Unit 1 Back to school （俱乐部提案）（单元同步写作讲义）英语译林版2020必修第一册

必修第一册 Unit 1 Back to school 关于新俱乐部提案 Write a proposal for a new club 单元写作早知道 写作任务 本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于新俱乐部的提案。提案是一种正式的建议或计划，它的目的是让更多的读者同意并参与你的计划。提案的结构如下： 第一段：引出话题，目的； 第二段：提出具体建议； 第三段：提出希望 常用表达 1.I’m glad to hear the news that you want to…. 2.I’m writing to offer my proposals since you are seeking help for… 3.It’s important to appeal to more students to… 4.It’s a great idea to make the most of … 5….should be designed carefully… 6.I sincerely hope that… 【必备句式】 （1）活动目的 ①To help the students know more about plants, we decide to set up a Nature Club.为了帮助学生更多地了解植物，我们决定成立一个自然俱乐部。 ②To provide an opportunity to make friends, we decide to start a Football Club.为了提供一个交友的机会，我们决定成立一个足球俱乐部。 ③To improve reading and writing skills, a Book Lover Club was set up by our teacher.为了提高阅读和写作技能，我们的老师成立了一个爱书人俱乐部。 （2）活动计划 ①We'll have an outing to our school botanical garden and learn the diversity of plants. 我们会去学校的植物园郊游，了解植物的多样性。 ②Read a short story that we like every Saturday afternoon每周六下午读一个我们喜欢的短篇小说。 ③Meet on weekends to communicate with each other in English.周末见面，用英语互相交流。 ④Organize students to do some volunteer work.组织学生做一些志愿工作。 （3）宣传方式 ①Put up a notice on the school website to inform the ballet lovers of joining the club. 校网站上张贴通知，通知芭蕾舞爱好者加入俱乐部。 ②Make posters and put them up around the school.制作海报并在学校周围张贴。 【必背模板】 模板1 Dear ______, Having known with delight that ____________. I am writing to offer my proposals. First of all, I think the purpose of the club is to _________________. Besides, as for its activities, I think it should contain the following parts. It should offer ________________. There should also be ____________. By the way, club members should _________________Last but not least, various ways should be made the most of to _________________. At last ____________________________. Yours __________ 模板2 Proposal for a new club Club name：______________________________________________________________________ Club leader：_____________________________________________________________________ Meeting time：____________________________________________________________________ Club aim：_______________________________________________________________________ Club activities：___________________________________________________________________ Materials needed：_________________________________________________________________ Plan for finding new members：______________________________________________________ Signed：________________________________________________________________________ 【升级策略】 1. 一份好的提案应该注意把握三点： （1）提案一般由标题、正文、结尾三个部分组成，正文包括提案的类型、目的、活动计划、注意事项、宣传方式等； （2） 了使提案易于阅读，需要把不同类型的信息进行分类； （3）提案的语言表达要简短、真诚、正式；表达多使用祈使句和动词不定式等。 2. 写作流程图 说明写信目的 提案的类型、目的、活动计划、注意事项、宣传方式 提出建议 提出希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复 为了丰富同学们的课外活动, 校学生会决定成立一个自行车俱乐部(Cycling Club), 现向全体学生征求建议。假如你是李华, 请根据以下提示, 用英语写一份关于自行车俱乐部的建议。 1. 自行车俱乐部的目的; 2. 俱乐部的主要活动内容: 每周一次的基础训练, 有教师辅导, 安排在课外体育活动时间; 3. 其他事项: 器材自备, 俱乐部的宣传等。 注意: 1. 建议应包括以上所有信息, 可适当发挥; 2. 词数80个左右。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 1．文体：应用文-提案（建立俱乐部）。 2．时态：一般现在时和一般将来时为主。 3．人称：第一人称。 谋篇 第一段：建立俱乐部的目的。 第二段：主要活动的内容。 第三段：其他相关事项，祝愿和问候。 遣词造句 【核心词汇】 1.高兴地 __________ 2. 创立骑行俱乐部____________ 3．提供我的建议 ___________ 4. 保持健康 ________________ 5．放松自己 ________________ 6. 关于___________ 7. 如果有可能___________ 8.顺便说一下___________ 9. 充分利用___________ 10．帮助___________ 【答案】1.with delight2. set up a Cycling Club3．offer one’s proposal4. keep fit 5．relax oneself 6. as for/to 7. if possible 8.by the way9. make the most/ best of 10．be of some help 【连词成句】 I.