全国二卷-2025年高考英语真题作文深度点评与分析

2025年高考真题英语作文深度点评与分析 2025 年高考英语全国Ⅱ卷写作第一节以给外教写邮件询问稿件相关事宜为情境，要求学生给上个月答应写介绍加拿大体育运动文章的外教 Chris 写邮件，内容涵盖询问进展和提醒交稿日期，写作词数约 80。这道试题综合考查学生多项关键能力。从逻辑思维层面来看，学生需合理规划邮件内容结构，先礼貌询问稿件进展，再委婉提醒交稿日期，整个行文逻辑要清晰顺畅，使外教能快速把握重点，这要求学生具备良好的逻辑组织与构思能力。 在跨文化沟通方面，邮件作为与外教的交流载体，学生得充分考虑文化差异，运用符合英语文化习惯且得体礼貌的语言进行沟通，避免中式英语思维，精准传递自身关切之意，展现良好的跨文化交际素养，体现对不同文化背景的尊重。 于语言表达而言，学生需在有限字数内，精准运用英语词汇、语法，简洁明了又不失礼貌地表达询问与提醒，要妥善选择合适的词汇和句式结构，以达成良好的沟通效果，这对学生的英语语言运用精准度和熟练度是极大的考验。 总体而言，该作文题紧密贴合实际生活场景，聚焦学生逻辑思维、跨文化沟通及语言表达等综合能力考查，契合高考英语写作命题导向，旨在引导学生在真实情境中运用英语解决实际问题，提升综合语言运用能力，为学生未来跨文化交流奠定基础。 注意本次应用文写作的创新之处在于，它没有让考生生硬地写一封“催稿信”，而是要考生写一封“以询问进展为切入点的提醒信”。这就要求考生不仅要会写信，更要懂得沟通的艺术和策略。 假定你是李华，外教Chris上个月答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章，请你给他写一封邮件，内容包括： 1. 询问进展； 2. 提醒交稿日期。 注意： 1. 写作词数应为80左右； 2. 请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, _______________________________________________________________________________ _______________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Li Hua 根据题目和提纲要点“询问文章进度+提醒交稿时间”，可以看出，新高考Ⅱ卷作文本质上是在考察询问和提醒的交际场景。 核心要完成两项要点内容： 一是 “询问进度”，即了解外教撰写介绍加拿大体育运动文章的进展情况；二是 “提醒交稿日期”，要清晰、委婉地告知外教文章提交的截止时间，推动写作任务按计划完成 在写作时要清晰明了地表明自己想要了解什么，所咨询的问题不能侵犯对方的隐私或尊严，要体现社交礼仪中的礼貌、委婉、尊重和理解，语气要诚恳，不可使用带有生硬语气或命令口吻的词句。结尾一定要表示感谢并表达期待。。本题的难点在于要点背后的补充内容。 体裁：书信（工作沟通类 ），用于和外教沟通约稿进度，属于校园英文报编辑日常工作交流的应用文体裁。 内容：先表明身份（校英文报编辑李华 ）和写信目的（询问上月约稿介绍加拿大体育运动文章的进展 ）；接着说明刊物出版计划，用委婉表达 “could you please...” 提醒交稿时间（设定本周五，明确具体 ），并简单提及对方文章对刊物的积极作用（让报纸更有吸引力 ）；最后礼貌期待回复，符合邮件沟通逻辑与礼貌性。 语言：简洁清晰，用 “check the progress of...”“promised to write”“submit” 等约稿、编辑工作相关词汇，“make...more appealing” 等表达让沟通更得体，满足 80 词左右要求 。 写作思路--建议三段式 （1）首段：礼貌问候，引出话题 ①第一句问候：I hope this message finds you well.或者I hope you've been well. ②第二句表明来意，询问文章进展：I'm writing to enquire about... （2）正文： ①询问进度。表达对外教老师文章的期待：We are looking forward to...或者We are eager to...询问进展如何：I'm wondering if you could tell me...或者I would appreciate it if you could let me know... ②提醒交稿日期。明确指出截止时间submission deadline，给出善意的提醒friendly reminder。 （3）尾段：表达感谢与支持。 ①第一句再次感谢。 ②第二句竭尽所能提供支持。 开篇：自我介绍+写信意图——询问 1. I’m Li Hua, a high school student planning to participate in the English Speech Contest to be held next week. I am writing to enquire about further details about it. 我是高中生李华，计划参加下周即将举办的英语演讲比赛。我写信来咨询关于比赛的更多细节。 2. Quite interested in the position posted, I am writing to see if it is possible for you to provide me with specific information concerning /regarding it. 我对发布的岗位非常感兴趣，写信是看你是否可能为我提供有关它的具体信息。 3. I happened to come across your advertisement in the newspaper. I am wondering if it is convenient for you to keep me informed of something relevant about the summer camp. 碰巧我在报纸上看到这则广告。不知道您是否方便告知关于夏令营的相关信息。 4. I would be grateful/ I would appreciate it if you could offer more details (that) I specially need to pay attention to. 如您能告知其他如需注意事项，我将不胜感激。 5. It would be better if you could explain some confusing points in detail. 如果你能详细解释一些令人困惑的问题会更好。 正文：征询具体信息+原因+分条 1. To start with, could you please be so kind as to send me an application form and other materials necessary for my application? 首先，你能否寄给我一份申请表及与申请有关的其他必要的材料？ 2. As for the money you charge, another point I am not certain about is if it covers the admission fees for the places listed. 关于收费，我不确定的另一点是它是否包含所列地点的门票。 3. In addition, it is still unclear to me (I am still not sure about) how much I have to pay for the course and whether accommodation is included. 另外，我还不清楚需付多少学费，是否包括住宿。 4. Besides, is there anything that deserves special attention? 此外，有没有需要特别注意的事情？ 5. Lastly, I would be more than obliged if you could keep me informed of the procedures I have to go through so that I can make proper arrangements. 最后，如您能告知我那些必须经过的程序以便安排，我将不胜感激。 结尾：期待回复并表示感谢 1.  Thank you for your kindness, and your prompt attention and reply to this letter will be highly appreciated. 感谢您的善意，对于您及时的关注和回复这封信我将非常感激。 2. I am looking forward to your prompt/immediate/early reply. 期待尽早得到您的答复。 3. I would appreciate it if you could reply at your earliest convenience. 如果您能尽早回复，我会很感激。 4. Sorry to bother you. Your kind help would be greatly appreciated. 很抱歉打扰您，对您的友善帮助不胜感激。 5. I'd be grateful if you could provide me with the relevant information. 如果您能为我提供相关信息，我将不胜感激。 6. Your advice and recommendations will surely be of great help to me. 你的建议和推荐一定会对我大有帮助。 一、【2024年高考英语作文新课标Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷原题】 假定你是李华，你们班上周五在公园上了一节美术课，请给英国好友Chris写一封邮件分享你的经历，内容包括: 1.你的作品内容: 2.你的感想。 注意: 1.写作词数应为80个左右; 2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。 Dear Chris, I am writing to share with you an art class I had in the park last Friday. ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Best, Li Hua 二、从近三年的高考作文题分析命题趋势 年份 卷别 体裁 话题 主题语境内容 2025 新高考Ⅰ卷 建议信 学校生活 从给出的两个栏目做出选择并说明理由 2024 新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷 告知信 学校生活 介绍美术课的个人作品和感想 2023 新高考Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷 建议信 学校生活 给外教提建议 一、主题内容：聚焦校园生活，拓展多元视角 2023 - 2025年高考英语作文主题紧密围绕校园生活，但展现多元视角。