第七章 高考作文速提分-【满分作文】新高中英语满分作文

第七章：高考作文速提分 高中英语满分作文 第七章 高考作文速提分 一、书面表达升级技巧 1,运用四大原则，体现欧美风格 -This can hinder the progress of (1)具体性原则 students as the more advanced one may 在具备一定词汇量的条件下，具体的表达 dominate the conversation,leaving little room 比泛泛而谈更能引起读者的共鸣。例如：当描 for the other students to improve. 述一个人时，类似a nice/,good man的表达会 3If you are free on this Sunday,I 让人感觉很空洞，因此我们可以用一些具体的 together with the whole Talk and Talk staff 词来描述，如kind-hearted(好心的)，generous am waiting for your coming. (慷概的，大方的)，easy-going(随和的)等。 If you are available on this Sunday,I It's good manners to be polite and together with the whole Talk and Talk staff punctual in China. am waiting for your coming. This activity is busy and interesting. 4The film is about the development of When feeling depressed,I often choose to our school. enjoy the novel part which includes a lot of The film is mainly related to the imaginative stories. development of our school. (2)新颖性原则 5The film will greatly help us students know 写作时恰当得体地使用高中学过的、别人 the school's history better. 可能想不到的词汇，会给阅卷人耳目一新的感 -.The film will greatly help us students 觉。但是需注意：既要避免使用俗词，又要避 get much more acquaintance with the school's 开生僻词汇。 history better. DTo begin with,I agree your decision to (3)短语优先原则 start a spoken English seminar,which will 多使用词组、习语来代替一些单词，以增 surely benefit us.To begin with,I'm in 加文采。 favor of your decision to start a spoken DThe final exam of this term is coming. English seminar,which will surely benefit us. -.The final exam of this term is around 2 This can hinder the progress of the corner. students as the more advanced one may ②Last weekend,I attended a“Getting to control the conversation,leaving little room Know the Plants Around Us"activity for the other students to improve. organised by our Students'Union. 103 There is no such thing as a great talent without great will.没有伟大的意志力，便没有雄才大略。 高中英语满分作文 第七章高考作文速提分 Last weekend,I participated in a -To be honest,voters sometimes feel “Getting to Know the Plants Around Us” annoyed,not because they hate voting,but activity organised by our Students'Union. because they are divided between emotion and ③“I knew you'dwin!I am proud of you. fairness. You succeed!"he said excitedly. 2.利用高级词汇，照亮阅卷人眼 →“I knew you'dwin!I am proud of you. ①第一first-→to begin/start with You made it！”he said excitedly. ②第二second-,in addition./what's more It doesn't differ from ordinary voting ③最后finally-→last but not least events,in which candidates go around to seek ④总之in a word→to sum up/in supports. conclusion/in summary -It makes no difference from ordinary ⑤但是but→however voting events,in which candidates go around ⑥机会chance->opportunity to seek supports. It is a really good opportunity to experience 5Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary Chinese culture. ⑦选择choice-→alternative cross-country running race,which nearly ⑧考虑consider-take into account/ attracted every student and teacher of our school. consideration -Last Sunday witnessed an extraordinary ⑨课程course-→eurriculum cross-country running race,which nearly drew the ⑩充足enough→adequate attention of every student and teacher of our ①影响effect-→influence school. ②，最终finally→eventually 6The film intends us to serve us school's ⑧勤奋的hard-working→diligent development. ④帮助help→assist The film appeals to us to make ⑤分发hand out--~distribute contributions to our school's development. ⑥后果result-→consequence (4)避免重复原则 ⑦替代replace→substitute 尽量避免过多地使用某一个单词，必要时 ⑧拒绝refuse→deny 选择使用其他恰当的同（近）义词来代替。 ⑧应该should-→be supposed to DIf it is convenient for you,let's meet at @缺点shortcoming→drawback 8:30 outside the school gate.If it is not @理解understand→make sense of/ convenient for you,let me know what time figure out suits you best. @可用can be used-→be available -If it is convenient for you,let's meet at ②使用use→employ/make use of 8:30 outside the school gate.If not,let me ④艰难的difficult-→painstaking know what time suits you best. 达成一致agree on-→reach a consensus on 2To be honest,voters sometimes don't ④种类繁多的all kinds of-→a wide range of want to vote,not because they hate voting,but ⑦也：和as well as→in addition to/ because they are divided between emotion and apart from fairness. ⑥反对be against-→object to 104 Difficult circumstances serve as a textbook of life for people.国难坎坷是人们的生活教科书， 第七章：高考作文速提分 高中英语满分作文 ④厌烦be bored with→be fed up with ⑧置若罔闻refuse to listen to→turn a ④t忙于be busy in/with→be occupied deaf ear to in/with 图成功做某事succeed in doing sth.~ ①发生happen-→come about/,occur make it @几乎不hardly→barely 励美得无法描述too beautiful to describe ③提高improve-→promote -beauty beyond description ④重要的important--vital ①震区the areas which are hit by the ④立即immediately-→in a flash earthquake->the quake-hit areas 不可能的impossible→out of the question @一件震惊世界的事情an incident that ⑦有趣的interesting→absorbing/appealing shakes the world--a world-shaking incident ⑧参加join→participate ⑧一个表现好的孩子a child who behaves ④幸运的lucky→fortunate in a proper way-a well-behaved child ④巨大的large-→enormous 一个脾气坏的人a man who easily ⑩有意义的meaningful-→rewarding loses his temper-"an ill-tempered man ④许多的many→a large quantity of ⑤一所节能的房子a house which saves ④明显的obvious--apparent energy-an energy-saving house ④合适的proper-→appropriate 硒一位受到良好教有的妇女a woman who has received a good education-a well- ⑤丰富的rich~abundant educated woman ⑩小心，谨慎be careful-→be cautious ⑦一次精心组织的活动an activity that is ①与…不同be different from→differ organized well-a well-organized activity vary from ⑧一个爱好和平的人a person who loves ④渴望做…be eager to do-→be dying/ peace-a peace-loving person long to do 3.频变句型结构，增加得分亮点 ④⑩因为because of--→on account of (1)肯定不如双否好 团因…而闻名be famous for-→have a 考生只要稍加注意，在文章中运用双重否 reputation for 定的句子就可以给自己的写作增加得分亮点。 @伤心be sad->be cast down ①那名邮递员天天准时来。 ®正在建设的being built→under The postman comes on time every day. construction (普通) ⑧感到着急feel anxious→experience The postman never fails to come every anxiety day.(高级) @感到舒心feel comfortable→feel ②几乎每个人对生活的态度都受到了地 at ease 震的影响。 ⑤在我看来in my opinion→as far as I am Almost everyone's attitude towards life concerned was affected by the earthquake,(普通) 美化学校make the school beautiful-, There was hardly a man or a woman beautify the school whose attitude towards life was not affected ⑦故意on purpose-→deliberately/by design by the earthquake.(高级) 105 I,ife would be too smooth if it had no rubs in it,人生要是没有坎河，那就未免太平滑了. 高中英语满分作文 第七章高考作文速提分 (2)陈述不如倒装妙 ④“s0十形容词/副词”置于句首，主句使 在写作中，阅卷老师喜欢看到的高级语法 用部分倒装语序。 结构主要有六种：倒装、强调、从句、独立主格 那部电影如此有趣，以至于我们都想再看 结构，wth复合结构、虚拟语气。倒装是一种 一遍 最简单易行的使句子呈现亮点的方法，它能使 The film was so interesting that we all 文章内容突出、富有节奏。在高中阶段，我们 wanted to see it a second time,(普通) 掌握倒装的五种形式可以更好地应对写作。 So interesting was the film that we all ①以否定词开头，使用部分倒装语序。 wanted to see it a second time.(高级) 如果写出的句子中有否定词，不如用否定 ⑤as引导的倒装句 词开头变成倒装句。 as引导的让步状语从句使用倒装语序， 我永远不会放弃。 可达到同样巧妙的效果。 I will never give up..(普通) Badly injured as he was,he managed to Never will I give up.(高级) take down the car's number. ②以地点状语开头，使用完全倒装语序。 尽管受伤严重，他还是成功地记下了那辆 如“一个建筑物位于什么位置”“什么地方 汽车的车牌号码。 有什么东西”等，它们都可以用完全倒装句式 Much as he enjoys it,he doesn't want to 表达出来。 buy it. 图书馆的前面矗立着一棵百年古树。 尽管他非常喜欢它，但他不想买它。 A hundred-year-old tree stands in front (3)主动不如被动巧 of the library.