高频话题01 个人情况（同步写作讲义）英语八年级通用版

高频话题01 个人情况 同步写作课讲义 个人情况类书面表达围绕“人与自我”：个人基本信息、兴趣爱好、能力特长、性格特点、生活经历（学习、交友、家庭、活动）、成长变化、未来愿望/计划等展开。是中考写作的基础话题和高频考点。 此类话题可涉及较多作文体裁，如记叙文讲述故事，说明文介绍人物变化，议论文表达看法，以及应用文（（如：申请信、自我介绍信）表达感谢等。展现健康向上的生活态度、兴趣爱好和未来规划。 （一）介绍自己 每一个人都有长处，都有精彩的一面。让我们发挥自己的长处，做精彩的自己。请以“I am the best”为题，根据以下写作要点和写作要求，写一篇英语短文。 1. 写作要点： 1）你的长处是什么； 2）表现在哪些方面； 3）未来如何突破自我。 2. 写作要求：1）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 2）词数100左右。 I am the best ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 写作框架设计 ) 写作指导 1.内容：谈论你自己最好的一面并举例论证。可选角度：性格、爱好或特长、生活习惯等； 2.人称：介绍自己，用第一人称； 3.时态：介绍自己的性格、兴趣等，用一般现在时；描述过去的事件体现自己的性格，用一般过去时；描述过去的事件对现在的影响，用现在完成时。 写作框架 【参考范文】 I am the best Different people have different advantages. I think my advantage is that I am very confident and I believe that I am the best.When I face difficulties in my study or fail an exam， I do not lose heart or feel sad. Instead， I work harder than before， and believe I will make progress next time. It is my confidence that makes me become better and better. What’s more， I don’t feel shy or nervous even if I am surrounded by other excellent people， because I believe there is always something that they can learn from me.In the future， I will work harder to become more confident and excellent. 【范文说明】 结构完整：遵循了经典的三段式（开头引入观点——中间论证观点——结尾总结升华）。开头段 (Introduction):点明自己的优势是自信，并相信“我是最好的”。主体段 (Body):提供两个具体方面论证自信的作用：方面一 (面对学习困难):考试失败不灰心，更努力学习，相信自己下次会进步。二 (面对优秀他人):在优秀人群中不害羞/紧张，相信他人也能从自己身上学到东西。结尾段 (Conclusion):总结自信让自己变得更好，并展望未来（更努力、更自信、更优秀）。 衔接与连贯 :使用了一些连接词 (Instead, What's more,because，In the future)，保证了句子的流畅度。 （2） 介绍他人 榜样是我们学习的楷模、努力的方向。学校校刊英语专栏以“介绍我心中的榜样”为主题向学生进行征文。请你根据写作要求，用英文写一篇短文，介绍你心中的榜样——李想，向专栏投稿。 写作要求：1)人物描写； 2)说明理由； 3)表达希望； 4)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 5)词数100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 I am Li Hua. Today I would like to introduce Li Xiang, a model student in my mind.____________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【审题】 人称：______________ 时态：______________ 【列纲】 【参考范文】 I am Li Hua. Today I would like to introduce Li Xiang, a model student in my mind. He is very kind and caring. At school, he studies so hard that he often gets good scores in exams. However, I don't do well in studying. ①So he not only helps me with every subject but also tells me how to study in order to catch up with others. With Li Xiang's help, I made great progress and I thank him very much. ②I think I'm lucky to have such a good friend. From now on, I will do my best to study better and better. ③And I hope I will learn from Li Xiang to help others in trouble and show the act of kindness to others. 【加分亮点】 ①句使用not only… but also…引导的并列句及“特殊疑问词＋to do”作宾语，具体说明李想为何是自己的榜样，使文章句式更高级，内容更充实； ②句使用“sb. is ＋adj.＋to do”结构，阐明作者的观点，表达干净利落，使文章句式结构多样； ③句使用宾语从句及不定式短语作目的状语，表达作者希望向榜样学习，逻辑严密，内容更加连贯。 ( 词汇积累 ) 外貌特征 1. good­looking漂亮的 2. slim苗条的 3. attractive迷人的 4. handsome英俊的 5. strong强壮的 6. straight直的 7. medium height中等身高 8. look like看起来像 9. middle­aged中年的 性格品质 1. outgoing外向的 2. active活跃的 3. friendly友好的 4. honest诚实的 5. independent独立的 6. careful谨慎的 7. confident自信的 8. creative有创造力的 9. open­minded思想开明的 　　　　　　 10. be willing to help others乐于助人 11. try one's best to do sth.尽力做某事 　　 12. be ready to do sth.愿意做某事 13. be responsible for对……负责任 　　 14. take sth. seriously认真对待某事 15. overcome difficulties克服困难 　　　 16. be patient with对……有耐心 兴趣爱好 1. hobby爱好 2. favorite最喜爱的 3. prefer更喜欢 4. excellent极好的 5. experience经验；经历 6. knowledge知识 7. be interested in对……感兴趣 　　　　　　 8. be good at擅长于…… 9. in one's spare time在某人的空闲时间 　　 10. have… in common有相同特征 11. show/have a talent for对……有天赋 　　 12. be fond of喜欢…… 自我完善 I used to... stay alone独自呆着 be afraid of speaking in public害怕在公众场合说话 be unwilling to communicate with others 不愿意和别人交流 put off my homework till tomorrow把我的作业推迟到明天 But now I... be happy to do housework乐于做家务 get good grades取得好成绩 make more friends交更多朋友 have good communication with parents和父母有良好的沟通 get on/along well with classmates和同学相处愉快 ( 句式积累 ) 外貌特征 1. She’s of medium height， and she has long straight hair. 她中等身高，留着长直发。 2. He lives a simple life， always wearing jeans and sports shoes. 他生活很简朴，总是穿着牛仔裤和运动鞋。 3.He is outgoing and always full of energy. 他很外向，总是充满活力。 4. He used to be thin, but look how big and strong he is now！他过去很瘦。但看他现在是多么的高大和强壮！5.My good friend Mary who has beautiful big eyes is a lovely girl.我的好朋友玛丽有一双美丽的大眼睛，她是一个可爱的女孩儿。 性格品质 1. I'm shy so it's not easy for me to make friends.我很害羞，所以交朋友对我来说不容易。 2. She always wears a smile whenever she talks to us. 无论什么时候和我们讲话，她总是面带微笑。 3. David is friendly and he can get along well with his classmates. Whenever he meets his classmates and teachers, he greets them. 大卫很友好，他能和他的同学相处得很好。每当他遇到他的同学和老师，他都向他们打招呼。 4. Julia sets a good example to us because she works hard and never gives up.朱莉亚为我们树立了一个好榜样，因为她努力工作，从不放弃。 5. I admire him not only for what he has done to the country but also for his strong spirit and determination. 我钦佩他不仅因为他为国家所做的事，而且因为他坚强的意志和决心。 6. She is kind and helpful， for she is always ready to help others. She has a good sense of humour. She is able to make her class interesting and lively. 她和蔼且乐于助人，时刻准备着帮助别人。她很有幽默感，能让自己的课堂生动有趣。 7. He devoted all his time and energy to teaching and often worked late into night preparing for his lessons. 他把所有的时间和精力都投入到教学中，经常备课到深夜。 8. Although he is very strict with us， he shows us great concern. 