第四章 高考常考应用文分类解读-【满分作文】新高中英语满分作文

高中英语满分作文 第四章 高考常考应用文分类解读 第四章 一 高考常考应用文分类解读 一、申请信 典例展示 T写作指南 (2019·全国卷I)假定你是李华:暑假 申请信是指写信人想申请某个职位或 在伦教学习,得知当地美术馆要举办中国画展 某个项目而向收信人提出请求的信件。 览。请写一封信申请做志愿者,内容包括; 般常考的内容有申请成为志愿者、加人俱乐 1.写信目的; 部或参加夏令营、留学项目等。申请信是非 2.个人优势; 常正式的信件,所用语言也应该正式、简洁 3.能做的事情 和准确,语气要礼貌。写作结构如下: 注意: 表明身份,点明要申请的内容 _ 1.词数100左右; 强调自身优势及胜任理由 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯 表达感谢,期盼获准 3.结束语已为你写好。 【题目分析】 万能模板 申请信 本篇书面表达要求考生写一封电请做志 Dear (称谓): 愿者的书信。以第一人称为主,时态以一般现 (自我介绍, I'm from 在时为主。按题目要求分三段写作。 (写信目 姓名、班级).I'mwritingto 【重点短语】 的),for I believe that (申请的主要 1. apply for 申请 2. be exposed to暴露 原因). 7 3. what's more另外 4.all inall总之 (申请 I think I'm qualified for 【必背佳句】 的职位),becauseI (至少两个优 1. The reasons for my application are as 点). That's why I apply for the position. I follows.我提出中请的原因如下。 hope I can join the activity. 2. All in all, my sense of responsibility I plan to (计划一),have (计 will make me a qualified volunteer.总而言之 them (计划二)and (达 我的责任感将使我成为一个合格的志愿者。 划三). What's more important is 到的效果). 3. I'd appreciate it if you could take my I hope you can offer me the opportunity. application into consideration and give me a Yours. chance.如果你能考虑到我的申请,给我一个 (署名) 机会,我会不胜感激的。 26 Time and tide wait for no man. 岁月不待人. 第四章 高考常考应用文分类解读 高中英语满分作文 【佳作背诵】 What's more, years of being monitor makes Dear Sir/Madam. me a brilliant organizer, which will help a lot I'm Li Hua, an exchange student from to keep the exhibition in order. The most China during this summer vacation. I'm important factor is that my related knowledge delighted to learn that volunteer students are will undoubtedly help the audience learn more wanted for a Chinese painting exhibition to be about the unique Chinese art form. held in the local art gallery. Now I'm writing All in all, my sense of responsibility will to apply for the position. make me a qualified volunteer. I'd appreciate it if The reasons for my application are as you could take my application into consideration follows. First of all, having been exposed to and give me a chance. foreign teachers since a young age, I can Yours. communicate freely with others in English. Li Hua 二、邀请信 写作指南 Looking forward to your early reply.(希 望尽快回复) 邀请信是邀请收信人参加某项活动的 Yours. 信件,包括展览、节日聚会、聚餐、担任比赛 (署名) 的评委或在讲座上发言等。在写作时,语气 典例展示 要热情、真挚,不要强人所难;叙事要清楚、 明白。写作结构如下: (2022·新高考I卷)假定你是校广播站 表明写信意图,向某人发出邀请 英语节目“TalkandTalk”的负责人李华,请给 邀 说明邀请的具体原因和邀请的内容 外教Caroline写邮件邀请她做一次访谈。内 容包括: 期待对方接受邀请,并表示感谢 1.节目介绍; 万能模板 申情信 2.访谈的时间和话题。 注意: Dear (称谓), 1.写作词数应为80左右; (开门见山,点出活动的主题、时 2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 间及地点). It would be pleasant to invite Dear Caroline. (表达邀请愿望). Respecting the elderly is not only but also (阐述自己的观点).Onthis special festival, we can (活动的目 的).First (介绍活动一).Inaddition (介绍活动二). Apart fromthe above. (介绍活动三).Ibelievethat Yours. we can benefit a lot from the activities. Li Hua As every thread of gold is valuable, so every moment of time. 一寸光阴一寸金。 27 高中英语满分作文 第四章 高考常考应用文分类解读 【题目分析】 【佳作背诵】 本篇书面表达要求写一篇邀请信,就广播 Dear Caroline. 站英语节目“TalkandTalk”邀请外教Caroline This is my first time that I have invited 做一次访谈。人称以一、二人称为主,时态以一 you to attend our program -Talk and Talk. 般现在时和一般将来时为主,分两段进行写作。 It is ten years since Talk and Talk was 【重点短语】 established. This is an amazing program 1. have trouble in doing something 干某 where you can share your ideas with 事有困难 students. Now, when having trouble in 2. take something into consideration learning English well,plenty of students urge 把......