完成句子that the Students’ Union 1. 很高兴得知学生会已经决定建立自行车俱乐部。 I know that the Students’ Union has decided to .   2. 我写信提出我的建议。 _____________________________.   3. 它应该每周提供一次基础培训。 It should once a week.   4. 基础培训将由老师指导。 The basic training .   5. 我们应该充分利用各种方式使所有学生了解我们的俱乐部。 We should to make our club known by all students.   【句式升级】 6. 用非谓语动词升级句1和句2 ___________________________________________________________________________________________ 7. 用定语从句升级句3和句4 ___________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 用被动语态升级句5 ___________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 1. with delight, set up a Cycling Club 2. I am writing to offer my proposals. 3. offer basic training 4. will be guided by teachers 5. make the most/ best of various/ a variety of ways 6. Having known/Knowing with delight that the Students’ Union has decided to set up a Cycling Club, I am writing to offer my proposals.  7. It should offer basic training once a week which will be guided by teachers.  8. Various ways should be made the most of to make our club known by all students.   组句成篇 用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 Dear President, 　　I am Li Hua. Having known with delight that the Students’ Union has decided to set up a Cycling Club, I am writing to offer my proposals. 　　First of all, I think the purpose of the club is to help us students keep fit and relax ourselves. Besides, as for its activities, I think it should contain the following parts. It should offer basic training once a week which will be guided by teachers. It can be arranged during the time of after-class physical activities. There should be an outdoor cycling trip if possible. By the way, club members should get the equipment ready by the students themselves. Last but not least, various ways should be made the most of to make our club known by all students. 　　At last, I hope my proposals can be of some help for you. Yours, Li Hua 【第一部分 基础题】 ​​一、词性转换训练​​ （一）将下列动词转换为名词或形容词，用于提案句式： 1.propose→ (n.) ______ 2.improve → (n.) ______ （二）用括号内单词的正确形式填空： 1.The teacher ​​ (recommend) that students ​​(take)​​ notes during lectures. 2.It’s ​​ (essence) ​​ (balance) study and rest. ​​【参考答案】 （一）1.propose (n.), suggestive (adj.); 2.improvement (n.) （二）1.recommended, （should）take;2. essential, to balance ​​二、句子仿写改写​​ ​​基础层​​：结构调整 1.原句：You should join the club. It helps you make friends. → 合并为复合句：______ → 用非谓语动词改写：______ 2.原句：I think you can practice more. → 转为委婉建议：______ ​​【参考答案】 You should join the club, which helps you make friends. Practicing more is advisable for you. I suggest that you practice more. / Why not practice more? ​​提分层​​：高阶句型 1.原句：You must finish the project on time. → 虚拟语气：______ → 倒装句：______ 2.原句：Reading widely is good. → 强调重要性：______ ​​【参考答案】 1.I strongly recommend that you (should) finish the project on time. Not only should you finish the project on time, but also you should check details carefully. 2.There is no denying that extensive reading plays a vital role in language learning. ​​三、翻译句子​​ ​​要求​​：用提案常用句式翻译，注意语气委婉。 1. 得知你想创建一个新的俱乐部, 我非常开心。 . 2. 我写信是为了提供我的建议, 因为你在寻求帮助来建立一个俱乐部。 . 3. 吸引更多的学生参加活动是很重要的。 . 4. 充分利用学校的资源是个好主意。 . 5. 俱乐部活动应仔细设计, 并为足够的材料需求做好充分的准备。 . 6. 我真诚地希望得到您的批准和指导，使这个想法成为现实。 . ​​【参考答案】 1．I’m glad to hear the news that you want to found a new club. 2．I’m writing to offer my proposals since you are seeking help for setting up a club. 3．It’s important to appeal to more students to take part in activities. 4．It’s a great idea to make the most of school resources. 5．Club activities should be designed carefully with good preparations for enough material needs. 6．