2025 年Ⅱ卷建议信以班级英语报增设栏目为情境，要求从两个选项中抉择并说明理由，既考查学生对校园媒体建设的思考，又引导其权衡不同活动板块的价值，三者均以校园生活为核心，从教学优化、个人成长到文化活动建设，逐步拓展校园生活内涵。2024年Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷 告知信聚焦美术课个人作品及感想，关注学生艺术素养、个性发展，引导学生表达对校园文化活动的体验。2023年Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷建议信要求学生给外教提建议，涉及教学活动优化等内容，侧重学生对校园教学的主动思考与反馈。 《新课标》中对应用文写作的六个考核点全部覆盖，但是侧重于描述人或事、阐述观点和表达情感态度，这是与着重培养学生思维品质分不开的。其次，热点话题非考查重点。近三年不同类型的试题考查内容并非当年的热点话题，而是着重于学生德智体美劳的培养，着重于培养学生“用英语做事”的能力。此外，体裁考查较为稳定。近三年的体裁基本稳定在投稿、报道、邀请信和电子邮件，尤其是投稿和报道居多，考生的写作对象就更为宽泛。最后，凸显情境化、实用化。所有考题都设置了真实的情境，考查学生在不同情境下使用语言的得体性。近三年的全国Ⅰ、Ⅱ卷尤其注重考查学生解决在校的实际问题。 二、命题导向：素养培育为核，提升综合能力 2023 - 2025 年高考英语作文命题坚持立德树人根本任务，以培育学生核心素养为导向。2023 年建议信考查学生对教学活动的思考与反馈能力，引导其积极参与校园教学优化。2024 年告知信关注学生艺术素养和创造力，鼓励其分享个人艺术体验，提升审美与表达能力。2025 年建议信则要求学生权衡栏目价值，锻炼批判性思维与决策能力，同时激发学生对校园文化建设的思考。这种命题导向强调学生素养的全面培育，使其在掌握英语知识与技能的基础上，具备批判性思维、创造力和文化意识等综合素养，以适应未来社会需求。 高考英语应用文写作是考查学生综合语言运用能力的重要部分，尤其是全国Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷的命题趋势，越来越注重对学生核心素养的考查。以下是针对历年高考英语全国Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷应用文写作的备考建议，从作文话题选材和不同体裁的高效训练两个方面展开。 一）应用文写作的话题选材 （一）紧扣高考评价体系的核心目标 高考评价体系强调“立德树人”的根本任务，要求作文话题选材体现德育、智育、体育、美育和劳动教育的主题。例如，2024年1月浙江卷的应用文写作要求学生向校报推荐一项课间运动，这不仅考查了学生对体育运动的了解，还引导他们关注健康生活，体现了体育教育的主题。在备考中，教师应引导学生关注这些主题，通过写作任务让学生在语言表达中体现正确的价值观。 （二）贴合学生学习生活的真实情境 历年高考英语全国Ⅰ/Ⅱ卷的写作题目常常结合学生的真实生活情境，要求学生在中西方文化交际背景下完成写作。比如2019年全国卷III要求学生写一封邮件邀请英国朋友参加学校音乐节，这不仅考查了学生撰写邀请信的能力，还要求他们考虑到跨文化交流的因素，体现出对不同文化的理解和尊重。教师在备考时可以设计类似的情境写作任务，让学生在真实情境中锻炼写作能力。 (二)不同体裁的高效训练 一）全方位多体裁的应用文写作教学 全国卷1的写作题型多样，包括书信、通知、报道、发言稿等。教师在日常教学中不能只局限于书信体的训练，而应设计同一话题不同体裁的写作任务，优化作文课堂教学。例如，可以围绕“环境保护”这一主题，分别设计书信、倡议书、演讲稿等不同体裁的写作练习，让学生在不同体裁中灵活运用语言，提升写作能力。 二）注重写作技巧的指导 在备考过程中，教师需要对学生进行写作技巧的指导。例如，指导学生如何使用高级词汇和复杂句型来提升文章质量，如何通过信号词使文章逻辑清晰。同时，教师还应引导学生关注写作格式的规范性，如书信的格式、通知的结构等。通过这些技巧的训练，学生可以在有限的时间内写出高质量的作文。 三）强化思维训练 高考应用文写作的开放性越来越强，要求学生具备较强的思维能力。教师可以通过设计开放性写作任务，如让学生写一篇关于“失败的教训”的短文，来培养学生的思维品质和价值观念。这种训练不仅有助于学生应对高考写作，还能提升他们的综合素质。 1.邀请信 邀请信多为宴会，比赛，展览等活动的邀请信件，要求叙事清楚明白。其主要包含三个方面的内容：1. 表明意图，即邀请对方参加活动以及邀请对方的原因；2. 介绍活动的相关具体内容；3. 期待对方接受邀请 1. 开篇表明写信目的及原因 1) As a student who admires you, I am writing this letter to invite you to go to … on …. 2) Hearing that my school is scheduled to hold a …, I’m writing to sincerely invite you to participate in this event. 3) Knowing that you have a fancy for / you are keen on …, I would like to invite you to come to … (活动), (which … / whose theme is …) (如有需要，后面可用定语从句对活动进行补充说明) 4) On behalf of …, I ‘m writing to invite you to be a judge at our … 5) I’m more than delighted to write to sincerely invite you to … … 2. 说明活动的时间，地点以及内容等信息 1) This … will take place /will be held / started + 时间 + 地点, (which will last about …) 2) The … will celebrate + 活动 + 地点 + 日期 (and it is expected to last from … to …) 3) … will fall on January 8th, and that day is next Wednesday when you can come to … 4) During the visit, we will learn abundant information about … 5) We’ll be having a … after which we are to … 6) What’s more, we will have a chance to appreciate …, which is a very good chance to … (获得的好处或能学习到的内容). 7) This activity is greatly important /of great importance, through which you can know more about … (与活动相关的内容) 8) Various activities are available in adding flavor to the … Everything will overflow with happiness then. 9) I believe it will be an enjoyable experience for you to learn … And I bet you will be impressed by … 10) it would be a great pleasure for me to keep you company. … 3. 最后表达期待 1) I will be grateful if you take my invitation seriously. 2) I know you’re interested in … , so why not join us and have a good time? 3) I strongly hope you can have a try and the … will never disappoint you. 4) (I sincerely hope you can spare some time and) I would appreciate it if you could accept my invitation. (Thank you in advance and wish you all the best.) 5) I would appreciate it if you could confirm your participation at your earliest convenience. 6) I hope you will accept my invitation if it is convenient for you. 7) Should you go (如果你去的话), I will book a ticket for you in advance / I will pick you up at … 8) Will you be available during that time? Please contact me at … at your earliest convenience. … 2.申请信 申请信用于向单位或组织提出请求或申请。申请信语气要诚挚友好，其写作步骤为：1. 介绍自己，简要说明信息来源并提出申请；2. 突出自己的特点，具体说明胜任的理由；3. 请求给予机会，期望尽快回复。 1. 首段介绍及提出申请 1) Hearing you are looking for volunteers for the coming …, I can’t wait to write to apply to be a volunteer. 2) I’m more than happy to learn from … (信息来源) that … And I’m anxious for the chance. 3) I’m glad to see your advertisement on the internet. Willing to be …, I’m writing to apply for the position. 4) Knowing from … that you are recruiting …, I’m writing to apply for the very position. 