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高频话题01:介绍自己和朋友
七年级上学期同步写作课讲义(通用版)
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本专题围绕"人与自我:介绍自己或朋友"展开,通过描述外貌、性格、爱好等构建个人形象,培养自我认知与共情能力;朋友是疲惫生活里的良药,对于朋友也进行详细的介绍。每个人心中都有自己的好朋友。此类多为说明文/记叙文。在具体的写作中,学生应做到以下几点:
1.能使用形容词和描述人物特征
2.能通过日常事例体现人物关系
3.能运用复合句表达情感
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任务1-
记叙文
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李华小学毕业升入初中,来到了新学校,在某个论坛上读到了初中生交朋友的帖子,假如你是李华用英文写一篇自我介绍在论坛上回帖,并表达自己交友的意愿。70-80词。
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【审题指导】
1. 体裁:属于应用文中的记叙文(论坛回帖),需模拟真实社交场景,用口语化、亲切的语言完成自我介绍,表达交友意愿。
2. 时态:全文使用 一般现在时 ,描述个人长期稳定的状态(如爱好、性格);描述刚发生的事件(小学毕业、进入初中)时,采用 一般过去时 和 一般现在时 结合(如 “I just graduated... and feel excited...”),突出经历的延续性。
3. 内容要求:需包含个人身份(七年级新生)、背景信息(小学毕业)、兴趣爱好、性格特点,以及明确的交友诉求,符合七年级学生的语言水平和生活经验。
4. 语言风格:用词简单易懂,句式简洁,适当使用情感词汇(excited, hope)拉近距离,体现真诚友好的态度。
【写作框架】
1. 问候与身份介绍,用亲切的问候语开篇(Hi everyone!),点明身份(new Grade 7 student)和背景(小学毕业、进入初中)。
2. 个人信息展示,列举具体喜欢的活动(playing basketball, reading books),说明喜欢的学科及原因(favorite subject: English + 理由),讲述性格特点:用关键词概括(friendly, helpful)
3. 交友意愿表达,直接表明交友期待(hope to make friends),提出未来互动设想(share stories, explore school),呼吁交流(Let’s chat soon!)
【参考范文】
Hi everyone! I’m Li Hua, a new Grade 7 student. I just graduated from primary school and feel excited to start middle school life here. I love playing basketball and reading books. My favorite subject is English because it’s fun to communicate with others in another language. I’m friendly and always ready to help. I hope to make friends with you all, share stories, and explore this new school together! Let’s chat soon!
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任务2-
邮件
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假设你是李华,通过学校国际交流项目获得了一位美国笔友Emma。请写一封邮件向她介绍自己,内容需包含个人基本信息、家庭情况、兴趣爱好及未来交流期待,词数70 - 80词。
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【审题指导】
1. 体裁与场景:属于应用文(邮件书信体),需遵循邮件格式(称呼、正文、结尾敬语),以书面语为主。
2. 时态与人称:全文使用一般现在时,陈述个人情况,采用第一人称自述。
3. 内容要求:必须包含个人基本信息(年龄、居住地)、家庭情况、兴趣爱好、学科偏好及文化交流意愿,体现中西文化互动主题。需用具体事例(如喜欢科幻书、历史学科)增强细节,避免空泛描述。
4. 语言风格:句式以简单句和并列句为主,适当添加连接词(because, and)保证逻辑连贯,结尾用期待性语句(Looking forward to...)呼应交流目的。
【框架设计】
1. 邮件格式与问候规范称呼(Dear Emma),直接问候并自报姓名
2. 讲述基础信息:年龄、居住地、家庭成员(用and连接并列信息)其次爱好:具体活动+书籍类型,体现个人特色;然后讲学科偏好:说明学科名称及喜欢原因,关联文化理解需求。
3. 提出分享中国文化,再表达了解对方文化的期待,使用"Looking forward to..."强化互动意向,添加敬语。
【参考范文】
Dear Emma,
I’m Li Hua, a 13-year-old student from China. I live with my parents and younger sister in Beijing. I enjoy drawing and playing the guitar in my free time, and I’m also a big fan of science fiction books. My favorite subject is history because it helps me understand different cultures. I’m excited to be your pen pal! I’d love to share stories about Chinese festivals and learn about life in the US. Looking forward to your reply!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
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任务
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记叙文
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你的英语老师布置了一项作业,要求写一篇短文介绍班上一位令你印象深刻的同学。请从外貌、性格、特长或爱好、典型事例等方面进行描述,体现他/她的独特之处。词数70-80词。
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【审题指导】
1. 体裁与场景:属于说明性记叙文,以客观介绍为主,用具体事例体现人物特点。
2. 时态与人称:全文使用一般现在时描述人物常态,采用第三人称叙述。
3. 内容要求:必须涵盖外貌特征(如身高、发型)、性格特点(如友善、积极)、特长或爱好(如钢琴演奏)及具体事例(帮助辅导功课),通过事例支撑抽象评价。
4. 语言风格:用词简单直观,句式以短句为主,适当使用连接词(besides, because)增强逻辑,结尾用情感句(“lucky to have...”)点明人物价值。
【框架设计】
1. 直接点明主题:介绍印象深刻的同学,引发下文。
2. 外貌描写:用1句概括身高、发型等直观特征。
性格与事例:先点明性格关键词(如kindness),再用具体事件(课后辅导)佐证,体现人物品质。
特长爱好:说明擅长领域(钢琴)及表现场景(学校活动),展现人物亮点。
3. 总结,说明人物受认可的原因(helpful, positive),并表达个人感受(lucky to have...),强化主题。
【参考范文】
My classmate Tom is unforgettable. He’s tall with short black hair and always wears a bright smile. What makes him special is his kindness—last week, he helped me with math problems after school even though he was busy. Besides, he’s talented in playing the piano and often performs at school events. Everyone in our class likes him because he’s not only helpful but also positive. I’m lucky to have such a great friend!