I sincerely hope for your approval and guidance to bring this idea to life. 【第二部分 提升题】 1．假如你是国际部学生李华，你和同学们准备创建一个传统文化社团，请给校长 Mr. Mark写一封提案信，请求他的同意。 内容包括：1. 来信目的；2. 社团规划；3. 表达希望。 注意：1. 词数 80 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mr. Mark, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours truly, Li Hua 【佳作欣赏】 Dear Mr. Mark, I am Li Hua, a student from International Department. I am writing to propose the establishment of a Traditional Culture Club with the support of my fellow classmates. The club aims to promote Chinese traditional culture through various activities such as workshops, lectures, and cultural exchanges. We believe the club will enrich students' understanding and appreciation of our heritage. I sincerely hope for your approval and guidance to bring this idea to life. Thank you for considering our proposal. Best wishes. Li Hua 2．你代表学校参加青少年科技公益大赛，需以“A Small Invention, A Big Change!”为题，写一篇提案介绍你设计的作品，内容包括： 1. 设计意图； 2. 功能特点； 3. 公益价值。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 按如下格式作答，题目已为你写好。 A Small Invention, A Big Change! ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【佳作欣赏】 A Small Invention, A Big Change! I’m glad to introduce my invention, a Smart Recycling Bin, designed to guide users to sort waste correctly and inspire eco-friendly habits. Equipped with a camera and AI, it identifies trash types (plastic, paper, glass) and lights up the matching bin. A voice reminder teaches recycling rules in fun ways. This invention solves two issues: messy public bins and low recycling rates. By reducing landfill waste, it protects soil and water. For schools and parks, it turns recycling into an educational game, raising eco-awareness. Lightweight and solar-powered, it requires no extra energy. Small actions, like dropping a bottle into the right bin, can lead to cleaner cities and healthier communities. Let’s make recycling effortless for everyone! 3. 假定你是李华，你校英文社团正面向社团成员征集“快乐周末 (Happy Weekend) ”的活动方案。请你给社团指导老师 Laura写一封提议信。 内容包括：1. 介绍你的方案； 2. 说明你的理由。 注意：1. 写作的词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Ms. Laura, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Li Hua 【佳作欣赏】 Dear Ms. Laura, I hope this letter finds you well. As a member of our school’s English club, I am writing to propose a “Happy Weekend” activity for our club members. I propose to organize an outdoor picnic and English-speaking game session. It will be held on the upcoming Saturday at Central Park. Firstly, this activity can provide an excellent opportunity for club members to know each other better. Then, by engaging in English-speaking games, we can improve spoken English. What’s more, spending time outdoors can help us reduce stress, which is beneficial for our mental and physical health. I would be more than happy to take charge of the preparations for this event. Looking forward to your approval and suggestions. Best regards, Li Hua （2025·江苏南通·高三模拟预测）假定你是李华，为配合学校将于下月举办的科技节，你校英语报设置了“科技节献策”栏目。请你以“My Proposal for the Science and Technology Festival”为题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1．你的献策； 2．献策理由。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80个左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 My Proposal for the Science and Technology Festival ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【参考范文】 My Proposal for the Science and Technology Festival As a great fan of science and technology, I am excited about the festival approaching next month. At the festival, I expect to attend lectures from one or two scientists from top universities. I believe the students will get inspirations from their brilliant insights into fields like AI and biological engineering. Besides, I believe it will be a great idea to hold an exhibition of the students’ projects and a speech contest, which can give the students opportunities to share their points of view on the development and social value of science and technology.   