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应用文写作高分策略
一、列举或举例
1.such as.../like...
此外,还会定期举办各种英语活动。
In addition, all kinds of English activities will be held regularly, such as English Speech Competition, English Debate Contest and so on.(2023·枣庄高三二模)
2.for example/instance
如今,我们中的一些人在校园里养成了一些坏习惯。
Nowadays, some of us have formed some bad habits on campus. For instance, some students leave the lights on in the daytime; some leave much food on the table after eating.
3.including...
我们将组织一系列的活动。
We will organize a range of activities, including performances on traditional Chinese musical instruments, folk dances as well as Chinese martial arts.(2023·辽宁名校联盟3月适应性测试)
二、增加状语成分
1.增加目的状语
1)我们学校将举行一场中国民间舞蹈表演。
In order to enrich the campus life of international students, a Chinese folk dance performance will be given in our school.(2023·辽宁名校联盟2月质量检测)
2)此外,练习你的汉语口语。
Furthermore, practice your spoken Chinese so that you can express yourself more clearly and fluently.(2023·鞍山第二次监测)
2.增加结果状语
1)此外,我的英语很好。
Moreover, I have a good command of English, enabling me to communicate with foreign guests smoothly.(2023·长郡中学模拟试卷一)
2)将安排一系列与环保相关的讲座。
A series of lectures related to environmental protection will be arranged, thus arousing people’s awareness of living a low-carbon life.(2023·济宁三模)
3.增加伴随状语
所有的家庭成员围坐在桌子旁。
All family members would sit around the table, tasting delicious dumplings, watching performances and chatting happily.(2023·淄博高三一模)
4.增加时间状语
她总是耐心地帮助我。
She always helps me patiently every time I have difficulty in learning English.(2023·阜阳高三3月质量检测)
5.增加原因状语
我认为我适合这项职位。
I think I’m qualified for the position because I have a good command of English, especially written English.(2023·阜阳高三3月质量检测)
6.增加方式状语 by doing...,...
首先,每个人都有机会展示他们对这本书的理解。
Firstly, everyone will have the chance to show their understanding of the book by participating in the free discussions.(2023·福建4月联合测评)
7.增加with复合结构作状语
我们学校安排了一系列活动。
With the World Heritage Day approaching, our school has arranged a range of activities.(2023·石家庄教学质量检测二)
三、增加定语成分
1.介绍名人故事
世界著名人物的故事对我也很有吸引力。
The stories of world-famous people are also attractive to me, which helps me learn a lot from them.
2.介绍活动
为了使我们的学校更有吸引力,创造一个更好的环境,学生会组织了这次活动。
Aiming to make our school more attractive and create a better environment, the Students’ Union organized the activity, which took place on Saturday afternoon.(2023·抚顺普通高中高三模拟)
四、增加个人感受
虽然这个暑假我觉得很累,但我为我所做的事情感到很高兴。
Although I was very tired this summer holiday, I felt very happy for what I did because I got a knowledge of farming experience.
五、增加评价
我想这样的活动是必要的和有意义的。
I think such activities are necessary and meaningful, from which I learn that we should help people who are in trouble if possible.
六、增加希望
我们的操场能变得更加干净整洁。
I hope that with everyone’s efforts, our playground can become much cleaner and tidier. (2023·安徽省名校联盟高三4月联考)
七、增加倡议
我从这次经历中学到的是,爱护和保护我们的社区是我们的责任。
What I learnt from this experience is that it is our duty to love and protect our community. So the chairman of our school recommends our school hold a series of activities to call on students to take action to do it.
八、根据提示增加相关细节
1.Aiming to promote our understanding and passion for labour, our school is organizing an activity online, which is scheduled to begin on May 1st and last two weeks. (增加分词作状语,定语从句)(2023·湖北省高三第二次模拟)
为了提高我们对劳动的理解和热情,我们学校正在组织一项在线活动,定于5月1日开始,活动持续两周。
2.You’d better work out regularly so that you can keep fit and healthy and more importantly, more energetic. (增加so that引导的目的状语从句)(2023·辽宁二模)你最好定期锻炼,这样你才能保持身体健康,更重要的是,更有活力。
3.Not only did the volunteer work broaden my horizons but it also made me proud of myself for playing a part in the Olympic Games.(增加个人感受,倒装) (2023·抚顺模拟)
志愿者工作不仅开阔了我的视野,也让我为自己能在奥运会上发挥作用而感到自豪。
4.Due to social and economic development, human beings have damaged the environment seriously, and we are faced with serious problems like global warming and frequent natural disasters. ( due to 表示原因,like表示列举)
(2023·山东省新高考联合模拟)
由于社会和经济的发展, 人类对环境造成了严重破坏, 我们面临着诸如全球变暖和频繁的自然灾害等严重问题。
5.Since I watched the Winter Olympic Games in Beijing, I have been in love with skating.(增加since引导的时间状语从句)(2023·梅州高三二模)
自从我看了北京冬奥会之后,我就爱上了滑冰。
6.Knowing that you won’t be able to go back home during the Spring Festival, I am writing to invite you to spend it with my family, who will be more than happy to welcome you. (增加分词作状语,定语从句)
我知道春节期间你将不能回家,所以我写信请你和我的家人一起过春节,他们将非常高兴地欢迎你。
7.As scheduled, we are going to have a picnic on the riverside, thus giving you a chance to have a taste of Chinese cuisine.(增加分词作状语,表示结果)
按计划,我们将在河边野餐,让您有机会品尝中国美食。
8.Second, it is a good idea to bring a small gift, such as a bunch of flowers or a box of chocolate if they have young children. (增加such as短语,表示举例说明)
其次,如果他们有年幼的孩子,带一束花或一盒巧克力等小礼物是个好主意。
三、亮化词汇
原则1 求新求变
同样意义的词语,要根据语境使用最新学过的而不是小学、初中学过的词汇。如果同样的意义重复出现,要使用不同的表达方式。
1.Those who choose to read English books and visit English learning websites only make up 18% and 12% respectively.(2022·全国乙卷)
→Those who choose to read English books and visit English learning websites only account for 18% and 12% respectively.