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词汇积累
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※Height: 身高:
tall(高的)、short(矮的)、medium - height(中等身高)、fat(胖的)、thin(瘦的)、slim(苗条的)
※hair: 头发:
long hair(长发)、short hair(短发)、curly hair(卷发)、straight hair(直发)、black hair(黑发)、blonde hair(金发)
※Five senses: 五官:
big eyes(大眼睛)、small eyes(小眼睛)、round face(圆脸)、square face(方脸)、high nose(高鼻梁)、thick lips(厚嘴唇)
※Character: 性格:
---积极性格:friendly(友好的)、kind(善良的)、outgoing(外向的)、optimistic(乐观的)、helpful(乐于助人的)、generous(慷慨的)。
---消极性格:shy(害羞的)、quiet(安静的)、pessimistic(悲观的)、stubborn(固执的)、lazy(懒惰的)。
※Interests and hobbies: 兴趣爱好:
---运动:play basketball(打篮球)、play football(踢足球)、swim(游泳)、run(跑步)、cycle(骑自行车)。
---艺术:draw(画画)、paint(绘画)、play the piano(弹钢琴)、play the guitar(弹吉他)、sing(唱歌)、dance(跳舞)。
---其他:read books(读书)、watch movies(看电影)、listen to music(听音乐)、collect stamps(集邮)、travel(旅行)
※Personal qualities: 个人品质:
honest(诚实的)、responsible(有责任心的)、hard - working(勤奋的)、creative(有创造力的)、confident(自信的)
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句型积累
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※描述基本信息
I'm/He's/She's [name]. 我是/他是/她是[名字]。
[Name] is a [age]-year -old [student/teacher etc.]. [名字]是一名[年龄]岁的[学生/老师等]。
I/He/She comes from [place]. 我/他/她来自[地方]。
I’m currently a [Grade 7 student / member of the school art club] at [school name]. 我目前是[学校名称]的一名[七年级学生/校美术社团成员]。
Having just transferred from [old school], [Name] quickly adapted to our class. 刚从[原学校]转学过来,[名字]很快就适应了我们班。
[Name] and I share the same hometown, [city name], famous for its [特色,如 tea culture]. 我和[名字]来自同一个家乡[城市名],那里以[茶文化等特色]闻名。
※外貌特征
I/He/She is tall/short with [hair color] hair. 我/他/她个子高/矮,有着[头发颜色]的头发。
[Name] has big/small eyes and a round/long face. [名字]有一双大/小眼睛和一张圆/长脸。
She is of medium build and has shoulder - length hair. 她中等身材,留着齐肩的头发。
※性格特点
I'm/He's/She's friendly/kind/helpful/outgoing. 我/他/她很友好/善良/乐于助人/外向。
[Name] is a person with a great sense of humor. [名字]是一个很有幽默感的人。
He/She is always ready to help others. 他/她总是乐于帮助别人。
※兴趣爱好
I/He/She like(s) reading/playing basketball/listening to music. 我/他/她喜欢阅读/打篮球/听音乐。
[Name]'s hobby is painting/dancing. [名字]的爱好是绘画/跳舞。
My/His/Her favorite sport/subject is [sport name/subject name]. 我/他/她最喜欢的运动/学科是[运动名称/学科名称]。
Not only does he love coding, but he also won first prize in the city programming contest. 他不仅热爱编程,还在市编程比赛中获得一等奖。
Her passion for photography led to an exhibition of her works last month. 对摄影的热爱促使她上个月举办了个人摄影展。
※个人能力
I/He/She can speak English/play the piano well. 我/他/她能很好地说英语/弹钢琴。
[Name] is good at math/drawing. [名字]擅长数学/绘画。
He/She has the ability to organize activities. 他/她有组织活动的能力。
※家庭情况
I/He/She live(s) with my/his/her parents/siblings. 我/他/她和我的/他的/她的父母/兄弟姐妹住在一起。
There are [number] people in my/his/her family. 我/他/她家里有[数量]口人。
My/His/Her father/mother is a [job]. 我/他/她的父亲/母亲是一名[职业]。
※情感关系
We became best friends instantly because of our shared love for anime. 因为都热爱动漫,我们很快就成了好朋友。
His positive attitude always cheers me up when I’m feeling down. 每当我情绪低落时,他积极的态度总能让我振作起来。
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谚语积累
