内容正文:
open up a new world to me.
写作练兵
I think my free time is better used because I do what I
主题:自我介绍
want to do and I balance study and entertainment.
体裁:记叙文
DIn brief,I arrange my time properly and benefit from
人称:第一人称
the Double Reduction policy.
时态:一般现在时、一般将来时
写作练兵
要点:1.自己的优点和缺点
主题:购物习惯
2.在未来生活和学习中如何扬长避短、完善自我,
休裁:记叙文
成为更好的自己
人称:第一人称
范文:
时态:一般现在时
Me in the mirror
要点:1.介绍你的购物习惯,包括下面几项信息:what,
Looking at myself in the mirror.I know I am an
with whom,how often,where,when
outgoing girl.I like to make friends and I'm always ready
2.当你想买昂贵的东西的时候,你会怎么做
to help them.So I'm very popular in my school.But I
3.对网购的看法及原因
have a big problem.I'm less interested in my lessons and
范文:
I can't concentrate in class.In my spare time,I spend too
I'm a junior high school student from Jiangxi.On
much time on computer games,so I don't get good
weekends,I like shopping.There is a big supermarket in
grades,which makes my parents disappointed.
my town and there are a lot of things in it.So I often go
When I go to senior high school,I hope to get along
there with my mother to buy some school things,food
well with my classmates and try to make more friends.I
and drinks on weekends.
hope we can help each other and learn from each other.I
Sometimes I want to buy something expensive-an
will make a good study resolution and try my best to go
MP4 player,but I can't afford it now.So I am planning to
for it.I decide to have a healthier lifestyle.I'll spend more
do part-time jobs in my spare time,especially in summer
time on my schoolwork and develop good learning habits.
vacation.Then I can make money for an MP4 player.
I will concentrate more in class and finish my study tasks
I like shopping online,because things are much
carefully.What's more,I will read more books and master
cheaper and it can save my time.Walking to the shop is a
good learning methods.I hope to make great progress and
waste of time.
I love shopping,because it's really relaxing.
make my parents proud.
话题2人物介绍
话题3社会服务与人际沟通
⊙话题素材储备
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佳句运用
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1.She is more careful than I am/me.
1.I can get on well with my new classmates.
2.I'm good at English so it is easy for me to express my
2.The two groups agreed to cooperate with each other.
ideas clearly in English.
3.Though it is difficult for you to do this,you should tell
3.She used to be short,but look how tall she is now!
them the truth.
4.She seemed neither surprised nor worried.
4.Why don't you be more polite to others?
5.I'm the sort of student who is willing to communicate
5.You have to be ready to change a little if you want
and does well in English.
them to change.
6.I know Jack is friendly because he is always ready to
6.Teamwork is required in order to achieve these aims.
help others.
7.We should keep our hearts open so that we can make
⊙话题作文导练
more friends.
典例精析
⊙话题作文导练
DWang Yaping is a 42-year-old woman who was born in
典例精析
a small village in Shandong Province.
Dget on well with others;brings you good luck and
2As we all know,she loves our motherland very much
makes others feel warm
and is proud of China.
2When I was in Grade 6,a new student came to our
3To achieve her astronaut dream.she always overcomes
class.
the difficulties in training and never gives up.
He did badly in schoolwork.
DI will work for my country like her.I will run every day
When I learnt this,each time I met him,I gave him a
to have a strong body
big smile.
5Im going to make a weekly plan and study hard to
5We became good friends and he did better and better in
improve myself
his study.
What's more,no matter how hard it is,I'll stick to my
He said it was my smile that made him more confident
dream!
and outgoing.
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己025江西英语话题2人物介绍
(2022江西)
话题素材储备
词汇储备
写作角度
词汇储备
tall高的一short矮的
old年纪大的-young年轻的fat胖的一thin瘦的
long/short hair长/短发
medium build中等身材
medium height中等身高
外貌
handsome英俊的
beautiful美丽的
strong强壮的一weak虚弱的
look like看起来像
take after(外貌或行为)像
brave勇敢的
active活跃的
careful小心的:细致的:慎重的
careless粗心的:不小心的
clever聪明的
courage勇敢;勇气
cute可爱的
direct直接的:直率的
energy力量:精力
性格
excellent极好的:优秀的
friendly友好的
funny奇怪的:滑稽好笑的
honest诚实的:老实的
humorous有幽默感的;滑稽有趣的
independent独立的
kind善良的
lazy懒惰的
silent沉默的
个人基本
name名字
be born in出生于(某地)
experience经验:经历
age年龄
address地址
background背景
信息
birthday生日
be/come from米自
job工作
engineer工程师
actor/,actress男演员/女演员
farmer农民;农场主
artist艺术家
manager经理
boss老板
musician音乐家
businessman商人
职业
nurse护士
coach教练
officer军官;官员
cook厨师
painter画家
director导演
pilot飞行员
doctor医生
policeman/policewoman男警察/女警察
driver司机
chess国际象棋
favorite特别喜爱的(人或事物)
like喜欢;喜爱
dance.跳舞n.舞蹈
hobby业余爱好
love爱;喜爱
兴趣爱好
draw画
be interested in.-对…感兴趣
enjoy享受;喜爱
sing唱歌
be good at…擅长…
佳句运用
佳句
佳句仿写
1.她比我更仔细。
1.My friend David is more hard-
working than me,but I am
2.我擅长英语,所以对我来说,用英语清楚地表达我的想法是很容易
funnier than him.
的事。
2.I'm pretty shy so it's not easy for
me to make friends.
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佳句
佳句仿写
3.Yes,and he used to be thin,too.
3.她过去很矮,但是看看她现在多高啊!
