【期末备考】专题12 话题写作·书面表达（广州深圳沈阳通用）-2024-2025学年七年级下学期英语期末复习满分冲刺（沪教版2024）

【期末备考】专题12 话题写作·书面表达 话题一 写人：身边的人、榜样（role model） 1．最近学校在评选“校园之星(School Star)”。假设你是Lisa，你想推荐你的朋友Dave参加评选。请根据下面的思维导图写一篇英语短文，介绍他的情况。要求：70词左右，可适当发挥，已给出部分不计入总词数。 写作本篇文章可能需要用到以下表达： 单词tall, short, big, friendly, helpful, patient... 短语draw pictures, help...with..., share...with..., role model... 句型teach sb. to do sth., encourage sb. to do sth., I believe ... Hello, everyone, I‘m Lisa and I think my friend Dave can be the School Star. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假如你是李明，你们学校正在开展英语节的活动，你将参加A role model around me的英语主题演讲比赛，请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍你心目中的模范少年Jim。 内容提示： 1. 自信乐观，学习努力，有广泛的兴趣爱好； 2. 擅于与人沟通交流，乐于帮助有需要的同学； 3. 课余时间积极参加义工活动，坚持每周末去医院帮助照顾生病的孩子； 4. 补充至少一点以上有关信息或个人想法。 要求： 1. 80词左右，可以适当发挥； 2. 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，卷面整洁。 3. 参考词汇：义工活动voluntary work Dear fellow students, Good morning. I’m Li Ming. Today I’m going to introduce Jim who is a role model around me to you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for your listening! 3．假如你是李华，你校英语社团公众号正在进行关于“我敬仰的科学家”系列推送活动。请你用英语给公众号留言，介绍你敬仰的科学家，包括他/ 她是谁、他/她的成就及你敬佩他/她的原因。 参考词汇： devote…to, make a great contribution to, look up on, selfless dedication spirit (无私奉献的精神), be eager to, played a key role in 要求：词数不少于80。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 话题二 旅游 1．今年暑假，你代表广州中学生参加AFS国际文化交流组织项目(AFS intercultural Programs)，即将到澳大利亚开展为期一个月的文化交流。请根据以下内容，向接待你的澳大利亚家中学生Jack介绍广州的风土人情，展示广州的文化特色。 注意事项： （1）短文应包括所给要点内容，可适当拓展使文章充实连贯； （2）词数 70 左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； （3）文中考生不得提及所在学校及姓名； （4）相关词汇：长隆野生动物园 Chimelong Safari Park，省份 Province，广州塔 Canton Tower。 Jack, I would like to tell you something about my hometown. I come from ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．假设在 Mr. Li 的英语课堂上，你班同学就自己最喜欢的城市及喜欢的原因进行了组内分享。请根据以下表格要点提示，完成一份关于小组成员分享内容的报告。 Lucy Sam I 最喜欢的城市 成都 巴黎 ? 简介 中国西南部； 因大熊猫而闻名。 法国的首都； 有很多名胜古迹， 如埃菲尔铁塔和卢浮宫。 （至少写两点） 喜欢的原因 看大熊猫， 品尝当地小吃。 （至少写一点） （至少写一点） 注意： 1. 词数：80 词左右； 2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。 参考词汇： 埃菲尔铁塔 the Eiffel Tower 卢浮宫 the Louvre Museum Yesterday in our English class, we talked about our travel plan and shared our favourite cities in groups. Here is the report from our group. Lucy’s favourite city is _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In conclusion, we all have our own dream cities to visit. Through this activity, we have broadened our horizons and become more eager to explore different places in the future. 3．每个人都有精彩的旅游经历。哪次旅行给你留下难忘的印象呢？请你以“An Unforgettable Trip”为题，根据以下导图提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的这一次难忘的旅行，词数80词左右。 注意事项： 1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不记入总词数； 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实姓名和校名。 An Unforgettable trip Everyone has a wonderful trip. I will never forget _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假设你是李华，你的外国笔友Peter打算暑假来深圳旅游，请你写一封邮件向他介绍深圳。 要点： 1. 简要描述深圳的地理位置和气候特点； 2. 推荐深圳可游玩的著名景点（至少2个）； 3. 来深圳旅游时的注意事项。 要求： 1. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺、条理清楚、意义连贯； 4.  书写规范，卷面整洁。 参考词汇：Shenzhen Safari Park（深圳野生动物园），OCT East（东部华侨城），Shenzhen Bay Park（深圳湾公园），Lianhua Hill Park（莲花山公园），Dameisha（大梅沙），Red Cube（红立方） Dear Peter, I am glad to know that _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you can enjoy your travelling in Shenzhen. Best wishes, Li Hua 话题三 保护动物和植物 1．请根据以下要点提示，写一篇关于你最喜欢的动物——大熊猫的短文。 要点： 1.大熊猫是中国的象征之一，黑白相间，看起来很可爱； 2.它们生活在中国四川、陕西等地的森林和山区； 3.它们喜欢吃竹子，每天花很多时间吃东西； 4.大熊猫是中国国宝(national treasure)，友谊(friendship)的象征，目前仅存大约2000只，因此我们会尽力保护它们。 要求： 1.包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 2.语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯； 3.词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My favorite animals—giant pandas There are many kinds of animals in the world,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．众所周知，树木对人类的生产和生活起着至关重要的作用，请你根据以下思维导图内容提示,以“The importance of trees”为题，用英语写一篇短文，说明树木对人类的重要性。 注意： (1) 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。 (2) 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。 (3) 语句连贯，词数60左右。作文的标题已经给出，不计入总词数。 The importance of trees _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．你的老师 Miss Lin 要求你们以小组为单位写一篇主题为保护动植物的倡议性文章，以下是你们小组成员的观点，请根据以下表格要点提示，适当发挥完成作文。 Protect Man’s Best Friends Jim 动物帮助我们做很多事，比如帮助盲人； Anna 植物清新空气，使生活更便利； 你的观点 动物（请补充至少一个点） 植物（请补充至少一个点） 你们的倡议 倡议 1：停止砍伐树木 倡议 2：请补充至少一个点 注意：作文必须包括表格所有信息；词数：70 词左右；不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Protect Man’s Best Friends Animals and plants are our best friends. They help us a lot in our daily lives. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 话题四 节约水电 1.“水是生命之源”。你校准备举行以“Save Water”为题的英语征文比赛，请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文投稿，呼吁同学们节约用水。 注意： 1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2. 词数80词左右 (短文的开头已给出，不计入词数)； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 In the world, many people live a hard life because they don’t have enough water. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．你们班举行了一次班会，会上大家就如何节约用水和保护水资源热烈讨论。请根据以下提示以“How to Save Water in Our Daily Life”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下节约用水的方法。 要点提示： 写作要求： 1.文中须包含所给的要点提示，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数70左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 How to Save Water in Our Daily Life Water is important to us. We cannot live without water. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 3．假如你们将要举办一个“保护地球，从我做起”活动，请你根据表格中的内容，以“Protect the Earth”为题用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，呼吁同学们一起保护地球。 必要性 地球是我家，必须保护她 不良现象 把垃圾扔进河里，燃烧东西污染空气，乱扔塑料袋 建议 1. 多种树 2. 节约用水、用电 3. 你的至少一点建议 注意：1. 参考词汇：塑料袋（plastic bag） 电（electricity） 节约（save） Protect the Earth The Earth is a beautiful place. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 4．假设你叫Frank，你的学校每年都在世界水日 (World Water Day) 开展丰富多彩的活动，宣传节约用水。你的网友Amy所在的学校也计划开展类似活动。请你写一封邮件向Amy介绍你们的活动情况，文章需要包含以下提示的内容： 活动时间 每年3月22日 参加人员 全校师生 活动形式 1. 演讲比赛；2. 制作海报；3. …… 活动意义 1. 告诉人们水的重要性和水资源的珍贵； 2. …… 活动感受 …… 提示词：演讲比赛speech competition；海报poster 要求： 1. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内； 2. 必须包括以上全部要点，可以适当发挥； 3. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 Dear Amy, It’s nice to hear from you. In your email, you mentioned the activities in my school on World Water Day. Let me tell you what we often do on this special day. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Frank 话题五 爱好和理想职业 1.Hobbies can make our lives colorful! Everyone needs them. 请你结合下面的3个问题，发挥想象力，以 “My favorite hobby” 为题写一篇英语短文，词数70左右。 What’s your favourite hobby? Why do you love it? How often do you do it? My Favorite Hobby ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 2．写一篇英语短文：谈论自己的爱好和未来理想的职业。要求： 1.自己爱好是什么。 2.我什么时候形成自己的爱好。 3.我为什么喜欢自己的爱好。 4.未来的职业设想。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$ 【期末备考】专题12 七下话题写作·书面表达 话题一 写人：身边的人、榜样（role model） 1．最近学校在评选“校园之星(School Star)”。假设你是Lisa，你想推荐你的朋友Dave参加评选。请根据下面的思维导图写一篇英语短文，介绍他的情况。要求：70词左右，可适当发挥，已给出部分不计入总词数。 写作本篇文章可能需要用到以下表达： 单词tall, short, big, friendly, helpful, patient... 短语draw pictures, help...with..., share...with..., role model... 句型teach sb. to do sth., encourage sb. to do sth., I believe ... Hello, everyone, I‘m Lisa and I think my friend Dave can be the School Star. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Hello, everyone, I’m Lisa and I think my friend Dave can be the School Star. Dave is 13 years old. He is a tall boy with short hair and big eyes. He enjoys reading, drawing pictures and collecting stamps. Dave is very friendly, helpful and patient. He often helps his classmates with their studies and shares his stamps with others. On weekends, he often goes to the Children’s Hospital to teach sick kids to draw pictures and tell them stories. He often encourages those kids to be brave and face their difficulties with a smile. I believe Dave is the best choice for the School Star because he is a role model for all of us. 【详解】［总体分析］ ① 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，可适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。