虽然他对我们非常严厉，但是他也很关心我们。 特长兴趣爱好 1. I’m fond of playing basketball. When I play basketball， I have a strong feeling of satisfaction and it helps me forget all my worries. 我喜欢打篮球。打篮球时，我有一种强烈的满足感，它帮助我忘记自己所有的烦恼。 2. I like reading a lot. I am a fan of the book Harry Potter， which tells the story of Harry Potter who overcomes many difficulties with his friends. 我很喜欢阅读。我是《哈利·波特》这本书的书迷，它讲述了哈利·波特与朋友们一起克服许多困难的故事。 3. As a school player， I’m interested in ball games， especially basketball games. I often practise playing basketball with my friends and I’m confident in my ball skills. 作为一名校队球员，我对球类运动，特别是篮球运动，很感兴趣。我经常和朋友们一起练习打篮球，我对自己的球技很有信心。 事迹成就影响 1. My best friend helps to bring out the best in me. 我最好的朋友帮助我展现出我最好的一面。 2. I know she cares about me because she’s always there to listen. 3. You really require a lot of talent and hard work to succeed. Only a very small number of people make it to the top. 你真的需要很多天赋和努力工作才能成功。只有极少数人能出人头地。 ( 谚语积累 ) 1.A friend is like a mirror. 朋友就像一面镜子。 2.A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。 3.A friend is a second self. 朋友就是另一个自己。 4.There must be a use for my talent. 天生我材必有用。 5. A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart. 一个真正的朋友会向你伸出援手，并触动你的心灵。 ( 写作模板 ) (一) 介绍自己 I am a Junior High School student. I am good at ______________, especially ______________. I like ______________. I often ______________ in my spare time. I’m also ______________. If I can become a ______________, I will ______________, so that ______________. I will also ______________. I hope ______________ can agree with me to become a ______________. I believe I will ______________. (二)介绍他人 Now, I’ll introduce ______________ to you. ______________ is ______________ years old. He is in /from ______________. He has some hobbies. He likes ______________. He thinks it’s ______________. He is also good at ______________.______________ is very ______________ and he has (done) ______________. ______________ is so ______________ that ______________. Let’s learn from ______________. ( 考情分析 ) 近三年考情分析 年份 卷区 话题 2024年 江苏淮安 写一封自荐信 天津 介绍自己或他人的优秀品质 2023年 福建 写一封自荐信 湖南湘潭 写一封自荐信 浙江丽水 分享自己成长变化的经历及感悟 2022年 四川 介绍自己的姐姐的基本情况 ( 变式提升训练 ) 【期中真题链接】 （1） （24-25八年级上·四川乐山·期中）请根据下面的提示，写一篇介绍中国最优秀的乒乓球运动员孙颖莎的文章。80词左右。 提示： 1. 2000年出生于河北省石家庄； 2. 很小的时候，孙颖莎就对乒乓球产生了兴趣； 3. 她努力训练，2015年进入国家队 (national team)，她赢得了许多金牌 (gold medals)，她的教练对她非常满意； 4. 你的观点：向她学习，…… Hello, everyone! Today I want to introduce a young and talented table tennis player, she is Sun Yingsha. She is ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （2） （24-25八年级上·四川宜宾·期中）请你根据下面表格所提供的信息，写一篇英语短文介绍你和你的好朋友Julia的相同之处和不同之处。 人物 相同点 不同点 Julia 1.喜欢运动； 2.学习努力，各门功课都学得好； 3.喜欢阅读，通常周末一起去图书馆。 1.比我高得多，更外向； 2.更擅长唱歌、跳舞； 3.喜欢听音乐 I 1.喜欢帮忙做家务 2.喜欢看电影 要求：1.词数60-80； 2.包含表格所有信息，可适当增加细节； 3.开头已写好，不计入总词数。 Julia is my best friend. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （3） （24-25八年级上·四川眉山·期中）请根据下列提示写一篇短文介绍你的好朋友Tom。 1. 他小时候是一个安静的男孩，但现在比我还外向。 2. 在学校里，他学习最努力；周末在家，他喜欢看卡通片。 3. 他喜欢锻炼，每周与朋友踢三到四次足球。 4. 他的梦想：①将来想要当一名医生；②打算学医药学；③打算去上海工作； ④打算先读完高中和大学。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Good friends are like sunshine. They brighten our life. I have a good friend called Tom. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （4） （24-25八年级上·浙江台州·期中）假设你叫李俊，你的美国笔友David想要在中国结交更多的笔友。你通过电子邮件，把你的同学王明介绍给他。王明情况见下表： 年    龄 14 外    貌 方脸，大眼睛，短发，高个子； 个    性 诚实，幽默，替朋友保守秘密，从不说他人坏话； 爱    好 痴迷于DIY，经常在周末自己动手制作东西； 理    想 当一名校长 (headmaster)，让学生有更多的时间玩耍； 寒假计划 ……(补充不少于两点。) 要求：1. 注意文章条理，语句通顺； 2. 词数80-100词，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear David, How are you? I’m writing to introduce my classmate Wang Ming to you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you can make friends with him as soon as possible. Best wishes! Yours, Li Jun （5） （24-25八年级上·浙江绍兴·期中）假如你是李华，你在旅途中认识了一个新朋友，你想将它介绍给美国笔友Harry，请从外貌、爱好和性格等方面介绍你们的相似点和差异，让Harry更多地了解你们。 注意： （1）短文必须包括以上所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； （2）词数：80。文章的标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）不得出现真实个人信息（人名、校名等） Li  Hua Jane Tall Tall Wear glasses Wear glasses Like baseball Like baseball, play better Shy and quiet Outgoing A good listener Talk a lot Work hard ... Dear Harry, I made a new friend when traveling in Hong Kong. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua （6） （24-25八年级上·四川遂宁·期中）今天网上讨论的主题是“My best friend and I”。假如你是李华，你有一个最好的朋友Lucy，请根据表格所提供的信息进行跟帖，对你和Lucy情况做一个简单的描述。 要求： 外貌 性格 运动 最爱的运动员 (描述原因) 最擅长的才艺 Li Hua 高 严肃的；安静的 每周打两次网球 郑钦文（最刻苦） 唱歌 Lucy 矮瘦 善良的；外向的 每周游三次泳 潘展乐（最有趣） 跳舞 1. 短文应包含要求的所有信息，使用比较级和最高级。 2. 文中不能出现真实的人名信息。 3. 词数100词左右。（标题已给出，不计入总词数） My best friend and I ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （7） （24-25八年级上·四川成都·期中）上个月，你作为交换生，去美国友好学校进行为期3个月的学习。请给你的父母写一封邮件告知你在美国的生活近况，邮件应包含下图所有要点信息。 注意： 1. 邮件内容须包含图中的所有要点； 2. 须适当使用比较级、最高级； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 词数90左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （8） （24-25八年级上·四川成都·期中）下列是关于你的新同学Tom的相关信息。请根据图示内容介绍一下Tom。 要求： 1. 文章应包含图示所有信息； 2. 文章应适当使用比较级和最高级； 3. 文章应结构完整、语句通顺、句式多样； 4. 词数要求：100词左右 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ （9） （24-25八年级上·四川德阳·期中）假如Tom是你最好的朋友，以“My Best Friend”为题，根据表格内容介绍你的好朋友。 个人信息 Tom，14岁，比我高一点，外向一点，和我一样学习努力。 爱好 比我更擅长运动，每周最少运动四次；喜欢阅读，最喜欢看有关历史的书。 生活习惯 拥有健康的生活习惯；喜欢蔬菜、水果和牛奶；几乎不吃垃圾食品。 学校表现 最喜欢英语学科，认为英语学科比数学简单；总是取得好成绩，并帮助我学习英语。 