But look how strong he is now!
4.He's of medium height,neither too4.她似乎既不惊讶也不担心。
tall nor too short.
5.I'm the sort of person who is5.我是乐于交流并且擅长英语的学生。
good at making things with my
hands.
6.I know she cares about me because6.我知道杰克很友好,因为他总是准备好帮助他人。
she is always there to listen to me.
谚语:
L.Friends are like books一you don't need a lot of them as long as they're good..良友如书,贵在好而不在多。
2.A friend in need is a friend indeed..患难见真情。
3.A still tongue makes a wise head.寡言者智。
4.A man is known by his friends..什么人交什么朋友.
范文通读
(-)
(二)
My best friend
Everyone has his own strong points and
My best friend is Jim.He is 15 years old.
weak points.For me,I am outgoing and always
We are in the same class.He works very hard.
good at making friends with others.Also,I am
He is never late for school and he does well in
willing to help others.But sometimes I am
all his lessons.He is always ready to help careless during my daily life and study.
others.My math is very poor so he often helps
In the future,I hope to make myself better no
me with my math after class.His parents are
matter in my life or study.In the past,my teacher
both teachers.They are very busy,so he often always said I was clever,but I didn't put my heart
helps do the housework at home.He is a little
into study.I know my weaknesses,so I want to
shorter than me but he is very strong.He likes overcome them.I will work harder at my lessons
playing football very much at school.We often and try to make more progress in my learning.
play football together and he plays it pretty
Also,I'll pay more attention to what I am doing.
well.He gets on well with us and everyone in
By doing these,I hope I can be a serious and
our class likes him.
successful man.All in all,I hope I'll get better and
better in the future.
356A。2D25江西英语
话题作文导练
命题分析
分析江西近10年中考真题的书面表达可知,针对“人物介绍”这一主题,在2022年以“向航
天女英雄王亚平学习”为主题进行考查。
典例精析了
第①步
审题
(2022江西)学校决定开展向航天女英雄王亚平学习的英文演讲
①定主题:向航天女英摊玉
活动,请你按下面表格要求写一篇演讲稿。先简单介绍王亚平的个
亚平学习
人信息,再谈谈你从本卷完形填空B篇中感受到的她的优秀品质
@定体裁:说明文
(personality),最后说说你打算如何向她学习。
③定人称:第一人称、第三
写作要点
具体内容
人称
●Age:42
④定时态:一般现在时、一
1.Personal information
OBirthplace:a small village in Shandong Province
般将来时
●Hobby:sports
⑤定要点:
2.Personality
根据完形填空B篇概括(不得照搬原文)
“,玉亚平的个人基本信息
①
6.王亚平的优秀品质
3.Your plans
②
,你向王亚平学习的计划
要求:
1.短文应包括表格中所有的写作要点,条理清楚,行文连贯,可适当发挥:
2.短文中不能出现真实的人名和地名;
3.词数80~120,短文开头及结尾已给出,不计入总词数。
Hello,everyone!It's my honor to introduce an astronaut hero-Wang Yaping.
Thank you!
第2步布局
写作框架
要点扩写,句子升格
开篇:引出航天引l出学习→HIello,everyone!It's my honor to introduce an astronaut hero-Wang
女英雄王亚平
对象
Yaping.
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写作框架
要点扩写,句子升格
个人信息-→Wang Yaping is a42-year-old woman.She was born in a small village in
Shandong Province.(用who引导的定语从句升格)
①
Doing sports is her hobby and she exercises every day.
优秀品质→众所周知,她非常热爱祖国并且以中国为骄傲。(as we all know,be proud of)
⑨
正文:介绍王亚平
为了实现航天梦,她总是克服训练困难,永不言弃。(overcome the difficulties)
的个人信息、
③
优秀品质以及
作者学习榜样
的计划
个人i计划→Wang is an example to us all.
在未来,我要像她一样为国奋斗。我要每天跑步,强身健体。我也要制订周计
划,努力学习,提升自己。
④In the future,
⑤Also,
And how hard it is!I'll stick to my dream!(用what's more和no matter
升格)
⑥
结尾:表达感谢表达感谢→Thank you!
第③步谋篇
Hello,everyone!It's my honor to introduce an astronaut hero-Wang Yaping.
Wang Yaping is a 42-year-old woman who was born in a small village in Shandong Province.
Doing sports is her hobby and she exercises every day.
As we all know,she loves our motherland very much and is proud of China.To achieve her
astronaut dream,she always overcomes the difficulties in training and never gives up.
Wang is an example to us all.In the future,I will work for my country like her.I will run
every day to have a strong body.Also,I'm going to make a weekly plan and study hard to
improve myself.What's more,no matter how hard it is,I'll stick to my dream!
Thank you!
358A。2025江西英语
【亮点赏析】
①who引导的定语从句、no matter引导的让步状语从句,体现了作者扎实的语言基本功。
②巧用衔接词as we all know,in the future,also,what's more衔接全文,增添文章逻辑性。
3be proud of,achieve one's dream,overcome the difficulties,give up,an example to sb.,
make a weekly plan,stick to短语为文章锦上添花。
厂写作练返]
照镜子是生活中的平常事,以生活为镜,可以照出现实中真实的主题:
自己。请以“Me in the mirror'”为题,写一篇词数80~120的英语
体裁:
短文。
人称:
写作要点:
时态:
1.What are your advantage and shortcoming?
2.How will you improve yourself in the future?
要点:
要求:
1.短文开头已给出,不计人总词数:
2.观点正确,条理清楚,行文连贯:
3.文中不得出现自己的真实姓名和学校名称。
Me in the mirror
Looking at myself in the mirror,
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