以第三人称为主。 ［写作步骤］ 第一段，点明主题。想推荐Dave为“校园之星”并介绍他的外貌和爱好等基本情况； 第二段，用具体事件来描述他友好和乐于助人的性格； 第三段，书写结语。相信戴夫是校星的最佳人选。 ［亮点词汇］ ①draw pictures 画画 ②help ... with ... 帮助某人干某事 ③share ... with ... 与某人分享 ［高分句型］ ①He enjoys reading, drawing pictures and collecting stamps. (动名词作宾语) ②I believe Dave is the best choice for the School Star because he is a role model for all of us. (because引导的原因状语从句) 2．假如你是李明，你们学校正在开展英语节的活动，你将参加A role model around me的英语主题演讲比赛，请你根据以下提示，用英语写一篇演讲稿，介绍你心目中的模范少年Jim。 内容提示： 1. 自信乐观，学习努力，有广泛的兴趣爱好； 2. 擅于与人沟通交流，乐于帮助有需要的同学； 3. 课余时间积极参加义工活动，坚持每周末去医院帮助照顾生病的孩子； 4. 补充至少一点以上有关信息或个人想法。 要求： 1. 80词左右，可以适当发挥； 2. 条理清楚，意思连贯，语句通顺，标点正确，卷面整洁。 3. 参考词汇：义工活动voluntary work Dear fellow students, Good morning. I’m Li Ming. Today I’m going to introduce Jim who is a role model around me to you. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Thanks for your listening! 【答案】例文 Dear fellow students, Good morning. I’m Li Ming. Today I’m going to introduce Jim who is a role model around me to you. He is a confident and optimistic boy. And he studies very hard, so he often wins prizes. He has many hobbies, such as swimming, playing basketball and so on. In addition, he is good at communicating with others and is always willing to help students in need. Most importantly, he actively participates in volunteer work in his spare time, and he insists on going to the hospital every weekend to help take care of sick children. In short, he is a role model in my mind. His shining points are worth learning from. Thanks for your listening! 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇应用文，为演讲稿； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据所给提示完成写作，不能遗漏信息，以第三人称为主。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍Jim的性格和爱好； 第二步，介绍Jim所擅长以及经常志愿做的事情； 第三步，最后表达自己的想法。 [亮点词汇] ①such as比如 ②in addition此外 ③take care of照顾 ④in short简而言之 [高分句型] ①he is good at communicating with others and is always willing to help students in need.（and连接两个并列结构） ②he insists on going to the hospital every weekend to help take care of sick children.（动词不定式作目的状语） 3．假如你是李华，你校英语社团公众号正在进行关于“我敬仰的科学家”系列推送活动。请你用英语给公众号留言，介绍你敬仰的科学家，包括他/ 她是谁、他/她的成就及你敬佩他/她的原因。 参考词汇： devote…to, make a great contribution to, look up on, selfless dedication spirit (无私奉献的精神), be eager to, played a key role in 要求：词数不少于80。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 I’m Li Hua, and I want to share the scientist I admire most—Yuan Longping.​ Yuan Longping was a great scientist. He devoted all his life to hybrid rice research. In the past, many people suffered from hunger. But he was eager to change this situation. He worked day and night in the fields. Finally, he developed high-yield hybrid rice. This played a key role in feeding a large number of people not only in China but also around the world. He made a great contribution to global food security.​ I really look up to him. His selfless dedication spirit deeply inspires me. Despite facing many difficulties, he never gave up. He just kept working hard to help more people get rid of hunger. Yuan Longping is not only a scientist but also a hero in my heart. I hope more people can learn from his spirit.​ Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏提示，并适当添加细节，注意字母大小写以及标点符号。 [写作步骤] 第一步、开篇点题，引出话题； 第二步、介绍自己敬仰的科学家是谁，以及他/她的成就； 第三步、介绍敬佩他/她的原因并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①suffer from受折磨 ②play a key role in…在……中发挥关键作用 ③not only…but also不仅……而且 ④get rid of摆脱 [高分句型] ①I hope more people can learn from his spirit.(宾语从句) 话题二 旅游 1．今年暑假，你代表广州中学生参加AFS国际文化交流组织项目(AFS intercultural Programs)，即将到澳大利亚开展为期一个月的文化交流。请根据以下内容，向接待你的澳大利亚家中学生Jack介绍广州的风土人情，展示广州的文化特色。 注意事项： （1）短文应包括所给要点内容，可适当拓展使文章充实连贯； （2）词数 70 左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数； （3）文中考生不得提及所在学校及姓名； （4）相关词汇：长隆野生动物园 Chimelong Safari Park，省份 Province，广州塔 Canton Tower。 