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1. A good face is a letter of recommendation. 面善是封推荐信。指外貌和善的人容易给人留下好印象。
2. Beauty is but skin - deep. 美貌只是肤浅的。提醒人们不要只看外表,内在更重要。
3. Actions speak louder than words. 行动胜于言语。强调一个人的行为比言语更能体现其品质。
4. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。用于描述在困难时刻能伸出援手的朋友才是真正的朋友。
5. The apple doesn't fall far from the tree. 有其父必有其子。意思是孩子通常会与父母有相似之处。
6. One man's meat is another man's poison. 萝卜青菜,各有所爱。说明不同的人有不同的喜好和性格特点。
7. You can't judge a book by its cover. 不能以貌取人。告诉人们不能仅根据外表来评价一个人。
8. Honesty is the best policy. 诚实为上策。强调诚实是一种重要的品质。
9. A contented mind is a perpetual feast. 知足常乐。形容那些懂得满足的人内心总是快乐的。
10. Where there's a will, there's a way. 有志者事竟成。用于赞美有决心和毅力的人。
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写作模板
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Dear______ [称呼],
My name is______[名字]. I’m a______ [年龄]-year-old [身份,如Grade 7 student] at______ [学校名]. I live in______ [城市/地方] with my______ [家庭成员,如parents and sister]. My hobbies are______ [爱好1] and______ [爱好2], like ____________[具体例子,如playing basketball or reading stories]. My favorite subject is ______[学科], because____________ [原因,如it helps me understand different cultures]. I’m ____________[性格,如friendly and helpful]. I hope to ____________[目标,如make new friends and learn from each other].
Best wishes,
______[你的名字]
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写作模板
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My Best Friend
My best friend is ______. She/He is ______ years old and studies in Class ___, Grade 7. She/He is ______ (tall/short) with ______ (hair color) hair and always wears a warm smile. ______ (Name) loves ______ (hobby, like playing soccer) and often ______ (activity, like practices after school). What I admire most is her/his ______ (character, like kindness) — she/he always ______ (example, helps me with homework). I’m so lucky to have such a wonderful friend!
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⭐写作拓展⭐
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考情分析
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近三年考情分析
年份
卷区
话题
命题形式
2024年
山东东营
介绍自己在生活中怎样帮助的他人
提纲类
贵州
个人成长方面的自我介绍
提纲类
2023年
辽宁
介绍自己小学的一些历史事件
提纲类
海南
介绍自己最好的朋友,包含基础信息
提纲类
重庆
介绍自己假期学习到的新技能
提纲类
2022年
江苏张家港
介绍自己的校园生活
提纲类
四川眉山
介绍自己的基本情况参加志愿者
提纲类
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变式提升训练
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(1)
【七年级上学期期中·北京市海淀区】假设你是李华,刚转学到新班级。请根据提示写一篇短文向同学介绍自己,包含以下内容:
姓名、年龄及家乡;
兴趣爱好(如运动、阅读等);
希望与大家交朋友。
要求:
1. 包含所提供的信息;
2. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名;
3. 80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
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【例文】
Hello, everyone. I'm Li Hua. I'm 12 years old. I come from Beijing. I have many hobbies. I like reading books because I can learn a lot from them. I also love sports. I often play basketball with my friends after school. I'm very glad to be here and hope to make friends with all of you. Let's help each other and have a good time together.
