第五章 读后续写突破-【满分作文】新高中英语满分作文

第五章 读后续写突破 高中英语满分作文 第五章 读后续写突破 考题解读 比如2023年新课标全国I卷反应了人与自 我。因此,做好读后续写的英语写作的前提是 读后续写是一种将阅读与写作相结合的 研究记叙文的行文规律以及了解读后续写的 考察形式,要求考生对所读材料进行续写,将 考察能力: 其发展成一篇与给定材料有所衔接,情节架构 一、把握短文关键信息和语言特点的能力 自然,而目结构完整的短文(教育部考试中心 二、语言运用的准确性和丰富性。 2015年)。读后续写多以记叙文故事类文章 三、对语篇结构的把控能力. 为主,而且主题多与社会,自然和自我相结合。 四、创造性思维能力。 解巧 一、“双线”出击,语言协同 读后续写的过程是实现情节、情感动态生成的过程。考生在读和写的过程中一定要把握 好情节线和(作者)情感线,本着“情境简洁,语言协同”的原则完成续写。 1.以读促写,“双线”出击 1.时间线索 情节线(动词,名词) 2.人物的回忆,思考描写 3.细节动作描写 设计障碍,推 4.抓住故事中心矛盾,合理构思 故事中心句 写渲染 环境擂 (中心词) 动故事高潮 情感线(形容词,副词. 1.情绪的变化 动词和介词短语) 2.与情节互相照应线索 (情感变化与碰撞) 示范:(浙江高考) 情节线:quarrel -→ walked away got lost-→found the stream → helicopter 情节线:(angry)-. (confused/regretful)-→(feeling stronger)(hopeful 2.情境贯通,语言协同 总览文本立意,为读后续写主旨定调 紧抓故事双线,造矛盾冲突扣人心弦 遵循原文风格,让后续情节语言契合 45 A faithful friend is hard to find. 益友难得。 高中英语满分作文 第五章 读后续写突破 二、四步解题攻略 第1步:初读,获 第2步:再读 第3步:三读, 创构续写情节 第4步:续写 取故事基本要素 确定文本双线 优化语言定稿 1.根据文章立意,先 1.读体裁、人称、 1.动作/心理/对话/ 1 定故事结局 1.读矛盾冲突 时态 2.细节构思:设问法 描写精彩 2.修辞手法 梳理双线 情绪/环境描写 2.读故事六要素 2.找故事情节线 着 审段首句 3.找人物情感线 (who, where, when. 01:Why?(衔接首句)语言丰富3.叙述逻辑 02:How?(情节过程) what, why, how) 4.语言风格 Q3:what?(添加细节) 5.衔接、连贯、生动 热考场景一 青春校园 校园主题是最贴近学生们生活的主题,因为熟悉,所以考生在写作中能够展开合理预测,进 行有效表达。最常见的校园场景往往是学生之间、师生之间在教室、操场、餐厅等地点发生的课 堂学习、课外活动或者人际交往等的互动。 1.主题场景词汇 77. adj. . dominate 主导 competitive 有竞争力的 impression 印象 organise 组织,筹备:安排; well-rounded 全面发展的 experiment 实验 组建 curious 好奇的;求知 journal acguire 日记;日志 获得,得到 欲强的 workshop 研讨会,讲习班 debate 辩论 nervous 紧张的 praise instructor 导师:讲 赞扬 anxious 学期 焦虑不安的 approach semester challenging 接近:方法:途径 有挑战性的 校园:校区 motivate campus 激发,激励 confident 自信的 major 专业 concentrate 集中(注意力); outstanding 杰出的 聚精会神 lI.主题场景语块 把.....视..... participate in treat...as... 参加 充分利用 make the best of refer to 提到:谈到 和......搭配成组 team up with... pair with... 与....合作 chicken out go in for 临阵退缩 参加 graduate from... 从......(学校)毕业 jumpat 欣然接受:急切地接受 46 A friend in court isbetter thana penny in purse.卖中有钱,不如朝中有友。 第五章 读后续写突破 高中英语满分作文 III.基于主题场景的续写--关系的改善及态度的改变 1.完成主题场景句子 (1)他是主导我们讨论的人,因为他熟悉这个话题,而我恰恰相反。(who引导的定语从句; for作并列连词表示原因) dominated our discussion He was the one ,but I was the opposite. (2)日子一天天过去,他那冰冷的外壳似乎渐渐融化了,我也终于可以直视他的眼晴和他讨 论了。(比喻句;v.-ing作状语) As days passed,it seemed that his and eventually I could discuss with him (3)有消息称他因患重病而住院了。(that引导的同位语从句;admit短语) Words came hospital for a serious disease. (4)听到这个消息,我飞奔去了医院,发现他,我亲爱的队友,正躺在床上,脸色苍白。(v.-ing 作状语:find士宾语士宾补:独立主格结构) .I dashed to the hospital and found him,my dear team mate. on the bed. (5)尽管他很虚弱,但他还是鼓励我独立地继续进行我们的项目。(though引导的让步状语从句) .he encouraged me to continue our project independ ently. (6)我备受鼓舞,鼓起所有勇气做了报告,这为我们赢得了全A。(which引导的定语从句) I was greatly inspired,and I gathered all my courage and made the presentation, straight A. 2.衔接主题场景美文 将以上各句合并成小短文并背诵成文,注意使用合适的衔接过渡词汇。[用v.-ed作状语改 写句(6)] IV.主题升华典例 --正能量原则 My timely apology saved our friendship and from then on, I learned an important lesson that never jumped to any conclusion. and from then on, I learned an important lesson that never jumped to any conclusion.(强 调句型) Because she encouraged me,I managed to step away from the corners and gained a positive attitude towards college life. 改 .I managed to step away from the corners and 交 gained a positive attitude towards college life.