2025届高三英语小作文限时练精讲系列2

2026届高三英语一轮复习小作文限时练精讲系列2

 

小作文五：

 

I.审题：确定文体及格式、人称、时态

文体：建议信    格式：信件格式

人称：第一人称+第二人称

时态：一般将来时态+一般现在时态+其他时态

 

II.审题：确定结构→“三段式”

第一段：开门见山，表明写作目的

第二段：提供建议

第三段：表达期待

 

III.问题汇总

1.审题不清。题目要求为英语角的开设提供建议，部分同学写成向同学征集建议，将题目内容完全理解反了，导致文章大部分内容与写作目的不相关，只能降分至第一档分数。

2.对“英语角”的功能和作用理解不到位。部分同学误认为“英语角”类似图书角的功能，导致部分写作内容不恰当。例如：建议开设地点在教室的前面，建议的内容与英语毫不相干等。

3.套用背过的范文痕迹较重。例如：表达期待写成期待回信等。

4.使用的词汇有限，语法结构单调，错误较多，可读句少，影响理解。书写较差，卷面欠整洁。

 

IV.要点盘点→“斟词酌句”

第一段： 得知学校即将开设英语角，我非常激动。我在此写信想要提出一些我的建议供您参考。

I am wild with joy to know that our school will set up/launch an English Corner. So I’m writing to offer some of my suggestions for your kindly reference.

整合+修饰：

Knowing that an English corner will be set up/launched in our school, I’m thrilled/wild with joy to write here to offer some possibly useful suggestions for your kindly reference, which are as follows:

 

第二段：

为了让更多的学生参与到这个活动，英语角的时间应该被定在大家都没课的晚上。

Aiming to have more students involed in this informative and educational event, the time of English Corner, in my point of view, should be scheduled in the evening when most students are available. (现在分词做状语+过去分词作后置定语+插入语+定语从句+被动语态）

 

至于地点，我认为图书馆是最佳选择，因为在那里学生随时可以查阅各种书籍。

As for the address, I believe that the school library, where students could refer to books at any time, must be the best choice.（宾从+定从）

此外，英语角的主题可以是关于中国传统文化，这样可以帮助学生在练习英语的同时增强文化自信。

Besides, it’s worth mentioning that the themes of the event could be around traditional Chinese culture, which could help to enhance students’ cultural confidence while practising English.（主从+定从）

 

第三段：

我已经等不及想要尽快参加这个活动了！

I couldn’t wait to take part in this amazing activity as soon as possible!

 

 

IV参考范文：

Knowing that an English corner will be set up/launched in our school, I’m thrilled/wild with joy to write here to offer some possibly useful suggestions for your kindly reference, which are as follows:

Aiming to have more students involed in this informative and educational event, the time of English Corner, in my point of view, should be scheduled in the evening when most students are available.As for the address, I believe that the school library, where students could refer to books at any time, must be the best choice.Besides, it’s worth mentioning that the themes of the event could be around traditional Chinese culture, which could help to enhance students’ cultural confidence while practising English.

I couldn’t wait to take part in this amazing activity as soon as possible!

 

 

 

 

小作文六：

 

I.写作思路与结构

Para.1:表达对Penny来中国留学的热烈欢迎，自然引出下文对应用程序的推荐。

Para.2: 推荐2 - 3个实用应用程序，说明每个应用的功能、优势以及如何帮助Penny适应生活。（推荐的应用程序要能切实帮助Penny在中国三个月的日常生活。）

Para.3: 再次表达对Penny来中国的期待与祝福，使邮件结尾温馨且完整。

 

II.容易写跑题的点

推荐不相关应用：推荐的应用与日常生活、学习、出行等关联性弱，如推荐游戏

类应用。

未突出应用优势：仅列举应用名称，未详细阐述其如何助力Penny在中国的生活。

 

III. 写作素材

欢迎部分：

①I’m thrilled to hear you’re coming to study in China for three months! Welcome to this vibrant country—you’re going to love it here. 听说你要来中国学习三个月，我很激动！欢迎来到这个充满活力的国家——你会爱上这里的。

②I'm more than delighted to hear that you're coming to China for a three-month study. 得知你要来中国进行为期三个月的学习，我无比高兴。

③Welcome to China! I'm really looking forward to your arrival.

欢迎来到中国！我真的很期待你的到来。

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