Jack, I would like to tell you something about my hometown. I come from ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】范文 Jack, I would like to tell you something about my hometown. I come from Guangzhou, Guangdong Province, China. Guangzhou is the capital of Guangdong Province with a long history. It is famous for its flowers and delicious food. There are plenty of famous places of interest here. Firstly, if you want to get a bird’s-eye view of Guangzhou, you can visit Canton Tower. Secondly, you can visit Baiyun Mountain, where the trees are strong and the air is fresh. Thirdly, there is also Chimelong Safari Park. It is one of the biggest nature parks in China and is home to about 20,000 animals, including giant pandas and Chinese white tigers. The people here are also very friendly and kind. Guangzhou has something for everyone. If you come to Guangzhou, you will be sure to like it. Welcome to my hometown as a guest. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图并总体介绍广州； 第二步，介绍广州的旅游景点； 第三步，介绍自己对广州的评价及原因。 [亮点词汇] ①capital省会 ②be famous for…因……而出名 ③places of interest名胜古迹 ④fresh清新的 [高分句型] ①For example, you can visit Baiyun Mountain, where the trees are strong and the air is fresh. (where引导非限制性定语从句) ②Firstly, if you want to get a bird’s-eye view of Guangzhou, you can visit Canton Tower. (if引导条件状语从句) 2．假设在 Mr. Li 的英语课堂上，你班同学就自己最喜欢的城市及喜欢的原因进行了组内分享。请根据以下表格要点提示，完成一份关于小组成员分享内容的报告。 Lucy Sam I 最喜欢的城市 成都 巴黎 ? 简介 中国西南部； 因大熊猫而闻名。 法国的首都； 有很多名胜古迹， 如埃菲尔铁塔和卢浮宫。 （至少写两点） 喜欢的原因 看大熊猫， 品尝当地小吃。 （至少写一点） （至少写一点） 注意： 1. 词数：80 词左右； 2. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分； 3. 开头和结尾已给出，不计入词数。 参考词汇： 埃菲尔铁塔 the Eiffel Tower 卢浮宫 the Louvre Museum Yesterday in our English class, we talked about our travel plan and shared our favourite cities in groups. Here is the report from our group. Lucy’s favourite city is _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ In conclusion, we all have our own dream cities to visit. Through this activity, we have broadened our horizons and become more eager to explore different places in the future. 【答案】 例文：     Yesterday in our English class, we talked about our travel plan and shared our favourite cities in groups. Here is the report from our group.       Lucy’s favourite city is Chengdu. It lies in the southwest of China. It’s famous for pandas. Lucy loves to see lovely pandas and taste the local snacks. The food there is really delicious.     Sam likes Paris best. It is the capital of France. It is a city with many places of interest, such as the Eiffel Tower and the Louvre Museum. He thinks Paris is one of the most romantic cities. he can enjoy the beautiful scenery and rich culture there.     As for me, my favourite city is Beijing. It’s the capital of China. There are many places of interest here, such as the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace and so on. The reason I like this city is that I can taste delicious food from all over the world here.     In conclusion, we all have our own dream cities to visit. Through this activity, we have broadened our horizons and become more eager to explore different places in the future. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为 “一般现在时”； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上、下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤]   第一步，根据所给提示续写Lucy最喜欢的城市及原因；   第二步，介绍萨姆最喜欢的城市及原因。 第三步，介绍自己最喜欢的城市及原因。 [亮点词汇]   ①be famous for  因……而出名 ②places of interest 名胜古迹 ③one of the most romantic cities 最浪漫的城市之一 ④such as 例如 [高分句型]   ①There are many places of interest here, such as the Forbidden City, the Summer Palace and so on. (There be句型) ②The reason I like this city is that I can taste delicious food from all the world here. (that引导的表语从句) 3．每个人都有精彩的旅游经历。哪次旅行给你留下难忘的印象呢？请你以“An Unforgettable Trip”为题，根据以下导图提示，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的这一次难忘的旅行，词数80词左右。 注意事项： 1.必须包含所有提示信息，可适当发挥，开头已给出，不记入总词数； 2.意思清楚，表达通顺，行文连贯，书写规范； 3.请勿在文中使用真实姓名和校名。 An Unforgettable trip Everyone has a wonderful trip. I will never forget _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 An Unforgettable trip Everyone has a wonderful trip. I will never forget my journey to Harbin last winter. The city was covered in white snow and looked like a winter wonderland. My family and I had fun playing snowballs and making snowmen in the beautiful ice world. We also enjoyed delicious local food, such as hot dumplings. What’s more, I took lots of photos of amazing ice works. This trip was not only exciting but also taught me the importance of spending time with my loved ones. I really loved Harbin! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，借用文章已给开头，引出主题； 第二步，根据题干思维导图的要点，具体描述旅行的过程； 第三步，给出评价并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①such as例如 ②what’s more此外 [高分句型] ①The city was covered in white snow and looked like a winter wonderland.（and连接并列句） ②This trip was not only exciting but also taught me the importance of spending time with my loved ones.（not only…but also） 4．假设你是李华，你的外国笔友Peter打算暑假来深圳旅游，请你写一封邮件向他介绍深圳。 要点： 1. 简要描述深圳的地理位置和气候特点； 2. 推荐深圳可游玩的著名景点（至少2个）； 3. 来深圳旅游时的注意事项。 要求： 1. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数； 2. 文中不得出现真实的姓名和校名； 3. 可适当增加细节，以使语句通顺、条理清楚、意义连贯； 4.  书写规范，卷面整洁。 参考词汇：Shenzhen Safari Park（深圳野生动物园），OCT East（东部华侨城），Shenzhen Bay Park（深圳湾公园），Lianhua Hill Park（莲花山公园），Dameisha（大梅沙），Red Cube（红立方） Dear Peter, I am glad to know that _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ I hope you can enjoy your travelling in Shenzhen. Best wishes, Li Hua 【答案】例文 Dear Peter, I am glad to know that you are planning a trip to Shenzhen! Let me make a brief introduction to you. Shenzhen is a modern coast city. It lies in the south of China. It’s very cool here. There are so many places of interest to visit, such as Shenzhen Safari Park, and OCT East. You can go there. Shenzhen is also famous for its wonderful beaches, so you can go swimming in Dameisha. In Shenzhen, you can enjoy many different kinds of delicious food. You can eat a snack and seafood. If you like shopping, Shenzhen is a good place to go. There are many shopping malls here. When you come here, you should pay attention to the traffic rules. At the same time, you’d better bring some commonly used medicine. All in all, Shenzhen is a wonderful city. Why not visit Shenzhen this summer holiday? I hope you can enjoy your travelling in Shenzhen. Best wishes, Li Hua 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一封电子邮件； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节。考生应注意不要遗漏来深圳旅游的注意事项。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表达得知消息的喜悦； 第二步，根据写作要点对深圳进行介绍； 第三步，简述来深圳旅游的注意事项； 第四步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①be glad to do做某事很开心 ②pay attention to关注 ③all in all总之 [高分句型] When you come here, you should pay attention to the traffic rules.（When引导的时间状语从句） 话题三 保护动物和植物 1．请根据以下要点提示，写一篇关于你最喜欢的动物——大熊猫的短文。 要点： 1.大熊猫是中国的象征之一，黑白相间，看起来很可爱； 2.它们生活在中国四川、陕西等地的森林和山区； 3.它们喜欢吃竹子，每天花很多时间吃东西； 4.大熊猫是中国国宝(national treasure)，友谊(friendship)的象征，目前仅存大约2000只，因此我们会尽力保护它们。 要求： 1.包含所有要点，可适当发挥； 2.语言表达准确，语意通顺、连贯； 3.词数80左右，短文开头已给出，不计入总词数。 My favorite animals—giant pandas There are many kinds of animals in the world,___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My favorite animals—giant pandas There are many kinds of animals in the world, but my favorite is the giant panda. Pandas are one of China’s symbols, with their cute black-and-white fur. They mainly live in the forests and mountains of Sichuan and Shaanxi. Pandas love eating bamboo and spend most of their day eating. They are China’s national treasure and a symbol of friendship. Sadly, there are only about 2,000 pandas left in the world, so we must protect them. I hope these lovely animals can live happily forever! 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇说明文，为材料作文； ② 时态：为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：根据题目要求介绍了大熊猫的特征、栖息地、习性及保护现状，以第一人称表达个人情感； [写作步骤] 第一步：通过对比引出最喜爱的大熊猫； 第二步：分三点说明大熊猫特征（外貌、栖息地、饮食）； 第三步：强调保护意义并表达希望。 [亮点词汇] ① black-and-white fur 黑白相间的皮毛 ② national treasure 国宝 ③ symbol of friendship 友谊的象征 [高分句型] I hope these lovely animals can live happily forever!（宾语从句） 2．众所周知，树木对人类的生产和生活起着至关重要的作用，请你根据以下思维导图内容提示,以“The importance of trees”为题，用英语写一篇短文，说明树木对人类的重要性。 注意： (1) 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息。 (2) 不能照抄原文；不得在作文中出现真实校名和学生的真实姓名。 (3) 语句连贯，词数60左右。作文的标题已经给出，不计入总词数。 