Unit 1 Teenage Life Reading for Writing 建议信 课件 2024-2025学年高中英语人教版（2019） 必修第一册

应用文写作 Reading for Writing 同步练习 为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信，内容包括： 1. 表示理解并给予安慰； 2. 提出建议并说明理由。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：temper n. 脾气，情绪 1.必须要牢记的是\…. 2.我们最好…. 3.是时候某人做…. 4.如果你能做……就更好了。 高分秘籍 It must be kept in mind that…. We had better do sth… It is high time that sb did…. It would be better/wise if you could do … 1.分三段 2.字体好看 3.写满全部横线 4.句型多样，高级短语 It would be more beneficial if you could do … 1.听说你现在过得这么糟，我很难过。 I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. 2.事实是，每个人都会有这样一个时期，事情似乎是错误的，所以放轻松。 The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong, so take it easy. 3.我写信是想就如何处理目前的情况给你一些建议。 I’m writing to give you some suggestions on how to deal with the current situation. 4. 首先，我认为和你信任的人谈谈你的感受是个好主意。 First, I think it would be a good idea to talk to someone you trust about how you feel. 5.这是一个很好的发泄你的愤怒而不伤害他人或自己的方法。 This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. 6. 更重要的是，你应该学会换位思考，这样你就能感受到别人的感受。 What’s more, it is high time that you should learn to put yourself in the other person's shoes , so you can feel how the other person feels about it. 7.最后，你最好我建议你应该学会控制你的脾气。 Finally, It would be more beneficial if you could learn to control your temper. 8.如果您觉得我的建议有用，我将很高兴。 I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful/beneficial. 9.我希望你很快就会平静下来，像往常一样生活。 I hope you’ll soon not only feel calmer but also carry on as normal. Hi Worried, I’m sorry to know that you’re having such a bad time at the moment. The truth is that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong, so take it easy. I’m writing to give you some suggestions on how to deal with the current situation. First, I think it would be a good idea to talk to someone you trust about how you feel. This is a good way of letting your anger out without hurting others or yourself. What’s more, you’d better learn to control your temper. Finally, it is high time that you should learn to put yourself in the other person's shoes , so you can feel how the other person feels about it. I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful. I hope you’ll soon feel calmer and carry on as normal. Yours, Jamie 经典例文：假设你是高三学生李华， 和表弟王强即将参加2024年的高考， 在考前的100天，请你结合自己的学习生活， 用英语给表弟写一封建议信。要点包括：1.努力学习；2.调整心态；3.锻炼身体；4.其他方面。 1.必须要牢记的是…. 2.我们最好…. 3.是时候某人做…. 4.如果你能做……就更好了。 高分秘籍 It must be kept in mind that…. We had better do sth… It is high time that sb did…. It would be better/wise if you could do … 1.分三段 2.字体好看 3.写满全部横线 4.句型多样，高级短语 It would be more beneficial if you could do … Dear Wang Qiang, 1.我写信是想给你一些关于学习和生活的建议。 I’m writing to give you some suggestions on study and life. 2.对于高三学生来说，时间是宝贵的。现在是我们采取有效措施充实地过我们的生活时候了。 For Senior 3 students, time is precious. It is high time we took effective measures to live our life to the fullest. 3.首先，这将是更好/明智的，如果我们能努力学习，充分利用课堂上的时间，跟随我们的老师。 To begin with, it would be better/wise if we could study hard and make the most of the time in class, following our teachers. 4.此外，如果你能把自己调整到一个好的心态，那将是更有益的。 Besides, it would be more beneficial if you could adjust yourself into a good state of mind. 5.更重要的是，必须牢记“健康就是财富”。 What's more, it must be kept in mind that “Health is wealth”. 6.这就是为什么我们必须花一些时间定期锻炼。 That’s why we have to spend some time exercising regularly. 7.最后但并非最不重要的是，虽然我们感到很累，但我建议你应该面对挑战，保持自信。 Last but not the least, tired as we feel, I recommend that you should face the challenge and keep confident. 8.最后，如果你觉得我的建议有用，我会很高兴。 Ultimately, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful. 9.我希望我们能毫无遗憾地从高中毕业，并被我们理想的大学录取。 I hope we will graduate from high school without regret and be admitted into your ideal university. I hope not only will we graduate from high school without regret but also be admitted into your ideal university. Yours, Li Hua Dear Wang Qiang, I’m writing to give you some suggestions on study and life. For Senior 3 students, time is precious. It is high time we took effective measures to live our life to the fullest. To begin with, it would be better/wise if we could study hard and make the most of the time in class, following our teachers. Besides, it would be more beneficial if you could adjust youself into a good state of mind. What's more, it must be kept in mind that “Health is wealth”. That’s why we have to spend some time exercising regularly. Last but not the least, tired as we feel, I recommend that you should face the challenge and keep confident. Ultimately, I will be glad if you find my suggestions useful. I hope we will graduate from high school without regret and be admitted into your ideal university. Yours, Li Hua 努力学习 调整心态 锻炼身体 面对挑战保持自信 Read and Answer 1. What is Worried Friend’s problem? 