运用“否定前移”结构,自然地表达个人否定观点。)
②All work and no play will make me lose interest in learning and feel stressed.(引用俗语“All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy”的变体,生动说明过度学习的弊端。)
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Unit 2 Home Sweet Home. (写作提升)
如何写有关假日故事的文章
【典例导引】
本单元的话题是“甜蜜的家”。针对这一话题,可以描述你的一次家庭活动,如做家务、看望老人、观看电影等;可以描述家中充满温暖和爱的情景,如家人团聚、互相鼓励等;也可以表达对家庭意义的理解以及在家的感受等。此类写作文体通常为记叙文或应用文,人称多用第一人称,时态主要为一般现在时或一般过去时。本单元相关话题写作素材有:
(1)I can't wait to... 我迫不及待......
(2)It's almost... 很快就要.......
(3)Soon the day of. ..came. 很快.......的日子到了。
(4)We got up very early in the morning to... 我们一大早起床去......
(5)I shared... with... and told ... about...我和......分享了.......,还和......谈论了......
(6)Several days later when.... 过了几天,当......
(7)Home is a place of love. 家是一个充满爱的地方。
(8)Wherever I go... 无论我去哪里......
【典例】
(温州中考)在中国传统文化中, “家”是一个永恒的话题。家人相聚一堂,才是完整的家,温暖而有力量。请你结合下图,以 “Home”为题,写一篇约110词的英语短文。让外国朋友了解中国文化中的 “家”。
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【思维导图】
【范文介绍】
【专项训练】
1.(23-24八年级下·山东济南·期末)家是温馨的港湾,家是幸福的源泉,家是永远的依恋,每年5月15日是世界家庭日(International Day of Families)。学校英语校刊举办征文活动,请结合自身的成长经历,破解家庭幸福的“密码”,写一篇短文投稿。
内容包括:
1. 你对家庭幸福的理解;
2. 你家发生的一件有意义的事;
3. 促进家庭和谐幸福的几点建议(请列举两到三条具体做法)。
注意:
1. 词数100左右;
2. 可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 不得出现真实的人名、校名等相关信息。
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2.(24-25八年级下·湖北武汉·期中)某英文报就中学生是否应该做家务进行征文,请根据以下内容提示问题用英文从你做家务的内容、原因及收获等方面来写一篇短文。
内容提示问题:
1. Do you think middle school student should help with housework?
2. What housework do you usually do at home?
3. Why do you think children should do housework?
4. Something more about doing housework.
注意:文中不得透露个人真实信息;词数60—80;标题已给出,不计入总词数。
Should We Help with Housework?
As a middle school student, I think___________________________________________________________
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3.(24-25八年级下·湖北黄石·期中)你学校正积极开展劳动的主题活动,假如你是大明,请给你的笔友Tom写一封邮件,聊聊你本学期的家庭劳动计划。
内容要点:
注意:
1. 内容必须包含以上所有信息;
2. 可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯;
3. 邮件中不得透露个人信息;
4. 80词左右(开头和结尾已给出,不计入总词数)。
Dear Tom,
How is it going? _________________________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Yours,
Daming
4.(24-25八年级下·山西晋中·期中)为了配合学校“劳动教育月”的主题活动,学校英文报正在开展以“Doing chores makes me _____”为主题的征文活动。请你根据下面的要点提示,补全题目后用英语写一篇短文并投稿。
要点提示:
1. What kind of housework do you often do at home?
2. Why do you do it?
3. What can you learn from doing it?
注意事项:
1. 要求语句通顺、意思连贯、包含提示所给的全部内容;
2. 词数不少于 70 个;
3. 文中不得透露考生本人的姓名或学校名称;
Housework makes me ____________
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5.(24-25八年级下·北京·期中)根据所给提示,完成一篇不少于60词的英语文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数。所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的真实校名和姓名。
家务不仅是“任务”,更是成长的机会。通过承担家务,我们能提升责任心,学会平衡生活和尊重他人,并为未来的独立打下坚实基础。为了让更多青少年了解家务的益处,请你根据提示及要求,以“Let’s help our parents do chores”为题,写一篇英文倡议书。
提示词语:care about, busy, relax, improve, ability, responsible
提示问题:
1. What chores can we do to help parents?
2. Why should we learn to help do chores?
Dear students.
Helping our parents do chores is one of the best ways to care about them.____________________________
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6.(24-25八年级下·北京·期中)“人生在勤,不劳何获”。果戈里说过,“如果儿童不去劳动,他们就既学不会文学,也学不会音乐,也学不会体育,也学不会那些保证道德达到最高峰的礼仪。”
某英文报纸就家务劳动(Housework)话题进行征文,请你试着投稿。请先谈一谈你对于孩子做家务的看法。再说一说你在家里经常帮父母做哪些家务以及你的收获。
提示词语:learn to do, help, parents, independent...
提示问题:
1.What do you think of doing housework?
2.What housework do you usually do at home?
3.What do you learn from doing housework?