5) I am writing to apply to join in your …, as the idea is appealing to me. … 2. 说明自己的优势或能胜任的理由 1) I am sure I can be a qualified member. 2) Equipped with …, I have enough confidence in applying for the position. 3) I believe I am equal to the job. Not only can I …, but I also have ample faith in my competence in …, (which may be a satisfying advantage over others.) 4) I am familiar with computer operation and office software, which can help me do / enable me to do the office work very well. 5) I have been learning English for 10 years, and I speak fluent English / I can speak English with great fluency / my oral English is good enough to communicate with foreigners fluently. 6) I have a good knowledge of … Apart from that, I am an expert at … 7) For one thing, I do well in … For another, I took part in many … in which I performed well and gained rich experience. 8) My interest and skill in …contributes to my application for a volunteer. 9) Having been learning for …, I have a good command of … 10) I have participated in several similar activities, which equipped me with relevant experience / skills. 11) Therefore, I think / an convinced I’m qualified to serve in the … … 3. 请求给予机会 1) I would greatly appreciate it if you could offer me a precious opportunity to an interview. / my application could meet with your approval. 2) I would be very grateful / obliged if you could send me more information about the post available. 3) Would you please send me the necessary application forms and any further details about …? 4) I sincerely hope that my application could be considered. 5) I really want to obtain this precious opportunity. 6) Thank you for considering my application and I am looking forward to hearing from you. 7) If you require more information, please feel free to contact me. 8) If I am accepted, I will act as a bridge between … and spare no efforts to … 9) With the experience I’ve accumulated, I am confident to live up to your expectations. … 3.求助信 求助信是当个人遇到一些自己无法解决的问题或困难时向别人请求帮助的一种书信，内容通常包括：1. 表明写信目的，请求帮助；2. 清晰陈述请求帮助的内容；3. 希望得到帮助，并向收信人表示感谢。 1. 简单自我介绍；表明写信目的 1) I’m writing this letter to ask you to do me a favor / give me a hand. 2) Sorry to bother you but I really get some trouble / problems recently. 3) Faced with / facing so much difficulty, I have to ask you for some help. 4) As I’ve gained an opportunity to … / Having acquired a precious chance to …, I’m writing to ask for your assistance / seek for your advice. 5) I hope you will not mind me writing to ask if you are available to offer me some guidance, as … … 2. 陈述请求帮助的内容 1) I face the choice between … and … 2) I’m facing three problems which trouble me a lot. To begin with, … What’s more / worse / Worse still, … What troubles me most is … 3) Ever since last month, my mother hasn’t allowed me to … In her opinion, … However, I don’t agree with her. … 4) Last …, I have an argument with my best friend and we haven’t talked to each other since then. 5) Recently, I … (最近在做的事儿). Finding it … (事情的特点，可好可坏；如果是好的特点，可以在句中加入 however), I am having problems with …, (which makes me feel anxious.) 6) … (陈述情况). So, I’m wondering whether you could … (提出具体需要的帮助) 7) I hope you could spare me some time to … And some guidance on … is badly needed as well. 8) This being my first time to … I am so excited and nervous that I can’t take all things into account. Thus, if you would give me some suggestions on …, I would appreciate it deeply. 9) Faced with this situation, what should I do? … 3. 希望得到帮助 1) Faced with the above problems, I am anxious / longing / desperate for your help. Would you please offer me some advice on …? 2) I wonder if you can help me with these difficulties. I really appreciate it if you could help me. 3) I would appreciate it if you could offer me a hand. 4) No words are strong enough to convey my appreciation if you could offer me a hand. 5) Thanks for your kind consideration and I am looking forward to receiving your earliest reply. 6) Thanks for your attention to these requests. If you have any questions, do not hesitate to contact me. I am looking forward to a favorable reply. 7) I would be grateful if you could help me solve my problem. Your early reply will be highly appreciated. 8) I will be more than happy if you can come to my aid. Your timely help will be highly appreciated. … 4.建议信 建议信是写信人向收信人对某事提出建议和忠告的一种应用文形式，有可能是写给个人，就其遇到的某个问题提出自己的看法和观点；也可能是写给某个组织或机构，就改进其服务提出建议或忠告。建议信要交代清楚写信的原因，建议的内容，提出建议的理由 (提出的理由要合情合理，用语礼貌)。建议信要写的简明扼要，目的明确，具有合理性和说服力。 1. 首段：表明写作意图：(简单介绍自己) 陈述事由 1) I’m very glad to have received your e-mail. Now I’m writing to give you some advice on … 2) I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble … Such problems are quite normal. Perhaps the following suggestions are helpful. 