专题09 书面表达（云南专用）-【好题汇编】备战2024-2025学年八年级英语下学期期末真题分类汇编

备学科网 www.zxxk.com 让致与学更高效 专题09书面表达 (23-24八年级下·云南西双版纳期末)1.提示：上周四你校举办了精彩的学生时装秀，你和同学们 都非常喜欢自己设计的服饰。请以“Our School Fashion Show”为愿，根据以下要点信息，用英语写一篇短文 介绍此次活动，并谈谈你的感受。 要点： 地点：学校大厅 Our School Fashion 时间：上周四下午2：304：00 Show 活动：不同学生展示了自己做的服饰。A穿了一件风衣让她看起来很酷。 穿了一件蓝色的外套，让他看起来很帅 感受：被学生们的创造力震撼，感受了服饰文化的魅力。 要求： 1.根据所给题目及要点，写一篇短文，词数不少于80个： 2.语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁： 3.文中不得使用你的真实姓名，校名，否则以零分计： 4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。 Our School Fashion Show 2.We Should Help with Housework 1/11 盈学科网 www.zxxk.com 让致与学更高效 (23-24八年级下，云南大理期末)提示：很多青少年认为做家务是父母的事。其实，适量的家务活 可以帮助我们更好地成长。请以“We Should Help with Housework“为题，谈一谈做家务的好处或者记叙一次 你做家务的经历。 要求：1，语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个： 2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分记： 3,请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。 (23-24八年级下，云南文山期末)3.题目A:On the Way to My Dream 提示：我们每个人都有自己的梦想，有人想成为老师，有人想成为医生，有人想成为科学家，那么你 的梦想是什么？请以On the Way to My Dream"为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的梦想，并谈谈在实现梦 想的路上，你会怎么做。 (23-24八年级下·云南文山期末)4.题目B:/An Thing Around Me 提示：在你的生活和学习中，一定有很多让你难忘的(unforgettable)、开心的或难过的事情。请以“A/An Thing Around Me'”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一件发生在你身边的事，并谈谈你的感受。 要求：1.请先将题目补充完整再作答： 2.注意语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80个： 3.文中不得使用真实姓名和校名，否则以零分计： 2/11 备学科网 www.zxxk.com 让致与学更高效 4.短文必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分： 5.抄袭试题中阅读部分的，抄袭部分不得分。 (23-24八年级下·云南德宏期末)5.生活中的每一天对我们来说都很有意义，你可以做美食、做运 动、去旅行等等。请以A Meaningful Day"为愿，用英语写一篇短文，叙述对你有意义的一天并谈谈你的感 受。 要求： 1.根据所给题月，写一篇短文，词数不少于80个： 2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁： 3.文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。 A Meaningful Day (23-24八年级下，云南昆明·期末)6.阅读是我们手中握有的最神奇的钥匙，不仅能带领我们走进科 学的殿堂、文学的花园、历史的长廊，更是一扇通向广阔世界的窗。让我们在方寸之间心游万仞，思接千 载。请你以Reading makes me ”为题，写一篇英语短文，叙述你的阅读经历并谈谈你在阅读中的收 获或阅读给你带来的改变。 要求： 1.请先将题目补全后，再作答： 2.紧扣主题、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80个； 3/11 命学科网 www.zxxk.com 让致与学更高效 3.文中不得使用考生的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计： 4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。 (23-24八年级下·云南昭通期末)7.提示：人生中有很多第一次，如第一次收到生日礼物，第一次 外出旅行，第一次做家务，第一次做饭，第一次高得比赛，请以“The First Time I ”为题写一篇短 文，说说你的某个第一次经历和感受。 要求： 1.将题目补充完整后，写一篇短文，词数不少于70： 2.语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁； 3.文中不得使用真实姓名，校名，否则以零分记： 4.将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试卷上无效。 The First Time I (23-24八年级下·云南昭通期末)8.Be Proud of Myself 4/11 命学科网 www.zxxk.com 让致与学更高效 你的努力成就更好的自己，你的帮助温暖了别人。你应该为更好的自己或这种助人为乐的品质而感到 骄傲。请以“Be Proud of Myself"为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述你成长进步或助人为乐的经历，展现你的骄 做与自豪。 要求： 1根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80个： 2语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁： 3文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计； 4请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。 (23-24八年级下·云南玉溪·期末)9.生活处处有精彩，你一定经历过无数难忘的事，或遇到过无数 难忘的人。请以“An Unforgettable “为题，写一篇英语短文，分享你的经历和感受。 要求： 1.请先将题目补充完整再作答，词数不少于80个； 2.语言流畅，内容连贯，书写规范.卷面整洁： 3.文中不得出现真实地名、校名和人名，否则以零分记： 4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试趣卷上无效。 An Unforgettable (2324八年级下·云南昆明期末)10.在你的初中生活中，一件点滴小事，一个平凡之人，一个简 5/11 备学科网 www.zxxk.com 让致与学更高效 单的习惯…都会帮助你成为更优秀的自己。请以 Helps me Grow up Better”为题，用英语写一篇 短文，讲述帮助你更好地成长的一件事、一个人或者一种习惯…并谈谈你的感受或收获。 要求： 1,请先将题目补全后，再作答： 2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80个： 3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计： 4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。 (23-24八年级下.云南曲靖期末)11.A Special 提示：你读过的某本书、听过的某首歌、看过的某部电影、参加的某次活动.，一定会给留下特别 的印象。请以“A Special_”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的经历及感受。 要求：1.补全题目，短文不少于80词： 2语言流畅，内容连贯，书写规范，卷面整洁： 3.文中不能使用你的真实姓名和校名，否则以零分计： 4短文必须写在答趣卡上，如在试趣卷上作答，一律不得分。 6/11 备学科网 www.zxxk.com 让致与学更高效 (23-24八年级下·云南昆明期末)12.How to Relax 提示：每个人在生活中都会有一些压力，学习如何放松自己来缓解压力是人生的一堂必修课。作为一 名初中生，也会有来自各方面的压力，让你的情绪紧张或焦虑，那么你是如何放松自己的呢？请以“Howo Rlax”为题，写一篇英语短文，告诉他人一些放松自己的方法，可结合自身经历描写。 要求： 1紧扣主题、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个： 2文中不得使用考生的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计： (23-24八年级下·云南昆明·期末)13.八年级的学习生活即将结束，这一年来，一定有过许多让你 开心的事情，如做一次家务、读一本书、参加一次活动、一次与父母的交流、一次参观或旅行请以 Made Me Happy"为题，用英语写一篇短文，分享这件事或者这次经历，谈谈你的收获或感悟。 要求： 1.根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80个： 2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁： 3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计： Made Me Happy. (23-24八年级下，云南昆明期末)14.Life is Full of Beauty 请以“Life is Full of Beauty”为题，并结合自己的经历或见闻，用英语写一篇短文，叙述你在生活中 发现的有关美的一件事及感受。 