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英语试卷参考答案与评分细则 第 1 页(共 5 页)
湖北省高中名校联盟 2025 届高三第二次联合测评
英语试卷参考答案与评分细则
第一部分 听力(共 20 小题,每小题 1. 5 分,满分 30 分)
题号 1 2 3 4 5 6 7 8 9 10
答案 B C A A C B A C B C
题号 11 12 13 14 15 16 17 18 19 20
答案 A B A C B C A B A C
第二部分 阅读(共两节,满分 50 分)
第一节(共 15 小题,每小题 2. 5 分,满分 37. 5 分)
题号 21 22 23 24 25 26 27 28 29 30
答案 D C B C B C D D A D
题号 31 32 33 34 35
答案 A A C C B
第二节(共 5 小题,每小题 2. 5 分,满分 12. 5 分)
题号 36 37 38 39 40
答案 A G E B F
第三部分 语言应用(共两节,满分 30 分)
第一节 完形填空(共 15 小题,每小题 1 分,满分 15 分)
题号 41 42 43 44 45 46 47 48 49 50
答案 C A B D B A C D B A
题号 51 52 53 54 55
答案 C D A B C
第二节(共 10 小题,每小题 1. 5 分,满分 15 分)
56. recognition 57. has
pleased / has
been
pleasing 58. delicately 59. Served
60. from 61. or 62. are
sourced 63. to
achieve 64. that
65. consisting
英语试卷参考答案与评分细则 第 2 页(共 5 页)
第四部分 写作(共两节,满分 40 分)
第一节:应用文写作(满分 15 分)
My
Break,
My
Choice
Extending
the
breaks
between
classes
in
high
school
can
bring
numerous
benefits
to
seniors
like
us.
The
longer
intervals
enable
us
to
truly
relax
and
recharge,
crucial
for
maintaining
focus
and
productivity
during
intense
study
sessions.
Additionally,
it
fosters
social
interactions
with
our
classmates,
thus
contributing
to
our
overall
health.
To
make
the
extended
breaks
more
engaging,
I
propose
such
“ Fun
Break”
activities
as
mind-relaxing
games
like
chess
or
puzzles,
short
storytelling
sessions,
or
even
music
sessions
where
students
can
share
their
favorite
songs.
Such
activities
not
only
provide
fun
and
relaxation
but
also
stimulate
creativity
and
teamwork.
In
conclusion,
extended
breaks
with
creative
and
fun
options
can
significantly
enhance
our
overall
school
experience,
making
learning
more
enjoyable
and
effective.
Lets
embrace
these
changes
and
make
our
breaks
count!
第二节:读后续写(满分 25 分)
An
old
man
who
looked
worried
opened
the
door.
He
seemed
a
bit
surprised
to
see
a
group
of
people
at
his
doorstep
on
such
a
cold
winter
day.
We
introduced
ourselves
and
explained
the
purpose
of
our
visit.
He
hesitated
for
a
moment
but
then
welcomed
us
in
with
a
warm
smile,
gesturing
for
us
to
come
inside.
In
the
living
room,
a
woman
who
looked
pale
greeted
us,
the
table
before
her
littered
with
medicine.
I
couldnt
help
but
feel
a
sense
of
pity,
unsure
how
to
connect
with
the
couple.
To
my
relief,
Jane
cheerfully
started
the
conversation,
guiding
it
towards
light-hearted
and
enjoyable
topics.
Finally,
all
talked,
including
the
couple,
whose
faces
gradually
lit
up.
After
the
cheerful
conversation,
we
began
to
sing.
As
we
sang
our
simple
songs,
the
wifes
eyes
sparkled
with
tears
of
joy,
and
the
husbands
uneasy
expression
softened
into
a
gentle
grin.
We
didnt
have
a
guitar
to
accompany
us,
and
our
voices
werent
perfect,
but
the
sincerity
in
our
songs
filled
the
room
with
a
sense
of
comfort.