(普通) 许多阅卷老师发现，在近儿年的高考试卷 In front of the library stands a hundred- 中，考生也许是受汉语思维的影响，几乎整篇 year-old tree.(高级) 文章都使用主动语态，很少使用被动语态。如 表达地点时我们可把地点状语放在句首， 果能把整篇文章中一两个句子变成被动语态， 用倒装语序。这样做的好处首先是使用了高 就会呈现出句型的变化，从而使整篇文章句型 级结构：其次，倒装后把真正的主语放到了句 丰富。 子的末尾，后面还可以继续加从句，使整个句 我们每次最多可以借5本书，借10天。 子呈现更多的亮点。如：In the center of our We can borrow at most five books at a school lies the library,which is between the time,and we can keep them for ten days. playground and the teaching building. 通) ③“only十状语（从句）”置于句首，句子 At most five books can be borrowed at a (主句)使用部分倒装语序，用来强调地点、时 time and they can be kept for ten days.(高级) 间、方式、条件等。 (4)简单不如并列、复合强 Only in this way can I improve my 有时为了使句子的连贯性更强，表达更为 English. 贴切、自然，我们可以在两个或多个简单句之 只有用这种办法我才能提高英语水平。 间加上and,but,for(因为)，or(或者，否则) Only by taking exercise can we keep fit. while(而，却)，not only..,.but also...等并列 只有通过锻炼我们才能保持健康。 连词（词组），使其成为并列句。 106 Self-distrust is the cause of most of our failure.我们失败的源因，大多是对有已缺乏信心。 第七章高考作文速提分 高中英语满分作文 D You must hurry.You'll miss the ③用现在分词作结果状语和原因状语。 plane. 个别特殊结构中也可用动词不定式 You must hurry,or you'll miss the plane. His uncle died,leaving him a lot of 2Honey is sweet.The bee stings. money. .Honey is sweet but the bee stings. 他的叔叔去世了，留给了他很多钱 有时可根据上下句之间的关系，在两个或 Not knowing his name,I found it hard to 多个简单句之间加上when,as,because, find him. where,which,who等从属连词，使简单句变成 由于不知道他的名字，我发现很难找 复合句。 到他。 DWe'll organize all kinds of activities in our He got there in a hurry only to find English club.We can not only practise but also everyone had gone. learn more English words in the activities. 他匆匆赶到那儿，结果发现大家都走了。 含定语从句的主从复合句) ④动名词作宾语。 -We'll organize all kinds of activities in 习惯上接动名词作宾语的词有：admit(承 our English club in which we can not only 认)，advise(建议)，allow(允许)，appreciate practise but also learn more English words. (感激)，avoid(避免)，consider(考虑)，delay 2He missed the first bus.He came to (推迟)，discuss((讨论)，dislike(不喜欢)，enjoy school late.(改为含状语从句的主从复合句) (喜爱)，escape(逃脱)，excuse(原谅)，fancy -Because he missed the first bus.he (没想到)，finish(完成)，forbid(禁止)，forgive came to school late. (原谅)，give up(放弃)，imagine(想象)，keep (5)非谓语结构不能少 (保持)，mention(提及)，mind(介意)，miss(错 ①用动词不定式作目的状语。 过：避开，躲开)，pardon(原谅)，permit(允 To master a foreign language,we must 许)，practise(练习)，prevent(阻止)，put off work hard. 要想掌握一门外语，我们必须努力学习。 (推迟)，report(报告)，can't resist(忍不住)， ②用分词作方式和伴随状语。 resist(拒绝)，risk(冒险)，stop(停止)，suggest This can hinder the progress of students (建议)等。 as the more advanced one may dominate the She admitted having taken the textbook conversation,leaving little room for the other by mistake. students to improve. 她承认错拿了课本。 这可能会阻碍学生的进步，因为更高级的 We don't allow smoking here in the 学生可能会主导对话，给其他学生留下很小的 doctor's waiting room. 改进空间。 我们不允许在医生候诊室这里抽烟。 Confucius traveled throughout the I appreciate being given this opportunity country,imparting his wisdom to countless to go abroad for further study. disciples and leaving a profound impact on 非常感谢给了我这个出国深造的机会。 Chinese society. He wore a false beard to avoid being 孔子周游列国，把自己的智慧传授给无数 recognized by his enemy. 弟子，给中国社会留下了深刻的影响。 他戴了假胡子，以免被他的敌人认出来 107 The greatest of faults is to be conscious of none,种种过错中最大的过错，就在于不承认任何过错， 高中英语满分作文 第七章高考作文速提分 He considered changing the plan to adapt 语、独立主格结构等巧妙地结合在一起，不但 to the new situation. 可以使表达形式更丰富，而且可以使句子变得 他考虑改变计划以适应新的情况。 更精彩、信息量更大，这也能充分显示出我们 They discussed selling their little shop. 在英语表达上的实力。请欣赏并熟记下列 他们商量过卖小商店的事。 句子： We forbid smoking during office hours. ①同位语 我们不准在办公时间抽烟。 I want to have a pen friend,hopefully a Whenever I mention playing football,he girl in her early twenties. says he's too busy. 我想有一个笔友，希望是一个二十出头的 我一提踢足球的事，他就说太忙。 