要求： 1语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80个； 7/11 备学科网 www.zxxk.com 让致与学更高效 2文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计： 3请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。 (23-24八年级下·云南昆明·期末)15.阅读可以让你在看到落日余晖的时候，脑海中浮现的是“落霞 与弧鹭齐飞，秋水共长天一色”；在看到漫天飞舞的雪花时，能够脱口而出“忽如一夜春风来，千树万树梨花 开”。第三届全民阅读大会促使更多昆明人爱上了阅读，请以“Enjoy Reading,Enjoy Life”为题简单介绍一次 你享受阅读的经历及收获，或谈谈阅读给我们的生活带来的益处。 要求： 1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80个： 2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；如需使用名字，请用Mke,Gia等英文名字，校名统一 使用Guangming Middle School. (23-24八年级下·云南昆明期末)16.提示：你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“An Important in My Lf®“为题的征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文，向专栏投稿，叙述一次对你重要的经历及感悟，或谈谈对 你重要的人或事物，并说明理由。 8/11 备学科网 www.zxxk.com 让致与学更高效 要求： 1请先将题目补全后，再作答： 2语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80个； 3文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分记。 An Important in My Life (23-24八年级下-云南红河·期末)17.My Favorite Thing from Childhood 提示：某英文网站正在开展“致敬回不去的童年”主题征文话动，请以“My Favorite Thing from Childhood'"为 题，用英文写一篇短文进行投稿，与大家分享你童年时期最喜欢的一件物品及你喜欢它的原因。 要求：1.根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80个： 2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计： 4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。 9/11 备学科网 www.zxxk.com 让致与学更高效 (23-24八年级下云南昭通期末)18.回首过往，总有一个人或一件事助你成长、使你改变、令你难忘 这个人或这件事就像你生命中的珍宝。请以“A Treasure in My Life'"为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述这件事， 或你与这个人的成事。 要求： (1)根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于60个： (2)语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； (3)文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。 (23-24八年级下，云南昆明·期末)19.随着人民生活水平的不断提高，越来越多的人喜欢用旅游记 录自己精彩的生活。旅游的形式多种多样，可以是露营或登山，可以是游览名山大川，还可以是国外观光 请以A Wonderful Place I've Visited为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你曾经旅游过的一个印象深刻的地方。 要求： 1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个： 2.文中不得使用真实姓名和校名，校名统一用Guangming Middle School: 3.书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分： 4.抄袭试卷中相关材料的，抄袭部分不给分。 (23-24八年级下，云南迪庆期末)20.提示：每个人心中都有一个自己最喜欢的地方。它可能是你 的学校，你的家乡或者你曾经去过或想去的地方。请以“The Place I Like Best'”为题，用英语写一篇短文。向 大家介绍一下这个地方。 要求： 1根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80个： 2语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁： 3文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计： 4请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。 10/11 专题09 书面表达 （23-24八年级下·云南西双版纳·期末）1．提示：上周四你校举办了精彩的学生时装秀，你和同学们都非常喜欢自己设计的服饰。请以“Our School Fashion Show”为题，根据以下要点信息，用英语写一篇短文介绍此次活动，并谈谈你的感受。 要点： Our School Fashion Show 地点：学校大厅 时间：上周四下午2:30—4:00 活动：不同学生展示了自己做的服饰。Ann穿了一件风衣让她看起来很酷。Jill穿了一件蓝色的外套，让他看起来很帅… 感受： 被学生们的创造力震撼，感受了服饰文化的魅力。 要求： 1. 根据所给题目及要点，写一篇短文，词数不少于 80个； 2. 语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁； 3. 文中不得使用你的真实姓名，校名，否则以零分计； 4. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。 Our School Fashion Show ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Our School Fashion Show Our school held a wonderful fashion show for students from 2:30 p.m. to 4:00 p.m. last Thursday in the school hall. Different students showed their own costumes in the show. My classmates and I love the clothes that we design. Every student tried their best to make the clothes beautiful. Ann wore a trench coat to make her look cool. Jill wore a blue coat that made him look handsome. I was shocked by the creativity of the students and felt the charm of the dress culture. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文，为记叙文。 ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏“信息提示”中我们学校的时装秀的介绍要点，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图。借用“请以‘Our School Fashion Show’为题，根据以下要点信息，用英语写一篇短文介绍此次活动，并谈谈你的感受。”来引出重点介绍的内容； 第二步，具体阐述写作内容。从“时间、地点、活动等”几个方面重点介绍我们学校的时装秀的具体情况； 第三步，书写结语，表达“我被学生们的创造力所震撼，也感受到了服饰文化的魅力”的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①fashion show时装秀； ②try one’s best尽最大努力； ③make sb do sth让某人做某事； ④be shocked by对……感到震撼。 [高分句型] ①My classmates and I love the clothes that we design. (that引导的定语从句) ②Ann wore a trench coat to make her look cool. (动词不定式作目的状语) 2．We Should Help with Housework （23-24八年级下·云南大理·期末）提示：很多青少年认为做家务是父母的事。其实，适量的家务活可以帮助我们更好地成长。请以“We Should Help with Housework”为题，谈一谈做家务的好处或者记叙一次你做家务的经历。 要求：1．语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个； 2．文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分记； 3．