After
our
performance,
the
couple
thanked
us
with
tears
in
their
eyes,
expressing
how
our
visit
had
made
their
day.
It
was
then
that
my
worries
totally
melted
away
and
I
realized
they
didnt
need
a
grand
performance.
The
simple
act
of
chatting,
singing,
and
being
present
was
enough
to
uplift
their
spirits.
Joyfully,
we
said
goodbye
and
drove
to
our
next
destination.
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湖北省高中名校联盟 2025 届高三第二次联合测评
听力部分录音稿
(Text
1)
M:
Hey,
Evelyn,
are
we
still
on
for
badminton
at
6:30
p. m. ?
W:
Sorry,
I
cant
make
it.
I
have
a
guitar
lesson.
Its
usually
at
7:30
p. m. ,
but
today
its
rescheduled
to
30
minutes
earlier.
M:
Oh,
what
a
pity.
(Text
2)
W:
What
can
I
help
with?
M:
Were
in
need
of
volunteers
to
set
up
tables,
guide
guests,
and
take
care
of
the
registration
at
the
reception
desk.
Which
would
you
prefer?
W:
My
feet
are
killing
me.
Anything
without
walking
around
would
be
great.
(Text
3)
W:
Hey,
look
at
that
piece
in
the
gallery.
Its
just
like
the
one
we
saw
on
our
trip
to
Paris.
M:
It
really
brings
back
memories
of
the
trip.
The
art
scene
was
truly
inspiring.
(Text
4)
W:
Whats
going
on,
Daniel?
You
look
really
upset.
M:
Can
you
help
me
with
my
homework,
Mary?
I
cant
calculate
these
figures.
W:
Thats
not
really
my
thing.
If
it
were
science
or
history,
Id
be
the
one
to
ask.
(Text
5)
W:
Could
we
get
more
towels?
We
got
caught
in
the
rain
coming
back
from
the
supermarket.
M:
Absolutely!
Ill
send
a
robot
up
with
them
right
away.
Also,
just
to
confirm,
breakfast
for
tomorrow
at
8
a.
m. ?
W:
Yes,
please.
(Text
6)
M:
Hey,
hows
it
going?
W:
Not
bad.
Im
thinking
of
organizing
a
party
for
our
Chinese
teacher
next
Friday.
He
will
retire
soon
and
move
to
another
city.
What
do
you
think?
M:
Sounds
good!
Count
me
in.
Let
me
take
on
some
jobs
on
your
to-do
list.
英语试卷参考答案与评分细则 第 4 页(共 5 页)
W:
Well,
the
first
thing
is
to
find
a
venue
for
the
party.
M:
What
about
my
apartment?
W:
Yeah,
its
big
enough
and
close,
plus
no
weather
worries.
M:
OK,
Ill
check
with
my
neighbors,
especially
the
downstairs
family.
(Text
7)
M:
Hello,
Ive
read
great
reviews
of
your
bakery.
Its
said
your
chef
comes
from
a
Michelin
background.
Youre
famous
for
your
strawberry
cakes,
right?
Id
like
to
try
one.
W:
Sorry,
we
have
strawberry
cakes
only
when
the
local
strawberries
are
ripe.
Theyre
too
delicate
to
ship
well.
Would
you
like
to
try
a
mango
cake
instead?
M:
Sure,
and,
by
any
chance,
have
you
opened
an
account
on
delivery
platforms?
Im
expecting
some
guests
at
my
house
on
Tuesday
afternoon,
and
Id
like
to
have
some
desserts
available.
W:
No,
we
havent,
but
if
youre
in
the
neighborhood,
I
can
bring
your
order
to
your
house.
M:
Great,
thanks
a
lot.
Heres
the
address.
(Text
8)
W:
The
holiday
is
coming
soon.
M:
Well,
lets
not
leave
the
planning
to
the
last
minute
this
year.
And
our
top
priority
is
to
get
our
passports
renewed.
W:
But
we
havent
booked
anything
yet.