(“with+抽象名词”作状语) Both together do best of all,二人同心,无往不胜. 47 高中英语满分作文 第五章 读后续写突破 典例展示 Soon Eva began to breathe hard, with her heart pounding and legs shaking. Feeling des (2024 年浙江卷)Eva spent the first week perate,Eva started using a mind trick on her of high school trying to keep her head above self. She stopped thinking about the word water. One of the major headaches for her was "mile". Instead, she focused on reaching the finding her way in the huge school building. It shadow cast on the track by an oak tree up a- was a six-story building. On each floor,hall head. Then she concentrated on jogging to the ways stretched in four directions, leading to spot where the track curved(拐弯). After classrooms, laboratories, and teachers' of- that, she tried to see if she could complete her fices. Somewhere in the building, there was first lap. One lap turned into two, then three also a library,a cafeteria,and a gym. then four. Having a poor sense of direction, Eva 注意:1.续写词数应为150个左右; found it impossible to get around in such a 2.请按如下格式在作答。 huge building. All the different hallways and Paragraph 1: rooms were too much to think about,let alone When Coach Pitt said “Nice work!" to commit to memory. She decided that she her at the finish line,Eva was surprised. would memorize where her classes were and then pretend that the rest of the place didn't exist. In her first P. E. class,Eva was shocked when Coach Pitt announced that everyone had to run one mile around the track outside. She Paragraph 2: searched the faces of her classmates for signs Eva decided to use the same trick to deal of panic. There was nothing she feared more with the school building. than having to run a whole mile. To Eva,"a mile" was used to describe long distances. It was ten miles from her home to her grandfather's,and that always seemed like a long way,even in a car! When Coach Pitt blew his whistle (哨 【题目分析】 子),Eva figured she would be left in the 本文以人物为线索展开,讲述了高中生 dust. However, while some of her classmates Eva因为方向感不强,经常在学校里迷路,在 edged ahead,others actually fell behind."It's 一次体育课上教练要求他们沿着校园跑步的 just the beginning.”she thought.“I'll come in 时候Eva发现跟着树的影子能找到方向,她通 last for sure." 过这个方法重新认识到了校园。 48 Friendship is a love without wings.友谊是一种无形的爱。 第五章 读后续写突破 高中英语满分作文 1.段落续写 【佳作背诵】 ①由第一段首句内容“当Pitt教练在终点 When Coach Pitt said "Nice work!" to 线对她说:·干得好!',伊娃很惊讶。”可知,第 her at the finish line, Eua was sur prised. In 一段可描写Eva通过自己追随影子的方法找 the yast expanse of her school: a girl with 到方向,并且受到了教练的称赞。②由第二段 poor directional skills struggled to navigate 首句内容“Eva决定用同样 手段来记住学校 and often got lost. One day, during gym 大楼。”可知,第二段可描写Eva通过记住影子 class, she observed a unique way to find her 的方法来记住学校大楼并且通过这件事之后 way - following the shadows of trees. As 的感悟。 the sun cast its rays, the girl noticed how the 2.续写线索:方向感太差记不住学校建筑 shadows created patterns on the ground. 的位置--体育课上绕着学校跑却找不到方 guiding her path. She took a leap of faith and 向--害怕最后一名心里非常紧张--跟随 followed the shadows, surprising herself with 影子找到方向--受到教练的赞赏--获得 each turn and stretch. Her efforts were no 感悟 ticed by the teacher, who praised her innova- 【词汇积累】 tive thinking. 行为类 Eoa decided to use the same trick to deal ①努力做某事:struggleto do sth. /strive with the school building, She used the shad- to do sth. ows to navigate the school hallways find her ②导航:navigate/guide classes, and even locate the school's various ③了解:learn/know/acknowledge facilities, This newfound skill not only helped 情绪类 the girl navigate her school but also instilled ①使某人惊讶:surprise sb./astonish sb. in her a sense of confidence and adventure. ②激动地:excitedly/in excitement 【必背佳句】 She learned excitedly that with a little creativ [高分句型1]Her efforts were noticed by ity and observation, any challenge could be o the teacher, who praised her innovative vercome. And with each step she took, she left behind a legacy of inspiration for those thinking.