女孩子。 The lady can never resist buying new ②形容词短语 dresses. 那位女士永远也抵挡不住买新连衣裙的 The boy went home,hungry and tired. 诱惑。 男孩又累又饿地回到了家。 ⑤通常情况下，动词不定式表将来：现在 ③动词不定式短语 分词表主动或进行：过去分词表被动或完成： To study well,we need to do sports. 动名词表目的、用途等。 为了好好学习，我们需要做运动。 The building to be built next month is a ④现在分词短语 library. In this picture,a mother bird stays in her 下个月要建造的楼房是一座图书馆。 nest in a big tree,seeing her babies flying away. The building being built now is a stadium. 在这幅图画中，一只鸟妈妈待在一棵大树 现在正在建造的建筑是体育场。 上的鸟巢里，看着她的小鸟飞走。 The building built last year is a lab ⑤过去分词短语 building. Compared with letters and public 去年建造的楼房是一座实验楼。 phones,mobile phones and the Internet are This is a swimming pool. faster and more convenient. 这是一个游泳池。 与信件和公用电话相比，手机和因特网更 I bought a walking stick for my grandpa. 快、更方便。 我为爷爷买了一根拐杖 ⑥介词短语 ⑥时间状语从句、原因状语从句、条件状 语从句等可以变成独立主格结构或分词结构。 Instead of giving us answers immediately,he If such is the case,you should apologize encourages us to think by ourselves. to her. 他鼓励我们独立思考，而不是马上告诉我 -Such being the case,you should apologize 们答案 to her. (7)篇章结构巧连贯 如果是这样的话，你应该向她道款。 在英语写作中，要做到篇章结构连贯，除 (6)简单变身有妙招 了在内容的组织安排上要注意前后的逻辑关 简单句其实也可以不简单，若我们将简单 系，有时还需要恰当使用能承上启下的关联词 句与非谓语动词、形容词短语、介词短语、同位 语。最常用的关联词语有： 108 He that does one fault at first,and lies to hide it,makes it two. 袍了错误再用谎言遮盖，便是一错再错。 第七章：高考作文速提分 高中英语满分作文 ①表示举例的关联词语：for example, ①表示递进的关联词语：besides,what's take...for example,for instance,such as,like more,what is worse,moreover,furthermore. ②表示列举的关联词语：for one thing.. in addition,on top of (and)for another (thing)...,in the first ⑧表示强调的关联词语：without any place,to begin with/to start with,first of all, doubt,obviously,above all first (ly)/second (ly)/third (ly),in addition, ⑧表示概括的关联词语：in general,to besides/what's more/furthermore/moreover, sum up,to conclude,in a word,in short,in finally,last but not least,on the one hand... brief.generally speaking,in conclusion,on the on the other hand... whole,all in all ③表示转折的关联词语：but,however, ④表示观点的关联词语：in my opinion,in while,on the contrary,otherwise my view,in my point of view,as far as I'm ④表示因果的关联词语：because,since, concerned,as for me,personally,I think/ as.for,due to,owing to,thanks to,on account believe... of,because of,as a result of,for this reason, 在记叙文中常用one day,at first,then, so,therefore,so...that,thus later,afterwards,soon,before,after,when. ⑤表示比较、对照的关联词语：like, while,as soon as,since,during,eventually,at unlike,on the other hand,nevertheless, last,finally,in the end,immediately等表示时 similarly,compared to/with,just like,just as 间顺序的词语来叙述故事的发展过程或做某 ⑥表示时间的关联词语：at first/to start 事的过程。 with/in the beginning,then,next,later, 在议论文中，列举事实、陈述理由或说明 afterwards,(soon)after that,after a while. meanwhile,first of all,at last,finally,now,at 原因时，常用for one thing..·(and)for present,in the past,recently,immediately, another(thing)...,in the first place,to begin with,first (ly),second (ly),third (ly),in soon,at that moment,as soon as,the moment,from then on,from now on,at the addition,besides,first and most important, same time,not...until,after,before,when, last but not least等。这类词语在近几年的写 while,during 作中运用十分广泛。 ⑦表示目的的关联词语：for this 4,升级复合句式，提升文章档次 purpose,for the purpose of,so as to,so that, 考生仅用基本的句型不能体现出较强的 in order to,in order that 语言运用能力，即使表达方面无错误，作文也 ⑧表示让步的关联词语：though,although,. 不能得高分：如果考生使用了较复杂的结构， even if,even though,no matter how/ 如定语从句、状语从句，名词性从句等，即使有 what/who/... 些小错误，作文也会处于较高的档次。 ⑨表示条件的关联词语：if,unless,as ①What I intend to stress(主语从句)is long as,so long as,on condition that,in case, that we are about to start our next lesson in in case of Classroom 8 of the Teaching Building at 10 am ⑩表示并列的关联词语：not only.