写作要点： 1. 80词左右 (标题和结尾已给出，不计入总词数) ； 2. 内容合理，要点齐全，句子和文章结构完整，书写规范； 3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 4. 不能出现自己的真实信息。 My Best Friend ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I think a good friend is someone who cares you and helps you grow. 【中考真题链接】 1． （2025·四川泸州·中考真题） 暑期将至，一批来自姊妹学校的外国学生将到你校参观交流，他们想了解中国的传统节日。为此，你校英语社团面向全校征集志愿者。假如你是李华，请根据下图内容，用英语给社团负责人王老师写一封自荐信。 表明意愿 要求：1．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 2．必须包含所给提示，并做适当发挥； 3．文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名； 4．词数100左右。 Dear Mr Wang, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours truly, Li Hua 2． （2022·四川眉山·中考真题） 本周日上午，一些外国学生将到三苏祠参观，现三苏祠急需招募十名志愿者。假定你是李华，请写一封电子邮件推荐自己。要点包括： 1. 自荐目的：成为志愿者； 2. 个人信息：身份，年龄，性格（外向、善于与人相处），本周日上午有空； 3. 个人优势：擅长英语，……； 4. 表达期望：获得机会并能做好，请本周五前回复。 注意： 1. 词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。 参考词汇：三苏祠Sansu Temple Dear Sir/Madam, I am glad to see your notice Volunteers Wanted. Some foreign students… ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 3．（2023·湖南湘潭·中考真题） 湘潭市博物馆正在为“讲好湘潭故事，传播本土文化”的大型宣传活动招募英语讲解员。假设你是李华，你想参加此次活动，请根据以下提示用英语向活动负责人写一封自荐信。 要点提示： （1）个人基本情况（姓名、年龄等）； （2）自荐的原因（性格、特长等）； （3）对活动的认知（感想或意义等）。 注意：（1）字数在80词左右，可适当发挥（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； （2）不能出现可能透露真实身份的任何信息（如校名，个人姓名等）。 Dear Sir/Madam, I’d like to be a volunteer in this “Telling Xiangtan Stories, Spreading Local Culture” activity. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours Li Hua 4.（2022·湖北荆门·中考真题） 湖北省第三届（荆门）园林博览会近期在荆门成功举办，其景区已向市民开放，现面向全市中学生招募志愿者。假如你是李华，请用英文写一封自荐信。 要点： 1. 性格开朗，待人友善； 2. 面对困难，勇于挑战； 3. 对园艺兴趣浓厚，了解园林文化； 4. 有做志愿者的经历； 5. …… 要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 2. 语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范； 3. 要点齐全，内容可适当发挥； 4. 词数：80—100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：The Third (Jingmen) Garden Expo in Hubei Province湖北省第三届（荆门）园林博览会；garden culture园林文化；gardening园艺 Dear Sir/Madam, I’m Li Hua from Jingmen. Can I have the chance to work as a volunteer in The Third (Jingmen) Garden Expo in Hubei Province? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 5． （2022·四川遂宁·中考真题） 向世界传递中国文化，让世界倾听中国声音。近期，我市将面向全体中小学生举办“用英语讲好中国故事”的爱国主义主题展示活动。假如你是李华，你想参加此次活动，请根据下面的提示信息，向负责本次活动的英语老师Mr. Yang写一封80词左右的自荐信。 要点提示： 1.个人信息：姓名、年龄、班级、性格等； 2.个人优势： (1)读了很多关于中国历史的书，了解中国历史； (2)知道很多历史故事，并且擅长用英语讲述它们； (3) …… 3. 个人感想： (1)可以培养英语学习兴趣，提高口语表达能力； (2)让更多的人了解中国历史和文化，并为之感到自豪。 注意： 1.文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2.文章必须包含所给要点提示，要求语句通顺，行文连贯。 3.不可逐词翻译，可适当发挥。 4.文章中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 Dear Mr. Yang, I’m excited to hear that our school will hold the activity “telling Chinese stories in English”. I really want to take part in it. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I expect that you can give me this chance to show myself and I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua ( 7 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 高频话题01 个人情况 同步写作课讲义 个人情况类书面表达围绕“人与自我”：个人基本信息、兴趣爱好、能力特长、性格特点、生活经历（学习、交友、家庭、活动）、成长变化、未来愿望/计划等展开。是中考写作的基础话题和高频考点。 此类话题可涉及较多作文体裁，如记叙文讲述故事，说明文介绍人物变化，议论文表达看法，以及应用文（（如：申请信、自我介绍信）表达感谢等。展现健康向上的生活态度、兴趣爱好和未来规划。 （一）介绍自己 每一个人都有长处，都有精彩的一面。让我们发挥自己的长处，做精彩的自己。请以“I am the best”为题，根据以下写作要点和写作要求，写一篇英语短文。 1. 写作要点： 1）你的长处是什么； 2）表现在哪些方面； 3）未来如何突破自我。 2. 写作要求：1）文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 2）词数100左右。 I am the best ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ ( 写作框架设计 ) 写作指导 1.内容：谈论你自己最好的一面并举例论证。可选角度：性格、爱好或特长、生活习惯等； 2.人称：介绍自己，用第一人称； 3.时态：介绍自己的性格、兴趣等，用一般现在时；描述过去的事件体现自己的性格，用一般过去时；描述过去的事件对现在的影响，用现在完成时。 写作框架 【参考范文】 I am the best Different people have different advantages. I think my advantage is that I am very confident and I believe that I am the best.When I face difficulties in my study or fail an exam， I do not lose heart or feel sad. Instead， I work harder than before， and believe I will make progress next time. It is my confidence that makes me become better and better. What’s more， I don’t feel shy or nervous even if I am surrounded by other excellent people， because I believe there is always something that they can learn from me.In the future， I will work harder to become more confident and excellent. 【范文说明】 结构完整：遵循了经典的三段式（开头引入观点——中间论证观点——结尾总结升华）。开头段 (Introduction):点明自己的优势是自信，并相信“我是最好的”。主体段 (Body):提供两个具体方面论证自信的作用：方面一 (面对学习困难):考试失败不灰心，更努力学习，相信自己下次会进步。二 (面对优秀他人):在优秀人群中不害羞/紧张，相信他人也能从自己身上学到东西。结尾段 (Conclusion):总结自信让自己变得更好，并展望未来（更努力、更自信、更优秀）。 衔接与连贯 :使用了一些连接词 (Instead, What's more,because，In the future)，保证了句子的流畅度。 （2） 介绍他人 榜样是我们学习的楷模、努力的方向。学校校刊英语专栏以“介绍我心中的榜样”为主题向学生进行征文。请你根据写作要求，用英文写一篇短文，介绍你心中的榜样——李想，向专栏投稿。 写作要求：1)人物描写； 2)说明理由； 3)表达希望； 4)文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 5)词数100左右(开头已给出，不计入总词数)。 I am Li Hua. Today I would like to introduce Li Xiang, a model student in my mind.____________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【审题】 人称：______________ 时态：______________ 【列纲】 【参考范文】 I am Li Hua. Today I would like to introduce Li Xiang, a model student in my mind. He is very kind and caring. At school, he studies so hard that he often gets good scores in exams. However, I don't do well in studying. ①So he not only helps me with every subject but also tells me how to study in order to catch up with others. With Li Xiang's help, I made great progress and I thank him very much. ②I think I'm lucky to have such a good friend. From now on, I will do my best to study better and better. ③And I hope I will learn from Li Xiang to help others in trouble and show the act of kindness to others. 