4 话题一 日常活动(PPT课件)-【追击中考】2025年中考英语（江西专用）

江西2025版 旧中考 铭文文化 话题写作提升 话题一 日常活动(2024江西,2016江西) 话题写作导练 话题分析 分析江西近于年中考直题的书面表达可知,针对“日常活动”这一话题,在2024年以双减后 而何安排好个人的课余生活为题材进行考查;在206年以介绍“我”的书句及书句背后的课业回 题以及课余期望做的事情为题材进行考查 典例霜析 0 第1步 审题 (2024江西)我国义务教育阶段实施“双减”政策以来,学生拥有 -①定主题:更将地利用课余 更多的课余时间。为了引导学生更好地利用课余时间,增强时间管 时间 理意识,学校英语社团以“Makingbetteruseoftime”为题向学生征 -②定体裁:说明文 文,请你根据下列写作要点写一篇短文投稿。 定人称:第一人称 写作要点: ④定时态:一般现在的 1. When do you have free time? 定要点: a.什么时候有课余时间 2. What do you often do in your free time? (Give 3 examples) 6.课余时间经常做的事情 3. Do you think your free time is better used? Why or why not? (举3个例) .课余时间使用合理或不合 理原因 要求: 1.短文应句括所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可话当 发挥; 2.短文中不能出现真实的人名、校名、地名等信息 3.词数80~120,短文开头已给出,不计入总词数 Making better use of time As a junior high school student,I have got more free time in recent years. [| 第2步 列提纲,谋布局 要点 写作框架 写句子 引出双减政策 As a junior high school student, I have 开篇:点明主题 后,学生的课余 got more free time in recent years. 时间更多了 要点 写作框架 写句子 First of all, I plan to 帮助父母做家务 What's more, playing sports is 进行体育运动 正文:介绍自己课余 时间的安排 Moreover. 读课外书 说明自己的课 I think my free time is better used 余时间安排得 合理的原因 [即 写作框架 要点 写句子 再次强调自己 In brief, 结尾:总结全文 的课余时间安 排得合理 第3步 巧用好词佳句 普通作文 高分范文 Making better use of time Making better use of time As a junior high school student,I have got As a junior high school student,I have got more free time in recent years. Now that the more free time in recent years. Now that the Double Reduction policy has reduced students' Double Reduction policy has reduced students' homework burden,I have a chance to do things homework burden,I have a chance to do things I enjoy. But how can I make better use of my I enjoy. But how can I make better use of my free time in this case? free time in this case? First of all, I plan to help my parents ·First of all, I plan to help my parents with housework, such as cooking and with some some housework, such as cooking ( and washing the dishes. These housework can washing the dishes,to improve my life skills. improve my life skills. Life skills can make me Life skills can not only make me form good form good habits and help me a lot in the future. habits but also help me a lot in the future. 普通作文 高分范文 ## e What's fantastic more, playing sports is Playing another sports way to another spend my free time. It keeps me active and fantastic way to spend my free time. It keeps healthy. I make it a rule to do some sports me active and healthy. I make it a rule to do day. Moreover,I dive into my favorite some sports every day. every · Moreover,I dive into books. They can open up new worlds to me. I my favorite books, which can open up new think my free time is better used because I do worlds to me. eI think my free time is better meaningful things and I balance study many used because I do what I want to do and I and entertainment. balance study and entertainment. In brief,I arrange my time properly and In brief,I arrange my time properly and benefit from theDouble Reduction policy. benefit from the Double Reduction policy. [ 【亮点赏析】 ①用动词不动式作目的状语升格句子,增加句式多样性。 ②用notonly...butalso...结构升格句子,丰富了文章的句式结构。 ③巧用衔接词what'smore,使语句连接更紧密。 ④把两个简单句升格成which引导的定语从句,使文章表达更高级 用宾语从句升格句子,为文章增色 [|