(who引导的非限制性定语从句) [高分句型2]She learned that witha lit- who followed in her footsteps, knowing tha tle creativity and observation, any challenge even without a clear sense of direction couldbe overcome.(that引l导的宾语从句) there's always a way to find one's way. 4 A lifewithout afriendisa lifewithoutasun.人生没有朋友,犹如人生没有了太阳 高中英语满分作文 第五章 读后续写突破 热考场景二 暖心家庭 家庭是每一个人的归宿。家庭里的亲子关系、兄弟姐妹之间的故事与生活息息相关。家庭 里最常见的情节往往是经历了一系列的事件后,家人共同克服了困难或者消除了彼此间的限 阁,最终实现了个人的成长或者促进了关系的和谐。 1.主题场景词汇 dj. . 性格;个性 personality 家庭的 household support 支持 virtue 美德 regular 定期的;经常的 recall 回想,回忆起 一代(人) 独立的 inform generation independent 告诉:通知 惯例,习惯 beneficial routine 有利的,有益的 remind 提醒:使记起 差距,差别 suitable gap 合适的:适用的 apologize道 hond 纽带,关系 responsible 负责的;有责任的 complain抱怨:投诉:发牢骚 community 社区 embarrassed 尴尬的;窘迫的 annoy 骚扰:惹恼;打揽 关心 committed 坚定的;尽心尽力的 admire concern 钦佩:赞美:欣赏 II.主题场景语块 look down upon/on 蔑视;瞧不起 by chance 碰巧;凑巧 devote oneself to prefer...to... 致力于,献身干 喜欢......而不喜欢...... workout 解决;锻炼身体;结果是 be addicted to... 对......很入迷 at ease lead/live a(n)...life 过着.....的生活 舒适;快活;自由自在 he keen on... 对.....着迷. dress up 穿上盛装:打扮;装饰 对......有强烈兴趣 III.基于主题场景的续写一父母的鼓励及孩子的成长 1.完成主题场景句子 (1)终于到了我第一次在电视直播中公开露面的日子。(adv.置于句首引起的倒装) of my first public appearance on liveTV. (2)穿着别致的裙子,化着精致的妆,我感到非常骄傲但又紧张,因为我的节目将会有很多人 观看。(v.-ing作状语) and delicate make-up.I was ,because my show would be watched by so many people (3)我记得在父母的陪伴下像蜜蜂一样忙碌的日日夜夜。(比喻句;with的复合结构) I remembered the days and nights when I was with my parents 50 Set great store by friendship.情意重千斤. 第五章读后续写突破 高中英语满分作文 续表 (4)他们会一直在那里支持我的想法驱散了我的紧张不安。(that引导的同位语从句;drive away) The thought to support me (5)我的表演如此成功,以至于当我结束时,爆发出了雷鸣般的掌声。(“so十adj.”置于句首 引起的倒装) that when I finished,thunderous applaud burst out. (6)我迫不及待地打电话给我的父母,分享这个令人激动的消息。(couldhardlywait;v.-ing 作状语) my parents. 2.衔接主题场景美文 将以上各句合并成小短文并背诵成文,注意使用合适的衔接过渡词汇。 IV.主题升华__ -正能量原则 表达感谢 It was literally my parents' love and support that made me an outstanding actor. 典例展示 ly to the kitchen. They decided to boil the porridge first. They put some rice into a pot of (2021年新高考I卷)阅读下面材料,根 water and left it to boil while they made the 据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段,使之构 French toast. Jeff broke two eggs into a plate 成一篇完整的短文。 and added in some milk. Jenna found the A MOTHER'S DAY SURPRISE bread and put two slices into the egg mixture. The twins were filled with excitement as Next, Jeff turned on the second stove burner they thought of the surprise they were plan- to heat up the frying pan. Everything was go- ning for Mother's Day, How pleased and ing smoothly until Jeff started frying the proud Mother would be when they brought bread. The pan was too hot and the bread her breakfast in bed. They planned to make turned black within seconds. Jenna threw the French toast and chicken porridge. They had burnt piece into the sink and put in the other watched their mother in the kitchen. There slice of bread. This time, she turned down the was nothing to it. Jenna and Jeff knew exactly fire so it cooked nicely. what todo. Then Jeff noticed steam shooting out of The big day came at last. The alarm rang the pot and the lid starting to shake. The next at 6 a. m. The pair went down the stairs quiet- minute, the porridge boiled over and put out A friend isa secondself.