【加分亮点】 ①句使用not only… but also…引导的并列句及“特殊疑问词＋to do”作宾语，具体说明李想为何是自己的榜样，使文章句式更高级，内容更充实； ②句使用“sb. is ＋adj.＋to do”结构，阐明作者的观点，表达干净利落，使文章句式结构多样； ③句使用宾语从句及不定式短语作目的状语，表达作者希望向榜样学习，逻辑严密，内容更加连贯。 ( 词汇积累 ) 外貌特征 1. good­looking漂亮的 2. slim苗条的 3. attractive迷人的 4. handsome英俊的 5. strong强壮的 6. straight直的 7. medium height中等身高 8. look like看起来像 9. middle­aged中年的 性格品质 1. outgoing外向的 2. active活跃的 3. friendly友好的 4. honest诚实的 5. independent独立的 6. careful谨慎的 7. confident自信的 8. creative有创造力的 9. open­minded思想开明的 　　　　　　 10. be willing to help others乐于助人 11. try one's best to do sth.尽力做某事 　　 12. be ready to do sth.愿意做某事 13. be responsible for对……负责任 　　 14. take sth. seriously认真对待某事 15. overcome difficulties克服困难 　　　 16. be patient with对……有耐心 兴趣爱好 1. hobby爱好 2. favorite最喜爱的 3. prefer更喜欢 4. excellent极好的 5. experience经验；经历 6. knowledge知识 7. be interested in对……感兴趣 　　　　　　 8. be good at擅长于…… 9. in one's spare time在某人的空闲时间 　　 10. have… in common有相同特征 11. show/have a talent for对……有天赋 　　 12. be fond of喜欢…… 自我完善 I used to... stay alone独自呆着 be afraid of speaking in public害怕在公众场合说话 be unwilling to communicate with others 不愿意和别人交流 put off my homework till tomorrow把我的作业推迟到明天 But now I... be happy to do housework乐于做家务 get good grades取得好成绩 make more friends交更多朋友 have good communication with parents和父母有良好的沟通 get on/along well with classmates和同学相处愉快 ( 句式积累 ) 外貌特征 1. She’s of medium height， and she has long straight hair. 她中等身高，留着长直发。 2. He lives a simple life， always wearing jeans and sports shoes. 他生活很简朴，总是穿着牛仔裤和运动鞋。 3.He is outgoing and always full of energy. 他很外向，总是充满活力。 4. He used to be thin, but look how big and strong he is now！他过去很瘦。但看他现在是多么的高大和强壮！5.My good friend Mary who has beautiful big eyes is a lovely girl.我的好朋友玛丽有一双美丽的大眼睛，她是一个可爱的女孩儿。 性格品质 1. I'm shy so it's not easy for me to make friends.我很害羞，所以交朋友对我来说不容易。 2. She always wears a smile whenever she talks to us. 无论什么时候和我们讲话，她总是面带微笑。 3. David is friendly and he can get along well with his classmates. Whenever he meets his classmates and teachers, he greets them. 大卫很友好，他能和他的同学相处得很好。每当他遇到他的同学和老师，他都向他们打招呼。 4. Julia sets a good example to us because she works hard and never gives up.朱莉亚为我们树立了一个好榜样，因为她努力工作，从不放弃。 5. I admire him not only for what he has done to the country but also for his strong spirit and determination. 我钦佩他不仅因为他为国家所做的事，而且因为他坚强的意志和决心。 6. She is kind and helpful， for she is always ready to help others. She has a good sense of humour. She is able to make her class interesting and lively. 她和蔼且乐于助人，时刻准备着帮助别人。她很有幽默感，能让自己的课堂生动有趣。 7. He devoted all his time and energy to teaching and often worked late into night preparing for his lessons. 他把所有的时间和精力都投入到教学中，经常备课到深夜。 8. Although he is very strict with us， he shows us great concern. 虽然他对我们非常严厉，但是他也很关心我们。 特长兴趣爱好 1. I’m fond of playing basketball. When I play basketball， I have a strong feeling of satisfaction and it helps me forget all my worries. 我喜欢打篮球。打篮球时，我有一种强烈的满足感，它帮助我忘记自己所有的烦恼。 2. I like reading a lot. I am a fan of the book Harry Potter， which tells the story of Harry Potter who overcomes many difficulties with his friends. 我很喜欢阅读。我是《哈利·波特》这本书的书迷，它讲述了哈利·波特与朋友们一起克服许多困难的故事。 3. As a school player， I’m interested in ball games， especially basketball games. I often practise playing basketball with my friends and I’m confident in my ball skills. 作为一名校队球员，我对球类运动，特别是篮球运动，很感兴趣。我经常和朋友们一起练习打篮球，我对自己的球技很有信心。 事迹成就影响 1. My best friend helps to bring out the best in me. 我最好的朋友帮助我展现出我最好的一面。 2. I know she cares about me because she’s always there to listen. 3. You really require a lot of talent and hard work to succeed. Only a very small number of people make it to the top. 你真的需要很多天赋和努力工作才能成功。只有极少数人能出人头地。 ( 谚语积累 ) 1.A friend is like a mirror. 朋友就像一面镜子。 2.A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。 3.A friend is a second self. 朋友就是另一个自己。 4.There must be a use for my talent. 天生我材必有用。 5. A true friend reaches for your hand and touches your heart. 一个真正的朋友会向你伸出援手，并触动你的心灵。 ( 写作模板 ) (一) 介绍自己 I am a Junior High School student. I am good at ______________, especially ______________. I like ______________. I often ______________ in my spare time. I’m also ______________. If I can become a ______________, I will ______________, so that ______________. I will also ______________. I hope ______________ can agree with me to become a ______________. I believe I will ______________. (二)介绍他人 Now, I’ll introduce ______________ to you. ______________ is ______________ years old. He is in /from ______________. He has some hobbies. He likes ______________. He thinks it’s ______________. He is also good at ______________.______________ is very ______________ and he has (done) ______________. ______________ is so ______________ that ______________. Let’s learn from ______________. ( 考情分析 ) 近三年考情分析 年份 卷区 话题 2024年 江苏淮安 写一封自荐信 天津 介绍自己或他人的优秀品质 2023年 福建 写一封自荐信 湖南湘潭 写一封自荐信 浙江丽水 分享自己成长变化的经历及感悟 2022年 四川 介绍自己的姐姐的基本情况 ( 变式提升训练 ) 【期中真题链接】 （1） （24-25八年级上·四川乐山·期中）请根据下面的提示，写一篇介绍中国最优秀的乒乓球运动员孙颖莎的文章。80词左右。 提示： 1. 2000年出生于河北省石家庄； 2. 很小的时候，孙颖莎就对乒乓球产生了兴趣； 3. 她努力训练，2015年进入国家队 (national team)，她赢得了许多金牌 (gold medals)，她的教练对她非常满意； 4. 