内容正文:
2025年高考英语新课标Ⅰ卷、Ⅱ卷 应用文写作分析
新课标 I 卷
适用地区:广东、福建、浙江、山东、湖南、湖北、河北、江苏、江西、安徽、河南
题目:假如你是李华,外教老师想要在班级英语报纸上做一个专栏,提供了两个主题,一个是“Fun at School”,另外一个是“Guess Who I Am”,请你写一封信回复外教。回复的内容包括两部分:
1、说明你的选择:
2、说明理由。
注意:
1、写作词数应为 80 个左右:
2、请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答,
一、写作趋势和体现
趋势
体现
交际性增强
强调“实用性写作”,如邮件、邀请、感谢、建议信等;本题为“回应外教建议”,交流目的明确
情境化明显
融入具体背景--英语报纸专栏,要求语言得体、语境合适
结构化要求简明
明确两方面内容,帮助学生合理安排文章结构
题材生活化
选题贴近学生生活,考查真实表达能力
评价多元化
鼓励学生从知识的接受者转变为问题探索者和解决者,表达个性、展示创新思维逻辑,不拘泥于模板
二、写作提示
1、提升任务意识: 写作要围绕任务目的组织语言,不能空谈。
2、注重语篇连贯: 使用逻辑衔接词 (如: first、besides、what`s more 等) ,保证思路清晰。
3、积累应用文模板: 熟练掌握书信格式,包括称呼、礼貌语、落款等。
4、注重内容丰富: 理由要具体、合情合理,可借助个人经历、课堂活动、同学反应等具体细节。
四、写作范文
写作范文1
Dear Mr. Smith,
I am pleased to share my thoughts on the new column of our English newspaper. I want to choose the theme of 'Fun in School'.
There are many happy moments in our school life, such as interesting classes, club activities, sports competitions, and class celebrations. Writing down these happy experiences can help us appreciate the bright side of school and share happiness with others. It can also bring back beautiful memories and enhance our community awareness.
I believe this topic is easy to attract readers and encourage them to participate more actively in school activities. I look forward to reading everyone's story!
Yours sincerely,
Li Hua
写作范文 2:
Dear Mr. Smith.
I am delighted to participate in our class's English newspaper! Among the two themes you provided, I prefer 'Guess Who I Am'.
This topic sounds very interesting and creative. It gives us the opportunity to describe our personality, hobbies, or special experiences without having to say our names. Readers can enjoy getting to know others and trying to guess the person being described. It helps us to learn more about our classmates in a fun and interactive way.
I think this idea will make newspapers more interesting and establish a stronger connection between us.
Best regards,
Li Hua
新课标 II 卷
适用地区:海南、重庆、辽宁、贵州、广西、吉林、黑龙江、甘肃、四川、云南、内蒙古、山西、陕西、青海、宁夏、新疆、西藏
假设你是李华,你的外教答应写一篇介绍加拿大体育运动的文章。
1、询问进度;
2、提醒他交稿日期。
注意:
1、写作词数应为 80 个左右;
2、请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答
一、写作趋势和体现
特点
体现
真实语境、实用功能
模拟学生与外教沟通催稿的场景,贴近现实生活
任务导向、交际明确
明确写作任务:询问+提醒,考查功能性表达能力
篇幅紧凑、信息完整
80词左右,要求在有限的词数内完成完整交际意图
语言得体、逻辑清晰
对书信格式、语气礼貌、语义逻辑均有隐性考查
交流对象真实可感
“外教”这一对象设置,体现跨文化沟通情境
二、写作提示
1、使用功能型表达句式,如: 询问进度、提醒时间、表达歉意、表达感谢等;
2、熟练掌握常见文体格式,如: 格式错误会直接扣分,如少结尾语、误拼称呼等:
3、练习 “真实场景写作” ,如:“预约老师时间”“提醒同学带材料”等小任务练习;
4、构建 “表达词块库” ,如:“Iwonder if...”“Just a gentle reminde...” 等礼貌用语语。
三、评分维度匹配
1、内容完整(任务完成度)
2、表达清晰(语言逻辑)
3、格式规范(语言格式)
4、语言得体(符合情境)
四、写作范文:
Dear Mr. Smith.
I hope this message makes you feel good. I am writing to see if you agree to write an article about Canadian sports for our school newspaper.
Can you tell me how it's progressing? As the submission deadline on Friday, June 10th approaches, I just want to give you a friendly reminder in case you forget.
If there is anything I can help with, please feel free to contact me at any time. We sincerely appreciate your contribution!
Best regards,
Li Hua
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