朋友乃第二个自我。 51 高中英语满分作文 第五章 读后续写突破 the fire. Jenna panicked. Thankfully, Jeff 2.续写线索:帮助--指导--积极- 献礼 stayed calm and turned off the gas quickly. -感动 But the stove was a mess now. Jenna told Jeff 【词汇积累】 to clean it up so they could continue to cook 行为类 the rest of the porridge. But Jeff's hand tou- ①帮助:help/assist ched the hot burner and he gave a cry of pain. ②指导:guide/conduct Jenna made him put his hand in cold water. ③献礼:present a gift/give a gift Then she caught the smell of burning. Oh 情绪类 dear! The piece of bread in the pan had ①积极:positive/positively/take positive actions turned black as well. 注意: ②感动的:moved/touched 【必背佳句】 1.续写词数应为150左右。 [高分句型1Father helped them adjus 2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 the fire,which was the key to success.(which As the twins looked around them in dis 引导的非限制性定语从句) appointment,their father appeared. [高分句型2 It was not onlythe break- fast, but the love of the children for her that moved her very much.(使用 not only... bu (also)句型及强调句型) 【佳作背诵】 The twins carried the breakfast upstairs As the twins Looked around them in dis and woke their mother up. appointment ,their father appeared. Father's appearing was like a savior to the two chil- dren. Under the guidance of their father, they took positive actions and started all over a- gain. They made the bread and then went on 【题目分析】 cooking porridge. Father helped them adjust the fire, which was the key to success. It was 本文以母亲节为线索展开,讲述了双胞胎 all right this time. Delicious breakfast was lenna和leff为了献给母亲一份美味的早餐,自 ready. How happy they were! 己动手,做起早餐来,但是不幸的是,他们连连失 The tuins carried the break fast upstairs 败,后来在父亲的帮助下,获得成功,他们把早餐 and woke their mother up. When their mother 献给亲爱的母亲,妈妈非常感动的故事。 saw the delicious and perfect breakfast in 1.段落续写 front of her, she was very surprised. It was ①由第一段首句内容“当双胞胎失望地环 not only the gift, but the love of the children 顾四周时,他们的父亲出现了。”可知,第一段 for her that moved her very much. The two 可描写他们的父亲指导并帮助他们准备早餐。 children could finish cooking a breakfast. ②由第二段首句内容“这对双胞胎把早餐 which she didn't expect. The children said 端到楼上,叫醒了他们的母亲。”可知,第二段 loudly,"Happy Mother's Day!" Mother 可描写母亲收到孩子们的礼物早餐,非常 hugged them tightly and kissed them again 感动。 andagain. 52 Between friends all is common.朋友之间不分彼此. 第五章 读后续写突破 高中英语满分作文 热考场景三 旅行探险 人类的好奇心永无止境,所以探索活动也永无止境。最常见的探索活动有野外活动、户外 活动,最常见的背景地点有森林、旷野,以及有野生动物栖息的地方。通过一系列的经历,探险 者可以对人与自然的关系产生新的感悟,并对可持续发展有新的理解 1.主题场景词汇 . adj. abundance 丰富;充裕 ecological 生态的; decline 保存;保护 减少:下降:衰落 conservation disappear 生态学的 消失 ecology 生态;生态学 dangerous 有危险的 endarger 使陷入危险 habitat 栖息地,(动植物 threaten 灭绝的 extinct 威胁 的)生活环境 不可再生的 explore non"renewable 探索;勘探 loss 损失:遗失;丧失 widespread 分布广的; witness 保护区 当场看到:目击:见证 reserve 普遍的 satisfy shortage 不足;缺少 满足:使满意 diverse 多种多样的 appreciate 欣赏 wildlife 野生动植物 II.主题场景语块 be native/unique to... die out 灭绝 产于.....;是......独 raise people's awareness of animal protectior 有的 提高人们保护 range from...to... 从......到.....变动: 动物的意识 (范围)从.....到...... 正在增加/上升 on the increase/rise live/exist in harmony with... on the decline/decrease 正在下降/减少 与......和谐相处 set up natural reserves 建立自然保护区 III.基于主题场景的续写一 -野外未知的危险 1.完成主题场景句子 (1)出于对冒险的兴趣,费尔法克斯先生开始探索一个遥远的地方,以便在寒冷的冬天猎取 野兔。(adi.作状语;set out to dosth.) .Mr.Fairfax to hunt rabbits in the cole wirter. (2)费尔法克斯先生踩在河面薄薄的雪上,目不转晴地盯着地平线,期待着兔子出现。(独立 主格结构) in expectation of rabbits,Mr. Fairfax stepped on the thin snow on a river. (3)它破了,使得他在冷水中奋力挣扎。