3) You have asked me for my advice with regard to …, and I will try to make some suggestions here. 4) I’m writing to express my views concerning … / convey my concern about … 5) In response to your letter telling me / saying you hope to …, I have some ideas for you. 6) I’m sorry to hear you’re having difficulty / trouble in …; I’m only too willing to help you and my tips are as follows. … 2. 主体：在肯定对方优点的基础上提出需要改进的地方，或针对具体情况提出具体建议或忠告。 1) I fell that it would be beneficial if … 2) I highly recommended that … 3) I think the most suitable … for you is …, so that … 4) Doing … (方法) means … (好处) 5) It is also a good idea to … 6) It is advisable that … 7) It is strongly advised / suggested that … Thus, … 8) If I were you, I would … 9) I will be more than happy to see improvements in this regard. … 3. 尾段：对提出的建议进行总结，要注意用语礼貌，使对方容易接受。 1) I believe you will take my advice into account / you will take account of my suggestions. 2) I hope you will find these suggestions / recommendations practical / useful / helpful. 3) I sincerely hope my advice will be of some help / use to you. If there is more that I can do to help, please don’t hesitate to let me know. 4) I would be willing to discuss this matter with you to further details. … 旅游参观类 单词： Accommodation (n.) 住宿 Arrange (v.) 安排 —— arrangement (n.) Book in advance / reserve (v.) 预定 Convenient (adj.) 方便的 —— convenience (n.) Delay (v.) 延迟 Destination (n.) 目的地 Journey / tour (n.) 旅行 Voyage (n.) 航行 License (n.) 驾照 Schedule (n.) 日程表 Transport (n.) 运输，交通 Pack (v.) 收拾行李 Scenery / view (n.) 景色 Landscape (n.) 山水 Impressive (adj.) 令人赞叹的 Breathtaking (adj.) 令人惊叹的 Picturesque (adj.) 风景如画的 Mountainous (adj.) 多山的 … 词语 A tourist attraction / a scenic spot 旅游景点 A place of interest 名胜古迹 A must-see place 必游之地 A summer resort 避暑胜地 Be on vocation 度假 Be / get stuck / trapped in traffic jams / be held up in traffic 陷入交通堵塞 Be fascinated / struck by 被 … 迷住 Have a good view of … 一览无余 Beyond description / expression 难以形容 Catch / attract / draw one’s eye / attention 吸引某人的注意力 Broaden / widen one’s horizon / enrich one’s knowledge 开拓视野 / 丰富知识 Check in / out 登记入住 / 退房 A travel agency / brochure / journal 旅行社 / 指南 / 日志 … 句子 1. I recommend the capital city, Beijing, to you, for it is an amazing city with a long history and a variety of places of interest. 2. You may first go to …, where many tourists admire … 3. The next place that you can’t miss Is …, which is one of the great wonders in the world. 4. The … and … are well worth visiting, too. / The … and … are a must, as well. 5. Besides, the local snacks will surely be appealing to you. 6. It’s neither too hot nor too cold in …. Bringing some light summer clothes will do. 7. As for …, people here are used to … 8. …is located in the … and has a reputation of “…” since ancient times. 9. It covers an area of … with many beautiful scenery spots here. 10. With breathtaking scenery as well as …, it is certainly your top choice. 11. I advise that you illustrate the theme from three aspects —— ancient architecture, exotic food and traditional culture in …. 12. What distinguishes … from others is its … / that … … 与人相处 单词： Argue (v.) 争论 —— argument (n.) Blame (v.) 指责 Bother (v.) 打扰，麻烦 Interrupt (v.) 打断 Cheat (v.) 欺骗 Complain (v.) 抱怨 Forgive (v.) 原谅 —— forgiveness (n.) Harmony (n.) 和谐 —— harmonious (adj.) Misunderstand (v.) 误解 —— misunderstanding (n.) … 短语 Apologize / make an apology to sb. for doing … 因某事向某人道歉 Believe in each other 彼此信任 Exchange ideas / emotions / information 交流思想 / 情感 / 信息 Get on (well) with … 与 … 相处 (融洽) Have a lot in common with … 与 … 有许多共同之处 Help sb. out 帮助某人摆脱困境 Keep / break one’s promise 遵守 / 违背诺言 Keep sb. company 陪伴某人 Promote / strengthen / treasure friendship 增进 / 加强 / 珍惜友谊 Put up with 忍受 Share joys and sorrows 同甘共苦 Turn to sb. for help 向某人求助 … 句子 1. You’d better find out what got you into such a mess, and then turn to … for advice. 2. Why not open your mind to communicate with your friends frankly? 3. It’s wise to be ready to help your friends and the people around you. 4. In this way, you can not only win back your old friends but also make some new ones. 5. But then I thought of things from their point of view. 6. Just as the saying goes, “One tree doesn’t make a forest.” Our success is based on cooperation with others. 7. … 语言学习 Accent (n.) 口音 Pronounce 发音 —— pronunciation (n.) Vocabulary (n.) 词汇 Saying / proverb (n.) 谚语 Idiom (n.) 习语 Accurate (adj.) 准确的 —— accuracy (n.) Efficient (adj.) 有效率的 Fluent (adj.) 流利的 —— fluency (n.) Express (v.) 表达 —— expression (n.) Translate (v.) 翻译 —— translation (n.) Accumulate (v.) 