2. What suggestions does Susan Luo give? 3. What other suggestions would you give? S1 S2 S3 写作探究 Read the letter of advice on Page 18 and find out its structure. Ⅰ. Reading for structure 首段：说明写信目的 主体：提出建议及理由 尾段：希望建议被采纳并期待回复 建议信 ◆首段常用句型 I am writing to share some advice with you. 我正在写信是想和你分享一些建议。 2. You have asked me for my advice about… 你向我征求关于……的意见。 3. 我正在写信是想表达我对……的看法。(不定式作目的状语) __________________________________________ Ⅱ. Learning for basic sentence patterns I am writing to express my views on… 补充： 1. 我很高兴收到你的来信，询问我对……的建议 I’m happy to receive your letter asking for my advice on... 2. 很抱歉听说你在....上遇到了麻烦 I’m sorry to hear that you are having trouble in.... 3. 我理解你现在的感受，我想给你一些建议。 I understand how you are feeling now and I’d like to offer you some advice. 4.我很理解你很焦虑，感觉很糟糕因此我想给你一些建议。 I understand quite well that you are anxious and feel terrible so I’d like to offer you some advice. 5.你就……向我寻求建议，我会尽力提一些建设性的建议。 You have asked me for my advice with regard to…and I will try to make some constructive suggestions. ◆ 提出建议时常用的句型 The first thing I would suggest is… 我将要建议的第一件事是…… 2. 我将要建议的另一个事情是…… ________________________________________. 3. I suggest that you should… 我建议你应该…… 4. 我建议你…… _______________________. 5. I think it would be a good idea to… 我认为……将是个好主意。 6. 你可以考虑做… _______________________. 7. 为什么不做……呢？ . 8. You’d better do … 你最好做…… Another thing I would suggest is… You may consider doing… I recommend that you (should) do… Why not do…? / Why don’t you do…? ◆ 末段常用句型 I would appreciate it very much if you could consider my suggestions. 如果您能考虑我的建议，我将不胜感激。 2. 如果你能考虑我的建议，我会很高兴的。(条件状语从句) . 3. 我希望你能考虑我的建议。(宾语从句) . I hope you will take my advice into account/consideration. I will be glad if you will consider my advice. 4. 我希望这些建议将对你有用。 I hope these suggestions will be of use to you. 5.希望我的建议对的决定有帮助。 I hope that my suggestions are helpful for your decision-making anyway. ◆ 常用连接词 首先: 此外： first of all, to begin with, firstly, first, in the first place... besides, in addition, additionally, moreover, what's more, furthermore, more importantly lastly, finally, in the end, consequently, last but not least… 最后： Ⅲ. Learning for writing skills 建议信是提出建议或忠告，但不是投诉信，观点要合情合理，注意礼貌当先。 ［写作方法］ ①首段：说明目的，注意语气。 ②主体： 提出具体建议； 首先肯定优点，再写改进内容，否则变成投诉信； 经常进行交流，注意对方感受，时时提到你和我, 否则容易跑题写成议论文，因为内容与议论文相似。 ③尾段：总结建议，注意礼貌，易于接受。 同步练习 为了帮助中学生健康成长，某中学英文报开辟了“HEART-TO-HEART”专栏。假设你是该栏目的编辑Jamie，收到一封署名为Worried的求助信。信中该同学向你诉说了自己的困扰：近日容易发脾气，使正常的学习和生活受到了影响。请用英文给该同学写一封回信，内容包括： 1. 表示理解并给予安慰； 2. 提出建议并说明理由。 注意： 1. 词数80左右； 2. 可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 参考词汇：temper n. 脾气，情绪 Activity Ⅰ. List the outline 首段：说明写信目的 主体：提出建议及理由 尾段：希望建议被采纳并期待回复 Activity Ⅱ. List useful words, phrases and sentences 1. Words and phrases (1) ___________ 乐观 (2) _________ 时期 (3) ________ 后悔 (4) ________________ 积极的态度 (5) _________ lift your spirits (6) ___________________ 控制你的脾气 (7) ______________ ……的好方法 (8) ________ 释放 (9) ___________ 消除 (10) _________ 继续进行 optimistic periods regret positive attitude carry on control your temper 振奋精神 a good way of let out get rid of 22 2. Sentences 这里有三个有用的建议。 ________________________. (2) 很抱歉知道你此刻过得不开心。(宾语从句) _________________ that you're having such a bad time at the moment. (3) 事实是每个人都会有事情不是很顺利的这样一个阶段，所以你不用担心。(表语从句和时间状语从句) ___________ that everyone will have one of those periods when things seem to be wrong, so you don't have to worry so much. I’m sorry to know Here are three useful tips The truth is (4) 最重要的事情是学习控制你的脾气以至于你不会做或者说一些你会后悔的话或事。(不定式作表语和so that引导的结果状语从句) The important thing is ___________________________ so that you may not do or say anything you’ll regret. (5)首先和你信任的人谈论感觉。(定从) _________________________________________. First, talk to someone you trust about how you feel. to learn to control your temper 第一节(满分15分) 假定你是李华，你的留学生好友Tina发邮件说想要参加学校举行的中文歌曲大赛，特询问你的意见。请你回复邮件，内容包括： 1.表示支持； 2.给出准备建议； 3.表达希望。 注意1.词数80左右； 2.可以适当增加细节，以使行文连贯。 1.必须要牢记的是…. 2.我们最好…. 3.是时候某人做…. 4.如果你能做……就更好了。 It must be kept in mind that…. We had better do sth… It is high time that sb did…. It is high time that sb should do…. It would be better if you could do … Dear Tina, I’m delighted to know you want to participate in the Chinese Singing Contest to be held in your school, you have my firmly support, so I’m writing to give you some constructive suggestions. To perform well in the contest, you need to make some preparations. Firstly, you must keep in mind that you should carefully choose a song that is suitable for you to sing on the stage. What 's more, it is high time that you should spare no effort to practice singing it until you have a good command of it. Last but not the least, not only had you better sing to your Chinese friends but also ask them for advice to help you make some adjustments and improvements. I sincerely hope that you will enjoy the contest and perform wonderfully. Yours, Li Hua 建议信 $$