2.With the wide spread of the Internet, more and more people become online learners.(2021·全国乙卷)
→With the wide spread of the Internet, an increasing number of people become online learners.
原则2 求准求精
写作时不一定每一句都要有高级句式,有时准确使用一个单词或短语就会让整个句子增色不少。
1.In conclusion, we should find a way to study online better.(2021·全国乙卷)
→In conclusion, we should find a way to study online more efficiently.
2.The World Oceans Day was set up to raise people’s awareness of protecting the oceans, which played an important part in global ecosystem.(2022·全国甲卷)
→The World Oceans Day was set up to raise people’s awareness of protecting the oceans, which played a significant/crucial part in global ecosystem.
原则3 短语优先
恰当使用短语代替单词,不但可以增加词数,还有助于行文流畅,增分提档。
1.I believe that your arrival will be important to our show.(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)
→I hold the firm belief that your arrival will be of great significance to our show.
2.However, from my point of view, what benefits students most is reading English books, for it can help students understand English better.(2022·全国乙卷)
→However, from my point of view, what benefits students most is reading English books, for it can help students gain a deeper understanding of/a deeper insight into English.
3.I would appreciate it if you could consider my invitation.(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)
→I would appreciate it if you could take my invitation into consideration /account.
4.As is shown by the figures of the chart, thanks to modern technology, many ways are available for students to polish their English.(2022·全国乙卷)
→As is shown by the figures of the chart, thanks to modern technology, a wide range of/varieties of ways are available for students to polish their English.
应用文高分策略 (五)
四、衔接过渡
一、用于“启”的过渡词语
as you know, as is shown in the..., generally speaking, first of all, to begin with, for one thing, above all, on the one hand, to start with, as is known to us等。
1.As is known to us, trees are very significant to the environment and humans.(2023·大庆二模) 众所周知,树木对环境和人类都非常重要。
2.First of all, you should keep calm whenever meeting with something unpleasant. 首先,遇到不愉快的事情时,你应该保持冷静。
3.As is shown above, there are two cartoons presenting two quite different situations. 正如上面所示,这两幅漫画描述了两种完全不同的情景。
二、用于“承”的过渡词语
secondly, also, in addition, additionally, besides, plus, moreover, for another thing, for this purpose, furthermore, what’s more, for example, in other words, in fact, at the same time, as a result, therefore, meanwhile等。
1.What’s more, we can develop our understanding of the differences between the eastern and western cultures.(2023·枣庄二模) 此外,我们还可以加深对东西方文化差异的理解。
2.Therefore, students should spare more time for English reading rather than watching movies or listening to music too much.(2022·全国乙卷) 因此,学生应该腾出更多的时间阅读英语,而不是过多地看电影或听音乐。
3.Secondly, how AI technology can be applied to and affect tomorrow’s education will be further explained.(2023·合肥第二次质量检测)其次,将进一步解释人工智能技术如何应用于并影响未来的教育。
4.Meanwhile, all the audience were touched by his perseverance deeply and applauded warmly.(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷) 同时,全场观众都被他的毅力深深打动,报以热烈的掌声。
5.Furthermore, it is necessary for you to take a good rest, which will provide enough energy for you. 此外,你有必要好好休息,这将为你提供足够的能量。
6.In addition, he served as a visiting professor at several American universities.
除此之外,他还是几所美国大学的客座教授。
三、用于“转”的过渡词语
after all, but, however, on the contrary, in contrast, otherwise, while, though, despite, in spite of, all the same, as a matter of fact, nevertheless等。
1.However, he spared no effort to catch up with the others, drops of sweat streaming down his cheeks, showing no sign of giving up.(2022·新高考Ⅰ卷)
然而,他不遗余力地追赶其他人,汗水顺着脸颊流下,丝毫没有放弃的迹象。
2.It is really amazing that, despite the cultural differences, we actually live in the same world.(2022·浙江1月卷) 令人惊讶的是,尽管存在文化差异,但我们实际上生活在同一个世界里。
3.As a matter of fact, I believe in you whatever the result will be!
事实上,无论结果如何,我都相信你!
四、用于“合”的过渡词语
in a word, finally, at last, in short, in the end, in conclusion, on the whole, in summary, to sum up, to put it in a nutshell等。
1.To sum up, thank you for your attendance, and I wish you all a meaningful and enjoyable experience.(2023·杭州高三二模)
总之,感谢大家的参与,并祝大家有一个有意义和愉快的经历。
2.In conclusion, facing difficulties with courage and determination is essential for personal growth and success.(2023·辽宁省重点高中联合体二模)
总之,以勇气和决心面对困难对个人成长和成功至关重要。
3.All in all, let’s act together now to strengthen our physical health and create a better life.(2023·济南高三3月模拟)
总而言之,让我们现在一起行动起来,强身健体,创造更美好的生活。
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