积累 Grasp 领会，掌握 Master 精通，掌握 … 短语 Attach importance to … / take … seriously 重视 Be afraid of making mistakes / errors 害怕出错 Be aware of the importance of lifelong learning 意识到终身学习的重要性 Enlarge one’s vocabulary 扩大某人词汇量 Express oneself in … fluently 用 … 流利地表达自己 Give sb. some advice / tips on how to learn … well 就如何学好 … 给出建议 Go over / review lessons 复习 Prepare for / preview lessons 预习 Keep / bear … in mind / learn … by heart 记住 Make full use of / make the best of / make the most of … 充分利用 … A native language / mother tongue 母语 … 句型 1. There is no doubt that keeping an English diary helps you a lot with your written English. 2. You are supposed to adopt a variety of / various strategies to memorize English words. 3. Here are several tips on how to learn English well. Firstly, you should spare no effort to read interesting English news, which can help you develop your interest in English. 4. As we know, language learning is never an easy task, but needs painstaking efforts and patience. 5. Personally, I think you’d better pay close attention to the formal use of Chinese words and expressions, which really counts. 6. You may as well watch more … materials as much as you can afford. 7. Language class can provide an environment where you can practice under the guidance of someone who’s good at language. … 5. 道歉信 道歉信是指因过失或疏忽做错了事，或无法答应对方所请所托，给予对方赔礼道歉并请求对方原谅的信件。步骤如下：1. 表明写信意图，对某事表示歉意；2. 说明道歉的具体原因；3. 提供补救措施，请求收信人原谅 4. 表明写作意图 1) I am writing this letter to apologize for the mistake I made in … 2) I express my regret at being unable to … 3) I am indeed very sorry for what I did / said, but please believe I had no intention to … 4) Much to my regret / I am terribly sorry that I am unable to … 5) I’m writing this letter to make an apology to you because I can’t go to … as planned. 6) I’m deeply sorry but I have to let you know that … 7) I’m expressing my deepest apology for my carelessness. 8) I writing to ask you to excuse me for not being able to keep our appointment. 9) I do know that this is very impolite and must have caused you much trouble. 10) I feel extremely sorry that I have to be absent from …, which I once promised for special reasons. … 5. 说明具体原因 1) 无法参加某活动或不能赴约等 ① 临时有事不能参加 (通知考试 / 家人回国需要接机 / …) (强调事件对自己的重要性) i. It is mainly because at that time I will be fully occupied by …, which is quite out of my expectation, and that conflicts with … ii. I am forced to adjust my schedule and can’t make presence on … iii. This morning my English teacher told me that I was chosen to represent our school to take part in the … As you know, I like … very much, and therefore I treasure this chance a lot. / it is of crucial significance to me iv. My uncle is returning home from France, and I have to pick him up at the airport at … tomorrow afternoon (时间可根据要求调整) ② 自己生病 (比较严重，医生嘱咐要休息几天) (强调具体症状及医生嘱咐) ③ 家人生病 (一位家人生病，其余家人忙于工作或出差不在家等) (强调自己别无选择) i. But now, much to my regret that I may not be able to keep my promise because my sister was injured in a car accident. ii. I must look after her in the hospital for several days given that all my family are now busy dealing with the accident which happened suddenly. ④ 其他人生病 (自己送病人去医院，用于过去的事件) (自己需要代替病人完成某事，用于未发生事件) i. But the person who was originally appointed to it is now seriously ill in hospital. ii. I have been asked to take his / her place to attend the … iii. I do reckon that at present any explanation is pale and futile. However, on my way to meet you, an old lady suddenly fainted due to heart attack on the bus. iv. I sent her into a nearby hospital and stayed there until her son came, which spoiled our appointment. 2) 打坏物品或弄丢东西 ① 因为想要清理 / 仔细观看等原因不小心摔坏 Eg. I occasionally found the face of the … was dirty when sweeping the floor, so I took it down and clean it with a piece of soft cloth. Unexpectedly, when I put it back where it was, it fell off and dropped onto the ground. ② 由于着急忘在别处，且无法找回 Eg. I like it so much that I took it wherever I went. Unfortunately, the other day during the trip to … I was in such a hurry to get off the train that I forgot to put it back in my bag. ③ 小心放置，但被偷，且无法找回 Eg. I put it in my school bag after we met yesterday. But it is sad that it was stolen on my way home. I tried to get it back but failed. How angry and guilty I felt! 3) 其他 Owing to …, I’m unable to spare time to … as scheduled. The reason why I can’t keep my promise is that … What troubles me is that … which led to my absence. It’s a pity that … As a result, I have no choice but to … … 6. 提供补救措施，寻求原谅 1) By the way, can we have dinner together some time next week? 2) Is it possible that I make up the loss by …? If so, I will … 3) Maybe we can fix another time to … as long as you are available. 4) Please accept my sincere apology from my bottom of my heart. 5) Will you be available on … or you can tell me when it is convenient for you. 6) I promise that I will tighten my belt these days to get you a completely new one by the end of this month. 