请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】 例文 We Should Help with Housework Housework is a valuable lesson in life. Firstly, participating in household chores teaches us essential life skills. Secondly, housework instills a sense of responsibility. It also promotes physical activity, keeping us fit and healthy. Moreover, sharing the housework with family strengthens our relationships and teaches us the importance of teamwork. I like helping with the dishes and feeling proud to contribute to my family’s well-being. Let’s embrace housework for the growth. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ② 时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，根据所给提示完成写作，不要遗漏信息，人称为第一人称。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍做家务的重要性； 第二步，列举做家务的具体好处； 第三步，个人经历的分享。 [亮点词汇] ① the importance of……的重要性 ② share with 分享 ③ contribute to 为……作贡献 [高分句型] Moreover, sharing the housework with family strengthens our relationships and teaches us the importance of teamwork.(and并列句) （23-24八年级下·云南文山·期末）3．题目 A: On the Way to My Dream 提示：我们每个人都有自己的梦想，有人想成为老师，有人想成为医生，有人想成为科学家，那么你的梦想是什么？请以“On the Way to My Dream”为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你的梦想，并谈谈在实现梦想的路上，你会怎么做。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 On the Way to My Dream Everyone has a dream. Dreams can make us better and better. As for me, I want to be a doctor. When I was 10 years old, I hurt my leg badly. I felt sad. My doctor looked after me and encouraged me. He brought hope to me. From then on, I decided to be a doctor like him. I know it’s difficult but I’m not afraid. I will study hard so that I can go to a medical university. I need to learn how to get on well with others. It’s important for a doctor, too. All in all, I’ll try my best to be a doctor. And I believe my dream can come true. Could you share your dream with me? 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：根据所给提示完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，介绍自己的梦想； 第二步，介绍原因及实现梦想的方式； 第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①as for至于 ②look after照顾 ③from then on从那时起 ④get on well with sb.与某人相处融洽 ⑤all in all总而言之 ⑥try one’s best to尽最大努力 [高分句型] I will study hard so that I can go to a medical university.(so that引导目的状语从句) （23-24八年级下·云南文山·期末）4．题目 B: A/An ______ Thing Around Me 提示：在你的生活和学习中，一定有很多让你难忘的(unforgettable)、开心的或难过的事情。请以“A/An ______ Thing Around Me”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述一件发生在你身边的事，并谈谈你的感受。 要求：1．请先将题目补充完整再作答； 2．注意语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80个； 3．文中不得使用真实姓名和校名，否则以零分计； 4．短文必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分； 5．抄袭试题中阅读部分的，抄袭部分不得分。 __________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 An Unforgettable Thing Around Me We experience many things in life. We may feel happy, sad or unforgettable. Today I want to share my unforgettable thing with you. Last Sunday, my friends and I decided to climb the mountain. We planned to walk up to the top, but it began to rain. We got wet and felt hungry. So we had to have lunch first. We found a restaurant and ordered three bowls of beef noodles. The noodles tasted delicious. When we paid for the lunch, we found that we didn’t take enough money with us. To our surprise, the boss told us we could pay for the bill next time. We thanked the boss and felt moved. It’s an unforgettable thing around me. What a kind man the boss is! We should learn from him. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态以“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据所给话题完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，补全题目； 第二步，叙述一件发生在自己身边的事； 第三步，谈谈自己的感受并书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①experience经历 ②share…with…与……分享…… ③walk up to步行至 ④pay for付款 ⑤bill账单 [高分句型] What a kind man the boss is!(感叹句) （23-24八年级下·云南德宏·期末）5．生活中的每一天对我们来说都很有意义，你可以做美食、做运动、去旅行等等。请以“A Meaningful Day”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述对你有意义的一天并谈谈你的感受。 要求： 1．根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80个； 2．语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3．文中不得使用你的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。 A Meaningful Day _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A Meaningful Day When I was young, I went through a thing which influenced me deeply. One day, I went to school as usual. All of a sudden, I heard a voice crying. I knew there was something wrong. So I walked towards the direction of the voice. Then I found a child and he couldn’t find his mother. I decided to help him find his mother, and I took him to the police station nearby. After that I went to school in a hurry, but I was still late. My teacher was angry at first. But when she heard what happened, she excused me. After the thing, I feel very happy to do good things. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：根据题目要求，完成一篇有意义一天的书面表达，注意使用正确的时态，并正确使用连接词和短语，使得语言流畅。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点题，简要说明给你留下深刻印象的地方； 第二步，叙述你的经历； 第三步，谈谈你的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①All of a sudden突然 ②walk towards走向 ③decide to do sth决定做某事 ④in a hurry匆忙 [高分句型] ①When I was young, I went through a thing which influenced me deeply. (时间状语从句) （23-24八年级下·云南昆明·期末）6．阅读是我们手中握有的最神奇的钥匙，不仅能带领我们走进科学的殿堂、文学的花园、历史的长廊，更是一扇通向广阔世界的窗。让我们在方寸之间心游万仞，思接千载。请你以“Reading makes me ________”为题，写一篇英语短文，叙述你的阅读经历并谈谈你在阅读中的收获或阅读给你带来的改变。 要求： 1. 请先将题目补全后，再作答； 2. 紧扣主题、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于 80个； 3. 文中不得使用考生的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计； 4. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Reading makes me happy What is fun in the world? Different people have different opinions. For me, I think reading is fun. Let me tell you why. First, I began to read cartoons and fairytales when I was five years old. I found reading these books could make me read myself easily. And I opened my eyes. I knew something about the world. Second, when I grew older, reading made me understand others. I always put myself into others’ shoes when I was reading. In my daily life, when I got on with others, maybe there was misunderstanding, but I could solve it. Then I was relaxed. In a word, reading has made my life more beautiful. So I think reading is fun. 【详解】[总体分析]   ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：本文应该主要用第一人称来写；回忆过去时，要写得具体；同时要把阅读对自己的影响体现出来。 [写作步骤] 第一步，用形容词补全标题后，开头段要表明写作内容。说明阅读是你怎样； 第二步，回顾过去经历细节，并表明阅读对自己的影响； 第三步，总结并进行情感升华。表明阅读塑造了自己并让自己快乐生活。 [亮点词汇] ①put myself into others’ shoes站在别人的角度思考 ②get on with...和某人相处 ③In a word总而言之 [高分句型] ①I found reading these books could make me read myself easily.（省略了that的宾语从句） ②...when I got on with others, maybe there was misunderstanding...（when引导的时间状语从句） （23-24八年级下·云南昭通·期末）7．提示：人生中有很多第一次，如第一次收到生日礼物，第一次外出旅行，第一次做家务，第一次做饭，第一次赢得比赛……请以“The First Time I ________”为题写一篇短文，说说你的某个第一次经历和感受。 要求： 1. 将题目补充完整后，写一篇短文，词数不少于70； 2. 语言流畅，书写规范，卷面整洁； 3. 文中不得使用真实姓名，校名，否则以零分记； 4. 将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试卷上无效。 The First Time I ________ ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 The First Time I Took a Trip I’m Bob, a student in Grade 8. I like nature. Each trip is a great opportunity for me to get close to nature. So I often take a trip in my free time. My first trip was to visit Happy Nature Park on Sunday. On that day, the weather was hot and sunny. Before the trip, my parents bought some water and food. We took a bus to the park. When we got there, I was amazed to find so many beautiful flowers and different kinds of animals in the park. My father encouraged me to learn about the habits of the plants and animals. At lunchtime, we put on tents and shared food together. Later, we rode the sky wheel and rode a horse in the park. What a wonderful trip it was! I had a great time. From this trip, I not only felt relaxed but also learned much about nature and how to protect animals. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”和“一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要求已经给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，注意大小写，适当添加细节。 [写作步骤] ①第一步，开篇点题，引出下文； ②第二步，具体阐述第一次去旅行的情景； ③第三步，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①was amazed to do sth惊奇地去做某事 ②encouraged sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事 [高分句型] ①When we got there, I was amazed to find so many beautiful flowers and different kinds of animals in the park.（时间状语从句） ②What a wonderful trip it was! (感叹句) （23-24八年级下·云南昭通·期末）8．Be Proud of Myself 你的努力成就更好的自己，你的帮助温暖了别人。你应该为更好的自己或这种助人为乐的品质而感到骄傲。请以“Be Proud of Myself”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述你成长进步或助人为乐的经历，展现你的骄傲与自豪。 要求： 1.根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80个； 2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计； 4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。 ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Be Proud of Myself Everyone should be proud of himself. I’m proud of myself because of a wonderful experience. Last month, our school had a sports meeting. I am good at running and I really hoped to get good grades in the running race. So I did lots of exercise to build myself up. Every day I got up early and ran for at least 30 minutes. In the running race, I tried my best to catch up with others and passed the finish line successfully. I won the first place. How happy and proud I felt! I’m proud of myself not only for the good result but also for my hard work. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：主要时态为“一般过去时”； ③提示：叙述你成长进步或助人为乐的经历，需要遵照所给要求，适当补充细节，突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，引出“我为自己感到骄傲”的话题； 第二步，讲述为自己感到骄傲的一件事； 第三步，书写结语。表达自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①because of因为 ②be good at擅长 ③catch up with赶上 [高分句型] ①How happy and proud I felt!(感叹句) ②I’m proud of myself not only for the good result but also for my hard work. (并列句) （23-24八年级下·云南玉溪·期末）9．生活处处有精彩，你一定经历过无数难忘的事，或遇到过无数难忘的人。请以“An Unforgettable ________”为题，写一篇英语短文，分享你的经历和感受。 要求： 1. 请先将题目补充完整再作答，词数不少于80个； 2. 语言流畅，内容连贯，书写规范, 卷面整洁； 3. 文中不得出现真实地名、校名和人名，否则以零分记； 4. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。 An Unforgettable ________ ___________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 An Unforgettable Match The most unforgettable thing in my school life is the football match which was held last term in the school playground. My class played against Class Five. Although I wasn’t the football player in the team, I watched the whole match. My class scored first and we were so excited. However, players from Class Five were strong-minded and got a point very soon. Nervous but hopeful, we kept cheering our players on. Finally, our class team scored again when the match almost came to an end. The good result came from our hard work and strong will. We should always keep trying and fighting.【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③提示：根据所给题干完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，补全题目，介绍自己的一次难忘的经历； 第二步，介绍自己的感受。 [亮点词汇] ①play against对战 ②score得分 ③strong-minded意志坚强的 ④cheer sb. on为某人加油 ⑤come to an end结束 [高分句型] The most unforgettable thing in my school life is the football match which was held last term in the school playground.(which引导定语从句) （23-24八年级下·云南昆明·期末）10．在你的初中生活中，一件点滴小事，一个平凡之人，一个简单的习惯……都会帮助你成为更优秀的自己。请以“________ Helps me Grow up Better”为题，用英语写一篇短文，讲述帮助你更好地成长的一件事、一个人或者一种习惯……并谈谈你的感受或收获。 要求： 1. 请先将题目补全后，再作答； 2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80个； 3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计； 4. 请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Reading Helps me Grow up Better     Reading is playing an important part in our daily life. It can not only open up our eyes to the world but also make our life colorful. And reading really makes me a better person. When I was a little girl, my mother always read comic stories to me, which made me interested in reading. When I was older, I began to read whatever I found interesting, including Robinson Crusoe, The Romance of the Three Kingdoms. I was moved by the main characters. While reading, I felt peaceful. I get all kinds of knowledge from reading. Now I am a middle school student, I become rich in knowledge and I am better at all subjects. As Goethe said, “One book, one world.” Now reading helps me grow up better. It makes my life colorful. It also makes me more confident and braver. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文，为话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏，适当增加细节完整表述内容。 [写作步骤] 第一步，补全题目，开头引出本文主题； 第二步，介绍自己喜欢上看书的经历； 第三步，发表自己的感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①begin to do sth开始做某事 ②all kinds of各种各样的 ③become rich in在某方面变得富有 [高分句型] ①When I was a little girl, my mother always read comic stories to me, which made me interested in reading.（when引导时间状语从句，which引导的定语从句） ②Now reading helps me grow up better. （动名词作主语） （23-24八年级下·云南曲靖·期末）11．A Special 提示：你读过的某本书、听过的某首歌、看过的某部电影、参加的某次活动……，一定会给留下特别的印象。请以“A Special ”为题，用英语写一篇短文，谈谈你的经历及感受。 要求：1.补全题目，短文不少于 80词； 2.语言流畅，内容连贯，书写规范，卷面整洁； 3.文中不能使用你的真实姓名和校名，否则以零分计； 4.短文必须写在答题卡上，如在试题卷上作答，一律不得分。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】                                                                           A Special Movie       Last weekend, I watched a special movie named “Fighting Dreamers”. It tells the story of a group of young people who achieve their dreams despite difficulties.       The movie impressed me deeply. It shows that determination and hard work can overcome any difficulty. One scene that touched me was when the main character, Li Xiuman, fought against his illness while preparing for a boxing match. His brave spirit inspired me to never give up my dreams. In the movie, Li Xiuman’s friends, who had different dreams, supported and encouraged each other. This reminded me of the importance of friendship in achieving our goals.       