Where
shall
we
go?
M:
Do
you
fancy
doing
something
active
again
this
year?
Do
you
remember
that
walking
holiday
we
did
in
Spain
—
wasnt
that
fun?
Or
we
could
do
a
road
trip.
W:
That
walking
holiday
was
brilliant!
But
I
want
to
try
something
different.
Actually,
the
same
company
also
does
cycling
holidays.
M:
Yes,
it
also
offers
various
levels
of
difficulty.
But
the
best
thing
about
it
is
that
it
handles
all
the
arrangements.
W:
Great.
Lets
book
it
early
and
prepare
the
equipment
beforehand.
(Text
9)
M:
Hello,
Ms.
Kate
Berry.
We
often
think
of
libraries
as
places
for
borrowing
books,
but
your
Eugene
Public
Library
has
surprised
us
by
offering
so
much
more,
like
board
games,
arts
and
crafts,
and
even
musical
instruments.
W:
Haha,
thats
true!
We
have
a
special
section
for
checking
out
non-literary
items.
Recently,
weve
added
something
truly
unique:
robot
cats.
M:
Really?
Could
you
tell
us
more
about
that?
W:
Of
course.
The
robot
cats
were
brought
in
for
a
special
reason.
They
were
bought
for
the
visitors
who
may
be
英语试卷参考答案与评分细则 第 5 页(共 5 页)
alone
and
in
need
of
the
company.
They
make
sounds
like
real
cats,
sit
on
your
legs,
and
enjoy
nothing
more
than
a
good
brush,
which
is
really
comforting.
M:
Well,
how
many
robot
cats
do
you
have?
W:
Each
of
our
three
library
floors
has
one
for
visitors,
and
we
have
two
additional
ones
for
our
staff.
I
understand
the
staff
has
also
taken
a
liking
to
them.
M:
Thats
great
to
hear.
Adding
these
robot
cats
is
such
a
fantastic
way
to
show
how
libraries
can
do
more
than
just
lend
books.
Youre
not
just
offering
resources.
Youre
helping
build
a
community
that
cares
about
emotional
support.
(Text
10)
Good
evening,
everyone.
Id
like
to
start
by
asking:
How
was
your
day?
Did
you
encounter
any
challenge
or
annoyance?
Its
completely
natural
to
have
days
like
that.
After
a
tough
day,
unloading
on
your
friends
can
be
a
relief.
Unfortunately,
however,
complaining
can
do
more
harm
than
good.
Obviously,
it
influences
your
friends
moods.
It
also
makes
you
stressed,
which
can
affect
your
sleep.
But
more
importantly,
every
time
you
complain,
your
brain
creates
shortcuts
to
think
more
pessimistically.
Frequent
complaining
can
hurt
the
part
of
your
brain
that
helps
with
memory
and
problem-solving.
To
fix
this,
there
are
three
strategies
you
can
use
to
shift
from
negative
to
positive
thinking.
Begin
with
breathwork.
When
you
catch
yourself
being
negative,
take
deep,
slow
breaths
to
reset
your
mood
and
focus.
Next,
try
to
shift
your
perspective
by
finding
positive
angles
or
lessons
in
challenging
situations.
Lastly,
write
down
four
things
youre
thankful
for
each
day.
This
habit
helps
you
focus
on
positives,
changing
your
outlook
and
holding
back
the
urge
to
complain.
With
these
in
mind,
now
let
me
share
how
Ive
applied
them
to
switch
to
more
positive
modes
of
thinking.
