读后续写 雪豹幼崽故事 讲义-2025届山西省三重教育高三下学期5月押题考试（太原三模）英语试题

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阅读下面材料，根据其内容和所给段落开头语续写，使之构成一篇完整的短文。

In a quiet mountain village between snowy peaks,16-year-old Mia found a young snow leopard cub（雪豹幼崽）caught in an old metal trap during her afternoon walk. The cub' s leg was badly hurt, and its golden eyes shone with fear under the pale winter sun.

Though her father had repeatedly warned her about the dangers of wild animals, Mia couldn't bear to leave the suffering creature. Carefully, she used her woolen scarf to open the trap, freeing the cub. She named it Amber and placed dried meat from her lunch bag nearby, hoping to give it strength. To her amazement, Amber returned the next morning, limping（跛的）but alive, its eyes now filled with cautious curiosity.

Over the following weeks, Amber began appearing during Mia' s daily walks in the pine forests. At first, the cub kept a safe distance. Slowly, trust grew between them. Mia shared her sandwiches, while Amber guided her to secret paths leading to clear streams and sheltered caves. Their bond deepened——Amber would rub its head against Mia' s leg like a pet cat, and Mia learned to recognize the cub's different calls.

However, everything changed one evening at sunset. Mia' s father discovered Amber near their sheep fences. "That wild beast will kill our sheep!" he shouted angrily, grabbing a thick wooden stick. Mia screamed, "She's my friend! Please don't hurt her!" Sensing danger, Amber ran into the shadowy forest, leaving Mia standing frozen with tears.

Heartbroken, Mia searched the mountains tirelessly. Every morning before school, she left meat near their favorite meeting spot——a flat rock beneath a giant pine tree. Every afternoon, she wandered through icy valleys calling Amber's name. Weeks passed, but the cub never reappeared. The mountains felt emptier, their silence broken only by the lonely wind. Mia' s doubts grew heavier——had her kindness driven Amber into greater danger? Was it possible for humans and wild animals to truly trust each other? Snow began to fall again, covering the paths. The wilderness

offered no answers, only the rushing wind.

注意：

(1)续写词数应为150个左右；

(2)请按如下格式在答题卡的相应位置作答。

One stormy night, Mia heard a weak cry coming from the edge of the forest.

                                                                 

When spring arrived, a familiar shadow appeared under the giant pine tree.

                                                                 

 

雪豹幼崽故事续写

续写分析​

续写第一段分析（160 字）​

第一段以暴风雨夜的微弱叫声为切入点，“heart skipped a beat”“grabbed... rushed out” 等描写，生动展现 Mia 听到声音时的急切与担忧，凸显她对 Amber 的深厚情感。“bloodied and shivering”“deep gash” 等细节刻画 Amber 受伤的惨状，增强故事紧张感。“gently wrapped”“cleaned the wound”“applied medicine” 等一系列动作，体现 Mia 救助时的专业与细心，而 “stayed up all night” 则进一步突出她的坚持。父亲态度从误解到理解的转变，通过 “touched by... helped nurse” 展现，不仅推动情节发展，还深化了人与动物情感联结的主题，为故事后续发展奠定基础。​

续写第二段分析（160 字）​

第二段以春天 Amber 的出现为转折，“breath caught in her throat” 细腻描绘 Mia 此时的惊喜与期待。Amber 带着幼崽归来的场景，通过 “looking stronger”“tiny cubs... full of curiosity”“bounded towards... nuzzling” 等描写，营造出温馨美好的氛围，展现生命的延续与自然的生机。Mia “laughed and cried” 的反应，直观传达出她内心的激动与喜悦。父亲 “smiled warmly” 的神态，暗示家庭对人与动物和谐相处的认可。结尾 “echoed with life and laughter”“coexist peacefully” 点明主旨，通过环境描写与主题句，将故事从个体情感上升到人与自然关系的思考，使故事内涵得到升华。​