·.but next Friday(表语从句). also,both...and,either...or,neither...nor, 2This activity holds great significance as as well as it not only fosters cultural understanding but 109 Never put off till tomorrow what you can do today,今日事今日毕/朝将今事待明日， 高中英语满分作文 第七章高考作文速提分 also allows me to share my own culture and ②If you are able to come with us(状语从 learn from others(状语从句). 句)，please let us know, 3It would be great if we could have a 10- ⑧If you are interested in it(状语从句)，let minute question and answer session at the end me know and I'll send you more information. of your talk. I was so happy to hear the news that( That's why I think the trip along the 语从句)I immediately shared it with my Yantze will be a better choice(表语从句) teacher. 5You'd better arrive on time because it 5 With the bird in my cupped hand,I is polite to be punctual in China(状语从句). looked around to see how she had gotten in 6The film is mainly related to the deve- 词性从句). lopment of our school,which will greatly help If I could interview him(状语从句)，I us students know the school's history better. would ask him what made him an astronaut( (定语从句). 语从句)and how he was trained(宾语从句). DAlthough my fingers were painful after Refused as I was,I still received some few hours practice(状语从句)，I felt satisfied great encouragement,which gives me confide- if I could play a music piece completely. nce to be a writer(定语从句). 8Planning is good as it decides in detail 18 The activity is highly spoken of,because (状语从句)how we do(宾语从句)what we not only does it provide chance for us to exercise, want to do(宾语从句)， but also makes us more cohesive(状语从句) ⑨lt's you who(强调句型)make me fall 9Besides,students may feel uncomforta- in love with writing,my social studies ble or less motivated if paired with someone teacher. who they don't get along with or have difficulty You can write anything relevant so communicating with(定语从句). long as it's interesting and informative(状语从 Writing was so difficult and painful for 句). me that my teacher had allowed me to present DWe'll also spend some fun time together my paper on the sinking of the Titanic by singing,dancing and playing games,which we acting out a play,where I played all the parts hope will make them happy(定语从句). (定语从句) 二、书面表达开头、结尾与过渡 1,“起”好开头 cities are complaining about the heavy traffic. 【常用开头词汇】 In the first place,she can read at the rate First:I think everyone needs friends and of 100 words a minute. is eager to get friendship. To begin with,smoking should be banned First of all,we must make full use of in public areas. every 45-minute lesson. Generally speaking,the more you practise,the Nowadays/Recently,people in many big more skillfully you can write in English. 110 Those that make the best use of their time have none to spare,充分利用时间的人不会有余瑕 第七章：高考作文速提分 高中英语满分作文 With the development of the Internet. Meanwhile/At the same time,I will regard computers play an important role in people's it as my duty to keep our environment clean. life. Take Beijing for example,it is one of the 【常用开头句式】 oldest cities in the world. As the proverb says/As the saying goes, 【常用顺承句式】 “Time is money.” What is more serious is that we don't As can be seen from the table,nearly cherish wildlife. everyone owns one mobile phone in China. What's more,good books can help us to It is believed that health is above wealth. develop good characters. It is well-known that an elephant is a very As far as I am concerned,they stand for kind and gentle animal. love,friendship and unity. I'm excited to learn that we are going to 