[总体分析]
①题材:本文是一篇自我介绍类的记叙文,用于新班级交流场景。
②时态:全文采用一般现在时,描述个人的基本信息、兴趣爱好等。
③提示:严格围绕姓名、年龄、家乡、爱好及交友意愿展开,通过具体事例增强生动性。
[写作步骤]
第一步,直接进行自我基本信息介绍;
第二步,详细阐述个人兴趣爱好及具体活动;
第三步,表达交友期望,自然结尾。
[亮点词汇]
①come from来自
②make friends交朋友
③have a good time玩得开心
[高分句型]
①I like reading books because I can learn a lot from them.(原因状语从句)
②Let's help each other and have a good time together.(祈使句+并列结构)
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【八年级下学期期末·上海市徐汇区】你的外教布置作业:用英语介绍一位对你影响最深的家人。请从以下角度展开:
他/她是谁,职业是什么;
他/她做过的一件让你难忘的事;
你从他/她身上学到了什么。
要求:
1.包含以上,可以适当发挥;
2.语句连贯,书写规范;
3.写作字数80-100词左右。
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【例文】
The person who has the deepest influence on me is my father. He is a doctor. He is always busy working, but he still spares time to be with me. One thing that I can't forget is that when I failed in an exam and felt very sad, he encouraged me. He told me that failure is the mother of success and I should never give up. From him, I've learned that I should be strong - minded and face difficulties bravely.
[总体分析]
①题材:属于人物介绍类记叙文,重点突出家人对自己的影响。
②时态:主要使用一般现在时和一般过去时,描述人物常态及难忘事件。
③提示:按照家人身份、难忘事件、个人收获三个方面展开,情感真挚。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明对自己影响最深的家人;
第二步,讲述具体事件及过程;
第三步,总结从家人身上学到的品质。
[亮点词汇]
①spare time抽出时间
②fail in an exam考试失败
③strong - minded意志坚强的
[高分句型]
①He told me that failure is the mother of success and I should never give up.(宾语从句+并列结构)
②From him, I've learned that I should be strong - minded and face difficulties bravely.(宾语从句)
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【中考真题·2023年江苏省南京市】学校校刊发起“身边的榜样”征文活动,请以“My Role Model”为题,写一篇英语短文投稿。内容需包含:
榜样的身份(如同学、老师、家人);
他/她的优秀品质(如善良、坚持);
他/她对你的影响。
文中请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
词数:90-110词。
My Role Model
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【例文】
My Role Model
My role model is my classmate Tom. He is a very kind - hearted and helpful boy. He always helps others without hesitation. For example, when someone has trouble with their studies, he will offer to help. When there is a school activity, he is always the first one to volunteer. His kindness and helpfulness have a great influence on me. I have learned from him that we should be ready to help others and make the world a better place.
【范文分析】
①题材:为榜样人物介绍类议论文,结合具体事例说明榜样品质及影响。
②时态:使用一般现在时,陈述人物性格和日常行为。
③提示:围绕榜样身份、品质、影响三个要点,逻辑清晰。
[写作步骤]
第一步,点明榜样人物;
第二步,列举榜样的优秀行为和品质;
第三步,阐述榜样对自己的影响。
[亮点词汇]
①role model榜样
②without hesitation毫不犹豫地
③have a great influence on对……有很大影响
[高分句型]
①He always helps others without hesitation. For example, when someone has trouble with their studies, he will offer to help.(举例+时间状语从句)
②I have learned from him that we should be ready to help others and make the world a better place.(宾语从句)
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【七年级下学期期中·广东省广州市】你在英语角结识了一位新朋友。请根据以下信息,用英语写一封信向笔友介绍这位朋友:
姓名:Lucy;年龄:13岁;外貌:短发,戴眼镜;
爱好:弹吉他、画漫画;
性格特点:乐观、乐于助人。
要求:1.语句通顺,句意连贯,语法正确;
2. 词数:70-80词左右。
3.文中请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
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【例文】
Dear friend,
I want to introduce my new friend Lucy to you. She is 13 years old. She has short hair and wears glasses. She loves playing the guitar and drawing cartoons. She is an optimistic and helpful girl. Whenever I have problems, she always comes to help me. I'm very glad to have such a good friend. Do you want to make friends with her?
[总体分析]
①题材:属于书信体的人物介绍文,用于向笔友介绍新朋友。
②时态:采用一般现在时,介绍人物的外貌、爱好和性格。
③提示:依据所给信息,逐条介绍朋友情况,并融入个人感受。
[写作步骤]
第一步,表明写信目的;
第二步,详细介绍朋友的各项信息;
第三步,询问笔友是否想结识,增强互动性。
[亮点词汇]
①take part in参加
②look forward to期待
③improve skills提升技能
[高分句型]
①Whenever I have problems, she always comes to help me.(时间状语从句)
②Do you want to make friends with her?(反问句增强互动)
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【中考真题·2024年浙江省杭州市】假你的英语老师要求以“Self - Introduction for Club Recruitment”为题,写一篇短文用于申请加入学校英语戏剧社。内容需包含:
个人英语能力(如口语、表演经历);
对戏剧的兴趣及特长;
加入社团的期待。
要求:
1.100-120词;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校等个人信息;
3. 卷面整洁,书写工整。
Self - Introduction for Club Recruitment
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【例文】
Self - Introduction for Club Recruitment
Hello, I'm Li Hua. I'm good at English, especially in speaking. I have taken part in some English speech competitions before. I'm also interested in drama. I love watching English plays and I have some acting experience in school plays. I think I can bring some new ideas and energy to the club. I'm looking forward to joining the club and improving my English and acting skills with other members.
