作文总结 四步写作法（知识清单）-2024-2025学年人教新起点版（2012）英语四年级下册

四年级下册作文总结 四步写作法 Unit 1 My Neighbourhood（我的社区） 写作题目：My Favourite Place in the Neighbourhood 写作要求：介绍社区里你最喜欢的一个地方，说明位置、路线及你在那里做的事情。 四步写作法 1. 定场所：用“There is...near...”点明喜欢的场所 → 例：There is a park near my home.（对应教材P4“next to, park”） 2. 讲位置：用“next to/between/across from”描述位置关系 → 例：It’s next to the restaurant. 3. 说路线：用“go straight/turn left/right”写出行路线 → 例：Go straight and turn right at the crossroads. 4. 写活动：用“can + 动词”描述在场所的活动 → 例：I can fly kites and play with friends there. 参考范文 My Favourite Place in the Neighbourhood There is a big park near my home. It’s next to the restaurant on Green Street. To get there, I go straight from my house and turn left at the first crossroads. The park is across from the bookshop. I often fly kites with my sister there. Sometimes we have picnics under the trees. The park is always full of people, and it’s very lively! I love this park! 语法/搭配分析： 方位介词：next to, across from（P4-P5） 固定句型：There is..., can + 动词原形（P6） 教材词汇：restaurant, bookshop, crossroads（P4-P6） Unit 2 Cities（城市） 写作题目：A City I Want to Visit 写作要求：选择一个想去的城市，介绍位置、特色景点及你想做的事情。 四步写作法 1. 选城市：用“I want to visit... It’s in...”介绍目标城市 → 例：I want to visit Beijing. It’s in the north of China.（对应教材P14“city, north”） 2. 讲特色：用“be famous for”说明城市著名景点 → 例：Beijing is famous for the Great Wall. 3. 说交通：用“take the bus/subway”描述出行方式 → 例：I can take the bus to the Summer Palace. 4. 列计划：用“want to + 动词”写出具体活动 → 例：I want to climb the Great Wall and take photos. 参考范文 A City I Want to Visit I want to visit Beijing. It’s in the north of China. Beijing is a big and famous city. It’s famous for the Great Wall and the Summer Palace. I can take the subway to the Great Wall. I want to climb the wall with my parents and take many photos. I also want to eat Beijing duck—it’s very delicious! I hope to visit Beijing next summer. 语法/搭配分析： 固定搭配：be famous for, take the subway（P16） 动词短语：climb the Great Wall, take photos（P16） 教材词汇：city, sports centre, subway（P14-P18） Unit 3 Travel Plans（旅行计划） 写作题目：My Summer Travel Plan 写作要求：制定一个暑假旅行计划，说明目的地、交通方式及活动安排。 四步写作法 1. 定目的地：用“plan to go to... in summer”确定旅行地 → 例：I plan to go to Sanya in summer.（对应教材P24“sea, swim”） 2. 选交通：用“by plane/train”说明出行方式 → 例：We will go there by plane. 3. 列活动：用“want to + 动词”规划具体活动 → 例：I want to swim in the sea and eat seafood. 4. 表期待：用“hope to.../can’t wait to”表达心情 → 例：I can’t wait to see the beautiful beach! 参考范文 My Summer Travel Plan This summer, I plan to go to Sanya with my family. Sanya is in the south of China. We will go there by plane. In Sanya, I want to swim in the blue sea and build sandcastles on the beach. My parents want to take a boat to see the islands. We will eat lots of seafood, like fish and shrimp. I hope we can have a sunny and happy vacation! 语法/搭配分析： 将来时：plan to go, will go（P25） 固定搭配：by plane, take a boat（P24） 教材词汇：sea, seafood, islands（P24-P26） Unit 4 Hobbies（爱好） 写作题目：My Favourite Hobby 写作要求：介绍你最喜欢的爱好，说明频率、原因及相关经历。 四步写作法 1. 说爱好：用“My favourite hobby is.../I like + 动词ing”开篇 → 例：My favourite hobby is collecting erasers.（对应教材P40“hobbies”） 2. 