(leave十宾语十宾补) It broke. 3 Old friends and oldwine are best. 陈酒味醇,老友情深。 高中英语满分作文 第五章 读后续写突破 续表 (4)为了摆脱困境,费尔法克斯先生拿起他的猎枪当作拐杖,加快了速度,试图站直。(不定 式作目的状语;动词的联动 .Mr. Fairfax his shotgun to use it asa crutch(拐杖), a lot of speed and (5)他用了一个半小时小心地爬上岸来,然后成功爬到了安全的地方。(spend...doing;with 十抽象情绪名词) He up and he managed to crawl to safety. (6)由于温度迅速下降,前方有一个挑战,他的手和脚很快都变得麻木了。(therebe句型;as 引导的原因状语从句) ahead and his hands and feet soon were 2.衔接主题场景美文 将以上各句合并成小短文并背诵成文,注意使用合适的衔接过渡词汇 IV.主题升华典例 -正能量原则 It turned out to be an unforgettable experience, where he learned to appreciate the 抒发感悟 harmony between human and nature. 典例展 to see a world that many of you never knew existed." Alan and the other campers sat around Alan's stomach tightened. Then he heard the the fire chewing meat chops. It would be officer continue."There are no dangerous animals Alan's first night in a tent,and he was excited this close to Cape Town. Any volunteers?" but a little nervous. A. tough-looking kid with red hair muttered As they ate, the conservation officer something about needing a good night's sleep. An spoke."Much of the wildlife in this area other boy spoke up."I'll take a shift." The kid comes out only at night. So after supper, let's wbo'd sat next to Aan on the bus yolunteered. A start a night watch. Volunteers will take turns an sat tight. Then one of the girls raised her hand to stay down here by the fire, away from the with a giggle. Alan frowned. If a girl could do it,he tents. Those who take part will get a chance could,too. He volunteered. 54 The friendship of a gentleman is insipid as water. 君子之交淡如水。参考答案 高中英语满分作文 D. 16. Mother went to work without having break 第五章 读后续写突破 fast. 17. Moved by the hero, she decided to study har 热考场景一 青春校园 der. 18. I started early in order to get there on time. III. 1. (1)who: for he was familiar with the topic 19. Not having received his father's letter, he de- (2) icy shell gradually melted away; looking cided to make a call to him. straight in his eyes 20. They lived in a room that faced the south./ (3) that he was admitted to They lived in a room facing the south. (4)Hearing the words;lying;face pale E. 21. English, in which most business letters are written, is widely used in the world. (5)Though he was weak 22. I suggest you visit the Great Wall, which has a (6)which earned us history of more than two thousand years. 2.参考范文 23. It is a fact that in the past five years,there have At first he was the one who dominated our been changes in people's diet. discussion for he was familiar with the topic: but 1 24. The weather being fine, we went to visit the was the opposite. West Lake. However,as days passed,it seemed that his icy 25. Having an important meeting to attend, I will shell gradually melted away and eventually I could not be able to meet you at the airport that day. discuss with him looking straight in his eyes. The (三) next day, words came that he was admitted to hos 1. There is no doubt that I will be popular with the pital for a serious disease. Hearing the words,1 students and get along well with my colleagues. dashed to the hospital and found him, my dear 2. What we can learn from the story is however terrible the situation is, try your best to work teammate,lying on the bed, face pale. Though he hard. was weak,he encouraged me to continue our pro 3. Therefore, it is important to improve people's ject independently. Greatly inspired, I gathered all awareness of their health. my courage and made the presentation, which 4. It was such an exciting activity that we all en- earned us straight A. joyed ourselves very much. IV. It was my timely apology that saved our friend 5. I hate it when others disturb me when I'm read ship: With her encouragement ing. 6. The government should take firm action to deal 热考场景二 暖心家庭 with this problem. III. 1.