Unit 2 Success（单元同步写作讲义）英语北师大版2019选择性必修第一册

Unit 2 Success 同步写作课讲义-北师大版2019选择性必修第一册 ( ⭐话题解读⭐ ) 本单元的写作主题是人物介绍，人物描写属于记叙文的范畴，它以写人和记事为主，以叙述和描写为主要表达方式。 ( ⭐写作任务⭐ ) 一篇好的人物描写一般分为三大部分，即生平介绍、事迹叙述和简短的评论。时态的选择要视情况而定，若写人物的过去就用过去时态，若写人物的现在就用现在时态。 1．生平介绍人物的出生时间和地点是必不可少的信息；介绍生平时要尊重客观事实，材料要真实。 2．事迹叙述，选材要着眼于人物的生活背景及其成就和事迹，以形成对比，起到突出人物的特点和树立榜样的作用。选材要有重点，不必面面俱到。 3．尾段：简短的评论，对所描述的人物的评论要客观公正。 ( ⭐审题指导⭐ ) 假如你是高二学生李华,你校下周三将举办一场以“The person I admire most”为主题的演讲比赛,请你写一篇演讲稿,内容包括: 1.介绍你所敬佩的人的经历;2.你从他/她身上学到了什么。 注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 写作步骤 ◆ 步骤一：点出谁是你最敬佩的人 ◆ 步骤二：介绍他/她的经历,突出其受尊敬和爱戴的原因 ◆ 步骤三：结尾升华,介绍他/她对自己人生的影响 ( ⭐写作框架⭐ ) ( ⭐素材宝库⭐ ) ( 词汇积累 ) ( 7 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1. influential adj.有影响力的   2.sacrifice n.牺牲   3.determined adj.坚定的,坚决的  4.outstanding adj.杰出的,优秀的  5.optimistic adj.乐观的   6. enthusiastic adj.热心的,热衷的  7.devote...to致力于   8.strive for为……努力/奋斗  ( 句型积累 ) 1.开头:介绍人物的个人情况 ①He was born into a poor/rich family and lived a hard/happy life.他出生在一个贫穷/富有的家庭,过着艰苦/幸福的生活。 ②He began to make a living at an early age.他很小就开始谋生了。 2.主体:介绍人物的经历和成就 ①He went to study in Peking University in 2004 and graduated 4 years later.他于2004年进入北京大学学习,四年后毕业。 ②He got his bachelor's/master's/doctor's degree in mathematics from...他从……获得了数学学士/硕士/博士学位。 ③He devoted his lifetime to...他把他的一生都奉献给了…… ④He won a prize in...他在……方面获奖了。 ⑤He made great progress in...他在……方面取得了很大的进步。 3.结尾:对人物作出评价 ①He is one of the most outstanding persons.他是最杰出的人物之一。 ②He is regarded/considered as...他被认为是…… ③He has made great contributions to...他为……做出了巨大的贡献。 ④He sets an example to...他为……树立了一个榜样。 ( ⭐参考范文⭐ ) Good morning, ladies and gentlemen! The person I admire most is Helen Keller, one of the most influential women in America in the 20th century. When she was a young child, she became blind and deaf because of a serious disease, leaving her in utter darkness and silence. When she was seven, to get Helen a good education, her parents made many sacrifices and found her a teacher. With Helen's exceptional intelligence and determined effort, combined with her teacher's skill and patience, she made outstanding achievements. She almost devoted her entire life to helping the blind and deaf children. It is her optimistic and enthusiastic attitude towards life that always motivates me and pushes me to strive for my goal. ( ⭐写作拓展⭐ ) ( 变式提升训练 ) （1） 你班准备办一个介绍科学家的英语主题班会。你打算介绍我国著名科学家钱学森 。请根据下列提示写一篇英语短文。 人物身份 杰出科学家，我国航天事业的先驱者 生平 *1911年12月11日出身于一个富裕之家,少时天资聪颖,被称为"神童"。 *1935年前往美国深造；1955年回国,致力于中国航天事业,参与火箭研发,开启中国航天时代。 *2009年10月31日于北京逝世。 评价 成就斐然,被誉为"中国航天之父"。 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 Qian Xuesen is one of the most outstanding scientists in China and a pioneer of China's aerospace industry. 1. Born into a wealthy family (born, family)on December 11, 1911, Qian Xuesen2. was so clever that he was referred to as (clever, refer to)a"wonder child" in his childhood. After graduating from university, he went to America for further study in 1935 and gained his doctorate. 　　After he returned to China in 1955, 3. he devoted himself to (devote)China's aerospace programme. He 4. played a major role in the development of (role, development) rockets, opening a new era of China's aerospace industry. On October 31, 2009, he passed away in Beijing. It's because of his outstanding achievements that he is hailed as the "Father of Chinese Aerospace." （2） (2024河南南阳期中) 在你成长的过程中,总有一个人对你的思想和行为产生过重大的影响。请你写一篇短文介绍这个人并向校英文报投稿,内容包括: 1.人物简介; 2.对你的影响。 注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 The Person Who Influences Me Most 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 The Person Who Influences Me Most Many people have a great influence on me, but I think no one can compare with my mother. Working as a civil servant, she doesn't appear to be extraordinary in any way but she works faithfully and devotedly. At the same time, she never puts her family aside. It is my mother who teaches me to be kind, optimistic and persistent. When I come across someone in need, I'm willing to give a helping hand. When I encounter difficulties, I always constantly seek for approaches to them. She is not only my mother but also my life mentor. Indeed, she is just the person affecting me greatly. （3） (2020全国Ⅰ) 　　你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括: 1.