7) I am really sorry for all the trouble and inconvenience I have caused. … 6.感谢信 感谢信是指在日常学习和生活中，当接受馈赠，邀请，照顾，慰问，祝贺后，给对方道谢的信件。感谢信应写的真诚，具体，及时。内容通常包括：1. 表明写信原因；2. 给出感谢的原因和细节；3. 再次致谢。 1. 表明写信原因 1) I’m writing to extend / express / convey my sincere / heartfelt gratitude for … (感谢的原因) 2) I’m writing to tell you that … Thanks to your …, I … 3) I’m writing this letter to thank you for … 4) I’d like to take this opportunity to express my great appreciation for your timely help and assistance. 5) I owe you a great deal for … … 2.感谢的原因及细节 1) If it had not been your assistance in … (对方给予的具体帮助), I fear that I would have … (没有对方帮助的后果). 2) But for / Without your help / guidance, I wouldn’t have made such progress. 3) Every one agrees that it was you who … (给出帮助细节) 4) It was your help that … (强调句) 5) Honestly speaking, but for your help, I wouldn’t have made such progress in … With your help, I … (取得的具体成就) 6) You always do what you can to help others regardless of rewards. 7) Under your professional guide, … 8) Besides, you …, which helped me … 9) The most touching and warmest experience was … 10) Thank you very much for your kind hospitality and the honor you showed me during my visit. 11) It was kind and generous of you to do this for me, and I appreciate it more than I can say. … 3. 再次致谢，表达祝愿 1) Many thanks for your kindness and hospitality / time and support. 2) My appreciation to you for your generous help is beyond my words. I wish I could repay it someday. 3) Words fail me when I want to express my gratitude to you. 4) I wish to express my profound appreciation for … 5) I hope someday you will come to … and I shall return your kindness. 6) I can’t thank you more, and I hope in the near future you’d like to visit … Then, I will try my best to pay you back. 7) Nothing could ever return the favor you gave me. 8) My true gratitude is beyond the world’s description. 9) I feel deeply indebted to you and I really do not know how to thank you enough for your help. 7.投诉信 写投诉信的目的是请求帮助解决问题，比如消费利益受损，正常生活和工作受到干扰等。投诉信的写信步骤为：1. 自我介绍，交代投诉内容，表明写信目的；2. 说明情况，分析利弊，告诉对方你因此收到的伤害或遭受的麻烦，提出解决问题的建议；3. 表达希望问题得到迅速恰当的解决。 1. 表明写信目的，交代投诉内容 1) I am writing to you to complain about … 2) I want to express my dissatisfaction with … 3) I hate to bring this up but … / I really hate to complain but one thing is really disturbing now. 4) I feel bad to trouble you but I am afraid that I have to make a complaint about … 5) I was a passenger / customer of … I’m writing to make a complaint about the service / product I received, and ask for reasonable compensation. 6) I’m writing to bring your attention to an unpleasant experience I had in your … … 2. 说明情况，提出解决方案 1) I enjoyed …, but the … drove me mad. 2) … can’t meet with my demands. 3) What also disappointed me was that … 4) The reason for my dissatisfaction is … In the first place, … In addition, … Under these circumstances, I find it … (感觉) to … (不好的情况所带来的后果) 5) Not only was the … (产品等) severely damaged / extremely overpriced (出现的问题), but the quality was far from / anything but satisfactory (出现的另一个问题) 6) Much to my appointment, … What’s worse / worse still / to make matters worse, … 7) Now, this problem keeps worrying me. 8) … brings me much inconvenience, actually spoiling my good mood. 9) Being unreasonably high in price and of low quality, … is far from satisfactory. 10) I think it’s high time that you realized … 11) To improve the situation, you can take the following measures. 12) I would appreciate it if you could … (提出建议或要求), preferably … (进一步的要求). 13) It’s reasonable for me to expect some compensation for your failure to observe this regulation. 14) I am sorry to have received such poor service, and I believe I have the very right to ask you to deal with this problem. 15) I wonder whether or not you can … 16) I hope you can either … (return the money) or … (send me a new one) … 3. 希望问题能够得到解决 1) And I would like to have this matter settled by … (设定解决问题的最后日期) 2) I’d like to be informed of the process of your dealing with my complaint. 3) I hope you will give due attention to my problem. 4) It would be appreciated if you can take my complaints seriously, and make every effort to improve your service in the future. 5) Thanks for your consideration and I am looking forward to your reply. … 8.慰问信 慰问信是向对方表示关怀或慰问的信函。写作步骤：1. 引出事实，表达同情；2. 安慰并鼓励对方；3. 提供帮助；4. 表达祝愿 1. 引出事实 1) I just cannot tell you how sorry I was to learn of your accident. 2) It was such a shock to hear that you were in an accident. 3) We are awfully sorry to hear the news about … 4) I quiet understand how you feel now. 5) It broken my heart to know … 6) I’m anxious to know whether you are feeling any better now. … 2. 安慰鼓励，提供帮助 1) Don’t worry about your study. We will help you catch up as soon as you are out of hospital. 