(1)Finally came the day 7. As a saying goes,every coin has two sides. (2)Wearing fancy dress; so proud but nervous 8. These behaviors will make bad impressions upon (3)as busy as a bee;accompanying me visitors to China. 9. I think all of us should mind our behavior in (4) that they were always there; drove away all my public places. Only in this way can we live in nervousness more comfortable and beautiful surroundings. (5)So successful was my performance 10. As we all know,books are the source of knowl (6)could hardly wait to ring: sharing the exciting edge. I benefit a great deal from reading news 139 高中英语满分作文 参考答案 2.参考范文 热考场景四 个人成长 Finally came the day of my first public ap pearance on live TV. At that time, wearing fancy III. 1. (1) Reluctantly following my dad; disap- dress and delicate make-up, I was so proud but pointment and sadness nervous,because my show would be watched by so (2)proud: which is something worth celebrating many people. However,I remembered the days and (3)What he said; that I had done on the farm; hold nights when I was as busy as a bee with my par back my tears ents accompanying me. Then,the thought that they (4) It was at that moment that:did understand were always there to support me drove away all my (5) so moved that; unable to utter even a single nervousness. word Fortunately, so successful was my performance (6)Determined not to let him down that when I finished, thunderous applaud burst 2.参考范文 out. After my performance, I could hardly wait to Reluctantly following my dad into the room.I ring my parents,sharing the exciting news was overwhelmed/consumed by a mixture of dis appointment and sadness. However, my dad started 热考场景三 旅行探险 with a smile."I am proud that you have accom- III. 1.(1)Interested in adventure; set out to explore plished your first job, which is something worth a remote area celebrating."What he said reminded me of the long (2)Eyes fixed on the horizon hours of tiring work that I had done on the farm. (3)leaving him struggling in the cold water Therefore, I could hardly hold back my tears. It (4) To get out of trouble; reached for: picked up was at that moment that I got to realize my dad did tried to stand up straight understand me. So moved was I that I hung/low (5) spent an hour and a half climbing; with great ered my head, unable to utter even a single word. caution At last, determined not to let him down, I contin- (6) There was a challenge; as temperatures ued to work in his field to help support my family dropped quickly; completely numb IV. Not only did this experience improve my work 2.参考范文 enthusiasm Interested in adventure, Mr, Fairfax set out to 热考场景五 优秀品行 explore a remote area to hunt rabbits in the cold winter. Eyes fixed on the horizon in expectation of III. 1.