This movie has not only entertained me but also given me valuable lessons. It encourages me to believe in myself and never give up my dreams. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇材料作文； ②时态：主要时态为一般过去时和一般现在时； ③提示：根据所给内容要点完成写作，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，点明电影名称及梗概； 第二步，介绍电影内容及感受； 第三步，总结自己的收获。 [亮点词汇] ①determination决心 ②fight against illness与疾病抗争 ③remind sb of提醒某人…… [高分句型] ①It tells the story of a group of young people who achieve their dreams despite difficulties.（who引导定语从句） ②One scene that touched me was when the main character, Li Xiuman, fought against his illness while preparing for a boxing match.（when引导表语从句） （23-24八年级下·云南昆明·期末）12．How to Relax 提示：每个人在生活中都会有一些压力，学习如何放松自己来缓解压力是人生的一堂必修课。作为一名初中生, 也会有来自各方面的压力，让你的情绪紧张或焦虑，那么你是如何放松自己的呢？请以“How to Relax”为题，写一篇英语短文，告诉他人一些放松自己的方法，可结合自身经历描写。 要求： 1.紧扣主题、语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个； 2.文中不得使用考生的真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计； ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 How to Relax As we all know, everyone may have problems and difficulties. I think it is important for middle school students to learn how to relax ourselves. Then let me share my ideas with you. First of all, we should be self-confident and optimistic to ourselves. And we should become a strong person. Besides, it is important for us to have hobbies. We can read more good books. When we are unhappy, we can listen to music or do sports. We can have a communication with our friends and share our happiness and sadness. What’s more, we can ask our parents or teachers for help. Of course, we should also have a good sleep. It’s important to have a good body. All in all, we should learn to face the problem in our life. And we should learn to relax ourselves. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，要求以“How to Relax”为题，结合自身经历告诉他人放松自己的方法，注意字数要求。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开篇点题，表明自己的观点“学习如何放松自己很重要”； 第二步，描述放松自己的方法； 第三步，总结，再次点明放松自己的必要性。 [亮点词汇] ①share sth. with sb. 与某人分享某事 ②first of all 首先 ③have a communication with sb. 与某人交流 ④ask ab. for help 向某人寻求帮助 ⑤all in all 总而言之 [高分句型] ①I think it is important for middle school students to learn how to relax ourselves.（宾语从句） ②When we are unhappy, we can listen to music or do sports. （时间状语从句） （23-24八年级下·云南昆明·期末）13．八年级的学习生活即将结束，这一年来，一定有过许多让你开心的事情，如做一次家务、读一本书、参加一次活动、一次与父母的交流、一次参观或旅行……请以“________ Made Me Happy”为题，用英语写一篇短文，分享这件事或者这次经历，谈谈你的收获或感悟。 要求： 1. 根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80个； 2. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计； ________ Made Me Happy__________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文： Reading Made Me Happy What made me happy was that I fell in love with reading. When I was in Grade Seven, I was weak in Chinese. I got low grades in the Chinese exams. This made me very worried. On a cold winter afternoon, my Chinese teacher Mr.Wang asked me to go to his office after school. He gave me some advice on how to study Chinese well. The best advice was reading every day. From then on, I began reading all kinds of interesting books and magazines. What’s more, I wrote down some beautiful sentences from them. With the help of reading, my Chinese improved a lot and I was so glad about that. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态为一般过去时； ③提示：写作要点已给出，注意不要遗漏提示中的要点，可适当添加细节，并突出写作要点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，按题目要求填入短文标题“________ Made Me Happy”。 第二步，分享这件事情的经历过程，谈谈自己的收获和感悟。 [亮点词汇] ①fall in love with 爱上…… ②from then on 从那时起 ③all kinds of 各种各样的 [高分句型] ①What made me happy was that I fell in love with reading.（主语从句和表语从句） ②When I was in Grade Seven, I was weak in Chinese.（时间状语从句） （23-24八年级下·云南昆明·期末）14．Life is Full of Beauty 请以 “Life is Full of Beauty” 为题，并结合自己的经历或见闻，用英语写一篇短文，叙述你在生活中发现的有关美的一件事及感受。 要求： 1.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80个； 2.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计； 3.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。 _________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Life is Full of Beauty Life is full of beauty. I’ll never forget the day which makes me feel meaningful. My best friend Lucy and I always ride bikes together after school. One day, I waited a long time but didn’t see her. Then I searched for her in the corner of our school. She was crying at that time. She told me that she was nervous because she would have an English test. I decided to help her with English. That evening, I helped her review the key points and notes. Two days later, she told me that she had passed it. I felt so happy. From this little thing, I learn that helping others is the beauty of life. 