讲频率：用“once/twice a week”说明做爱好的频率 → 例：I collect erasers once a week. 3. 晒收藏：用“have + 数量”介绍收藏物品 → 例：I have 20 erasers from different countries. 4. 谈感受：用“fun/interesting”描述爱好带来的乐趣 → 例：Collecting erasers is interesting because each eraser has a story. 参考范文 My Favourite Hobby My favourite hobby is collecting erasers. I like to find different erasers in bookshops and gift stores. I collect erasers once a week. Now I have 20 erasers—some are in the shape of animals, and some have beautiful pictures. My best friend Lily also likes collecting erasers, so we often exchange erasers. It’s fun to see new erasers every time! 语法/搭配分析： 固定句型：like + 动词ing, have + 数量（P40） 频率短语：once a week, twice a week（P41） 教材词汇：hobbies, jigsaw puzzles, collect（P38-P42） Unit 5 Free Time（空闲时间） 写作题目：My Weekend Activities 写作要求：描述你周末的活动安排，包括频率和具体内容。 四步写作法 1. 定时间：用“on weekends/this Saturday”点明时间 → 例：I often go skating on weekends.（对应教材P50“free time”） 2. 列活动：用“often/usually + 动词”描述常做的事 → 例：I usually go skating and do the housework. 3. 讲频率：用“once/twice a week”说明活动频率 → 例：I go skating twice a week. 4. 写感受：用“happy/excited”表达心情 → 例：I feel happy when I skate with friends. 参考范文 My Weekend Activities On weekends, I have many interesting activities. I usually go skating in the park—It’s my favourite! I go skating twice a week. Sometimes I help my mum do the housework, like cleaning the room. On Sunday morning, I read books in the library. In the afternoon, my family often goes for a picnic. Weekends are fun and busy for me! 语法/搭配分析： 频率副词：often, usually, sometimes（P51） 固定短语：go skating, do the housework（P50） 教材词汇：free time, picnic, library（P48-P52） Unit 6 Countries（国家） 写作题目：A Country I Like 写作要求：介绍一个你喜欢的国家，说明位置、特色及你想做的事情。 四步写作法 1. 选国家：用“I like... It’s in...”介绍目标国家 → 例：I like Canada. It’s in North America.（对应教材P60“countries”） 2. 讲特色：用“be famous for”说明国家标志（动物、景点等） → 例：Canada is famous for maple leaves and beavers. 3. 说文化：用“People speak + 语言”介绍语言 → 例：People speak English and French in Canada. 4. 表愿望：用“want to + 动词”写想去做的事 → 例：I want to see maple leaves and eat maple candy. 参考范文 A Country I Like I like Canada very much. It’s in North America. Canada is a big and beautiful country. It’s famous for maple leaves and beavers. People speak English and French there. I want to go to Canada to see the red maple leaves in autumn. I also want to eat maple candy—it sounds delicious! My pen pal lives in Toronto, so I can visit him too. 语法/搭配分析： 固定搭配：be famous for, pen pal（P61） 教材词汇：countries, maple leaves, beavers（P58-P62） 动词短语：see maple leaves, eat maple candy（P61） 写作通用锦囊（附教材词汇索引） 1. 万能句型： 位置描述：“There is a...near my home. It’s next to...”（Unit 1） 计划表达：“I plan to... in... I will go there by...”（Unit 3） 爱好介绍：“My hobby is... I do it...a week.”（Unit 4） 2. 逻辑连接词： 时间：first, then, finally（Unit 3） 并列：and, also（Unit 2） 原因：because（Unit 4） 3. 教材高频搭配： 方位：next to, between, across from（Unit 1-P4） 交通：take the bus/subway, by plane（Unit 2-P16, Unit 3-P24） 活动：row a boat, go camping, do the housework（Unit 2-P16, Unit 5-P50） 4. 词汇替换技巧： “delicious”→“yummy”（Unit 1/3） “fun”→“interesting/exciting”（Unit 4/5） 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$