(1)When I was young;where rabbits, unfortunately, Mr. Fairfax stepped on the (2) Whenever she saw children dressed in ragged thin snow on a river. Suddenlv, it broke, leaving clothes him struggling in the cold water. To get out of (3)when times were extremely hard trouble, Mr. Fairfax first reached for his shotgun (4)Though we had difficulty in making ends mee to use it as a crutch, picked up a lot of speed and (5)when her father's health declined tried to stand up straight. Then, he spent an hour (6)Not only did we get necessities on a daily basis and a half climbing up with great caution and even- (7)With the help of our neighbors tually, he managed to crawl to safety. There was 2.参考范文 still a challenge ahead as temperatures dropped When I was young,I lived in a small village in quickly and his hands and feet soon were complete Melaka where the spirit of neighborliness was very ly numb. strong then. My mother was a kind-hearted soul. 140 参考答案 高中英语满分作文 Therefore, whenever she saw children dressed in 热考场景七 体育锻炼 ragged clothes, she was always ready to help. Once, there was one particular year when times III. 1. (1)spent the last few weeks preparing for were extremely hard. Though we had difficulty in (2) Even though we practiced hard; make me feel making ends meet,my mother still decided to share confident our food. It was when my father's health declined (3)when I urged Cowboy forward;hesitated; stum that her kindness was rewarded. Soon,not only did bled;fell we get necessities on a daily basis,but we also re- (4)Despite the giggle; dashed: ran: thundered ceived enough money donated for my father's (5)Without hesitation;shot for treatment in the city. Eventually, with the help of (6)When we finished: there were no cheers our neighbors, the situation in my family took a (7)heard the result announced turn for the better. 2.参考范文 I and my horse, Cowboy, spent the last few 热考场景六 节日精神 weeks preparing for the coming competition. How- III. 1. (1)a retired art teacher who lived across my ever,even though we practiced hard,it didn't make home me feel confident by the time the show came. Even- (2) promised to give me a Christmas present; tually,it was my turn and when I urged Cowboy forward, he hesitated, stumbled, and almost fell. which;what much to the delight of other competitors. Despite (3)wait;presented:said the giggle, at the signal, we dashed towards the (4)I've been waiting for you;led; disappeared first barrel,quickly ran around it and thundered on (5)my mind was dancing to the second. Then, without hesitation, we shot for (6)saying; It can give you whatever you dream of the finishing line. Surprisingly, when we finished (7)by excitement; could hardly wait to open it there were no cheers coming from the audience. 2.参考范文 With my heart pounding wildly,I heard the result When I was a boy of nine,I used to help Mrs. announced-we won the first prize Long, a retired art teacher who lived across my 热考场景八 home. She promised to give me a Christmas pres 绝境脱险 ent, which kept me wondering what it would be. III. 1. (1)While enjoying a walk;lying in the sand So,a day before the Christmas Eve, I could wait no breaking his leg longer, presented myself at the door of Mrs. (2)when he left for his walk Long's house and said,"Can I have my present to (3)As Tim lay helpless:how to help himsel day,Mrs. Long?""I've been waiting for you,"she (4)After struggling; too intense to tolerate said,immediately led me into her house and disap (5)with his leg hurt greatly peared in another room. Her words set my mind (6)It occurred to him tha dancing with all kinds of possibilities. Soon, she re (7)who later turned out to be his wife turned with a colorful box, saying,"It can give you 2.