UNIT 1 Part 4 Writing（同步练习）-【学而思·PPT课件分层练习】2024-2025学年高中英语选择性必修第一册（人教版2019）

Part 4　Writing 介绍一位自己钦佩的人物 写作题目 　　假定你是李华,你校组织了一次主题为“用英语讲好中国故事”的英语写作比赛,你对出生于普通农民家庭的诺贝尔文学奖获得者莫言非常钦佩,请根据下列内容写一篇文章。 莫言的 人生经历 本名管谟业,1955年出生于山东省,小学五年级辍学后从事务农工作,一直酷爱阅读中国经典作品 莫言的 作品 《红高粱》《蛙》等;2011年凭借小说《蛙》获得茅盾文学奖,2012年获得诺贝尔文学奖 你的感悟 …… 　　注意: 1.词数80左右; 2.可以适当增加细节,以使行文连贯。 参考词汇:《红高粱》Red Sorghum;《蛙》Frog;茅盾文学奖Mao Dun Literature Prize 　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  思路点拨 遣词造句 Ⅰ.用本单元所学单词或短语填空 1.　　　　adj.不一般的;非凡的;意想不到的  2.　　　　adv.逐渐地   3.　　　　　　使某人自己致力于   4.　　　　　　出于对……的爱好  答案　1.extraordinary　2.gradually 3.commit oneself to　4.out of a passion for Ⅱ.本单元语块、语法运用 1.完成句子 第一段:介绍莫言的人生经历 (1)Mo Yan's real name is Guan Moye. He 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(出生在) an ordinary peasant family of Shandong Province in 1955.  (2)He once worked as a young peasant, and during that period, 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(出于对……的强烈爱好) literature, he 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(致力于) reading a variety of Chinese classics and gradually practiced writing stories.  第二段:介绍莫言的伟大成就 (3)Frog won him the Mao Dun Literature Prize in 2011 and he 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 (获得了诺贝尔文学奖)in 2012.  第三段:表达个人感想 (4)　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　(使莫言如此非凡的事物) is not only his famous work but also his 　　　　(投入) to what he loves.  答案　(1)was born into　(2)out of a strong passion for; committed himself to　(3)won the Nobel Prize in Literature　(4)What makes Mo Yan so extraordinary;commitment 2.句式升级 (5)用whose引导非限制性定语从句改写句(1) Mo Yan, 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 Guan Moye, was born into an ordinary peasant family of Shandong Province in 1955.  (6)用“while+现在分词”结构改写句(2) 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　 　　　　, out of a strong passion for literature, he committed himself to reading a variety of Chinese classics and gradually practiced writing stories.  答案　(5)whose real name is　(6)While working as a young peasant 连句成篇 　　Mo Yan, whose real name is Guan Moye, was born into an ordinary peasant family of Shandong Province in 1955. He dropped out in the fifth grade in primary school. While working as a young peasant, out of a strong passion for literature, he committed himself to reading a variety of Chinese classics and gradually practiced writing stories. Mo Yan created many famous literature works, including Red Sorghum and Frog. Frog won him the Mao Dun Literature Prize in 2011 and he won the Nobel Prize in Literature in 2012. In my opinion,what makes Mo Yan so extraordinary is not only his famous work but also his commitment to what he loves. 写作积累 人物描写常用语料 身份 Identity be acknowledged as 被公认为; be considered one of the smartest men who ever lived被认为是有史以来最聪明的人之一; be honored as 被誉为…… 出生 Birth be born into a rural/wealthy family出生在一个农村/富裕的家庭 外貌 Appearance have a thick moustache and long hair 留着浓密的胡子和长长的头发;be of medium build/height 中等身材; a 1.6-metre-tall woman 1.6米高的女人; plain/good-looking长相平平/长得漂亮; neatly dressed穿着整洁; have curly/straight/short hair留卷发/直发/短发; fair skin 白皙的皮肤 健康状况 Health Condition be in good health/shape身体状况良好; be out of condition健康状况不佳 性格 Personality gentle温柔的; courageous勇敢的; humorous幽默的 兴趣 Interest show great interest in对……表现出浓厚的兴趣; be fond of喜欢; have a passion for酷爱……;out of a strong passion for...出于对……的强烈爱好 能力 Ability have a good command/knowledge of精通; be qualified for能胜任……; have a gift/talent for对……有天赋; be experienced/skilled in擅长 品质 Quality considerate体贴的; committed尽心尽力的; devoted忠诚的; persistent坚持不懈的; determined坚定的 教育 Education obtain exceptional scores in...在……方面取得优异的成绩;manage to pass the exam设法通过了考试;go to university上大学; graduate from...从……毕业; win a scholarship赢得奖学金; get good grades获得优异的成绩; get a Bachelor's/master's /doctor's degree获得学士/硕士/博士学位 工作 Work work as/ take a job as/ take up a position as担任……; quit one's job辞职; lose one's job丢掉工作 成就 Achievement become famous as...作为……而知名; be awarded the Nobel Prize荣获诺贝尔奖; make great contributions to...对……做出巨大的贡献 去世 Death pass away去世; the whole world/country mourned the death of...整个世界/国家都为……的逝世而哀悼 实战演练 你校将举办英语演讲比赛,请你以“The Person I Admire Most”为题写一篇发言稿参赛,内容包括: 1.人物简介; 2.你敬佩的原因; 3.你的评价或对你的影响。 注意:1.词数应为80左右; 2.开头和结尾已经给出,不计入总词数。 The Person I Admire Most Dear fellow students, There are many respectable people around us. And the person I admire most is　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　　  　　That's all. Thank you! 答案与分层梯度式解析 Part 4　Writing 实战演练 One possible version: The Person I Admire Most Dear fellow students,  There are many respectable people around us. And the person I admire most is Mrs Wu, aged 30, my English teacher, who has been teaching English for 6 years.  Mrs Wu is thoughtful and kind to us just like our mothers. Once, one of my classmates got injured unexpectedly, and without hesitation, Mrs Wu took him to hospital for medical treatment. What impresses me most is that she always tries new ways to make her classes lively and interesting. Also, she is very patient with us and always helps us find solutions to problems when we turn to her for help. In my eyes, Mrs Wu is more than our teacher. She's also our best friend. That's why she deserves our respect. That's all. Thank you!  1.重点词汇 ①thoughtful adj.体贴的 ②without hesitation毫不犹豫地 ③impress v.给……留下深刻的好印象 ④lively adj.充满趣味的;充满活力的 ⑤deserve v.值得;应得;应受 2.亮点句型 And the person I admire most is Mrs Wu, aged 30, my English teacher, who has been teaching English for 6 years. (aged 30为后置定语;my English teacher作Mrs Wu的同位语;who引导非限制性定语从句,修饰先行词Mrs Wu)我最钦佩的人是吴老师,她30岁,是我的英语老师,她教英语已经6年了。  学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$