读后续写 男孩与女子善意故事 讲义-海南白沙中学2024-2025学年高二下学期期中考试英语试题

读后续写

阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写两段，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

It was very cold, a poor boy was selling goods door to door. He tried to earn money to pay his way through school. Wandering on the street, he was not a successful seller. What's worse, he found that he only had one dime (一角硬币) left. His empty stomach reminded him constantly that for days he hadn't eaten anything. He had no choice but to beg for a meal at the next house.

Hesitantly he knocked at door, thinking about what to say when it opened. However, he lost his nerve when a lovely young woman opened the door. “What can I do for you?” asked the young woman. The boy paused for a while “Would you please give me some....a drink of water?” the boy dare not to look directly into her eyes. She looked at the bony boy and thought he might need something to give himself energy so she brought him a glass of milk. His head rising and small hands taking the cup, he drank it up slowly, and then asked, “How much do I owe you?” “You don't owe me anything,” she replied with a warm smile on her face. “My mother has taught me never to accept pay for a kindness.” Deeply moved, he said sincerely, “Then I shall thank you from the bottom of my heart.”

As Howard Kelly left that house, he not only felt stronger physically, but it also increased his faith in God and the whole human race. As a matter of fact, he was about to give up and quit before that point.

Many years passed, the young woman suffered from severe illness. However, the local doctors were unable to give the effective medical treatment. Finally they sent her to a hospital in the big city, where specialists can be called in to cure her rare disease. Among those famous specialists, Dr. Howard Kelly was called in for the consultation. When he heard the name of the town she came from, a strange light filled his eyes, Immediately, he rose and went down through the hospital hall into her room.

注意：

1.续写词数应为150左右：

2.请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

He went to her room to see her in his doctor's gown.

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The bill was sent to her room.

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男孩与女子善意故事的续写

续写分析

第一段分析（160 字）

第一段围绕 Howard Kelly 医生认出女子后的行动展开，通过一系列细节刻画展现其内心的感动与决心。“instantly recognized” 直接点明医生的心理反应，“gently took her hand”“comforted her” 等动作描写，既体现出医生对患者的关怀，又暗含着对恩人特殊的情感。“dedicated himself to her treatment”“researching day and night” 等表述，进一步强调他为救治女子付出的努力，将当年女子给予的 “一杯牛奶” 化作拯救生命的强大动力，展现出善意的力量在时间长河中的延续与升华。

第二段分析（160 字）

第二段聚焦女子收到账单时的情感变化，通过 “trembling hands”“shocked”“tears welled up” 等神态描写，生动展现出她从担忧到震撼再到感动的心理过程。“Paid in full with a glass of milk” 的纸条成为故事的核心转折点，既呼应前文女子当年的善意，又揭示出医生以特殊方式回报恩情的深意。“kindness she once showed had come back to bless her” 的心理活动，点明了善有善报的主题，使整个故事在温馨中收束，给读者留下深刻的情感共鸣。

故事线

困境与善意：寒冷的一天，贫穷的男孩为支付学费沿街卖货却屡屡失败，饥寒交迫的他鼓起勇气向一位年轻女子乞讨食物，女子没有给他水，而是送了他一杯牛奶，并拒绝接受报酬。