2025年中考英语作文考前冲刺课件

作文一 Proverbs 1. East or west, home is best. 2. Rest is the best medicine. 3. A quiet room is a mind's best friend. 4. Shared joy is double joy. 5. All work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. 6. Every outing writes a new memory. 休息是最好的良药。 金窝银窝不如自己的草窝。 安静的房间是心灵挚友 分享的快乐是双倍的快乐。 每次外出都书写新回忆 只学习不玩耍，聪明孩子也变傻。 表达观点： ①In my opinion,nothing is better than.. ②From my point of view,I prefer doing ... to .... ③As far as I am concerned, I consider ... as a good option ... . ④I prefer staying at home, because 说明理由： ①The reason why....is that.... ②It is +被强调部分+that/who +其它部分 ③..... makes it possible for me to .... ④ 1.An advantage of hanging out with friends is that I can have fun with them. 2.What hanging out attracks me most is that I can enjoy the environments which are totally different. 3.Staying at home provides me with more personal time, which is good for me to develop my interests and achieve self-improvement. In brief, it’s staying at home on weekends that holds a great place.Only in this way can I enjoy my weekends. 作文二 写作过程中出现了一下问题： 1.内容安排不合理，原因写的太长 P49 In my opinion, working with others is not only a way of work but also a symbol of unity.Also, I have learnt a lot from it and made great progress.The reasons why I put it first are as follows.First and formost , only when I work with others can I be successful.After all, “Many hands make light work.” Furthermore, working with others helps me get a deeper understanding of unity. Last but not least, every time I get success through working with others, there will be a strong sense of achievement and happiness raising from the bottom of my heart. Firstand formost, “Many hands make light work.” Only when we work with others can we share ideas with each other, which makes it possible for us to work out problems efficiently. 2.建议写的太空，不具体（修改下面的例子) A.In order to improve this life skill, we can do many things, such as eating fresh food, having a relax by using the Internet, getting enough sleep and so on. B. Firstly ,it is the most important to eat food that is fresh and natural,like fruit and vegetables.Secondly, don’t read in the poor or strong light, or it will hurt your eyes.Last but not least, doing some outdoor sports every day can also relax ourselves a lot, just like Firstly, it’s important to eat fresh fruit and vegebales in order to stay away from illness. Secondly, doing some outdoor sports is a good way.加 原因 3.人称混乱，给建议时用I （修改下面的例子) In addition, I do some sports every day to relax myself.What’s more, it’s vital for me to get enough sleep each day. 4.观点表达混乱，错位 . 原因表达啰嗦，不简洁（修改下面的例子) The reason why I think working with others is important is that working with others promotes cooperation.When we work with others, we learn to share ideas with others, which helps us improve our communication skills.Besides, when we work with others at school, we can exchange our opinions on the subjects, which will help us have a better understanding of the subjects. 5.最后一段，无法总结上文（修改下面的例子) I hope my advice can be beneficial wot your health. 6.结构不合理。 It can also improves our learning efficiently.Then I want to share some advice to improve the skill of keeping healthy. First and formost, we’re supposed to keep a balanced diet..... 5.so 和so that 引导的从句分不清 1. "so" 引导结果状语从句（表示“因此，所以”） 结构： 主句 + so + 结果从句（通常用逗号隔开） 作用： 表示前因后果，强调主句的动作导致了从句的结果。 It was raining heavily, so we stayed at home. （雨下得很大，所以我们待在家里。） 2. "so that" 引导目的状语从句（表示“以便，为了”） 结构： 主句 + so that + 目的从句（通常用 can/could/will/would 等情态动词） 作用： 表示主句的动作是为了达到从句的目的。 She studied hard so that she could pass the exam. （她努力学习，以便能通过考试。） 扩写下面的句子 She was tired.(so) They saved money .(so that) He forgot his keys.(so) He woke up early.(so that) 作文三 1.两个简单句之间不用连词。 (请看下面例子并修改) Besides, there are many wonderful things in AI, they make learning more interesting. 2.开头重复 With the development of science, AI is now widely used.With the development of society,AI is becoming more and more popular.It has both benefits and chanllenges. 3.主谓不搭（修改下面的例子) It not only finds infromation quickly, but also make learning more interesting by providing us a variety of videoes. 4.分不清主次。（修改下面的例子) AI has its disadvantages.If students who can’t control themselves well, AI will be an enemy.For example, AI will make students less creative,which plays an important part in study. 5.观点没有表达出来（修改下面的例子) In my opinion, AI makes our life more convenient, and at the same time, it also harmful to us. 6.人称错误 All in all, every coin has its two sides.If we use it corrctly and carefully, we’ll ahieve our goal and get a better future. 作文四 1.Among all seasons, the one that truly fascinates me is__________. 2.If I have to_____________________,without doubt, it will be __________. 3.The weather _______________________________, just right for____________. 4.What I love most about _______ is that _____________________. 5.The reason why _______________is that ____________________________. 6.Nothing can compares with ____________________________. 7.Whenever I think of________, I feel __________________. 8.For me ,_______ is more than a season--it’s _____________. spring choose a favorite season spring in autumn is neither too cold nor too hot walking autumn trees dress themselves in golden leaves I enjoy summer I can spend endless hours swimming in the lake the joy of building snowmen with my family in winter. spring hopeful and full of energy spring a celebration of freedom and sunshine. 1.Among all seasons, the one that truly fascinates me is autumn. 2.If I have to choose a favorite season,without doubt, it will be autumn. 3.The weather in autumn is cool and cloudy, just right for walking. 4.What I love most about this season is that trees dress themselves in golden leaves. 5.The reason why I enjoy summer is that I can spend endless hours swimming in the lake. 6.Nothing can compares with the joy of building snowmen with my family in winter. 7.Whenever I think of spring, I feel hopeful and full of energy. 8.To me summer is more than a season--it’s a celebration of freedom and sunshine. 1.过渡连接词乱用 (请看下面例子并修改) First and formost, when it comes to winter, it will bring snow and the ground dresses itseself in white. Besides, the reason why I like winter best is that it brings so much snow that I can make snowmen and go skating with my friends. 2.结构混乱（修改下面的例子) Among all seasons , the one that truly fancinates me is spring.Now let me tell you why I like spring best. Spring is the first season of a year,which brings us warmth and soft breeze.The weather is not too hot or too cold.The reasons why I like it so much is that it is a warm season with beautiful and romantic flowers and it’s a perfect time to do outdoor activities. 3.要点描述失衡（修改下面的例子) Among all seasons, the one that truly fascinates me is spring.The weather in spring is neither too cold nor too hot, just right for walking with family. There are three reasons why I love spring best.Firstly , as the saying goes,.... 4.人称混乱,逻辑不通（修改下面的例子) First and formost, the weather in summer is hot and sunny, just right for running.We can do some sports and take a walk in summer.Besides, summer is a good time for us to study.It has the longest daytime and we can study at home all day. $$