2024-2025学年高一&高二上学期读后续写框架搭建练习（人与自我-梦想）+解析

Continuation Writing —— 人与自我（梦想） 1 Read for theme Courage and efforts to pursue one’s own passion 2 Read for characters 3 Kelly elder sister, Serena Mom Setting: Though Kelly’s mom always wanted her to _____________________ and Kelly herself was good at ballet, her love for ballet had _________, and she was eager for learning __________. now dancing at a top college Ballet was a way of life wanted…to follow her sister’s footsteps was good at ballet; Her love for ballet had faded away. told…about her new passion (boxing) didn’t understand — understand follow in her sister’s footsteps faded boxing both separately and as a whole How 4 Read for P & E Just a general idea, what we need is the specific topic, conveyed by this passage we are deal with. We are going to get more information from the reading material. 5 fascinated/impressed determined/ committed determined touched supported How is the following part developed? One day at school The next day Gradually How Kelly got inspired to learn boxing Kelly and Serena showed different opinions on Kelly’s decision. Serena began to support Kelly. Kelly had made up her mind to stick with her choice. persistent Two characters are mentioned. What did they do 6 Design the plot while reading for foreshadows Just a general idea, what we need is the specific topic, conveyed by this passage we are deal with. We are going to get more information from the reading material. 7 Para. 1 Then Kelly began her training for the tryout, keeping it a secret from her mom. 1. How did the boxing training go? How did Kelly keep the training a secret from her mom? (show the process) （早 got up early and slipped into; 下午 went to the gym for professional instructions; 晚 watch boxing videos） （lied that she had joined an after-school study group） 2. How did Kelly feel and what did she do in response? challenged; nervous; exhausted ———— insisted 3. How did the first paragraph end? The day for the tryout came. with Serena’s help 8 Para. 2 The following Monday, results of the boxing tryout were posted. 1. What was the result for Kelly? How did she respond to the result? (scanned the list for her name --- found her name --- couldn’t help breaking the news to…) 2. If she was qualified, how she got the support from her mom? Don’t make any character evil unless told (be worried… — be encouraged to … --- showed her great determination --- was startled at first but was quickly affected by…) 3. What was learned? (What should we keep in mind?) Don’t forget to mention the feelings. 9 10 11 $$ Ballet was a way of life in Kelly’s family. Her elder sister Serena was now dancing at a top college. Though Kelly’s mom always wanted her to follow in her sister’s footsteps and Kelly herself was good at ballet, her love for ballet had faded years before, and she was eager for a new challenge. One day at school, as Kelly left the dance studio, she walked past the gym, fascinated by boxers training inside the boxing ring. She was deeply impressed by how hard they hit and how fast they moved. In fact, she’d long been attracted to boxing. She pulled a piece of paper from her backpack. On the familiar Oakwood High School Club Sign-up Sheet was the phrase: BOXING CLUB TRYOUT. That was what Kelly really wanted to do. She knew her mom had high expectations for her when it came to ballet. Tired of trying to keep up with her sister, Kelly was ready to carve her own path. The next day, she gathered her courage and told Serena about her new passion. At first, Serena didn’t understand and thought she was just joking. But when she saw Kelly was serious, she replied, “You know Mom wants you to be a ballet dancer, right Besides, boxing is only for boys, and you re so good at ballet. Lean into your strength, Kelly.” “But this is where I want to put my strength,” Kelly insisted, “and what exactly does ‘only for boys’ mean, anyway Boxing is a sport for everyone!” Gradually, touched by her determination and passion, Serena began to understand and support her. Kelly could feel it. Her sister was going to respect her decision, no matter what. But that was nothing compared to the preparations for the tryout, where she was required to show her footwork and punching abilities with other candidates. Boxing didn’t come natural to Kelly, but she had made up her mind to stick with her choice. 注意： 1.所续写短文的词数应为150左右； 2.续写部分分为两段，每段的开头语已为你写好。 Para.1 Then Kelly began her training for the tryout, keeping it a secret from her mom. _________ Para.2 The following Monday, results of the boxing tryout were posted. ____________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$