[总体分析]
①题材:为应用文(申请书),用于申请加入学校英语戏剧社。
②时态:以一般现在时为主,介绍个人能力和兴趣。
③提示:按照英语能力、戏剧兴趣、加入期待三个部分展开,目标明确。
[写作步骤]
第一步,进行简短的自我介绍;
第二步,重点说明个人能力和兴趣特长;
第三步,表达加入社团的期望。
[亮点词汇]
①be good at擅长
②take part in参加
③bring...to...带来……到……
[高分句型]
①I'm good at English, especially in speaking. I have taken part in some English speech competitions before.(递进陈述+经历说明)
②I'm looking forward to joining the club and improving my English and acting skills with other members.(动名词结构+并列表达)
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假你的英语老师要求你以“My Favorite Scientist”为题介绍一下你最喜欢的科学家,你会从哪些方面进行介绍,写一篇短文
要求:
1.100-120词;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校等个人信息;
3. 卷面整洁,书写工整。
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【例文】
My Favorite Scientist
My favorite scientist is Yuan Longping. He was born in 1930. Although he passed away, his spirit and achievements are always remembered.
Yuan Longping was called the "Father of Hybrid Rice". He spent his life working on hybrid rice research. In the past, many people faced hunger because of the low rice production. However, Yuan Longping's hybrid rice technology changed the situation. It helped farmers grow more rice and saved countless lives.
Yuan Longping is not only a great scientist but also an inspiration to me. His hard work and love for his country made him a hero. I will always look up to him and try to be a person who can make a difference in the world, just like him.
[总体分析]
①题材:人物传记类记叙文,介绍已故科学家袁隆平及其贡献。
②时态:时态以一般过去时(描述袁隆平生平事迹)和一般现在时(表达对其评价及自身感受)结合使用。
③提示:围绕当下仍被广泛关注的农业科学家袁隆平,介绍人物成就、精神及对作者的影响,兼具教育意义与时代价值。
[写作步骤]
第一步,开篇点明介绍对象,简单说明人物基本信息与影响力。
第二步,详细阐述袁隆平在杂交水稻领域的具体研究成果,以及成果带来的巨大社会意义。
第三步,总结袁隆平对作者的激励作用,表达敬意与学习的决心。
[亮点词汇]
①Father of Hybrid Rice 杂交水稻之父
②worked on 致力于
③faced hunger 面临饥饿
④countless lives 无数生命
⑤look up to 敬仰;钦佩
[高分句型]
①He was called the "Father of Hybrid Rice".(被动语态,客观准确说明人物称号 )
②He spent his life working on hybrid rice research.(spend...doing 结构,生动体现人物毕生投入 )
③In the past, many people faced hunger because of the low rice production. However, Yuan Longping's hybrid rice technology changed the situation.(使用however进行对比转折,突出人物贡献 )
④I will always look up to him and try to be a person who can make a difference in the world, just like him.(使用定语从句who can make a difference修饰person,提升句式丰富度 )
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高频话题01:介绍自己和朋友
七年级上学期同步写作课讲义(通用版)
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本专题围绕"人与自我:介绍自己或朋友"展开,通过描述外貌、性格、爱好等构建个人形象,培养自我认知与共情能力;朋友是疲惫生活里的良药,对于朋友也进行详细的介绍。每个人心中都有自己的好朋友。此类多为说明文/记叙文。在具体的写作中,学生应做到以下几点:
1.能使用形容词和描述人物特征
2.能通过日常事例体现人物关系
3.能运用复合句表达情感
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任务1-
记叙文
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题目:李华小学毕业升入初中,来到了新学校,在某个论坛上读到了初中生交朋友的帖子,假如你是李华用英文写一篇自我介绍在论坛上回帖,并表达自己交友的意愿。70-80词。
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【审题指导】
1. 体裁:属于应用文中的记叙文(论坛回帖),需模拟真实社交场景,用口语化、亲切的语言完成自我介绍,表达交友意愿。
2. 时态:全文使用 一般现在时 ,描述个人长期稳定的状态(如爱好、性格);描述刚发生的事件(小学毕业、进入初中)时,采用 一般过去时 和 一般现在时 结合(如 “I just graduated... and feel excited...”),突出经历的延续性。
3. 内容要求:需包含个人身份(七年级新生)、背景信息(小学毕业)、兴趣爱好、性格特点,以及明确的交友诉求,符合七年级学生的语言水平和生活经验。
4. 语言风格:用词简单易懂,句式简洁,适当使用情感词汇(excited, hope)拉近距离,体现真诚友好的态度。
【写作框架】
1. 问候与身份介绍,用亲切的问候语开篇(Hi everyone!),点明身份(new Grade 7 student)和背景(小学毕业、进入初中)。
2. 个人信息展示,列举具体喜欢的活动(playing basketball, reading books),说明喜欢的学科及原因(favorite subject: English + 理由),讲述性格特点:用关键词概括(friendly, helpful)
3. 交友意愿表达,直接表明交友期待(hope to make friends),提出未来互动设想(share stories, explore school),呼吁交流(Let’s chat soon!)
