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十三、征文投稿
征文投稿类文章一般是就某个特定主题进行论述和描写,以议论文和记叙文居多,具体写作结构如下:
1.开头句
(1)Recently we did a survey about whether...or not.最近我们做了一个关于是否……的调查。
(2)An article in the newspaper caught my attention.报纸上的一篇文章引起了我的注意。
(3)I want to talk about...in your column.我想在你的专栏里谈谈有关……
2.中间句
(1)Nowadays,with the improvement of the standard of living,an increasing number of...如今,随着生活水平的提高,越来越多的……
(2)It has been...years since...was founded and it has been accompanying me all through my childhood.自从……成立以来已经……年了,它一直陪伴着我度过了我的整个童年。
(3)In my spare time,I often...在业余时间,我经常……
3.结尾句
(1)I do expect...can have a promising future.我真的希望……能有一个光明的未来。
(2)As far as I am concerned,students should do more...so that they can develop their...skills.
在我看来,学生们应该多……来发展他们的……技能。
(2023·全国乙卷)学校英文报组织同学们分享自己在假期中学到的新技能,请你以此为主题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括:
1.简要描述;
2.体验和感受。
注意:
1.写作词数100左右;
2.题目已为你写好。
满分佳作
名师点评
Learning a New Skill
The new skill I acquired was skating.The process is challenging but productive.
Initially,on watching the Winter Olympics Games in Beijing,I became enthusiastic about skating.From then on,I was determined to master this fascinating sport.However,at the very beginning,when I stepped on the ice,I stumbled over myself.Hard as I strove,I still fell over again and again.The moment I thought of the athletes on the field,I was inspired by their powerful spirit.Eventually,my persistence and painstaking efforts paid off.I can skate freely all by myself.
From the learning experience,I fully understand that only by diligently practicing can we overcome many kinds of difficulties.And eventually,we can have a good command of what we desire to learn.
1.文章开篇引出自己学习的一项新技能。中间介绍学习新技能的经历。最后写了自己的体验感悟。
2.文章使用了一些高级词汇,如become enthusiastic about,fascinating,stumble over,persistence,painstaking,pay off,have a good command of等。还使用了一些高级句式,如Hard as I strove,I still fell over again and again.倒装表达。
3.文章最后介绍掌握这一技能的意义,使用了部分倒装结构:only by diligently practicing can we...。
(2025·杭州二模)本学期你校开设了每周一节的英语文学阅读课,请你就此写一篇短文向学校英文报 “Student Voice”栏目投稿,内容包括:
1.课程介绍(目的、内容、上课方式等);
2.你的收获。
注意:
1.写作词数80左右;
2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。
English Literature Reading Class Opens a New World
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English Literature Reading Class Opens a New World
I'm excited to share my experience with the weekly English Literature Reading class.
Starting this semester, the class is designed specifically for us to enhance our English proficiency.Each week this class unfolds with a new literary masterpiece ranging from classic novels to contemporary poetry.Through interactive discussions, group readings, and insightful analysis, we are able to explore the depths of literary.Not only does literature reading give me great enjoyment, but I've honed critical thinking skills.
Moreover, the class has sparked a newfound passion for literature within me, igniting my desire to explore further in the vast world of English letters.It has undoubtedly been a highlight of this academic semester.
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