英语试卷参考答案与解析 第 1 页(共 6 页)
湖北省高中名校联盟 2025 届高三第二次联合测评
英语试卷参考答案与解析
第一部分 听力(共两节,满分 30 分)
1-5
BCAAC
6-10
BACBC
11-15
ABACB 16-20
CABAC
第二部分 阅读(共两节,满分 50 分)
第一节
(共 15 小题;每小题 2. 5 分,满分 37. 5 分)
21-23
DCB 24-27
CBCD 28-31
DADA 32-35
ACCB
21. D 【解析】细节理解题。 根据文章 Tips
for
Visitors 部分 Be
prepared
to
bargain
with
the
sellers 可知,书
展上图书可以讨价还价,因此游客可以买到降价书,故选 D。
22. C 【解析】推理判断题。 根据 Useful
Information
for
Visitors 部分 The
fair
is
wheel
chair
accessible. 可
知,书展提供了无障碍通道,适合轮椅使用,故选 C。
23. B 【解析】意图推断题。 本文是一则书展介绍,包括时间、地点、游览建议和交通方式,旨在向读者宣
传该书展,故选 B。
24. C 【解析】细节理解题。 由文章第二段“I
started
thinking
about
how
I
could
stand
out,”
“I
tried
using
indigo
to
tie-dye(扎染)
modern
clothes. ”可知 Auntie
Ngeam 开创了靛蓝扎染衣服,故选 C。
25. B 【解析】词义猜测题。 由文章第四段“With
the
increasing
acceptance
of
indigo
craftsmanship”和“one
of
such
growing
businesses”可知靛蓝公司现在较为普遍,故选 B。
26. C 【解析】推理判断题。 由文章最后一段 Boyd 所说的话“all
we
need
to
do
is
make
it
shine
brighter
so
people
can
see
it”可知还需要继续推广,让靛蓝工艺为更多人所知,因此选 C。
27. D 【解析】主旨大意题。 本文介绍了靛蓝工艺的传承、创新和流行,D 选项中 tradition 和 trend 两个词
能够概括全文。 故选 D。
28. D 【解析】推理判断题。 由文章第二段“with
the
introduction
of
the
iPod
and
smartphones”可知电子产
品的使用和普及使听音乐更加个性化,故选 D。
29. A 【解析】主旨大意题。 本文第三段通过比较的方式,主要强调了 AI 生成式歌单的优点,故选 A。
30. D 【解析】推理判断题。 由第四段中…forming
a
unique
identity,
while
at
the
same
time
becoming
part
of
a
community.
However,
AI
generated
playlists
have
the
potential
to
challenge
this
transition.
So
does
AI
make
it
easier
to
differentiate
the
self,
but
harder
to
bond
with
others? 可知,AI 生成式歌单可能呈现的挑
战是让青少年之间的联系更加困难,减少了共同讨论、交流的话题的机会,
故选 D。
31. A 【解析】推理判断题。 文章第五段以 2004 年上千万的人收看《老友记》大结局为例,说明了 the
decline
of
scheduled
network
TV 让人们失去了共同讨论的话题,由此可以推断 AI 可能造成的社会影
响,故选 A。
32. A 【解析】细节理解题。 由文章第一段“the
subject
of
her
research
was
not
available
in
emoji
(表情符
英语试卷参考答案与解析 第 2 页(共 6 页)
号)
form”可知,Anderson 不满的是她的研究对象缺乏表情符号,故选 A。
33. C 【解析】推理判断题。 根据文章第二段“ We
usually
feel
more
caring
and
sympathetic
towards
living
things
that
are
genetically
closer
to
us. ”可知之所以动物表情符号更多是因为人们通常对与其在基因上
