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Practical Writing Letter of Advice Last week, we did practical writing practice on opinion sharing. 1 假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jimmy来信说，进入高中后，自己不适应高中生活，学习和心理压力日益增大，学习和生活受到了影响。请你用英文给他写一封回信，要点如下： 1．表示理解并给予安慰； 2．提出建议。 注意： 1．词数80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 background purpose Letter of Advice Content Tense my personal experience: past tense Structure mainly present & future tense Special--- no clear suggestions of what you can write about. Chinese instructions suggest. 2 Structure background & purpose & emotional resonance Part. 1 Part. 2 Para. 3 body part Suggestions ending most important part：informative & well-organized greeting Idea+details Link words best wishes Bearing this in mind, next we are going to have a quick review of those commonly seen types of text normally with a fixed structure. how we organize, what to write about Not enough to get a favorable result. You need to add details. Like the difficulties they meet or overcome. Other people like their teachers/parents‘ help and encouragement. 3 background & purpose & emotional resonance It is not unusual that + 句子 ……很平常 It is not unusual for sb. to do sth. Actually, I once shared the same experience as you. I quite understand how you feel now. Having survived my new school life, I am writing to offer you some suggestions. (非谓语说原因和背景，主句说写信目的) Bearing this in mind, next we are going to have a quick review of those commonly seen types of text normally with a fixed structure. how we organize, what to write about Not enough to get a favorable result. You need to add details. Like the difficulties they meet or overcome. Other people like their teachers/parents‘ help and encouragement. 4 Suggestions communicate with your friends or teachers often main idea + supporting detail proper use of link words variety of sentence patterns In that way, you might feel less anxious and they can help you with your problem. make plans for your school life make you more organized （有条理的）and lead a more effective life take down what you are going to do on each of the school days, and just follow the schedule. keep a balance between study and rest As the saying goes, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. 结果论述 结果论述 例子论述 原因论述 Bearing this in mind, next we are going to have a quick review of those commonly seen types of text normally with a fixed structure. how we organize, what to write about Not enough to get a favorable result. You need to add details. Like the difficulties they meet or overcome. Other people like their teachers/parents‘ help and encouragement. is given in terms of the result 5 Suggestions main idea + supporting detail proper use of link words variety of sentence patterns first of all; to begin with; initially furthermore; in addition; additionally; moreover last but not least; most/equally importantly, Bearing this in mind, next we are going to have a quick review of those commonly seen types of text normally with a fixed structure. how we organize, what to write about Not enough to get a favorable result. You need to add details. Like the difficulties they meet or overcome. Other people like their teachers/parents‘ help and encouragement. is given in terms of the result 7 Suggestions main idea + supporting detail proper use of link words variety of sentence patterns V-ing is recommended/ a good idea. It is recommended that sb. (should) do sth. You can… if you… Why not do … You can…, which will make you/ help you… Bearing this in mind, next we are going to have a quick review of those commonly seen types of text normally with a fixed structure. how we organize, what to write about Not enough to get a favorable result. You need to add details. Like the difficulties they meet or overcome. Other people like their teachers/parents‘ help and encouragement. is given in terms of the result 8 Ending Hopefully, my suggestions can be helpful/beneficial/ of great help to you. Bearing this in mind, next we are going to have a quick review of those commonly seen types of text normally with a fixed structure. how we organize, what to write about Not enough to get a favorable result. You need to add details. Like the difficulties they meet or overcome. Other people like their teachers/parents‘ help and encouragement. 9 Dear Jimmy, I’m sorry to hear that you have trouble fitting in your new school. It is not unusual for teenagers to have this problem. I quite understand how you feel now. Having survived my new school life, I am writing to offer you some suggestions. To begin with, it is highly recommended that you should communicate with your friends often. In that way, you can feel less anxious and they might help you with your problem. Additionally, you can try to make plans for your school life, which will make you more organized and confident. Most importantly, keeping a balance between study and rest is a good idea. As the saying goes, all work and no play makes Jack a dull boy. I sincerely hope my suggestions are beneficial to you. Best wishes. Yours, Li Hua $$ 【一页四份】 假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jimmy来信说，进入高中后，自己不适应高中生活，学习和心理压力日益增大，学习和生活受到了影响。请你用英文给他写一封回信，要点如下： 1．表示理解并给予安慰； 2．提出建议。 注意： 1．词数80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jimmy来信说，进入高中后，自己不适应高中生活，学习和心理压力日益增大，学习和生活受到了影响。请你用英文给他写一封回信，要点如下： 1．表示理解并给予安慰； 2．提出建议。 注意： 1．词数80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jimmy来信说，进入高中后，自己不适应高中生活，学习和心理压力日益增大，学习和生活受到了影响。请你用英文给他写一封回信，要点如下： 1．表示理解并给予安慰； 2．提出建议。 注意： 1．词数80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 假如你是李华，你的英国朋友Jimmy来信说，进入高中后，自己不适应高中生活，学习和心理压力日益增大，学习和生活受到了影响。请你用英文给他写一封回信，要点如下： 1．表示理解并给予安慰； 2．提出建议。 注意： 1．词数80左右； 2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3．开头和结尾已为你写好，不计入总词数。 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$