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Grandma Agnes is ninety-nine years old and still live in the same house a he's lived in for more than sixty years. She was one of thirteen children raised on a farm. And now. she is rather set in her ways,
For twelve years, Grandma ages enjoyed the c or up any of her dog, Snoopy. The black and white spotted must was a constant presence in her home and her yard. During the time that she had Snoopy, Grandma Agnes started showing signs of dementia. My family worked together to keep her living independently but safe.
It was difficult for my dad the day he pulled the battery from her car to keep her from using her still valid driver's license, Every visit after that day, Grandma Agnes would insist that he buy her a new car battery because hers was dead again. Dad nodded and agreed to do it, knowing that the conversation would soon be forgotten.
Three years ago. Snoopy passed away, My dad. Aunt Carol and Uncle Ed thought of ways to ensure that Grandma Agnes would know that Snoopy was gone, They had burial service in the back yard with Grandma. Uncle Ed printed a picture of Snoopy with “Rest in Peace” written across the bottom and stuck it to the refrigerator, But on the daily visits. Grandma Agnes still asked about Snoopy, She accused the neighbors of taking her dog because she was sure that she heard bin barking from their yard.
Having a family member with dementia is heartbreaking and trying. For every visit I've made in the past five years, my dad has made a point to tell me that she probably won't remember who I am nor that my kids are her great grandchildren, I've sat through conversations where we patiently repeated answers to questions that were answered a few moment sago. Grandma Agnes is still there. and she's still her stubborn self. but she doesn't grasp the world around her, And yet she insists on living independently and asking about Snoopy constantly.
注意: 1.续写词数应为150左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答.
A few months ago, Uncle Ed came up with good idea and bought a robotic dog for Grandma Ages. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________
Everyone in our family is pleased that Grandma Agnes has been so kind to Snoopy.
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文本分析
1.角色:_____________________________
2.视角:第________人称
3.时空线:Grandma 的生活背景→Snoopy 去世→家人的应对→______→家人因奶奶的态度欣慰
4. 线索梳理
Why is Grandma Agnes important to the family? :
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Why did the family remove Grandma's car battery? :
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What happened after Snoopy's death? :
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Why does Grandma keep asking about Snoopy? :
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5.情节线:
九十九岁的奶奶 Agnes 患有痴呆症,与爱犬 Snoopy 相伴十二年。Snoopy 去世后,家人通过葬礼、贴照片等方式让她接受现实,但她仍不断询问狗的下落。→(续写)叔叔 Ed 买了机器狗给奶奶→_____________________________。
6.情感线:
Grandma:依赖 Snoopy→______;家人:担忧→______→(续写)______
7. 综合以上信息,请用 3-4 句话概括文
中文:
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英文:
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8.句式积累
定语从句:___________________________________
宾语从句:___________________________________
with 伴随状语:___________________________________
主题归类:本文属于 “人与自我 / 他人” 中的_____________________________
9.情节构造逻辑
第一段提示句:A few months ago, Uncle Ed came up with a good idea and bought a robotic dog for Grandma Agnes.
· 衔接句 1:对 “买机器狗” 的结果提问 → How did Grandma react to the robotic dog?
· 过渡推演:反应→______?______→具体行为
· 衔接句 2:对 “奶奶的态度” 提问 → What does Grandma do with the robotic dog daily?
第二段提示句:Everyone in our family is pleased that Grandma Agnes has been so kind to Snoopy.
· 衔接句 3:对 “家人的欣慰” 提问 → How do family members express their feelings?
· 过渡推演:感受→______?______→主题升华
· 主题:___________________________________
10.段落续写框架(仅结构,有内容)
第一段:
A few months ago, Uncle Ed... → ① Grandma's initial reaction (眼神 / 表情) → ② Her daily actions with the robotic dog (模仿过去的行为) → ③ The change in her daily life (与 “狗” 互动的场景);
英文:____________________________________________________________
第二段:
Everyone... is pleased... → ④ Family members' comments (爸爸 / 阿姨的感慨) → ⑤ Their understanding of Grandma's behavior → ⑥ The family's decision for the future;
英文:____________________________________________________________
参考答案
1.角色:奶奶 Agnes、爸爸、叔叔 Ed、阿姨 Carol、“我”
2.视角:第三人称
3.时空线:奶奶 Agnes 的生活背景及现状→Snoopy 去世→奶奶不断询问 Snoopy→(续写)几个月前叔叔 Ed 买了机器狗给奶奶→大家因奶奶对 “史努比” 的态度感到开心
4. 线索:
Why is Grandma Agnes special? :She is ninety - nine years old and has lived in the same house for over sixty years, and she has dementia.
Why was Snoopy important to Grandma Agnes? :She enjoyed the company of Snoopy for twelve years, and Snoopy was a constant presence in her life.