人物简介; 2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。 The person I respect There are many respectable people around us. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 The person I respect There are many respectable people around us. As for me, my father is the one I respect. He is a doctor and always takes a positive attitude towards life.   There are various reasons why I admire him. As a doctor, he is devoted to his job, saying “Nothing is more important than saving a life, however difficult it is.” In March, he volunteered to go to Wuhan, determined to help those suffering from COVID⁃19 despite the risk of being infected, which made me promote the understanding of bravery and responsibility. As a father, not only does he care about my life, but he also inspires me to set a high aim and strive for it. But for his encouragement, I couldn't have made so much progress. Such is my father, a great man who sets a good example for me and I love him a great deal. （4） (2023湖北部分高中联考) 你校将举办英语演讲比赛,请你以“The Person I Admire Most”为题写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括: 1.人物简介;2.你敬佩的原因;3.你的评价或对你的影响。 注意:1.词数应为80左右;2.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。 The Person I Admire Most Dear fellow students, There are many respectable people around us. And the person I admire most is 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 That's all. Thank you! The Person I Admire Most Dear fellow students,  There are many respectable people around us. And the person I admire most is Mrs Wu, aged 30, my English teacher, who has been teaching English for 6 years.  Mrs Wu is kind and thoughtful towards us students just like our dear mother. Once, when one of my classmates got injured unexpectedly, without hesitation, Mrs Wu took him to hospital for medical treatment immediately. What impresses me most is that she always tries new ways to make her classes lively and interesting. Also, she is very patient with us and always helps us find solutions to problems when we turn to her for help. With her help, our English has made rapid progress. In my eyes, Mrs Wu is more than our teacher. She’s also our best friend. That’s why she deserves our respect. That’s all. Thank you!  读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 No one is a born winner. People make themselves into winners by their own efforts. I learned this lesson from an experience many years ago. I took the head coaching job at a school in Baxley, Georgia. It was a small school with a weak football program. The school took part in the league matches every year. However, it never ended well. We were more of the audience, watching and cheering instead of sweating out a victory in the field. It was a tradition for the school’s old team to play against the new team at the end of spring practice. The old team had no coach for lack of resources, and they didn’t even practice to prepare for the game. I was assigned as coach of the new team, which was why I was excited. I believed that we were going to win, but to my disappointment, we were defeated. I couldn’t believe I had got into such a situation. Thinking hard about it, I tried to figure out the reason and what I should do next. It didn’t take long before I came to realize that my team might not be the number one team in Georgia, but they were depending on me. Without proper guidance or previous experience, my team was at a loss what to do. I had to change my attitude about their ability and potential.I would let my action do the talking. First, I started doing anything I could to help them build a little pride. I could see their spirits lifted, with their head held high with great confidence. Most importantly, I began to treat them like winners. Only when they regarded themselves as winners could they willingly invest time and energy. 注意：续写词数应为150左右。 Paragraph 1： That summer, the other teams enjoyed their vacation. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 Paragraph 2: Six months later, the football season started. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 ( ⭐审题指导⭐ ) 【解题导语】 本文讲述了作者在巴克斯利一所学校做足球教练的经历。