更接近的生物感到更关心和同情,故选 C。
34. C 【解析】细节理解题。 由文章第三段“greatly
help
publicize
the
message
that
biodiversity”可知,有更
多的表情符号能够有助于让更多人了解生物多样性,故选 C。
35. B 【解析】推理判断题。 根据文章倒数第二段“However,
according
to
Mammola,
the
number
of
animal
species
represented
rose
from
45
in
2015
to
92
in
2022,
yet
the
number
of
plants,
fungi
and
microorganisms
represented
barely
increased. ”可知,根据 Mammola 的说法,尽管动物物种的表情符号数量有所增长,但
植物、真菌和微生物的表情符号数量几乎没有增加,所以 Mammola 对于表情符号多样性的进展现状
是不满意的,故选 B。
第二节
(共 5 小题;每小题 2. 5 分,满分 12. 5 分)
36-40
AGEBF
36. A 【解析】理解句际关系。 由 36 空前的内容可知,人们以为画面和声音是同时录制的,然而并非如
此,36 空后进行了说明,故选 A,构成上下文的转折。
37. G 【解析】理解段落结构。 G 选项 This 回指前文“画面和声音不是同时录制的”,后文解释原因,故选
G。
38. E 【解析】理解句际关系。 依据空格后“There
will
probably
be
background
noises
such
as
crew
members
chatting
or
walking
around
if
sounds
are
recorded
on
location. ”可知 38 空为画面和声音不是同时录制”的
第二个原因,故选 E。
39. B 【解析】理解句际关系。 本段介绍纪录片中声音来源,除了创造声音以外,还有从现有的录音中选
取,故选 B。
40. F 【解析】理解句际关系。 40 空后讲到声音的其他功能,故选 F,说明拟音师的意义。
第三部分 语言运用(共两节,满分 30 分)
第一节
(共 15 小题;每小题 1 分,满分 15 分)
41-45
CABDB 46-50
ACDBA 51-55
CDABC
41. C 【解析】由下文作者在 fire
department 和 power
plant 工作过可知,作者退休前有两份工作,故选
careers。
42. A 【解析】由下文作者想要重新学习飞行,可知作者退休后想要找到新的激情,故选 passion。
43. B 【解析】由上文作者面临 unfocused 的问题,可知作者没有(failed)完成训练。
44. D 【解析】由下文 for
so
long 可知父亲的决心(determination)让作者惊讶。
45. B 【解析】由 during
a
flight 可知,作者在飞行训练中遇见了(encountered)之前的同事。
46. A 【解析】根据上下文句意可知,朋友的经历让我重新燃起了(refired)热情。
47. C 【解析】由下文作者的指导老师是有责任心的人,故作者觉得自己幸运(fortunate)。
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48. D 【解析】由下文作者定期收到杂志,可知作者建立起了与该组织的联系,因此选择 sign
up
for 符合
上下文语境。
49. B 【解析】由后文中 often 可知,先前作者只是偶尔(occasionally)阅读。
50. A 【解析】由上文作者在杂志中发现很多有用的建议,因此更加频繁地阅读(reviewed)。
51. C 【解析】由上文作者在杂志中发现很多有用的建议,之后继续订阅(subscribe)。
52. D 【解析】65 岁的时候作者成为一名飞行员,因此感到幸运(blessed)。
53. A 【解析】在 65 岁的时候,作者成为了一名飞行员,老有所为,实现了自己的价值(value)。
54. B 【解析】作者退休之后取得了成就,因此觉得父亲会对自己感到骄傲(proud)。
55. C 【解析】作者的经历证明(confirms)了“活到老学到老”这一道理。
第二节
(共 10 小题;每小题 1. 5 分,满分 15 分,大小写错误、拼写错误均不得分)
56. recognition 57.
has
pleased
/
has
been
pleasing 58.