考虑进去 【必背佳句】 to know how to deal with it. You are our 1. Now, when having trouble in learning distinguished foreign language teacher, whose English well, plenty of students urge to know aid can help us a lot. howtodealwith it.现在,当学习英语遇到困 If you are available on this Sunday, I 难时,许多学生迫切想知道如何处理它。 together with the whole Talk and Talk staff 2. You are our distinguished foreign am waiting for your coming. I'd appreciate it if language teacher, whose aid can help us a lot. you take my invitation into consideration. 您是我们杰出的外语老师,您的帮助对我们很 Yours. 有帮助。 Li Hua 三、感谢信 写作指南 Thank you for your kindness again and give my best regards to your parents.(再次感谢) Yours sincerely. 感谢信是用来向帮助、关心和支持过自 (署名) 己的集体或个人表示感谢的书信,感谢信应 典例展示 写得真诚、具体、及时。写作结构如下 -点明写信目的 (2019·浙江卷)假定你是李华,经常帮 助你学习英语的朋友Alex即将返回自己的国 描述事件经过 家。请给他写一封邮件,内容包括 再次表示感谢,表达回报愿望 1.表示感谢; 2.回顾Alex对你的帮助; 万能模 审请信 3.临别祝愿。 注意: Dear (称谓). 1.词数80左右; I'm writing to thank you for 2.可适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 (感谢的原因). During the visit, you (对方的帮助 一). Besides, you (对方的帮助二). What's more, you__ (对方的帮助三). 28 An hour in the morning is worth two in the evening.一日之计在于展。 第四章 高考常考应用文分类解读 高中英语满分作文 【题目分析】 【佳作背诵】 本文是应用文写作任务,要求写一封感谢 Dear Alex, Learning that you're leaving for the 信。人称使用第一人称和第二人称,时态用一 United States soon, I'm eagerly writing to 般现在时。首段,写信的目的,中间段回顾 express my heartfelt gratitude to you for your Alex对你的帮助;最后一段表达祝愿。 help. 【重点短语】 Honestly speaking, it's so nice of you to 1. leave for 动身前往 2. express my offer me a class of practical learning skills. heartfeltgratitude表达衷心的感谢 3. cheer Under your professional guidance, I have meup使我高兴起来 made such unbelievable progress in English. It's indeed a pleasant surprise for me to even 【必背佳句】 rank first in a recent English speech contest. 1. Honestly speaking, it's so nice of you Whenever I encounter difficulties, you always to offer me a class of practical learning skills. cheer me up and help me out, which fuels my 老实说,你们能给我提供一门实用的学习技 enthusiasm for English and promotes me to 能,真是太好了。 regain tremendous confidence. No words are 2. Under your professional guidance, I strong enough to convey how grateful I am. have made such unbelievable progress in Thanks again and wish you a pleasant journey home. English.在您的专业指导下,我在英语方面取 Yours. 得了如此令人难以置信的进步。 Li Hua 四、建议信 写作 than glad to offer my advice for your reference. Firstly, you are supposed to 建议信是向别人提出合理的建议,让对 (建议一).Additionally(For one reason),it makes sense to 方接受自己的想法、主张并解决有关问题的 (建议二/理由一). Moreover(For another reason), 一类信件。建议信要写得简明拒要、目的明 (建 确,具有合理性和说服力。写作结构如下: 议三/理由二)is also a good choice. Do bear -表明写信目的 提出建议 in mind that (Therefore) (建议四/ 具体的建议及理由 理由三) 指出采纳建议的好处,表达愿望 I am fully convinced that use the tips above and we will ___ __(以上建议的好 万能 中请信 处). I would appreciate it if you could take Dear (称谓), my suggestions into account(表达希望接受 建议). You can't imagine how (情感)Iam (写信的原因).I'mmore Your sincerely. hearing about Li Hua Time dresses the grcatest wounds, 时间能愈合最大的创伤。 29 高中英语满分作文 第四章 高考常考应用文分类解读 典例展示 2. This can hinder the progress of students as the more advanced one may (2023年新课标全国I卷)假定你是李 dominate the conversation,leaving little room 华,外教Rvan准备将学生随机分为两人一 for the other students to improve.这可能会阻 组,让大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存 碍学生的进步,因为更高级的学生可能会主导 在问题。请你给外教写一封邮件,内容包括; 对话,给其他学生留下很小的改进空间。 1.说明问题; 3. Besides, students may feel uncomfortable 2.