【满分作文选粹】 start a magazine. What's more,we can also hand out 【满分作文选粹】 leaflets to call on more people to protect the I am delighted to know you are invited to ocean. a dinner party by your Chinese friend. Additionally,I would love to teach other First of all,as smart online learners,we students how to make traditional Chinese can make full use of the most extensive items. educational resources to broaden the However,I'm afraid it'd be less effective, horizons. for they couldn't cooperate well,if two I'm sorry to inform you that I can't go students are randomly chosen. out with you this weekend. When it comes to ocean,its pollution is Besides,students may feel uncomfortable becoming more and more serious. or less motivated if paired with someone who To begin with,randomly pairing up they don't get along with or have difficulty students may lead to unbalanced language communicating with. abilities within the groups. 3.“转”好过渡 2.“承”好上下 【常用转折过渡词汇】 【常用顺承词汇】 Most importantly,the eldly are usually Secondly,we should get up early to the first to taste the food served on the table memorize idioms and useful expressions. because they are well respected in China. Obviously,a good learning habit can help To be frank,studying for a degree in a us to speed up to reach our destinations. different culture is never easy. I lost my way in the forest and to make But unfortunately I mind my own matters worse/what is worse,it became dark. business without considering my parents. In addition,we shouldn't neglect that However,not until the match was over everyone wants a friendly and peaceful society. did we realize that we became the losers. 111 A father is a treasure,a brother is a comfort,but a friend is both,父亲是时富，兄弟是安慰，月友兼而有之。 高中英语满分作文 第七章高考作文速提分 On the other hand,online shopping also Only with combined efforts can we expect has many disadvantages. our hometown to take on a new look in the near On the contrary,the volunteers always future. claim that they are tired of the life on earth. We can,therefore.come to the conclusion Contrary to what I had originally said,the that nothing is so precious as peace in the trip turned out to be fun. world. 【满分作文选粹】 However,what amazes you most is the From what has been discussed above,we following new function. may draw the conclusion that you must have 4.“合”好结尾 self-confidence if you want to achieve 【常用结尾词汇】 something. All in all,traveling is the best choice to 【满分作文选粹】 recharge ourselves and get ready for the new I'll appreciate it if you can reply to my challenges. letter at your earliest convenience. In conclusion,a good citizen should Hope you'll have a good time in China. observe traffic regulations. All in all,it is high time that we devoted In a word,success is important,and so is failure,because it's the mother of success. ourselves to protecting ocean.To protect To sum up,environmental protection is of ocean is to protect ourselves. great importance,which can make us live In short,internet voting,to some extent, more comfortably and healthily. is unfair,if not immoral,and cannot be On the whole,I find a bike more enjoyable trusted. than a motorcycle. In a word,my life will be much richer and 【常用结尾句式】 more colorful. I'd appreciate it if you could deliver them As far as I'm concerned,it is a disturbing as soon as possible. It is high time that we did something to trend.For students,what benefits most to protect the environment from being polluted. their study is reading English books. 112 A friend exaggerates a man's virtue,.an enemy his crimes..朋友宣扬人的美德，敌人夸大人的罪过。