【参考范文】
Hi everyone! I’m Li Hua, a new Grade 7 student. I just graduated from primary school and feel excited to start middle school life here. I love playing basketball and reading books. My favorite subject is English because it’s fun to communicate with others in another language. I’m friendly and always ready to help. I hope to make friends with you all, share stories, and explore this new school together! Let’s chat soon!
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任务2-
邮件
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假设你是李华,通过学校国际交流项目获得了一位美国笔友Emma。请写一封邮件向她介绍自己,内容需包含个人基本信息、家庭情况、兴趣爱好及未来交流期待,词数70 - 80词。
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【审题指导】
1. 体裁与场景:属于应用文(邮件书信体),需遵循邮件格式(称呼、正文、结尾敬语),以书面语为主。
2. 时态与人称:全文使用一般现在时,陈述个人情况,采用第一人称自述。
3. 内容要求:必须包含个人基本信息(年龄、居住地)、家庭情况、兴趣爱好、学科偏好及文化交流意愿,体现中西文化互动主题。需用具体事例(如喜欢科幻书、历史学科)增强细节,避免空泛描述。
4. 语言风格:句式以简单句和并列句为主,适当添加连接词(because, and)保证逻辑连贯,结尾用期待性语句(Looking forward to...)呼应交流目的。
【框架设计】
1. 邮件格式与问候规范称呼(Dear Emma),直接问候并自报姓名
2. 讲述基础信息:年龄、居住地、家庭成员(用and连接并列信息)其次爱好:具体活动+书籍类型,体现个人特色;然后讲学科偏好:说明学科名称及喜欢原因,关联文化理解需求。
3. 提出分享中国文化,再表达了解对方文化的期待,使用"Looking forward to..."强化互动意向,添加敬语。
【参考范文】
Dear Emma,
I’m Li Hua, a 13-year-old student from China. I live with my parents and younger sister in Beijing. I enjoy drawing and playing the guitar in my free time, and I’m also a big fan of science fiction books. My favorite subject is history because it helps me understand different cultures. I’m excited to be your pen pal! I’d love to share stories about Chinese festivals and learn about life in the US. Looking forward to your reply!
Best wishes,
Li Hua
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任务
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记叙文
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你的英语老师布置了一项作业,要求写一篇短文介绍班上一位令你印象深刻的同学。请从外貌、性格、特长或爱好、典型事例等方面进行描述,体现他/她的独特之处。词数70-80词。
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【审题指导】
1. 体裁与场景:属于说明性记叙文,以客观介绍为主,用具体事例体现人物特点。
2. 时态与人称:全文使用一般现在时描述人物常态,采用第三人称叙述。
3. 内容要求:必须涵盖外貌特征(如身高、发型)、性格特点(如友善、积极)、特长或爱好(如钢琴演奏)及具体事例(帮助辅导功课),通过事例支撑抽象评价。
4. 语言风格:用词简单直观,句式以短句为主,适当使用连接词(besides, because)增强逻辑,结尾用情感句(“lucky to have...”)点明人物价值。
【框架设计】
1. 直接点明主题:介绍印象深刻的同学,引发下文。
2. 外貌描写:用1句概括身高、发型等直观特征。
性格与事例:先点明性格关键词(如kindness),再用具体事件(课后辅导)佐证,体现人物品质。
特长爱好:说明擅长领域(钢琴)及表现场景(学校活动),展现人物亮点。
3. 总结,说明人物受认可的原因(helpful, positive),并表达个人感受(lucky to have...),强化主题。
【参考范文】
My classmate Tom is unforgettable. He’s tall with short black hair and always wears a bright smile. What makes him special is his kindness—last week, he helped me with math problems after school even though he was busy. Besides, he’s talented in playing the piano and often performs at school events. Everyone in our class likes him because he’s not only helpful but also positive. I’m lucky to have such a great friend!
