2024-2025学年高一下学期市统测&期末英语应用文提高版——多文体梳理（含必要解析和句型）清单

文体；结构；内容；时态；人称(标蓝处为推荐表达或句型) 【通知】 随着联合国《生物多样性公约》第十五次缔约方大会（COP15）在中国昆明的召开，生物多样性保护的重要性再次成为大众焦点。为提高学生生物多样性保护的意识，你校邀请了知名教授Tom 来做演讲。你受学生会委托为校宣传栏“英语天地”写一则通知，请大家一起来听讲座，内容包括： 1．演讲时间和地点；2．演讲内容介绍；3．望广大同学积极参加。 注意：1．词数100左右；2．可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 词汇：生物多样性 biodiversity Notice We are fortunate to have a famous professor Tom to give a lecture on biodiversity. Detailed information is as follows.（活动概要） To raise student’ awareness of biodiversity protection under the background of COP15, the lecture is scheduled to take place in the lecture hall next Friday, beginning at 4:00 p．m．and lasting one hour．（活动目的＋时间地点安排，To do...,主句+非谓语作状语）With rich knowledge about the topic, Tom will deliver a speech covering（非谓语作后置定语） what biodiversity is（宾从）, the significance of its protection and what ordinary people can do to help the creatures on the earth（宾从）.（活动内容）Known as a professional and humorous expert, Tom will definitely give us an attractive speech.（活动亮点）Students who have more questions （定从） are allowed to consult the professor based on their understanding after the speech.（活动内容） All students are welcome to attend the lecture.／Your presence／participation is highly appreciated.（结尾动员） 【新闻报道】 假定你是李华，最近你校组织了学生到附近的敬老院（nursing home）陪老人们过端午。请你为学校英语园地写一篇报道，内容包括： 1．时间地点； 2．活动内容（打扫卫生、包饺子、表演节目等）； 3．感想体会。 （新闻报道，尽量人称客观，但本文由于“我”也是活动参与者，写给学校自己的英语园地，可以用第一人称） Visiting the Elderly on Dragon Boat Festival On Dragon Boat Festival, a rewarding activity was initiated （发起） by our school and all students paid a visit to the nearby nursing home, where we had a meaningful experience, to keep the elderly company／to accompany the elderly.（只写基本要素 who，when，where，what，why）注意时态 We set out for the nursing home at 8:30 and arrived an hour later. Upon arrival（一到达）, we got down to（开始着手......） helping the elderly clean up their rooms [on/upon (doing) sth.,S+V一......就......］. Then we made zongzi and shared stories about the festival together with the elderly while watching the dragon boat race on TV. At last, we performed for them, singing, dancing and playing games. When it was time for us to leave, they expressed their thanks for our volunteer work and company.（具体细节，注意时态。注意结构框架——如使用时间顺序，得分点。） This activity was really beneficial to us. Not only did we know more about the festival（not only提前句子倒装为一般疑问句句式）, but also we showed the respect to the elderly.（总结评价） 【介绍信-地点介绍】 假定你是李华，你的美国朋友Tom想来你的家乡昆明旅游。他给你发邮件询问相关情况。请你给他回信。词数100左右。 Dear Tom, Hearing that you are planning a visit to Kunming, as a local, I’m more than willing to give you an introduction of the charming city.（背景和写作目的，用非谓语作状语，+主句） Surrounded （主句前非谓语作状语，被动）by lush mountains and lucid waters（青山绿水），Kunming is known as the “Spring City”，with a mild climate all year round, meaning （非谓语作状语补充内容，主动）it is always a good time to visit. It is home to more than 8 million residents, many of whom （定语从句） are ethnic minorities，allowing you to have a real taste of diverse ethnic cultures. Remarkably（“了不起的是”，路标词，使结构清晰）, the city has witnessed（拟人修辞） human civilization for over two thousand years and there are many places of interest worth visiting, such as Jinma Archway, Daguan Pavilion and Yunnan Military Academy, to name but a few （......等等）. Of course，it is a paradise for foodies as there are delicious specialties（特色食品）to suit everyone’s taste. I strongly recommend you should try steam-pot chicken, rice noodles and flower cakes. If you come, I am 100% sure that you are to have a rich cultural experience. Looking forward to your arrival.（结尾不要只有一句话，影响得高分。） Yours, Li Hua 补充：（Should you..., you would... 如果你......,你会......，非常正式用语，需要注意写信的对象。） 【演讲稿】注意用修辞，叙述要抓耳，结构词（逻辑词，黑体部分）必须要有。 假如你是李华，你将在学校英语社团做一个演讲，分享自己坚持一项体育锻炼的经历和感受。请用英语写一篇演讲稿。内容要点如下： 1．锻炼经历； 2．心得体会； 3．其他 注意： 1. 词数100左右： 2. 开头和结尾已为你写好。 Good morning! My name is Li Hua, from Class 10, Senior Grade 2. I feel honored to be here to share with you my experiences in physical exercising. (greeting & topic) Can you name one thing that you have been sticking to doing?（rhetorical question 设问修辞）Influenced by my parents who exercise regularly, I started playing tennis at the age of eleven. At the beginning, tiredness and the thought of giving up always seized me （personification 拟人修辞）. But gradually I fell in love with the sport. Now I play with my partners once or twice every week. My coach says that I have a talent for tennis, which encourages me to train even harder. I plan to join in a tennis tournament next year. (body part; use linking words to bring coherence; use rhetorical devices if possible) Doing sports is such great fun! Why not join me in working out? Thank you! (ending: summary and appeal) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 【观点类--安全网购】 写一篇关于“如何安全网购”的博客。 