The importance of trees _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The importance of trees Trees play a crucial role in our lives and are essential for the health of our planet. First, they are vital for environmental protection. Trees absorb carbon dioxide and release oxygen, which is necessary for life. They also help to reduce air pollution by trapping dust and other pollutants. Second, trees have numerous other uses. They provide us with wood, which is used for building homes, making furniture, and creating paper. Third, trees are a source of food and shelter for many animals, keeping the balance of our ecosystem. Let’s protect trees and make our earth more beautiful. 【详解】[总体分析] ①本文是一篇材料作文。 ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”。 ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏要点。注意行文连贯，逻辑清晰，无拼写和语法错误。 [写作步骤] 第一步，总领全文，点明树的重要性； 第二步，说明树重要的原因，从功能、用途方面解释； 第三步，总结，呼吁大家保护树木。 [亮点词汇] ①play a crucial role in在……中起着至关重要的作用 ②absorb carbon dioxide吸收二氧化碳 ③release oxygen释放氧气 ④help to reduce air pollution帮助减少空气污染 ⑤provide us with给我们提供…… [高分句型] ①They provide us with wood, which is used for building homes, making furniture, and creating paper. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) ②Let’s protect trees and make our earth more beautiful. (祈使句) 3．你的老师 Miss Lin 要求你们以小组为单位写一篇主题为保护动植物的倡议性文章，以下是你们小组成员的观点，请根据以下表格要点提示，适当发挥完成作文。 Protect Man’s Best Friends Jim 动物帮助我们做很多事，比如帮助盲人； Anna 植物清新空气，使生活更便利； 你的观点 动物（请补充至少一个点） 植物（请补充至少一个点） 你们的倡议 倡议 1：停止砍伐树木 倡议 2：请补充至少一个点 注意：作文必须包括表格所有信息；词数：70 词左右；不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 Protect Man’s Best Friends Animals and plants are our best friends. They help us a lot in our daily lives. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Protect Man’s Best Friends Animals and plants are our best friends. They help us a lot in our daily lives. Jim thinks animals do many things for us, such as helping blind people. Anna believes that plants can make the air clean and fresh. And they make our lives more convenient. As for me, animals are so lovely that they always make us happy and plants provide us with food as well. It is important for us to protect our best friends. It’s time to take action. First, stop cutting down trees. Second, don’t throw rubbish everywhere to keep the environment clean. Let’s work together to protect them. 【详解】[总体分析] 题材：本文是一篇材料作文； 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； 提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“表格要点提示”中的信息，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，表明动植物是人类最好的朋友； 第二步，具体阐述各自关于保护动植物的观点； 第三步，提出呼吁行动，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①such as例如 ②convenient方便的 ③provide...with...为……提供…… [高分句型] ①Jim thinks animals do many things for us, such as helping blind people. (省略that的宾语从句) ②As for me, animals are so lovely that they always make us happy and plants provide us with food as well. (so... that引导的结果状语从句) 话题四 节约水电 1.“水是生命之源”。你校准备举行以“Save Water”为题的英语征文比赛，请根据以下思维导图的内容提示写一篇短文投稿，呼吁同学们节约用水。 注意： 1. 可在思维导图内容提示的基础上适当拓展信息； 2. 词数80词左右 (短文的开头已给出，不计入词数)； 3. 不得透露学校、姓名等任何个人信息，否则不予评分。 In the world, many people live a hard life because they don’t have enough water. __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 In the world, many people live a hard life because they don’t have enough water. Water is important to people. People need water to survive. But many people waste water. Some of them don’t turn off the taps after washing hands. Some of them take a shower for a long time. It is important to save water. We should always turn off the taps after using them. After we wash the vegetables, we can use the water to clean the toilet. When it rains, we can collect the rain and use it to clean the floor. I think everyone should save water to protect the environment. Let’s start from small things. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏信息提示，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。引出节约用水的话题； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。讲述节约用水的重要性及如何节约用水； 第三步，书写结语。总结并呼吁大家节约用水。 [亮点词汇] ①turn off the taps 关掉水龙头 ②take a shower 洗澡 ③use sth. to do sth. 