What did the family do to help Grandma Agnes after Snoopy's death? :They had a burial service, put a "Rest in Peace" picture on the refrigerator, but Grandma still asked about Snoopy.
Why is it difficult for the family to deal with Grandma Agnes? :She has dementia, doesn't remember things, and insists on living independently while constantly asking about Snoopy.
5.情节线:九十九岁且患有痴呆症的奶奶 Agnes 与相伴十二年的爱犬 Snoopy 感情深厚,Snoopy 去世后,家人努力让奶奶接受现实却无果,奶奶仍不断询问 Snoopy 下落 。→(续写)几个月前叔叔 Ed 买了机器狗给奶奶→大家因奶奶对 “史努比” 的态度感到开心。
6.情感线:奶奶:依赖→伤心;家人:担忧→无奈→(续写)欣慰
7. 综合以上信息,请用 3-4 句话概括文章大意。
中文:九十九岁患有痴呆症的奶奶 Agnes 与爱犬 Snoopy 相伴十二年,Snoopy 去世后,尽管家人采取多种方式让奶奶接受现实,但奶奶仍不断询问它的下落。几个月前叔叔 Ed 买了机器狗给奶奶,大家期待奶奶的反应 。
英文:Ninety - nine - year - old Grandma Agnes, who suffers from dementia, had a deep bond with her dog Snoopy for twelve years. After Snoopy passed away, the family tried various ways to help Grandma accept the fact, but she still constantly asked about Snoopy. A few months ago, Uncle Ed bought a robotic dog for Grandma, and the family awaits her reaction.
8. 句式:
同位语从句:She was one of thirteen children raised on a farm.(“one of thirteen children” 说明她的身份)
定语从句:Grandma Agnes is ninety - nine years old and still lives in the same house that she's lived in for more than sixty years.
宾语从句:She accused the neighbors of taking her dog because she was sure that she heard him barking from their yard.
非谓语:They had a burial service in the back yard with Grandma, Uncle Ed printing a picture of Snoopy with “Rest in Peace” written across the bottom and sticking it to the refrigerator.
with 伴随状语:During the time that she had Snoopy, Grandma Agnes started showing signs of dementia with Snoopy being a constant presence in her home and her yard.
本文属于人与自我 / 他人:人与他人
9.情节构造
第一段提示句:A few months ago, Uncle Ed came up with good idea and bought a robotic dog for Grandma Ages.
衔接句 1——— 对买了机器狗提问 “奶奶看到机器狗的反应?”:How did Grandma Agnes react when she saw the robotic dog?
过渡句推演:衔接 1→______?_←衔接 2
衔接句 2——— 对大家感到开心提问 “奶奶具体对机器狗做了什么?”:What exactly did Grandma Agnes do with the robotic dog?
第二段提示句:Everyone in our family is pleased that Grandma Agnes has been so kind to Snoopy.
衔接 3——— 对家人感到开心提问 “家人之间有怎样的交流?”:What kind of conversations did the family have about Grandma's attitude towards the robotic dog?
过渡句推演:衔接 3→?_____←主题
主题:关爱患有痴呆症的亲人,用创新方式给予温暖
10.段落续写框架(有结构,有内容)
第一段:几个月前,叔叔 Ed 想出个好主意,给奶奶 Agnes 买了一只机器狗。→①奶奶看到机器狗时,眼中闪过熟悉的光芒,脸上露出久违的笑容 。→②她轻轻抱起机器狗,像从前抚摸 Snoopy 一样,嘴里还喃喃自语 。→③从那以后,她经常带着 “史努比” 在院子里散步,仿佛回到了过去 ;
英文:A few months ago, Uncle Ed came up with a good idea and bought a robotic dog for Grandma Agnes. When Grandma saw the robotic dog, a familiar light flashed in her eyes and a long - lost smile appeared on her face. She gently picked up the robotic dog and stroked it just like she used to stroke Snoopy, murmuring to herself. Since then, she often took "Snoopy" for walks in the yard, as if she had returned to the past.
第二段:“你当时明明知道,却什么都没说?” 我震惊了。→④爸爸感慨道,这只机器狗真的给奶奶带来了快乐 。→⑤阿姨 Carol 说,看到奶奶恢复一些活力,一切努力都值得了 。→⑥大家决定以后多给奶奶创造这样的温暖时刻,让爱一直陪伴着她 。
英文:Everyone in our family is pleased that Grandma Agnes has been so kind to Snoopy. Dad sighed that the robotic dog had really brought joy to Grandma. Aunt Carol said that seeing Grandma regain some vitality made all the efforts worthwhile. The family decided to create more such warm moments for Grandma in the future, letting love accompany her all the time.
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