在一次比赛中作者任教的球队输给了学校里连教练都没有的老队，于是作者开始反思，随后作者改变了对队员的态度，帮助队员建立自豪感，在下一次比赛之前，他们一起努力不停地训练。他们最终能否赢得比赛呢？ ( ⭐写作框架⭐ ) ( ⭐参考范文⭐ ) Paragraph 1: That summer, the other teams enjoyed their vacation. We met every day and practiced passing and kicking the football.At first, some complained that even the hardest practice couldn't change the fact that they were the last. The whole team were filled with a sense of depression and failure. What I could do at that time was try to cheer them up and tell them not to give up. Encouraged by my persistence, the team lifted their spirits and practiced harder. Paragraph 2: Six months later, the football season started. After suffering our defeat on the spring practice field, we won our first game, and continued to improve. Finally, my boys beat the best team in Georgia, giving us one of the greatest thrills of my life! From the experience I learned a lot about how the attitude of the leader could influence the members of a team. Instead of regarding my boys as losers, I pushed and encouraged them. I help them see themselves differently, and they built themselves into winners. Winners are made, not born. ( ⭐写作拓展⭐ ) ( 变式提升训练 ) 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 One weekend in August, Daniel and his father drove five hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. On the way, unfortunately, his father received a phone call from Daniel's teacher saying Daniel had broken the school rules, and then he started to criticize(批评)Daniel. By the time they reached the lake, Daniel was so angry that he said to his father, “I'm going to find a better place for us to camp” and walked away alone. With no path to follow, Daniel just walked on for quite a long time. After he had climbed to a high place, he turned around, hoping to see the lake. To his surprise, he saw nothing but the forest and a snow-capped mountain. He suddenly realized that he was lost. “Dad! Mom! Dad! Mom!...” he cried. “Help! Help me!...” No reply. If only he had not left his mobile phone in that bag with his father. Daniel kept moving, but the farther he walked, the more confused he became. As night was beginning to fall, Daniel was so tired that he had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Daniel said to himself, “Hadn't I walked away angrily, I wouldn't be trapped in this awful place, faced with the danger of dying.” He regretted it with endless anxiety, and then became asleep with tears in his eyes. Daniel rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. He could hear water trickling(滴落)somewhere in the distance. Quickly he followed the sound to a stream. To his great joy, he saw some apple trees. He ate some. Never in his life had he tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Daniel began to walk along the stream and hoped it would lead him to the lake. 注意:续写词数应为150个左右。 As he walked along the stream carefully,Daniel heard a strange sound in the distance.  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 It was early in the morning when Daniel woke up.  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 As he walked along the stream carefully, Daniel heard a strange sound in the distance. It was a helicopter. Daniel took off his white T-shirt and waved to it. Unfortunately, the thick jungle hid everything. Daniel became disappointed and frustrated. It was getting dark again. Daniel, exhausted and scared, lay down near a stone, missing his parents in the distance. He couldn't help crying and then fell asleep again. It was early in the morning when Daniel woke up. Weak as he was, he struggled to his feet, continuing searching for assistance. To his great joy, a helicopter was flying overhead on and on. He climbed to the mountain peak, waving his white T-shirt with all his strength to attract the pilot's attention. Luckily, the pilot found him and managed to hoist him into the helicopter. Feeling warm, he hugged his father tightly with tears in his eyes. Then he apologized to his parents for what he had done. From then on, he never broke the school rules again and he behaved well. $$ Unit 2 Success 同步写作课讲义-北师大版2019选择性必修第一册 ( ⭐话题解读⭐ ) 本单元的写作主题是人物介绍，人物描写属于记叙文的范畴，它以写人和记事为主，以叙述和描写为主要表达方式。 ( ⭐写作任务⭐ ) 一篇好的人物描写一般分为三大部分，即生平介绍、事迹叙述和简短的评论。时态的选择要视情况而定，若写人物的过去就用过去时态，若写人物的现在就用现在时态。 1．生平介绍人物的出生时间和地点是必不可少的信息；介绍生平时要尊重客观事实，材料要真实。 2．事迹叙述，选材要着眼于人物的生活背景及其成就和事迹，以形成对比，起到突出人物的特点和树立榜样的作用。选材要有重点，不必面面俱到。 3．尾段：简短的评论，对所描述的人物的评论要客观公正。 ( ⭐审题指导⭐ ) 假如你是高二学生李华,你校下周三将举办一场以“The person I admire most”为主题的演讲比赛,请你写一篇演讲稿,内容包括: 1.介绍你所敬佩的人的经历;2.你从他/她身上学到了什么。 注意:1.词数80左右;2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 写作步骤 ◆ 步骤一：点出谁是你最敬佩的人 ◆ 步骤二：介绍他/她的经历,突出其受尊敬和爱戴的原因 ◆ 步骤三：结尾升华,介绍他/她对自己人生的影响 ( ⭐写作框架⭐ ) ( ⭐素材宝库⭐ ) ( 词汇积累 ) ( 7 ) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 1. influential adj.有影响力的   2.sacrifice n.牺牲   3.determined adj.坚定的,坚决的  4.outstanding adj.杰出的,优秀的  5.optimistic adj.乐观的   6. enthusiastic adj.热心的,热衷的  7.devote...to致力于   8.strive for为……努力/奋斗  ( 句型积累 ) 1.开头:介绍人物的个人情况 ①He was born into a poor/rich family and lived a hard/happy life.他出生在一个贫穷/富有的家庭,过着艰苦/幸福的生活。 ②He began to make a living at an early age.他很小就开始谋生了。 2.主体:介绍人物的经历和成就 ①He went to study in Peking University in 2004 and graduated 4 years later.他于2004年进入北京大学学习,四年后毕业。 ②He got his bachelor's/master's/doctor's degree in mathematics from...他从……获得了数学学士/硕士/博士学位。 ③He devoted his lifetime to...他把他的一生都奉献给了…… ④He won a prize in...他在……方面获奖了。 ⑤He made great progress in...他在……方面取得了很大的进步。 3.结尾:对人物作出评价 ①He is one of the most outstanding persons.他是最杰出的人物之一。 ②He is regarded/considered as...他被认为是…… ③He has made great contributions to...他为……做出了巨大的贡献。 ④He sets an example to...他为……树立了一个榜样。 ( ⭐参考范文⭐ ) Good morning, ladies and gentlemen! The person I admire most is Helen Keller, one of the most influential women in America in the 20th century. When she was a young child, she became blind and deaf because of a serious disease, leaving her in utter darkness and silence. When she was seven, to get Helen a good education, her parents made many sacrifices and found her a teacher. With Helen's exceptional intelligence and determined effort, combined with her teacher's skill and patience, she made outstanding achievements. She almost devoted her entire life to helping the blind and deaf children. It is her optimistic and enthusiastic attitude towards life that always motivates me and pushes me to strive for my goal. ( ⭐写作拓展⭐ ) ( 变式提升训练 ) （1） 你班准备办一个介绍科学家的英语主题班会。你打算介绍我国著名科学家钱学森 。请根据下列提示写一篇英语短文。 人物身份 杰出科学家，我国航天事业的先驱者 生平 *1911年12月11日出身于一个富裕之家,少时天资聪颖,被称为"神童"。 *1935年前往美国深造；1955年回国,致力于中国航天事业,参与火箭研发,开启中国航天时代。 *2009年10月31日于北京逝世。 评价 成就斐然,被誉为"中国航天之父"。 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 （2） (2024河南南阳期中) 在你成长的过程中,总有一个人对你的思想和行为产生过重大的影响。请你写一篇短文介绍这个人并向校英文报投稿,内容包括: 1.人物简介; 2.对你的影响。 注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 The Person Who Influences Me Most 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 （3） (2020全国Ⅰ) 　　你校正在组织英语作文比赛。请以身边值得尊敬和爱戴的人为题,写一篇短文参赛,内容包括: 1.人物简介; 2.尊敬和爱戴的原因。 注意: 1.词数100左右; 2.短文题目和首句已为你写好。 The person I respect There are many respectable people around us. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 （4） (2023湖北部分高中联考) 你校将举办英语演讲比赛,请你以“The Person I Admire Most”为题写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括: 1.人物简介;2.你敬佩的原因;3.你的评价或对你的影响。 注意:1.词数应为80左右;2.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。 The Person I Admire Most Dear fellow students, There are many respectable people around us. And the person I admire most is 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 That's all. Thank you! 读后续写 阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。 No one is a born winner. People make themselves into winners by their own efforts. I learned this lesson from an experience many years ago. I took the head coaching job at a school in Baxley, Georgia. It was a small school with a weak football program. The school took part in the league matches every year. However, it never ended well. We were more of the audience, watching and cheering instead of sweating out a victory in the field. It was a tradition for the school’s old team to play against the new team at the end of spring practice. The old team had no coach for lack of resources, and they didn’t even practice to prepare for the game. I was assigned as coach of the new team, which was why I was excited. I believed that we were going