使用某物做某事 [高分句型] ①When it rains, we can collect the rain and use it to clean the floor. (when引导时间状语从句) ②I think everyone should save water to protect the environment. (省略that的宾语从句) ③Let’s start from small things. (肯定祈使句) 2．你们班举行了一次班会，会上大家就如何节约用水和保护水资源热烈讨论。请根据以下提示以“How to Save Water in Our Daily Life”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍一下节约用水的方法。 要点提示： 写作要求： 1.文中须包含所给的要点提示，可适当发挥； 2.文中不得出现考生的真实姓名和学校名称； 3.词数70左右（开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数）。 How to Save Water in Our Daily Life Water is important to us. We cannot live without water. ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to Save Water in Our Daily Life Water is important to us. We cannot live without water. Here are some simple ways to save water in our daily life. First, reuse water whenever possible. For example, use the water from washing vegetables to water plants or flush toilets. Second, turn off the tap immediately after brushing teeth or washing hands. Don’t let the water run endlessly. Third, take a quick shower instead of a long one. Shorter showers can save a lot of water. By following these steps, we can all contribute to protecting our precious water resources. Let’s start saving water today for a better future! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为一般现在时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，分别从循环使用水，及时关水和快速洗澡说明如何节约用水。 第二步，呼吁大家要节约用水。 [亮点词汇] ①For example 例如 ②instead of 而不是 ③contribute to 对……做出贡献 [高分句型] ①Second, turn off the tap immediately after brushing teeth or washing hands.（祈使句） 3．假如你们将要举办一个“保护地球，从我做起”活动，请你根据表格中的内容，以“Protect the Earth”为题用英语写一篇80词左右的短文，呼吁同学们一起保护地球。 必要性 地球是我家，必须保护她 不良现象 把垃圾扔进河里，燃烧东西污染空气，乱扔塑料袋 建议 1. 多种树 2. 节约用水、用电 3. 你的至少一点建议 注意：1. 参考词汇：塑料袋（plastic bag） 电（electricity） 节约（save） Protect the Earth The Earth is a beautiful place. _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Protect the Earth The Earth is a beautiful place. It’s also our home. So we must protect her. However, there are many negative phenomena in daily life, such as throwing garbage into rivers, burning things to pollute the air, and littering plastic bags. I want to give some advice on how to protect the earth. First, we should plant more trees. Second, We should save water and electricity. We should take a shower instead of taking a bath. Third, we should go to school on foot or by bike. Let’s do something to make our home a better world from now on! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要求已给出，学生不要遗漏题目中的要点，适当添加细节，写作时保持主谓一致，注意字数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍保护地球的必要性； 第二步，介绍目前地球上的不良现象； 第三步，提出自己的建议。 [亮点词汇] ①such as例如 ②want to do sth想做某事 ③instead of而不是 ④from now on从现在开始 [高分句型] Let’s do something to make our home a better world form now on!（祈使句） 4．假设你叫Frank，你的学校每年都在世界水日 (World Water Day) 开展丰富多彩的活动，宣传节约用水。你的网友Amy所在的学校也计划开展类似活动。请你写一封邮件向Amy介绍你们的活动情况，文章需要包含以下提示的内容： 活动时间 每年3月22日 参加人员 全校师生 活动形式 1. 演讲比赛；2. 制作海报；3. …… 活动意义 1. 告诉人们水的重要性和水资源的珍贵； 2. …… 活动感受 …… 提示词：演讲比赛speech competition；海报poster 要求： 1. 80词左右，开头和结尾已给出，不计入总词数内； 2. 必须包括以上全部要点，可以适当发挥； 3. 条理清晰，语句通顺，意义连贯，书写规范。 Dear Amy, It’s nice to hear from you. In your email, you mentioned the activities in my school on World Water Day. Let me tell you what we often do on this special day. ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ Yours, Frank 【答案】例文 Dear Amy, It’s nice to hear from you. In your email, you mentioned the activities in my school on World Water Day. Let me tell you what we often do on this special day. The activities, which are held on March 22nd every year, involve all teachers and students. We have different kinds of activities. First, there is a speech competition. Students talk about why water is important and how to save it. Last year, my friend Tom won the first prize by sharing stories about dry areas. Second, we make colorful posters. We always put them up around the school to remind others to save water in daily life, like turning off taps when brushing teeth. Sometimes, we also perform a play about water waste to show how