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2025年高考真题上海卷英语试题作文 Directions: Write an English composition in 120–150 words according to the instructions given below in Chinese. 人们常说“Don't be afraid of wetting your feet if you want to learn how to swim.” 请你结合自己的经历写出你对这句话的理解。 ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 题目分析 1.本次写作任务要求围绕“Don't be afraid of wetting your feet if you want to learn how to swim（想学会游泳，就别怕湿脚）”这一英文谚语展开写作，结合自身经历谈谈对这句话的理解。一种合理的方式是，采用议论加记叙结合的写法，既要解释这句话的含义（寓意为“要学会某项技能或取得进步，就必须勇敢尝试、迈出第一步”），又要通过具体的个人经历来支持这种理解，增强说服力。 2.从素材使用角度来看，大家需要关注句子中的关键词“wetting your feet”。如果没有描述挫折或失败的经历，就难以与该比喻的深层含义相契合。 3.另外，需要稍微提醒考生注意，写作时应注意内容积极向上，体现克服困难、主动实践、从错误中成长等主题。嘿嘿，千万不能理解成“常在河边走，哪有不湿鞋（If you often walk by the river, your shoes are bound to get wet.）”。 拆解题目 即：把"make your feet wet"湿脚和"swimming"具象化 首先：分析这两者之间的关系是什么？ swimming可以指具体的一件事，比如要实现的目标 feet wet是什么呢？ 首先，肯定是负面的。 逻辑关系就是：游泳肯定会湿脚，如果因为害怕湿脚，那就没办法游泳。这个湿脚往小了说，就是让你不舒服的点。往大了说，就是你战胜不了但又必须要克服的点。个人认为，这两个方向都可以。 由此：我们可以进行提炼：做(  A  )，肯定会(  B  )，如果害怕B,就没办法完成A. 例一 如果把"make your feet wet"比作 "face challenges" 那么"swimming"就是pursue dreams  换题：Don't be afraind to face challenges when you are pursuing dreams 提炼为：实现梦想的时候，肯定会遇到挑战，如果害怕挑战就没办法实现梦想。 例二 如果把"make your feet wet"比作"make mistakes" 那么"swimming"就是"learning" 换题：Don't be afraid to make mistakes when you are learning 提炼：学习的时候肯定会犯错，如果害怕犯错，就学不好。 例三 反向推理 "Don't be afraid to make your feet wet"也可以说成"have courage to overcome shortcomings like shyness" 那么"swimming"就是具体的某件事,比如演讲 换题：We must have courage to overcome shyness when delivering a speech 提炼：演讲的时候我们必须得克服害羞，否则就表现不好。 谋篇布局 1. 引言:引出谚语并点明核心观点(如“实践出真知”); 2. 主体:讲述个人经历，体现“克服恐惧、勇于尝试”的过程; 3. 结论:升华主题，总结谚语对人生的启示。 定体裁和主题 体裁：夹叙夹议 议论部分 - 阐述观点     记叙部分 - 具体事例 特别注意：写的时候，需要先讲清楚你对这句话的理解。 主题：励志成长类 组成部分：哲理解读+成长故事 写作示范1 Don’t Be Afraid to Try “Don’t be afraid of wetting your feet if you want to learn how to swim” means we must face challenges bravely if we want to grow. In Grade 10, I had to give a full English presentation about my hometown. I was excited at first, but when I practiced at home, I kept forgetting my lines and mispronouncing words. After several failed attempts, I felt frustrated and nearly gave up. I started to think maybe I just wasn’t good enough. But my English teacher, Miss Li, noticed my struggle and encouraged me. She reminded me that mistakes are a natural part of learning and that I should focus on progress rather than perfection. With her support, I practiced harder and eventually gave the presentation in class. It wasn’t perfect, but I did it and I was proud of myself. That experience taught me that, much like learning to swim, it’s hard to improve without struggling or making a few mistakes along the way. Don’t Be Afraid to Try-罗伦老师朗读,知诸英语 Spider English ,1分钟 写作亮点 1.“结合自身经历”中给出了必要的细节增加了故事的真实感。这些细节包括时间：In Grade 10  事件：full English presentation about my hometown  挫折：kept forgetting my lines and mispronouncing words  人物：I、my English teacher Miss Li  结局： It wasn’t perfect, but I did it。 2.文章末尾，杨老师特意再次提及出题人给出的谚语中的关键词swim，这样首尾呼应，通过在结尾回到文章开头的关键词 “swim”，使整篇文章形成一个闭环，增强了文章的整体感和结构美感。功利一点说，结尾再次点出关键词，能让阅卷老师感受到写作与题目是高度契合的。 词汇和表达积累 1. mispronounce v. 发音错误，读错 2. forget lines 忘词 3. failed attempts 失败的尝试 4. frustrated adj. 沮丧的，灰心的 5. struggle v. n. 挣扎；努力奋斗 6. perfection n. 完美；尽善尽美 写作示范2：      "Don't be afraid of wetting your feet if you want to learn how to swim." This saying summarizes a truth that extends far beyond the realm of swimming. It serves as a powerful reminder that true growth and learning often require us to step out of our comfort zones and embrace the unknown with courage.       I vividly recall my first attempt at learning to ride a bike. The mere sight of the two - wheeled vehicle filled me with fear. I was terrified of losing my balance, falling, and getting hurt. Every time I tried to pedal, my fear took control of me, and I would quickly put my feet down to stop myself. One day, my father, seeing my hesitation, came over and said, "You can't learn to ride if you're too afraid to even let the wheels turn. You have to be brave and keep trying." His words echoed the sentiment of the swimming quote. With a deep breath, I decided to face my fear. I started by pushing the bike along while walking beside it, getting a feel for its movement. Then, I sat on the seat and let my father hold the back of the bike as I pedaled. Slowly but surely, I began to get the hang of it. After numerous attempts and a few minor falls, I finally managed to ride the bike on my own for a short distance. The feeling of accomplishment was indescribable.       This experience taught me that fear is a natural emotion, but it should not be a barrier to learning and growth. Just like in swimming, where one must overcome the fear of getting wet and the unknown depths of the water, in life, we often need to take that first step into the unfamiliar. We have to be willing to "wet our feet." 写作示范3：         The proverb "Don't be afraid to make your feet wet when you  are swimming" powerfully conveys that true growth begins when we courageously step into unfamiliar territory. Rather than clinging to safety, we must embrace discomfort to unlock our potential.         I wholeheartedly endorse this philosophy. Three years ago, my fear of public speaking paralyzed me. When our debate coach announced an international competition, teammates hesitated, whispering "What if we embarrass ourselves?" Remembering this proverb, I volunteered as lead speaker. For weeks, I practiced daily—stumbling through speeches, refining arguments in front of mirrors, even recording my shaky voice. On competition day, standing before 400 people, my knees trembled like reeds. But as I delivered the opening line, confidence surged through me. Our team won silver medals, proving that diving into challenges > dry perfectionism.     This experience taught me that "wet feet" symbolize necessary vulnerability. Every great achievement starts with braving the unknown waters. Swim boldly—the ripples you create may become waves of change. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$