I think doing housework is _________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
7.(24-25八年级下·湖南张家界·期中)假如你是李明,你想参加某英文报社举办的以“We Should Do Chores at Home”为题的征文活动。请根据以下内容提示撰写一篇短文,参加征文活动。
内容提示:
注意:
①文中不得出现人名和校名等真实信息;
②写作词数不少于70,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
We Should Do Chores at Home
Nowadays, many students think that doing chores is a waste of time. They believe chores are their parents’ responsibilities._______________________________________________________________________________
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8.(24-25八年级下·重庆·期中)家是我们心灵的港湾,成长的摇篮,为家庭做力所能及的贡献是我们每个家庭成员应尽的义务。“书香重庆,红岩少年”阅读和写作大赛的新栏目“Sharing Corner”开启了英文征稿活动,希望同学们分享一次你为家庭做贡献的经历或故事(如分担家务,陪伴家人等)并谈谈你的感受。请你根据要点的提示,写文章参与此征文活动。
要求:1.80—120词,开头已给出,不计入总词数。2.书写规范,内容连贯,文中不能出现地名、学校、姓名等真实信息。
参考要点:
Opinions: our duty, do chores, care, help…with, work hard, tired…
Experience: time; what to do: sweep the floor, clean the house, cook dinner, look after, learn skills…
Feelings: be proud, a feeling of satisfaction, helpful, happy…
Love Family, Be Helpful
Family should be the palace of love, joy and laughter. And it’s everyone’s duty to do something for his or her family. _____________________________________________________________________________________ _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
9.(24-25八年级下·北京·期中)参与家务劳动是每个家庭成员应尽的责任。假如你是李华,你的英国笔友Tom想了解你承担家务的情况。请结合自身经历,谈谈你平时承担的家务劳动,以及这些劳动经历为你和家庭带来的积极影响。
提示词语:make the bed, clean the room, organized, life skills, happy
提示问题:
● What chores do you usually do at home?
● How does doing chores benefit you and your family?
Dear Tom,
It’s great to hear from you! You asked about how I share housework in my family. As a Chinese teenager, I believe doing chores is an important part of growing up. ______________________________________________
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Yours,
Li Hua
10.(24-25八年级下·北京·期中)根据中文和英文提示,完成一篇不少于50词的文段写作。文中已给出内容不计入总词数,所给提示词语仅供选用。请不要写出你的学校和姓名。
许多父母要求孩子在家分担家务。你认为孩子们在家应该做家务吗?你为什么这样认为?请陈述你的观点及理由。
提示词:do chores, it’s one’s duty to do, in my opinion, on the one hand, on the other hand
提示问题:
1. What chores do you often do?
2. What’s your opinion on children/teenagers doing chores at home?
3. Why do you think so?
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11.(24-25八年级下·浙江·期中)假设你是Tom,最近收到笔友Mike的电子邮件,请你根据邮件给他写一封回信。
要求:
1.回复邮件中提及的问题,适当拓展。词数80~100;
2.不能出现真实的学校、班级名称和自己的真实姓名。
Dear Tom,
How is it going with you? I have a cold these days. I feel really terrible. What should I do? Besides, I have a quarrel (争吵) with my parents. They think I should do chores at home, but I don’t think so. Do you do chores at home? Do you think we should help out with chores? Why or why not?
Hope to hear from you soon!
Yours,
Mike
Dear Mike,
I am glad to receive your email. ____________________________________________________________
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Best wishes!
Yours,
Tom
12.(24-25八年级下·四川·期中)假设你是李华,早上出门前和妈妈吵了一架,放学回家后你发现家里没人,而餐桌上留着你最爱吃的菜。请你根据以下提示,用英语写一篇短文,描述你的所做所想。
要求:
1. 包含所有提示要点,可适当发挥;
2. 不少于80词。
参考词汇: 给某人拥抱 give sb. a hug
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13.(24-25八年级下·山西运城·期中)假如你是光明中学的李华,准备参加学校举办的以“感恩”为主题的英语演讲比赛。请你以“A Special Birthday Gift”为题,用英语写一篇演讲稿,讲述你在父(母)亲或其他长辈生日那天,送上的一份特殊生日礼物:家务劳动。
内容包括:
1. 做家务的理由;
2. 做家务的过程(扫地、收拾房间等);
3. 你的感受。
要求:词数不少于80,开头和结尾已给出,但不计入总词数。
A Special Birthday Gift
Hello, everyone! My name is Li Hua. Today, I’m very glad to have the chance to take part in this English speech contest. ________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Thank you for listening!
14.(24-25八年级下·河南驻马店·阶段练习)父母是我们一生的朋友和老师。我们青少年日常和父母相处的过程中有很多快乐,也难免会有一些烦恼。请你根据下面的写作要点和写作要求,用英语写一篇短文,介绍一下你平时和父母是怎样相处的。
写作要点:1)What do you usually do with your parents?
2)How do you get along with them?
3)What is your advice?
写作要求:1)文中须包含以上所有写作要点,可适当发挥;
2)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名、校名或地名等信息;
3)词数80左右。
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15.(23-24八年级下·山西大同·期中)很多父母希望孩子将时间都花在学习上,以便有个美好的未来。假如你是图中的学生,你对父母的这种做法是怎么认识的?请用英语写一篇作文。
提示:
1.对图画进行简单描述;
2.对父母的这一做法,给出合理评判;
3.给出自己的想法。
词数:100左右,文章开头已给出,不计入总词数。
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