serious the problem is. These activities are meaningful. They help people understand that water is valuable and that many places in the world still lack clean water. They also teach us that small actions can make a big difference. Every time I join these activities, I feel happy that I can help protect water. I hope your school’s activities will be great too! Yours, Frank 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇应用文，为电子邮件； ②时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③提示：文章应该包括表格所列要点，要适当补充，使文章内容充实；行文时多用第一人称，尽量多使用短语和句型；写作中适当使用连接词，使行文连贯、顺畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，以回应Amy的提问为切入点，直接点明将介绍学校在世界水日的活动； 第二步，具体介绍活动情况； 第三步，阐述活动意义与个人感受； 第四步，表达祝福，结束邮件。 [亮点词汇] ①put up 张贴 ②turn off 关闭 [高分句型] ①They also teach us that small actions can make a big difference. (that引导的宾语从句) ②The activities, which are held on March 22nd every year, involve all teachers and students. (which引导的非限制性定语从句) 话题五 爱好和理想职业 1.Hobbies can make our lives colorful! Everyone needs them. 请你结合下面的3个问题，发挥想象力，以 “My favorite hobby” 为题写一篇英语短文，词数70左右。 What’s your favourite hobby? Why do you love it? How often do you do it? My Favorite Hobby ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Favorite Hobby I have many hobbies, such as reading, listening to music, watching TV, doing sports. But my favourite hobby is singing. I usually spend most of my free time practicing singing. I also read some books or watch some videos about how to improve singing skills. When I am in trouble, singing can make me calm down and give me courage to overcome the difficulty. When I am very tired, it can make me relaxed. When I am angry about something, it can also make me happy again. Singing brings me much happiness. I took part in a singing competition last year. And I won first place at last. It really made me feel pleased and proud. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：本文应使用“一般现在时”与“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：写作要点应注意题干给出的要点并适当补充，使文章内容充实。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的爱好是唱歌； 第二步，根据题干要点，描述自己为什么喜欢唱歌，以及唱歌的频率； 第三步，总结这个爱好带给自己的影响，并收尾。 [亮点词汇] ①such as例如 ②calm down冷静 [高分句型] ①When I am in trouble, singing can make me calm down and give me courage to overcome the difficulty.（时间状语从句） 2．写一篇英语短文：谈论自己的爱好和未来理想的职业。要求： 1.自己爱好是什么。 2.我什么时候形成自己的爱好。 3.我为什么喜欢自己的爱好。 4.未来的职业设想。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： My Hobby and Future Job Hi! I’m Lily. My biggest hobby is reading. I love opening a book and finding new stories or interesting facts. Whether it’s novels about adventures or books about animals, I enjoy them all. I started developing this hobby at a young age. My parents gave me picture books when I was five, and I fell in love with the words and pictures. Now I read every day—usually for 30 minutes before bed. Sometimes I join a reading club at school, where we talk about our favorite books and share ideas. Reading brings me many good things. It makes me smarter because I learn new words and knowledge. It also helps me relax after a busy day. Last year, I won a storytelling competition at school by using stories I read. That was a great feeling! When I grow up, I want to be a teacher. I hope to teach children to love reading too. I dream of having a classroom with many books, where we can explore different worlds together. I know I need to study hard, but my hobby of reading will help me get there! 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：这是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要采用“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作提示已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏任何要点，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍你的爱好是什么； 第二步，介绍你的爱好是什么时候形成； 第三步，介绍为什么你有此爱好； 第四步，介绍未来的职业设想。 [亮点词汇] ①fall in love with爱上 ②grow up长大 ③dream of doing梦想做某事 [高分句型] ①Sometimes I join a reading club at school, where we talk about our favorite books and share ideas. (定语从句) ②It makes me smarter because I learn new words and knowledge. (because引导原因状语从句) 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$