参考范文 whatever you dream of if you have learned how to While enjoying a walk down the beach,Tim use it."At that moment, I was completely over slipped on a piece of seaweed lying in the sand and whelmed by excitement and could hardly wait to fell, breaking his leg. Unfortunately, Tim did no open it. bring his cell phone with him when he left for his 141 高中英语满分作文 参考答案 walk. As Tim lay helpless,he remembered his mili (5)when asked to get some vegetables tary training and tried to think about how to help (6) It was shocking: as there were hundreds of himself. However, after struggling for a while a- bugs round on the beach, the pain became too intense to (7) Though panicked,I had no choice but to tell the tolerate. With no phone and no one around, and truth. with his leg hurt greatly, Tim had to think of a 2.参考范文 way to ask for help. It suddenly occurred to him What I didn't understand about my father was that he could use the flash light to signal for help. why working in the dirt excited him so much. At Before long,he was excited to see someone flashing first, with all the vegetable seeds planted, by the back, who later turned out to be his wife. end of April,his plants had come up in neat rows 热考场景九 关爱动物 Surprisingly, he attached so much importance to the garden that he made me promise to take care of III. 1. (1)when the heat and humidity were violent (2)what looked like; stuck it when he was busy. However, I took it for granted (3)rushed; got hold of: approached that the little plants would continue to grow as (4)My friend patting gently on her head long as they had water. One day,when asked to get (5) as the more; the more stuck she became some vegetables to make a salad,I took a bowl and (6)It was then that went out to the garden. It was shocking to see that (7)it didn't take long for us to dig her out many of the leaves had been half eaten as there 2.参考范文 were hundreds of bugs. At last, though panicked,I It was a cloudless day when the heat and hu had no choice but to tell the truth. midity were violent, so we had to sightsee from the 第六章 满分作文 car. Suddenly, we spotted what looked like a giant monster stuck in the sand. Immediately, we rushed 第一节 back to our car, got hold of the shovel and ap- proached the camel again. My friend patting gently on 1.参考范文 her head,I focused on digging out her back legs. But Dear James, our efforts were in vain as the more she struggled I'm writing to invite you to a charity event. It to get freedom, the more stuck she became. It was is scheduled to be held in our school from 2 p. m. then that a group of people from a nearby farm to 5 p. m. next Friday, aiming to raise funds and came to our rescue. Luckily, with our joint efforts. promote environmental awareness. Students will it didn't take long for us to dig her out. create craft items from recyclable waste,which will 热考场景十 劳动教育 be sold on the spot to raise money for a local chari- III. 1. (1) What I didn't understand; why working ty. It's a fantastic opportunity to contribute to a in the dirt good cause while admiring the artistic skills and (2)With all the vegetable seeds plantec creativity of the students. (3)so much importance to the garden that We would be delighted if you could join us. (4)I took it for granted that; as long as they had Yours. water Li Hua 142