你的观点：向她学习，…… Hello, everyone! Today I want to introduce a young and talented table tennis player, she is Sun Yingsha. She is ___________________________________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】 Hello, everyone! Today I want to introduce a young and talented table tennis player, r, she is Sun Yingsha. She is one of the best table tennis players. She was born in 2000 in Shijiazhuang, Hebei Province. When she was very young, Sun Yingsha was interested in table tennis. She trained hard and in 2015, she joined the national team. She won many gold medals. Her coach is very pleased with her. From Sun Yingsha’s story, we can learn that with hard work, we can be a successful man. Let’s learn from her and we should try our best to do everything. Don’t give up any time. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍孙颖莎的个人基本信息； 第二步，介绍孙颖莎的努力和成就； 第三步，表达个人看法。 [亮点词汇] ①talented有天赋的 ②be interested in对……感兴趣 ③try one’s best to do尽力去做某事 [高分句型] ①When she was very young, Sun Yingsha was interested in table tennis.（when引导时间状语从句） ②From Sun Yingsha’s story, we can learn that with hard work, we can be a successful man.（that引导宾语从句） （2） （24-25八年级上·四川宜宾·期中）请你根据下面表格所提供的信息，写一篇英语短文介绍你和你的好朋友Julia的相同之处和不同之处。 人物 相同点 不同点 Julia 1.喜欢运动； 2.学习努力，各门功课都学得好； 3.喜欢阅读，通常周末一起去图书馆。 1.比我高得多，更外向； 2.更擅长唱歌、跳舞； 3.喜欢听音乐 I 1.喜欢帮忙做家务 2.喜欢看电影 要求：1.词数60-80； 2.包含表格所有信息，可适当增加细节； 3.开头已写好，不计入总词数。 Julia is my best friend. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】 Julia is my best friend. In some ways, we are the same. Both of us like sports. We are both hard-working and good at our subjects. We both like reading, and we usually go to the library together on weekends. But in some ways we are different. She is taller and more outgoing than me. She is better at singing and dancing. She likes listening to music. For me, I like helping with housework. And I love seeing movies. In fact, I don’t really care if my friends are the same as me or different from me. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：按照表格中所列的写作要点进行写作，注意不要遗漏。可适当添加细节，突出重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍我和Julia的相同点； 第二步，介绍不同点； 第三步，表达作者对朋友的观点。 [亮点词汇] ①in some ways在某些方面 ②like doing sth.爱好做某事 ③the same as与……一样 [高分句型] ①She is taller and more outgoing than me. (形容词比较级句型) ②In fact, I don’t really care if my friends are the same as me or different from me. (if引导宾语从句) （3） （24-25八年级上·四川眉山·期中）请根据下列提示写一篇短文介绍你的好朋友Tom。 1. 他小时候是一个安静的男孩，但现在比我还外向。 2. 在学校里，他学习最努力；周末在家，他喜欢看卡通片。 3. 他喜欢锻炼，每周与朋友踢三到四次足球。 4. 他的梦想：①将来想要当一名医生；②打算学医药学；③打算去上海工作； ④打算先读完高中和大学。 注意：1.词数100左右； 2.可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3.开头已为你写好，不计入总词数。 Good friends are like sunshine. They brighten our life. I have a good friend called Tom. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________【参考范文】 Good friends are like sunshine. They brighten our life. I have a good friend called Tom. He was quiet when he was young. But now he is more outgoing than me. He works the hardest in school and he is good at all the subjects. On weekends, he likes watching cartoons at home. He is interested in sports and he plays soccer with his friends three or four times a week. He plans to study medicine in college after finishing high school. His dream is to become a doctor in the future, and he hopes to work in Shanghai. This is my friend. I hope he can make his dream come true one day. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：材料所给内容需完整表达，以第三人称叙述为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用文章已给开头，点明文章主旨； 第二步，介绍Tom的性格、学习情况、爱好等； 第三步，介绍Tom的梦想； 第四步，表达祝愿，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①be good at擅长 ②be interested in对……感兴趣 ③come true实现；成真 [高分句型] ①He was quiet when he was young.（时间状语从句） ②I hope he can make his dream come true one day.（宾语从句） （4） （24-25八年级上·浙江台州·期中）假设你叫李俊，你的美国笔友David想要在中国结交更多的笔友。你通过电子邮件，把你的同学王明介绍给他。王明情况见下表： 年    龄 14 外    貌 方脸，大眼睛，短发，高个子； 个    性 诚实，幽默，替朋友保守秘密，从不说他人坏话； 爱    好 痴迷于DIY，经常在周末自己动手制作东西； 理    想 当一名校长 (headmaster)，让学生有更多的时间玩耍； 寒假计划 ……(补充不少于两点。) 要求：1. 注意文章条理，语句通顺； 2. 词数80-100词，邮件的开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 Dear David, How are you? I’m writing to introduce my classmate Wang Ming to you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you can make friends with him as soon as possible. Best wishes! Yours, Li Jun 【参考范文】 Dear David, How are you? I’m writing to introduce my classmate Wang Ming to you. He is a boy of 14. He is tall with a square face, big eyes and short hair. Everyone likes his humor and honesty. He gets along well with his friends because he always keeps secrets for them. Besides, he never says anything bad about others. Because he doesn’t think it is right to do so. Guess what his hobby is? He is crazy about DIY, he often spends most of the time on weekends in hand making or mending something by himself. He thinks it’s very cool. Although he is young, he has a dream of being a headmaster, he plans to make some changes of school rules for students. For example, he will let students have more time to play instead of studying. With the Sping Festival coming, he will plan to pay a visit to Beijing with his two classmates and go back to his hometown to visit his grandparents. I hope you can make friends with him as soon as possible.   Best wishes! Yours,   Li Jun [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③要点：写作时应从外形、性格、兴趣爱好等方面来介绍，注意不要遗漏信息，语句应通顺连贯有逻辑。 [写作步骤] 第一步，问好。给对方介绍新朋友； 第二步，从这位新朋友的年龄、外形、性格、兴趣爱好和梦想等方面来介绍这位新朋友； 第三步，书写结语。介绍后询问对方的看法，并期待对方的回复。 [亮点词汇] ①get along well with sb.与……友好相处 ②be crazy about sth.对……痴迷 ③spend some time in doing sth. 花……时间做某事 [高分句型] ①He gets along well with his friends because he always keeps secrets for them. (because引导的原因状语从句） ②Although he is young, he has a dream of being a headmaster, he plans to make some changes of school rules for students. (although引导的让步状语从句） （5） （24-25八年级上·浙江绍兴·期中）假如你是李华，你在旅途中认识了一个新朋友，你想将它介绍给美国笔友Harry，请从外貌、爱好和性格等方面介绍你们的相似点和差异，让Harry更多地了解你们。 注意： （1）短文必须包括以上所有要点，可适当发挥，使短文连贯、通顺； （2）词数：80。文章的标题和开头已给出，不计入总词数。 （3）不得出现真实个人信息（人名、校名等） Li  Hua Jane Tall Tall Wear glasses Wear glasses Like baseball Like baseball, play better Shy and quiet Outgoing A good listener Talk a lot Work hard ... Dear Harry, I made a new friend when traveling in Hong Kong. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Harry, I made a new friend when traveling in Hong Kong. Her name is Jane. We have some similarities and differences. Both of us are tall and wear glasses. We enjoy playing baseball, but she plays much better than me. In terms of personality, I am shy and quiet, but Jane is very outgoing. However, we both have good qualities. I am a good listener, and she loves talking a lot. Besides, we are both hard-working. I think you would like her too! Looking forward to your reply.          Yours,           Li Hua [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中外貌、爱好和性格等方面的相似点和差异的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“我在香港旅行时交了一个新朋友”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“外貌、爱好和性格”几个方面重点介绍； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①In terms of在……方面 ②Both of us我们都 [高分句型] I am a good listener, and she loves talking a lot.（and连接的并列句） （6） （24-25八年级上·四川遂宁·期中）今天网上讨论的主题是“My best friend and I”。假如你是李华，你有一个最好的朋友Lucy，请根据表格所提供的信息进行跟帖，对你和Lucy情况做一个简单的描述。 要求： 外貌 性格 运动 最爱的运动员 (描述原因) 最擅长的才艺 Li Hua 高 严肃的；安静的 每周打两次网球 郑钦文（最刻苦） 唱歌 Lucy 矮瘦 善良的；外向的 每周游三次泳 潘展乐（最有趣） 跳舞 1. 短文应包含要求的所有信息，使用比较级和最高级。 2. 文中不能出现真实的人名信息。 3. 词数100词左右。（标题已给出，不计入总词数） My best friend and I ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 My best friend and I My best friend and I are quite different yet share some interests. My name is Li Hua, and I am taller and more serious than my best friend Lucy. She is shorter and thinner, and she’s known for being kind and outgoing. Every week, I play tennis twice because I enjoy staying active. Lucy, on the other hand, loves swimming and goes to the pool three times a week. In terms of sports idols, my favorite athlete is Zheng Qinwen because she is the most hardworking player I know, while Lucy admires Pan Zhanle for his sense of humor. As for our talents, I am best at singing, whereas Lucy excels in dancing. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，应注意不要遗漏题干中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，概述与好朋友有不同点也有共同点； 第二步，根据题干表格中的要点，详细介绍外貌、性格、运动以及最喜爱的运动员的相关信息； [亮点词汇] ①as for至于 ②three times a week一周三次 ③excel in擅长 [高分句型] ①In terms of sports idols, my favorite athlete is Zheng Qinwen because she is the most hardworking player I know, while Lucy admires Pan Zhanle for his sense of humor.（原因状语从句） ②She is shorter and thinner, and she’s known for being kind and outgoing.（and连接并列句） （7） （24-25八年级上·四川成都·期中）上个月，你作为交换生，去美国友好学校进行为期3个月的学习。请给你的父母写一封邮件告知你在美国的生活近况，邮件应包含下图所有要点信息。 注意： 1. 邮件内容须包含图中的所有要点； 2. 须适当使用比较级、最高级； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名及学校名称； 4. 词数90左右。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dear Mom and Dad,   I’m enjoying my time here in the U.S. as an exchange student. The people here are the friendliest I’ve met, especially Tom, who is quieter than I am. But I play tennis better than he does. As for study, both of us work equally hard. I often have dinner at Lucy’s, which has the best taste and service, although the price is a little higher. My favorite TV show here is comedy. It’s the funniest and most relaxing show, helping me improve my English and learn about American culture. I miss you a lot. I’m looking forward to sharing more with you when I come back. Love you, your son [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：注意短文应包含图示所有信息，适当使用比较级和最高级，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己作为交换生在美国的感受； 第二步，具体介绍身边人的性格、运动、学习和自己的对比，以及常去的餐厅，包括价格、味道和服务； 第三步，介绍最喜欢的电视节目类型及原因； 第四步，书写结语，表达对于父母的思念。 [亮点词汇] ①as for至于 ②learn about了解 ③look forward to doing sth.期待做某事 [高分句型] ①The people here are the friendliest I’ve met, especially Tom, who is quieter than I am.（who引导的定语从句） ②I often have dinner at Lucy’s, which has the best taste and service, although the price is a little higher.（which引导的定语从句；although引导的让步状语从句） （8） （24-25八年级上·四川成都·期中）下列是关于你的新同学Tom的相关信息。请根据图示内容介绍一下Tom。 要求： 1. 文章应包含图示所有信息； 2. 文章应适当使用比较级和最高级； 3. 文章应结构完整、语句通顺、句式多样； 4. 词数要求：100词左右 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Tom is my new classmate. Let me introduce him to you. He is taller than many classmates and has a friendlier personality. His best friend is Jack. They both enjoy sports, but Tom likes basketball better. Tom loves documentaries the most. He often reads books in his spare time. The library is his favorite place in school because it’s the quietest and has the richest collection of books. Last summer, he visited Malaysia and had an unforgettable time. He did a lot of interesting things there like trying local food and visiting beautiful scenery.   