2) Thinking about your present situation, we cannot wait a minute to help you. 3) We have made a donation of … to you, hoping / expecting that it can help you go through the difficulties. 4) I am sure you will easily succeed next time. 5) I am convinced that you will overcome the difficulty and have a better … 6) Don’t lose heart and cheer up! … 3. 表达祝愿 1) I want to send you my best wishes for your quick recovery. 2) I do hope you’re picking up soon. 3) Remember we won’t be far away when you need any help. … 9.演讲稿 1、首段常用语 ① I am honored to have a chance to speak to you today.今天我很荣幸有机会给大家做演讲 。 ② My name is ... Today I am very glad to have the opportunity to make this presentation. I  shall be talking bout ...我是......，今天很高兴能有机会做这个演讲。我演讲的内容是...... ③ It's my honour to stand here and say something about ...我很荣幸能站在这里谈谈...... 2、主体部分常用语 ① We are very proud of ourselves, believing we can make more contributions to a better world.我们为自己感到自豪，相信我们会为一个更加美好的世界做出更大的贡献。 ② It is a pity that many people don't realize the importance of ... 遗憾的是，很多人意识不到......的重要性。③ As is known to us all, failure is the mother of success, but few people can really understand what the saying means.众所周知，失败是成功之母，但是很少有人能真正理解这句格言的真谛。 3、结尾常用语 ① That's all I want to say about this point. 关于这一点，我就讲这些。 ② Thanks for your listening (to my speech)!感谢大家倾听（我的演讲）！ 10.通知 1、首段常用语 1.An activity , whose theme is protecting the environment / with the theme of protecting the environment , will be held by the school .学校将举办了一场以保护环境为主题的活动。 2.An English writing competition will be held by our school next month aiming at inspiring students’ enthusiasm in English learning.为了提升同学们对英语学习的热情,我校将于下个月举行一场英语写作比赛。  3.The school sports meeting, which is supposed to be held next Friday , is put off due to the coming bad weather. 由于即将到来的恶劣天气,原定于下周五举行的校运动会推迟了。 4.The Summer Camp, scheduled from July 15th to July 30th, is intended to attract those who have a special interest in Chinese traditional culture. 定于月15日30日行的夏是为了吸引那些对中国传统文化有着特别兴趣的人。 5.I have the honor of announcing that... 我很荣幸地宣布...... 6.May I have your attention, please? I have an announcement to make. 请注意，我有一个通知要宣布。 2、主体部分常用语 1.The competition will be made up of two parts, both of which are strictly designed and judged by professional judges. 比赛由两个环节组成,每个环节都是由专业的评委严格设计并进行评判。     2.The party consists of four parts, ranging from...to.... 晚会由四部分组成，从......到......。 3.Weather permitting, the sports meeting will be held next Saturday morning. 如果天气允许的话，运动会将于下周六上午举行。 4.As long as you have a gift for basketball, there is a stage here for you to show yourself.  只要你有篮球天赋,这里就有一个给你展现自我的舞台。 5.We should get fully prepared for...in order to... 为了......我们应该为......做充分的准备。 6. There are varieties of out-of-class activities in our school, which we can take part in after class . 在我们学校有各种各样的课外活动，我们课后可以参加。 7. Only by reading widely can we gain more knowledge and broaden our horizons. 只有博览群书我们才能增长知识开阔视野。 8. We should take every possible opportunity to acquire more useful knowledge and get fully developed. 我们应利用一切可以利用的机会获取更多的知识并得到全面的发展。 9.A lecture on global weather by Professor Lee from Peking University is going to be held in our school this Saturday  morning. 本周六上午，北京大学的李教授将在我们学校进行一次关于全球气候的演讲。 3、结尾常用语 1.If you are have a great passion for it, please sign up on the appointed website before next Monday. 如果你感兴趣，请于下周一之前到指定的网上报名。 2.Please be free to consult your teacher if you have any questions. 如果你有任何疑问，请随时向你的老师咨询。 3.Make sure that you come on time and don't be late. 务必准时到达，不要迟到。 4.To promote students’ sports spirits and physical health, we strongly propose that all the students take an active part in it. 为了培养同学们的体育精神和改善身体健康状况，我们强烈建议所有学生都积极参与其中。 11.新闻报道 1、首段常用语 ① In order to enrich our school life, our school organized ...为了丰富我们的校园生活，我们学校组织了...... ② Recently the issue/problem of ... has been brought into focus/brought into public attention/concern. 最近 ...... 的问题已成为焦点/引起了公众的注意/关注。 2、主体部分常用语 ① As scheduled, the activity started at 8 o'clock on Saturday morning and it lasted for three hours.活动如期于周六上午8点举行，持续3个小时。 ② The activity was so popular with ... that it attracted hundreds of them. 这个活动在......中很受欢迎，吸引了数百人。 3、结尾常用语 ① In a word/To draw a conclusion, I believe we will ...总之，我相信我们将...... ② Undoubtedly, this event can not only enrich our ..., but also offer us opportunities to ... 毫无疑问， 这次活动不仅可以丰富我们的......，还给我们提供......的机会。 12.说明文 模板01（主题型） ①________ is a most effective _______to _______.    ②For most people, it’s almost impossible to ______. ③________is really _________.④With the functions of _______,it enables us to _______.⑤It can even ______. ⑥Just imagine, all this can be done with _______.    ⑦A convenient tool can certainly make _______, but it doesn’t always help _______.⑧Too much _________.⑨Too many ________.