I am anticipating this meaningful festival and will be delighted to be part of it. 【写作分析】本篇书面表达属于应用文。为配合学校将于下月举办的科技节，学校英语报设置了“科技节献策”栏目。要求考生以“My Proposal for the Science and Technology Festival”为题写一篇短文投稿。 【要点解析】1. 词汇积累 激动的：excited→thrilled 接近：approach→draw near 期望：expect→anticipate 获得：get→gain 2.句式拓展 简单句变复合句 原句：At the festival, I expect to attend lectures from one or two scientists from top universities. 拓展句：At the festival, what I expect is to attend lectures from one or two scientists from top universities.【高分句型1】Besides, I believe it will be a great idea to hold an exhibition of the students' projects and a speech contest, which can give the students opportunities to share their points of view on the development and social value of science and technology. (运用了which引导的非限制性定语从句和省略that的宾语从句) 【高分句型2】I believe the students will get inspirations from their brilliant insights into fields like Al and biological engineering. (运用了省略that的宾语从句) 1 / 10 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 必修第一册 Unit 1 Back to school 关于新俱乐部提案 Write a proposal for a new club 单元写作早知道 写作任务 本单元的写作任务是写一篇关于新俱乐部的提案。提案是一种正式的建议或计划，它的目的是让更多的读者同意并参与你的计划。提案的结构如下： 第一段：引出话题，目的； 第二段：提出具体建议； 第三段：提出希望 常用表达 1.I’m glad to hear the news that you want to…. 2.I’m writing to offer my proposals since you are seeking help for… 3.It’s important to appeal to more students to… 4.It’s a great idea to make the most of … 5….should be designed carefully… 6.I sincerely hope that… 【必备句式】 （1）活动目的 ①To help the students know more about plants, we decide to set up a Nature Club.为了帮助学生更多地了解植物，我们决定成立一个自然俱乐部。 ②To provide an opportunity to make friends, we decide to start a Football Club.为了提供一个交友的机会，我们决定成立一个足球俱乐部。 ③To improve reading and writing skills, a Book Lover Club was set up by our teacher.为了提高阅读和写作技能，我们的老师成立了一个爱书人俱乐部。 （2）活动计划 ①We'll have an outing to our school botanical garden and learn the diversity of plants. 我们会去学校的植物园郊游，了解植物的多样性。 ②Read a short story that we like every Saturday afternoon每周六下午读一个我们喜欢的短篇小说。 ③Meet on weekends to communicate with each other in English.周末见面，用英语互相交流。 ④Organize students to do some volunteer work.组织学生做一些志愿工作。 （3）宣传方式 ①Put up a notice on the school website to inform the ballet lovers of joining the club. 校网站上张贴通知，通知芭蕾舞爱好者加入俱乐部。 ②Make posters and put them up around the school.制作海报并在学校周围张贴。 【必背模板】 模板1 Dear ______, Having known with delight that ____________. I am writing to offer my proposals. First of all, I think the purpose of the club is to _________________. Besides, as for its activities, I think it should contain the following parts. It should offer ________________. There should also be ____________. By the way, club members should _________________Last but not least, various ways should be made the most of to _________________. At last ____________________________. Yours __________ 模板2 Proposal for a new club Club name：______________________________________________________________________ Club leader：_____________________________________________________________________ Meeting time：____________________________________________________________________ Club aim：_______________________________________________________________________ Club activities：___________________________________________________________________ Materials needed：_________________________________________________________________ Plan for finding new members：______________________________________________________ Signed：________________________________________________________________________ 【升级策略】 1. 