【总体分析】① 题材：本题是一篇话题作文。 ② 时态：本文用一般过去时和一般现在时两种时态。 ③ 提示：叙述一件自己生活中发现美的故事，需要遵照所给要求，适当补充细节。 【写作步骤】第一步， 阐述自己对于生活中的美好的看法，为文章确定基调； 第二步， 叙述自己在生活中发现美的故事； 第三步，总结故事，升华立意。 【亮点词汇】① is full of 充满 ② key 关键的 ③ search for 寻找 【高分句型】① I’ll never forget the day which makes me feel meaningful.（定语从句） ② She told me that she was nervous because she would have an English test. （宾语从句） ③ She was crying at that time. （过去进行时） （23-24八年级下·云南昆明·期末）15．阅读可以让你在看到落日余晖的时候，脑海中浮现的是“落霞与孤鹭齐飞，秋水共长天一色”；在看到漫天飞舞的雪花时，能够脱口而出“忽如一夜春风来，千树万树梨花开”。第三届全民阅读大会促使更多昆明人爱上了阅读，请以“Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life”为题简单介绍一次你享受阅读的经历及收获，或谈谈阅读给我们的生活带来的益处。 要求： 1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80个； 2. 文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计；如需使用名字，请用Mike，Gina等英文名字，校名统一使用Guangming Middle School。 ______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 Enjoy Reading, Enjoy Life Looking back at my growth, reading makes my life full of meaning. It has become the power that helps me to be a better person. My favorite book is Journey to the West. It is one of the four great classical novels in China. The story tells us about four main characters. They are Tang Monk, the Monkey King, Pigsy and Monk Sha. They overcome many difficulties on the way to the West. They never give up when they face difficulties and challenges. What’s more, the four persons work together to solve the problems. Finally, they make it. By the way, I like The Monkey King best, who is smart and brave. The book is so interesting that I lose myself in it while reading it. It tells me that as long as I never give up, I can achieve what I want. All in all, books are my friends. Through reading, I have made a lot of progress. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ② 时态：时态主要为“一般现在时”； ③ 提示：写作要点已给出，可适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，首先介绍自己最喜爱的书籍； 第二步，说明喜欢它的原因； 第三步，表达读后的感悟，书写结语。 [亮点词汇] ①give up放弃 ②by the way顺便说一下 [高分句型] ①It has become the power that helps me to be a better person.（定语从句） ②They never give up when they face difficulties and challenges.（when引导的时间状语从句） （23-24八年级下·云南昆明·期末）16．提示： 你校校刊英语专栏正在开展以“An Important ________ in My Life”为题的征文活动，请你用英语写一篇短文，向专栏投稿，叙述一次对你重要的经历及感悟，或谈谈对你重要的人或事物，并说明理由。 要求： 1.请先将题目补全后，再作答； 2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于80个； 3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分记。 An Important ________ in My Life ____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 An Important Book in My Life   The book that holds a special place in my heart is “The Alchemist” by Paulo Coelho. As a junior high student, it introduced me to the concept of pursuing one’s Personal Legend, the journey within each of us to achieve our deepest desires. It taught me that fear is natural but should not influence our dreams. Reading it sparked a fire within me, encouraging me to be brave and achieve my goals. Its wisdom has guided me through challenges, reminding me that true happiness lies in following one’s heart. 【详解】[总体分析] ① 题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ② 时态：时态以“一般过去时”为主； ③ 提示：根据所给题目部分内容补全标题，注意标点符号及大小写等问题，不要犯语法错误。注意上下文之间的逻辑关系，语意连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，补全题目； 第二步，具体阐述这个事物对你的影响。 [亮点词汇] ① hold a special place占据一个特殊的位置 ② encourage sb to do sth鼓励某人做某事 ③ following one’s heart跟随内心 [高分句型] It taught me that fear is natural but should not influence our dreams.（宾语从句） （23-24八年级下·云南红河·期末）17．My Favorite Thing from Childhood 提示：某英文网站正在开展“致敬回不去的童年”主题征文活动，请以“My Favorite Thing from Childhood”为题，用英文写一篇短文进行投稿，与大家分享你童年时期最喜欢的一件物品及你喜欢它的原因。 要求：1．根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80个； 2．语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3．文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计； 4．请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。 _______________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 My Favorite Thing from Childhood      My favorite thing from childhood is a teddy bear. I received it as a gift from my grandmother on my fifth birthday. The teddy bear is brown, soft, and has a cute little bow around its neck. I named it “Teddy” and it became my constant companion. I would take it everywhere with me, even to bed. Teddy was not just a toy; it was a source of comfort and security. Whenever I felt sad or scared, hugging Teddy made me feel better. It also reminds me of my grandmother’s love and care. Even now, as an adult, I still keep Teddy as a cherished memory of my childhood. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材: 本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态: 时态为“一般过去时”和“一般现在时”； ③提示：写作要点已给出，考生应注意不要遗漏题目要求中每一项内容，适当添加细节，并突出写作重点。 [写作步骤] 第一步，表明写作意图，开门见山介绍自己童年时期最喜欢的物品是什么； 第二步，介绍该物品的特点及其来源； 第三步，阐述该物品对自己的意义及感情。 [亮点词汇] ①constant companion长期的伙伴 ②source of comfort and security安慰和安全感的来源 ③cherished memory珍贵的记忆 [高分句型] ①I received it as a gift from my grandmother on my fifth birthday. (as引导的方式状语) ②Whenever I felt sad or scared, hugging Teddy made me feel better. (状语从句) （23-24八年级下·云南昭通·期末）18．回首过往，总有一个人或一件事助你成长、使你改变、令你难忘……这个人或这件事就像你生命中的珍宝。 请以“A Treasure in My Life”为题，用英语写一篇短文，叙述这件事，或你与这个人的故事。 要求： (1)根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于60个； (2)语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； (3)文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计。 ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A Treasure in My Life How time flies! It has been two years since I became a middle school student. I have many good memories of my teachers. The teacher that I will never forget is Ms. Zhang. She is an English teacher. She is very kind and friendly. About one year ago, Ms. Zhang noticed that I was worried about my pronunciation. So, she gave me many suggestions to improve it, and she also gave me every possible chance to speak in class. With her help, my pronunciation greatly improved. I want to say thanks to Ms. Zhang. I wish her a healthy and happy life in the future. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：主要是一般现在时和一般过去时； ③提示：考生应注意结合具体语境使用正确的时态，适当发挥，使上下文连贯。 [写作步骤] 第一步，说明自己有许多关于老师的美好回忆； 第二步，具体介绍一位让你改变的老师以及你们之间的故事； 第三步，表达对于这位老师的感谢和美好祝愿。 [亮点词汇] ①friendly友好的 ②pronunciation发音 ③improve提高 ④healthy健康的 [高分句型] ①About one year ago, Ms. Zhang noticed that I was worried about my pronunciation.（that引导的宾语从句） （23-24八年级下·云南昆明·期末）19．随着人民生活水平的不断提高，越来越多的人喜欢用旅游记录自己精彩的生活。旅游的形式多种多样，可以是露营或登山，可以是游览名山大川，还可以是国外观光……请以A Wonderful Place I’ve Visited为题，用英语写一篇短文，介绍你曾经旅游过的一个印象深刻的地方。 要求： 1. 语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁，词数不少于60个； 2. 文中不得使用真实姓名和校名，校名统一用Guangming Middle School； 3. 书面表达必须写在答题卡上，如在本卷上作答，一律不得分； 4. 抄袭试卷中相关材料的，抄袭部分不给分。 _____________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】例文 A Wonderful Place I’ve Visited I have visited some wonderful places in Pingdingshan. The best place I’ve ever visited is Lushan. Lushan is a beautiful city in the west of Pingdingshan. It is famous for its beautiful mountains and rivers. It attracts lots of visitors every year. Visitors love not only its beautiful scenery but also the delicious food there. I went to Lushan with my parents last summer vacation. We visited several rivers and mountains. I took many photos for my parents. We also tasted some good food such as Lushan mutton soup. We felt relaxed and happy when we stayed in Lushan. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇话题作文； ②时态：时态为“一般现在时和一般过去时”； ③提示：要求以“A Wonderful Place I’ve Visited”为题，介绍自己曾经旅游过的一个印象深刻的地方，可适当发挥，并突出重点写作。 [写作步骤] 第一步，直接点题，表达旅游过的最好的一个地方是哪里； 第二步，介绍这个地方的特点； 第三步，表达自己在那里旅游时的经历和感受。 [亮点词汇] ①be famous for因……著名 ②take many photos拍了很多照片 ③such as例如 [高分句型] ①The best place I’ve ever visited is Lushan. (定语从句) ②We felt relaxed and happy when we stayed in Lushan. (when引导的时间状语从句) （23-24八年级下·云南迪庆·期末）20．提示：每个人心中都有一个自己最喜欢的地方。它可能是你的学校，你的家乡或者你曾经去过或想去的地方。请以“The Place I Like Best”为题，用英语写一篇短文。向大家介绍一下这个地方。 要求： 1.根据所给题目，写一篇短文，词数不少于80个； 2.语言流畅、书写规范、卷面整洁； 3.文中不得使用真实姓名、校名，否则以零分计； 4.请将短文写在答题卡上，写在本试题卷上无效。 The Place I Like Best ________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________________ 【答案】参考例文: The Place I Like Best I have been to many places, but the place I like best is my hometown. My hometown is a very beautiful village. Surrounded by low green mountains, my hometown stands near a wide river. The air there is very fresh and the water in the river is clear. People there are so kind that they often give others a hand when they are in need. Great changes have taken place in my hometown these years. New houses, beautiful gardens and wide roads make it a good place to live in. The beautiful environment and the nice weather at-tract lots of people to spend holidays there. I like my hometown. I’m proud of being a villager there. 【详解】[总体分析] ①题材：本文是一篇记叙文； ②时态：时态主要是一般现在时； ③提示：抓住要点，适当补充，使句子意思饱满充实；检查拼写是否错误，语法时态是否正确，连词是否恰当等；誊写作文，注意书写工整美观整洁。 [写作步骤] 第一步，开门见山，点明主题。 第二步，描述家乡地理环境、风土人情及家乡变化等，最后升华主题。 [亮点词汇] ①take place发生 ②be proud of以……感到自豪 [高分句型] ①People there are so kind that they often give others a hand when they are in need.（含有结果状语从句的复合句） ②New houses, beautiful gardens and wide roads make it a good place to live in.（三个并列的名词短语作主语） 1 / 13 学科网（北京）股份有限公司 $$