提出建议 or less motivated if paired with someone who 注意: they don't get along with or have difficulty 1.写作词数应为80个左右 commun- 2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 icatingwith.此外,如果和他们相处不好或沟通 Dear Ryan, 有困难的人在一起,学生可能会感到不舒服或 I'm Li Hua from Class 3. 缺乏动力。 【佳作背诵】 Dear Ryan, I'm Li Hua from Class 3. I think it's no a good idea to randomly pair up students for Yours sincerely. the spoken English training after class. The Li Hua reasons are as follows. 【题目分析】 To begin with, randomly pairing up 本篇是应用文写作,要求考生给外教写一 students may lead to unbalanced language 封邮件,告诉他将学生随机分为两人一组,让 abilities within the groups. This can hinder 大家课后练习口语,你认为这样分组存在问 the progress of students as the more advanced 题。人称第一人称,时态一般现在时;首段,写 one may dominate the conversation, leaving 信的目的,中间段分析原因;最后一段提出 little room for the other students to improve. 建议。 Besides, students may feel uncomfortable or 【词汇积累】 less motivated if paired with someone who 首先:to begin with→first of all they don't get along with or have difficulty 提高:improve→progress communicating with. 建议:suggestion→advice My suggestion is to group students based 选择:choose→selec on their language abilities or to let students 【必背佳句】 choose their own partners. This way,everyone 1. My suggestion is to group students can feel more comfortable practicing and based on their language abilities or to let improving their spoken English together students choose their own partners. 我的建议 Thank you for considering my suggestion. 是根据学生的语言能力将他们分组,或者让学 Yours sincerely. 生自已选择伙伴。 Li Hua 30 To save time is to lengthen lifc. 节省时间就是廷长生命。 第四章 高考常考应用文分类解读 高中英语满分作文 五、求助信 写作指南 注意: 1.写作词数应80左右 求助信是针对自己目前遇到的困难写 2.请按如下格式在相应位置作答。 信请求对方给予帮助的信件类型,因此语气 Dear Humans. 要委婉、真诚,并要向收信人表示感谢。文 章应用一般现在时,当描述自己得到帮助后 的进步时应用一般将来时。写作结构如下; 表明写信目的,即请求帮助 说明缘由,陈述需要求助的具体内容 Your forever friend. 表达感谢,希望得到帮助 a polar bear 万能模板 申清信 【题目分析】 本篇书面表达属于图画作文。要求根据 Dear (称谓), 两幅图片,请以北极熊的身份向人类写一封求 I ar_ (自我介绍).Iamwriting 助信。人称第一人称,时态一般现在时;首段 to seek for your help in (写信目的). 写信的目的,中间段遇到的困难;最后一段表 Now, I struggle a lot in (遇到的 达感谢。 困难). Ive found that (描述自己的 【词汇积累】 困难). For one thing: (困难一).For 面对:face→be faced with another. (困难二). Therefore, could you please put forward 保护:preserve→protect some practical suggestions? I am convinced 宝贵的:precious→valuable that I will benefit a lot from your valuable and 困难的:hard→difficult timely advice. 【必背佳句】 I would appreciate it if you could respond 1. Facing the challenge of losing precious at your earliest convenience. ice land, I am writing to ask you for some Your sincerely. waysout.面对失去宝贵冰地的挑战,我写信 Li Hua 向你寻求一些出路。 典例展示 2. As the planet warms, it becomes (2023届福建省龙岩市高三二模)根据下 harder for us toget food.随着地球变暖,我们 面两幅图片,请你以北极熊的身份向人类写一 越来越难获得食物 封求助信。 【佳作背诵】 Dear humans. 二rive Tar_AN I'm a polar bear, your big and white friend in the north. Facing the challenge of losing precious ice land, I am writing to ask you for some ways out. Seize the day,for fleeting youth never returns, 光阴勿虚度,青春不再来。 31 高中英语满分作文 第四章 高考常考应用文分类解读 With the development of industry and home - the Earth. Only if you take strong cities, climate has been worsening. As the measures, can wild animals, like me, be planet warms,it becomes harder for us to get preserved and it is not until then that we will food. Thus,recent years have witnessed many make a better home together. of my peers'death. The loss of our species is Thanks for reading! the loss of yours. I sincerely beg for your Your forever friend. immediate actions to protect our common a polar bear 六、道歉信 写作指南 典例展示 (2023届安徽省“院南八校”高三第三次 道歉信是因为自己的过错或有事无法 大联考)假定你是李华,上周你班外教Mr. 