Unit 1 Could you please clean your room Writing 课件 2024-2025学年鲁教版(五四学制)（2012）八年级英语上册

Unit1 Could you please clean your room? Writing Learning objectives Skill objectives: 1. 复习本单元的重点词组，能就青少年是否应当承担家务劳动发表自己的观点。 2. 了解议论文写作最简单的结构，学会写议论文。 3. 初步了解议论文的最简单最常用的写作结构和写作的方法技巧，理清范文结构, 能独立完成一篇针对做家务的想法的短文。 Emotional objectives: 能就青少年是否应当承担家务劳动发表自己的观点,能有分担家务的正确意识,增强家庭责任感。 Do you like doing chores? Why ? Why not ? Yes , I do. Because I think doing chores is... No , I don't . Because I think doing chores is... important necessary helpful enjoyable boring/ meaningless fun diffcult relaxing Lead in. I often do the dishes fold the clothes sweep the floor cook dinner take out the rubbish make the bed wash the clothes take the dog for a walk What do you often do to help your parents at home? Pre-writing 3a Do you think children should do some chores at home? Why or why not? Discuss this with a parnter and take notes. shouldn't How to express your own opinions? 1. Doing chores helps to develop children’s independence. 2. Doing chores teaches children how to look after themselves. 6. Doing chores is good for their future. 3. Sharing the housework can make parents happy. 4. Children can understand the idea of fairness. 5. Doing chores can help them keep healthy. 1. Doing chores is a waste of children’s time. 2. Children already have enough stress from school. 3. Children should spend their time on their schoolwork. 4. It is the parents’ job to provide a clean and comfortable environment at home. 5. Sometimes doing chores is difficult for them. 6. They will have to do housework so there is no need for them to do it now. should While-writing 3b Write a letter to the Sunday Mail and express your opinion. Dear Sir or Madam, I think/believe that ____________________________. I agree/disagree that___________________________. I think it is fair/unfair for children to_______________. I think children should/should not___________________ because _______________________________________. For example, they should/should not _________________ because _______________________________________. Yours truly,_______ 1审consider 2列list /outline 3加add 4连connect 5查check美beautify晒show 一、审题干：正确审题，确定写作基本模式。 1. 体裁______________ 2. 人称______________ 3. 时态______________ 书信/观点类 第一人称 一般现在时 体裁：文章的形式和风格 Write an outline (OREC) we should (not) do chores. Beginning (Para.1) I think it is important for children to learn how to do chores and help their parents with housework... Body (Para.2) reason 1. to develop children's independence ； Ending (Para.3) reason2. to understand the idea of fairness example. I often do chores at home, such as sweeping th floor and doing the dishes. Because this can make our family happier to show youropinion to give some reasons or examples to show your opinion again Conclusion All in all, In my opinion, Dear Sir or Madam, I think/believe that ________________________. I agree/disagree that _______________________. I think it is fair/unfair for children to__________. I think children should/should not _____________ because _________________________________. For example, they should/should not ____________ because __________________________________. Yours truly, _______ the structure of the letter 称呼 署名 正文 结尾敬语 Dear Sir, I think it is important for children to learn how to do chores and help their parents with housework. It's not enough to just get good grades at school. Children these days depend on their parents too much. They're always asking, “Could you get this for me?” or “Could you help me with that?” Doing chores helps to develop children's independence and teaches them how to look after themselves. It also helps them to understand the idea of fairness. Since they live in one house with their parents, they should know that everyone should do their part in keeping it clean and tidy. Our neighbors'son got into a good college but during his first year, he had no idea how to take care of himself. As a result, he often fell ill and his grades dropped. The earlier kids learn to be independent, the better it is for their future. Mr. Smith Do you remember the structure? 二 列提纲 Opinion: State your opinion Examples: Give some examples Reason: Give your reasons Opinion: Restate your opinion 二、列思路 Opinion Reason Conclusion (结论) Example Agree Disagree I think/agree that… I (don't) think/disagree that… Because... First... Second... /What’s more... Moreover/Besides/Last but not least... For example, ... In a word/All in all, /Anyway, As a result... Pre-writing R 三、 加 Agree Kids should do chores. Doing chores helps to develop children’s independence. It also helps us to understand the idea of fairness. Doing chores can make parents happy. Can you give some examples ? E Agree Kids should do chores. Doing chores helps to develop children’s independence. I often help my parents do housework, such as doing the dishes, folding clothes and cleaning my bedroom. As a result, I am able to take good care of myself now. 三、 加 E Agree Kids should do chores. Since we live in one house with our parents, we should know that everyone should do their part in keeping it clean and tidy. It also helps us to understand the idea of fairness. 三、 加 E Agree Kids should do chores. Our parents have to work hard all day and they are much too tired. If we share the housework, they will have time to relax . Doing chores can make parents happy. How to make your opinions clearer ? 