一份好的提案应该注意把握三点： （1）提案一般由标题、正文、结尾三个部分组成，正文包括提案的类型、目的、活动计划、注意事项、宣传方式等； （2） 了使提案易于阅读，需要把不同类型的信息进行分类； （3）提案的语言表达要简短、真诚、正式；表达多使用祈使句和动词不定式等。 2. 写作流程图 说明写信目的 提案的类型、目的、活动计划、注意事项、宣传方式 提出建议 提出希望采纳建议，并表示谢意，盼望回复 为了丰富同学们的课外活动, 校学生会决定成立一个自行车俱乐部(Cycling Club), 现向全体学生征求建议。假如你是李华, 请根据以下提示, 用英语写一份关于自行车俱乐部的建议。 1. 自行车俱乐部的目的; 2. 俱乐部的主要活动内容: 每周一次的基础训练, 有教师辅导, 安排在课外体育活动时间; 3. 其他事项: 器材自备, 俱乐部的宣传等。 注意: 1. 建议应包括以上所有信息, 可适当发挥; 2. 词数80个左右。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 审题 1．文体：应用文-提案（建立俱乐部）。 2．时态：一般现在时和一般将来时为主。 3．人称：第一人称。 谋篇 第一段：建立俱乐部的目的。 第二段：主要活动的内容。 第三段：其他相关事项，祝愿和问候。 遣词造句 【核心词汇】 1.高兴地 __________ 2. 创立骑行俱乐部____________ 3．提供我的建议 ___________ 4. 保持健康 ________________ 5．放松自己 ________________ 6. 关于___________ 7. 如果有可能___________ 8.顺便说一下___________ 9. 充分利用___________ 10．帮助___________ 【连词成句】 I.完成句子that the Students’ Union 1. 很高兴得知学生会已经决定建立自行车俱乐部。 I know that the Students’ Union has decided to .   2. 我写信提出我的建议。 _____________________________.   3. 它应该每周提供一次基础培训。 It should once a week.   4. 基础培训将由老师指导。 The basic training .   5. 我们应该充分利用各种方式使所有学生了解我们的俱乐部。 We should to make our club known by all students.   【句式升级】 6. 用非谓语动词升级句1和句2 ___________________________________________________________________________________________ 7. 用定语从句升级句3和句4 ___________________________________________________________________________________________ 8. 用被动语态升级句5 ___________________________________________________________________________________________ 组句成篇 用适当的过渡词语，把以上词汇和句式，再加上联想内容，组成一篇80词左右的英语短文。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【第一部分 基础题】 ​​一、词性转换训练​​ （一）将下列动词转换为名词或形容词，用于提案句式： 1.propose→ (n.) ______ 2.improve → (n.) ______ （二）用括号内单词的正确形式填空： 1.The teacher ​​ (recommend) that students ​​(take)​​ notes during lectures. 2.It’s ​​ (essence) ​​ (balance) study and rest. ​​​二、句子仿写改写​​ ​​基础层​​：结构调整 1.原句：You should join the club. It helps you make friends. → 合并为复合句：______ → 用非谓语动词改写：______ 2.原句：I think you can practice more. → 转为委婉建议：______ ​​提分层​​：高阶句型 1.原句：You must finish the project on time. → 虚拟语气：______ → 倒装句：______ 2.原句：Reading widely is good. → 强调重要性：______ ​​三、翻译句子​​ ​​要求​​：用提案常用句式翻译，注意语气委婉。 1. 得知你想创建一个新的俱乐部, 我非常开心。 . 2. 我写信是为了提供我的建议, 因为你在寻求帮助来建立一个俱乐部。 . 3. 吸引更多的学生参加活动是很重要的。 . 4. 充分利用学校的资源是个好主意。 . 5. 俱乐部活动应仔细设计, 并为足够的材料需求做好充分的准备。 . 6. 我真诚地希望得到您的批准和指导，使这个想法成为现实。 . ​【第二部分 提升题】 1．假如你是国际部学生李华，你和同学们准备创建一个传统文化社团，请给校长 Mr. Mark写一封提案信，请求他的同意。 内容包括：1. 来信目的；2. 社团规划；3. 表达希望。 注意：1. 词数 80 左右；2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 Dear Mr. Mark, _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours truly, Li Hua 2．你代表学校参加青少年科技公益大赛，需以“A Small Invention, A Big Change!”为题，写一篇提案介绍你设计的作品，内容包括： 1. 设计意图； 2. 功能特点； 3. 公益价值。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 按如下格式作答，题目已为你写好。 A Small Invention, A Big Change! ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3. 假定你是李华，你校英文社团正面向社团成员征集“快乐周末 (Happy Weekend) ”的活动方案。请你给社团指导老师 Laura写一封提议信。 内容包括：1. 介绍你的方案； 2. 说明你的理由。 注意：1. 写作的词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Ms. Laura, ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best regards, Li Hua （2025·江苏南通·高三模拟预测）假定你是李华，为配合学校将于下月举办的科技节，你校英语报设置了“科技节献策”栏目。请你以“My Proposal for the Science and Technology Festival”为题写一篇短文投稿。内容包括： 1．你的献策； 2．献策理由。 注意： 1．写作词数应为80个左右； 2．请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 My Proposal for the Science and Technology Festival ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 7 / 7 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$