All in all, we all like him a lot. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏信息，适当增加细节。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出话题——介绍新同学Tom； 第二步，介绍他的外貌，性格，空闲时间的活动，在学校最喜欢的地方和原因，去年暑假游玩的地方和活动等； 第三步，最后介绍大家对他的感觉。 [亮点词汇] ①in his spare time在他的空闲时间 ②an unforgettable time一段难忘的时光 ③All in all总之 [高分句型] ①The library is his favorite place in school because it’s the quietest and has the richest collection of books. (because引导的原因状语从句) ②He is taller than many classmates and has a friendlier personality. (比较级用法) （9） （24-25八年级上·四川德阳·期中）假如Tom是你最好的朋友，以“My Best Friend”为题，根据表格内容介绍你的好朋友。 个人信息 Tom，14岁，比我高一点，外向一点，和我一样学习努力。 爱好 比我更擅长运动，每周最少运动四次；喜欢阅读，最喜欢看有关历史的书。 生活习惯 拥有健康的生活习惯；喜欢蔬菜、水果和牛奶；几乎不吃垃圾食品。 学校表现 最喜欢英语学科，认为英语学科比数学简单；总是取得好成绩，并帮助我学习英语。 写作要点： 1. 80词左右 (标题和结尾已给出，不计入总词数) ； 2. 内容合理，要点齐全，句子和文章结构完整，书写规范； 3. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 4. 不能出现自己的真实信息。 My Best Friend ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I think a good friend is someone who cares you and helps you grow. 【参考范文】 My Best Friend Tom is my best friend. He is 14 years old and a bit taller than me. He is more outgoing and studies as hard as I do. He is better at sports than I am and exercises at least four times a week. He enjoys reading, especially books about history. Tom has healthy living habits. He likes vegetables, fruits, and milk, and hardly eats junk food. His favorite subject is English because he thinks it’s easier than math. He always gets good grades and helps me with my English. I think a good friend is someone who cares you and helps you grow. [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求全部涵盖，并适当扩展。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍Tom的个人信息及性格特点； 第二步，描述Tom的兴趣和生活习惯； 第三步，总结Tom在学校的表现和个人观点。 [亮点词汇] ①be better at 更擅长 ②at least 至少 ③healthy living habits 健康的生活习惯 [高分句型] His favorite subject is English because he thinks it’s easier than math.（原因状语从句，宾语从句） 【中考真题链接】 1． （2025·四川泸州·中考真题） 暑期将至，一批来自姊妹学校的外国学生将到你校参观交流，他们想了解中国的传统节日。为此，你校英语社团面向全校征集志愿者。假如你是李华，请根据下图内容，用英语给社团负责人王老师写一封自荐信。 表明意愿 要求：1．语句通顺，意思连贯，语法正确，书写规范； 2．必须包含所给提示，并做适当发挥； 3．文中不得出现真实人名、校名或地名； 4．词数100左右。 Dear Mr Wang, ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours truly, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Mr Wang, I’m Li Hua. I’m really willing to be a volunteer to assist the foreign students from our sister school and introduce Chinese traditional festivals to them. I have several advantages. Firstly, I’m good at communicating and my English is fluent, which helps me explain festival stories and customs clearly. Moreover, I have a deep understanding of festivals like the Spring Festival and Mid-Autumn Festival. I can share interesting traditions, such as making dumplings during the Spring Festival and admiring the moon at Mid-Autumn Festival. I sincerely hope to become one of the volunteers. It would be a precious opportunity for me to spread Chinese culture and make foreign friends better understand our traditions. Looking forward to your reply. Yours truly, Li  Hua [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文； ②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生注意不要遗漏要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇表明自己的意愿； 第二步，介绍自己的优势； 第三步，书写结语，表达期望。 [亮点词汇] ①be willing to do sth. 愿意做某事 ②introduce sth. to sb. 向某人介绍某物 ③have a deep understanding of sth. 对某事有很深入的了解 ④such as例如 [高分句型] ①Firstly, I’m good at communicating and my English is fluent, which helps me explain festival stories and customs clearly.  （which引导的定语从句） 2． （2022·四川眉山·中考真题） 本周日上午，一些外国学生将到三苏祠参观，现三苏祠急需招募十名志愿者。假定你是李华，请写一封电子邮件推荐自己。要点包括： 1. 自荐目的：成为志愿者； 2. 个人信息：身份，年龄，性格（外向、善于与人相处），本周日上午有空； 3. 个人优势：擅长英语，……； 4. 表达期望：获得机会并能做好，请本周五前回复。 注意： 1. 词数100左右（开头已给出，不计入总词数）； 2. 可适当发挥，以使行文连贯； 3. 文中不能出现真实姓名、学校等信息。 参考词汇：三苏祠Sansu Temple Dear Sir/Madam, I am glad to see your notice Volunteers Wanted. Some foreign students… ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Sir/Madam, I am glad to see your notice Volunteers Wanted. Some foreign students will visit Sansu Temple this Sunday morning. I’m willing to be a volunteer. Let me introduce myself to you. I’m a middle school student aged 15. I’m an outgoing girl/boy who can always get on well with others. As for the time, I will be available this Sunday morning. My oral English is so excellent that I have no difficulty communicating with foreign friends. More importantly, I know a lot about Sansu culture. I’m sure I can help them have a better understanding of it. I believe I can manage it if you give me a chance. Please reply to me by Friday!（103 words） Yours, Li Hua [总体分析] 1.题干解读：本文是一篇邮件作文。要求根据提示内容，写封邮件自荐成为三苏祠的志愿者，注意要点齐全，可适当发挥。 2.写作指导：写作时要以第一人称来介绍，时态用一般现在时。作文要分别介绍自荐的目的，自己的信息和优势，以及自己的期望。要保证语言连贯，无语法和拼写错误。 3．（2023·湖南湘潭·中考真题） 湘潭市博物馆正在为“讲好湘潭故事，传播本土文化”的大型宣传活动招募英语讲解员。假设你是李华，你想参加此次活动，请根据以下提示用英语向活动负责人写一封自荐信。 要点提示： （1）个人基本情况（姓名、年龄等）； （2）自荐的原因（性格、特长等）； （3）对活动的认知（感想或意义等）。 注意：（1）字数在80词左右，可适当发挥（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）； （2）不能出现可能透露真实身份的任何信息（如校名，个人姓名等）。 Dear Sir/Madam, I’d like to be a volunteer in this “Telling Xiangtan Stories, Spreading Local Culture” activity. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Sir/Madam, I’d like to be a volunteer in this “Telling Xiangtan Stories, Spreading Local Culture” activity. My name is Li Hua. I am 14 years old. I’m such an outgoing boy that it’s easy for me to communicate with others. In addition, I’ve got varied hobbies, such as reading books, doing sports and performing the cross talk. I am interested in Chinese traditional culture. I often read books about them. And I also take part in many activities like this. I think this activity is very meaningful. It can make more people learn about our local culture. It can help to promote cultural exchanges and development. If I am chosen to be a member of this activity, I will try my best to do it. I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours Li Hua [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开头已给出，表达想成为一名志愿者的意愿； 第二步，介绍自己的个人情况，自荐原因以及对活动的认知； 第三步，期待对方的回信。 [亮点词汇] ①in addition另外 ②be interested in对……感兴趣 ③take part in参加 [高分句型] ①I’m such an outgoing boy that it’s easy for me to communicate with others.（such…that引导结果状语从句） ②If I am chosen to be a member of this activity, I will try my best to do it.（if引导条件状语从句） 4.（2022·湖北荆门·中考真题） 湖北省第三届（荆门）园林博览会近期在荆门成功举办，其景区已向市民开放，现面向全市中学生招募志愿者。假如你是李华，请用英文写一封自荐信。 要点： 1. 性格开朗，待人友善； 2. 面对困难，勇于挑战； 3. 对园艺兴趣浓厚，了解园林文化； 4. 有做志愿者的经历； 5. …… 要求： 1. 文中不得出现真实的人名和校名； 2. 语言通顺，条理清楚，书写规范； 3. 要点齐全，内容可适当发挥； 4. 词数：80—100左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 参考词汇：The Third (Jingmen) Garden Expo in Hubei Province湖北省第三届（荆门）园林博览会；garden culture园林文化；gardening园艺 Dear Sir/Madam, I’m Li Hua from Jingmen. Can I have the chance to work as a volunteer in The Third (Jingmen) Garden Expo in Hubei Province? ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Sir/Madam, I’m Li Hua from Jingmen. Can I have the chance to work as a volunteer in The Third (Jingmen) Garden Expo in Hubei Province? As a volunteer, not only can I help people in need, but also I can learn a lot from the experience. Outgoing and energetic, I get on well with others. When facing challenges in life, I always choose to deal with them bravely instead of staying behind. Gardening is exactly what I’m fond of and I have a good knowledge of different garden cultures which are quite helpful for the job. Last but not least, my experience of being a volunteer in the Flower Expo last year won high praise from others. I hope to work as a volunteer in The Third (Jingmen) Garden Expo in Hubei Province so as to help people know more about the different garden cultures in Hubei Province. Looking forward to your early reply. Yours, Li Hua [总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇书信作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求根据提示内容写一封自荐信介绍自己的情况，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，申请做第三届（荆门）园林博览会的志愿者； 第二步，介绍自己的相关情况和优势； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①get on well with与……相处融洽 ②deal with处理 ③be fond of喜欢 ④Last but not least最后但同样重要的 [高分句型] ①As a volunteer, not only can I help people in need, but also I can learn a lot from the experience.（not only...but also...连接并列句） ②Gardening is exactly what I’m fond of and I have a good knowledge of different garden cultures which are quite helpful for the job.（what引导的表语从句和which引导的定语从句） 5． （2022·四川遂宁·中考真题） 向世界传递中国文化，让世界倾听中国声音。近期，我市将面向全体中小学生举办“用英语讲好中国故事”的爱国主义主题展示活动。假如你是李华，你想参加此次活动，请根据下面的提示信息，向负责本次活动的英语老师Mr. Yang写一封80词左右的自荐信。 要点提示： 1.个人信息：姓名、年龄、班级、性格等； 2.个人优势： (1)读了很多关于中国历史的书，了解中国历史； (2)知道很多历史故事，并且擅长用英语讲述它们； (3) …… 3. 个人感想： (1)可以培养英语学习兴趣，提高口语表达能力； (2)让更多的人了解中国历史和文化，并为之感到自豪。 注意： 1.文章开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数。 2.文章必须包含所给要点提示，要求语句通顺，行文连贯。 3.不可逐词翻译，可适当发挥。 4.文章中不得出现真实的人名、校名和地名。 Dear Mr. Yang, I’m excited to hear that our school will hold the activity “telling Chinese stories in English”. I really want to take part in it. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I expect that you can give me this chance to show myself and I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua 【参考范文】 Dear Mr Yang, I’ m excited to hear that our school will hold the activity “telling Chinese stories in English”. I really want to take part in it. It’s my great honor to introduce myself. I’m a boy from Class One, Grade Eight. My name is Li Hua and I’m 14 years old. I’m an outgoing boy. I have many hobbies, especially reading. I have read lots of classics on Chinese history so I’m familiar with Chinese history and culture. And I know plenty of traditional folk stories, like How Yi Shoots the Suns, Yu Gong Moves a Mountain and so on. I can even tell them in English. And I can get a strong feeling of satisfaction when I see the look of joy on their faces while my classmates are listening to me. In a word, this activity is meaningful. We can not only create an interest of learning English but also improve our spoken English through the activity. As a Chinese student, it’s our duty to make more people know about our history and culture! I’m proud of it! Only in this way can I make it! I expect that you can give me this chance to show myself and I’m looking forward to your reply. Yours, Li Hua [总体分析] 1.题干解读：本文主要是写一封自荐信，根据题干中的提示内容进行写作，可适当增加细节。 2.写作指导：本文以一般现在时和第一人称为主。第一段和最后一段已给出；第二段主要介绍自己的个人信息和个人优势；第三段讲述自己的个人感想。写作时运用不同的句式和短语使文章层次清晰、逻辑清楚，做到无单词拼写和语法错误。 ( 7 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$