delicately
59. Served 60.
from 61. or 62. are
sourced
63. to
achieve 64. that 65. consisting
56. recognition 【解析】考查语境中名词的用法。 international
recognition 意为“国际认可”。
57. has
pleased / has
been
pleasing 【解析】考查谓语动词的时态和主谓一致。 从 For
over
six
decades 和下
文可知此处可使用现在完成时或现在完成进行时。
58. delicately 【解析】考查语境中副词的运用。 此处填副词 delicately 修饰 crafted。
59. Served 【解析】考查语境中过去分词的用法。 Serve 和 you 构成逻辑上的被动关系。
60. from 【解析】考查介词搭配。 考查 from
…to 介词搭配。
61. or 【解析】考查连词。 上下文为选择关系。
62. are
sourced 【解析】考查谓语动词的时态、语态和主谓一致。 此处 source 为动词,意为“获得”。
63. to
achieve 【解析】考查语境中动词不定式的用法,表示目的。
64. that 【解析】考查关系代词用法。 先行词 place 前有 the
only 修饰,只能用 that。
65. consisting 【解析】考查非谓语动词作定语。
第四部分 写作(共两节,满分 40 分)
第一节
(满分 15 分)
一、评分原则
1. 本题总分为 15 分,按各档次评分标准给分。
2. 评分时,先根据文章的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定或调整
档次,最后给分。
3. 词数少于 60,酌情扣分。
4. 评分时,应注意的主要内容为:时态、人称、内容要点、应用词汇和语法结构的数量和准确性、上下
文的连贯性及语言的得体性。
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。 英、美拼
英语试卷参考答案与解析 第 4 页(共 6 页)
写及词汇用法均可接受。
6. 如书写较差,以至影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。
二、各档次的给分范围和要求:
第五档
(13-15 分)
覆盖了所有内容要点,表述清楚、合理。
使用了多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构,可能有个别小错,但不完全影响理解。 有效地使用了语句
间衔接手段,全文结构清晰,意义连贯。
完全达到了预期的写作目的。
第四档
(10-12 分)
覆盖了所有内容要点,表述比较清楚、合理。
使用了比较多样并且恰当的词和语法结构,可能有些许错误,但不影响理解。 比较有效地使用了语
句间衔接手段,全文结构比较清晰,意义比较连贯。
达到了预期的写作目的。
第三档
(7-9 分)
覆盖了大部分内容要点,有个别地方表述不够清楚、合理。
使用了简单的词汇和语法结构,有一些错误或不当之处,但基本不影响理解。 基本有效地使用了语
句间衔接手段,全文结构基本清晰,意义基本连贯。
基本达到了预期的写作目的。
第二档(4-6 分)
遗漏或未清楚表述一些内容要点,或一些内容与写作目的不相关。
所使用的词汇有限,语法结构单调,错误较多,影响理解。
几乎不能有效地使用语句间衔接手段,全文结构不够清,意义不够连贯。
未能达到预期的写作目的。
第一档
(1-3 分)
遗漏或未清表述大部分内容要点,或大部分内容与写作目的不相关。
所使用的词汇有限,语法结单调,错误多,严重影响理解。
几乎没有使用语句间衔接手段,全文结构不清晰,意义不连贯。
完全未达到预期的写作目的。
零分
未作答、所写内容太少或无法看清以致无法评判所写内容与题目要求完全不相关。
英语试卷参考答案与解析 第 5 页(共 6 页)
One
possible
version:
My
Break,
My
Choice
Extending
the
breaks
between
classes
in
high
school
can
bring
numerous
benefits
to
seniors
like
us.
The
longer
intervals
enable
us
to
truly
relax
and
recharge,
crucial
for
maintaining
focus
and
productivity
during
intense
study
sessions.
Additionally,
it
fosters
social
interactions
with
our
classmates,
thus
contributing
to
our
overall
health.
To
make
the
extended
breaks
more
engaging,
I
propose
such
“ Fun
Break”
activities
as
mind-relaxing
games
like
chess
or
puzzles,
short
storytelling
sessions,
or
even
music
sessions
where
students
can
share
their
favorite
songs.
Such
activities
not
only
provide
fun
and
relaxation
but
also
stimulate
creativity
and
teamwork.
In
conclusion,
extended
breaks
with
creative
and
fun
options
can
significantly
enhance
our
overall
school
experience,
making
learning
more
enjoyable
and
effective.
Lets
embrace
these
changes
and
make
our
breaks
count!