⑩Relying too much on _______ makes ________.   模板02（说明原因型） 　　Nowadays, there are more and morein some big cities. It is estimated that ____________________.（用具体数据说明某现象） 　　Why have there been so many? Maybe the reasons can be listed as follows. The first reason is that __________________.（原因一）Besides, __________________.（原因二）The third reason is __________________.（原因三）To sum up, the main cause of is due to__________________ .（指出主要原因） 　　It is high time that something should be done. For one thing,_____________.（解决建议一） For another thing,. All these measures will certainly __________________.（解决建议二） 模板03（描述事物型） 　　What I have known about is that _________________.（具体描述某事物） 　　Firstly,__________________.（描述要点一）__________________.（具体阐述要点一）Secondly, __________________.（描述要点二）（具体阐述要点二）__________________. As a college student, __________________.（结合自身描述要点三） All in all,__________________.（做出总结）Therefore, we should __________________.（提出建议） 模板04（问题解决型） 　　In recent days, there has been a problem, which is becoming more and more serious.（说明问题及其现状）First, __________________. Second, __________________.（进一步阐释现状） 　　We should take a series of effective measures to cope with the situation. For one thing, ________. For another thing, ________. Finally, ________.（列举解决该问题的方法） Personally, I believe that ________/Consequently, I’m confident that a bright future is awaiting us because ________.（结尾段，指出＂我＂的信心及理由） 模板05（说明利弊题型）  Nowadays, many people prefer A because it is playing a more and more important role in our daily life. Generally/Generally speaking/On the whole, its advantages can be seen as follows./it has the following advantages. First of all, _________________ (A的优点之一). Besides,/What’s more, _________________A的优点之二）.   However, every coin has two sides./Everything has both advantages and disadvantages. The negative aspects are also apparent./Its disadvantages are also obvious. One of the important disadvantages is that _________________ (A的第一个缺点)．To make matters worse,/To make the matter worse,/To make things worse/What’s worse, _________________(A的第二个缺点)．   Through the above analysis, I believe that the positive aspects overweigh the negative ones./The above analysis shows us that it has more advantages than disadvantages. Therefore, I would like to _________________ (我的看法)．   (From the comparison between these positive and negative effects of A, we should take it reasonably and do it according to the circumstances we are in. Only in this way can we_________________(对前景的预测)．) 13.议论文——正反观点型 1．导入主题 There is a widespread concern over the issue that        (某个主题，需以句子形式呈现)．But it is well known that the opinions concerning this hot topic vary from person to person. 2．正方观点 A majority of people approve of the opinion that        (正方观点)．From their point of view，there are two factors contributing to this attitude，which are as follows：in the first place，        (原因一)．Furthermore，      (原因二)． 3．反方观点 On the contrary，some people differ in their opinions on this matter.They hold the view that        (反方观点)．On the one hand，        (原因一)．On the other hand，        (原因二)． 4．阐明个人看法 As far as I am concerned，I think we should take immediate measures to        (个人观点)．First of all，        .In addition，        .Only in this way can we        . 14.议论文(2)——利弊对比型 Nowadays，there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)        (讨论议题)．In fact，there are both advantages and disadvantages in        (讨论议题)．Generally speaking，it is widely believed that there are several positive aspects as follows.Firstly，        (优点一)．And secondly，        (优点二)． Just as a popular saying goes，“Every coin has two sides”，        (讨论议题) is no exception，and in other words，it still has negative aspects.To begin with，        (缺点一)．In addition，        (缺点二)． To sum up，we should try to bring the advantages of        (讨论议题) into full play，and reduce the disadvantages to the minimum at the same time.In that case，we will definitely make better use of the        (讨论议题)． 15. 议论文(3)——解决问题型 Currently，there is a widespread concern over (the issue that)        (讨论议题)．It is really an important concern to every one of us.As a result，we must spare no effort to take some measures to solve this problem. As we know，there are many steps which can be taken to solve this problem.First of all，        (途径一)．In addition，another way contributing to success of solving the problem is        (途径二)． Above all，to solve the problem of        (讨论议题)，we should find a number of various ways.But as far as I am concerned，I would prefer to solve the problem in this way，that is to say，        (自己的方法)． 历年高考英语全国Ⅱ卷的应用文写作注重对学生核心素养的考查，备考时应紧扣高考评价体系的核心目标，选择贴近学生生活的话题，并进行全方位多体裁的写作训练。教师在教学中要注重写作技巧的指导和思维能力的培养，帮助学生在高考中取得优异成绩。 1 / 15 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$