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⭐素材宝库⭐
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词汇积累
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※Height: 身高:
tall(高的)、short(矮的)、medium - height(中等身高)、fat(胖的)、thin(瘦的)、slim(苗条的)
※hair: 头发:
long hair(长发)、short hair(短发)、curly hair(卷发)、straight hair(直发)、black hair(黑发)、blonde hair(金发)
※Five senses: 五官:
big eyes(大眼睛)、small eyes(小眼睛)、round face(圆脸)、square face(方脸)、high nose(高鼻梁)、thick lips(厚嘴唇)
※Character: 性格:
---积极性格:friendly(友好的)、kind(善良的)、outgoing(外向的)、optimistic(乐观的)、helpful(乐于助人的)、generous(慷慨的)。
---消极性格:shy(害羞的)、quiet(安静的)、pessimistic(悲观的)、stubborn(固执的)、lazy(懒惰的)。
※Interests and hobbies: 兴趣爱好:
---运动:play basketball(打篮球)、play football(踢足球)、swim(游泳)、run(跑步)、cycle(骑自行车)。
---艺术:draw(画画)、paint(绘画)、play the piano(弹钢琴)、play the guitar(弹吉他)、sing(唱歌)、dance(跳舞)。
---其他:read books(读书)、watch movies(看电影)、listen to music(听音乐)、collect stamps(集邮)、travel(旅行)
※Personal qualities: 个人品质:
honest(诚实的)、responsible(有责任心的)、hard - working(勤奋的)、creative(有创造力的)、confident(自信的)
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句型积累
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※描述基本信息
I'm/He's/She's [name]. 我是/他是/她是[名字]。
[Name] is a [age]-year -old [student/teacher etc.]. [名字]是一名[年龄]岁的[学生/老师等]。
I/He/She comes from [place]. 我/他/她来自[地方]。
I’m currently a [Grade 7 student / member of the school art club] at [school name]. 我目前是[学校名称]的一名[七年级学生/校美术社团成员]。
Having just transferred from [old school], [Name] quickly adapted to our class. 刚从[原学校]转学过来,[名字]很快就适应了我们班。
[Name] and I share the same hometown, [city name], famous for its [特色,如 tea culture]. 我和[名字]来自同一个家乡[城市名],那里以[茶文化等特色]闻名。
※外貌特征
I/He/She is tall/short with [hair color] hair. 我/他/她个子高/矮,有着[头发颜色]的头发。
[Name] has big/small eyes and a round/long face. [名字]有一双大/小眼睛和一张圆/长脸。
She is of medium build and has shoulder - length hair. 她中等身材,留着齐肩的头发。
※性格特点
I'm/He's/She's friendly/kind/helpful/outgoing. 我/他/她很友好/善良/乐于助人/外向。
[Name] is a person with a great sense of humor. [名字]是一个很有幽默感的人。
He/She is always ready to help others. 他/她总是乐于帮助别人。
※兴趣爱好
I/He/She like(s) reading/playing basketball/listening to music. 我/他/她喜欢阅读/打篮球/听音乐。
[Name]'s hobby is painting/dancing. [名字]的爱好是绘画/跳舞。
My/His/Her favorite sport/subject is [sport name/subject name]. 我/他/她最喜欢的运动/学科是[运动名称/学科名称]。
Not only does he love coding, but he also won first prize in the city programming contest. 他不仅热爱编程,还在市编程比赛中获得一等奖。
Her passion for photography led to an exhibition of her works last month. 对摄影的热爱促使她上个月举办了个人摄影展。
※个人能力
I/He/She can speak English/play the piano well. 我/他/她能很好地说英语/弹钢琴。
[Name] is good at math/drawing. [名字]擅长数学/绘画。
He/She has the ability to organize activities. 他/她有组织活动的能力。
※家庭情况
I/He/She live(s) with my/his/her parents/siblings. 我/他/她和我的/他的/她的父母/兄弟姐妹住在一起。
There are [number] people in my/his/her family. 我/他/她家里有[数量]口人。
My/His/Her father/mother is a [job]. 我/他/她的父亲/母亲是一名[职业]。
※情感关系
We became best friends instantly because of our shared love for anime. 因为都热爱动漫,我们很快就成了好朋友。
His positive attitude always cheers me up when I’m feeling down. 每当我情绪低落时,他积极的态度总能让我振作起来。
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谚语积累
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1. A good face is a letter of recommendation. 面善是封推荐信。指外貌和善的人容易给人留下好印象。
2. Beauty is but skin - deep. 美貌只是肤浅的。提醒人们不要只看外表,内在更重要。
3. Actions speak louder than words. 行动胜于言语。强调一个人的行为比言语更能体现其品质。
4. A friend in need is a friend indeed. 患难见真情。用于描述在困难时刻能伸出援手的朋友才是真正的朋友。
5. The apple doesn't fall far from the tree. 有其父必有其子。意思是孩子通常会与父母有相似之处。
6. One man's meat is another man's poison. 萝卜青菜,各有所爱。说明不同的人有不同的喜好和性格特点。
7. You can't judge a book by its cover. 不能以貌取人。告诉人们不能仅根据外表来评价一个人。
8. Honesty is the best policy. 诚实为上策。强调诚实是一种重要的品质。
9. A contented mind is a perpetual feast. 知足常乐。形容那些懂得满足的人内心总是快乐的。
10. Where there's a will, there's a way. 有志者事竟成。用于赞美有决心和毅力的人。
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写作模板
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Dear______ [称呼],
My name is______[名字]. I’m a______ [年龄]-year-old [身份,如Grade 7 student] at______ [学校名]. I live in______ [城市/地方] with my______ [家庭成员,如parents and sister]. My hobbies are______ [爱好1] and______ [爱好2], like ____________[具体例子,如playing basketball or reading stories]. My favorite subject is ______[学科], because____________ [原因,如it helps me understand different cultures]. I’m ____________[性格,如friendly and helpful]. I hope to ____________[目标,如make new friends and learn from each other].
