Unit 3 War and Peace Writing 课件-2024-2025学年高二英语外研版（2019）选择性必修第三册

Unit 3 War and peace Writing 介绍英雄人物 对英雄人物的介绍属于记叙文的范畴，它以写人记事为主要内容，以叙述和描写为主要表达方式。一篇好的人物描写一般分为三大部分，即生平介绍、事迹叙述和简短评论。时态的选择可视情况而定。 写作探究 2 探究点1 教材范例提炼 课文范例 3 素材积累 Ⅰ. 常用词汇 1. at the age of four 4岁时 2. a boy of sixteen 一个16岁的男孩 3. make friends with her 和她交朋友 4. be ready to help others 乐于助人 4 5. a lively and smart girl 一个活泼聪明的女孩 6. be warm-hearted and good-looking 热心肠而且漂亮/俊朗 7. learn from each other and help each other 相互学习和相互帮助 8. be highly praised by the teachers 得到老师的高度称赞 9. participate in the Eighth Route Army 参加八路军 10. be born in a poor peasant family 出生于一个贫苦的农民家庭 5 Ⅱ. 话题句式 He has fair hair and blue eyes. 他有金色的头发和蓝色的眼睛。 2. Abraham Lincoln, the son of a poor family, was born in Kentucky on February 12, 1809. 亚伯拉罕·林肯，一个贫苦家庭的儿子，1809年2月12日出生于肯塔基州。 3. She is an ordinary girl, but her kindness and consideration impress me most. 她是一个普普通通的女孩，但她的善良和体贴使我印象深刻。 4. He is a good-looking, kind-hearted man. 他是一个俊朗且好心肠的人。 6 5. He went to college, during which he showed great interest in folk music. 他上了大学，在这期间他对民间音乐表现出极大的兴趣。 6. When he was still a boy, he showed great interest in literature. 当他还是个孩子的时候，他对文学表现出极大的兴趣。 7. We regard him as our model. 我们把他视为榜样。 8. The people had come to love him as an inspiring leader. 人们把他作为一个鼓舞人心的领袖而开始爱戴他。 9. Lei Feng has been praised for his communist spirit. 雷锋因他的共产主义精神而受到称赞。 7 探究点2 写作应用体验 写作典例 请用英语写一篇80词左右的短文简要介绍雷锋。主要内容如下： 雷锋，1940年12月18日生于湖南省望城县，7岁成了孤儿，1962年8月15日逝世。虽然生命只有短暂的22年，但他作为一名解放军战士，努力工作，乐于助人，一生做好事无数，一直被视为每个公民的英雄和楷模。 8 分步推进 Step 1 审题谋篇 9 Step 2 要点翻译 1. 翻译词汇 （1）___________ 出生于 （2）_______ v. 使成为孤儿 （3）_______________________ 人民解放军 （4）____________ 做好准备 （5）______________ 做好事 be born in orphan People’s Liberation Army be ready to do good deeds 10 （1）雷锋1940年12月18日出生于湖南望城县，1962年8月15日逝世。 ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ （2）作为一名人民解放军，他工作努力，并且总是乐于助人。 ________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________ 2. 翻译句子 Lei Feng was born in Wangcheng County, Hunan Province, on December 18, 1940 and passed away on August 15, 1962. He worked hard and was always ready to help others as a soldier in the People’s Liberation Army. 11 （3）他的生命很短，只有22年。 ______________________________________________________________ （4）他在短短的一生中做了无数好事，一直被视为每个公民的英雄和楷模。 ______________________________________________________________ ______________________________________________________________ He lived a short life of only 22 years. He did countless good deeds in his short life and has been regarded all the time as a hero and model for every citizen. 用although连接上题中的句（2）和句（3） ________________________________________________________________ ________________________________________________________________ Step 3 句式升级 Although he lived a short life of only 22 years, as a soldier in the People’s Liberation Army, he worked hard and was always ready to help others. 12 Step 4 连句成篇 利用以上几个句子，加上恰当的连接词和过渡句，必要时可以改变句式，使之成为一篇连贯的文章。 参考范文 Lei Feng was born in Wangcheng County, Hunan Province, on December 18, 1940 and passed away on August 15, 1962. He was orphaned at 7 years old. Although he lived a short life of only 22 years, as a soldier in the People’s Liberation Army, he worked hard and was always ready to help others. He did countless good deeds in his short life and has been regarded all the time as a hero and model for every citizen. In a word, Lei Feng was an example of the soldiers of the People’s Liberation Army in China. 13 假定你是李华，请你以“My hero”为题，写一篇介绍你心目中的英雄——周恩来的英语短文。内容要点如下： 1. 周恩来是新中国的第一位总理； 2. 他参加了抗日战争和解放战争； 3. …… 主题写作 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯； 3. 标题已给出，不计入总词数。 14 参考范文 My hero My hero is Zhou Enlai, who was the first premier of the People’s Republic of China. He was a great revolutionist who had devoted all his life to the cause of the liberation of China. He took part in the War of Resistance Against Japanese Aggression and the War of Liberation. He fought bravely against the enemies in order to save the people from great suffering. He was such a man who cared more about the people than himself. He put all the people in his heart except himself. I admire him so much, though he has been away from us for a long time. I like him best and believe that he will always be alive in the minds of Chinese people. 15 THANKS $$