赴约而给对方带来了麻烦和不利影响,因此 Green布置了一份作业,截止时间是本周五, 向对方道歉并请求对方原谅的信件。要向 但是你因故不能如期提交。请你给Mr.Greer 对方诚挚地解释自己的不当行为或者无法 写一封邮件,内容包括 答应对方的原因。写作结构如下; 1.表示歉意; 表明写信意图,向某事表示歉意 2.解释原因; 说明道歉的具体原因 3.请求延期提交作业。 再次表明歉意,请求谅解,并提出补救措施 注意: 1.词数80左右; 万能模 申请信 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 Dear (称谓), I'm terribly sorry to inform you that (写信事由). Thus,I am writing to apologize for not keeping my word. Something unexpected happened and (失约理由). 【题目分析】 Shall we fix another time? I'll be 本篇书面表达属于应用文。,要求考生给 available any time after (补救办法). 外教Mr.Green写一封邮件,就不能如期提交 Will (另约时间)suitsyour 作业一事道歉。首段,写信的目的;中间段解 convenience? If it's OK,let's meet at 释原因并请求延期提交作业;最后一段表达感 (见面地点). If not,let me know what time 谢并期待回复。 suits you best. I hope the adjustment won't 【词汇积累】 put you into much trouble. 由于:owing to→because of Keenly anticipate your prompt reply. 持续的:persistent→continuous Your sincerely 结果:consequently→as a result Li Hua 推迟:postpone→delay 32 Everyflowhas itscbb,潮有涨落日,人有盛衰时。 第四章 高考常考应用文分类解读 高中英语满分作文 【必背佳句】 week, which is due this Friday. 1. I'm writing to apologize for being Owing to the infection of a bad cold.1 unable to submit the homework given by you have been feeling unwell these days. Aching last week,which is due this Friday.我写这封 all over with a persistent high fever,I have to 信是为了向你道歉,因为我没能把你上周给我 be confined to bed all day long, Consequently 的作业交上来,作业本周五就该交了。 it would be difficult for me to finish the 2. Aching all over with a persistent high assignment on time. I wonder if you can allow fever, I have to be confined to bed all day me to post pone the submission time until nex long.由于持续发高烧,全身疼痛,我不得不整 Friday. 天呆在床上。 I would appreciate it very much if you 【佳作背诵】 could take my request into consideration. Dear Mr. Green. Looking for ward to your reply I'm writing to apologize for being unable Yours sincerely. to submit the homework given by you last Li Hua 七、慰问信 You must 写作指甫 (表达对遭遇的理 解). However, if you were brave enough not t0 慰问信是指在同学考试失利、亲友生 (悲观失望等),whichis 病、受伤或遇到火灾、水灾、被盗等不幸事件 admirable. Anyway, It can't be better if you 时,对对方表示慰问或同情的信件。此类信 can lift your spirits to face up to the result. Plus, 要写得及时、简明拒要,感情要真诚,措辞要 (提供建议或帮助). 妥帖,尽量以乐观的口吻减轻亲友的烦恼和 Remember,I won't be far away. 痛苦,并鼓励对方对日后的生活、学习、工作 I hope you can find my encouragement 充满信心。写作结构结下 helpful(Hope you can have your troubles 引出事实,表达惋惜和同情 removed soon). Your sincerely. 向对方的遭遇表示同情并安慰或 E Li Hua 鼓励对方 典例展示 向对方提出解决问题的办法 (2023届江西省鹰潭市高三第一次模拟 表达愿望和祝福 考试)假如你是李华,在得知土耳其大地震的 消息后,作为魔潭中学的学生会主席,你决定 万能模板 申情信 给灾区的中学生写一封慰问信,主要内容 Dear (称谓): 包括: Words fail me to convey my worry when 1.表达安慰; (写信原由).Iam I heard that 2.中国救援队已到达进行援助; writing to extend sincere pity and care for you 3.表达希望和对其重建家园的信心。 (I hope that the unexpected failure/trouble 注意:不能出现本学校名称。 won't let you down). 提示:土耳其Turkey 33 Time stays not the fool's leisure. 时间不等闲逛的傻爪。 高中英语满分作文 第四章 高考常考应用文分类解读 Dear friends. 3. A series of actions has been taken sincethedisaster.灾难发生后已经采取了一 系列行动。 【佳作背诵】 Yours. Dear friends, Li Hua I'm Li Hua, chairman of our Student 【题目分析】 Union. I'm saddened to/I'm awfully sorry to/ 这是一篇应用文。要求考生对自己听到 土耳其大地震的消息后,给灾区的中学生写一 I'm deeply sorry to hear that a horrible 封慰问信。首段,写信的目的,中间段表达慰 earthquake unexpectedly hit your hometown. 问和提供帮助;最后一段表达祝愿。 