Module 9 Unit 3 Writing课件 2024-2025学年外研版八年级英语下册

Welcome to Vivi’s class! Q: Which thing can prove their friendship? The ring. Watch a video and answer. Best Friend Forever The winner can get the BFF ring! She often makes me laugh happily, so she is . My best friend Her name is Kiki. She is tall and thin with short hair. /ˈpeɪʃ(ə)nt/ humorous She also helps me out of trouble, so she is . patient Who is/are your best friend (s)? What does your friend look like? Free talk I think that she/he.... What do you think of her/him? How to describe your friend? friend appearance personality tall/short, strong/thin, big/small eyes, long/short hair ... kind, helpful, out-going friendly, diligent, hard-working… Something happened between us. Let’s read the passage and find out the answers. I think that a great friend is a great artist who can change my feeling about life greatly. When I talk about the person who influenced me most, I think of my best friend quickly. When I was in my university in 2014, one of my classmates sat beside me. Her name is Kiki. She is my unforgettable friend in my life. She is kind-hearted and is always ready to help others. At weekends, we usually have a picnic in Nanhu Park. I still remembered that I was weak at maths at that time, but she was good at doing maths problems. She often received high scores. 1.When did the writer meet her best friend? 2.Where do they usually have a picnic? In 2014. In Nanhu Park. One day, she offered to help me. I was so delighted that I hugged her tightly. After school, she was always patient and polite to answer my maths questions. Slowly, I made great progress in maths. I passed the examination finally. Then we became friends naturally. And now, I still remember her strong will to study. I feel very thankful to her. There is an old saying: A friend in need is a friend indeed. Kiki sets a good example in many parts in my life. I hope that our friendship will continue to be just as strong as before. 3.What did Kiki do to help her make great progress in maths? 4.How does the writer feel to her best friend? Kiki was always patient and polite to answer her maths questions. The writer feels very thankful./ Thankful. How to describe an experience? experience where when how did you feel who what happened thankful/grateful, moved/touched, lucky... In time order: At first...Then...Next...Later... At last/Finally...From then on... Opinions of friendship share …with each other 2 互帮 互助 always be there 3 ...... 4 Discuss: Why is friendship so important? Because we need friends to .... help each other 1 Always be there Writing Task 在我们的成长的道路上，朋友是不可或缺的那道风景线。在相知相伴的岁月里，留下了多少美好的故事和难忘的回忆！某英语报社以''Friendship''为主题展开征文活动，请你按要求用英语写一篇文章参赛。 写作内容： 1.简要介绍你的好朋友; 2.分享你们之间发生的一件难忘的事( 如互相帮助、互相鼓励等 ),并谈谈你的感受; 3.你对友谊的看法 1’ 3’ 1’ 1’ Simple present tense Simple past tense Simple present tense How many parts can we write? Beginning Body Ending Beginning Speaking of my best friend, he/she is .... 1.简要介绍你的好朋友（1 point） I have a good friend called... She/He is......with...... I think she/he... Body 2.一件难忘的事+你的感受（4 points） When, Where, Who, What happened, How did you feel Time order Tense：Simple past tense At that time, I felt... On a rainy day/ Last year/..., I... From that day on, we ..... Ending In my opinion/ From my point of view,.... 3.你对友谊的看法（1 point） ... plays an important role in.... A life without a friend is a life without a sun. A friend in need is a friend indeed. A friend is easier lost than found. Friendship is a two-way street. Proverbs about friendship Writing Task 在我们的成长的道路上，朋友是不可或缺的那道风景线。在相知相伴的岁月里，留下了多少美好的故事和难忘的回忆！某英语报社以''Friendship''为主题展开征文活动，请你按要求用英语写一篇文章参赛。 写作内容： 1.简要介绍你的好朋友; 2.分享你们之间发生的一件难忘的事( 如互相帮助、互相鼓励等 ),并谈谈你的感受; 3.你对友谊的看法。 13 mins for you Step 1 内容分：6分 1. 简要介绍你的好朋友; 1’ 2. 你们之间发生的一件难忘的事以及你的感受; 4’ 3. 你对友谊的看法。 1’ Step 2 语言分：9分 第一档：9分 (内容涵盖所有要点，表达准确，符合逻辑，只有个别语言错误) 第二档：6-8分 (内容涵盖绝大多数要点，表达清楚，符合逻辑,少数语言错误) 第三档：4-5分 (内容涵盖大部分要点，表达较为清楚 ,但有一些语言错误) 第四档：1-3分 (内容涵盖部分要点，但整体表达不连贯且语言错误较多) 第五档：0分 (空白卷或完全没有相关内容) Attention： 1.书写卷面；2.字数足够 3.结构清晰； 4.语言优美（单词、语法正确、好词好句） 内容分+语言分=作文总分 Speaking of my best friend, she is Lisa. We have been friends for about 3 years. She is so humourous that she always makes me laugh. One thing between us happened in the past. On a rainy day, I suddenly fell down and hurt badly. So I had to stay in hospital for about one month and I was worried about my study. When Lisa knew about that, she said she could help me with my study. After hearing this, I was moved. From that day on, she taught me every day. As a result, I didn't fall behind the other students with Lisa's help. I thanked her a lot and felt lucky to be her friend. From my point of view,, friends play an important role in our life. Let’s cherish our friendship and get on well with our friends. Summary 1. How to describe a person? Two parts: Appearance and personality 2. How to describe an experience? When, Where, Who, What happened, How did you feel. Friends can make us laugh happily. I hope you can find your best friends and cherish your friendship! Thank you! null 259073.8 $$