三、 加 We think /believe it’s important for children to …. It’s not enough to…. First, children depend on… Second, doing chores helps to … What’s more, it also helps them to understand… All in all/ In a word, I think the earlier…, the better…. I think kids shouldn’t help with housework at home. First, kids already have enough stress… They don’t have time to… Housework is a waste… Second, they should spend time on… Also, … What’s more,… All in all/ In a word, I disagree kids do chores at home. In my opinion, As for me, 四、增添连接词 Pros 支持 Against 反对 五：美 书写规范整洁美观，没有语法拼写错误，句式优美。 post-writing Check your writing Evaluation criteria Result Structure Beginning to present a fact/situation 2分 Body reason 1. 2分 reason 2. 2分 example 1 3分 example 2. 3分 Ending to show your opinion 2分 Grammar and spelling 5 Total expression 5 Total points 1 输入你的标题 Checking List points Yes No 1.结构清晰 Did you have a clear structure? 2 2.分段写 Did you write 3 or 4 paragraphs? 2 3.礼貌表达 Did you use polite expression? 2 4.好词好句 Did you use good words and sentences? 6 5.行文连贯 Did you use linking words? 6 6.书写美观 Did you write neatly? 3 7.80词以上 Did you write over 80 words? 4 Check by yourself 查 While-writing 输入你的标题 Checking List Yes No 1.结构清晰 Did he/she have a clear structure? 2.分段写 Did he/she write 3 or 4 paragraphs? 3.礼貌表达 Did he/she use polite expression? 4.好词好句 Did he/she use good words and sentences? 5.行文连贯 Did he/she use linking words? 6.书写美观 Did he/she write neatly? 7.80词以上 Did he/she write over 80 words? Check in pairs Post-writing 输入你的标题 Checking List Yes No 1.结构清晰 Did he/she have a clear structure? 2.分段写 Did he/she write 3 or 4 paragraphs? 3.礼貌表达 Did he/she use polite expression? 4.好词好句 Did he/she use good words and sentences? 5.行文连贯 Did he/she use linking words? 6.书写美观 Did he/she write neatly? 7.80词以上 Did he/she write over 80 words? Check together Post-writing 六：评 档次 分值 评分标准 一档 20---25分 内容切题，层次清楚，语言流畅，基本无语言表达错误。 二档 15---19分 内容切题，层次比较清楚，语言比较流畅，语言表达错误较少。 三档 11---14分 内容基本切题，层次不够分明，语言表达错误较多。 四档 1---10分 有一定内容，但语法错误较多。 注意：书面表达，语法错误，全卷扣分不得超过两分，单词拼写错误，全卷扣分不得超过两分，抄袭卷中阅读材料的抄袭部分不给分。 小试牛刀 有人认为孩子应该把所有时间都放在学习上，做家务方面的事情，孩子不需要做。也有人认为孩子应该帮父母做家务，这样可以培养他们自立，使他们学会更好地照顾自己。请结合班里同学做家务的情况，写一篇短文谈谈你的看法。 要求：语句通顺，意思连贯，书写规范，内容可适当发挥，80字左右。 Dear Sir or Madam, Do you think children should do some chores at home? In my opinion, I agree that __________________________________. I think it is important for children to _____ ______________. Nowadays,___ _.I have several reasons for this. First, it is important for children to _____________. Second,_____________. What's more，______________________. For example, ____________________________________________ All in all, children should_______ _________. It is good for them to develop themselves. _____________________. Yours truly, __________ Dear Sir or Madam, Do you think children should do some chores at home? In my opinion, I think kids shouldn’t help with housework____________. I think it is unfair for children to _____ ________________. Nowadays,___ _.I have several reasons for this. First, it is important for children to _______________________. Second,_____________. What's more，______________________. For example, ____________________________________________ All in all, children should not_______ __. It is good for them to develop themselves. Yours truly, __________ Dear Sir or Madam, As for me，I think /believe it’s important for children to do chores. It’s not enough to get good grades. First, children depend on their parents too much. Second, doing chores helps to develop children’s independence. What’s more, it also helps them to understand the idea of fairness. For example, because they live with their parents, it’s necessary for them to keep the house clean and tidy. All in all/ In a word, I think the earlier kids learn to be independent, the better it is for their future. Yours truly, ____________ Pros 支持 Topic sentence (论点) Reasons / Facts (论据) Conclusion (结论) Dear Sir or Madam, Yours truly, ____________ In my opinion , I think kids shouldn’t help with housework at home. First, kids already have enough stress from school. They don’t have time to do housework. Housework is a waste of time. Second, they should spend time on schoolwork. Also / What’s more, it’s the parents’ job to provide a clean and comfortable environment at home for their children. For example, parents don’t mind doing the dishes for their children because it’s not difficult. All in all/ In a word, I disagree kids do chores at home. Against 反对 Topic sentence (论点) Reasons / Facts (论据） Conclusion (结论) In my opinion,/ I think/agree … … First, … … Second, … … What’s more, … … For example. … … All in all,/ in a word, I think… … I want you to be the master of your destiny. have independence have a good education 这个世界上，没有谁是你永远的靠山。只有自己才是那座可靠的山！ Please be independent get a good education master(掌握） your own life Homework 假如你是王明，你将代表学校参加郴州市中学生英语演讲比赛。演讲的题目是We should help parents do houseork(chores). 请你用英语写一篇演讲稿。 要点提示： 你常做的家务 你的体会和看法 许多学生懒惰，不愿做家务。 整理床铺 浇花 打扫房间 倒垃圾 …… ……（至少两点） Homework: 参考词汇：lazy, chores, make the bed, water flowers, clean the room, take out the trash, relaxing, interesting, proud, pleased, duty 要求：1. 短文须包含要点提示中的所有信息，并可适当发挥； 2. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 3. 文中不得出现自己的真实姓名、校名和地名。 Ladies and gentlemen, Good morning! I’m Wang Ming. It's my honor to give you a speech. My topic is We should help parents do housework. ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ That’s all. Thanks for your listening! Thank you ! FormatFactory : www.pcfreetime.com $$