Best wishes,
______[你的名字]
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写作模板
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My Best Friend
My best friend is ______. She/He is ______ years old and studies in Class ___, Grade 7. She/He is ______ (tall/short) with ______ (hair color) hair and always wears a warm smile. ______ (Name) loves ______ (hobby, like playing soccer) and often ______ (activity, like practices after school). What I admire most is her/his ______ (character, like kindness) — she/he always ______ (example, helps me with homework). I’m so lucky to have such a wonderful friend!
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⭐写作拓展⭐
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考情分析
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近三年考情分析
年份
卷区
话题
命题形式
2024年
山东东营
介绍自己在生活中怎样帮助的他人
提纲类
贵州
个人成长方面的自我介绍
提纲类
2023年
辽宁
介绍自己小学的一些历史事件
提纲类
海南
介绍自己最好的朋友,包含基础信息
提纲类
重庆
介绍自己假期学习到的新技能
提纲类
2022年
江苏张家港
介绍自己的校园生活
提纲类
四川眉山
介绍自己的基本情况参加志愿者
提纲类
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变式提升训练
)
(1)
【七年级上学期期中·北京市海淀区】假设你是李华,刚转学到新班级。请根据提示写一篇短文向同学介绍自己,包含以下内容:
姓名、年龄及家乡;
兴趣爱好(如运动、阅读等);
希望与大家交朋友。
要求:
1. 包含所提供的信息;
2. 请勿在文中使用真实的姓名和校名;
3. 80词左右,开头已给出,不计入总词数。
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【八年级下学期期末·上海市徐汇区】你的外教布置作业:用英语介绍一位对你影响最深的家人。请从以下角度展开:
他/她是谁,职业是什么;
他/她做过的一件让你难忘的事;
你从他/她身上学到了什么。
要求:
1.包含以上,可以适当发挥;
2.语句连贯,书写规范;
3.写作字数80-100词左右。
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【中考真题·2023年江苏省南京市】学校校刊发起“身边的榜样”征文活动,请以“My Role Model”为题,写一篇英语短文投稿。内容需包含:
榜样的身份(如同学、老师、家人);
他/她的优秀品质(如善良、坚持);
他/她对你的影响。
文中请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
词数:90-110词。
My Role Model
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【七年级下学期期中·广东省广州市】你在英语角结识了一位新朋友。请根据以下信息,用英语写一封信向笔友介绍这位朋友:
姓名:Lucy;年龄:13岁;外貌:短发,戴眼镜;
爱好:弹吉他、画漫画;
性格特点:乐观、乐于助人。
要求:1.语句通顺,句意连贯,语法正确;
2. 词数:70-80词左右。
3.文中请不要写出你的校名和姓名。
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【中考真题·2024年浙江省杭州市】假你的英语老师要求以“Self - Introduction for Club Recruitment”为题,写一篇短文用于申请加入学校英语戏剧社。内容需包含:
个人英语能力(如口语、表演经历);
对戏剧的兴趣及特长;
加入社团的期待。
要求:
1.100-120词;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校等个人信息;
3. 卷面整洁,书写工整。
Self - Introduction for Club Recruitment
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假你的英语老师要求你以“My Favorite Scientist”为题介绍一下你最喜欢的科学家,你会从哪些方面进行介绍,写一篇短文
要求:
1.100-120词;
2. 文中不得出现真实姓名及学校等个人信息;
3. 卷面整洁,书写工整。
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