to win, but to my disappointment, we were defeated. I couldn’t believe I had got into such a situation. Thinking hard about it, I tried to figure out the reason and what I should do next. It didn’t take long before I came to realize that my team might not be the number one team in Georgia, but they were depending on me. Without proper guidance or previous experience, my team was at a loss what to do. I had to change my attitude about their ability and potential.I would let my action do the talking. First, I started doing anything I could to help them build a little pride. I could see their spirits lifted, with their head held high with great confidence. Most importantly, I began to treat them like winners. Only when they regarded themselves as winners could they willingly invest time and energy. 注意：续写词数应为150左右。 Paragraph 1： That summer, the other teams enjoyed their vacation. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 Paragraph 2: Six months later, the football season started. 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 ( ⭐审题指导⭐ ) 【解题导语】 本文讲述了作者在巴克斯利一所学校做足球教练的经历。在一次比赛中作者任教的球队输给了学校里连教练都没有的老队，于是作者开始反思，随后作者改变了对队员的态度，帮助队员建立自豪感，在下一次比赛之前，他们一起努力不停地训练。他们最终能否赢得比赛呢？ ( ⭐写作框架⭐ ) ( ⭐参考范文⭐ ) Paragraph 1: That summer, the other teams enjoyed their vacation. We met every day and practiced passing and kicking the football.At first, some complained that even the hardest practice couldn't change the fact that they were the last. The whole team were filled with a sense of depression and failure. What I could do at that time was try to cheer them up and tell them not to give up. Encouraged by my persistence, the team lifted their spirits and practiced harder. Paragraph 2: Six months later, the football season started. After suffering our defeat on the spring practice field, we won our first game, and continued to improve. Finally, my boys beat the best team in Georgia, giving us one of the greatest thrills of my life! From the experience I learned a lot about how the attitude of the leader could influence the members of a team. Instead of regarding my boys as losers, I pushed and encouraged them. I help them see themselves differently, and they built themselves into winners. Winners are made, not born. ( ⭐写作拓展⭐ ) ( 变式提升训练 ) 阅读下面材料,根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构成一篇完整的短文。 One weekend in August, Daniel and his father drove five hours to camp overnight by a lake in the forest. On the way, unfortunately, his father received a phone call from Daniel's teacher saying Daniel had broken the school rules, and then he started to criticize(批评)Daniel. By the time they reached the lake, Daniel was so angry that he said to his father, “I'm going to find a better place for us to camp” and walked away alone. With no path to follow, Daniel just walked on for quite a long time. After he had climbed to a high place, he turned around, hoping to see the lake. To his surprise, he saw nothing but the forest and a snow-capped mountain. He suddenly realized that he was lost. “Dad! Mom! Dad! Mom!...” he cried. “Help! Help me!...” No reply. If only he had not left his mobile phone in that bag with his father. Daniel kept moving, but the farther he walked, the more confused he became. As night was beginning to fall, Daniel was so tired that he had to stop for the night. Lying awake in the dark, Daniel said to himself, “Hadn't I walked away angrily, I wouldn't be trapped in this awful place, faced with the danger of dying.” He regretted it with endless anxiety, and then became asleep with tears in his eyes. Daniel rose at the break of day, hungry and thirsty. He could hear water trickling(滴落)somewhere in the distance. Quickly he followed the sound to a stream. To his great joy, he saw some apple trees. He ate some. Never in his life had he tasted anything better. Feeling stronger now, Daniel began to walk along the stream and hoped it would lead him to the lake. 注意:续写词数应为150个左右。 As he walked along the stream carefully,Daniel heard a strange sound in the distance.  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 It was early in the morning when Daniel woke up.  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　 　 $$