I want to take this opportunity to send 【词汇积累】 my deepest sympathy following this terrible 可怕的:horrible→frightening tragedy to the people who suffered, and my 袭击:hit →strike most heartfelt condolences to all those who 机会:opportunity→chance have lost loved ones. Thinking about your 帮助:help→assist/aid present situation, we cannot wait a minute to 【必背佳句】 make every bit of our effort to help you/A 1. Chinese rescue teams have rushed to series of actions has been taken since the your hometown to lend a helping hand/join disaster/Efforts to revive the stricken areas the relief efforts, which I think will be of have finally started in full swing/Rescue great help to the suffering people. 中国救援队 operations are now proceeding normally. 已经赶往你的家乡伸出援助之手/加入救援工 Chinese rescue teams have rushed to your 作,我认为这对受苦受难的人们会有很大的 hometown to lend a helping hand/join the 帮助。 2. I want to take this opportunity to send relief efforts, which I think will be of great help to the suffering people. my deepest sympathy following this terrible tragedy to the people who suffered, and my I'm fully convinced that everything will most heartfelt condolences to all those who be fine,and the stricken area will be restored/ have lost loved ones.我想借此机会向遭受这 your city will get back up on its feet soon. 一可怕悲剧的人们表示最深切的同情,并向所 Yours, 有失去亲人的人表示最衷心的慰问 Li Hua 八、投诉信 写作指南 表明来信所要投诉的问题 投诉信指在生活中,人们经常会遇到 抽 写明投诉的原因、问题的经过及产 些令人伤脑筋的事情,比如消费利益受损。 生的后果 正常生活和工作受到干扰等,写作过程中要 注意尽可能做到客观礼貌,公平,公正原则。 提出解决方案,不需展开说明 写作结构如下: 34 There is no time like the present, 现在正是时候。 第四章 高考常考应用文分类解读 高中英语满分作文 万能模板 申请信 【词汇积累】 投 诉:make a oomplaint about → Dear (称谓), complain about I am writing to lodge complaints against 努力:make an effort→try (投诉原由). Hereis the whole 【必背佳句】 story. 1. Worse still, the hotel rooms were in In the first place, (问题一).In such a poor condition that we had difficulty addition. (问题二). Under these fallingasleepatnight.更糟糕的是,酒店房间 circumstances, (问题的结果). 的条件太差了,我们晚上很难入睡。 Consequently, 1 asked to remedy the 2. It can't be better if you take the matter situation. However, ignoring how reasonable my seriously and make an effort to improve your request was, the staff refused to make any service.如果你认真对待这件事,并努力改善 compensation with a poor attitude(投诉服务时 你的服务,那再好不过了。 可用). 【佳作背诵】 I sincerely hope you could look into the Dear Sir or Madam. case. (提供解决方案).Otherwise,I I'm Li Hua, a student from the Yucai would seek legal/external support in the local Middle School. My friend and I joined a study customer committee tour to the US organized by your company Looking forward to your prompt reply. last month. Now I'm writing to make a Your sincerely. complaint about your service. Li Hua I had been dreaming of taking such a 典例展示 study tour for a long time. However, your service disappointed us during our stay, First 假如你是育才中学的李华,你和朋友参加 of all, we had such a tight schedule that we 了某国际旅行社组织的国际游学活动,但你们 didn't have enough time to enjoy the tourist 对其服务感到不满意。请你用英语给该旅行 attractions. Besides, as students, we had hoped to 社的负责人写一封投诉信,内容包括: visit more Americans' universities. However, we 1.写信目的; spent too much time on the way. Worse still, the 2.投诉的内容(日程安排紧,学习时间短。 hotel rooms were in such a poor condition that we 住宿条件差等); had difficulty falling asleep at night. I do hope you 3.希望改进服务。 can improve your service in the near future. 题目分析 It can't be better if you take the matter 本篇书面表达属于应用文。首段:自我介 seriously and make an effort to improve your 绍并简述投诉的理由;中段:说明产品或服务 service. Your early reply will be appreciated. 质量存在的问题和解决问题的途径:末段:提 Yours. 出具体要求并表达尽快解决的期望。 Li Hua 35 Take time by the forelock, 把握目前的时机。