How to stay safe when shopping online There are several reasons why people shop online. Shopping online is fast, economical, convenient and safer than going out during the epidemic period. But always keep in mind the safety rules of shopping online.（首段简单交代背景，入题。用对比的方式更能突显观点和态度。） First of all, choose a safe shopping platform or shopping app. You should avoid shopping at the websites that you are not familiar with because the risks are very high（论点1+论述--因果论述）. Additionally, create and use strong passwords. Otherwise you might be the target when banking and shopping online（论点2+论述--反面论述）. Equally importantly, try to avoid shopping when (you are) connected to a public Wi-Fi network or when using a public computer （从句主语与主句主语一致，从句省去主语，用状语连词+非谓语）, such as a net bar computer（论点3+论述--举例）. Identity theft is more likely to occur when you use a public computer. （注意文中标黑的路标词，帮助结构清晰。） Have you had any bad experience when shopping online? Do you have some good safety tips for shopping online? Post your comments below! 【议论文-火星探索】 最近，人们就“Should we spend time and money exploring Mars”进行激烈的讨论。有人认为，探索火星是有意义的，有人持相反意见。请你根据以上情况用英语写一篇报告，并发表自己的观点。词数：120左右。 With the launch of the Zhurong rover, the discussion of whether we should carry on Mars exploration（主语） has aroused public concern. (Opinions vary from person to person. ) Some people claim that it is essential for human development, while others are against it, arguing that it’s a waste of time and money. Personally, I agree with the former（前者，后者为the latter。）.（事实＋不同观点＋我的观点） To begin with, as our planetary neighbour in the solar system, Mars is relatively easy to reach and valuable to explore. Exploring Mars provides a means（途径／方式） to satisfy our thirst（渴望） for knowledge and improve our understanding of ourselves and our place in the universe, which will broaden our horizons and show us that Earth has a delicate ecosystem that deserves protecting（定从补充信息）. Besides, minerals and rare elements on Mars may substantially（大大地）benefit product design, advancing technology and improving our life. What’s more, with the increase of population and changing of Earth, moving to other planets like Mars（动名词作主语） might even be a crucial step for human survival in the future. (linking words 分别引出三个论据，句型丰富。） Taking all factors into consideration, we may come to the conclusion that （综合考虑后，我们可以得出......）exploring Mars provides human with countless benefits and it should be carried on for long-term benefits. 【presentation】 你班英语老师请大家分小组合作，讨论后介绍一份艺术品。请你代表小组进行呈现。 Presentation on________ Hello! Welcome to our presentation. I’m so glad to have this opportunity to talk about one of the most famous pieces of art. It is called and was painted by...during/in... 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 First, let me tell you about its background. Set in／ Based on...（背景），it showed／displayed... It came to public attention in....Then, we require your attention to the work itself. This is an oil painting/ink wash painting/sketch, which describes...，featuring（以......为特征，非谓主动表伴随）... This work can be appreciated in many aspects. To illustrate， it is considered/seen/acknowledged/recognized as... and provides the viewers with an insight into.../transports the viewers to......（让......身临其境体验......） All in all/To conclude/To sum up, our group comes to a conclusion that...Thank you for listening. 【演讲稿2】 My Career Planning Hello, everyone! Today, I'm honoured to be here to share with you my vision for my future career.(greeting & topic) My biggest ambition in life is to become an International Chinese teacher. The reason why it wins my affection（“为什么喜欢的原因”定从） is that I want to devote myself to spreading traditional Chinese culture to the world（表语从句）. To realize this dream, all I have to do is to keep learning and keep going. Initially, my plan is to have a sound command of English and Chinese. Additionally, studying abroad will be taken into consideration as it can enhance my comprehension of multi-culture. Ultimately, I firmly believe that the best way to achieve my dream is to pay endless efforts and never give up. Just as the saying goes, nothing is impossible to a willing heart（引用）.【注意积累 signpost expressions】 There is without doubt no magic pill or delete button that will help you（暗喻）. Only with the faith and endeavors accompanying me can I make myself emerge as a top-ranked International Chinese teacher! （Only+介宾结构/状语从句等提前+一般疑问句句式。）Thank you for listening. 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$