第二节
(满分 25 分)
一、评分原则
1. 本题总分为 25 分,按 5 个档次给分。
2. 评分时,先根据所续写短文的内容和语言初步确定其所属档次,然后以该档次的要求来衡量,确定
或调整档次,最后给分。
3. 词数少于 130,酌情扣分。
4. 评分时,应主要从以下四个方面考虑:与所给短文及段落开头语的衔接程度;内容的丰富性和对所
标出的关键词的应用情况;应用语法结构和词汇的丰富性和准确性;上下文的连贯性。
5. 拼写与标点符号是语言准确性的一个重要方面,评分时,应视其对交际的影响程度予以考虑。
6. 如书写较差,以致影响交际,将分数降低一个档次。
二、各档次的给分范围和要求:
第五档(21-25 分)
创造了丰富、合理的内容,富有逻辑性,续写完整,与原文情境融洽度高。
使用了多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构,可能有个别小错,但不完全影响理解。
有效地使用了语句间衔接手段,全文结构清晰,意义连贯。
第四档(16-20 分)
创造了比较丰富、合理的内容,比较有逻辑性,续写比较完整,与原文情境融洽度较高。
使用了比较多样并且恰当的词汇和语法结构,可能有些许错误,但不影响理解。
比较有效地使用了语句间衔接手段,全文结构比较清晰,意义比较连贯。
英语试卷参考答案与解析 第 6 页(共 6 页)
第三档(11-15 分)
创造了基本合理的内容,有一定的逻辑性,续写基本完整,与原文情境相关。
使用了简单的词汇和语法结构,有一些错误或不恰当之处,但基本不影响理解。
基本有效地使用了语句间衔接手段,全文结构基本清晰,意义基本连贯。
第二档(6-10 分)
内容或逻辑上有一些重大问题,续写不够完整,与原文情境有一定程度脱节。
所使用的词汇有限,语法结构单调,错误较多,影响理解。
未能有效地使用语句间衔接手段,全文结构不够清晰,意义不够连贯。
第一档(1-5 分)
内容或逻辑上有较多重大问题,或有部分内容抄自原文,续写不完整,与原文情境基本脱节。
所使用的词汇有限,语法结构单调,错误较多,严重影响理解。
几乎没有使用语句间衔接手段,全文结构不清晰,意义不连贯。
零分
未作答、所写内容太少或无法看清以致无法评判,所写内容全部抄自原文或与题目要求完全不相关。
One
possible
version:
An
old
man
who
looked
worried
opened
the
door.
He
seemed
a
bit
surprised
to
see
a
group
of
people
at
his
doorstep
on
such
a
cold
winter
day.
We
introduced
ourselves
and
explained
the
purpose
of
our
visit.
He
hesitated
for
a
moment
but
then
welcomed
us
in
with
a
warm
smile,
gesturing
for
us
to
come
inside.
In
the
living
room,
a
woman
who
looked
pale
greeted
us,
the
table
before
her
littered
with
medicine.
I
couldnt
help
but
feel
a
sense
of
pity,
unsure
how
to
connect
with
the
couple.
To
my
relief,
Jane
cheerfully
started
the
conversation,
guiding
it
towards
light-hearted
and
enjoyable
topics.
Finally,
all
talked,
including
the
couple,
whose
faces
gradually
lit
up.
After
the
cheerful
conversation,
we
began
to
sing.
As
we
sang
our
simple
songs,
the
wifes
eyes
sparkled
with
tears
of
joy,
and
the
husbands
uneasy
expression
softened
into
a
gentle
grin.
We
didnt
have
a
guitar
to
accompany
us,
and
our
voices
werent
perfect,
but
the
sincerity
in
our
songs
filled
the
room
with
a
sense
of
comfort.
After
our
performance,
the
couple
thanked
us
with
tears
in
their
eyes,
expressing
how
our
visit
had
made
their
day.
It
was
then
that
my
worries
totally
melted
away
and
I
realized
they
didnt
need
a
grand
performance.
The
simple
act
of
chatting,
singing,
and
being
present
was
enough
to
uplift
their
spirits.
Joyfully,
we
said
goodbye
and
drove
to
our
next
destination.